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Break Notice


Dear Readers

I’ll be taking a short break as I’m away on a trip. Karan’s journey will continue soon with more exciting chapters. Thank you for your patience and support! I'll try to stay active in my discussion thread daily maybe? So you won't feel that I've abandoned the story!

P.S. I just realized I forgot to close the door… Hopefully nothing goes wrong lol.


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Ab to lag raha hai wahi hoga.....na writer update degi or na koi update magenga ...agar writer khud updated nahi dena chahti ...to .kam se Kam main to nahi mangne wala @Mrxr
 
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No I joined here today
ok..so this is a story about the harry potter who transported in a magical world after his mother's death and gets he-man's sward and comes to know about the Darth Vader who wants to rule this entire magical world and than the boy starts his training so he can control the four elements of nature wind, fire, earth and water and becomes captain planate.... meanwhile on his journey he's also building his own avengers to defeat darth vader.

I hope it's not confusing for you.

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ok..so this is a story about the harry potter who transported in a magical world after his mother's death and gets he-man's sward and comes to know about the Darth Vader who wants to rule this entire magical world and than the boy starts his training so he can control the four elements of nature wind, fire, earth and water and becomes captain planate.... meanwhile on his journey he's also building his own avengers to defeat darth vader.

I hope it's not confusing for you.

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The fuck?!? 🤨
 
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Where you guys mistyvixen tum bhi kanha ho bahen ....
kya baat hai sab log aaj kal bahut busy-wusy chal rahe hai kya koi busy hone ki dawten chal rahi hai kya.....🤔🤔
Actually, I think mujhe 1-2 mahine ke liye foreign Jana padega dad ke saath 😐
 
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Awesome update misty ,
This time i was not predicting the vasura and his sword there inside grave .it will be so tough for karan to defeat him .fight is still going on and outcomes will be seen in next update but one thing i must say ,agar vasura ki sword karan ke kabhe mein aa gayi to kalraani ke against 1/3rd battle to karan akele hi nikal lega aisa ho bhi kyun na aakhir kaladiraj ka pehla samrat tha woh to itni powers to expect kar hi skte hai hum us sword mein par dekhte hai kya hota hai aage.
Wese vellyes or Karan sath mein nandani bhi aapas mein jude hue hai jis kaaran yahan indono ko pata chal gya,interesting ..
Wese is Meesaka ke mansube kuch alag hi dikh rahe hai is update mein par wo sare yahi dhare ke dhare reh jayenge ,par ye mutated wale humla kaise kar gye ye mystery hai ?.

One more this Misty please re edit your update once more there are so many errors .

Dhundh ki chadar ,and more stuffs like this words spelling error bhi hai aur ek chiz "chuke" and "chuki" ye dono alag alag hai par kuch jagah par ek ko dusre ke place par use kiya gya hai 😑 so please recheck it .
Overall update was fantabulous and amazing ab bas aage karan ki fight ke outcomes dekhna hai .
Thanks man for first reveiw!
Will reply in detail later 🌿
 

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Good & average update.....👍👍 update thoda jaldi me padha Hai kyonki time nahi mil raha hai....
Ish update me suspense ke alawa kya hi tha......
Karan van rajya ki prachin vedika pe pahuch gaya,wahi Maher bhi ush jagah se judaw mahsus kar rahi thi,aur wanha pe ushko kaalandard ke pahle samrat kaaladhiraj urf vasura ki sward mili......fir vasura apni kabr se bahar aata hai aur karan se ladta hai halaki wo sirf ek Saya tha varura ka......
Idhar veleys ko abhas hua ki Karan kisi musibat me hai......udhar mesaka bhi apna jal bun rahi hai lekin mutant jalayakon ne jaaljhaar pe kamla kar diya hai jishse misaka gusse me Hai......
Question..... 1st--jab akansha aur Nandini kabhi rajya ke ish hisse me nahi aayi toh akansha ne kayse kaha ki ham pahuch gaye.....ushkj kayse pata ki yahi vedika hai....
2nd--karan aur vasura ki ladai me Karan ne apni fire power kyon nahi use ki matlab andhera roshni ke Aage nahi tikta...
3rd--kya adhiraj ki ye talwar hi kaalandard ka artifact hai...
4th--vasura ki kabr ko yanha pe kyon rakha gaya jabki wo kaalandard ke samrat the...
5th-- vasura ko kishne haraya tha 400 saal pahle....
bonus-- ish update me review Dene ka kuch tha hi nahi aur ek baat akansha apni Badi bahen ko bahen kyon nahi bolti hai nandini kyon bolti hai....aur agar payal aur Karan ki story build karni hai toh kuch ayse scenes dalo jishse pata chale ki dono ke beech kuch toh Hai,warna ekdam se scene accha nahi lage ga.....
main dushro ki tarah jhuth nahi hol sakta bahen.....
main ne jitna expect kiya tha ush se thoda sa level kam tha update ka..... aur reviews ko jaldi se jaldi catch-up karo warna dikkat hogi tumko aur hamare doubts bhi clear ho jayenge updated ke sath toh review ka koi matlab hi nahi Banta.....
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Mrxr .... 7.2/10💎
Time hi nhi mil rha itna type karne ko 😐
Pata nhi Kahan se pending hai..ab toh
 

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regular does not mean putting updates everyday but putting update frequently with out delay of putting any conditions
Writers get paid...I can't even put some conditions for what I do for free. PREACH 🤨
 
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Hello I'm new here koi bata skta hai yeh story kiske baare mein hai
Your av is so hot!
Basically it's about lots of incest n wars n action...see the tag? 💤
 
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