sab ke liye family important hoti hai...
Ye toh tum bhi acchi tarah se jante ho....ish pe kuch kahna bekar hai....
main bhi payal ke sath emotionally connect hua hu....
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ye baat sister ne sabhi se pucha tha....
Ye tum galat bol rahe ho bhai... ye raha mere chapter 22 ka wo thought....
"4. Erotic : ish ke baare me mujhe se kuch nahi kaha Jayga tumse sis.... pahle hi dil pe patthar rakh ke thoda bahut padha hai...
but one thing ,you have improved your writing skills for these type scenes, it's good for you....
( my pov : mujhe lagta hai ki ye jo scene hua kuch jaldi hi hua ye 1ya 2 update bad bhi ho sakta tha maybe aur ab laga story ki vibe match hui hai title se...
Echoes of lust)"
aur jake page no. 193 & 194 check kar lo bhai sister ne hi opinion manga tha aur choose karne ko Bola tha dono me se aur main ne 2nd wala choose kiya tha....infact tumne bhi apna opinion diya tha ki rahne do yahi accha hai fir ye name diya tha "THE FALLEN KINGDOM "
ye main accept karta hu ki main ne bola tha ki payal ka look change karne ko aur ye main ne ishliye bola tha kyonki story ki sabhi females ke face similar the and sister ne bola tha ki payal aur Karan ki love story hai ishliye....toh ush pe sister ne hi Bola tha ki " mujhe bhi payal ka look thoda sa simple sa lagta hai abhi ushke face pe work kar rahi hu"....aur ye baat tum sister se bhi puch sakte ho...
Toh kya dekh ke wo shaadi karte hai un aurton se...
Bhai tumko yaad hoga Devil ki story pe main ne ek comment kiya tha tumhare comment ke reply me ushke baad tumne bola tha delete karne ko toh main ne pucha tha kyon toh tum ne bola tha "mujhe itne late reply ki aadat nahi hai"......aur rahi answer ki baat toh na jane kitne hi main ne questions kiye aur puche lekin mujhe answer nahi Mila...main kis ko blame karu....aur sister ne tumhare comment pe reply nahi kiya toh ushne mera kya fault hai bhai...
aur agar tumhare review pe mera answer dena galat hai aur tumko accha nahi laga toh I apologize, I'm sorry it's my mistake....
Ishka kya matlab hua bhai,explane kar sakte ho kya,kyonki main ne kabhi religious books nahi padhi hai...
Kyon ki sister ko main ne pahle hi bataya tha ki main adultery aur harem jaysi storys nahi padhta hu.....toh sis...ne pucha tha ki " kya tum meri story padhoge ya chhod doge" toh main ne sister se wada kiya tha ki main story padunga but xxx koi wasta nahi hoga...
Na hi ishme sister ka koi fayda hai aur na hi mera...aur mujhme aur sister me bahut fark hai main ek lower middle class aur wo ek rich family se belong karti hai....ushko meri kya jarurat...aur ish forum ke kis rule me aysa likha hai ki sirf review ke answers ek writer hi de sakta/sakti hai...agar aysa hai toh readers ko apne review me likh dena chahiye ki answer kewal writer h de sakta hai...
Page no.189 check kar lena bhai...tumko mera, sister aur neerav teeno ke comment mil jaynge padh lena kya bola tha sister ne... aur ush ne mere kahne pe aysa nahi kya hai...ek aur reader ne comment me payal ka bola tha... but ushka yaad nahi kab bola tha...
Ush story ko chhod ne ka real reason ye tha ki jo chandni ka love twist dala tha na wo acceptable nahi tha kyon ki story me kanhi bhi chandni aur abhay ki ek dushre ke liye koi bhi feelings nahi dikhayi thi aur accident ke turant baad hi ushki feelings ko change kar diya...aur chalo maa liya ki chandni ke dil me ye pahle se tha..toh writer ne kabhi pahle kyon nahi dikhaya ek bhi scene/clues...ye suddenly hi kyon kiya....ye mujhe samjha do bas Main koi writer nahi hu toh mujhe samajh nahi hai as a writer samjha sakte ho toh samjha dena.... aur wo story ek maa bete pe thi ishliye padh raha tha Bas....
Aur main story tab padhta hu jab ush story ka koi character mujhse connect kar jata hai..... like payal....like Natasha....
Explain kar sakte ho bhai ki main ne aysa kya kiya hai story me jo aysa bol rahe ho...agar aysa hai toh mai story chhod bhi sakta hu mere liye ye koi bada issue nahi hai...
Agar ye meri Wajah se Bola hai toh so sorry bhai maaf karna...
Main apni baat pe kayam hu bhai aur adultery aur harem me fark hota hai aur main ish story ke xxx scense ko nahi padhne baytha hu ye main ne apne reviews me bhi bola hai.... aur ek promise kiya tha sister se story padhne ka aur main apne wade ka pakka hu...
Bilkul aa raha hoga dhal bhai...
Ushka reason ye hai ki main ne story rules padhe ushme ek word hai interfaith ka mujhe ye kya hota hai nahi pata tha...aur chit-chat me ek comment padha tha kisi ne ush story ki report ki thi ki ush story me interfaith hai toh main ne story visit ki aur 1st page pe hi pic dikhi toh main ne sister ko Bola tha....
Ish forum pe maybe main pahla ladka honga jishne ek aanjan ladki ko bahen bola...koi hai jo yanha kisi ladki ko bahen bole..ho tho batana....
aur main ne pata nahi kitni hi storys padhi hai incest ki....a)kamina bhai.... love story hai na adultery hai na hi harem....
b)ammi ka deevana beta....mom-son love story....
c) Meri bahen ek stripper....love story....xforum exclusive....
d)vihaan and Ashita..... love story...
E)Aashiqi part 1......love story....
f)Aashiqi part 2(incomplete)....love story....
g) beauty and the beast 1.....romance
h)beauty and the beast 2.....romance...
I) deevangi....love story (running thi but update nahi aa rahe hai abhi)....
aur bhi hai jo main ne padhi hai.....
FYI,main story pe 10-11 chapter ke baad juda tha....aur tumko agar aysa hi lagta hai ki meri comments aur reply ki Wajah se readers story chhod ke jaa rahe hai toh main story ko chhod raha hu aur story ka sara blame main apne Sir pe leta hu aur apologize bhi karta hu ki ye sari meri galti se hua hai....it's all may fault...I'm sorry
dhalchandarun and
mistyvixen tum dono ke bich me aane ke liye.... baki agar kuch galat bola ho aur koi galti ho toh maaf karna...
And last thing .....misty sister ne mujhe ai pics banana sikhaya as a teacher.... main ne socha story likhne ka ushme bhi sister ne support kiya as a teacher so why not I support him
...ek pal ke liye to laga jaise khatam hi nahi hoga
