Incest Echoes Of Lust (With AI Images)

[mistyvixen]

Latest Update 25
forgotten (Target Incomplete)

 

[neal9]

So here's my first full review on the story

Karan ki story ek aisi journey hai jo fantasy aur emotions ko ek saath leke chalti hai Ye kahani ek aise hero ki hai jo shuru mein ek normal insaan lagta hai lekin jaise jaise uska safar aage badhta hai woh apni asli taqat aur apne rishtey ke maayne samajhta hai

Kahani ki shuruaat ek heartbreaking moment ke saath hoti hai jab Karan apni maa ko ek tragedy mein kho deta hai Yeh moment sirf Karan ke liye nahi, mere liye bhi kaafi emotional tha kyunki uska dard aur confusion kaafi real lagta hai.

Lekin ye story sirf ek loss tak simit nahi hai. Jab Karan ko pata chalta hai ki uski maa Nandani ek alag duniya mein zinda hai Yeh twist se hi story chalu hoti hai...aur readers ke liye ek bada surprise leke aata hai. Jab Karan apni maa ko rescue karta hai usse ek aur shocking baat pata chalti hai Nandani sirf uski maa nahi, balki Vanraajya ki rani hai

Kahani ke peeche ka world building ekdum magical aur engaging hai. Har kingdom apne alag cultural aur geographical features ke saath story ko enrich karta hai. Vanrajya ke ghane jungle ek mystical vibe dete hain. In settings ka detailed description readers ko iss fantasy duniya ka ek hissa banata hai jaise woh Karan ke saath hi uski journey pe ja rahe ho. Kaalandard jo hell hai story mein ek terror ke feeling leje aata hai. Yeh sirf ek duniya nahi hai balki Karan ke liye ek test hai jo uski strength aur courage ko barabar challenge karega.

Kahani ka emotional core Karan aur uski maa ke rishtey mein hai. Nandani ek aisi maa hai jo apne bete ke liye apne parivaar se dur rahe. Lekin woh sirf ek maa nahi balki ek queen bhi hai jo apne rajya ke liye ladti hai. Karan ka confusion aur struggle bhi kaafi relatable hai kyunki ek taraf woh apne naye role ko samajhne ki koshish kar raha hai aur dusri taraf woh apni maa ke liye ek ache beta banne ki responsibility feel karta hai.

Uska sword Meher ek aur central element hai jo uski journey mein important role play karta hai. Yeh sword usse fire, water, air aur earth powers deta hai, aur jaise-jaise Karan apne powers ko samajhta aur use karta hai, story aur bhi thrilling hoti jaaege...kyuki Avatar is one of my favourites.

Payal jo Karan ki behen hai ek alag hi charm story mein laati hai. kyuki main sister incest hi jayda pasand karta hoon. Uska character ek warrior ka hai jo bina kisi magic ke hi dikhaya gaya hai abhi tak. Ek marketplace scene jahan woh ek gareeb aadmi se uska haal puchte hai mere dil ko chho jata hai. Yeh moment sirf Payal ke compassion ko nahi dikhata balki uski insaniyat ko bhi highlight karta hai.

Villains ka role story mein kaafi powerful hai. Traas jo Kaalandard ka lord hai ek formidable villain hai jo kahani mein apna terror failata hai. Uske generals Vinashika aur Tamasya story mein alag-alag types ka danger leke aate hain. Kaalraani apne intelligence aur terror se kahani ko intense banati hai. Inke alawa Agrahak, ek alag hi level ka destruction story mein leke aata hai. Yeh villains sirf evil nahi hain balki unke motives aur backstory unhe kaafi intriguing banate hain jo ke recent chapter 23 mein dikhaya hai.

Karan ki training scenes aur action sequences story ko aur bhi engaging banate hain. Ek moment jahan Karan apni maa ke saath spar karta hai ek memorable scene hai. Nandani apne spear ka use karti hai aur Karan Meher ke saath apne powers ko test karta hai. Yeh moments sirf action ke liye nahi hain yeh Karan ke growth aur uski capabilities ko dikhate hain.

Story mein sirf battles aur adventure nahi hai iska heart uske characters aur unke rishtey hain. Har character ka apna ek depth hai aur har rishtey mein ek alag emotion hai chahe woh Karan aur Nandani ka maa beta ka bond ho ya Karan aur Payal ke beech ka sibling love. Yeh emotions kahani ko real banate hain chahe story kitne bhi fantastical kyun na ho.

Karan ki kahani sirf ek heroic adventure nahi hai yeh ek deeply emotional journey hai jo family courage aur self-discovery ke themes explore karti hai. Iska world-building, characters aur storytelling itna rich aur engaging hai ki readers ismein pura kho jaate hain.

Last, mein itna kehna chaunga ke likes ke chinta mat kijiye because yeh story seedhe Hollywood ko touch karte hai toh iska base yahan pe kam hoga lekin jo readers hai woh ache se iske value smjte hai.

Waiting for next update

 

[Mrxr]

No addressing the criticisms, while you can surely improve on spelling but It's not such a big deal that some people are making. You can use Chatgpt to refine it better once you have completed the update. That might solve the issue.

that is what I'm saying,readers himself understands, what she's saying,it's not such a big mistake,

 

[Pranay Elangi]

Ab tak ka story mind blowing hai
Mene Aaj Tak aisi story nahi padi tho esliye es story ka fan ban gaya hu
Agla update kab tak aayega

 

[mistyvixen]

Ab tak ka story mind blowing hai
Mene Aaj Tak aisi story nahi padi tho esliye es story ka fan ban gaya hu
Agla update kab tak aayega

Thanks and welcome to the story!
Target pura ho jata toh mujhe bhi acha lagta khair likhna chalu kar diya hai...2 din baad aa jana chaiye.

Yeh story expectedly iss year finish karne hai end tak...

Stay tuned!

 

[mistyvixen]

So I will only talk about what I like and what I think could be little better but still it's only my thoughts and you don't have to follow it,

No two human can have the same thoughts process so that's completely understandable you don't need to say the obvious

as I said before everyone perceives a story differently in their head so you do your own thing and don't think about pleasing everyone. Fine we all good now....ok!

Yupp... isliye toh stories aur movies mein fark hota hai...words ke saath sabke imagination alag chalti hai

SO HERE WE...

Bring it on...aisa lag rha hai jaise Grandprix ke counting ho rhe hai yaha first reveiw diya hai itne updates ke baad...

this update starts with a very high action point where Sravas is facing Ajay and Karan fighting other minions of Ajay.

I try to keep the heat always high...as I too get bored from a novel..which delves more into drama thingy...why is the use of reading If the stakes are not always high...aaj hi ek novel khtm ke hai...maza aa gya. Har ek acha novel kuch na kuch mst idea deke jata hi hai...aur understanding mein madad bhi karta hai...so I'm more of a reader than a writer

One think is good about your writing is you really take time and explain the fighting scenarios in details and that's why we can literally imagen every punches and movement made by characters in our head.

Thanks! I feel every scene should be clear in the reader's head. I have read a lot of action so try to describe the fight in more descriptive. Glad it's getting in your head lol.

It could be great way for Sravas character to give a good bye with a heroic sacrafise but you let it open ended that was also cool,

I planned his role for even further...I would say that first seaaon is easily the most simplest one.... everything I wrote till now has been foundation...things would get very messy later.

we as a reader might thought that he's dead and as per your plan you could bring him in later on updates or session and that would be surprising to see but you spoiled it in comments.

I didn't I knew how I planned his role in chapter 18-19 this was basically him manifesting one step ahead...

In the previous updates you did mention that Ravisha has so much power that even Ajay was worried but now Akansh got that power from her then why didn't she use those powers to help Karan and Sravas.

Ravisha has a stopper on her....that was the reason she was still partially human. She didn't have any Powers...but was out of control of Ajay... basically the grandmaster behind all this enigma is Sharnita who is one of the main characters of 2nd Season.

Also Akansha ne Ravisha banke mahal se bahar nikale ki kosis kyou nahi ki jab ki Ravisha to Akansha ke hi roop me rahti thi to instead of fighting why don't she just pretended to be Ravish.

There was already chaos going outside... Shravas was already trapped...so pretending would haven't been any use. Shravas ka sach pehle ki Ajay ke saamne aa chuka tha. You're trying very hard to find the plot holes . I appreciate it

Well I can concluded it as they are magical beings so they can sense the energy or something from her and they can easily come to know that she is not Ravisha but Akansha but still there should be a mention of this plan at least from karan since he's the one who is outsider in this magical world. In the update it looked like they did not even think about.

Sharnita and Ajay's magic is not simple. Whole second Second will explain what they're plotting...and it would cover multiple kingdoms...so the scale would be much bigger...aslo this magic requires the will of the victim...here Akansha...and what happened to her will be explained LATER.

After getting out of the castle going to same old man's house whom we saw in previous update when Karan saved her daughter is also a great way to retcon the story and let readers know that everything in the story is on purpose

I could have added it earlier in chapter 17 but it would have been like a drag...as I said I'm just bored writing scenes that are filler and are there just to farm the words.

and adding Viyali a new character is also interesting to watch what is her story and how she will be contributing to the plot

This was expected. You could have guessed where the story will from here.

And now coming to my favorite part

Lol. I fking predicted it

The stimy and sexy encounter between Karan and Akansha was sexy as hell as I said and your images are fire like always but it felt little to quick.

The season is about too end you think that it's still too quick? Akanksha's plot was this only.

It would be little better in my eyes if they had little build up. I mean Akansha just met Karan just a day back and he is a son to her like she suggested in last update. So I think you should give little more time for the transformation of their relationship in this same update only,

Mom-son relationship is already planned for Nandani so adding another character for same stuff would have been repetitive. I think I had enoughly developed Akashna's story to be unique to her...at the end you'll see that no two characters in the story would follow the same path.

where they started as a loving mother and son kind of emotion, seeing him after so long a child to a grown man and then leading to hot stuff.

Again, that would have been way too repetitive. Why is Nadnani for in the story?

So final verdict .....It was a good and sexy update and definitely leading to some more great and erotic updates, kindly do your best and bring those as soon as possible.
Over all

Thanks a lot Roy
You're one of the best chaps I have over here

 

[Pranay Elangi]

Ye hero ko aapney mom aur sister key sath sex kab hogee.
I am waiting very curiously
Isme heroine kon hai ye baat samjhe mey nahi aarahi he.

 

[Rudra Roy]

Ye hero ko aapney mom aur sister key sath sex kab hogee.
I am waiting very curiously
Isme heroine kon hai ye baat samjhe mey nahi aarahi he.

 

[Mrxr]

Ye hero ko aapney mom aur sister key sath sex kab hogee.
I am waiting very curiously
Isme heroine kon hai ye baat samjhe mey nahi aarahi he.

Heroine ek spoiler hai bro nahi bata sakte hai yaar......harem list dekh ke samjhane kaun hogi.....

 

[Mrxr]

Thanks a lot Roy
You're one of the best chaps I have over here

Kya khata ho gai hamse, ....
jo mere review ka reply na diya gaya tumse.

Yaar har baar tum aysa hi karti ho sabka reply deti ho mera bhul jati hai,sach me bhul jati ho ya janbujh ke reply nahi karti ho .....

 

[mistyvixen]

Kya khata ho gai hamse, ....
jo mere review ka reply na diya gaya tumse.

Yaar har baar tum aysa hi karti ho sabka reply deti ho mera bhul jati hai,sach me bhul jati ho ya janbujh ke reply nahi karti ho .....

Are yaar...de rhe hoon...iss chapter pe tumhare ka diya toh hai shayad

Number se chal rhe hoon...main toh