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Fantasy Duniya ka sabse bada yodha

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Parbhu muje sab batakar chale gaye the me bhi ab shant man se soach raha tha ki ab muje jald se jald apni sabhi kundliya ko jagana hai.


Subah ka waqt tha abhi 4 baje the koi gym me person jim me pasina baha raha tha abhi koi usko dek leta to shock se koma me chala jata hai ki 10 saal kq baccha itne hevay wegith se practice kar raha hai ye or koi nahi me hi tha .


Me 5 baje tak gym workout karke apne room me aa jata hu vaha me apni choti sister ko sote hue dektha hu ye to me hi janta hu ki wo meri purva janm me wife thi lekin ab meri choti sister hai .

Vo abhi soti hui bilkul ek cute se bacchi lag rahi thi jise dekar mere mood thoda accha ho gaya tha me bathroom me jaldi jaker naha liya or dhyan me baith gaya.

Aaj mera dhyan me first day tha to muje aaj apne man ko shant nahi kar paya lekin muje apne uper viswas tha ki me jaldi hi kundli sakti jagrit kar lunga.

Me kaise bhi karke 2 hours dhyan me baitha raha last ke 30 min me mera man shant ho gaya tha bas muje apne time period ko badana hai.

Ab subah ke 7 baj gaye the me vapis room me aker sapna ko jagya vo uthkar mere galo par kiss karke goodmoring bahi boli ye uski roj ki adat thi.


Sapna boli ki bahi aap aaj subah kaffi jaldi ut gaye kya jo aap tyar ho gaye abhi se mene bola ki abse me 4 baje hi ut jaya karunga.

Mene usse jaldi tyar hoker neche brekfast ke liye ane ka bolkar neeche cahala gaya vaha dad garden me baithkar tea pee rahe the or sath me newspaper bhi pad rahe the.


Main - Dad goodmorning

Dad- Good morning son

Main- Me bhi dad ke pass aker baith jata hu to dad bolte hai ki bete aaj itna jaldi ready hoker kaha jaa rahe ho to mene bola nahi dad aisa kuch nahi hai aaj se mene mera time tabel thoda change kar liya hai.


Choti maa (Sanjana )- goodmorning beta aaj jaldi tyar ho gaye main bhi uthkar choti maa ke per chuye or bola maa abhi me papa ke ye hi bata raha tha ki aaj mera time tabel change kar diya hai


Main - Choti maa rudra abhi utha nahi hai kya to choti ma bolti hai nahi beta aaj to sunday aaj to school bhi nahi jana to shayda hi koi utha hoga tab hi meri maa rasmi aa jati hai or bolti aaj ma or bete me subah- subah kya baat ho rahi hai.

Main- Ma goodmorninng tab ma mere pass aker muje gale se lagakar goodmorning bothi hai .


Main- Ma aaj se muje subah 1/2 kilo milk and kuch dryfruit de diya karo kyoki aaj se mene gym start kari hai to maa bolti hai abhi se kya matlab hai tuje gym karne se tu pehle hi bahut fit hai tab papa bolte hai ki karne do ye to accha hai ki abhi se helath ke bare me sochega to age dikkat nahi ayegi

Main- choti ma aap rudra ko bhi bata dena kal se vo bhi mere sath hi utega to peeche rudra ata hai or bolta hai ki bahi aap gym karo me already pehle hi fit hu to me bolta hu koi bahana nahi kal se 6 baje ut jana ab rudra meri baat kat nahi sakta to vo dad ki taraf dektha hai ki dad aap hi bacha lo bahi se .

Dad - tab dad bolte hai ki meri taraf mat deko tum jano or tumrha bahi tum dono ke beech me ana hi galat hai .

Choti maa- sahi bol raha hai raj tum bhi subah raj ke sath gym karne jaoge ise bahne tum jaldi ut jaoge tab peche se sapna ki hasi aa jati hai or bolti ki bahi aap bach nahi sakte hai ab .

Tab meri dono sister bhi aa jati hai sabhi dining tabel par aker baith jate hai or brekfast karne lag jate hai tab dad bolte ki raj aaj ka kya program tum sab baccho ka aaj sunday hai tab me bolta hu kuch nahi dad aaj soch rahe hai ki maal me jaker aa jate hai kuch shoping kar leta hu gym ke liye.

Tab sapna bolti ki bahi aaj movie bhi dekne chalte hai na aaj nayi movie lagi hai tab me sabhi se puchta hu ki sab razi hai is par tab sab haa bol dete hai me moms se bhi pcuhta hu to vo mana kar deti hai ki tum bacche jaker enjoy karo .



Ab maal me kcuh hoga jo alge update me pata cahlega ...,.......
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Update 7

Main- chalo ab sab jaldi se apna breaksfast khatm karo abhi morning ka show dek lenge vahi mall me lunch kar lenge or evening tak shoping karke aa jayenge

Badi sister - Raj me apne friends ko bhi bula leti hu vo bhi chal lenge

Main- thik hai bula lo but unse bol dena mujse thoda dur hi rahe hai.

Sneha - Raj tum kyo darte ho unse vo tumhe kha thodi jayegi or itna kahkar dono sister hasne lag jati hai

Intro

Ruchi - ye hamre father ke dost ki beti hai unke pita ka nam ajay singh hai or ma ka naam diya hai ye bhi khubsurat hai or apne raj ko pasand karti hai but raj usko kuch bhav hi nahi deta hai

Main- chalo sab jaldi se tayar ho jao me gadi niklwata hu 30 min me sabhi yaha hone chiye kyoki movie ka show 9.00 baje ka already 8 baj gaye hai.

Dad - beta aaj tum security ko bhi apne sath le jana accha rahega.

Main- dad hum enjoy karne jaa rahe koi war me nahi jaa rahe hai or muje ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai .

Choti mom - rahne dijiye apko to pata hai usko bilkul pasnad nahi hai or bacche apne mall me hi jaa rahe hai to tension mat lo.

Badi mom - ha sanjana sahi kah rahi hai jane do baccho ko aise hi or apna raj hai sabke sath tension karne ki jaruurt nahi vo apni sister ka khyal rak sakta hai.

Sabhi log tyar hoker aa jate hai or hum mall ke liye ravna ho jate hai hum do gadiyo me jaa rahe hai first car me to me or sneha and sapna the second me car me rudra ,neha and uski friend ruchi thi .

Hum sab mall me enter kar diye or me ticket lene chala gaya muje ticket lene me jayda time nahi laga kyoki ye mall meri choti maa ka hi tha.

Me ticket leker movie dekne chale gaye or movie acchi thi movie khtam huai tab hum sabhi ko bhook lag rahi thi to sabhi food court ki taraf chal diye jo second floor par tha.

Hum sabhi food court me pauche or vaha mene ek tabel par sabhi ko bitya or rudra ko leker hamre liye khana chala gaya kyoki yaha self service thi.


Me abhi khana leker vapis aa raha tha to muje vaha tabel par 3 -4 ladke dikye diye jo neha or sneha ko ched rahe the or sapna ne guuse me aker ek ladke ke thappar de diya tha jo yaha ke mla ka beta tha.


Intro


Rahul- ye bahut kamina inshaan hai ye har ladki ko bas ek hi najar dekta hai abhi to iski age itni bhi nahi tab bhi ye haal hai

Niraj - ye bahut kamina inshan hai isne ladkiyo ki smulging and drugs and atankwadi logo se bhi mila hua hai .ye hamre area ka Mla tha iski wife iske inhi karno ki vajah se chod gayi thi or iski wife is kahani me koi role nahi hai to uska intro bhi nahi diya jaa raha hai.uska ek bada beta bhi uske bare me baat me batya jayega .

Rahul ke thappar parne se sabhi log ab vaha dek rahe the tab rahul bolta hai tumne bahut badi galti kar di ab tumhe yaha se koi bhi nahi bacha sakta vo apne dosto se bolta ki jaker mere gurad ko bula lao aaj in sabko uta le cahlte hai or batta hu rahul ke thappr lagne ka injaam.

Me ye sab dekhar man hi man has raha tha ki ab inka kya hoga inko rudra se bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta kyoki mere bagal me rudra abhi full gusse me tha bas use sirf mere bolne ki der thi vo meri tarf dekta hai tab me usse bolta ki apni magic shaktiyo ka upyog mat karna me bhi tumrhe sath hu dono milkar sambhal lenge.

Rudra - raj tumhe ane ki jarurt nahi inke liye to me akela hi kafi hu aisa khakr vo age ata hai or rahul ki garden pakdakr samne diwar ki tarf fek deta hai ye scene dekar uske dost to dar hi jate hai kyoki un sabme rahul bahut takatwar tha lekin usko bhi rudra ne easily fek diya tha rahul ki halat khrab ho jati hai vo badi msukil se khada hota or rudra ko dekhar bolta hai tu kon hai jo marne ko aa gaya.


Tab rudra bolta hai me tera kal hu abhi bhi samya hai chala jaa tab neha rahul se bolti ki rahul mene tumse kitni bar bol diye ki tum mere piche mat aya karo muje pasand nahi hai .

Rahul - tab rahul bolta hai ki neha tum meri ho is jism par mera hak hai or kisi ka nahi or itna sunte hi jaha me shant khada tha uske samne aa jata hu or ek jordar thappad laga deta hu jisme itni power thi ki 5 - 6 dath tutakr gir jate hai or uske kan me se bhu khun niklne lag jata hai jab tak uske guard bhi aa jate hai or apne rahul baba ka aise haal dekar sab ko gussa aa jata hai

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Update 7

Main- chalo ab sab jaldi se apna breaksfast khatm karo abhi morning ka show dek lenge vahi mall me lunch kar lenge or evening tak shoping karke aa jayenge

Badi sister - Raj me apne friends ko bhi bula leti hu vo bhi chal lenge

Main- thik hai bula lo but unse bol dena mujse thoda dur hi rahe hai.

Sneha - Raj tum kyo darte ho unse vo tumhe kha thodi jayegi or itna kahkar dono sister hasne lag jati hai

Intro

Ruchi - ye hamre father ke dost ki beti hai unke pita ka nam ajay singh hai or ma ka naam diya hai ye bhi khubsurat hai or apne raj ko pasand karti hai but raj usko kuch bhav hi nahi deta hai

Main- chalo sab jaldi se tayar ho jao me gadi niklwata hu 30 min me sabhi yaha hone chiye kyoki movie ka show 9.00 baje ka already 8 baj gaye hai.

Dad - beta aaj tum security ko bhi apne sath le jana accha rahega.

Main- dad hum enjoy karne jaa rahe koi war me nahi jaa rahe hai or muje ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai .

Choti mom - rahne dijiye apko to pata hai usko bilkul pasnad nahi hai or bacche apne mall me hi jaa rahe hai to tension mat lo.

Badi mom - ha sanjana sahi kah rahi hai jane do baccho ko aise hi or apna raj hai sabke sath tension karne ki jaruurt nahi vo apni sister ka khyal rak sakta hai.

Sabhi log tyar hoker aa jate hai or hum mall ke liye ravna ho jate hai hum do gadiyo me jaa rahe hai first car me to me or sneha and sapna the second me car me rudra ,neha and uski friend ruchi thi .

Hum sab mall me enter kar diye or me ticket lene chala gaya muje ticket lene me jayda time nahi laga kyoki ye mall meri choti maa ka hi tha.

Me ticket leker movie dekne chale gaye or movie acchi thi movie khtam huai tab hum sabhi ko bhook lag rahi thi to sabhi food court ki taraf chal diye jo second floor par tha.

Hum sabhi food court me pauche or vaha mene ek tabel par sabhi ko bitya or rudra ko leker hamre liye khana chala gaya kyoki yaha self service thi.


Me abhi khana leker vapis aa raha tha to muje vaha tabel par 3 -4 ladke dikye diye jo neha or sneha ko ched rahe the or sapna ne guuse me aker ek ladke ke thappar de diya tha jo yaha ke mla ka beta tha.


Intro


Rahul- ye bahut kamina inshaan hai ye har ladki ko bas ek hi najar dekta hai abhi to iski age itni bhi nahi tab bhi ye haal hai

Niraj - ye bahut kamina inshan hai isne ladkiyo ki smulging and drugs and atankwadi logo se bhi mila hua hai .ye hamre area ka Mla tha iski wife iske inhi karno ki vajah se chod gayi thi or iski wife is kahani me koi role nahi hai to uska intro bhi nahi diya jaa raha hai.uska ek bada beta bhi uske bare me baat me batya jayega .

Rahul ke thappar parne se sabhi log ab vaha dek rahe the tab rahul bolta hai tumne bahut badi galti kar di ab tumhe yaha se koi bhi nahi bacha sakta vo apne dosto se bolta ki jaker mere gurad ko bula lao aaj in sabko uta le cahlte hai or batta hu rahul ke thappr lagne ka injaam.

Me ye sab dekhar man hi man has raha tha ki ab inka kya hoga inko rudra se bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta kyoki mere bagal me rudra abhi full gusse me tha bas use sirf mere bolne ki der thi vo meri tarf dekta hai tab me usse bolta ki apni magic shaktiyo ka upyog mat karna me bhi tumrhe sath hu dono milkar sambhal lenge.

Rudra - raj tumhe ane ki jarurt nahi inke liye to me akela hi kafi hu aisa khakr vo age ata hai or rahul ki garden pakdakr samne diwar ki tarf fek deta hai ye scene dekar uske dost to dar hi jate hai kyoki un sabme rahul bahut takatwar tha lekin usko bhi rudra ne easily fek diya tha rahul ki halat khrab ho jati hai vo badi msukil se khada hota or rudra ko dekhar bolta hai tu kon hai jo marne ko aa gaya.


Tab rudra bolta hai me tera kal hu abhi bhi samya hai chala jaa tab neha rahul se bolti ki rahul mene tumse kitni bar bol diye ki tum mere piche mat aya karo muje pasand nahi hai .

Rahul - tab rahul bolta hai ki neha tum meri ho is jism par mera hak hai or kisi ka nahi or itna sunte hi jaha me shant khada tha uske samne aa jata hu or ek jordar thappad laga deta hu jisme itni power thi ki 5 - 6 dath tutakr gir jate hai or uske kan me se bhu khun niklne lag jata hai jab tak uske guard bhi aa jate hai or apne rahul baba ka aise haal dekar sab ko gussa aa jata hai

Continue ------------------------

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Update 7

Main- chalo ab sab jaldi se apna breaksfast khatm karo abhi morning ka show dek lenge vahi mall me lunch kar lenge or evening tak shoping karke aa jayenge

Badi sister - Raj me apne friends ko bhi bula leti hu vo bhi chal lenge

Main- thik hai bula lo but unse bol dena mujse thoda dur hi rahe hai.

Sneha - Raj tum kyo darte ho unse vo tumhe kha thodi jayegi or itna kahkar dono sister hasne lag jati hai

Intro

Ruchi - ye hamre father ke dost ki beti hai unke pita ka nam ajay singh hai or ma ka naam diya hai ye bhi khubsurat hai or apne raj ko pasand karti hai but raj usko kuch bhav hi nahi deta hai

Main- chalo sab jaldi se tayar ho jao me gadi niklwata hu 30 min me sabhi yaha hone chiye kyoki movie ka show 9.00 baje ka already 8 baj gaye hai.

Dad - beta aaj tum security ko bhi apne sath le jana accha rahega.

Main- dad hum enjoy karne jaa rahe koi war me nahi jaa rahe hai or muje ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai .

Choti mom - rahne dijiye apko to pata hai usko bilkul pasnad nahi hai or bacche apne mall me hi jaa rahe hai to tension mat lo.

Badi mom - ha sanjana sahi kah rahi hai jane do baccho ko aise hi or apna raj hai sabke sath tension karne ki jaruurt nahi vo apni sister ka khyal rak sakta hai.

Sabhi log tyar hoker aa jate hai or hum mall ke liye ravna ho jate hai hum do gadiyo me jaa rahe hai first car me to me or sneha and sapna the second me car me rudra ,neha and uski friend ruchi thi .

Hum sab mall me enter kar diye or me ticket lene chala gaya muje ticket lene me jayda time nahi laga kyoki ye mall meri choti maa ka hi tha.

Me ticket leker movie dekne chale gaye or movie acchi thi movie khtam huai tab hum sabhi ko bhook lag rahi thi to sabhi food court ki taraf chal diye jo second floor par tha.

Hum sabhi food court me pauche or vaha mene ek tabel par sabhi ko bitya or rudra ko leker hamre liye khana chala gaya kyoki yaha self service thi.


Me abhi khana leker vapis aa raha tha to muje vaha tabel par 3 -4 ladke dikye diye jo neha or sneha ko ched rahe the or sapna ne guuse me aker ek ladke ke thappar de diya tha jo yaha ke mla ka beta tha.


Intro


Rahul- ye bahut kamina inshaan hai ye har ladki ko bas ek hi najar dekta hai abhi to iski age itni bhi nahi tab bhi ye haal hai

Niraj - ye bahut kamina inshan hai isne ladkiyo ki smulging and drugs and atankwadi logo se bhi mila hua hai .ye hamre area ka Mla tha iski wife iske inhi karno ki vajah se chod gayi thi or iski wife is kahani me koi role nahi hai to uska intro bhi nahi diya jaa raha hai.uska ek bada beta bhi uske bare me baat me batya jayega .

Rahul ke thappar parne se sabhi log ab vaha dek rahe the tab rahul bolta hai tumne bahut badi galti kar di ab tumhe yaha se koi bhi nahi bacha sakta vo apne dosto se bolta ki jaker mere gurad ko bula lao aaj in sabko uta le cahlte hai or batta hu rahul ke thappr lagne ka injaam.

Me ye sab dekhar man hi man has raha tha ki ab inka kya hoga inko rudra se bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta kyoki mere bagal me rudra abhi full gusse me tha bas use sirf mere bolne ki der thi vo meri tarf dekta hai tab me usse bolta ki apni magic shaktiyo ka upyog mat karna me bhi tumrhe sath hu dono milkar sambhal lenge.

Rudra - raj tumhe ane ki jarurt nahi inke liye to me akela hi kafi hu aisa khakr vo age ata hai or rahul ki garden pakdakr samne diwar ki tarf fek deta hai ye scene dekar uske dost to dar hi jate hai kyoki un sabme rahul bahut takatwar tha lekin usko bhi rudra ne easily fek diya tha rahul ki halat khrab ho jati hai vo badi msukil se khada hota or rudra ko dekhar bolta hai tu kon hai jo marne ko aa gaya.


Tab rudra bolta hai me tera kal hu abhi bhi samya hai chala jaa tab neha rahul se bolti ki rahul mene tumse kitni bar bol diye ki tum mere piche mat aya karo muje pasand nahi hai .

Rahul - tab rahul bolta hai ki neha tum meri ho is jism par mera hak hai or kisi ka nahi or itna sunte hi jaha me shant khada tha uske samne aa jata hu or ek jordar thappad laga deta hu jisme itni power thi ki 5 - 6 dath tutakr gir jate hai or uske kan me se bhu khun niklne lag jata hai jab tak uske guard bhi aa jate hai or apne rahul baba ka aise haal dekar sab ko gussa aa jata hai

Continue ------------------------

Fight sence raat ke update me hi ayega or dosto review kam aa rahe hai abhi manti hu story thodi slow hai lekin abhi story build up ho rahi hai
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Update 7

Main- chalo ab sab jaldi se apna breaksfast khatm karo abhi morning ka show dek lenge vahi mall me lunch kar lenge or evening tak shoping karke aa jayenge

Badi sister - Raj me apne friends ko bhi bula leti hu vo bhi chal lenge

Main- thik hai bula lo but unse bol dena mujse thoda dur hi rahe hai.

Sneha - Raj tum kyo darte ho unse vo tumhe kha thodi jayegi or itna kahkar dono sister hasne lag jati hai

Intro

Ruchi - ye hamre father ke dost ki beti hai unke pita ka nam ajay singh hai or ma ka naam diya hai ye bhi khubsurat hai or apne raj ko pasand karti hai but raj usko kuch bhav hi nahi deta hai

Main- chalo sab jaldi se tayar ho jao me gadi niklwata hu 30 min me sabhi yaha hone chiye kyoki movie ka show 9.00 baje ka already 8 baj gaye hai.

Dad - beta aaj tum security ko bhi apne sath le jana accha rahega.

Main- dad hum enjoy karne jaa rahe koi war me nahi jaa rahe hai or muje ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai .

Choti mom - rahne dijiye apko to pata hai usko bilkul pasnad nahi hai or bacche apne mall me hi jaa rahe hai to tension mat lo.

Badi mom - ha sanjana sahi kah rahi hai jane do baccho ko aise hi or apna raj hai sabke sath tension karne ki jaruurt nahi vo apni sister ka khyal rak sakta hai.

Sabhi log tyar hoker aa jate hai or hum mall ke liye ravna ho jate hai hum do gadiyo me jaa rahe hai first car me to me or sneha and sapna the second me car me rudra ,neha and uski friend ruchi thi .

Hum sab mall me enter kar diye or me ticket lene chala gaya muje ticket lene me jayda time nahi laga kyoki ye mall meri choti maa ka hi tha.

Me ticket leker movie dekne chale gaye or movie acchi thi movie khtam huai tab hum sabhi ko bhook lag rahi thi to sabhi food court ki taraf chal diye jo second floor par tha.

Hum sabhi food court me pauche or vaha mene ek tabel par sabhi ko bitya or rudra ko leker hamre liye khana chala gaya kyoki yaha self service thi.


Me abhi khana leker vapis aa raha tha to muje vaha tabel par 3 -4 ladke dikye diye jo neha or sneha ko ched rahe the or sapna ne guuse me aker ek ladke ke thappar de diya tha jo yaha ke mla ka beta tha.


Intro


Rahul- ye bahut kamina inshaan hai ye har ladki ko bas ek hi najar dekta hai abhi to iski age itni bhi nahi tab bhi ye haal hai

Niraj - ye bahut kamina inshan hai isne ladkiyo ki smulging and drugs and atankwadi logo se bhi mila hua hai .ye hamre area ka Mla tha iski wife iske inhi karno ki vajah se chod gayi thi or iski wife is kahani me koi role nahi hai to uska intro bhi nahi diya jaa raha hai.uska ek bada beta bhi uske bare me baat me batya jayega .

Rahul ke thappar parne se sabhi log ab vaha dek rahe the tab rahul bolta hai tumne bahut badi galti kar di ab tumhe yaha se koi bhi nahi bacha sakta vo apne dosto se bolta ki jaker mere gurad ko bula lao aaj in sabko uta le cahlte hai or batta hu rahul ke thappr lagne ka injaam.

Me ye sab dekhar man hi man has raha tha ki ab inka kya hoga inko rudra se bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta kyoki mere bagal me rudra abhi full gusse me tha bas use sirf mere bolne ki der thi vo meri tarf dekta hai tab me usse bolta ki apni magic shaktiyo ka upyog mat karna me bhi tumrhe sath hu dono milkar sambhal lenge.

Rudra - raj tumhe ane ki jarurt nahi inke liye to me akela hi kafi hu aisa khakr vo age ata hai or rahul ki garden pakdakr samne diwar ki tarf fek deta hai ye scene dekar uske dost to dar hi jate hai kyoki un sabme rahul bahut takatwar tha lekin usko bhi rudra ne easily fek diya tha rahul ki halat khrab ho jati hai vo badi msukil se khada hota or rudra ko dekhar bolta hai tu kon hai jo marne ko aa gaya.


Tab rudra bolta hai me tera kal hu abhi bhi samya hai chala jaa tab neha rahul se bolti ki rahul mene tumse kitni bar bol diye ki tum mere piche mat aya karo muje pasand nahi hai .

Rahul - tab rahul bolta hai ki neha tum meri ho is jism par mera hak hai or kisi ka nahi or itna sunte hi jaha me shant khada tha uske samne aa jata hu or ek jordar thappad laga deta hu jisme itni power thi ki 5 - 6 dath tutakr gir jate hai or uske kan me se bhu khun niklne lag jata hai jab tak uske guard bhi aa jate hai or apne rahul baba ka aise haal dekar sab ko gussa aa jata hai

Continue ------------------------

Fight sence raat ke update me hi ayega or dosto review kam aa rahe hai abhi manti hu story thodi slow hai lekin abhi story build up ho rahi hai
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Main- chalo ab sab jaldi se apna breaksfast khatm karo abhi morning ka show dek lenge vahi mall me lunch kar lenge or evening tak shoping karke aa jayenge

Badi sister - Raj me apne friends ko bhi bula leti hu vo bhi chal lenge

Main- thik hai bula lo but unse bol dena mujse thoda dur hi rahe hai.

Sneha - Raj tum kyo darte ho unse vo tumhe kha thodi jayegi or itna kahkar dono sister hasne lag jati hai

Intro

Ruchi - ye hamre father ke dost ki beti hai unke pita ka nam ajay singh hai or ma ka naam diya hai ye bhi khubsurat hai or apne raj ko pasand karti hai but raj usko kuch bhav hi nahi deta hai

Main- chalo sab jaldi se tayar ho jao me gadi niklwata hu 30 min me sabhi yaha hone chiye kyoki movie ka show 9.00 baje ka already 8 baj gaye hai.

Dad - beta aaj tum security ko bhi apne sath le jana accha rahega.

Main- dad hum enjoy karne jaa rahe koi war me nahi jaa rahe hai or muje ye sab bilkul bhi pasand nahi hai .

Choti mom - rahne dijiye apko to pata hai usko bilkul pasnad nahi hai or bacche apne mall me hi jaa rahe hai to tension mat lo.

Badi mom - ha sanjana sahi kah rahi hai jane do baccho ko aise hi or apna raj hai sabke sath tension karne ki jaruurt nahi vo apni sister ka khyal rak sakta hai.

Sabhi log tyar hoker aa jate hai or hum mall ke liye ravna ho jate hai hum do gadiyo me jaa rahe hai first car me to me or sneha and sapna the second me car me rudra ,neha and uski friend ruchi thi .

Hum sab mall me enter kar diye or me ticket lene chala gaya muje ticket lene me jayda time nahi laga kyoki ye mall meri choti maa ka hi tha.

Me ticket leker movie dekne chale gaye or movie acchi thi movie khtam huai tab hum sabhi ko bhook lag rahi thi to sabhi food court ki taraf chal diye jo second floor par tha.

Hum sabhi food court me pauche or vaha mene ek tabel par sabhi ko bitya or rudra ko leker hamre liye khana chala gaya kyoki yaha self service thi.


Me abhi khana leker vapis aa raha tha to muje vaha tabel par 3 -4 ladke dikye diye jo neha or sneha ko ched rahe the or sapna ne guuse me aker ek ladke ke thappar de diya tha jo yaha ke mla ka beta tha.


Intro


Rahul- ye bahut kamina inshaan hai ye har ladki ko bas ek hi najar dekta hai abhi to iski age itni bhi nahi tab bhi ye haal hai

Niraj - ye bahut kamina inshan hai isne ladkiyo ki smulging and drugs and atankwadi logo se bhi mila hua hai .ye hamre area ka Mla tha iski wife iske inhi karno ki vajah se chod gayi thi or iski wife is kahani me koi role nahi hai to uska intro bhi nahi diya jaa raha hai.uska ek bada beta bhi uske bare me baat me batya jayega .

Rahul ke thappar parne se sabhi log ab vaha dek rahe the tab rahul bolta hai tumne bahut badi galti kar di ab tumhe yaha se koi bhi nahi bacha sakta vo apne dosto se bolta ki jaker mere gurad ko bula lao aaj in sabko uta le cahlte hai or batta hu rahul ke thappr lagne ka injaam.

Me ye sab dekhar man hi man has raha tha ki ab inka kya hoga inko rudra se bhagwan bhi nahi bacha sakta kyoki mere bagal me rudra abhi full gusse me tha bas use sirf mere bolne ki der thi vo meri tarf dekta hai tab me usse bolta ki apni magic shaktiyo ka upyog mat karna me bhi tumrhe sath hu dono milkar sambhal lenge.

Rudra - raj tumhe ane ki jarurt nahi inke liye to me akela hi kafi hu aisa khakr vo age ata hai or rahul ki garden pakdakr samne diwar ki tarf fek deta hai ye scene dekar uske dost to dar hi jate hai kyoki un sabme rahul bahut takatwar tha lekin usko bhi rudra ne easily fek diya tha rahul ki halat khrab ho jati hai vo badi msukil se khada hota or rudra ko dekhar bolta hai tu kon hai jo marne ko aa gaya.


Tab rudra bolta hai me tera kal hu abhi bhi samya hai chala jaa tab neha rahul se bolti ki rahul mene tumse kitni bar bol diye ki tum mere piche mat aya karo muje pasand nahi hai .

Rahul - tab rahul bolta hai ki neha tum meri ho is jism par mera hak hai or kisi ka nahi or itna sunte hi jaha me shant khada tha uske samne aa jata hu or ek jordar thappad laga deta hu jisme itni power thi ki 5 - 6 dath tutakr gir jate hai or uske kan me se bhu khun niklne lag jata hai jab tak uske guard bhi aa jate hai or apne rahul baba ka aise haal dekar sab ko gussa aa jata hai

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