Dear Satyat,
Firstly... I enjoyed your story... But i find it is more like a novelish thing... And nothing against your style... But my personal opinion is like this...
I find it hard to get good erection ...
coz of the lengthy post... The real core of the post has to be digged out... And you हा e super patience... Like huge posts... Anyways... You must focus on the details of breastfeeding and related acts instead of justifying the structure of the story... To make it realistic... Its ok if sometimes there is less of a realistic touch and more of what can be termed as wild expectations...
Hope you will take it positively and not as an offence... Thank you