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thanks a lot bro and keep supportingGood story mega update padh kar maja aagaya
thanks a lot bro and keep supportingGood story mega update padh kar maja aagaya
dhannywaad shukriya bhaiNice and superb update.....
dhannywaad shukriya bhai and keep supportingNice and beautiful aur wonderful story
bhai ..story complete hogi iski guarantee hai..but..aage kya likhunga iske baare me kuch socha nahiSiraj Bhai aapki next story devil mai banane ki koshish Karo na waise bhi aapki 2 story complete hai ye 3rd hai ye bhi complete ho jayegi uske baad aap ki ichha ho toh devil par story likh sakte hai
poll mujhe pasand nahi..aur readers ke sujhaw kahani ko galat disha me mod deta hain..aur kahani adhuri reh jaati hai...readers ko khali sex chahye jyada female cerroctor chahye wo mujhse nahi hoga..kyunki mujhe apni kahani ko ek sukhad ant dena hai...dhannywaadAap ek poll daal Dena ki reader ko kaise story chahiye incest adultery romance fantasy jo bhi reader jisko jayada support karenge aap uspe story likhna
black bhai devil kahaniya likhne ke expert hain..Bhai Maine devil par black writer ki story padhi hai mujhe bahut pasand aayi lekin ek story ke aalwa baki bich Mai hi unhone 3 story ek sath chod Diya woh 3 no story incomplete hai
thanks man but mera devil kahaniya likhne ka filhaal koi irada nahi haiWaise ye sirf mera suggession hai baki likhna ya nahi likhna aapki marji hai
bhai...jab devil ko koi maar nahi sakta to sabhi jaante hain hero marega nahi..usme maza nahi aayega...maza to tab hai jab dil dhadke ki aage kya hoga...dhannywaadAap jis tarah se story likhate ho toh agar devil par likhage toh usme bhi suspense hoga aur devil ko koi maar nahi sakta warna aade se jyada story Mai hero ke villain ke jaal mai fasne par reader ka dhyan isme lagta hai ki hero Bach. Payega ki nahi agar woh devil ho toh woh apni pariwar ke sath us story ki heroine ko musibat se fasne se pahle hi bacha leta hai
dhannywaad shukriya bhai...and keep supportingnice story bhai keep going waiting for next