Romance Ek Ajeeb si love story (completed)

[Notebook]

Nice update.
Reveka?
Ye 20 se 30 update pe khatam hone wali story hai ise zyada mat khichna.

Thanks kya Reveka ?
Dont worry story bore nahi karegi

 

[Notebook]

Gate per shayad uske mom dad honge aur fir confusion create hoga.

Thanks kl pata chalega gate par kaun hai mujhe to dar lag raha hai

 

[Casinar]

 

[Casinar]

Update # 13




Himansh bina Monty ki ore dekhe uth kar bahar chala gaya . Monty to Monty khud Himansh bhi hairan tha apne behaviour par . Himansh ka club me dum ghutne laga to wo wahan se nikal kar seedhe Pari ke orphanage ki ore chal diya . Usne aaj Pari ko dil ki baat batane ka soch liya tha .



Himansh abhi aadhe hi raste tak pahuncha tha ki Monty ki call aa gayi . Problem ye thi ki Reveka surprice dene ke liye Himansh ke ghar ja rahi thi kyu ki uske pass Himansh ke ghar ki spare keys thi lekin wo Himansh ke ghar ke paas pahunchi hi thi ki uska accident ho gaya tha .


Himansh - wtf kahan accident ho gaya uska aur usne mujhe kyu call nahi ki ?



Monty- usne nahi ki thi call uske mobile se kisi aur ne kiya tha . Mera no last dial me tha to mujhe ko laga di gayi call .



Himansh - jyada chot lagi kya ?



Monty- bhai wo tere hi ghar gayi hai ja kar dekh le mai to abhi club me hi hoon jaroorat ho to bula lena .


Himansh- yaar mai khud ulte raste par tha

Himansh ka muh ban gaya . Use Reveka par had se jyada gussa aa rahi thi uske pas lekin option bhi to koi aur nahi tha . Usne apni car ghuma li apne ghar ki taraf . Jab wo apne flat par pahuncha to Reveka wahan maujood thi . Ek taang center table par lade baithi thi .


Himansh - tum theek to ho na ?

Himansh ne uski taang ko dekhte huye kaha .


Reveka - haan bas sir me dukh raha hai . Jor se lagi mujhe .



Himansh - hain sir me lagi . Oh eaise Dr ke paas jana chahiye tha tha tumko .


Reveka - tumhare apartment ke Dr ko hi dikha liya unhone total bed rest karne ko kaha hai .


Himansh - ohk tum karo rest mai tumhare liye coffee banata hoon.



Reveka - itni jaldi kya hai mai kahi bhagi to nahi ja rahi hoon . ek do din yahi hoon .



Himansh- tumko apne flat par jakar aaram karna chahiye . Mai hamesha to baitha nahi rahoonga



Reveka - nahi mujhe akele dar lagta hai . Mai tumhare sath hi rukungi .



Himash - pahli baar suna hai ki bhootni ko dar lag raha hai ( in very low voice) . Yahan dikkat hogi tumko kyu ki mujhe bahar jana padega .



Reveka - oh koi baat nahi tum jao apne kaam se mai chali jati hoon apne ghar bas itna kar dena ki jab wakt mile meri car pahuncha dena kyu ki meri halat drive karne ki nahi hai abhi . Bahut kamjori lag rahi hai. Chakkar bhi aa rahe hain mujhe .

Reveka ne muh bana kar apne agla daanw fenka .


Himansh- achchhi aafat hai yaar ok araam karo yahi mai coffee banata hoon .

Himansh beman se kitchen ki ore badh gaya jabki Reveka apni jeet par muskurati huyi bed par pasar gayi . Coffee peete huye Reveka ne Himansh se poonchha .


Reveka- bada sahi set kar rakha hai tumne ghar ko Himansh . Mom dad ke ane ki khushi me na ?



Himansh- are maine nahi kiya Pari ne kiya tha .

Bolte hi Himansh ko apni galti ka ahsas ho gaya tha par ab koi fayeda nahi tha kyu ki teer kaman se chhot chuka tha .


Reveka - wow to Pari yahan tak pahunch chuki hai .

Reveka ne Himansh ke bed roon ki ore najre ghumate huye kaha .uski aankhon me jalan saaf dikh rahi thi .



Himansh- tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa bilkul nahi hai . Wo is type ki nahi hai .

Himansh ko samjh aa gaya tha ki usne Pari ka naam lekar galti kar di hai .



Reveka - badi jaldi tumko uska type bhi pata chal gaya Himansh ?



Himansh- look Reveka mera ladne ka bilkul mood nahi hai . Mai living room me ja raha hoon tumko kuchh jarurat ho to bata dena .

Himansh ne full on rudeness se kaha .


Reveka - jaise tumko paha hi nahi mujhe kya chahiye .

Reveka Himansh ke bilkul pas aakar usase sat kar baith gayi aur apne lips ko uske Shoulders se satati huyi boli .


Himansh- Reveka tumhare sir par gahri chot aayi maloom padti hai . Please tum rest karo mai bahar hi hoon .

Himansh ne uthna chaha par Reveka ko jaise koi nasha sawar ho gaya tha . Usne Himansh ko kheench kar bed par hi gira liya aur khud uske upar palat gayi . Himansh ko kuchh bhi samajh ata isase pahle hi Reveka ne apne lips Himansh ke lips se jod diye lekin Himansh ko jane kyu sirf Pari ka kyal aa raha tha . Usne Reveka ko khud se alag kiya aur jhatke se bahar aa gaya . Himansh abhi khud ko sayamit hi kar raha tha ki door bell bajne lagi .

good update.
reveka par bahot ghussa araha hai mujhe, khinch kar zor se ekaat thapad dena chahiye tha ussko.
nautanki hai saali... hmm kiss ne door bell bajaayi kahin Pari to nahin? mere khayaal se to pari hi hogi
ab sochne wali baat yeh hai ke agar pari hogi to reveka ussko yahan dekh kar kia tamasha karegi
agar tamasha kiya to yeh reveka ka aakhri din aur waqt hoga Himansh ke saath right?

bhai sab sahi hai magar, 1. mere suggest karne par bhi aap ne paragraphs ke distance ko nahin change kiya
2. please proof read karna post karne se pehle so that all spellings get corrected, har baar bahot saare spelling mistakes rehte hein
apart from that i loved the update.
very good going, keep it up.

 

[Naina]

Update # 13




Himansh bina Monty ki ore dekhe uth kar bahar chala gaya . Monty to Monty khud Himansh bhi hairan tha apne behaviour par . Himansh ka club me dum ghutne laga to wo wahan se nikal kar seedhe Pari ke orphanage ki ore chal diya . Usne aaj Pari ko dil ki baat batane ka soch liya tha .



Himansh abhi aadhe hi raste tak pahuncha tha ki Monty ki call aa gayi . Problem ye thi ki Reveka surprice dene ke liye Himansh ke ghar ja rahi thi kyu ki uske pass Himansh ke ghar ki spare keys thi lekin wo Himansh ke ghar ke paas pahunchi hi thi ki uska accident ho gaya tha .


Himansh - wtf kahan accident ho gaya uska aur usne mujhe kyu call nahi ki ?



Monty- usne nahi ki thi call uske mobile se kisi aur ne kiya tha . Mera no last dial me tha to mujhe ko laga di gayi call .



Himansh - jyada chot lagi kya ?



Monty- bhai wo tere hi ghar gayi hai ja kar dekh le mai to abhi club me hi hoon jaroorat ho to bula lena .


Himansh- yaar mai khud ulte raste par tha

Himansh ka muh ban gaya . Use Reveka par had se jyada gussa aa rahi thi uske pas lekin option bhi to koi aur nahi tha . Usne apni car ghuma li apne ghar ki taraf . Jab wo apne flat par pahuncha to Reveka wahan maujood thi . Ek taang center table par lade baithi thi .


Himansh - tum theek to ho na ?

Himansh ne uski taang ko dekhte huye kaha .


Reveka - haan bas sir me dukh raha hai . Jor se lagi mujhe .



Himansh - hain sir me lagi . Oh eaise Dr ke paas jana chahiye tha tha tumko .


Reveka - tumhare apartment ke Dr ko hi dikha liya unhone total bed rest karne ko kaha hai .


Himansh - ohk tum karo rest mai tumhare liye coffee banata hoon.



Reveka - itni jaldi kya hai mai kahi bhagi to nahi ja rahi hoon . ek do din yahi hoon .



Himansh- tumko apne flat par jakar aaram karna chahiye . Mai hamesha to baitha nahi rahoonga



Reveka - nahi mujhe akele dar lagta hai . Mai tumhare sath hi rukungi .



Himash - pahli baar suna hai ki bhootni ko dar lag raha hai ( in very low voice) . Yahan dikkat hogi tumko kyu ki mujhe bahar jana padega .



Reveka - oh koi baat nahi tum jao apne kaam se mai chali jati hoon apne ghar bas itna kar dena ki jab wakt mile meri car pahuncha dena kyu ki meri halat drive karne ki nahi hai abhi . Bahut kamjori lag rahi hai. Chakkar bhi aa rahe hain mujhe .

Reveka ne muh bana kar apne agla daanw fenka .


Himansh- achchhi aafat hai yaar ok araam karo yahi mai coffee banata hoon .

Himansh beman se kitchen ki ore badh gaya jabki Reveka apni jeet par muskurati huyi bed par pasar gayi . Coffee peete huye Reveka ne Himansh se poonchha .


Reveka- bada sahi set kar rakha hai tumne ghar ko Himansh . Mom dad ke ane ki khushi me na ?



Himansh- are maine nahi kiya Pari ne kiya tha .

Bolte hi Himansh ko apni galti ka ahsas ho gaya tha par ab koi fayeda nahi tha kyu ki teer kaman se chhot chuka tha .


Reveka - wow to Pari yahan tak pahunch chuki hai .

Reveka ne Himansh ke bed roon ki ore najre ghumate huye kaha .uski aankhon me jalan saaf dikh rahi thi .



Himansh- tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa bilkul nahi hai . Wo is type ki nahi hai .

Himansh ko samjh aa gaya tha ki usne Pari ka naam lekar galti kar di hai .



Reveka - badi jaldi tumko uska type bhi pata chal gaya Himansh ?



Himansh- look Reveka mera ladne ka bilkul mood nahi hai . Mai living room me ja raha hoon tumko kuchh jarurat ho to bata dena .

Himansh ne full on rudeness se kaha .


Reveka - jaise tumko paha hi nahi mujhe kya chahiye .

Reveka Himansh ke bilkul pas aakar usase sat kar baith gayi aur apne lips ko uske Shoulders se satati huyi boli .


Himansh- Reveka tumhare sir par gahri chot aayi maloom padti hai . Please tum rest karo mai bahar hi hoon .

Himansh ne uthna chaha par Reveka ko jaise koi nasha sawar ho gaya tha . Usne Himansh ko kheench kar bed par hi gira liya aur khud uske upar palat gayi . Himansh ko kuchh bhi samajh ata isase pahle hi Reveka ne apne lips Himansh ke lips se jod diye lekin Himansh ko jane kyu sirf Pari ka kyal aa raha tha . Usne Reveka ko khud se alag kiya aur jhatke se bahar aa gaya . Himansh abhi khud ko sayamit hi kar raha tha ki door bell bajne lagi .

Brilliant update... Simply a beautiful love story,,,, bas ye female's vamps ko hataiye... Original life agar ye kamini revaka mil jaye na usko na me.... Uffff kyu itni pyari story me ye lal mirch ki tadka laga rahe hai...

 

[Gully Boy]

Ting Tong !!!!

Khatreh ki ghanti baaj gayi hai.... Bhai...
Lagtah hai.... Aab Dhamakaa.... Hone wala hai.....

Very nice update !!!!!

 

[Notebook]

 

[Notebook]

good update.
reveka par bahot ghussa araha hai mujhe, khinch kar zor se ekaat thapad dena chahiye tha ussko.
nautanki hai saali... hmm kiss ne door bell bajaayi kahin Pari to nahin? mere khayaal se to pari hi hogi
ab sochne wali baat yeh hai ke agar pari hogi to reveka ussko yahan dekh kar kia tamasha karegi
agar tamasha kiya to yeh reveka ka aakhri din aur waqt hoga Himansh ke saath right?

bhai sab sahi hai magar, 1. mere suggest karne par bhi aap ne paragraphs ke distance ko nahin change kiya
2. please proof read karna post karne se pehle so that all spellings get corrected, har baar bahot saare spelling mistakes rehte hein
apart from that i loved the update.
very good going, keep it up.

Thanks apki shikayatein jayaj hain par update sach me jaldi me likhne ki wajah se ashudhi rah jati hai . Dhyan rakha jayega aage se
Reveka se ham logon ko jitni nafrat hogi eo utni hi khush hogi thanks sir

 

[Notebook]

Brilliant update... Simply a beautiful love story,,,, bas ye female's vamps ko hataiye... Original life agar ye kamini revaka mil jaye na usko na me.... Uffff kyu itni pyari story me ye lal mirch ki tadka laga rahe hai...

thanks
Reveka koi kand kar ke hi hategi . Reveka ki to jeet hi sabhi ko rulane me hain .

Aisi bhi ladkiyan hoti hain in fact ek se to pala bhi pada tha ab sab Himansh ki samjhdari par hai ki wo kaise samhalta hai halaat ko

 

[Mbindas]

Amazing update bhai