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Fantasy Dil Ka Rishta The Tale of a gud or bad guy..........

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Dosto yeh new story start karne jaa raha hu. Isse pahle 2 story aur hai meri uske v updates likh raha hu. Isse kuch dinn me start karunga. Hope aap support karenge.
Thank you.
Congratulations for new story
 

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Dil ka Rishta
THe Tale of gud or bad guy.......

by DonMahi

Yeh kahani kalpanik hai iska kisi se koi lena dena nhi hai chahe woh dharm ho ya is samaj ke prani ho. Yadi koi incident ya other things match kare toh yeh sirf coincidence hoga.

Intro:-

Yash singh:- Hamari story ka hero. Iski age 19 se upar hai.

Shekhar singh( fufa ji) -[Age-48] Yah thode strict mizaz aur shant kism ke hai. Strict isiliye kyunki yeh N.C.C me job joh karte hai. Yeh apne job aur ass pass ke log aur family se matlab rakhte hai. Yeh faltu ke kaam me jayda dhyaan nhi dete. Inhe v typical army man ki trah branded daru aur wishki ka shauk hai. Apne betiyon se bahut pyaar karte hai. Apne hero se v lagav rakhte hai.

Pooja singh( buaa) - [Age-44] Yeh thoda gusse wali hai but yash se bahut pyaar karti hai wajah sirf ek hai ki. Inka koi beta nhi hai, Aur Yash ko bahut manti hai. Is chiz se kisi ko problem nhi hai infact buaa ki family me sabhi buaa aur dono bahne bahut pyaar karti hai. Yeh housewife hai.

Kavita didi- [Age-22] yeh padhne me bahut tez hai aur sath me bahut khubsurat bhi. Aisa samjh lo hamare ghar me exception, 16 saal ki umar me hi 12th ke exam de diye the. Inhone MBBS kiya hua hai top college se aur avi kisi lab me apni reasearch kar rahi hai.

Karun didi-[Age-21] yeh thodi nathkaht aur chubuli sawabhav ki hai . Aur bahut shararat karti hai. Khass karke mujhse. Yah v padhne me bahut tez hai. Avi filhal yeh graduation kar rahi hai aur last year me hai.
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Mai abhi buaa ke ghar ke samne khada tha aur meri himmat nhi ho rahi thi door bell bajane ki. Maine waise bataya hua tha ki bahar jaa raha hu but mujhe abb darr lag rha tha kahi buaa mujhse gussa na ho. Maine kaha tha kuch samay lag sakta hai. But mai lagbhag saal bhar ke baad aa raha tha. Woh kisi se sabse jayda pyaar karti hai toh mujhse. Mai waise hi khada tha ki kisi ne gate khola aur mujhe dekh ke turant lipat ke rone lagi. Yeh meri dusri maa yani meri buaa hi thi. Shaam ka samay tha iss samay lagbhag sab ghar par hi the. Buaa ke rone ki awaj sunke sab bahar aa gye aur mujhe dekh ke samjh gye ki buaa kyu ro rahi hai.


Buaa- ( rote hue) tu tu kaha chala gya tha apni maa ko chod ke. Bass itna hi pyaar tha apni iss maa se.


Mai- ( mai buaa ko aksar maa hi kahta hu) maa aapke pass hamesha rahne ke liye aisa kiya tha. Aap aise rona band karo, aap janti ho mujhse aapke aansu nhi dekhe jaate. Aap chahti ho mai fir se chala jau.


Buaa- iss baar jaa ke dikha tere pair tod dungi mai.


Mai- accha maa sorry. Aapka beta ek saal baad aya aur aap lagta hai mujhe bahar hi rakhna chahti ho.


Buaa- ruk ek minute bass. Karuna beta zara pooja ko thaali ko saza ke laa mera beta bahut dino baad ghar aaya hai.


Buaa ki baato se mera dhyaan sab ki traf gya karuna didi aur kavita didi ke aankhon me aansu the. Aur fufa ke chahre par muskan. Lekin kavita didi bahut hi kamjor lag rahi thi aur Karuna didi v waise hi thi. Thodi hi der me buaa ne aarti karke mujhe andar bulaya. Aur wahi puchne lage ek saal tak kaha tha.


Fufa ji- beta tum ek saal kaha the.
Mai- fufa ji sab batata hu. Pahle mai apni dono pyaari bahno se mil lu. Maine kavita didi ko gale lagya aur unka halchal pucha fir karuna didi se mila.


Buaa - haa abb batao kaha the.

Mai- mujhe ek ajib bimari thi usi ka ilaz dund raha tha.


Buaa - kyaa tumhe koi bimari thi aur tumne mujhe bataya nhi????


Haa yeh sach hai maine apni bimari ke baare me buaa aur Karuna didi ko nhi bataya tha sirf fufa ji ki hi malum thi but apna ilaz karane ke liye kavita didi ko batana pada.


Karuna- kyaa bhai tum bimar the aur hame pata hi nhi tha.

Buaa- yeh accha nhi kiya tune, mujhe maa sirf kahne ke liye hi khata hai. Aur rone lagi.


Mai- ( aansu phochte hue) buaa apko maa sirf kahta nhi hu manta hu isiliye toh nhi bataya warna aap pareshan ho jati joh mai kabhi nhi chahta. Aap mujhe sabse jayda pyaari ho, aap janti ho na.


Buaa ne haa me gardan hilaya aur gale laga liya. Thodi der rone diya jisse mann halka ho jaaye. Jab buaa shant hui toh khud se hi poochne lagi.


Buaa- accha abb bata tujhe kyaa hua tha.


Mai - mere se accha aapko kavita didi samjhayengi woh ek doctor hai.


Buaa- yani kavita ko pata tha.


Mai - nhi fufa ji ko v pata tha.


Buaa- ohh accha tab hi toh yeh itne shant the. Ek saal se. Accha aap milo aaj room me fir batati hu. Aisa kahne se fufa ji request wali najar se meri traf dekhne lage.


Mai- buaa maine hi mana kiya tha nhi batane ko.

Buaa - woh sab chod aur mujhe sab bata.

Mai- kavita didi batao.

Kavita- bhai ko ciabinalis ( apne hi imagine karke disease ka naam rakh diya.) naam ki bimari thi. Simple sabdo me kahe toh janwaro jaisa behave karna aur iska ilaz iss duniya me nhi hai. Bass 2 hi ilaz hai iske bandh ke rakho ya fir maar do. Lekin bhai tum thik kaise hue mujhe samjh nhi aa rhaa hai.

Mai- yeh bahut lambi kahani hai. Aap sabko acche se bataunga. Kyaa apko accha nhi laga mai thik hai???


Kavita didi - kaisi baat kar raha hai bhai tu mera jigar ka tukda hai tu janta hai na.


Mai- haa.

Kavita- jaa abb fresh ho ke aa mai nasta lagati hu. Aur aap sabko baad me bhai bata dega. Avi safar karke aya hai. Maa mai bhai ke liye kuch banati hu.

Karuna di bass tabhi se mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi aur unhone jayda kuch nhi pucha. Fir mai room gya dekha room aaj v waisa hi hai. Sach me buaa aur dono dii mujse bahut pyaar karti hai. Aur fir fresh hoke niche aa gya.
Shandar bhai I
 

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Darawna dardnak atit (kuch sach kuch jhut.)


Dekha, didi aur buaa ne itni der me hi bahut kuch bana liya tha.

Mai- aree didi aap itni jaldi inta sabb aur waise b mai itna kaise khaa paunga.

Buaa- chup rah jyade chuu chapad kiya na ek kaan ke niche lagaungi.

Mai- accha maa thik hai nhi kahta. Fir mujhe sabne mil ke thuss thuss ke khilaya bass waha karuna di nhi thi. Maine socha baad me mil lunga.

Buaa- accha abb bata poori baat kaisa raha itne din aur kyaa kiya.

Mai- buaa aap toh janti ho bhai ke gaya hone ke baad se mai tut gya tha. Toh nashe me dubb gya tha.

Buaa - haa.

Mai- fir uske baad woh marpit hua uske baad papa ne yaha bhej diya. Mujhe v iss marpit paar bharosha nhi hua tha. Ki maine ek saath itne aadmi ko maar diya. Magar woh mere andar ke darinde ke jagne ki nishani thi, fir mai yaha aaya. Maine khud me bahut badlaw mahsush kiya lekin woh badlaw acche the toh jayda dhyaan nhi diya. Magar dhed saal pahle( 1.5 yrs) fir wahi huaa maine fir ek saath bahut aadmi ko mara jisme kuch aadmi maare gye. Uske baad mujhe khud se daar lagne laga. Mujhe aisa lagta koi mujhe control kar raha hai mai kuch nhi kar sakta. Ek bebas aadmi jaisa feel karta. Uske baad fir choti choti baati pe chid jana aur marna gusaa karna. Isiliye mai dhirre dhire sabse alag rahne laga apne me mashgul. Fir mera aisa behaviour didi ko khatka aur didi ne apni kasam de ke jaan liya aur unhone iska bahut ilaaz dhunda magar nhi mila. Firse ek baar woh darinda mujpe hawi hua aur maine fir kuch aadmi ko maare. Iss baar mai bahut daar gya itna jayda ki lagne laga ki mai apne chahne walo ko naa mar du. Fir mai mai ek din buaa woh... Woh kahte kahte ruk gya.

Buaa-( rote hue) tune itna Saha aur hame kuch nhi bataya. Yeh tune accha nhi kiya aur mere aage se buaa lipat gyi aur piche se karuna didi woh v saari baate sunn rahi thi.

Karuna- accha aage kyaa hua.

Main- woh mujhe fir khud se aur jayde dar lagne laga isiliye socha mai suicide kar lu.

Sabhi ek saath- kyaa??????.

Kyunki isske baare me sahi me kisi ko nhi pata ha na kavita dii ko na hi fufa ji ko. Fufa ji alag se mujhe dekh rahe the but buaa aur dono didi yeh sunke hi mujse lipat ke rone lagi.

Mai- aree aap log aise ro rhe ho jaise mai sach much hi maar gya.
Buaa ne khich ke ek jhapad mada sala sach me acche se laga.

Buaa - aisa fir kabhi bola toh munh tod dungi tera joh mann me aata hai bolte rahta hai tu.

Mai- accha sorry maa. Aage sunau.

Kavita - haa suna.

Mai- jab maine unn aadmiyon ko maara toh mujhe bahut dar lagne laga aur dara dara sa rahne laga. Magar ek jagah thi jaha mai sukun se rahta tha woh thi Bholenath bhagwan ke mandir me. Mai uss ghtna ke agle hi dinn waha bitha tha aur apne baare me soch raha tha. Usi samay ek baba mile aur kaha "tu joh soch raha waisa kabhi mat karna nhi toh tere sath jitni jindgya juda hai sab khatre me aa jayengi." Maine iss baat par jayda dhyaan nhi diya. Aur ghar aa gya. Fir agle din suicide ka soch ke wahi mandir ke pass me nadi thi waha chala gya aur raste me fir wahi baba mile. Fir se unhone mujse kaha ki "mai kumbh ghum aau aur waise v marne jaa hi raha hu agar thik nhi hua toh baad me kar lena joh mann kare" . Aur woh chale gye. Magar baad me jab unki baat ko gaur se socha aur mujhe yaad aya maine iss baare me toh kisi ko nhi kaha fir unhe kaise malum. Tab uske baad decide kiya kumbh ghumne jaunga. Aur waisa hi kah ke fufa ji nikal gya aur unhe bata diya shayad time lagega. Aap maa joh v samjhi lekin thik 3 din baad se kumbh mela start hone wala tha iss incident ke baad. Mai fir waha 2 din baad pahuch gya. Aur waha sadhu shanto ke saath raha. Aur thik 3 baje jiss din kumbh me snan suru hone wale the. Ussi din kuch sadhu sant uthe aur jaane lage. Maine unse pucha kaha jaa rahe hai toh unhone kaha bhagwan ke darsan karne. Mai v mazak samjh ke ignore kiya. Fir sone ki koshish ki magar nind nhi aayi. fir jab shadu jaane lage toh mai v chal diya. Woh sab jaake snan karne lage nadi me toh mai v gya. Magar jaise hi maine nahaya laga. Ki kuch andar ho rha hai mujhe samjh nhi kyaa. Uske baad mai behosh ho gya. Aur thik ek mahine baad meri aankh khuli magar tabtak mai unn shadhuo ke ashram me tha unhone mera pura dhyaan rakha tha. Aur mere behosh hone ko wajah puchi. Maine sabhi baat bata di aur unhone iska ilaz bataya hai lekin bahut kathin hai. Yeh sunke mai khush ho gya. Aur fir unhone mera ilaz kiya jisme 8-9 mahine se upar lage aur aaj mai aapke samne hu.

Buaa aur dono didi roo rahi thi aur fufa ji v dekh rahe the meri traf nam aankhon se.

Mai- arre aap sab roo rahe ho aur aap sabko toh khush hona chahiye na ki mai sach me thik ho gya hu aur aap sab hai ki roo rahe ho.
Buaa uth me mujhe agle laga liya aur pyaar kiya.

Buaa- kal ham mandir chalenge. Kyuu ji ??

Fufa- haa magar mai soch raha tha mandir me choti si pooja kare le toh accha rahega. Bhagwan ki sukhriya ada karne ke liye.

Buaa - haa ji jaisa aapko thik lage.

Fufa- thik hai fir main intazam karta hu. Tum sab baate karo. Fir phupha ji chale gye.

Mai - buaa kal pooja ke baad ghar chale. Bahut saalo se kisi se baat nhi kiya hai.

Buaa- haa yeh sahi kaha tune.

Mai- buaa ghar me maine 4 salo se kisi se acche se baat nhi kiya pata nhi kyaa sochte honge mere baare me.

Buaa- kyu kon kyaa sochega aur sabko sab malum hai tu aisa kyu bana aur mujhe jaha tak pata hai sab maaf kar denge. Aur tu aab bhi pita ya chod diya.

Mai- nhi buaa abb mai ek dam fit aur koi buri adat nhi hai. Aur mai subah jaldi uth v jata hu.

Buaa- accha toh mera beta poora sudhar gya hai. Chalo acchi baat hai hame unn baba ka sukhriya v aada karna chahiye jinhone tujhe sahi rasta dikhaya.

Mai- haa jab v mai sochta hu. Mujhe ajib lagta hai. Aur pata hai buaa mai woh chahra kabhi bhul nhi sakta.

Buaa- chal tab toh accha hai. Tum sab baate karo mai khaane ki tayari karti hu.

Mai- didi aap kaisi ho.

Kavita- aab mai bahut acchi ho gyi hu tu aa gya yahi kafi hai.

Mai- aur aap Karuna dii.

Karuna- mera gudda aa gya khelne ke liye. Abb mai thik hu. Lekin bhai ek wada karo aaj ke baad koi v taklif hogi toh hamse nhi chupaoge.

Main- par aisa kyu dii?????

Karuna- lagta hai tu mujhe apna nhi samjhta.

Mai- aap yeh kya bol rahi ho dii ?? Aap ek chote se Wade ke liye aisa bol rahi ho. Thik hai pakka promise aaj ke baad aapse kuch nhi chupaonga.

Karuna- that's like my brooo...
Abb kavita aur Karuna dii ke chahre par chamak aa gyi thi.

Mai- didi ham bahar chale sabke liye gifts le lete hai aur aap dono v shopping kar lena.



Dosto plzz review the contents. Isse pata lagta hai kaha kami aur kya aur badhana hai cotent me.
जबरदस्त update bhai behtrin bhai
 

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Mai abhi buaa ke ghar ke samne khada tha aur meri himmat nhi ho rahi thi door bell bajane ki. Maine waise bataya hua tha ki bahar jaa raha hu but mujhe abb darr lag rha tha kahi buaa mujhse gussa na ho. Maine kaha tha kuch samay lag sakta hai. But mai lagbhag saal bhar ke baad aa raha tha. Woh kisi se sabse jayda pyaar karti hai toh mujhse. Mai waise hi khada tha ki kisi ne gate khola aur mujhe dekh ke turant lipat ke rone lagi. Yeh meri dusri maa yani meri buaa hi thi. Shaam ka samay tha iss samay lagbhag sab ghar par hi the. Buaa ke rone ki awaj sunke sab bahar aa gye aur mujhe dekh ke samjh gye ki buaa kyu ro rahi hai.


Buaa- ( rote hue) tu tu kaha chala gya tha apni maa ko chod ke. Bass itna hi pyaar tha apni iss maa se.


Mai- ( mai buaa ko aksar maa hi kahta hu) maa aapke pass hamesha rahne ke liye aisa kiya tha. Aap aise rona band karo, aap janti ho mujhse aapke aansu nhi dekhe jaate. Aap chahti ho mai fir se chala jau.


Buaa- iss baar jaa ke dikha tere pair tod dungi mai.


Mai- accha maa sorry. Aapka beta ek saal baad aya aur aap lagta hai mujhe bahar hi rakhna chahti ho.


Buaa- ruk ek minute bass. Karuna beta zara pooja ko thaali ko saza ke laa mera beta bahut dino baad ghar aaya hai.


Buaa ki baato se mera dhyaan sab ki traf gya karuna didi aur kavita didi ke aankhon me aansu the. Aur fufa ke chahre par muskan. Lekin kavita didi bahut hi kamjor lag rahi thi aur Karuna didi v waise hi thi. Thodi hi der me buaa ne aarti karke mujhe andar bulaya. Aur wahi puchne lage ek saal tak kaha tha.


Fufa ji- beta tum ek saal kaha the.
Mai- fufa ji sab batata hu. Pahle mai apni dono pyaari bahno se mil lu. Maine kavita didi ko gale lagya aur unka halchal pucha fir karuna didi se mila.


Buaa - haa abb batao kaha the.

Mai- mujhe ek ajib bimari thi usi ka ilaz dund raha tha.


Buaa - kyaa tumhe koi bimari thi aur tumne mujhe bataya nhi????


Haa yeh sach hai maine apni bimari ke baare me buaa aur Karuna didi ko nhi bataya tha sirf fufa ji ki hi malum thi but apna ilaz karane ke liye kavita didi ko batana pada.


Karuna- kyaa bhai tum bimar the aur hame pata hi nhi tha.

Buaa- yeh accha nhi kiya tune, mujhe maa sirf kahne ke liye hi khata hai. Aur rone lagi.


Mai- ( aansu phochte hue) buaa apko maa sirf kahta nhi hu manta hu isiliye toh nhi bataya warna aap pareshan ho jati joh mai kabhi nhi chahta. Aap mujhe sabse jayda pyaari ho, aap janti ho na.


Buaa ne haa me gardan hilaya aur gale laga liya. Thodi der rone diya jisse mann halka ho jaaye. Jab buaa shant hui toh khud se hi poochne lagi.


Buaa- accha abb bata tujhe kyaa hua tha.


Mai - mere se accha aapko kavita didi samjhayengi woh ek doctor hai.


Buaa- yani kavita ko pata tha.


Mai - nhi fufa ji ko v pata tha.


Buaa- ohh accha tab hi toh yeh itne shant the. Ek saal se. Accha aap milo aaj room me fir batati hu. Aisa kahne se fufa ji request wali najar se meri traf dekhne lage.


Mai- buaa maine hi mana kiya tha nhi batane ko.

Buaa - woh sab chod aur mujhe sab bata.

Mai- kavita didi batao.

Kavita- bhai ko ciabinalis ( apne hi imagine karke disease ka naam rakh diya.) naam ki bimari thi. Simple sabdo me kahe toh janwaro jaisa behave karna aur iska ilaz iss duniya me nhi hai. Bass 2 hi ilaz hai iske bandh ke rakho ya fir maar do. Lekin bhai tum thik kaise hue mujhe samjh nhi aa rhaa hai.

Mai- yeh bahut lambi kahani hai. Aap sabko acche se bataunga. Kyaa apko accha nhi laga mai thik hai???


Kavita didi - kaisi baat kar raha hai bhai tu mera jigar ka tukda hai tu janta hai na.


Mai- haa.

Kavita- jaa abb fresh ho ke aa mai nasta lagati hu. Aur aap sabko baad me bhai bata dega. Avi safar karke aya hai. Maa mai bhai ke liye kuch banati hu.

Karuna di bass tabhi se mujhe dekhe jaa rahi thi aur unhone jayda kuch nhi pucha. Fir mai room gya dekha room aaj v waisa hi hai. Sach me buaa aur dono dii mujse bahut pyaar karti hai. Aur fir fresh hoke niche aa gya.
Nice update
 

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Sorry frnds update late se aa raha hai. 2 din se fever hai. Aaj thoda thik hua hai kal update deta hu.
Koi baat nahi take care
 
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