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:agree: thanksKai baar stories ke plot ek jaise ho sakte hai

:agree: thanksKai baar stories ke plot ek jaise ho sakte hai
ThanksBhai bohot hi beautiful update diya hai.
Or shayad Pari ne un dono ke liplook ko dekh kar chali gayi hogi.
ThanksNice fantastic update !!!!
It is really making.... Us to believe that imaginary situation...
Expectations are increasing... More towards the story.... With every update....
Keep it up !!!!!
ThanksNice update tha.
Story ke aage kia hua wo to easily kahe saathe hai.Magar love story tho thriller nahi jo aage ke story ke baarme pata na chalie. ye story parne me maza a raha hai.Aapne is story ko simple rakhte ho jo acha lagta hai.Kiu ki is forum sirf fantasy par parke jab aapke ye jana paichana simple story parta hu to real life ke ghatna yaad a jata hai.Aapka writing skill shandar hai.
Simply lovely story......
Aagle update ki intejar rahega.....