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Adultery Dushman Ka Badla(दुश्मन का बदला)

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Khan hijab khan

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Bhai aap hi honge aise jo apne pariwar ki chudayi dekh sakta hai......ham gav dehat ke log hai apni ijjat ke khatir jaan dete bhi hai aur lete bhi hai......

Bhai bf hona alag bat hai agar samne wo aisa karte pakde Jay to ya wahi mar jayenge ya us band ko maar denge.....

Bhai padne aur karne me bahut fark hota hai yadi har manusya kitab ko hi follow kare to ye duniya kitabo se aage
na ja paati

Ye aap ki baat sahi hai ki jis bahan ko wo haste khelte dekha hai aur wah itne bade aadmi ke saath sex kar rahi hai to us aadmi ko maar kar use ye jataa de ki wo jo kar rahi hai wo uski nadani hai.....us admi ko uske samne maar Dene ke baad wo khud dar jayegi or usko Ghar le jakar samjhaye ki jo tu kar rahi hai wo galat hai tab Naa Mane to usse puchho wo chahti kya hai yadi wo sex hi chahti hai to uski Saadi kar do.....baad me kuchh din log tane marenge ki abhi bado ki Saadi hi nahi huyi aur choti ki Saadi kar di.....tab aapke paas uska jawab hoga wo galat line me jaa rahi hai...yadi aapko dusro ka dar bhi lag raha hai ki log is baat par taana marenge to us sex need ko aap usse puchho kar khud hi pura karo.....kyo uske bhai ke paas lund nahi hai.. us samay us bande ko maar bhi de to kisi ko kuchh pata nahi chalega......jab bhai sabhi shadyantr jaan raha hai uske baad galat karte pakda jaaye to maar dena hi sahi hai......yadi uske shadyantr ke baare me nahi jaanta aur yadi samne se nahi dekhta to alag baat hai......

Bhai aap writer ho...... kuchh bhi likh sakte ho........

Kuchh logo ki fitrat hoti hai jaisa apne hote hai waisa hi dusro ko bhi samjhane lagte hai

Aur sayad aap ke saath aisa hua ho is liye itna safai de rahe ho.....

Bhai yahi to mai aap ko samjha raha hu baat tab badhegi jab aap ye sab dekhkar chup rahoge......kyoki Ravi ki maa to ye sab jaanti nahi to dobara unki mulakat jarur hogi ali aur uske baap se tab Ravi ki maa jaroor kuchh bolegi aur usi samay ali ya ali baap jaroor ye bol denge ki meri or dekhne se apne betio ko sambalo ya puri tarah se open hi bol de ki teri beti ke saath aisa kiya waisa Kiya....tab beijjati hogi.....

Yadi usi samay use maar diya to koi baat bahar aayegi hi nahi......to beijjati ka koi sawal hi nahi....

Fir aap bahan ko achhi tarah samjha sakte ho......yadi aap coockold ho to baat hi khatam ki apne pariwar ki chudayi dusaro ke saath dekhkar aap khud khush ho rahe....

Aap mere baat me sirf ek Kami nikal sakte ho wo hai incest waali.......jab koi rasta nahi to Ghar ki baat Ghar me.....yahi upay bachega Ravi ke paas.......kyoki sab jante hue bhi chup hai.....kyoki kuchh galat nahi hua hua bhi to dekha nahi

Aap writer ho mai writero ki bahut ijjat karta hu...
Waise story bahut mast hai lekin Ravi ko nahi dekhna chahiye tha yadi dekh liya to uska badla jarori hai hai yadi nahi dekha hota ho koi baat hi nahi hoti......

Yadi Ravi coockold bhi hota to story ekdam sahi thi......

Baaki aap ki marji....... Thankyou......mere comments ka reply Dene ke liye lekin iska bhi reply dijiyega jaroor kyoki reply Dene se samne waale ki mansikta ka andaja aaram se lagaya ja sakta hai....ki wo samne waala kis pravritti ka hai...... Thanks writer sahiba.....
sukriya


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Jese lage vese padho na achi Lage to chup hokar nikal lo
 

Khan hijab khan

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Ravi ko pehele humiliated karo per baad me usko badla bhi leni chahiye ese ap ki story bohat achi he ap bohat ache likhate he per ese story bus ek line me chalke baad me boring ho sakti he ager ravi bohat humiliation ke baad bhi badla nahi lega to uska koi motive hi nahi rahega kahani bus ese hi khatam ho jayegi isliye ap pehele ravi ko humiliation karo per baad me usko ali uske maa behn sabse badla leni chahiye ise story me humiliation ke sath ek motive bhi rahega
sukriya


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Ali ke parivar me un dono ke alawa koyi mene batata hi nhi aap ise ese dekho vo aurat nichi jaat walo ko kuch nhi samjhati thi fir dusre dhram walo ko kya hi samjhegi vo dusro ko un niche jaat walo se baat karne se rokti thi yani wo unhe humiliation karati thi kya unhe kisi se koyi baat karane ka bhi hak nhi kyoki vo nichi jaat se h aslam or ali unhe ye ehsaas dikha rahe bejat karane pe kesa mehsus hota h
 

Khan hijab khan

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Bhai tu itna senti kyu ho rha story achhi lagi to mutt mar warna dusre bi writer h koi jor nhi kisi pe .....yha sab story par story par mutt Marne ata h ya ungali karne ati h .....har kisi ko itna Dil se nhi lete ..... Wo writer ki icha wo kaise story likhta h... kyu story likhne acho acho ki gand phat jati h ..to jaise bi writer ki icha h likhne do ....Hume pasand ho to pado warna dusri story jindabad
sukriya


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Pehle to aapka bahut bahut sukriya
Aaj aapki wajah se hi likh payi varna isne Mera dimag kharab kar diya tha sach me jab kisi or kahani ke lekhak ke sath esa hota tha to sab bolte the egnor kar lekin Aaj jab Mera sath esa huwa to sach me dimag bilkul likhane nhi deta
Aapki wajah aaj ye or kal wala update likh payi hu
Kahani ko apne se jodkar na padha bas maje ke liye padhana chahiye
 

Khan hijab khan

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Thank you writer madam mai aap se yahi ummid kar raha tha.....

Aur story ko maine galat nahi kaha jo aap likhi ho uske baad ka Ravi ka reaction kya hoga is baare me maine likha tha......apko maine galat nahi bola.....

Aur jaha tak mera mutth marne ki baat hai to maine aaj tak mutth nahi maara.....aur jaha tak lund ki baat hai to mera naam hi kaafi hai.....use dekh aur padh kar aap khood andaja laga lengi....aur mai aaj tak vergin hu....mai nahi chahta meri virginity mere hatho kharab ho.....ye stories to mai is liye padhta hu ki meri hone waali wife ko wo har khushi du jisse use ye na lage ki mai kisi bhi prakar se kamjor hu....

Reply Dene ke liye Thank you.......
sukriya


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