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Mrxr

'No object is mysterious. The mystery is your eye'
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Nah..😖.! She would look like
Zoe Saldana Animation GIF
Not like that bro wait I make some,pics
Vaise toh mujhe Catgirls jayda pasand hai...lekin woh sab yahan nhi kar skte yahan? Can I...add cat ears
Mujhe bhi acchi lagti hai lekin jyada nahi ,and yes you can add cat ears too
how is this.....

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mistyvixen

𝑻𝒘𝒐 𝑺𝒕𝒆𝒑𝒔 𝒇𝒓𝒐𝒎 𝑯𝒆𝒍𝒍 🌠
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Not like that bro wait I make some,pics

Mujhe bhi acchi lagti hai lekin jyada nahi ,and yes you can add cat ears too
how is this.....

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Nice...but she's looking more like a dark elf👀

Nah...I won't use cat ears...in this story...😴
 

mistyvixen

𝑻𝒘𝒐 𝑺𝒕𝒆𝒑𝒔 𝒇𝒓𝒐𝒎 𝑯𝒆𝒍𝒍 🌠
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One humble suggestion for you,
A best comment you pinned in first page 3rd or 4th thread section.a best commentator only seen by new readers, it will be not seen by others who reading this story long times.
I think, you can pinned this in first thread, so everyone see.🤔🤔
mistyvixen.....what you think sister....​
You mean first post? Jismein index hai...pata nhi yaar main yahan pe nhi the jab story chalu hue the...aur maine Res post nhi rkhe kise mod ko puch ke delete karva dete hoon...starting ke kuch opening comments...👀

Fir sab ek saath ho jaega
I am to excited about to know ,what will happened with ravisha and akansha in past
And one thing , give any name to these skeleton
I was thinking about it too...Lotr mein Orcs ka naam Uruk-Hai hota hai toh usse hi inspire hoke koi fictional naam sochne ke dekh rhe the...but I can't final anything yet.
You divided all 4 artifacts in 4 parts, and 1st part you describe 1 artifact, and you will describing 2nd artifact in 2nd part, because it's attached to the ravisha or akansha past life ( mayde)
Hm...there are four artifacts and four Kingdom lekin story aise simple thodi hoge ke har jagah Jake ek mil jaye... Villains ko bhi role rhega beech beech mein...and I think Season season ka maine ek beech mein dikha bhi Diya hai
🤨🤨😑😑😑 again ,you gave me heart attack now

I know what you write in 4th part(maybe) sis....
Nope you don't! Fourth part is special...and no one can predict it😴
climx of the story
Woh toh sab ko pata hai...lekin woh kya hoga whi toh story hai! 🙃
But yes she is hot as fuck...do you have some more of her in blue..for research purposes 😉 asking for a friend
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Smurfs😂 seriously?

Hmm dekhte hoon...mere harddisk bhi ab full hone wale hai😴
 
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Mrxr

'No object is mysterious. The mystery is your eye'
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You mean first post? Jismein index hai...
No ,iish me aap status update karti ho ush me pin kiya karo,kyonki vo post har page pe dikhti hai
pata nhi yaar main yahan pe nhi the jab story chalu hue the..
kya matlab sis.... tum yanha nhi thi
.aur maine Res post nhi rkhe kise mod ko puch ke delete karva dete hoon...starting ke kuch opening comments...👀
No need to do ,aysi koi post nahi hai jo karne wali ho , 1st pe tumhara status hai ,2nd pe index,3erd miss Laila ji hai😁, 4th post story poster hai ,then 5th post introduction ki hai .
Agar accha lage to sochna nahi to koi baat nahi ...
I think ki jo 1st post hai ushme status ke sath B.comm....ko pin kar de aur old status Pic ko thoda chota kar de aur latest status ko bada hi rahne de ish se post clear and clean lage gi.
2nd ko index hi rahne do aur ush me hi story poster add kar do chota ho jyada bada na ho ,3rd ka kuch kah nahi sakta ,4th me introduction de do ,simple
Accha na laga ho to sorry 🫡🫡
Fir sab ek saath ho jaega
Sab ek sath thoda meshy ho Jayga maybe and you aer forget that,you have to pin b.co.... for chapter 20
 
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dhalchandarun

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Update 21

Kya ye sab Ajay ne kiya tha Ravisha aur Akansha ke sath??

Akansha ne Ravisha se Karan ki jo bhi yaaden thi wo le liya???

Akansha apna asli roop pa chuki hai kya par lagta to nahi ki wo neeli colour ki hogi??

Akansha itne varshon ke baad Karan se mili hai to usko emotional hona hi tha aakhir kar Karan ko apna beta hi jo manti hai aur palne wali mata bhi janm dene wali mata ke barabar hota hai thoda sa bhi kam nahi.

1. Kya Sarvash, Ajay se jeet payega jo Kaal-rani ka sipahi hai.

2. Karan yadi infinite skull army ka samna nahi kar sakta hai abhi ke liye to phir battle dekhna dilchasp hoga. Kya koi aur Karan ki help karta hai ya phir Karan khud ko aur apni mausi ko khud hi bacha payega!!!

3. Yadi Akansha kamjor hone ke baw-jood wo Ravisha se apni Karan ki memory wapas le sakti hai to kya wo khud ko bacha nahi sakti hai???

4. Yes I know dragon sirf Karan ki riding ke liye nahi hai balki use battle mein bahut hi jayada help milegi khas kar tab jab use help ki jarurat ho.

Nice 👍 and beautiful ❤️ update ended with suspense.
 

Mrxr

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Update 21

Kya ye sab Ajay ne kiya tha Ravisha aur Akansha ke sath??

Akansha ne Ravisha se Karan ki jo bhi yaaden thi wo le liya???

Akansha apna asli roop pa chuki hai kya par lagta to nahi ki wo neeli colour ki hogi??

Akansha itne varshon ke baad Karan se mili hai to usko emotional hona hi tha aakhir kar Karan ko apna beta hi jo manti hai aur palne wali mata bhi janm dene wali mata ke barabar hota hai thoda sa bhi kam nahi.

1. Kya Sarvash, Ajay se jeet payega jo Kaal-rani ka sipahi hai.

2. Karan yadi infinite skull army ka samna nahi kar sakta hai abhi ke liye to phir battle dekhna dilchasp hoga. Kya koi aur Karan ki help karta hai ya phir Karan khud ko aur apni mausi ko khud hi bacha payega!!!

3. Yadi Akansha kamjor hone ke baw-jood wo Ravisha se apni Karan ki memory wapas le sakti hai to kya wo khud ko bacha nahi sakti hai???

4. Yes I know dragon sirf Karan ki riding ke liye nahi hai balki use battle mein bahut hi jayada help milegi khas kar tab jab use help ki jarurat ho.

Nice 👍 and beautiful ❤️ update ended with suspense.
Han bai aur na bhi because Ajay said " kalrani ka hukum hai ki kaljayi milte hi dono ko khatam kar Dena " aur kaalrani ne sauda kiya tha akansha se ki vo use kaljayi degi aur badle me van rajya baksh diya Jayga aur Karan ka sauda ravisha ne man liya jishe akansha ne swikar nahi kiya tha .aur akansha kamjor nahi thi sayad🤔🤔
 

mistyvixen

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Honesty time.

Idk why I don't feel like writing anymore. Earlier I used to enjoy writing but aise post kar kar ke idk why my all motivation to write is dying.

Idk ke ab next chapter likhne ka bhi man karega ke nhi aur karega bhi toh kab. But tbh writing here has become really mentally pressuring.

I won't stop writing...and I feel writing the whole story in seclusion is best. Abhi maine kuch final nhi kiya hai...but I think I should post it completely in one go whenever it is complete. It would be much faster.

Kuch final nhi kiya hai abhi...1-2 din mein batati hoon. :feelsbadman:
 
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