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Thriller DIL,DOSTI AND REVENGE (action,thrill, suspense and romance)(Completed)

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UPDATE 103











MERI aawaj sun Kar vo log Meri taraf bad gaye or mere pass aake puchhne lage




Veer- ye tu itni jaldi yaha kaise aa gya or in sab ko Kya hua.



Main- chhodo Bhai sab mar gye ab aage bado.



Unhone confuse hoke bola theek hai Chalo.



Main- Harry ab kha Jana hai.




Harry- Sir seedhe chalte rahe aage de first left Le lena.baha aapko 10 log milenge.



Main- ok.



Fir ham baha se sedhe chalte rahe or jaise hi first right aane Wala tha tabhi ek Banda bilkul hamare samne as gya. Or vo hame or ham usko dekh Kar bilkul shan't ho gye vo abhi kuch karta usse pehle hi Bhai ne uske mathe per teeka laga Diya.or vo bahi dher ho gya. Lekin jaise hi girne Wala tha Mene jhat se use sambhal liya or aaram se neche rakh diya.taki koi aawaj na ho. Fir me deval se kinare per tik Kar right side me dekhne laga ki kitne log hai or kaise khade hai.




Veer- Kya position hai.



Main- Bhai aamne samne khade hai line se.


Veer- theek hai. Ek taraf me or dusri taraf tu.


Main- smaj gya Bhai.


Fir ham dono ek sath us taraf hue or fata fat goliya chalane lage. Ek girta turant agle ka no. Lag jata. Aise hi Bhai ki taraf Radha bech me thi. Uska nishana abhi achha nhi tha isliye ham usko cover Kar rahe the. Or thodi hi der me sab ka kaam khatm.



Veer- Harry ab.


Harry- sir yaha se. Thoda seedhe chaliye uske baad jaise hi left lenge aap log bade haal me pahuch jayenge. Jaha bo sabhi log khade hai. Or sath me sunny or Rony bhi hai.



Main- ok Chalo.



Fir hamne apni guns ko reload Kiya or aage bad gye jaise hi left turn aaya ham ruke or fir se maine jhak Kar dekha. To baha logo ka hujoom laga hua tha theek se kuch nhi dikh raha tha.



Main- Harry koi oper Jane ka Rasta hai yaha jaha se ham sab ko clear dekh sake.


Harry sir aap left na leke sedhe chale jaiye. Aage left me hi seediya hai. Unse AAP uoer chale jayege. Lekin uper. Bhi aadmi khade hue hai. Baki aap jano.



Main- ok me jaan lunga. Fir ham sedha gye or seediya leke. Oper as gye. Jaha. Neche ki taraf muh karke 10 log khade hue the. Ab hame teen logo ko gool karna tha taki ham unki jagah le sake. Ham thoda andhere me chhip gye or Mene pehle aadmi ko kuch aawaj lagai. Jise sunkar vo hamari taraf aane laga. Or jaise hi vo andhere me aaya. Mene uske seene me chaku ghop Diya or uska muh pehle hi band Kar diya tha. Jisse koi aawja nhi Hui. Fir Mene jhat se uske kapde pehne or usi position me bapis se khada ho gya. Or fir me apne baju me Jo aadmi khada tha uske pass gya or thoda aawaj badal Kar usse Meri jagah per khade hone ka bola. To vo Chala gya. Or fir Bhai ne fir se use aawaj karke apne pass bulaya or isi tarah ham teeno ne teen logo ko maar mar unke kaode pehan Kar unki jagah khud khade ho gye. Ab hame neche ka saaf dikh raha tha. Ki Kya ho raha hai. Mene harry ka Google pehna or Jo main main aadmi lag rahe the unka data nikalne ki baat kahi Harry se.



Main- Harry ye jitne main aadmi lag rahe hai inko Jara pehchanne ki kosis to Karo. Jara pata to chale aakhir hai Kon ye log.


Harry- ji sir.


Sir inke Jo naam sarkar ke ID me hai vo to aapki screen per dikh rahe honge. Lekin yaha inke Kya naam hai ye me nhi pata Kar sakta yaha aapko apne kaan khule rakhne honge. Jab bhi koi kisi ko pukare tab aap sun Lena.



Main- Kya Harry tu gadha hai ek no. Ka. Are Jo data tune store Kiya hai. Server room se usme check Kar na. Usme sabke yaha KE naam mil jayenge.


Harry- sorry sir ye baat me nhi soch paya.


Main- chal ab Kar jaldi.


Uske baad Harry ne store kiye hue data me in sab ko pehchane ki kosis ki. To sabhi ka record mil gya.



Harry- sir ye Jo bhure Balo Bala hai. Uska naam John hai. Or Jo isko order de raha hai iska naam suleman hai. Ye Asia se belong karta hai.



Harry abhi Bata hi raha tha ki Meri najar ek aadmi per ruk gyi or ab mere hairan hone ka time aane Wala tha. Kyuki jis insan ko me dekh raha tha bo bahi tha.



Veer- Kya hua Surya kise itna gour se dekh rahe ho.



Main- Bhai Jara right side me Jo blue coat me khada hai. Use dekho sab samaj me aajayega.



Or mere kehne KE baad jab Bhai ne use dekha to vo hairan to hue lekin thoda kyuki unhe pori sachhai nhi pata thi.



Veer- are ha ye to solomane hai na MS ka boss.



Main- ha Bhai lekin ye jinda kaise hai. Mene khud iski khopdi me goli utari thi.



Or Meri baat sunkar Bhai ko tagda jhatka laga




Veer- Kya kha tune. Tune iski khopdi me goli utari thi lekin kab.




Main- are Bhai jis raat MS ka hadsa hua tha. Uske pechhe me hi tha bo sab Maine hi Kiya tha. Or Mene hi vo Jennifer,Victor and ye solomane teeno ko Mara tha. Or isi solomane be mujhe sari jaankari di thi. Tab mujhe shak to hua tha ki itni aasani se usne sari info de di. Lekin uski batai har ek baat sahi thi isliye Mene uss baat ko fir bhool gya. Lekin ab use yaha jinda dekh Kar lag raha hai ki jarur kuch locha hai…..




Veer- tune ye sab akele Kiya or mujhe bataya bhi nhi. Kyu?...



Main- are Bhai vo sab me aapko baad me vistar se samjhaoga. Abhi yaha concentrate Karo na.



Radha- lekin Bhai ye jinda kaise hai. Kahi jisko aapne Mara vo koi duplicate to nhi tha na.



Veer- mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai…



Main- lekin mujhe nahi lagta. Kyuki kisi duplicate ke pass itni sari jaankari nhi ho sakti. Usne to mujhe khud kaise Kya karna hai ye sab Badi aasani se Bata diya tha. Jis bajah se mujhe kuch or shak hai.



Radha- Kya shak….




Main- sayad vo iska Bhai tha judwa …….

Harry Jara pata to laga ki solomane ka koi judwa Bhai tha Kya…



Harry- sir aapki bate sunte hi Mene purane panno ko palat Kar pata laga liya hai. Iska ek Bhai bhi tha. Or hu ba hu iski shakl ka tha. Lekin dimaag thoda Kam tha. Sayad koi mental problem thi use. Uska ilaj bhi chal raha tha yahi ke ek hospital me……




Main- Matlab Maine us pagal ko maar Diya or ye Sala Bach gya. Kya Harry tune pehle check karke kyu nhi bataya muje.



Harry- sorry sir Mene uss bare me iski history ko check nhi Kiya tha Verna me jarur aapko Bata deta.



Main- Kya yaar …… chal theek hai..




Veer- ab Kya karna hai ye soch chhote….



Main- Bhai vo samne hi dikh rahe hai. Sunny or Rony. Abhi hosh me nhi aaye hai. Harry blast hone me abhi kitna time bacha hua hai…



Harry- sir abhi 30 min. Bache hue hai.


Main- Theek hai jab 15 Bache tab hame remind Kar Dena. And yaha se Bahar Jane KE raste to tumne pata Kar hi liye honge.


Harry- sir yaha se ham usi ped wale raste se hi Bahar jayenge. Vo darwaja yaha andar se Bina kisi protection ke khulta hai. Bus handle ko neche Karo or door open…



Radha- theek hai. Lekin hamari ek gadi baha dusre ped ke pass hai uska Kya Kare.


Main- Harry usko auto drive karke yaha hamari exit position per Le aao.


Harry- ok sir..



Main- Bhai hamare pass iss gang ki sari jaankari to AA hi chuki hai. Ab ek kaam karte hai sabko thook Kar nikalte hai yaha se. Kyu faltu ka tension lena.



Veer- baat to theek hai lekin pehle in dono ko surakshit karna padega uske baad hi attack hoga. Isliye uske bare me kuch socho.



Main- Bhai inko kisi tarah hosh me Lana hoga. Uske baad hi ye hamari madad Kar payenge. Or khud ki jaan bacha payenge.



Veer- ye bhi theek hai lekin kaise….




Main- don't worry Bhai me hu na. Me apne sath ek dot gun laya tha. Mujhe pata tha ki inko behosh hi rakha jayega. Isliye inko hosh me Lane ka intjaam Mene pehle hi Kar diya tha. Ab ye dot un dono ko lagane the. Bus.




Veer- ek kaam Kar vo mujhe de me inko shoot karta hu usse jisse inko hosh aajayega. Fir ham sedha hamla Kar denge.



Main- ok Bhai ye. Lo.




Fir me Jara tehalte hue Bhai ke pass gya or unko do bullet type chhote injection de diye. Or gun bhi. Bhai ne hamara Sahara lekar dono ko ek ek bullet inject Kar di. Or uska aasar bhi suru ho gya. Ab ye sab hua or kisi ne dekha nahi aisa isliye hua kyuki vo sab ek alag jaagh bandhe hue the Baki sab dusre kone me baithe hue bate Kar rahe the. Un sab ka us taraf dhyan hi nhi tha. Sunny or Rony ko hosh aane laga tha. Or kuch hi der me bo normal ho Gaye. Or jaise hi hosh me aaye some aas pass ka jayeja lene lage. Unke hath bandhe hue the. Or unke aas pass 2 log bhi khade hue the. Jo unki rakhwali Kar rahe the.




Main- ab suno AAP log. Radha tumhe Rony or sunny ko kholna hai. Isliye tum us disha me jaogi. And me or Bhai in logo per hamla karenge. Jisse sabka dhyan hamari taraf hoga tabhi tum in dono ke pass Jake unhe khol Dena theek hai. Or Jara Bach ke. Vo Kya hai tumne abhi dushman ke kaode pehne hue hai. Isliye kahi vo dono tumhe dushman samaj Kar Marne na lage. Isliye unke pass jao to apna mask hata Dena taki vo tumhe pehchan sake. Samj gyi.



Radha- ha Bhai samaj gyi..me.



Veer- or ha agar kahi fas jao or situation hath me na rahe to ye smoke bomb for Dena jisse tumhe chhipne me aasani hogi.



Radha- ok Bhai. Ab jaldi Karo Kya karna hai.kyuki hamare pass Kam hi time bacha hua hai.



Main- Bhai ready



Veer- bachpan se……



Main-theek hai mere teen ginte hi. Me uper AAP neche.



Veer- ok….




Get set go……….




Or ye sunte hi Mene apne baju me khade logo ko shoot karna start Kar diya and Bhai ne nechhe andhadhun goliya chalana start Kar diya. Kisi ko kuch samaj nhi aaya ki ye achnak Kya ho gya. Or jab Tak smajte bahut der ho gyi. Yaha hamne goliya Chalani suru ki or Radha usi relling per bhagti Hui theek sunny logo KE uper pahuch gyi. Or usne Bina der kiye bahi se jump laga di. Chuki jyada uncha nhi tha to koi problem nahi Hui. Radha neeche pahuchi. To vo dono Jo baha khade hue the vo uski or dekhne lage. Lekin agle hi pal vo apni gun ko Radha ki taraf modne lage lekin Radha ready thi. Usne ek pistol nikali or jaldi hi un dono ko shoot Kar diya. Or apna mask hata Kar sunny ke pass gyi jisse usne use pehchan liya or Badi hi aascharya bhari najro se dekhne laga ki ye yaha kaise. Lekin abhi pochhne ka time nahi tha. Jaise hi sunny free hua Radha ne Rony ki kholna start Kar diya. Vo bhi hairan tha thoda…

Udhar sunny ne un dono ki guns ko le liya and Jo bhi samne aaye unko thokne laga or same Rony ne bhi ek gun uthai or sab ko udane laga. Ab uper ka Mera kaam pora ho chuka tha Maine Bhai se neche chalne ko kha to Bhai ne or Mene bahi se neche chhalang laga di. Ham neche land hue or Charo taraf fail gye. Baha per karib 50 log the. Jinme se 20-25 ko to Bhai ne maar hi Diya tha. Ab keval kuch hi bande Bache hue the. Bahi Radha Rony or sunny ke sath bani Hui thi.



Main- Radha ek gadi ko dhondo or Bahar Jane wale raste per khadi raho use le Kar. Taki ham sab ek sath Bahar ja sake jaldi.


Radha- ok Bhai…




Me Bhai John or suleman ko dhondo. Me solomane ko dekhta hu.



Bhai- ok…..




Tabhi sunny mere pass aa gya.



Main- kaisa hai kahi Mara to nhi in logo ne.



Sunny- nahi Bhai abhi Tak slamat hu. Tu Bata yaha kaise.



Main- abhi bato ka samay nhi hai. 15 min. Me ye jagah rakh hone wali hi. Isliye Radha ke sath raho or jitne bando ko maar sakte ho maar Dalo. Samjhe.



Sunny- smaj gya Bhai…




Main- Rony mere sth rehna.


Rony- ok….



Me or Rony bakiyo ki talash me yaha bha hone lage. Or Bhai in dono ko dhondne lage. Bahi sunny Radha ke sath rehke ek gadi ko le liya and Harry ki madad se exit gate ko khol Kar hamara intjaar karne lage.



Tabhi mujhe solomane dikha.to me uske pass gya and uske mathe per gun rakh Kar bola.



Main- Kya solomane buchara Tere chakkar me Tera Bhai Mara gya. Kha chhipa tha tu.



Solomane- ohhh to tune Mara mere Bhai ko. sale tune yaha aake apni kabr khud khodi hai.



Abhi itna hi bola tha ki Rony ne uske muh per apni gun se had Diya jisse uske muh se khon nikal gya.


Main- ab soch samaj Kar bolna.or bolna Kya sale hamare pass Teri bate sunne keiye time nahi hai. Isliye good bye….



Or Mene uski khopdi me apni gun ki goliya utaar di. Or me or Rony aage bad gye. Bahi Bhai ne john ko dhond liya tha or vo kuch karte usse pehle hi me bha AA Gaya.


Main- Bhai ise chhodo AAP us suleman ko dhondo…



Bhai baha se nikal gye. Or me ne john ki kanpati per apni gun lga li.



John- kyu Bache chalane ks dum hai. Bese Teri Umar dekh Kar nhi lagta ki tune ye sab Kiya hai….




Main- chhod na mamu. Tu jaan Kar Kya karega bese bhi Marne Wala hai tu.



John- kyu hatho me jaan nhi hai. Dum hai to sache mard ki tarah lad mujhse



Main- chal mere pass abhi thoda time hai. Teri ye khawahish bhi pori Kar deta hu. Aaja….


Mene apni gun Rony ko di or usko Bhai me pechhe bhej Diya.


Ab me or John aamne samne the….



John mujhe uchka raha tha. Thoda thoda choka raha tha lekin me bhi kha Kam tha. Jaise hi John aage bada Mene uske side hokar uski naak per neche se ek powerful knockout punch jad Diya. Sala bahiet gaya.



Main- Kya hua mamu ek hi punch me gir gya. Abhi to Badi bate Kar raha tha mard ki. Ab Kya hua…..



Meri bate sun Kar use thoda hosh aya or vo fir se ladkhadata hua khada hua. Or abki baar me doudta hua gya or Vidhyut jaambal ki tarah daav laga Kar patak Diya.




Or Is bar usme bilkul himmat nhi bachi uthne ki. Isliye Mene uski garden ko ghuma Diya or uska kaam khatam Kar diya.


Me utha hi tha ki Bhai or Rony bhi AA gye Mene unse pochha to



Veer- suleman ka kaam khatm ab nikalo yaha se. Ye kisi bhi waqt gir sakti hai building….



Me ha nikalo..


Fir hum Radha ki taraf nikal pade jaha Radha or sunny kuch 2 - 3 bando se nipat rahe the. Radha ne ek KE main part per laat Mari jisse vo gira and tabhi ghoom Kar uske chehre per ek or last de Mari jisse uska sir deewal se laga or vo bahi gir pada. Or bahi sunny ne ek hi jhatke me ek ki garden ko ghuma Diya. Ab bacha ek akela to vo bhagne laga. So Rony ne usko bahi goli maar ka khatm Kar diya. Fir ham sab gadi me baithe or Bahar ki taraf nikal gye….jaha hamari gadiya khadi hue thi. To hamne vo gadi bahi chhodi or apni gadiyo me baith Kar us jungle se Bahar road per aa gye… or karib 5 min baad baha bhayanak visfot hua or 2 km ka Sara area jameen me sama gya.. ye seen dekh Kar ham sab khush the. Fir ham sedhe some Ghar KE liye nikal gye……..






To be countinue……….
 
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Rahul0087@

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Congratulations for 100 update bhai


Bhai bahut bada thanks......



Aise hi apna sath banaye rakhe me aaplogo nirash hone ka ek bhi mouka nhi dunga..... Or aap logo ko lagatar update milte rahege.........


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