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Yhin kar do saree mistakes typeWtf I'm not able to dm you anymore it's saying I have reached 500 words limit
Thanksss a lotAp ki story boht achi hai. Kuch words ahsy ah jate hai hindi k jo samaj nahi ahty. But it's ok. Bs update ki length thori zada kar do.
Do one thing ...now on write updates one day prior to posting and next day before posting empty your mind and read what you have written word by word and you can easily find out your mistakes.Yhin kar do saree mistakes type
Seriously mere review pe koi comment nahi kuch galt type kar diya kyaYhin kar do saree mistakes type
Thankss Ayush sirNic u
Nic update kaljai se karan ka paltu dragon bhej diya hai jo ab youfh me karan ka sath dega and Jo vision karan ko mile hi vo use mahal me rehne wale bhadiyo ko marega
Thoda bada hai review toh time deke reply karna padegaSeriously mere review pe koi comment nahi kuch galt type kar diya kya
kya payal ke pass bhi bhoga apna pet animalThankss Ayush sir
Pata laga skta hai bas...maarna possible nhi hai....itnon ko...aur bhediye bahut ho gye story mein ab nhi aayenge
Bhediye nhi hai woh!
Sabke paas koi na koi monster tha toh Karan paas toh hona hi tha .
Pata nhi woh toh lekin koi jaruri nhi hai.kya payal ke pass bhi bhoga apna pet animal
Toh gorgoyls hain kya
SadPata nhi woh toh lekin koi jaruri nhi hai.