awesome update, my mind was flowing freely .
Thanks a lot Max
Interested: Sonali kuch jyada hi interested hai Karan me jo ush ki harkat aur hav bhav se Pata chalta hai aur dushri taraf hamare aakash bhai sahab hai jo payal ke khwab dekh dekhne lag rahe hai, OMG
Sonali ne Karan ka hanth pakad aur boli tarkash tumhare sath hai (ye baat payal ko batani padegi )
This was just a small gesture..
Yaar har cheez ko literally nhi Lena chahiye!...Kise sundar ladki ke taraf ek second dekh liya toh Akshaya uske peeche pad gaya...
Wah bhyi...
Honesty : sharvas ne apni wafadari dikhate hue aakash se puch hi Liya kaun ho tum
He's just tha most loyal servant...ab toh koi doubt bhi nhi hai uspe...story mein uske entry bhi special hi likhe the isliye...aur aage bhi special hi hai...so stay on your seats
Emotions : aap ne bacchon ko etne din baad dekh nandani ne unko gale laga Liya, ek Maa ke liye ushke bacche kya hote hai ek Maa hi samajhti hai jo nandani me dikha.
Woh toh obvious hi hai...ek maa ke liye 1 hafte ya 2 din ke liye bhi uske bache dur hote hai toh...fir se milte hai toh feelings aa jate hai
Love and care : Karan ne jo fysla Liya sahi Liya ki payal aur nandani ko abhi ish sab se dur rakhna hi sahi hai kyon ki akansha se dono hi bahut karib hai khas kar payal.
Exactly!! Payal ke saath toh bas Aakansha hi thi bachpan se...so just guess how she would have felt ke woh sab bas ek jooth tha...very disheartening...vaise bhi Payal ke story bahut lambi hai....Ig the longest after Karan? Mb
ye batata hai ki Karan kitni fikr karta hai apni maa aur bahen ki. Karan ko apni mausi ki jaan khatre me lagi.aur khoj been ke liye mahal me bhi ghushne jaraha Hai aur sayad Karan ravisha ki soul dekh sakta ho apni ankhon se jish se ravisha ka raaz khul Jaye.
Yeh chapter toh aa gya ab...ispe jayda nhi bolungi...but unn eyes ka aage ke seasons aur chapters mein role aayega...kyuki 4ron artifacts are not simple at all...unke pichle bhi raaz hai...
Dangerous : watchtower pe jo scaleten archer baytha hai ushki arrow ke nishane pe sayad Karan ho ga it's to dangerous, kya Karan bacha lega khubko aur sabko ?
You fell for it?? Acha bewakoof banaya
Sex : I can't say anything I ignored this part in story and prchi ko itni craving kyon hai sex karne ki I think she loved Karan
She's just like that...kuch kuch hote hai aise bhi...horny all time...
Last and my fav....part : Karan and payal conversation part Is fav.... aur first time payal ko jeleouy feel hue ki karan
,Sonali ko dekh raha hai ab ayga maza jab Sonali Karan ke pass aygi aur payal ko jeleousy feel hogi (mujhe Sonali ka yun chipakna pasand toh nahi ayga but jhel na toh padega chipdi ko yaar abhi toh aur aayngi )
Bahut kuch jhelna padega aise toh...but ending will be happy one...
aur Karan jab ye dekhe ga ki Aakash payal ke piche hai to Karan ka kya hoga?
Lmfao what? Wdym peeche...yeh koi nibba nibbi thodi likhungi main yahan
One suggestion, payal and nandni didn't meet long time so some time spent together and talk something.
Karte hoon kuch... jaydatar story se hi bhar jata hai pura chapter....aise scenes toh main kitne bhi bhar doon...filler wale...bas kya hai.
Baki soch ke likhunga baad me
Abhi aur kuch bacha hai