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Ab intro ak baar dy diya tu maza nahin aay ga bro ! Aap khud smjho main chata hu characters ko.Hey bro!! You're writing a wonderful story. Your writing skills are awesome as well. Just ek suggestion tha, ab tak jo bhi characters aayen hain un sabko ek hi update mein mention kardo & usko Index mein INTRODUCTION naam se laga do. Kyonki abhi tak kaafi saari female character aa chuki hain to thoda confusion ho raha hai.
Baaki bas yahi kahunga ke aap bohot hi badhiya likh rahen hain bas issi tarah likhte rahiye.
peace ✌