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Dildariyan ( completed )
Hello friends main( ETERTAINER JATT )jahan naya hun aaj tak kabhi story likhne k bare mein socha v nahi Lekin aaj main apni pehli story likhne ja raha hun agar mujhse koi galti ho to apna dost samj kar maaf kardena aur agli baar acha likhne k liye apni advice jaroor dena yeh story puri tarah se kalpanik hai..
Ye story do families k aas pass ghumti hai
Sinha family:
(1):Mr.raghuveer sinha: yeh is parivar ke mukhiya hain .present age 48 years.inhone apni life mein bahut mehnat ki aur is ke balbute ek bahut badi company ke malik hain. apne bete se bahut pyar karte hain .toh kul milakar ek khusnaseeb insan hain jinke pass paisa hai aur ek pyara sa parivar hai...
(2):Mrs.sunidhi sinha: present age 46 years .. raghuveer ki wife hain.kafi padhi hain aur ek bade pariwar ki beti hain.inhone apne pati ka Bahut sath diya business mein.Lekin aaj kal ghar par hi rehti hain kionk apne bete se jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hain isliye naukaron ki fauj hone ke bawjud apne bete ki har choti badi jarurat ka khyal khud rakhti hain....
(3)Mr.Raj sinha : present age 20 years..inke bare mein kya btaun ye khud aj tak apne aap ko samj nahi paya ..is ek insaan mein gussa pyar gum hasi rona har ek emotion ko kut kut kar bhara hai.isse teen chijon se sabse jyada lagaav hai parents,music aur gym.raj ki height 6'1" rang gora ankhein neeli...jayada gym mein rehne ki bajah se achi khasi body hai six pack abs bhi hain..laikin insab se uper iske chehre pe ek masoomiyat hai Jo ghayal kar dene wali hai..study mein thik thak hai....amir hone ke bavjood kisi mehngi cheej ka shonk nahi hai sirf ek guitar hi hai Jo hamesha sath rakhta hai...
{Ab baari hai Agarwal}
(1)Mr.mohit agarwal:
present age 49 years.ye bhi raghuveer ki trah ek kamzab businessman hai.iski ek beti hai jisse yeh behad pyar krta hai...raghuveer iska dost hai Lekin yeh dono ek dusre ke liye bhai se bhi badhkar hain.
(2):Mrs.geeta agarwal: present age 46 years. Inka subah bohut shant kisam ka hai .yeh bhi apni beti se behad pyar karti hain Lekin raj ko apna beta samjti hain sayad is karn inki beti inse jyada apne papa ke karib hai.
(3):Miss Priya agarwal: present age 20 years.yeh raj se sirf 1 month choti hai.priya ki height 5'6" rang dhudh jaisa gora..moti ankhein..pink lips..surahidar gardan..perfect figure kulmilakar bala ki khubsurat hai...Lekin mene is jesi nalchadhi gusse wali aur ghumandi ladki nahi Dekhi...padne me bohut hosiyar hai ...ladke iske irad girad bhi nahi ate kionk bodyguard sath rakhti hai kisi ko bhaw nahi deti.
Toh yeh di main characters ki introduction thodi lengthy hai Lekin baad mein problem na ho isliye baaki characters baad mein atte jayenge pehla update thodi der baad dunga apne sujabh jaroor dena abhi naya hun....
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Update 1
Raghuveer aur mohit ek dusre ke bhai ki trah hain in dono ke pita business partner the unhone apne bachon ko ek hi school mein dala sath padte huye dono mein gehri dosti huyi dono mein pyar itna jyada tha k dono ne shadi v ek hi mandap pe ki shaadi k ek saal baad raghuveer k ghar Raj ka janam huya aur usse lagbhag 1-1.5 mahine k baad mohit ki patni Geeta ne Priya ko janam diya ..dono parivar bahut khus the unhe laga k unke bache v unki dosti ko ek alag mukam par le jayenge par unka yeh sochna kitna sach hoga yeh to ane wala waqt hi batayega..
Ye story do families k aas pass ghumti hai
Sinha family:
(1):Mr.raghuveer sinha: yeh is parivar ke mukhiya hain .present age 48 years.inhone apni life mein bahut mehnat ki aur is ke balbute ek bahut badi company ke malik hain. apne bete se bahut pyar karte hain .toh kul milakar ek khusnaseeb insan hain jinke pass paisa hai aur ek pyara sa parivar hai...
(2):Mrs.sunidhi sinha: present age 46 years .. raghuveer ki wife hain.kafi padhi hain aur ek bade pariwar ki beti hain.inhone apne pati ka Bahut sath diya business mein.Lekin aaj kal ghar par hi rehti hain kionk apne bete se jaan se bhi jyada pyar karti hain isliye naukaron ki fauj hone ke bawjud apne bete ki har choti badi jarurat ka khyal khud rakhti hain....
(3)Mr.Raj sinha : present age 20 years..inke bare mein kya btaun ye khud aj tak apne aap ko samj nahi paya ..is ek insaan mein gussa pyar gum hasi rona har ek emotion ko kut kut kar bhara hai.isse teen chijon se sabse jyada lagaav hai parents,music aur gym.raj ki height 6'1" rang gora ankhein neeli...jayada gym mein rehne ki bajah se achi khasi body hai six pack abs bhi hain..laikin insab se uper iske chehre pe ek masoomiyat hai Jo ghayal kar dene wali hai..study mein thik thak hai....amir hone ke bavjood kisi mehngi cheej ka shonk nahi hai sirf ek guitar hi hai Jo hamesha sath rakhta hai...
{Ab baari hai Agarwal}
(1)Mr.mohit agarwal:
present age 49 years.ye bhi raghuveer ki trah ek kamzab businessman hai.iski ek beti hai jisse yeh behad pyar krta hai...raghuveer iska dost hai Lekin yeh dono ek dusre ke liye bhai se bhi badhkar hain.
(2):Mrs.geeta agarwal: present age 46 years. Inka subah bohut shant kisam ka hai .yeh bhi apni beti se behad pyar karti hain Lekin raj ko apna beta samjti hain sayad is karn inki beti inse jyada apne papa ke karib hai.
(3):Miss Priya agarwal: present age 20 years.yeh raj se sirf 1 month choti hai.priya ki height 5'6" rang dhudh jaisa gora..moti ankhein..pink lips..surahidar gardan..perfect figure kulmilakar bala ki khubsurat hai...Lekin mene is jesi nalchadhi gusse wali aur ghumandi ladki nahi Dekhi...padne me bohut hosiyar hai ...ladke iske irad girad bhi nahi ate kionk bodyguard sath rakhti hai kisi ko bhaw nahi deti.
Toh yeh di main characters ki introduction thodi lengthy hai Lekin baad mein problem na ho isliye baaki characters baad mein atte jayenge pehla update thodi der baad dunga apne sujabh jaroor dena abhi naya hun....
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Update 1
Raghuveer aur mohit ek dusre ke bhai ki trah hain in dono ke pita business partner the unhone apne bachon ko ek hi school mein dala sath padte huye dono mein gehri dosti huyi dono mein pyar itna jyada tha k dono ne shadi v ek hi mandap pe ki shaadi k ek saal baad raghuveer k ghar Raj ka janam huya aur usse lagbhag 1-1.5 mahine k baad mohit ki patni Geeta ne Priya ko janam diya ..dono parivar bahut khus the unhe laga k unke bache v unki dosti ko ek alag mukam par le jayenge par unka yeh sochna kitna sach hoga yeh to ane wala waqt hi batayega..
Abhi bachon ne puri tarah hos v nahi sambhala tha k Raghuveer ko business k liye UK Jana pada ..WO apne pariwar ko lekar wahan chala gaya kionk mohit ka ghar uske ghar ki bagal mein tha to mohit aksar ja kar dekh ata tha vese saf safai k liye naukar rakhe huye the
Waqt beet raha tha bache bade ho gaye ..aksar mohit aur uski patni UK jakar unse milte the Geeta Raj ko bahut pyar karti thi wo use apna hi beta samjti thi or aksar apne ghar mein usi ki batein karti rehti thi..Priya ko najane kion aisa lagta k Raj usse uski mummy ko cheen lega ..wo use man hi man apna sabse bada dushman samjne lagi thi..najane age chal kar kya hoga yeh to waqt k garabh mein chipa hai..
Dusri taraf Raj kafi hasmukh aur cute sa tha wo hamesha apne chehre pe ek pyari si muskan liye gumta tha ..WO kafi mota tha aur uske dost usse motu kaha karte the..Lekin WO kabhi bura nahi manta tha...
Waqt beet ta gaya aur Raghuveer ka business v UK mein settle ho gaya tha...us sal Raj ke 8th k exam hone wale the to unhone socha k exam k baad wo wapis India laut jayenge..usne ye khabar apne pariwar ko aur Mohit ko di sab bahut khus the sabse jyada Raj khus tha kionk usne kabhi apna ghar nahi dekha tha isliye wo kafi jyada exited tha..
Par ek sakhs esa v tha jise ye nahi pata tha k wo khus ho jan dukhi aur wo thi Priya ...ek taraf wo khus thi uncle aunty a rahe hain jine wo kafi pyar karti thi dusri taraf uska sabse bada dusman Raj isliye wo thodi gusse me thi aur udaas v..fir usne socha k akhir yeh uska desh hai dekh legi us English murge ko...
Akhir kar wo din a hi gaya jiska sabko besabri she intzar tha Raj k exam khatm ho chuke the aur unke India Jane ki tyari v ho chuki thi...
Jis din unhe wahan pahunchna tha to Mohit aur Geeta behad khus the wo airport pahunch chuke the unhe receive karne k liye ...jaise hi unko airport se niklte dekha to Geeta ki ankhon me khusi k mare ansoo a gaye wo bhagti huyi raj k gale lag gayi ye dekh kar Sunidhi ki ankhen bhi bhar ayi aur Mohit aur Raghuveer k chehre pe muskan a gayi Sab ek dusre se mile aur itne mein Sunidhi boli
Sunidhi: Geeta Priya nahi ayi kahin hamse naraj to nahi.
Geeta:are kaisi baatein karti ho wo mujhse naraz ho sakti hai laikin tumse kabhi nahi.
Sunidhi: fir wo ayi kion nahi.
Geeta: are wo apne doston k sath trip par gayi huyi hai kus din bad lautegi.Maine toh use kaha tha rukne ko par usne kaha hai k ake mil legi uska program pehle se fix tha
Sunidhi: are yeh to ashi bat hai ghum fir legi.
Yeh Sab baten karte huye sab ghar pahunch gaye driver ne unsab ko utar kar gadi garage ki aur badha di Raj jese utra toh wo apne ghar ko dekhta hi reh gaya ek alishan bangla tha ..main gate ke andar guste hi ek bada sa garden tha ek taraf pool bana huya tha aur bichkar mein ek alisan do manija mahal jaisa tha...jaisa hi wo ander ghusa to ek wada sa haal ek kitchen chaar rooms attach bathrooms 1st floor v ground floor jaisa hi tha ghar dekhne k baad Raj ko uska kamra dikhaya gaya Jo uper wale floor par tha uske mummy daddy ka kamra neeche ....Raj to kafi Thak gaya tha wo jaker apne kamre mein so gaya...
Mohit aur uski patni v sham ko ane ka bol kar chale gaye...
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