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ThanksMast.... dono se chudwana....aur dono ko hard core cuck bhi karna.... Mast update hai
ThanksMast.... dono se chudwana....aur dono ko hard core cuck bhi karna.... Mast update hai
Thank you dost. And thank you for the inputVery nice story. Aap acche se ja rahe ho.
Savita aur Amjad ka romance aur badhavo
1) Savita kudh apne sansarke bandhan todkar Amhed ke sath khul ke jiye
2) Savita nahi sirf gharpe, baharbhi amjad ke sath uski girlfriend banke ghume enjoy kare.
3) Savita modern ladkiyo ki tharaha jeans tops etc pehne aur Amjad ko aur seduce kare.
4) Savita makeover kare jese hair color, tatoo, piercing Amjad ke liye jise use ukin ho ki savita sirf uski he.
Hahahah kya bat kahi haiYe apne baap ki jugaad bhidane mein laga pada hai par apni ammijaan par dhyaan nahi hai ki wo sabke gharo mein ja ja kar naap leti hai, ya kucch aur he khel pata lage aage ja kar he he he.
Jinke khud ke ghar shishe ke ho unko dusro ke ghar pe patthar nahi fekna chahiye.
Yaha ye savita ke saath maje maarne mein laga hua hai aur peeche-peeche Himanshu kahi pe game pehle se he khelta aaya ho, waise bhi uski dost mandali badi hai aur waise bhi saare paise waale hai.
Yaha savita ki sari aur blouse pe makkhiyo ki tarah aasakt hai par apne ghar ki jo bandh-gobhi hai usko bhi iska baap nahi kholta, bahar mandrane se jyaada behtar ye hoga ki thoda apne ghar ka bhi dhyaan rakhe he he he.
Anyway buildup aur direction accha kiya hai kahani ka, abhi tak shukrr hai kucch jyaada ooth-pataang nahi dala jisse kahani unrealistic feel hone lage
Thank you dost for understandingAgar ye sab hoga to fir savita bhi savita nahi reh jaayegi.
Agar character ke saath kucch jyada ulta seedha experiment karo to wo kirdaar apna charm chhod deta hai, let writer decide whats best.
Imagination to sab karte hai, but kahani ko padhne ka maja yahi hota hai ki likhne waale kis tarah se pesh kar raha hai.
Enjoy it as it is served.
Ghar pe to sab he khana khaate hai aur wo apni pasand ka he hota hai but restaurant ke khaane ka bhi alag swaad hota hai, aur wo accha bhi isi liye lagta hai.