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Thanks for your first comment on any update... shayd abhi tak
You mean first post? Jismein index hai...pata nhi yaar main yahan pe nhi the jab story chalu hue the...aur maine Res post nhi rkhe kise mod ko puch ke delete karva dete hoon...starting ke kuch opening comments...One humble suggestion for you,
A best comment you pinned in first page 3rd or 4th thread section.a best commentator only seen by new readers, it will be not seen by others who reading this story long times.
I think, you can pinned this in first thread, so everyone see.
mistyvixen.....what you think sister....
I was thinking about it too...Lotr mein Orcs ka naam Uruk-Hai hota hai toh usse hi inspire hoke koi fictional naam sochne ke dekh rhe the...but I can't final anything yet.I am to excited about to know ,what will happened with ravisha and akansha in past
And one thing , give any name to these skeleton
Hm...there are four artifacts and four Kingdom lekin story aise simple thodi hoge ke har jagah Jake ek mil jaye... Villains ko bhi role rhega beech beech mein...and I think Season season ka maine ek beech mein dikha bhi Diya haiYou divided all 4 artifacts in 4 parts, and 1st part you describe 1 artifact, and you will describing 2nd artifact in 2nd part, because it's attached to the ravisha or akansha past life ( mayde)
Nope you don't! Fourth part is special...and no one can predict itagain ,you gave me heart attack now
I know what you write in 4th part(maybe) sis....
Woh toh sab ko pata hai...lekin woh kya hoga whi toh story hai!climx of the story
Smurfs seriously?
No ,iish me aap status update karti ho ush me pin kiya karo,kyonki vo post har page pe dikhti haiYou mean first post? Jismein index hai...
kya matlab sis.... tum yanha nhi thipata nhi yaar main yahan pe nhi the jab story chalu hue the..
No need to do ,aysi koi post nahi hai jo karne wali ho , 1st pe tumhara status hai ,2nd pe index,3erd miss Laila ji hai, 4th post story poster hai ,then 5th post introduction ki hai ..aur maine Res post nhi rkhe kise mod ko puch ke delete karva dete hoon...starting ke kuch opening comments...
Sab ek sath thoda meshy ho Jayga maybe and you aer forget that,you have to pin b.co.... for chapter 20Fir sab ek saath ho jaega
Han bai aur na bhi because Ajay said " kalrani ka hukum hai ki kaljayi milte hi dono ko khatam kar Dena " aur kaalrani ne sauda kiya tha akansha se ki vo use kaljayi degi aur badle me van rajya baksh diya Jayga aur Karan ka sauda ravisha ne man liya jishe akansha ne swikar nahi kiya tha .aur akansha kamjor nahi thi sayadUpdate 21
Kya ye sab Ajay ne kiya tha Ravisha aur Akansha ke sath??
Akansha ne Ravisha se Karan ki jo bhi yaaden thi wo le liya???
Akansha apna asli roop pa chuki hai kya par lagta to nahi ki wo neeli colour ki hogi??
Akansha itne varshon ke baad Karan se mili hai to usko emotional hona hi tha aakhir kar Karan ko apna beta hi jo manti hai aur palne wali mata bhi janm dene wali mata ke barabar hota hai thoda sa bhi kam nahi.
1. Kya Sarvash, Ajay se jeet payega jo Kaal-rani ka sipahi hai.
2. Karan yadi infinite skull army ka samna nahi kar sakta hai abhi ke liye to phir battle dekhna dilchasp hoga. Kya koi aur Karan ki help karta hai ya phir Karan khud ko aur apni mausi ko khud hi bacha payega!!!
3. Yadi Akansha kamjor hone ke baw-jood wo Ravisha se apni Karan ki memory wapas le sakti hai to kya wo khud ko bacha nahi sakti hai???
4. Yes I know dragon sirf Karan ki riding ke liye nahi hai balki use battle mein bahut hi jayada help milegi khas kar tab jab use help ki jarurat ho.
Nice and beautiful update ended with suspense.