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Raj Mohit k ghar se nikal kar apne ghar ki taraf jane laga wo raste mein soch raha tha k uncle aunty usko kitna pyar karte hain...uska kitna khyal rakhte hain...yeh sab sochte hue wo apne ghar a gaya...ander uski mummy usi ka intzar kar rahi thi...wo Raj ko dekhte hi boli
Sunidhi: agaya beta
Raj: han mummy aap abhi tak soye nahi..
Sunidhi: mujhe kaise neend ati apne bache ko dekhe bina...
Raj: are mummy aap meri fikar mat kiya karo ab main bada ho gaya hun..
Sunidhi: mujhe to pata hi nahi tha k mera RAJU bada ho gaya hai...
Raj: aur nahi to kya ab main 9th mein ho gaya hun..
Sunidhi: are han sach beta tumhare papa ne tumhara admission krwa diya hai Priya k school mein Tum munday ko join kar Lena..
Raj: sach mummy I love you ...apko pata hai main bahut excited hun main apne naye school mein jaunga naye naye friend bnaunga..
Sunidhi: han beta jaroor aur vese v Priya hai na tumhare sath mujhe pata hai wo tume koi problem nahi hone degi bahut pyari bachi hai ...
Raj: mummy Priya sach mein meri dost banegi kya?
Sunidhi: are kion nahi banegi akhir tum dono k daddy v toh friend cum bhai hai na
Raj: aisa jaroori to nahi na k agar hamare daddy dost hai to hum v ban jayenge..
Sunidhi: beta isme itni preshan hone wali kya baat hai..mujhe Priya par pura bharosa hai...wo tumhara sath jaroor degi...
Raj: kya wo sachme itni achi hai..
Sunidhi: han baba ab jao aur so jao kitni rat ho gai hai...
Raj: ji mummy good night
Sunidhi: are han sach beta yeh tum guitar kahan se laye( sunidhi poochna to pehle hi chahti thi par raj ne ate hi use baton mein uljha liya)
Raj ne use puri baat bata di Sunidhi apne bete k prati Mohit aur Geeta ka pyar dekh kar bahut khus thi..
Sunidhi: ok beta ab so jao good night beta and sweet dreams.
Itna bol kar sunidhi ne raj ko gale lgaya or dono apne apne room ki taraf chal diye...
Raj ne apne kamre mein pahunch kar darwaja band kiya aur bathroom mein ja kar shower le ke bahar aya usne ek loose sa kurta pajama uthaya aur pehan kar bistar par lait gaya...dopehar ko kafi sone k karn use neend to nahi a rahi thi is liye wo aj pure din ki ghatnaon k bare mein soch raha tha...use kafi khusi thi k sab use kitna pyar karte hain...uski kitni dekhwal karte hain...itne mein use apni guitar ki yaad a gayi
Raj bed se utha aur usne apni guitar uthai usne guitar ko uske kit se nikala aur dhyan se dekhne laga use laga k uski guitar sach mein bohut pyari hai..usne socha kion na ek baad Baja k dekhun..itna soch kar wo guitar bjane laga ya yeh kahiye k uski maa Behan eik karne laga kionk use ata jata to kuch tha nahi to bas aise hi sir khpane k baad usne guitar ko wapis apni jagah rakh diya..aur fir se apne bed par lait gaya
Par neend ka abhi bhi koi pata thikana nahi tha...to wo apne ane wale dino k bare mein sochne laga...wo khus v tha aur nervous v...uski soch baar baar bus ek hi jagah par ake atak jati thi..Priya...
Wo soch raha tha k kya mummy ki bat sach hai...kya Priya meri dost banegi...
kya wo mera sath degi is nayi jagah mein...
Par wo bar bar apne bicharon ko jhatk deta aur kus aur sochne lgta ....par wo kar v kya Sakta tha sirf sochne k ilawa kionk j swaal sirf Priya se Milne k baad hi khatam hote..
Par aj tak wo Priya se mila nahi tha ya to usne sirf uske bare mein apne parents se suna tha ya fir uski kus pics dekhi thi....
Par use apni mummy ke Priya k prati bichar or uski pics mein uska cute sa chehra yad karne par Priya use ek behad achi ladki lag rahi thi ...use kuch kuch viswash jaroor ho gaya tha k Priya achi ladki hogi...
Khair usne apne man me se Priya k bicharon ko nikal diya ...
Aur baki ki batein sochne laga... Jaise uske classmates kaise honge uske teachers jyada strict to nahi honge ..
Aur uska naya school kaisa hoga kya usse koi dosti karna pasand karega ya nahi...aisi kai batein sochte hue akhir kar Raj neend k agosh mein kho gaya...
Ab ane wale dino mein kya hoga j to sirf waqt hi btayega ...khair ab yeh kahani dhire dhire Patri par a jayegi to plz dosto mera sath dete rehna ap logon k idea
Raj Mohit k ghar se nikal kar apne ghar ki taraf jane laga wo raste mein soch raha tha k uncle aunty usko kitna pyar karte hain...uska kitna khyal rakhte hain...yeh sab sochte hue wo apne ghar a gaya...ander uski mummy usi ka intzar kar rahi thi...wo Raj ko dekhte hi boli
Sunidhi: agaya beta
Raj: han mummy aap abhi tak soye nahi..
Sunidhi: mujhe kaise neend ati apne bache ko dekhe bina...
Raj: are mummy aap meri fikar mat kiya karo ab main bada ho gaya hun..
Sunidhi: mujhe to pata hi nahi tha k mera RAJU bada ho gaya hai...
Raj: aur nahi to kya ab main 9th mein ho gaya hun..
Sunidhi: are han sach beta tumhare papa ne tumhara admission krwa diya hai Priya k school mein Tum munday ko join kar Lena..
Raj: sach mummy I love you ...apko pata hai main bahut excited hun main apne naye school mein jaunga naye naye friend bnaunga..
Sunidhi: han beta jaroor aur vese v Priya hai na tumhare sath mujhe pata hai wo tume koi problem nahi hone degi bahut pyari bachi hai ...
Raj: mummy Priya sach mein meri dost banegi kya?
Sunidhi: are kion nahi banegi akhir tum dono k daddy v toh friend cum bhai hai na
Raj: aisa jaroori to nahi na k agar hamare daddy dost hai to hum v ban jayenge..
Sunidhi: beta isme itni preshan hone wali kya baat hai..mujhe Priya par pura bharosa hai...wo tumhara sath jaroor degi...
Raj: kya wo sachme itni achi hai..
Sunidhi: han baba ab jao aur so jao kitni rat ho gai hai...
Raj: ji mummy good night
Sunidhi: are han sach beta yeh tum guitar kahan se laye( sunidhi poochna to pehle hi chahti thi par raj ne ate hi use baton mein uljha liya)
Raj ne use puri baat bata di Sunidhi apne bete k prati Mohit aur Geeta ka pyar dekh kar bahut khus thi..
Sunidhi: ok beta ab so jao good night beta and sweet dreams.
Itna bol kar sunidhi ne raj ko gale lgaya or dono apne apne room ki taraf chal diye...
Raj ne apne kamre mein pahunch kar darwaja band kiya aur bathroom mein ja kar shower le ke bahar aya usne ek loose sa kurta pajama uthaya aur pehan kar bistar par lait gaya...dopehar ko kafi sone k karn use neend to nahi a rahi thi is liye wo aj pure din ki ghatnaon k bare mein soch raha tha...use kafi khusi thi k sab use kitna pyar karte hain...uski kitni dekhwal karte hain...itne mein use apni guitar ki yaad a gayi
Raj bed se utha aur usne apni guitar uthai usne guitar ko uske kit se nikala aur dhyan se dekhne laga use laga k uski guitar sach mein bohut pyari hai..usne socha kion na ek baad Baja k dekhun..itna soch kar wo guitar bjane laga ya yeh kahiye k uski maa Behan eik karne laga kionk use ata jata to kuch tha nahi to bas aise hi sir khpane k baad usne guitar ko wapis apni jagah rakh diya..aur fir se apne bed par lait gaya
Par neend ka abhi bhi koi pata thikana nahi tha...to wo apne ane wale dino k bare mein sochne laga...wo khus v tha aur nervous v...uski soch baar baar bus ek hi jagah par ake atak jati thi..Priya...
Wo soch raha tha k kya mummy ki bat sach hai...kya Priya meri dost banegi...
kya wo mera sath degi is nayi jagah mein...
Par wo bar bar apne bicharon ko jhatk deta aur kus aur sochne lgta ....par wo kar v kya Sakta tha sirf sochne k ilawa kionk j swaal sirf Priya se Milne k baad hi khatam hote..
Par aj tak wo Priya se mila nahi tha ya to usne sirf uske bare mein apne parents se suna tha ya fir uski kus pics dekhi thi....
Par use apni mummy ke Priya k prati bichar or uski pics mein uska cute sa chehra yad karne par Priya use ek behad achi ladki lag rahi thi ...use kuch kuch viswash jaroor ho gaya tha k Priya achi ladki hogi...
Khair usne apne man me se Priya k bicharon ko nikal diya ...
Aur baki ki batein sochne laga... Jaise uske classmates kaise honge uske teachers jyada strict to nahi honge ..
Aur uska naya school kaisa hoga kya usse koi dosti karna pasand karega ya nahi...aisi kai batein sochte hue akhir kar Raj neend k agosh mein kho gaya...
Ab ane wale dino mein kya hoga j to sirf waqt hi btayega ...khair ab yeh kahani dhire dhire Patri par a jayegi to plz dosto mera sath dete rehna ap logon k idea
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Update 5
Sunday ka din tha subah 5:00 baje Raj ke room ke door pr knock huya toh Raj ki neend ekdum khul gayi wo ekdum se utha aur apni adh khuli akhon ko maslta huya gate ki taraf gaya...Jaise hi usne gate khola to samne uski mummy khadi thi..
Apni mummy ko dekh kar usne turant unke pair chuye aur good morning wish kiya ....
Raj : mummy good morning
Sunidhi: good Morning beta..
Raj: mummy itni jaldi kion utha diya kitni achi neend a rahi thi...
Sunidhi: itni bhi jaldi nahi hai...pichle 5 minute se door peet rahi hun tu hai k sunta hi nahi aur door ander se lock kion karta hai...
Raj: sorry mummy wo main age se nahi karunga...
Sunidhi: chalo koi baat nahi ab jaldi se brush wagerha kar k niche a jao tumhare papa tumhara wait kar rahe hain....
Raj: kion mummy itni subah papa ko kya kam hai mujhse thoda so lene do na...
Sunidhi: beta dekho tumhare papa kafi time se tumhara wait kar rahe hain jaldi se niche a jao ab...
Abhi raj kuch bolne k liye munh khol hi raha tha k turant Sunidhi bol padi...
Sunidhi: no discussion ...jaldi fresh ho jao aur apna track suit daal kar neeche a jao...come on hurry up..
Yeh keh kar Sunidhi to chali gayi par uska track suit k bare mein bolna Raj ko samj nahi a raha tha par use jaldi hi samj mein a gaya k usko aj papa k sath morning walk k liye jana padega ...ye sochte hi Raj ka hamesha khila rehne wala chehra kisi tute hue phool ki tarah murjha gaya...
Par bechara kar v kya sakta tha jana toh padega hi papa ne jo kaha tha...iska yeh matlab bilkul v nahi tha k wo Raghuveer se darta tha bas wo apne papa ki izzat hi itni karta tha k unki koi baat nahi talta tha...
Akhir kar apne subah k jaroori kam karke Raj neeche a gya samne uske papa mummy aur Mohit baithe the...Raj ke chehre par aik jhuthi smile thi...jise Sunidhi dekhte hi samjh gayi par use pata tha k isme uske bete ka fayda hi hai to wo kus nahi boli...Raj ne apne uncle aur papa k pair chuye aur morning wish kiya...unhone v usse ashirwad diya aur fir teeno chal pade park ki aur
Raghuveer aur Mohit age age jogging kar rahe aur hamara hero Raj v jogging hi kar raha tha...par usko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise koi bade pait wala constable kisi tez tarar criminal ka pure sehar mein picha karne k baad haar maan chuka ho...wo kisi kachuye ki tarah in dono k piche reng raha tha...
Kafi time tak Raj ki band bjane k baad akhir kar teeno ghar laut hi aye Mohit apne ghar chal diya aur Raj aur uske papa apne ghar ki taraf...
Raj jaise taise ghar pahunch gaya tha hall mein ghuste hi wo wahin sofe par dher ho gaya aur jor se chillaya
Raj: mummyyyyyyyyyy
Raj ki awaj sun kar Sunidhi gabhra gayi aur apne room se daudti huyi hall mein a gayi...
Wo Raj ke pass ja kar baith gayi aur uske sir par hath phirane lagi aur pucha...
Sunidhi: kya hua beta aise kion chilla rahe ho koi chot to nahi lag gayi kahin...
Raj kush bol pata is se pehle hi uske papa ne sari ramayan suna di k kaise jogging k dauran Raj ki yeh halat ho gayi....
Sunidhi ko yeh sun kar kuch tasali toh huyi par maa ka dil toh hota hi aisa hai k apne bache ka chota sa dard dekh kar hi uska dil ro uthta hai...sayad isi ka hi nateeza tha k Jo kuch time pehle soch rahi thi k yeh sab uske bache ki bhalai ke liye hai wo sab kus bhool kar apne pati par hi kud padi...
Sunidhi: are apko samj nahi ata k bache k sath itna jyada sakhti k sath pesh nahi ana chahiye...
Raghuveer: are bhai main konsa hilter hun mera v beta hai yeh main v isse pyar karta hun main toh isi liye ise lekar gaya tha kionk iska weight badhta ja raha hai pait nikal raha hai mota ho gaya to koi ladki v nahi pategi isse...
Sunidhi: are aise kaise baat kar rahe hain ap...main apne bete ke liye ladkion ki line laga doongi....yeh Jo apke croron rupey bankon mein pade sad rahe hain....ye jhad pe lgane hain kya
Raj apne parents ko kafi time se dekh raha tha to bola .
Raj: mummy papa ki is me kya galti hai aur ap plz mere liye pani le ayein....aur mere pairon mein v bahut darad hai....
Yeh sun kar Sunidhi kitchen mein chali gayi..to Raj ke papa uske pass baith gaye...
Raghuveer: thanks beta mujhe bacha liya nahi to tumhari mummy mujhe sandwich ki trah toast kar deti...
Yeh sun kar Raj dard k bawjood v Hans pada ...Raghuveer ne filhal wahan se niklme mein hi bhlai samji...
Itne mein Sunidhi kitchen mein se pani ka gilas le kar ayi.
Sunidhi: beta yeh lo pani pi lo aur apne bedroom mein jao main tumhare liye pain killer le kar ati hun...
Raj ne pani pi liya aur apne room ki taraf chal pada uski halat itni khrab thi k wo aram se chal v nahi pa raha tha par wo Jaise taise apne room mein pahunch hi gaya aur bed par lait gaya thodi der bad uski mummy ayi...Raj ne ab ki bar gate lock nahi kiya tha ...
Sunidhi ne raj ko tablet di aur wo uske pair dawane lagi Raj ne bahut mana kiya par Sunidhi nahi mani aur uske pairon ko dabati rahi ....Raj ko kafi aram mil raha tha isliye wo gehri neend mein chala gaya ...
Sham ko 4 baje uski ankh khuli usne dekha k uski mummy abhi bhi uske pas baithi hai to wo uth kar baith gaya Sunidhi ne dekha k raj uth gaya hai
Sunidhi: uth gaya beta ab kaisa hai tumhara pain ...
Raj: abhi kafi acha feel kar raha hun ...
Sunidhi: chal tu aram kar main Naha kar ati hun subah se tere pass hi baithi hun...
Raj :OK
Abhi Sunidhi ko gaye 10-15 minute hi huye the k Raj k door par knock hua...
Raj: come in door khula hi hai.
Gate khula to raj ne dekha k samne Geeta khadi thi.
Geeta : kaise ho beta ab kus aram hai ..
Raj: han aunty ab better hai ....ap btao kaisi hain..
Geeta: main to ekdum thik hun beta
Raj : apko kaise pata chala meri halt ka...
Geeta : wo aj jab tumhe Milne ayi to tum so rahe the aur Sunidhi ne mujhe bataya tumhare bare mein...main kafi time baithi rahi par mujhe jana pada kionk aj Priya ko ana tha to....
Raj: to kaisi rahi uski trip....
Geeta: pata nahi agar ghar ayegi tabhi to pata chalega...
Raj: kion ap to keh rahi thin k wo ane wali thi aj
Geeta: han par ayi nahi uska phone aya tha k wo aj apni friend Sonia k ghar ruke gi ....aur kal seedha school se hi ghar ayegi....Maine use bahut kaha k ghar a jaye aur tum logon se mil le par usne kaha k kal ko hi mil lungi....
Raj: chalo aunty koi baat nahi kal ko school mein hi mil lunga ....
Geeta: Maine v usse bata diya hai k tum kal ko school a rahe ho....
Raj: to fir kya boli wo....
Geeta: usne bola hai k koi baat nahi bhej dena main smbhal lungi use...
Raj gehri soch mein dub gaya k mummy ki baat sach hi hogi wo kitni achi hai usne kaha k wo sambhal legi....
Kus time batein karne k baad Geeta apne ghar chali gayi....
Raj ne sham ko dinner apne room mein hi kiya aj sayad pain killer ka asar tha k Sara din sone k baad v Raj ko jaldi hi neend a gayi...
Chaliye tab tak hum log Priya k pass chalte hain ....Priya ka trip 2:30 baje hi wapis a gaya tha par wo ghar Jane ko le kar thodi confuse thi ek taraf wo soch rahi thi k wo jaldi ghar jaye aur Raghuveer aur Sunidhi se mile to dusri taraf wo Raj k samne nahi Jana chahti thi ....wo chahti thi k Raj k sath uski pehli mulakat kush special ho aur us hisab se school hi best place thi to usne apni best friend Sonia k ghar rukne ka faisla liya...usne jab Sonia ko btaya k wo aj rat uske ghar rukegi to Sonia boht jyada khus ho gayi....aur Priya ne ghar phone kar k Geeta ko bata diya ....
Chalo ap logon ko Sonia k bare mein bata dete hain:
Present age 20 years ....height 5'4" gora rang ...34-28-34 ka figure neeli ankhein ...( age, height aur figure present time ka hai tab ka nahi jahan story is baat hai)....is ladki ki sabse badi khubi is ki samjdari aur baat karne ka tareeka tha ...ye Priya ki best friend thi par iski koi v adat usse nahi milti...vese to Priya k bohut sare friend the par sab Priya ki chamchagiri karte the ye baat Priya ko v pata thi k sirf Sonia hi uski sachi dost hai ....Sonia Priya jitni ameer to nahi thi par papa government officer the to asha khasa kama lete the...ye bachpan se hi Priya ke sath padi hai...
To Priya rat ko Sonia k ghar rukne wali thi to usne sonia ko sari baat bata di k kion wo yahan rukne wali hai...usne Sonia ko ek plan v bataya pehle to wo nahi mani par jab Priya ne use baat na karne ki dhamki di to wo chah kar v na nahi kar pati..par usne itna jaroor kaha k wo is plan ka part nahi banegi....Priya is ke liye maan gayi der raat tak batein karne k baad dono so gain Priya k chehre par ek vijayi muskan thi ....ab is muskan ke piche kya raj hai...j to kal ka din hi batayega....so bane rahiye ye jan ne k liye k Raj aur Priya ki pehli mulakat kya rang layegi ...
Sunday ka din tha subah 5:00 baje Raj ke room ke door pr knock huya toh Raj ki neend ekdum khul gayi wo ekdum se utha aur apni adh khuli akhon ko maslta huya gate ki taraf gaya...Jaise hi usne gate khola to samne uski mummy khadi thi..
Apni mummy ko dekh kar usne turant unke pair chuye aur good morning wish kiya ....
Raj : mummy good morning
Sunidhi: good Morning beta..
Raj: mummy itni jaldi kion utha diya kitni achi neend a rahi thi...
Sunidhi: itni bhi jaldi nahi hai...pichle 5 minute se door peet rahi hun tu hai k sunta hi nahi aur door ander se lock kion karta hai...
Raj: sorry mummy wo main age se nahi karunga...
Sunidhi: chalo koi baat nahi ab jaldi se brush wagerha kar k niche a jao tumhare papa tumhara wait kar rahe hain....
Raj: kion mummy itni subah papa ko kya kam hai mujhse thoda so lene do na...
Sunidhi: beta dekho tumhare papa kafi time se tumhara wait kar rahe hain jaldi se niche a jao ab...
Abhi raj kuch bolne k liye munh khol hi raha tha k turant Sunidhi bol padi...
Sunidhi: no discussion ...jaldi fresh ho jao aur apna track suit daal kar neeche a jao...come on hurry up..
Yeh keh kar Sunidhi to chali gayi par uska track suit k bare mein bolna Raj ko samj nahi a raha tha par use jaldi hi samj mein a gaya k usko aj papa k sath morning walk k liye jana padega ...ye sochte hi Raj ka hamesha khila rehne wala chehra kisi tute hue phool ki tarah murjha gaya...
Par bechara kar v kya sakta tha jana toh padega hi papa ne jo kaha tha...iska yeh matlab bilkul v nahi tha k wo Raghuveer se darta tha bas wo apne papa ki izzat hi itni karta tha k unki koi baat nahi talta tha...
Akhir kar apne subah k jaroori kam karke Raj neeche a gya samne uske papa mummy aur Mohit baithe the...Raj ke chehre par aik jhuthi smile thi...jise Sunidhi dekhte hi samjh gayi par use pata tha k isme uske bete ka fayda hi hai to wo kus nahi boli...Raj ne apne uncle aur papa k pair chuye aur morning wish kiya...unhone v usse ashirwad diya aur fir teeno chal pade park ki aur
Raghuveer aur Mohit age age jogging kar rahe aur hamara hero Raj v jogging hi kar raha tha...par usko dekh kar aisa lag raha tha jaise koi bade pait wala constable kisi tez tarar criminal ka pure sehar mein picha karne k baad haar maan chuka ho...wo kisi kachuye ki tarah in dono k piche reng raha tha...
Kafi time tak Raj ki band bjane k baad akhir kar teeno ghar laut hi aye Mohit apne ghar chal diya aur Raj aur uske papa apne ghar ki taraf...
Raj jaise taise ghar pahunch gaya tha hall mein ghuste hi wo wahin sofe par dher ho gaya aur jor se chillaya
Raj: mummyyyyyyyyyy
Raj ki awaj sun kar Sunidhi gabhra gayi aur apne room se daudti huyi hall mein a gayi...
Wo Raj ke pass ja kar baith gayi aur uske sir par hath phirane lagi aur pucha...
Sunidhi: kya hua beta aise kion chilla rahe ho koi chot to nahi lag gayi kahin...
Raj kush bol pata is se pehle hi uske papa ne sari ramayan suna di k kaise jogging k dauran Raj ki yeh halat ho gayi....
Sunidhi ko yeh sun kar kuch tasali toh huyi par maa ka dil toh hota hi aisa hai k apne bache ka chota sa dard dekh kar hi uska dil ro uthta hai...sayad isi ka hi nateeza tha k Jo kuch time pehle soch rahi thi k yeh sab uske bache ki bhalai ke liye hai wo sab kus bhool kar apne pati par hi kud padi...
Sunidhi: are apko samj nahi ata k bache k sath itna jyada sakhti k sath pesh nahi ana chahiye...
Raghuveer: are bhai main konsa hilter hun mera v beta hai yeh main v isse pyar karta hun main toh isi liye ise lekar gaya tha kionk iska weight badhta ja raha hai pait nikal raha hai mota ho gaya to koi ladki v nahi pategi isse...
Sunidhi: are aise kaise baat kar rahe hain ap...main apne bete ke liye ladkion ki line laga doongi....yeh Jo apke croron rupey bankon mein pade sad rahe hain....ye jhad pe lgane hain kya
Raj apne parents ko kafi time se dekh raha tha to bola .
Raj: mummy papa ki is me kya galti hai aur ap plz mere liye pani le ayein....aur mere pairon mein v bahut darad hai....
Yeh sun kar Sunidhi kitchen mein chali gayi..to Raj ke papa uske pass baith gaye...
Raghuveer: thanks beta mujhe bacha liya nahi to tumhari mummy mujhe sandwich ki trah toast kar deti...
Yeh sun kar Raj dard k bawjood v Hans pada ...Raghuveer ne filhal wahan se niklme mein hi bhlai samji...
Itne mein Sunidhi kitchen mein se pani ka gilas le kar ayi.
Sunidhi: beta yeh lo pani pi lo aur apne bedroom mein jao main tumhare liye pain killer le kar ati hun...
Raj ne pani pi liya aur apne room ki taraf chal pada uski halat itni khrab thi k wo aram se chal v nahi pa raha tha par wo Jaise taise apne room mein pahunch hi gaya aur bed par lait gaya thodi der bad uski mummy ayi...Raj ne ab ki bar gate lock nahi kiya tha ...
Sunidhi ne raj ko tablet di aur wo uske pair dawane lagi Raj ne bahut mana kiya par Sunidhi nahi mani aur uske pairon ko dabati rahi ....Raj ko kafi aram mil raha tha isliye wo gehri neend mein chala gaya ...
Sham ko 4 baje uski ankh khuli usne dekha k uski mummy abhi bhi uske pas baithi hai to wo uth kar baith gaya Sunidhi ne dekha k raj uth gaya hai
Sunidhi: uth gaya beta ab kaisa hai tumhara pain ...
Raj: abhi kafi acha feel kar raha hun ...
Sunidhi: chal tu aram kar main Naha kar ati hun subah se tere pass hi baithi hun...
Raj :OK
Abhi Sunidhi ko gaye 10-15 minute hi huye the k Raj k door par knock hua...
Raj: come in door khula hi hai.
Gate khula to raj ne dekha k samne Geeta khadi thi.
Geeta : kaise ho beta ab kus aram hai ..
Raj: han aunty ab better hai ....ap btao kaisi hain..
Geeta: main to ekdum thik hun beta
Raj : apko kaise pata chala meri halt ka...
Geeta : wo aj jab tumhe Milne ayi to tum so rahe the aur Sunidhi ne mujhe bataya tumhare bare mein...main kafi time baithi rahi par mujhe jana pada kionk aj Priya ko ana tha to....
Raj: to kaisi rahi uski trip....
Geeta: pata nahi agar ghar ayegi tabhi to pata chalega...
Raj: kion ap to keh rahi thin k wo ane wali thi aj
Geeta: han par ayi nahi uska phone aya tha k wo aj apni friend Sonia k ghar ruke gi ....aur kal seedha school se hi ghar ayegi....Maine use bahut kaha k ghar a jaye aur tum logon se mil le par usne kaha k kal ko hi mil lungi....
Raj: chalo aunty koi baat nahi kal ko school mein hi mil lunga ....
Geeta: Maine v usse bata diya hai k tum kal ko school a rahe ho....
Raj: to fir kya boli wo....
Geeta: usne bola hai k koi baat nahi bhej dena main smbhal lungi use...
Raj gehri soch mein dub gaya k mummy ki baat sach hi hogi wo kitni achi hai usne kaha k wo sambhal legi....
Kus time batein karne k baad Geeta apne ghar chali gayi....
Raj ne sham ko dinner apne room mein hi kiya aj sayad pain killer ka asar tha k Sara din sone k baad v Raj ko jaldi hi neend a gayi...
Chaliye tab tak hum log Priya k pass chalte hain ....Priya ka trip 2:30 baje hi wapis a gaya tha par wo ghar Jane ko le kar thodi confuse thi ek taraf wo soch rahi thi k wo jaldi ghar jaye aur Raghuveer aur Sunidhi se mile to dusri taraf wo Raj k samne nahi Jana chahti thi ....wo chahti thi k Raj k sath uski pehli mulakat kush special ho aur us hisab se school hi best place thi to usne apni best friend Sonia k ghar rukne ka faisla liya...usne jab Sonia ko btaya k wo aj rat uske ghar rukegi to Sonia boht jyada khus ho gayi....aur Priya ne ghar phone kar k Geeta ko bata diya ....
Chalo ap logon ko Sonia k bare mein bata dete hain:
Present age 20 years ....height 5'4" gora rang ...34-28-34 ka figure neeli ankhein ...( age, height aur figure present time ka hai tab ka nahi jahan story is baat hai)....is ladki ki sabse badi khubi is ki samjdari aur baat karne ka tareeka tha ...ye Priya ki best friend thi par iski koi v adat usse nahi milti...vese to Priya k bohut sare friend the par sab Priya ki chamchagiri karte the ye baat Priya ko v pata thi k sirf Sonia hi uski sachi dost hai ....Sonia Priya jitni ameer to nahi thi par papa government officer the to asha khasa kama lete the...ye bachpan se hi Priya ke sath padi hai...
To Priya rat ko Sonia k ghar rukne wali thi to usne sonia ko sari baat bata di k kion wo yahan rukne wali hai...usne Sonia ko ek plan v bataya pehle to wo nahi mani par jab Priya ne use baat na karne ki dhamki di to wo chah kar v na nahi kar pati..par usne itna jaroor kaha k wo is plan ka part nahi banegi....Priya is ke liye maan gayi der raat tak batein karne k baad dono so gain Priya k chehre par ek vijayi muskan thi ....ab is muskan ke piche kya raj hai...j to kal ka din hi batayega....so bane rahiye ye jan ne k liye k Raj aur Priya ki pehli mulakat kya rang layegi ...
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Monday subah 5:30 baje
Raj ke kamre ka darwaja khulta hai aur Sunidhi ander ghus kar so rahe Raj k bagal mein baith jati hai aur uske balon mein hath firane lagti hai...
Sunidhi soch rahi thi k uska beta kitna cute sa hai sote huye to aur v jyada masoom lag raha hai...par ek anjana sa dar use sata raha tha k kahin Raj ki isi masoomiyat ki bajah se wo kisi musibat mein na pad jaye...jaroorat se jyada bholapan v aj kal k jamane mein le dhubta hai...khair aj Raj k school ka pehla din tha to Sunidhi na chahte huye v Raj ke sir pe apna hath firate huye ek pyar bhari awaj mein use uthane lagi...ek do baar awaz dene par hi raj uth k baith gaya...
Raj: good morning mummy...
Sunidhi: good morning beta...abhi to pair mein dard nahi hai na...
Raj: nahi mummy ab to ekdum thik hai...
Sunidhi: to jaldi se uth jao aur tyar ho jao...
Aj tumhe school jana hai 8:00 baje se pehle tyar ho jana ... School ka time 8:30 hai...
Raj: thik hai mummy..
Sunidhi: aur ye lo tumhara school uniform...
Itna keh kar Raj Sunidhi se ek bag leta hai jisme uniform thi aur use bed pe rakh kar bathroom mein ghus jata hai...
7:45 baje Raj tyar ho kar school uniform mein breakfast karne ke liye table par baith jata hai yahan pehle hi Raghuveer baitha tha sayad Raj ka inzar kar raha tha...
Raghuveer: kaise ho naughty boy....kafi smart lag rahe ho school dress mein..
Raj : thik hun papa...and thanks for the compliment...par sorry papa itna to mujhe v pata hai k mere se jyada mera ye pait is uniform mein se dikh raha hai...
Itna keh kar Raj apne pait par hath rakh deta hai jise dekh kar Raghuveer hans deta hai aur Raj v uske sath hansne lagta hai...itne mein Sunidhi ki awaj ati hai..
Sunidhi: are kya chal raha hai baap bete mein Jo itna hans rahe ho...
Raj: kus nahi Mummy aur jaldi se khana khilaiye plz main pehle din hi lait nahi hona chahta...
Sunidhi Raj ki baat sun kar thoda muskurati hai aur Rita ko awaz deti hai
Sunidhi: are Rita jaldi se khana laga do...
Sunidhi ki awaz sun kar Rita v jaldi se khane ko ek trolley ki help se lekar ati hai aur table par laga deti hai aur sab ko serve karti hai...
Khana dekh kar Raj ka munh phool jata hai kionk khane mein sirf halka fulka ghaas phoos tha ..
Raj: mummy ye sab kya hai...
Sunidhi: dekho beta tume exercise nahi karni to mat karo par ye to khana hi padega ...ye sab tere ache ke liye hi hai nahi to jyada weight badh jayega...
Raj: mummy plz
Sunidhi: nahi main kus nahi sunne wali ...waise v breakfast mein jyada heavy nahi khana chahiye...ab mera pyara shona beta jaldi se ise khao aur juice pio nahi to lait ho jayega...
Raj: OK mummy...
Raj na chahte hue v khana shuru kar deta hai....
Jab tak ye khana khatam karta hai tab tak thoda Priya ka pata kar lete hain k wo kya kar rahi hogi...
Sunday subah 5:00 baje
Priya aur Sonia aik double bed par so rahi thi k tabhi unke room ka darwaja khulta hai aur ek aurat ander ati hai....ye aurat thi Sonia ki mummy Radha ab unki jyada into ki to jaroort nahi bas itna bata deta hun k nature ki kafi achi hain...
To wo a kar Priya aur Sonia ko uthane lagti hai..
Radha: are beta Priya utho...Sonia ab uth v jao tum dono kitna Soti ho...
Radha k thode der tak uthane se akhir kar dono maharanian jag hi jati hain...
Dono Radha ko good morning wish karti hai aur Radha v unhe gale laga kar wish karti hai...
Radha: chalo ab jaldi se tum dono ready ho jao aur main tab tak khana tyar karti hun...
Dono bari bari tyar ho jati hain aur bahar nikal kar dinning table par baith jati hain...wahan Sonia ke daddy pehle hi baithe the Mr. Jagdeesh Sharma..ye v nature k ache hain magar gussa boht ata hai inhe Jo k sayad govt. Officers mein naturally a hi jata hai...to hum kahan the han Priya aur Sonia table par baithti hain aur pehle Jagdeesh ko morning wish karti wo bhi jawab mein chehre par ek halki smile la kar wish karta hai...itne mein Radha khana le kar a jati hai aur sabhi khana shuru kar dete hain...Priya aur Sonia ek taraf baithi thin aur Sonia ke parents unke samne...unka dhyan puri tarah se khane mein tha to yeh dekh kar Sonia Priya k kan k paas munh karke kus khusar phusar karti hai to dekhein k kya baat ho rahi hai dono mein...
Sonia: Priya dekh ek bar aur sochle...tume aisa nahi karna chahiye...
Priya: kion main to khana khaungi dekh na aunty ne kitna acha bnaya hai aur tu v kha le ab chup chap...
Sonia : are main khane ki baat nahi kar rahi...
Priya: to fir aur kiya keh rahi hai Jo mujhe nahi karna chahiye...
Sonia: are main us plan ki baat kar rahi hun Jo tune kal rat btaya tha...
Priya: kion na karun aisa mauka ek baar hi ata hai....
Sonia: sochle agar tere parents ko pata chala to...
Priya : j to Maine v nahi socha baad mein soch lenge ...
Sonia: are you mad? Ye tum itni asani se kaise keh sakti hai...
Priya: ab dekh yar is mein tera naam nahi ayega tu fikar mat kar...
Sonia: yar tu galt soch rahi hai mujhe teri fikar ho rahi main nahi chahti k tu kisi musibat mein fase..
Priya : don't worry yar just chill
Is se pehle k Sonia kus bolti Radha ne unhe dekh liya...
Radha: are beta tum dono jaldi se khana kha lo lait ho jayega...
Itna sun kar dono jaldi jaldi khana khane lagi ...
Khana khatm karne ke baad dono Jagdeesh k sath bahr ko chal padti hain...Radha v unke piche jati hai Jagdeesh apni car nikal ne k liye garage mein chala jata hai to wahan wo teeno reh jati hain....
Radha: beta Priya ab tum kab aogi...
Priya: aunty jaldi hi aungi
Radha: beta jaldi hi ana jab tum ati ho to aisa lagta hai Jaise meri Riya hi a gayi ho(Riya Sonia ki choti Behan hai pdhai mein kam dhyan deti thi to Jagdeesh ne use hostel bhej diya tha ab wo kam hi ati thi ghar)...
Itna bol kar Radha ki ankhon mein ansoo a jate hain...Priya unke ansoo pochti hai aur Sonia v apni mummy ko rote dekh unhe gale se laga leti hai...Priya unhe haunsla deti hai...
Priya : are aunty ap ro kion rahi hain main v to apki beti hi hun vese v Riya apko Milne ati to hai har month aur ap v kabhi kabhi use mil ati hain so plz smile now nahi to hamara pura din khrab ho jayega...
Radha v apne ansoo poch kar smile kar deti hai...itne mein Jagdeesh gadi le ata hai aur dono gadi mein baith kar Radha ko bye karke nikal jati hain apni manjil yani school ki aur....
Udhar Raj v apna khana complete kar chuka tha aur apni mummy k pair chu raha tha uski mummy use ashirwad deti hai aur gale se laga leti hai...
Sunidhi: beta sabse pehle Priya se milna OK...
Raj: ji mummy ..
Sunidhi: chalo ab bahar chalte hain tumhare papa wait kar rahe honge...
Fir dono bahar ate hain aur Raj apne papa k sath gadi mein baith jata hai....aur wo bhi apni mummy ko bye bol kar school ki taraf nikal padta hai
Ab ye to waqt hi batayega k Raj aur Priya ki pehli mulakat kaisi hogi ....jab j dono Amne samne honge to kya hoga...pata lagane k liye story k sath bane rahiye dosto...
Monday subah 5:30 baje
Raj ke kamre ka darwaja khulta hai aur Sunidhi ander ghus kar so rahe Raj k bagal mein baith jati hai aur uske balon mein hath firane lagti hai...
Sunidhi soch rahi thi k uska beta kitna cute sa hai sote huye to aur v jyada masoom lag raha hai...par ek anjana sa dar use sata raha tha k kahin Raj ki isi masoomiyat ki bajah se wo kisi musibat mein na pad jaye...jaroorat se jyada bholapan v aj kal k jamane mein le dhubta hai...khair aj Raj k school ka pehla din tha to Sunidhi na chahte huye v Raj ke sir pe apna hath firate huye ek pyar bhari awaj mein use uthane lagi...ek do baar awaz dene par hi raj uth k baith gaya...
Raj: good morning mummy...
Sunidhi: good morning beta...abhi to pair mein dard nahi hai na...
Raj: nahi mummy ab to ekdum thik hai...
Sunidhi: to jaldi se uth jao aur tyar ho jao...
Aj tumhe school jana hai 8:00 baje se pehle tyar ho jana ... School ka time 8:30 hai...
Raj: thik hai mummy..
Sunidhi: aur ye lo tumhara school uniform...
Itna keh kar Raj Sunidhi se ek bag leta hai jisme uniform thi aur use bed pe rakh kar bathroom mein ghus jata hai...
7:45 baje Raj tyar ho kar school uniform mein breakfast karne ke liye table par baith jata hai yahan pehle hi Raghuveer baitha tha sayad Raj ka inzar kar raha tha...
Raghuveer: kaise ho naughty boy....kafi smart lag rahe ho school dress mein..
Raj : thik hun papa...and thanks for the compliment...par sorry papa itna to mujhe v pata hai k mere se jyada mera ye pait is uniform mein se dikh raha hai...
Itna keh kar Raj apne pait par hath rakh deta hai jise dekh kar Raghuveer hans deta hai aur Raj v uske sath hansne lagta hai...itne mein Sunidhi ki awaj ati hai..
Sunidhi: are kya chal raha hai baap bete mein Jo itna hans rahe ho...
Raj: kus nahi Mummy aur jaldi se khana khilaiye plz main pehle din hi lait nahi hona chahta...
Sunidhi Raj ki baat sun kar thoda muskurati hai aur Rita ko awaz deti hai
Sunidhi: are Rita jaldi se khana laga do...
Sunidhi ki awaz sun kar Rita v jaldi se khane ko ek trolley ki help se lekar ati hai aur table par laga deti hai aur sab ko serve karti hai...
Khana dekh kar Raj ka munh phool jata hai kionk khane mein sirf halka fulka ghaas phoos tha ..
Raj: mummy ye sab kya hai...
Sunidhi: dekho beta tume exercise nahi karni to mat karo par ye to khana hi padega ...ye sab tere ache ke liye hi hai nahi to jyada weight badh jayega...
Raj: mummy plz
Sunidhi: nahi main kus nahi sunne wali ...waise v breakfast mein jyada heavy nahi khana chahiye...ab mera pyara shona beta jaldi se ise khao aur juice pio nahi to lait ho jayega...
Raj: OK mummy...
Raj na chahte hue v khana shuru kar deta hai....
Jab tak ye khana khatam karta hai tab tak thoda Priya ka pata kar lete hain k wo kya kar rahi hogi...
Sunday subah 5:00 baje
Priya aur Sonia aik double bed par so rahi thi k tabhi unke room ka darwaja khulta hai aur ek aurat ander ati hai....ye aurat thi Sonia ki mummy Radha ab unki jyada into ki to jaroort nahi bas itna bata deta hun k nature ki kafi achi hain...
To wo a kar Priya aur Sonia ko uthane lagti hai..
Radha: are beta Priya utho...Sonia ab uth v jao tum dono kitna Soti ho...
Radha k thode der tak uthane se akhir kar dono maharanian jag hi jati hain...
Dono Radha ko good morning wish karti hai aur Radha v unhe gale laga kar wish karti hai...
Radha: chalo ab jaldi se tum dono ready ho jao aur main tab tak khana tyar karti hun...
Dono bari bari tyar ho jati hain aur bahar nikal kar dinning table par baith jati hain...wahan Sonia ke daddy pehle hi baithe the Mr. Jagdeesh Sharma..ye v nature k ache hain magar gussa boht ata hai inhe Jo k sayad govt. Officers mein naturally a hi jata hai...to hum kahan the han Priya aur Sonia table par baithti hain aur pehle Jagdeesh ko morning wish karti wo bhi jawab mein chehre par ek halki smile la kar wish karta hai...itne mein Radha khana le kar a jati hai aur sabhi khana shuru kar dete hain...Priya aur Sonia ek taraf baithi thin aur Sonia ke parents unke samne...unka dhyan puri tarah se khane mein tha to yeh dekh kar Sonia Priya k kan k paas munh karke kus khusar phusar karti hai to dekhein k kya baat ho rahi hai dono mein...
Sonia: Priya dekh ek bar aur sochle...tume aisa nahi karna chahiye...
Priya: kion main to khana khaungi dekh na aunty ne kitna acha bnaya hai aur tu v kha le ab chup chap...
Sonia : are main khane ki baat nahi kar rahi...
Priya: to fir aur kiya keh rahi hai Jo mujhe nahi karna chahiye...
Sonia: are main us plan ki baat kar rahi hun Jo tune kal rat btaya tha...
Priya: kion na karun aisa mauka ek baar hi ata hai....
Sonia: sochle agar tere parents ko pata chala to...
Priya : j to Maine v nahi socha baad mein soch lenge ...
Sonia: are you mad? Ye tum itni asani se kaise keh sakti hai...
Priya: ab dekh yar is mein tera naam nahi ayega tu fikar mat kar...
Sonia: yar tu galt soch rahi hai mujhe teri fikar ho rahi main nahi chahti k tu kisi musibat mein fase..
Priya : don't worry yar just chill
Is se pehle k Sonia kus bolti Radha ne unhe dekh liya...
Radha: are beta tum dono jaldi se khana kha lo lait ho jayega...
Itna sun kar dono jaldi jaldi khana khane lagi ...
Khana khatm karne ke baad dono Jagdeesh k sath bahr ko chal padti hain...Radha v unke piche jati hai Jagdeesh apni car nikal ne k liye garage mein chala jata hai to wahan wo teeno reh jati hain....
Radha: beta Priya ab tum kab aogi...
Priya: aunty jaldi hi aungi
Radha: beta jaldi hi ana jab tum ati ho to aisa lagta hai Jaise meri Riya hi a gayi ho(Riya Sonia ki choti Behan hai pdhai mein kam dhyan deti thi to Jagdeesh ne use hostel bhej diya tha ab wo kam hi ati thi ghar)...
Itna bol kar Radha ki ankhon mein ansoo a jate hain...Priya unke ansoo pochti hai aur Sonia v apni mummy ko rote dekh unhe gale se laga leti hai...Priya unhe haunsla deti hai...
Priya : are aunty ap ro kion rahi hain main v to apki beti hi hun vese v Riya apko Milne ati to hai har month aur ap v kabhi kabhi use mil ati hain so plz smile now nahi to hamara pura din khrab ho jayega...
Radha v apne ansoo poch kar smile kar deti hai...itne mein Jagdeesh gadi le ata hai aur dono gadi mein baith kar Radha ko bye karke nikal jati hain apni manjil yani school ki aur....
Udhar Raj v apna khana complete kar chuka tha aur apni mummy k pair chu raha tha uski mummy use ashirwad deti hai aur gale se laga leti hai...
Sunidhi: beta sabse pehle Priya se milna OK...
Raj: ji mummy ..
Sunidhi: chalo ab bahar chalte hain tumhare papa wait kar rahe honge...
Fir dono bahar ate hain aur Raj apne papa k sath gadi mein baith jata hai....aur wo bhi apni mummy ko bye bol kar school ki taraf nikal padta hai
Ab ye to waqt hi batayega k Raj aur Priya ki pehli mulakat kaisi hogi ....jab j dono Amne samne honge to kya hoga...pata lagane k liye story k sath bane rahiye dosto...
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Priya Raj se pehle school pahunch jati hai...Priya aur Sonia Jagdeesh ko bye karti hain aur school ke ander chal deti hain...Jaise hi dono school ke ander pahunchti hain to aisa lag raha tha jaise Priya kisi ko dhundh rahi ho..uski najrein baar baar idhar udhar ghoom rahi thin...par sayad jise wo dhundh rahi thi wo dikh nahi raha tha to wo bechain si lag rahi thi...par tabhi uski najar garden mein khade ek ladkon ke group par padi to uske chehre par ek muskan a gayi...wo Sonia ka hath pakad kar unki taraf chal di...
Jese hi wo dono unke kareeb pahunchi to Priya ne awaj di...
Priya: oye Monty idhar a..
Awaj sun kar unme se ek ladka Priya ki taraf dekhta hai aur uski taraf chal deta hai...
Monty: ji koi kam tha...
( asal mein Monty Priya ka chamcha nahi tha par usne ek baar Priya se panga liya tha to Priya ne apne bodyguard se pitwa diya...tab se bechara kute ki tarah dumbh hilata hai uske samne)
Priya: han ek chota par important kam tha...
Fir Priya use kuch samjaati hai...jab Priya ki baat puri huyi to Monty ke chehre par ghawrahat saaf dekhi ja sakti thi...
Monty: koi gadbad ho gayi to...principal ko kia kahunga...
Priya: dekho main sab sambhal lungi tum bas mera kam kar dena...
Monty: ji sure but plz mera naam principal tak na pahunche...
Priya: don't worry yar..
Itna keh kar Priya wahan se chal deti hai Sonia v uske piche chal deti hai...Monty v main gate se thodi door ja kar khada ho jata hai aur uska group v uske sath hi tha...
8:15 baje Raj ki gadi school ke gate par rukti hai wo aur uske papa gadi se bahar niklte hai...
Raj: papa Priya pahunch gayi hogi kya...
Raghuveer: pata nahi beta par agar wo abhi na ayi ho to tum uska wait kar lena ..aur jyada nervous hone ki jaroort nahi hai yeh bahut acha school hai....gud luck beta ab tum ander jao...
Fir Raj apne papa ko bye bol kar gate ki taraf chal deta hai...
Udhar Priya Sonia k sath play ground mein khadi thi par uski ankhein main gate par hi tiki huyi thi aur Monty apne group k sath khada tha kabhi wo Priya ko dekhta aur kabhi gate ki taraf...
Jaise hi Raj gate k ander aya to Priya k chehre pe ek katil muskan fail gayi usne thoda dhyan se dekha...jab use confirm ho gaya k ye Raj hi hai to usne Monty ki taraf dekha....wo v Priya ki taraf hi dekh raha tha...Priya ne Raj ki taraf ungli se ishara kiya jise Monty ne dekh liya...pehle usne Priya ki ungli ka ishara dekh kar Raj ki taraf dekha aur fir Priya ko thumb's up ka ishara kiya ...usne Raj ko awaj di...
Monty: hlo ladke...
Raj uski awaj sun kar pehle to idhar udhar dekha fir ishare se pucha k mujhe bulaya hai...
Monty: han tujhe hi bula raha hun yahan a ...
Raj thoda ghabra gaya par dhime kadmo ke sath Monty ki taraf chal pada...
Monty: thoda jaldi a na
Raj ne apni speed badha di aur Monty ke pass ja kar khada ho gaya...
Raj: ji ap ne mujhe bulaya koi kam tha...( darasal Raj Monty ko dekh kar thoda dar gaya tha kionk wo dekhne mein hi gunda type lag raha tha aur uper se uske sath 8-10 ladke aur the)
Monty: tu kya kam kar sakta hai be mote...
Monty ki baat sun kar uska pura group hasne laga ...Raj ko aj pehli baar mota kahe jane par sharm ayi kionk isse pehle use aisa keh kar sirf majak kiya jata tha par aj to uska mjak banaya ja raha tha...par fir v wo apni himmat jhuta kar bola...
Raj: ji main to aise hi puch rha tha k apne mujhe bulaya kion..
Monty: are yar main to vese hi thodi jan pachan badhana chahta tha tu naya hai na yahan pehle kabhi dekha nahi tujhe...
Yeh sun kar Raj ko thodi tasali mili...
Raj: ji mera naam Raj hai...main UK se aya hun...aur ab yahin padunga...
Monty: mera nam Monty hai...vese konsi class mein hai tu...
Raj: ji main 9th mein aur ap
Monty: main 10th mein hun...chal tujh se baad mein milte hain...
Raj ki to Jaise sans mein sans ayi wo wahan se jaldi se nikal pada wo abhi thodi door hi gaya tha k Priya jaldi se bhagte hue Monty k pass pahunch gayi...Sonia apni jagah pe hi khadi rahi...
Priya: to ache se dekh liya na use....
Monty: ji han......
Priya: to fir recess mein kam ho Jana chahiye...
Monty: ji thik hai...
Fir Priya Raj ki taraf chal di Jo dhire dhire classes ki taraf ja raha tha...
Yaar tabiyat aj achi nahi hai to itna hi update de paunga baki kal ko vese v aik update pehle de chuka hun...plz friends thoda wait karna kal ko main fir ek bade update k sath hajir rahunga
Priya Raj se pehle school pahunch jati hai...Priya aur Sonia Jagdeesh ko bye karti hain aur school ke ander chal deti hain...Jaise hi dono school ke ander pahunchti hain to aisa lag raha tha jaise Priya kisi ko dhundh rahi ho..uski najrein baar baar idhar udhar ghoom rahi thin...par sayad jise wo dhundh rahi thi wo dikh nahi raha tha to wo bechain si lag rahi thi...par tabhi uski najar garden mein khade ek ladkon ke group par padi to uske chehre par ek muskan a gayi...wo Sonia ka hath pakad kar unki taraf chal di...
Jese hi wo dono unke kareeb pahunchi to Priya ne awaj di...
Priya: oye Monty idhar a..
Awaj sun kar unme se ek ladka Priya ki taraf dekhta hai aur uski taraf chal deta hai...
Monty: ji koi kam tha...
( asal mein Monty Priya ka chamcha nahi tha par usne ek baar Priya se panga liya tha to Priya ne apne bodyguard se pitwa diya...tab se bechara kute ki tarah dumbh hilata hai uske samne)
Priya: han ek chota par important kam tha...
Fir Priya use kuch samjaati hai...jab Priya ki baat puri huyi to Monty ke chehre par ghawrahat saaf dekhi ja sakti thi...
Monty: koi gadbad ho gayi to...principal ko kia kahunga...
Priya: dekho main sab sambhal lungi tum bas mera kam kar dena...
Monty: ji sure but plz mera naam principal tak na pahunche...
Priya: don't worry yar..
Itna keh kar Priya wahan se chal deti hai Sonia v uske piche chal deti hai...Monty v main gate se thodi door ja kar khada ho jata hai aur uska group v uske sath hi tha...
8:15 baje Raj ki gadi school ke gate par rukti hai wo aur uske papa gadi se bahar niklte hai...
Raj: papa Priya pahunch gayi hogi kya...
Raghuveer: pata nahi beta par agar wo abhi na ayi ho to tum uska wait kar lena ..aur jyada nervous hone ki jaroort nahi hai yeh bahut acha school hai....gud luck beta ab tum ander jao...
Fir Raj apne papa ko bye bol kar gate ki taraf chal deta hai...
Udhar Priya Sonia k sath play ground mein khadi thi par uski ankhein main gate par hi tiki huyi thi aur Monty apne group k sath khada tha kabhi wo Priya ko dekhta aur kabhi gate ki taraf...
Jaise hi Raj gate k ander aya to Priya k chehre pe ek katil muskan fail gayi usne thoda dhyan se dekha...jab use confirm ho gaya k ye Raj hi hai to usne Monty ki taraf dekha....wo v Priya ki taraf hi dekh raha tha...Priya ne Raj ki taraf ungli se ishara kiya jise Monty ne dekh liya...pehle usne Priya ki ungli ka ishara dekh kar Raj ki taraf dekha aur fir Priya ko thumb's up ka ishara kiya ...usne Raj ko awaj di...
Monty: hlo ladke...
Raj uski awaj sun kar pehle to idhar udhar dekha fir ishare se pucha k mujhe bulaya hai...
Monty: han tujhe hi bula raha hun yahan a ...
Raj thoda ghabra gaya par dhime kadmo ke sath Monty ki taraf chal pada...
Monty: thoda jaldi a na
Raj ne apni speed badha di aur Monty ke pass ja kar khada ho gaya...
Raj: ji ap ne mujhe bulaya koi kam tha...( darasal Raj Monty ko dekh kar thoda dar gaya tha kionk wo dekhne mein hi gunda type lag raha tha aur uper se uske sath 8-10 ladke aur the)
Monty: tu kya kam kar sakta hai be mote...
Monty ki baat sun kar uska pura group hasne laga ...Raj ko aj pehli baar mota kahe jane par sharm ayi kionk isse pehle use aisa keh kar sirf majak kiya jata tha par aj to uska mjak banaya ja raha tha...par fir v wo apni himmat jhuta kar bola...
Raj: ji main to aise hi puch rha tha k apne mujhe bulaya kion..
Monty: are yar main to vese hi thodi jan pachan badhana chahta tha tu naya hai na yahan pehle kabhi dekha nahi tujhe...
Yeh sun kar Raj ko thodi tasali mili...
Raj: ji mera naam Raj hai...main UK se aya hun...aur ab yahin padunga...
Monty: mera nam Monty hai...vese konsi class mein hai tu...
Raj: ji main 9th mein aur ap
Monty: main 10th mein hun...chal tujh se baad mein milte hain...
Raj ki to Jaise sans mein sans ayi wo wahan se jaldi se nikal pada wo abhi thodi door hi gaya tha k Priya jaldi se bhagte hue Monty k pass pahunch gayi...Sonia apni jagah pe hi khadi rahi...
Priya: to ache se dekh liya na use....
Monty: ji han......
Priya: to fir recess mein kam ho Jana chahiye...
Monty: ji thik hai...
Fir Priya Raj ki taraf chal di Jo dhire dhire classes ki taraf ja raha tha...
Yaar tabiyat aj achi nahi hai to itna hi update de paunga baki kal ko vese v aik update pehle de chuka hun...plz friends thoda wait karna kal ko main fir ek bade update k sath hajir rahunga
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Hello, Ladies 
& Gentleman, 
We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
& Gentleman, We are so glad to Introduce Ultimate Story Contest of this year.
Jaise ki aap sabhi Jante Hain is baar Hum USC contest chala rahe hain aur Kuch Din pahle hi Humne Rules & Queries Thread ka announce kar diya tha aur ab Ultimate Story Contest ka Entry Thread air kar diya hai jo 17th, Nov 2019, 11:59 PM ko close hoga.
Khair ab main point Par Aate Hain Jaisa ki entry thread aired ho chuka hai isliye aap Sabhi readers aur writers se Meri personally request hai ki is contest mein aap Jarur participate kare aur Apni kalpnao ko shabdon ka rasta dikha ke yaha pesh kare ho sakta hai log use pasand kare.
Aur Jo readers nahi likhna chahte wo bakiyo ki story padhke review de sakte hai mujhe bahut Khushi Hogi agar aap is contest mein participate lekar apni story likhenge to.
Ye aap Sabhi Ke liye ek bahut hi sunhara avsar hai isliye Aage Bade aur apni Kalpanao ko shabdon Mein likhkar Duniya Ko dikha De.
Ye ek short story contest hai jisme Minimum 800 words se maximum 6000 words tak allowed hai itne hi words mein apni story complete Karni Hogi, Aur ek hi post mein complete karna hai aur Entry Thread mein post karna hai.
I hope aap mujhe niraash nahi Karenge aur is contest Mein Jarur participate Lenge.
On Behalf of Admin Team
Regards :- Siraj Patel
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Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hind section mein khula hai. Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai. Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge. Winning Writer's ko well deserved Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de. Entry thread 7th February ko open hoga matlab aap 7 February se story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 25th February tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega. Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.
Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread
Kisi bhi story par apna review post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Review Thread
Rules check karne ke liye is thread ko dekho — Rules & Queries Thread
Apni story post karne ke liye is thread ka use kare — Entry Thread
| Position | Benifits |
|---|---|
| Winner | 1500 Rupees +  Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories) |
| 1st Runner-Up | 500 Rupees +  Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories) |
| 2nd Runner-UP | 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Best Supporting Reader |  Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof | 200 Likes for each report |