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Dil ka ego update 4

Mai - haan toh bata kaha se shuru kruu

Jatan - shuru se vhi se jaha se tu aya h vo Madhya Pradesh ke chhotasa shahar


Mai - haan toh .....

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mai- toh me Madhya Pradesh ke ek chhotese shehar ka ladka hu humara shehar itna bhi chhota nhi h pr mere liye vo chhota hi tha kyuki mene kabhi usse ghuma hi nhi theek se me ek middle class family se hu mere dad bhut ache h unka business h electronic ka meri mom housewife h meri ek sister bhi h chhoti sab acha tha sivaye mere me bhut zyda weak tha padai me or sath hi kisi sports ya activity me bhi me kuch khas nhi tha meri vjhse mere mom dad ko bs insult hi sehni padti thi kyuki baki bacho ki tarah me smart nhi tha
Mera koi dost bhi nhi tha meri puri schooling life me ek bhi dost nhi tha humesha har class alg akela rehta tha teachers bache bs mazak bante the esa nhi h ki ek hi school me tha nhi 4 school change krne pr bhi ek dost nhi bana sab jagha hui toh bs insult or mazak kyuki padai me weak hone ki vjhse had koi na mazak banata tha naa toh backbencher mera naam naahi toppers me bs akele baithe rehna akele lunch Krna baki bache ek dusre se lunch share krte the pr bs unhe dekhta tha esa nhi h ki mene kabhi try nhi kiya dost banane ki pr koi interested hi nhi hota tha me attractive nhi thana kai baar mere sath baithe huye bacho ko uske dost birthday parties me bulate the mere samne unhe invite krte or mujhe lgta ab mujhse bhi kahega pr nhi pata h mere sath unka relation tha mazak ka bss mazak krte the koi apni takat dikhane ko mujhe dhamkata koi class ko hasane ke liye mere mazak banvata mujhe smjh hi nhi ata tha ki kya Krna chahiye naa koi samjhane ko tha na smjhne ko fir har parents teachers meets me teacher yaa toh meri marks ko leke meri complaint krti or meri mom Ko kehti aap dhyaan nhi deti h
Meri mumma ne meri tutions lagvayi sab kiya pr vha bhi na me smart bnaa naa mera koi dost bs vha bhi mazak bana tution teachers ke dande kai baar toh bhut logo ne kha ki teri shakal dekh kar hi tujhe maarne ka mnnn krta h esi tha sab life yeh sab kam nhi tha ki dad bhi baki bacho se compare krne lage or specially cousins se relative ke bacho se padosiyo se esa hi chal rha tha khudko disappointment maan hi liya tha mene me zyada
ESi me 12 th standard me aya esa nhi tha ki tab tk meri koi pehchaan ban gyi thi sab vesa hi tha na koi dost na koi sahara me akela or mujhe mera hi sahara school me sabke groups the toppers ka backbencher ka alg sab bhaidya the aps me bhi sabke bhut group the ek group ke sab the topper backbencher first bencher middle bencher sab us group ke ladke mazak banvate the sabka or mera sabse zyada kabhi kisi ne sur pr maar diya kisi ne niche gira diya kabhi gum balo me laga dena kabhi paani pant me dalna mujhe jese adat si hogyi thi vo sab gaali galoch krte the mtlb hoti hi h india me galiya dena aam baat h pr mujhe gaali dena nhi ata tha naahi me deta tha kyuki ese dost hi nhi the jo galiya sikhaye jo ghume fire jo hasaye jo baat kre esliye shehar chhota lgta tha kyuki ghuma hi nhi tha toh esi ek din ek ( yhaa se es kahani me galiya shuru hojayengi)
toh ek din ek bakchod ne mere sang bakchodi krne ke liye mere class me enter hote hi mujhe phiche se pakad liya or girls ki row ki taraf lejake mujhe dhakke marne laga phiche se ladkiya sab dekh ke has rhi thi usi time class me principal madam ki entry hui or mene usse chhutne ke liye apne hath. Per jhatkaar ke chhutne ki koshish kr rha tha tabhi mera per uske main part pr pada or vo zorse chilate huye phiche ki taraf hata puri class usse dekh rhi thi me apna hath apne main part pr rakh ke chila rha tha or naach rha tha tabhi vo principal madam se takragya or mam gir gyi or vo mam ke uper gir pada mtlb esa lg rha tha jese
mam ke muh pr baith gya hoo saare bache class ke has rhe the uske uper yeh dekh ke mujhe bhi hasi agyi vo abhi bhi chila rha tha shyd zorse pad gyi thi usse laat toh mam ne usse zor se dhakadiya apne uper se hatane ke liye or vo samne ki taraf gir pada uska hath still uske main part pr hi tha tabhi mam apni saree theek karte huye uthi or uski traf dekha tab tk vo bhi khada hogya tha mam ne usse paas jaake usse ek zordaar thapad mara puri class abhi bhi has rhi thi mam ne usse kha ki kya naach kr rhe the murge ki tarah school me sab bache has rhe the uspe mujhe bhi hasi arhi thi fir mam ne usse murga banne ki punishment di assembly hall me aane ke liye sabhi 12 standard ke students ko kha or chali gyi or us murge ko bola tum sabse last me ana sabbhi student ek ek karke line me assembly hall me jaane lage sab uss murge ko dekh ke haste huye jarhe the fir hum sab Assembly hall me phuche vha mam ne pehle hume 12 board exam ki dates aagyi h yeh information di fir mam ne ek achasa lecture diya fir mam ne kha

mam - dear student humare school se kayi saare toppers rankers paasout hote h har saal pr aaj tk esa mauka kisi bhi bache ko nhi mila h jese aap mese kisi ek ko milne vala h ( sabhi students apas me esa kya hoga kya bol rhi h mam ) ji haan bacho es saal india ke sabse ache college C.B.S.I me jaane ka mauka humare school ko represent krne ka mauka C.B.S.I bhut bada college h or vha bs best mese best bache hi japata h vese toh us college ki policy h ki bina entry exam diya vha kisi bhi bache ko admission nhi milta har saal unki seats full hojati h pr es saal us college ke 25th foundation day mtlb College ke 25 th year complete hone ki celebration me unhone ek lucky student lottery ka ayojan kiya h unhone india ke kuch states ke kuch schools ko yeh letter bheja h es letter me likha ki ......
to be continued



Avyush apne halato se mara majboor bechara jisne jeevan mein jillat ke shivay kuchh na dekha hain, chahe wo ghar ho ya school ya phir jo bhi jagah jahan wo jaye, bas akelapan aur dard khud ko chhota mehsoos karne ka, sabke najro mein apne liye heen bhawna dekhte rahna.

Shayad bhagya hi uske saath tha jo usne bhi sapna dekha jo uske aukat se bahar tha abhi tak, aisa sabko lagta tha aur khud usko bhi, lekin kehte hain na triya charitra aur purush ka bhagya bhagwan bhi nahin jante hain, wahee hua jiski sabko bilkul bhi ummeed na t hee ,wahee hua, us larke ko bhagya ne saath diya, ye bas andajan main keh raha hoon.

Jo bhi hain iske charachters bare achhe hain, khas kar jatan didi toh bari kamal hain, uska character bahut hi bold hain, ummeed hain unko aage jyada dekhne ko mile. AAp likhte raho, iski naveenta hame pasand aaye.

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mr.avyush verma ka card jo unhone post kiya vo select hogya h
( Yeh sunke me bhut zyada shocked tha aakhir esa kese hoskta h mene toh post kiya hi nnhi)
Mam aage - or yeh h unka card ab me aap sabko padke batana chahunga ki avyush Varma ne es card pr kya likha h....

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Mam ( card padte huye ) - respect chodu log of CBSI AAPKE ES LOTTERY KE CHUTIYAPE ME AAPNE HUMARE MAHA BACKCHODI SCHOOL KO AAPNE APNE LUND KI BATO SE BHARE LETTER KO BHEJA.

( ITNA SUNTE HI VHA SAB LOG INCLUDING ME OR MERE PARENTS SAB SHOCKED THE KI MAM KYA PAD RHI H )
MERE PAPA ( MAM SE ) - MADAM AAP YEH KYA PAD RHI H ?
MAM - ME VHI PADH RHI HU JO APKE MAHAAN BETE NE HUMARI SCHOOL KI SHAAN ME LIKHA H .. AAGE TO SUNIYE AAP ..
MAM CONTINUE READING THE CARD - ME APNE SCHOOL KA EK HOSHIYAR BACKCHOD HU MERA NAAM AVYUSH VARMA AAPKO SADAR NAMAN APNE LUND SE SLAAM KRTA HU ME APKO APNE BAARE ME BATA DU KI APNE SCHOOL KA SABSE BEST CHUTIYA HU OR SAARE CHUTIYO KA LEADER HU
AGR MUJHE APKE BACKCHODI COLLEGE ME AANE KA MUAKA MILA TOH MERE CHUTIYAPI SCHOOL KA MAAN BHADEGA OR HUMARI PYAARI RAAD HUMARI PRINCIPAL MAM UNKI BHI GAAND KI KHUSHI BHAD JAYEGI BHUT MAST H UNKI GAAND SCHOOL ME ATE HI SABKA KHADA KRDETI H VOO ITNI MAST H HUMARI MADAM

KMAAL H BHUT KUCH BATA DIYA MENE APKO SAB MERE MATA PITA KE DIYE HUYE SANSKAR H OR SCHOOL ME SIKHAYI GYI BACKCHODI KA NATIJA H
RESPECTED BACKCHOD SIR OR RAAND MAM BS ITNI HI BACKCHODI KAAFI H BAKI AAP AGR MERI BAKCHODI KO SMJHA HO OR AAP MUJHE SELECT KRE TOH YEH MERE LUND KA SOBHAGYA HOGA
APNE SCHOOL KE BAKCHODO OR CHUTIYO KI SHAAN AVYUSH VARMA..


( ME BHUT ZYADA SHOCKED THA.....
PR MUJHSE ZYADA SHOCKED OR SHARMINDA MERE MUMMA PAPA THE )

Mam - toh kesa laga aap sabko yeh card me likhe adhbhut bol

Mam ( mere maa papa ko dekh ke ) - yhi sanskar diye h aapne apne bete ko
Ese naam roshan krega yeh apka bhut ache maa baap h

( Mam ne mere maa papa ki bhut bhut zyada insult kri or me shocked me tha ki yeh sab mene.nhi kiya h pr sabko kese bolu samjh nhi arha tha )

Baki parents or teacher - ese sanskar yeh koi maa baap h apne bete ki galti pr chup khade h or nhi toh kya es ladke koto school se nikaal dena chahiye.

Principal mam - aree nhi nhi en mahaan hasti ko thodi nikaal skte h inka toh naam select hua h inki details maangi gyi h CBSI VALO NE
PR ME AAAP SABKO BATA DU YEH HUMARE SCHOOL KA VO LADKA H JO HAR SAAL LAST ATA H HAR CLASS ME

SACH KAHU TOH ISNE APKE HUNHAR BACHO KA ek golden chance waste kiya h
Mujhe toh sharam aati h ki mene esse yha admission diya or aaplogo ko bhi sharam aani chahiye ki aapne ese ladke ko janam diyaa

( Mere maa papa ka chehra jhuk gya tha vo kuch nhi bol parhe the bechare mn me ro rhr the )

Me ( mene bhut himmat krke bola) - mam mene yeh card post nhu kiya yeh sab mene nhi likha

Meri ankhon me ansu the
Mene apne maa papa ko bhi bola ki
Papa maa sachme mene yeh nhi likha
Mene card bhi post nhi kiya

Papa ne meri taraf dekha or mujhe zorse ek thappad maar diya sabke samne or bola
Ki naak kata di humari or kitni bezzati krayega humari

Or mere maa papa vha se jaane lage
Toh principal mam boli rukiye aap
Aapko ek sorry letter likh ke dena hoga or fine bharna hoga apke bache ke is maahaan kaam ke liye

Mere maa ki ankhon me ansu the or papa ki awaaz me dukh tha bhut
Mene mam ko fir kha ki mam sachme mene vo card post nhi kiya mene
Mere papa ne kha ki mam me soko sorryr letter dedunga or fine bhi

or vo vha se jaane lage maa bhi jaane lagi mene maa ko bola ki esa nhi h maa sachme aap toh meri suno pr kisi ne nhi suna

Or maa papa chale gye mujhe vhi gate pr chhod diya me ro rha tha pr vo log nikal gye the mujhe bina liye

(Me andar gya principal mam ke room me or mam ko bola ki mam plss sachme mene nhi kiya vo card post mene bilkul esa nhi kiya
Vo card toh mene ghr jaake faad diya tha vo sachme mene nhi likha )

Principal mam - tumhare maa baap ne ek baar bhi nhi kha ki tum esa nhi krskte or naahi kisi or ne vo log toh haal fine bharne ko maan gye or sorry letter dene ko jab unhe hi Tum par vishvaas nhi h toh hum kese kare tum jaao yha se get out from my cabin

(Me apna sar neeche jhuka ke nikla or phiche se mam halki awaaz me nalayak kahi ka
Or me rotee huye bhaar jarha tha
Me school ke gate tk phucha hi tha
Ki phiche se awaaz aayi )

Awaaz- aur chutiye agya mazaaa hahahaha

Mene phcihe dekha toh vo ........


To be continued....


Dil me dukh hota h jab koi apna dukhi hota h
Pr jab maa papa dukhi ho or unke dukh ki vjha ho toh dil mann sab tut jata h 😞

mujhe yeh nahin samajh aa raha kee kaisa school hain agar koi bachhe ne itne gande words use bhi kiye honge, toh bhi kya koi principal aise words pure school ke samne dohrayengi, unke sanskar kahan gaye , jo wo doosre kko seekh de rahi thee, agar beijaati bhi karni hoti toh seedha padhne ke liye dete unke maa baap ko kee aapke suputra ne yeh likha hain, lekin aise asleel words toh kabhi koi sikshak prayog na karenge. Ajeeb hain.

Sala shab mil ke kaat rahe hain, naa jaane aur kitne jillat dekhega lagta hain abhi aur baaki hain, jab tak wo pura na hoga, iske dukho ka ant bhi na hoga.
 

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Or me rotee huye bhaar jarha tha

Me school ke gate tk phucha hi tha

Ki phiche se awaaz aayi )



Awaaz- aur chutiye agya mazaaa hahahaha



Mene phcihe dekha toh vo ........

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Mene phiche dekha toh vo vhi ladka tha jisko mam ne murga banaya tha
Mujhe lga vo mera mazak banane ko mujhe esa bol rha h

Mee vapis gate se aage jaane lage toh vo apne dosto ke sath mere aage aake khada hogya mera rasta rok ke .

Mene uski taraf dekha toh vo bola( uska naam Abhishek tha sab usse abhi Krke bulate the)

Abhi - kya be chutiye maza aya ki nhi bina bataye hi jarha h

Me - plss mujhe jaane doo mene vo card post nhi kiya mene toh usse dekha bhi nhi tha ghr jaate hi faad diya tha

Abhi - acha hua tune nhi dekha tha

Me - mtlb ??

Abhi - card mene tere bag se nikaal liya tha or vha apna card rakh diya tha

Me - kyaaaaa ?????

Abhi - haan chutiye vo sab mene likh ke post kiya tere naam pr

Me - kyu kiya tune esa kya bigada tha mene tera

Abhi - teri vjhse mam ne mujhe murga banaya teri vjhse sabne mujh pr hasa tujh jese chutiye ki vjhse meri class me toraa( impression) kharaab hua ladkiya bhi has rhi thi

Me - tum log mera kitna mazak banate aaye ho 5 th standard se jab mene yha new admission liya tha fir bhi mene kabhi tum logo se kuch nhi kha tune itni si baat ke liye mere sath yeh sab kiyaa

Abhi - oyee chutiye itni si baat hogi tere liye mere liye nhi kya kr rha tha me thoda mazak hi toh bana rha tha tera 2 min or ruk jata ladkiya impress ho jati pr tune mera hi mazak banvadiya sabke samne mera ego hurt hogya
( Yeh sab sunke mere dimaag me alg hi type ka kuch emotion chal rha tha )

Me - mere ma papa ne tera kya bigada tha sabke samne unki insult huyi teri vjhse
( Me bhut ro rha tha )

Me - tu chal mere sath principal mam ke paas or unhe bata ki yeh sab tune kiya h

Abhi ( haste huye ) - chale bee chutiye me khi nhi jarha jo hua shi hua unhe bhi pata chal gya unka beta kitna bada chutiya teri kiye saja thodi unhe bhi mil gyi

( Yeh sunte hi mujhe bhut tez gussa aya or mene uska collar pakad ke usse kha)

Me - tu abhi chalega mam ke paas or unhe sab sach batayega

( Uske dost ne mujhe laat meri or mere hath se uska collar chhut gya or mera.sur school ke gate se jaake lag phiche ki taraf bhut zor se karib 10 sec ke liye mujhe kuch smjh nhi arha tha pr mere brain me bhut dard horha tha meri ankhein bhi dhundli hogyi thi tabhi 10 sec bad jab mujhe hosh aya toh vo 3no mujhe gher ke khade the or abhi ne mujhe thappad maara usi gaal pr jis pe mere papa ne mujh mara tha fir vo bola)

Abhi - teri itni himmat mera collar pakda tune

( Thappad ki vjhse mujhe mere maa papa ki hui saari insult or unka rona sab yaad agya )

Or tabhi pata nhi mujhe kya hua mene uska hath pakad liya or kha

Me ( thodi bhari awaaz me) - tune shi nhi kiya bhut badi galti krdi tune jiske liye tu ab zindgi bhar laash ki tarha jeetega

Abhi - haste huye hah hah sala chutiye hath pakad ke dialogue maar ke khudko hero smjh rha h kya

Me - koi hero nhi hu hero hota toh shyd maaf krdeta me jo hu vo abhi sabko dikhana baaki h

( Or yeh bolte hi mene usse laat meri vo niche gir gya or uska ek dost usse uthaane gya or dusra meri taraf aya mene gate ke paas kuch pathar or dete( bricks) pade the mene ek brick uthayi uske dost ke sur pr maar di vo vhiii pr chikhte huye baith gya dard se fir dusra meri taraf aya mene vhi brick uske ghutne pr maari vo bhi ladkhdake gir gya abhi uthke meri taraf bhada or usne apna hath bhadati aage toh mene uska hath pakad ke gate me fasa diya or gate itni zorse band kiya ki uske right hand ki saari ungliya ek sath tut gyi khoon bhi nikalne laga esa lga rha tha jese kisi ne jucie nikalne ki machin me ganne ko dala ho vese hi khoon nikal rha tha fir mene usse bola )

Me (ajeeb awaaz me) - yhi vo ungliya haina jisse tune vo card likha thaa ooh sorry yhi vo ungliya aaaa thiiiiii naaaa ( yeh bolte huye mene gate or daba diya jisse vo itna zorka chikha aaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAA

Me - or cheekh tera ego hurt hua na ab dekh me kese tujhe hurt krta huuuuuuuu

Yeh sab dekh ke uske dost jisko sur pr brick maari thi uski dard se or yeh dekh ke dar se itni fatt gyiiii ki uski susu hi nikal gyi
Fir uska dost jiski per me brick lagi thi vo langda langda ke andar jaane laga mene uspe dhyaan nhi diya

Mene abhi ka hath gate se nikala or bola bhut maza aya na tujhe mere maa baap ki BEZZATI HOTE DEKH KE AB OR MAZE LEEE
Mene usse dekha diya vo pet ke bal neeche gira or let ke chilaane laga dard se uski ek bhi finger nhi chal rhi thi mene ek bada pathar uthaya or usse bola es position me rehne ki life time ki adat daal le CHUTIYEEE

OR YHI BOLNE KE BAAD MENE USKI PEETH PR VO PATHAR MARA ZOR SE aaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAA CHILATE HUYE OR USKI PEETH KI HADDI TUT GYI ( BACK BONE) TUT GYI OR ITNE DARD SE VO ESA CHIKHA OR BEHOSH HOGYA
mene usse or uske dost ko bhi chhoda or me school ke andar vapis gya uska dost bhut shock me tha kuch nhi bol parha tha
( School ka gate road se thoda andar tha abhi parents teachers meet khatam nhi hui thi esliye koi teacher ya STUDENT bhaar nhi tha humare siwa uska langda dost jo and bhaag aya tha vo pata nhi kha jaake chhip gya tha
Me vapis principal mam ke office me gya or mam se bina phuche andar cabin me ghus gya mene mam ko kha

Me - mam vo card mene nhi likha abhi ne likha h

Mam ( thoda gussa or ek dabi hasi ke sath) - haan me janti hu ki vo card tumne nhi likha
( Me yeh sunte hi bhut zyada or zyada gussa or sawalo me atak gya)

Mam continue - haan me janti hu ki naa toh vo card tumne likha na usse post kiya mene tumhari handwriting check kri thi or mujhe yeh bhi pata tha ki vo sab abhi ne kiya tha

Me ( chilake) - to fir aapne yeh sab kyu kiyaaaa sabke samne meri or mere parents ki insult kyuki

Mam ( haste huye ) - kyuki me tumhe kabse school se nikaalna chahti thi pr har baar tumhare parents pls mam pls mam Krke mere hath jodke mujhe esa krne se rok lete the or vese bhi yeh ek acha mauka tha abhi ke marks tumse zyada ache aate h infact tumhara or uska koi comparison hi nhi h or uske parents or vo kitne ache h unki badi bhen ki shaadi me bhi bulaya tha mujhe unhone or yha tum humare school ka naam kharaab kr rhe ho abhi tumne yeh card likha or ab board exam me fail hojaoge toh ab hum tumhe school se easily nikaal sakenge

( Yeh sab sunke mujhe pata nhi kyu bhut tez gussa bhi adha tha or rona bhi sath hi sath samjh nhi arha tha ki yeh sab meri vjhse hua h mere sath mene toh kabhi kuch galat nhi kiya kabhi exam me cheating nhi ki kabhi gaali nhi di kabhi jhut nhi bola fir bhi yeh sab, sala kabhi ek dost bhi nhi bana or yeh sab or usiii time mene kuch socha or mam ko kha)

Me - shi kha aapne madam bilkul shi ab toh mera or us abhi ka koi comparison rha nhi or aapne mam bhut badi galti krdi h ab aap dekhiye ki kese me Board exam me fail hounga or kese apke school ko chhodke jaunga

Or me unke cabin se bhaar agya
Or neeche gate ki taraf aya toh vo dono abhi bhi vhi the pr abhi Zameen pr hi pada tha hil nhi rha tha vo dono usse uthane ki koshish kr rhe the me unke pas gya or unko shhhhhhhh krte huye bola

Me - agr tum dono apni salamati chahte ho toh yha kya hua kisi ko batane ki zarurat nhi h or tum dono ko jo chote lagi h vo bike se girne ki vjhse lagi h esko yhi pade rehne do tum dono yha se nikle parents teachers meet bs khatam hone ko h agr tumhe yha kisi ne dekh liya toh sabko yhi lagega ki yeh sab tumne kiya h esliye niklo yha se varna agr tum dono ka yhaa se jaane ka mnn nhi h ya tumne kisi ko bataaya toh ready hojao abhi se eski tarah life guzarne ke liye...

( Vo dono bina kuch bole vha se uthke bhaag gye apne ghr )

Or me bhi nikal aya apne ghr
Mere ghr me .....

To be continued ..........


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yeh ho kya raha hain, jo larka itna fattu tha kee saalo tak bina kuchh bole sune sabkee maar-gaaliyan khata aa raha hain, wo achanak se itna khoonkhar kaise ho gaya, kya koi split personality hain uske andar jo aise mauko pe bahar aa jata hain. Ya phir usse koi shaktiyan mil gayee hain jo usme itni takat aa gayee, bhai abhi iss scene pe totally confused ho gaya hooon, jitna achha lag raha hain ayush ka un sabke againast stand karna, utna hi shocking yeh timing aur halat lag rahe hain, bina kisi valid reason ke yeh shab hona.

For real koi aisi bhi chutiya mam hoti hain, are yeh larka ekdum obedient tha, are padhne mein budhhu tha toh kya iska matlab jaan bujh ke uske parents ke saath aisa ghatiya mazak karenge, itni beizzati, wo rote hue gaye the. Kitni giri hui aurat hain yeh. Aur usko school se nikalne ke liye kisi reason kee jaroorat bhi na parti, jo larka consistantly itne kharab track record se pass ho raha hian usse aaram se wo school se nikal shakti thee. Iske liye kisi kee life deliberately barbad kar dena.
 
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Mere ghr me..

Me apne ghr phucha pehle mujhe bhut dar lg rha tha ghabrahat bhi horhi thi pr us abhi or principal ki baate sunke bhut gussa tha jo shant nhi horha tha or usi mood ke sath me apne ghr ke andar gya

Meri maa papa hall me hi baithe the
Me unse kuch kehna chahta tha unhe gale lagana chahta tha bhut preshaan tha mnse pr kuch nhi keh ska or apne room me jaake baith gya

Bhut der tk gusse me rehne ki vjhse mujhe bhut paseena arha tha toh me washroom gya or shower on Krke baith gya jese jese paani sur se hoke bhene laga mera gussa bhi shant hua or mene jo ansu rok rakhe the vo bhi bhena shuru hogye

paani me pata nhi chal rha tha ki paani ki bunde h yaa ansu pr me rorha tha karib 1ghnte tk me vha baitha rha fir me utha

me pura tut chuka tha gussa nhi tha mn me bs becheni thi or me bs soch hi rha tha ki kyu hua mere sath esa baar baar ek yhi sawal arha tha mnn me

kuch der baad me let gya thodi hi der leta tha pr jhapki esi lagi ki mujhe laga ki me bhut time se sorha hu me apne room se bhar nikla toh dinner time horha tha paa maa hall me hi the sab bhut shant tha me bhar gya or paani peene kitchen me jaane laga unke samne se mujhe laga ki vo kuch kahenge pr unhone kuch nhi kha fir me vapis apne kamre me jaane laga toh

maa ne kha khana khale mene kha nhi mujhe bhukh nhi h . Tab Papa ne kha

Papa - humari bezzati karake jo khushi mili hogi usse hi bhar gya hoga eska pet..

Papa ki baat mujhe bhut zorse lagi
Maa ne bhi mujhe fir esi nazro se hi dekha
Me apne kamre me jaane laga toh papa fir bole

Papa - ab kya natak kr rha h khale khana nhi toh or zaleel krvale hume toh shyd pet bhar jayee tera

Es baat pr mene keh diya

Me - ha zaleel hi toh karvata hu me aap logo ko kabhi koi khushi nhi di h mene apko tabhi aap dono mese kisi ne bhi ek baar bhi nhi bola ki humara beta esa nhi krskta kyuki apko khud apni parvrish apne diye sanskaro pr vishvaas nhi rhaa ki aap bol ske ki nhi yeh humare bete ne nhi kiya hoga

( Yeh baat us principal ki vjhse mere dimaag me ghum rhi thi )

Maa papa ko jhatka sa laga

Mene fir kha
Me - ek baar ke liye bhi aapne nhi bola aap logo ko mujhpr itna bhi vishavas nhi h or

(yeh kehte huye meri akhoein se ansu aane lage )

Me - me aap dono ki kasam khaake kehta hu mene vo nhi kiya tha naa mene uss card me vo sab likha tha naahi usse post kiya tha meri class ke ek ladke ne vo sab kiya tha mere naam se

Papa - koi or bhala kyu kregaa tere naam se yeh sab

Me papa ki taraf dekh ke

Me - me ab kisi ko safayi nhi dene wala ab me sabko vhi dunga jo aap sabko mujhse chahiye or aap log chahte h

Or yeh kehke me apne room me agya
Or apni study table pr baith ke padne laga or padte padte hi sogya

Subha jab me utha toh washroom se fresh hoke

room se bhaar nikla toh t.v pr news chal rhi thi school ke ladko me hui mut bhed ek ladke ko jaan se marne ki koshish maaarne vale ka koi ata pata nhi h ghayal ladke ke naam
Abhishek h vha abhi icu me h uske dosto se baat horhi h pata chala h ki school ke gate ke bhaar hi abhishek ghayal awastha me logo ko mila school me meeting thi toh sab andar the school ke bhaar lage cctv camera kharaab hone ki vjhse kuch bhi pata nhi chal parha h ki yeh sab kese hua

( Me mnn me - principal mam ke cabin me jaate time acha hua mene dekh liya tha ki bhar ke camera kaam nhi kr rhe h or uske dosto ki kya bolenge vo )

Me araam se kitchen me gya or apna breakfast leke apne room me agya

( Ab kahani thodi fast forward me chalegi )
1.Abhishek ki reed ki haddi puri damage hogyi thi or bhi se hote huye ek nas dimaag tak jaati h toh vo bhi dab gyi thi jisse vo coma me chala gya tha
2. Uske dost bhut shocked the toh undono ne police ko or kisi ko kuch nhi bataya
3. Preboard khatam hogye the toh school jana nhi tha esliye principal se bhi koi mulakaat nhi hui bs rollno. Lene bulaya tha toh vo mene teacher ke paas jaake hi leliya tha
4. Ghr pr me maa papa se zyada kuch nhi bol rha tha ek taraha se bs kaam ki hi baat bs koi hasi na khushi bs kaam ki or apne room me
5. Mene thaan lii thi ki ab sabko vhi dena h jo sabko chahiye
(I) Toh bhut zyada mehnat se padke exam me top Krke maa papa ko izzat dilani thi
(II) us principal mam ko dikhana h ki kitna layak hu me

(III) Or mujhe es shehar se bhar jana h yha ke log mere layak nhi h

Exam huye meri mehnat rang laayi mene top kiya tha puri city me

Maa papa dono bhut khush mithayi batvayi unhone toh pr me bs bhaar se khush tha andar se mujhe koi khushi nhi thi

Or jab meri report CBSI COLLEGE PHUCHI TOH JO 10 BACHHE SLECT HUYE THE PURI COUNTRY SE UNME MERA NAAM THA
Ab bs wait tha toh lottery ka

Jaldi hi vo din agya or mera hi naam nikla lottery me yeh baat desh ke har news channel pr thi

News channel ki baatose sirf middle class valo ko hi fark padta h
Upper class or higher upper class valo ki esse fark nhi padta

Or lower class ke liye khane ke liye mehnat Krna hi unka kaam h
Toh meri family bhut khush thi pr me nhii

Fir vo din aya me apne school gya tha apne final documents collect krne

vha principal mam ne mera swagat bhut achese kiya or mene bhi bhut tarike se unse baat ki

Principal mam - aao beta tumne toh humare school kaahi nhi humare shehar ka bhi naam roshan krdiya

Me - mam yeh sab toh bs. Apka ashirvaad h aapne hi toh motivation diya tha

Or esi mene apne documents liye or nikal gya
Ab me packing me lag gya mujhe jald se jald jana thaa


CBSI CAMPUS CHANDIGARH vese toh college ki or bhi branches thi pr main brach thi thi yha pura campus tha har cheez ki suvidha thi

Faculty or facilities top class thi

Meri train raat ki thi

Mene apna smaan liya or maa papa mujhe station chhodne aaye vo mere sath hi
chandigarh jana chahte the mujhe settle krne

pr mene kha nhi me akele hi jaunga toh maan gye the thodi der me hum station phuche

mene train me apna samaan rakh or unke per chhuye or ashirvaad leke train me bitha gya train chaln shuru hui or or orrrrrr

Jese hi mene apni city ki border paari hogi
Vo school toh yaad haina sabko haan vhi usme blast hogyaa
Pura school jal gya kuch nhi bacha

Or me ab shanti se khushi se apni life enjoy krne ek nayi kahani likhunga sochke nikal pada.....

To be continued....

Mujhe hope h ki sabhi readers ko kahani bhut achi hi lg rhi hogi


Bhai ho kya raha hain, achanak se wo city mein top bhi kar gaya, isse pehle uski gairat na jaagi thee, matlab usse stage pe beizzati hi karwani thee tab jaa ke hi wo first aata toh wo phele hi bata deta. Aur sidha school ko hi ura diya.
 
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Vo school toh yaad haina sabko haan vhi usme blast hogyaa
Pura school jal gya kuch nhi bacha
Or me ab shanti se khushi se apni life enjoy krne ek nayi kahani likhunga sochke nikal pada.....
Abb aage.....

Ab mujhe yha jatan rok deti h
Jatan( shocked) - oyee tune school blast krdiyaaa ????

Me - nhii mene nhi kiya
Jatan - toh school me blast kese hua ??
Me - gas pipeline leak hone ki vjhse

Jatan - acha acha toh ye thi teri life story

Me - abhi khatam nhi hui h

Jatan - achaaa pr meri chai toh hogyi naa or tune toh pee hi nhi thnd hogyi

Me - mera mn nhi tha peene ka vo sab purani baate yaad Krke kuch acha nhi lgta h

Jatan - tune sabko muh tod javaab diya na or kya chahiye

Me - vo sab mene khushi se nhi kiya kuch ajeeb h mujhme

Jab mujhe gussa ata h ya koi meri insult krta h toh achanak mujhse esa hi kuch hojata h
Jatan - chal theek h hota h kabhi kabhi nhi pata chalta gusse me

Me - hmmm

Jatan - achaa ab jab Tera admission hogya or tu yha hai bhi fir bhi kya problem h tujhe aage kya hua

Me - toh ab shuru krta hu aage ki kahani
Jatan - ruk ruk tu ek baar chalu hoga fir rukega hi nhi ruk 1 min mujhe bhukh lag rhi h pehle kuch magane de mujhe

Jatan canteen vaale ko awaaz lagake

Jatan - oyee chhotu 2 Maggie meri vali special laga

Me - chandu naam h uska

Jatan - achaaaa... Hoga naam me kya rakha h

Me - naam me hi sab kuch rakha h

Jatan - tu sachme bhut interesting h yrrr

Me - nhi yrrr me kha interesting hu

Jatan - haan chal chal ab zyada bhao nhi kha aage bata kya hua
Aage

Me - toh sun .......

Me kuch kahu itne me vha ek ladka agya or mujhe kha

Ladka - abee kha h tu kabse dhund rha hu tujhe bhaiii

Dimaag kharaab hogya h dhund dhund ke karishma me bhi dhund rhi thi tujhe ruk usse call krne de

Ladka ne phone nikala or call kiya haa mil gya mujhe yeh pagal yha canteen me aake baitha hua h Haan ajao tum yha fir usne phone cut kiya

Ladka mujhse bola fir

Ladka - chutiya h kyaa kabse dhund rhe h naa phone utha rha h naa mil rha h

Me - bhai voo....vooo mujhe nhi pata kya hua tha me jatan ko dhundne nikla tha or boxing gym me jaake ( me jatan ko dekhte huye ) vha behosh hogya tha mujhe vha esne aake uthaya eska hi naam jatan h

Ladka - jaatan ladki h

Mere chehre pr hasi agyi or jatan mujhe dekhte huye boli

Jatan - haan chutiye me ek ladki hu bhut badi galti hogyi jo jatan naam rakh liya apna

Ladka ( meri taraf dekhte huye ) - aree bhai yeh toh gussa hogyi

Me - yrrrr sun gussa nhi h bs usse acha nhi lgta koi usse ladkaa smjhe naam se pr madam ka naam bhut acha h jataneshvari raano kumari

Ladka - acha acha

Itne me vha ek ladki aati h or kehti h
Ladki (uper dekhte huye ) - hey bhagwan bacha liya tumne mil gya yeh pagal insaan ( mujh dekhte huye ) areee pagal insaan kha the tum

Hum dono pagalo ki tarah tumhe kabse dhund rhe h

Toh vo ladka bola haan yeh pagal hi h karishma

Bhaisahab boxing gym me behosh hogye the esliye phone nhi utha rhe the

Ladki ( shocked ) - kyaaa aree bhai kya hua apkooo ( vo bhut tension me agyi thi) bhai bolo na kya huaa thaa or

Me - aree meri pyaari bhena kuch nhi hua vo bs kal se kuch khaya nhi na toh behosh hogya tha or yeh kehte huye mera sur neeche JHUk gya

Ladki - apke mnn me abhi tk vo baat chal rhi haina bhaai

Me uski taraf nhi dekh paya or sur jhukaye rakha

Itne me chandu ( waiter) Maggie leke agya
Mene usse kha - chandu 2 or Maggie leaao

Chandu - bhaiya vo Maggie ke packet khatam hogye h yeh akhri do the

Me - aree toh koi baat nhi 2 plate to laskta h hum adhi adhi krlenge vese bhi Maggie baatne se dosti me pyaar bhadta h or usse ankh maardi

Chandu - ji bhaiya

Jatan - ji bhaiya mujhe toh aaj tk tune ji didi kabhi nhi bola

Or vo dono bhi ladka ladki.bole - hume. Bhi nhi bola

Chandu - bhaiya ne mujhe naam se bulaya jabki aap logo ko toh yeh bhi nhi pata ki mera naam kya h

Or yeh kehke vo chala gya
Or me jatan ki taraf dekhne lga
Vo ladke ko dekh rhi thi

Mene usse kha ki yeh vooo insaan h jo meri kahani me aane hi wala tha

Or fir mene ladki ki taraf ishara Krke ki yeh vo h tabhi jatan bolia

Esse me janti hu yeh karishma rajput h
Tabhi karishma bhi boli ki

Karishma - haan me bhi. Isse janti hu jatan

Ladka ,- karishma yeh ladki h

Karishma has padi or boli

Karishma ( haste huye ) ,- areee waah bhaiya acha hua aapne bata diya nhi toh mujhe pata hi nhi chalta
Fir jatan boli .........


To be continued...
sorry readers wait. Karane ke liye next update itna late nhi ayega
bhai jatan kaa naam change kar do bechari kee bari beijjati hoti hain :tongue::tongue::tongue: , waise ekdum sahi character hain, bindas bolti hain.

aapke likhne ka style toh bezor hain lekin aap parts explain nahin kiye hain abhi tak bahut saare cheejo ke reasons dene baaki hain. Asha hain un shabke jawab mil jayenge.
 
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