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Phir hum sab bas me baith gaye me mom ke bagal me jaker baith gaya muje pata tha varna ye teeno mere pass batine ke liye jid karengi. Lekin sapna ko in sab cheez se farak hi kaha padta hai vo bhi mere sath mom ke pass hi aa gayi.
Meri god me apna sir rakar lait gayi. Or boli bhai kuch games khele na aise to safar bor ho jayega.
Phir hum sab milkar antakshari khelne lag gaye. (Maine ye part hata faltu me boaring ho jata) antakshari me hume khub maja aya or hume time ka pata hi nahi chala kab 6 ghnte nikal gaye. Phir dad ne bus ko ek dhabe par rukwa di. Kyoki humne hotel ka khana to bahut khaya tha to dad ne socha kuch alag khilya jaye baccho ko.
Hum sab bas ne utar gaye yaha se shimla ab 2 hours ka or rasta tha. Hum sab chalkar ek khat par jaker baith gaye apko to road side dhabo par khat hi bichi huai hoti hai.
Vo dhaba ke malik hamre pass aye hai or bola ki bolo baccho kya khana hai. Tab sapna ne bola ki muje pizza chiye. Tab dad bole ki beta yaha ye cheez nahi milti hai.
Phir dad ne bola apke dhaba ko jo best item hai vo le ayiye. Vahi 4 5 truck driver bhi khana kha rahe the jo hamri taraf hi dek rahe the. Unme se ek driver bola ki or bahi itni mal kaha se leker aa raha hai. Ab me or dad kuch bolte usse pehle hi rudra ne us bande ko utkar samne road par phek diya ye sab itna fast hua tha ki kisi ko ye bhi pata nahi chala ki kab rudra vaha se uta or kab us bande ko road par phek diya.
Rudra bolta hai or kis kis ko apne hath per nahi tudwane hai to chupchap baithkar khana kha lo. Dhabe ka malik bhi unke pass aa gaya or bola beta chodo ye to sab badmas hai or unse vo dhaba vala malik ne bhi bahut sunya.
Phir dad ne rudra ko bulya beta aise har baat par gussa nahi hote thoda apne gusse par bhi kabu pao.
Phir hamra khana aa gaya. Kahne me aloo ke parthne, dal makhni, sahi paneer or veg riatha or ek ek gilas lassi ke aa gaye.
Lassi ke itne bade gilas dekar sapna boli bhai isme kya hai or itna bada gilas kon peeta hai. Maine bola ki or kon peeyega hum hi peeyenge.
Hum sabne khana khya really me khana bahut hi tasty tha. Hum sabne apni limit se jayda hi kha liya or vo lassi ka gilas sirf dad or me or rudra hu khatam kar paye.
Nisha boli ki dad really me kahan bahut hi tasty tha aisa taste muje 5 star hotel me bhi nahi mila. Dad bolte hai ki beta ye sab fresh cheez use karte hai or inme inka payar bhi hota hai isliye inka khana hamesa hi tasty hota.
Humne bill chukar vapis bas me baith gaye ab safar hamra 2 hours ka or bacha tha or sabne khana bahut kha liya tha to sabko need ane lag gayi. Tab sapna mere pass aker boli bhiya muje need aa rahi chalo chalar sote hai.
Bus me hamre sabke sone ki pura intzam tha me or sapna ek seat par aa kr so gaye. Sapna kisi chote bacche ki tarah mujse chipak kar so gayi. Tab misha neha or sneha ke pass hi baithi huai thi.
Tab vo bolti hai ki neha ye sapna abhi bhi apne bahi ke pass hi soti hai kya. Tab nisha bolti hai ki use apne bahi se bahut jayda payar karti hain vo hamesa apne bahi ke sath hi soti hai. Yadi bahi kisi kaam ki vajah se kahi jana hota hai to vo bhi raat ko kisi bhi codntion me unka ana hi hota hai kyoki sapna phir ghar me hangama kar deti hai.
Misha bhi ye sunkar shock ho jati hai. Phir rudra bhi unki baat sun raha tha or vo bhi bolta hai ki pehle to hum sabhi bahi bahan hi unke pass sote the vo to dad ne sabke room alag alag karwaye. Lekin sapna ka room hote hue bhi vo apne bahi ke room me soti hai or use koi kuch bol nahi sakta kyoki raj ne sabse bol rakha hai uska jo man vo kare use koi bhi datega nahi.
Sneha bolti ki tum sab baat karo me bhi bahi ke pass ho chali. Sneha itna bolkar vo bhi raj ke pass hi chali jati hai sone. Tab neha misha se bolti hai ki tum dono batau tumara kya chakkrr chal raha hai. Neha ki baat sunkar dono thoda shock ho jate hai or misha to sarmane lag jati hai.
Rudra hi bolta hai ki didi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Neha bolti hai ki muje pagal samaj rakha hai kya dono ne maine dekha tha hotel par kaise misha tumhe gur gur kar dek rahi thi kr tum use isharo me usse maffi mang rahe the.
Tab rudra sochta hai ki didi ko batne me hi fayda hai or bolta hai ki mai misha se payar karta hu or misha bhi.
Neha bahut khus hk jati hai or bolti hai ki tum dono sach me pagal ho or yadi tum dono payar karte ho to pass me baito or enjoy karo. Isme darne ki kya baat hai.
Neha bhi itna bolkar raj ke pass sone ko chali jati hai. Tab misha bolti hai ki tumne didi ko kyo batya ab vo sabko bata degi.
Tab rudra bolta hai ki aise bhi sabko pata chal hi jana hai or humhe darne ki koi baat nahi hai humara payar sab accept kar lenge.
Misha bolti hai ki tumarha bahi sab se bahut payar karta hai deko tumarhi didi ne raj ko kone me hi gusa diya. Or vo teeno aram se so rahi hai. Tab rudra bolti hai ki tumne bahi ka sirf payar hi deka kabhi gussa bhi dekna jab unko gussa aata na to sirf sapna hi hai jo unka gussa shant karwa deti hai.
Udhar vikarm or misha ke dad bhi baat kar hi rahe the unhe bhi badi khusi ho rahi thi ki misha bhi baccho me gul mil gayi hai. Tab misha ka dad bolte hai ki vikarm me pehle tumarha india ka offer nahi manta lekin tumne jo mujse vada kiya tha ki misha ko bhi yaha accha lagega.
Kyoki misha ke dad ko misha ki tension thi ki vo india me kaise rahengi. Kyoki vaha ka environment alag hota hai. Ab unki sari tension hi khatam ho gayi thi.
Vikram bhi khus tha ki uska dost ko ab koi tension nahi hai or rudra ke liye misha se behtar koi ladki nahi ho sakti hai. Bas vo ye hi soach rahe the ki misha or rudra apas me ek dusre ko pasand kar le. Tab vo apne dost se misha ka hath mang lega. Lekin abhi usme bahut time hai.
Idhar sanjan or rasmi bhi apni hi bato me lagi huai thi. Tab sanjana bolti hai deko un teeno ko raj ko sone hi nahi de rahi hai itni jagah hone par bhi sabhi uske pass gayi sone ko itne bade ho gaye pata nahi kab akal ayegi inme or inko kuch bolo to phir raj naraj ho jata. Tab rashmi bolti hai ki rahne do unko varna inko bhi pata chala na to hum dono hi kher nahi kyoki inko to abhi bhi ye bacche hi lagte hai.
Isi tarah kab 2 ghnte beet jate hai pata hi nahi chalta or hamri bas hamre hotel ke samne aaker ruk jati hai dad hum sabko utkar bolte hai ki chalo abhi jisko sona vo hotel room me jaker hi sona hum shimla pauch chuke hai.
Phir hum sab jab bahar ate hai to bahat ka mausan bada hi manmohak ho raha tha or halki halki snow gir rahi thi.
Hum sab is drsiya ko dekar hamri sabki need ab ud chuki thi. Sapna bolti hai bahi kya mast jagah hai chalo hum gumne chalte hai. Maine bola nahi abhi nahi pehle room me chalo vaha se ready hoker phir chalnege.
Maine sab information already online le li hai. To muje pata hai kon kon si jagah gumne layak hai. Hum sab room me chal diye ek me room mom dad ka ek room sapna or mera. Ek rudra ka or ek me neha or sneha or misha ruke.
Jab se maine shimla me kadam rakha tha tab se muje koi cheez apne pass kheech rahi thi. Maine grute ko man me yaad kiya tab grute bola bahi aap jo anubhav kar rahe ho vo muje bhi ho raha hai. Lekin me uski shakti shrot ka pata nahi laga paya hu. Hume raat me hi chalna hoga use dundne.
Maine bhi socha ye bhi sahi baat hai abhi raat me hi pata chalega aisi kon si cheez hai jo apne pass bulana cha rahi hai. Kyoki ye jo cheez thi vo meri shakti nahi thi.
Udhar jungel me ek girl ma parvti ki murthi ke age tapsaya me leen thi. Uske chehre par itna tej tha ki yadi koi apni ankho se dek le to vo andha ho jayega.
Tab ma parvati parkat ho jati hai or bolti hai ki putri Naina apki tapsya safal huai.
Intro
Naina - ye indra dev ki beti hai. Ye apne hero ki 7 patniyo me se ek hai. Or ye apne hero ki shaktiyo ka kendra bhi hai ab pehle nahi thi kyoki pichle janam me inka milan nahi ho saka tha.
Tab naina ne apni ankhe kholi or apne samne ma parvti ko dekar naman kiya. Tab ma parvti bolti beti tumarhi partiksha khatm huai tumrhe swami ab shimla padhar chuke hai ab tum kabhi bhi unke darshan kar sakti ho.
Tab naina bolti hai ma vo sab to theek hai lekin vo apna vada yaad hoga unko jo unhone muje unke pichle janam me diya tha. Tab ma bolti hai beti tu uski chinta mat kar tumhe dekar unko kuch cheeze yaad aa jayegi. Lekin tumhe unhe unka pichla janam ke bare me kuch bhi nahi batana kyoki abhi uska samya nahi aya hai.
Ma jaisi apko agya me unki ek baar surat dek sakti ho. Tab ma ne samne jalkund me mera chera dika diya. Muje is roop me dekar naina mohit ho gayi. Or boli swaymi me aapka intzaar or nahi hota please muje aker apne gale se laga lo.
Udhar muje jab naina ne is tarah yaad kiya to mera dil me dard ut gaya muje aisa laga koi bahut peeda me hai meri vajah se. Maine mahdev ko yaad karke bola jo koi bhi abhi meri vajah se duki ho parbhu usse himaat dena me jald uske pass aaunga.
Vishnu lok me
Is waqt nardji ne parbhu ke charno me baithe hue the tab parbhu bolte hai ki ab samya aa gaya tumhe raj ka margdarshan karne ka kyoki ab use kabhi bhi magic school me jana hi hoga kyoki uski majil use vahi milegi. Lekin pehle tumhe jo earth me rakshak chupe hue unka anat karwana padega kyoki unka jagne ka samya bhi ho gaya.
Naradji bolte hai parbhu jaisi apki agya me abhi hi earth par jaker aaj raj ke sapno me aker usko bata dunga ki usse kaise apni dusri shakti milegi or uska age kya kya karna hai.
Naradji itna bolkar anterdhyan ho gaye or shimla ke janglo me parkat ho gaye. Kyoki unko bhi pata chal gaya tha ki 4 din baad amavasya hai. Tab us dushta ki sena bhi jagirt ho jayegi.
Kailash lok me
Mahadev ma parvti se bolte hai ki mil ayiye apne priya bhakt se. Tab ma parvti bolti hai ki ha kyoki usne bahut tapasya li or ab use uska fal milne ki bari hai. Ab apka ansh jald se jald naina se mil jaye.
Tab mahadev bolte hai ki apko to pata hai isme ab me kuch nahi kar skata hu ab raj ke niyati raj ke hato me hi hai or raj ke nirya hi use sabit karnge ki hum tridevo ne jo uske liye balidan diye hai vo sab sahi hai ya galat.
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Phir hum sab bas me baith gaye me mom ke bagal me jaker baith gaya muje pata tha varna ye teeno mere pass batine ke liye jid karengi. Lekin sapna ko in sab cheez se farak hi kaha padta hai vo bhi mere sath mom ke pass hi aa gayi.
Meri god me apna sir rakar lait gayi. Or boli bhai kuch games khele na aise to safar bor ho jayega.
Phir hum sab milkar antakshari khelne lag gaye. (Maine ye part hata faltu me boaring ho jata) antakshari me hume khub maja aya or hume time ka pata hi nahi chala kab 6 ghnte nikal gaye. Phir dad ne bus ko ek dhabe par rukwa di. Kyoki humne hotel ka khana to bahut khaya tha to dad ne socha kuch alag khilya jaye baccho ko.
Hum sab bas ne utar gaye yaha se shimla ab 2 hours ka or rasta tha. Hum sab chalkar ek khat par jaker baith gaye apko to road side dhabo par khat hi bichi huai hoti hai.
Vo dhaba ke malik hamre pass aye hai or bola ki bolo baccho kya khana hai. Tab sapna ne bola ki muje pizza chiye. Tab dad bole ki beta yaha ye cheez nahi milti hai.
Phir dad ne bola apke dhaba ko jo best item hai vo le ayiye. Vahi 4 5 truck driver bhi khana kha rahe the jo hamri taraf hi dek rahe the. Unme se ek driver bola ki or bahi itni mal kaha se leker aa raha hai. Ab me or dad kuch bolte usse pehle hi rudra ne us bande ko utkar samne road par phek diya ye sab itna fast hua tha ki kisi ko ye bhi pata nahi chala ki kab rudra vaha se uta or kab us bande ko road par phek diya.
Rudra bolta hai or kis kis ko apne hath per nahi tudwane hai to chupchap baithkar khana kha lo. Dhabe ka malik bhi unke pass aa gaya or bola beta chodo ye to sab badmas hai or unse vo dhaba vala malik ne bhi bahut sunya.
Phir dad ne rudra ko bulya beta aise har baat par gussa nahi hote thoda apne gusse par bhi kabu pao.
Phir hamra khana aa gaya. Kahne me aloo ke parthne, dal makhni, sahi paneer or veg riatha or ek ek gilas lassi ke aa gaye.
Lassi ke itne bade gilas dekar sapna boli bhai isme kya hai or itna bada gilas kon peeta hai. Maine bola ki or kon peeyega hum hi peeyenge.
Hum sabne khana khya really me khana bahut hi tasty tha. Hum sabne apni limit se jayda hi kha liya or vo lassi ka gilas sirf dad or me or rudra hu khatam kar paye.
Nisha boli ki dad really me kahan bahut hi tasty tha aisa taste muje 5 star hotel me bhi nahi mila. Dad bolte hai ki beta ye sab fresh cheez use karte hai or inme inka payar bhi hota hai isliye inka khana hamesa hi tasty hota.
Humne bill chukar vapis bas me baith gaye ab safar hamra 2 hours ka or bacha tha or sabne khana bahut kha liya tha to sabko need ane lag gayi. Tab sapna mere pass aker boli bhiya muje need aa rahi chalo chalar sote hai.
Bus me hamre sabke sone ki pura intzam tha me or sapna ek seat par aa kr so gaye. Sapna kisi chote bacche ki tarah mujse chipak kar so gayi. Tab misha neha or sneha ke pass hi baithi huai thi.
Tab vo bolti hai ki neha ye sapna abhi bhi apne bahi ke pass hi soti hai kya. Tab nisha bolti hai ki use apne bahi se bahut jayda payar karti hain vo hamesa apne bahi ke sath hi soti hai. Yadi bahi kisi kaam ki vajah se kahi jana hota hai to vo bhi raat ko kisi bhi codntion me unka ana hi hota hai kyoki sapna phir ghar me hangama kar deti hai.
Misha bhi ye sunkar shock ho jati hai. Phir rudra bhi unki baat sun raha tha or vo bhi bolta hai ki pehle to hum sabhi bahi bahan hi unke pass sote the vo to dad ne sabke room alag alag karwaye. Lekin sapna ka room hote hue bhi vo apne bahi ke room me soti hai or use koi kuch bol nahi sakta kyoki raj ne sabse bol rakha hai uska jo man vo kare use koi bhi datega nahi.
Sneha bolti ki tum sab baat karo me bhi bahi ke pass ho chali. Sneha itna bolkar vo bhi raj ke pass hi chali jati hai sone. Tab neha misha se bolti hai ki tum dono batau tumara kya chakkrr chal raha hai. Neha ki baat sunkar dono thoda shock ho jate hai or misha to sarmane lag jati hai.
Rudra hi bolta hai ki didi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Neha bolti hai ki muje pagal samaj rakha hai kya dono ne maine dekha tha hotel par kaise misha tumhe gur gur kar dek rahi thi kr tum use isharo me usse maffi mang rahe the.
Tab rudra sochta hai ki didi ko batne me hi fayda hai or bolta hai ki mai misha se payar karta hu or misha bhi.
Neha bahut khus hk jati hai or bolti hai ki tum dono sach me pagal ho or yadi tum dono payar karte ho to pass me baito or enjoy karo. Isme darne ki kya baat hai.
Neha bhi itna bolkar raj ke pass sone ko chali jati hai. Tab misha bolti hai ki tumne didi ko kyo batya ab vo sabko bata degi.
Tab rudra bolta hai ki aise bhi sabko pata chal hi jana hai or humhe darne ki koi baat nahi hai humara payar sab accept kar lenge.
Misha bolti hai ki tumarha bahi sab se bahut payar karta hai deko tumarhi didi ne raj ko kone me hi gusa diya. Or vo teeno aram se so rahi hai. Tab rudra bolti hai ki tumne bahi ka sirf payar hi deka kabhi gussa bhi dekna jab unko gussa aata na to sirf sapna hi hai jo unka gussa shant karwa deti hai.
Udhar vikarm or misha ke dad bhi baat kar hi rahe the unhe bhi badi khusi ho rahi thi ki misha bhi baccho me gul mil gayi hai. Tab misha ka dad bolte hai ki vikarm me pehle tumarha india ka offer nahi manta lekin tumne jo mujse vada kiya tha ki misha ko bhi yaha accha lagega.
Kyoki misha ke dad ko misha ki tension thi ki vo india me kaise rahengi. Kyoki vaha ka environment alag hota hai. Ab unki sari tension hi khatam ho gayi thi.
Vikram bhi khus tha ki uska dost ko ab koi tension nahi hai or rudra ke liye misha se behtar koi ladki nahi ho sakti hai. Bas vo ye hi soach rahe the ki misha or rudra apas me ek dusre ko pasand kar le. Tab vo apne dost se misha ka hath mang lega. Lekin abhi usme bahut time hai.
Idhar sanjan or rasmi bhi apni hi bato me lagi huai thi. Tab sanjana bolti hai deko un teeno ko raj ko sone hi nahi de rahi hai itni jagah hone par bhi sabhi uske pass gayi sone ko itne bade ho gaye pata nahi kab akal ayegi inme or inko kuch bolo to phir raj naraj ho jata. Tab rashmi bolti hai ki rahne do unko varna inko bhi pata chala na to hum dono hi kher nahi kyoki inko to abhi bhi ye bacche hi lagte hai.
Isi tarah kab 2 ghnte beet jate hai pata hi nahi chalta or hamri bas hamre hotel ke samne aaker ruk jati hai dad hum sabko utkar bolte hai ki chalo abhi jisko sona vo hotel room me jaker hi sona hum shimla pauch chuke hai.
Phir hum sab jab bahar ate hai to bahat ka mausan bada hi manmohak ho raha tha or halki halki snow gir rahi thi.
Hum sab is drsiya ko dekar hamri sabki need ab ud chuki thi. Sapna bolti hai bahi kya mast jagah hai chalo hum gumne chalte hai. Maine bola nahi abhi nahi pehle room me chalo vaha se ready hoker phir chalnege.
Maine sab information already online le li hai. To muje pata hai kon kon si jagah gumne layak hai. Hum sab room me chal diye ek me room mom dad ka ek room sapna or mera. Ek rudra ka or ek me neha or sneha or misha ruke.
Jab se maine shimla me kadam rakha tha tab se muje koi cheez apne pass kheech rahi thi. Maine grute ko man me yaad kiya tab grute bola bahi aap jo anubhav kar rahe ho vo muje bhi ho raha hai. Lekin me uski shakti shrot ka pata nahi laga paya hu. Hume raat me hi chalna hoga use dundne.
Maine bhi socha ye bhi sahi baat hai abhi raat me hi pata chalega aisi kon si cheez hai jo apne pass bulana cha rahi hai. Kyoki ye jo cheez thi vo meri shakti nahi thi.
Udhar jungel me ek girl ma parvti ki murthi ke age tapsaya me leen thi. Uske chehre par itna tej tha ki yadi koi apni ankho se dek le to vo andha ho jayega.
Tab ma parvati parkat ho jati hai or bolti hai ki putri Naina apki tapsya safal huai.
Intro
Naina - ye indra dev ki beti hai. Ye apne hero ki 7 patniyo me se ek hai. Or ye apne hero ki shaktiyo ka kendra bhi hai ab pehle nahi thi kyoki pichle janam me inka milan nahi ho saka tha.
Tab naina ne apni ankhe kholi or apne samne ma parvti ko dekar naman kiya. Tab ma parvti bolti beti tumarhi partiksha khatm huai tumrhe swami ab shimla padhar chuke hai ab tum kabhi bhi unke darshan kar sakti ho.
Tab naina bolti hai ma vo sab to theek hai lekin vo apna vada yaad hoga unko jo unhone muje unke pichle janam me diya tha. Tab ma bolti hai beti tu uski chinta mat kar tumhe dekar unko kuch cheeze yaad aa jayegi. Lekin tumhe unhe unka pichla janam ke bare me kuch bhi nahi batana kyoki abhi uska samya nahi aya hai.
Ma jaisi apko agya me unki ek baar surat dek sakti ho. Tab ma ne samne jalkund me mera chera dika diya. Muje is roop me dekar naina mohit ho gayi. Or boli swaymi me aapka intzaar or nahi hota please muje aker apne gale se laga lo.
Udhar muje jab naina ne is tarah yaad kiya to mera dil me dard ut gaya muje aisa laga koi bahut peeda me hai meri vajah se. Maine mahdev ko yaad karke bola jo koi bhi abhi meri vajah se duki ho parbhu usse himaat dena me jald uske pass aaunga.
Vishnu lok me
Is waqt nardji ne parbhu ke charno me baithe hue the tab parbhu bolte hai ki ab samya aa gaya tumhe raj ka margdarshan karne ka kyoki ab use kabhi bhi magic school me jana hi hoga kyoki uski majil use vahi milegi. Lekin pehle tumhe jo earth me rakshak chupe hue unka anat karwana padega kyoki unka jagne ka samya bhi ho gaya.
Naradji bolte hai parbhu jaisi apki agya me abhi hi earth par jaker aaj raj ke sapno me aker usko bata dunga ki usse kaise apni dusri shakti milegi or uska age kya kya karna hai.
Naradji itna bolkar anterdhyan ho gaye or shimla ke janglo me parkat ho gaye. Kyoki unko bhi pata chal gaya tha ki 4 din baad amavasya hai. Tab us dushta ki sena bhi jagirt ho jayegi.
Kailash lok me
Mahadev ma parvti se bolte hai ki mil ayiye apne priya bhakt se. Tab ma parvti bolti hai ki ha kyoki usne bahut tapasya li or ab use uska fal milne ki bari hai. Ab apka ansh jald se jald naina se mil jaye.
Tab mahadev bolte hai ki apko to pata hai isme ab me kuch nahi kar skata hu ab raj ke niyati raj ke hato me hi hai or raj ke nirya hi use sabit karnge ki hum tridevo ne jo uske liye balidan diye hai vo sab sahi hai ya galat.
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