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Chapter 19 (soon!)
Things Left Unsaid

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Nahi ravisha hai 🙃🙃
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Woh toh pata hai lekin...naye readers ke liye spoil nhi karte...waise bhi woh har page ke top pe rheta hai status isliye 😴
I know ,just fun
 
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mistyvixen

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Dil khush hogaya mera update read karke ,man kar raha hai chum lu hath tumhara .
*Blush* *blush* :blush1:
payal ne khuda ko rok to Liya hai but kab tak rok sakti hai ye dekhna
Not anytime soon 😉. It would be a love story like anything you have seen till now..
dilchasp rahe ga, aur payal ko ek baar feelings aayi thi ki Karan ko kuch nahi hone degi jab ush ne han Bola sarwash ko ,payal said "main nahi cahti tumhe kuch ho " bas ushe Pata nahi kis feelings se ye Bola,
Ek badi behan ke chote bhai ke care wale feelings se... don't mix those two!
Yeh kya exam chal rha hai :writing:
Q 1."jab khun dono ka Liya, dono hi sage bhai-bahen aur sage bacchen hai uske to sirf Karan ko hi dard kyon hoga aur need me sir Karan hi kyon Jayga,
Kyuki KalJayi male heir hi use kar skta hai...agar kise dead ka lete toh usko dard hota kya?...nhi! Jo use kar rha hai usko hi feel hota hai. :budhau:
Q 2.'kya payal ke pass bhi koi Karan ki hi tarah powerful hai aur nahi hai to sayad galat hoga payal ke sath.
Just wait till the end you can't imagine what she will become! Tum hi mujhe bologe Payal ko pehle jaise bana do please :smoking:

Thanks for this beautiful question paper😂✨

Mazak kar rhe the review!
 

mistyvixen

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Nice 👍 Karan got something about his father.
Thanks a lot Dhal 💙✨
Sarvas ne kaha uske jitne varish ki blood hogi utna hi achha hai kya Karan ke pita ki aur koi shantanu jivit nahi hai jahan tak mujhe yaad hai aur log bhi jivit hai sayad.
Karan, Payal ko chord ke Vaani or Nishant bhi hai...lekin abhi unse possible nhi tha. Aur unhe bas kisi ke halat janane the...toh uske liye sabse important Karan ka hona tha wahan. Think like this agar sirf Karan hota toh unko bas Image dekhte aur Payal ke hone ke wajah se woh Awaaz bhi sunane di ☝️
Well ye black magic chije story ki liye achhi lagti hai mujhe par real life mein main inhe bilkul bhi expect nahi karta hoon ki ye exist karti bhi hai ya nahi.
Didn't you see Vash? Mazak kar rhe the... fanatsy magic ke bina chal hi nhi skte. Toh bahut see cheez hote hai jihne explain nhi kar skte :budhau:
Well intersting to watch how Karan avenge his father's death from Vinashika.
Abhi toh bahut door hai yeh sab. You think Karan can even stand near Vinashika now 😴

Just think why didn't attack Thanasala herself? She was bounded by natural laws!

Aur ek achhi news hai ki Vinashika ko Karan chahiye par jinda.
Pichle King ha haal dekha nhi kya kar rkha hai...pura nichod diya body ko? Zinda rkhne ka kya matlab hai...itne bure condition mein!
Nice 👍 update.
THANKS again 💙💜✨
 

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Kyuki KalJayi male heir hi use kar skta hai...agar kise dead ka lete toh usko dard hota kya?...nhi! Jo use kar rha hai usko hi feel hota hai
tanha Taj mujhe yad hai Nissan sayad abnormal hai aur kaljayi van rajya ki amanat hai ish liye Karan important tha
Just wait till the end you can't imagine what she will become! Tum hi mujhe bologe Payal ko pehle jaise bana do please
Yaar ayse toh mat darao
 
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First I was like...
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And then I was like...
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Lol. I died laughing 🤣

What's the heck is this review:lol1:

Hope you felt that slap too...Roy!!!
 
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Lol. I died laughing 🤣

What's the heck is this review:lol1:

Hope you felt that slap too...Roy!!!
I didn't feel anything but my very sometimes hard sometimes soft, one of my most favorite body part definitely did and he's not happy about it

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I didn't feel anything but my very sometimes hard sometimes soft, one of my most favorite body part definitely did and he's not happy about it

walking-dick-penis
I already said I don't want anything too predictible and how tf did you imagined a scene like that so early💀

Read scenes from now with full focus...cos they'll be not be all straightforward. ☝️

I needed to that scene to build the tension I would require between Karan and Payal in next chapters....:bigboss1:
 
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