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Kia yeh twist aa gaya abhi tow badi emotional ho Rahi thi Payal or abhi ek dam se chandal ban gayi
Yeh sala kia chakker h
Baherhal dekhte h aage kia hota h
Badhiya shaandar update
Accha yeh aage ka update kab aa raha hai fir?![]()
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Congratulations For Your New StoryChapter 6
Also mistyvixen you are using your Ai knowledge to the extentCongratulations For Your New Story
Indeed A Great Start Mohtarma ..... "Echoes Of Lust" is going to be a Great Story ever Xforum Witness if miss mistyvixen is not a Lazy fellow like me .....
To jaise hi story start hoti hai to dikhta hai karan jo ki party mein hota hai apni college ki wahan usko ek ladki milti hai usse interaction ke baad wo ladki apni ek dost or uske bf ke saath karan ko raazi karte hain dance ke liye isi beech karan ki mom usko message karti hai tabiyat kharab hone ka but karan ignore karta hai but agle update mein wo ghar pahunchta hai (intimate scenes bagera obviously mein nhi padhta dont give a shit) Wha khana khaate hue uski mom behosh hoti hai or i guess yhi se humari main kahani start hoti hai .....
Shockingly emotional hokar jab karan us stone ko todta hai to khud ko alag duniya mein paata hai .....
Mujhe yha se kahani ka plot bahut accha laga miss mistyvixen kyuki is kahani mein involved hai kingdom waise to mein 23 saal ka ladka hu par raja maharaj abhi bhi fascinating lagte hain bachpan mara nhi hai na shayad isliyeto yha pata chalta hai ki karan ka baap maharaj hai uski 4 patniya hai ek mar chuki hai uska beta chal nhi skta (obviously incest mein competition kaise aa skta hai bhenchod
)
Or karan ki maa ka samrajya uski behen matlab karan ki mausi shambal ti hai yha khaas baat hai ki main jo empire usko karan ke chacha ne cheen liya hai lord of hell ke saath milkar ......
Recent update mein karan or uski maa ko mila uski behen se ek surprise jo hai bandi banaye jaanvka obviously aisa kuch nhi hoga agle upadate ka suspense banane ki poori koshish jo ki shi bhi hai......
par hum jaise aalsi logo ko kya hi fark padta hai pta nhi ab kab aaunga is story par
NOTE : Elements 5 hote hain na ki 4 .... Thanks !!
End mein yhi kahunga misty ji ki you have great plot and a nice characters as you said in a Reply The elder sis is your fav so i will be waiting to see why you say so ..... And being a Late. Fellow Writer just wanna say don't ask everyone to like your post bahut cringe or chapri lagta hai bhenchod
Keep it Up(koi baat buri lagi ho to batana mat apne paas Rakhna Thankss !!)
Hay devi agle update ke darshan kab honge bata do![]()
Congratulations For Your New Story![]()
Indeed A Great Start Mohtarma ..... "Echoes Of Lust" is going to be a Great Story ever Xforum Witness if miss mistyvixen is not a Lazy fellow like me .....
To jaise hi story start hoti hai to dikhta hai karan jo ki party mein hota hai apni college ki wahan usko ek ladki milti hai usse interaction ke baad wo ladki apni ek dost or uske bf ke saath karan ko raazi karte hain dance ke liye isi beech karan ki mom usko message karti hai tabiyat kharab hone ka but karan ignore karta hai but agle update mein wo ghar pahunchta hai (intimate scenes bagera obviously mein nhi padhta dont give a shit) Wha khana khaate hue uski mom behosh hoti hai or i guess yhi se humari main kahani start hoti hai .....
Shockingly emotional hokar jab karan us stone ko todta hai to khud ko alag duniya mein paata hai .....
Mujhe yha se kahani ka plot bahut accha laga miss mistyvixen kyuki is kahani mein involved hai kingdom waise to mein 23 saal ka ladka hu par raja maharaj abhi bhi fascinating lagte hain bachpan mara nhi hai na shayad isliyeto yha pata chalta hai ki karan ka baap maharaj hai uski 4 patniya hai ek mar chuki hai uska beta chal nhi skta (obviously incest mein competition kaise aa skta hai bhenchod
)
Or karan ki maa ka samrajya uski behen matlab karan ki mausi shambal ti hai yha khaas baat hai ki main jo empire usko karan ke chacha ne cheen liya hai lord of hell ke saath milkar ......
Recent update mein karan or uski maa ko mila uski behen se ek surprise jo hai bandi banaye jaanvka obviously aisa kuch nhi hoga agle upadate ka suspense banane ki poori koshish jo ki shi bhi hai......
par hum jaise aalsi logo ko kya hi fark padta hai pta nhi ab kab aaunga is story par![]()
NOTE : Elements 5 hote hain na ki 4 .... Thanks !!
End mein yhi kahunga misty ji ki you have great plot and a nice characters as you said in a Reply The elder sis is your fav so i will be waiting to see why you say so ..... And being a Late. Fellow Writer just wanna say don't ask everyone to like your post bahut cringe or chapri lagta hai bhenchod![]()
Keep it Up(koi baat buri lagi ho to batana mat apne paas Rakhna Thankss !!)
Also mistyvixen you are using your Ai knowledge to the extent![]()