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kya aap chahte hai ki me is kahani ko intresting banane ke liye photos our gifs ka tadka lagau??????


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Mai aaj apni ek nayi kahani shuru kar raha hun. is kahani ko me thoda hat kar likhe ki koshish karne wala hun. mana ki maine pichli kahani me kuch galtiya ki hongi our kisi karan wo kahani maine adhuri chhod di..
mai wo kahani bhi puri karunga par is kahani ke pura hone ke baad hi us kahani ke tarah mudna pasand karunga

ye kahani action se bharpur, thrill se khachakhach bharne ki puri koshish karunga, yaha sex bhi he our romanch bhi yaha daravne manjar bhi hai our pyar bhare mosam bhi....

mai sabhi dosto se ummid karta hun ki aap sab mere is dusre kahani par dher sara pyar barsayenge our pura saath denge.
OUR EK SABSE JARURI BAAT KAHANI KA HAR EK UPDATE HAR 2 DIN BAAD ME POST KARUNGA....AGAR KISI KARAN DERI HUYI TO AGLA AANE WALA UPDATE KAFI LAMBA HOGA.......WAISE KAHANI KE UPDATES ME DERI HONE KI KOI GUNJAISH NAHI HAI ....FIR BHI ME CLEAR KAR RAHA HUN

Mai aap sab se vinati karunga ki kahani mai likh raha hun to mujhe motive kare na ki usme kamiya nikal kar mujhe demotive na kare.......is kahani ko me thoda realistic tarike se likhne ka prayas karunga isliye kahani aapko pasand aaye yehi meri koshish rehne wali he......

aapko is kahani ko padhne me jyada interest aaye our utne hi maja aaye iski puri koshish karunga


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Devilprasad apne bharosemamd sathoyon ke sath ke saath underworld ke sabse takatwar maha khalanayako ke saath ek meeting me baaitha hua tha…..jo puri duniya ko aapni ungli ki nok par nachana jante the…….sab log ekdusre ke jariye aapna wyapar aapne prati logonke man me dar our apni taakat badhane ka ekdusre ka jariya bane huye the……

Our yeahi baat unhe sabse takatwar bana rahi thi…..unsabka mukhiya tha james pawel……jo insab ka boss tha…….jo underworld ki duniya ka betaj badshah tha…..our duniya bhar ke har naajayaj dhandho ka maalik….uske sath hi kaai desho ki political partiyon ko wo support karta rehta hai our yehi uski sabse badi saajish hai jo use hamesha bachaye rakhti hai……james pawel ko yaha moujud logon ke alawa kisi ne nahi dekha tha, our jisne bhi koshish ki uske bare me pata karne ki wo khud laapata ho jate the….

NOTE -{ pawel ko hindi achi tarah se aati hai…….devilprasad our unke sathiyon me se sirf ek our insaan ko hindi aati thi baki sab ek alag bhasha me baat kar rahe the….to me likhte samy hindi ka hi prayog karunga taki sabko samajhne me aasani ho}

Pawel ke aane se sabhi khade ho gayi our sab ek saath bole…..

” Satan Spinch Forever “

J Pawel { JP }: ” Satan Spinch Forever “ our sab uske ishare par aapni apni jagah par baith gaye…pawel ne devilprasad ko ishara kiya ….to devilprasad apni jagah se khade hokar aapne ek admi ko ishara kiya

Devilprasad { PR } : aap sab samjh gaye honge ki aaj itne samay baad hamne ye meeting kyu bulayi hai our khud hamare badshah yaha kyu moujud hai…….” Sabne haami bhari

JP : “ sab log jante ho humne jis experiment ke liye itne saal lagaye the wo ab pura ho chukka hai….humne wo pane ke najdik pahunch chuke hai jiski hame barso se talash thi………” Devilprasad ne apne ek nokar ko bulaya…..wo apne sath ek 8fit ki kaanch ki peti le aayaa…jiske upar ek kapda dala hua tha.

Devilprasad : “ to pesh hai hamari 12 saalo ki mehnat ka natija jis ke dam par hum puri duniya par raaj karenge…jab chahe jis bhi kone me hum aatank macha sakte hai…..” sab taliya banaje lage…our devilprasad ne us kaanch ke peti ke upar se parda hata diye …uske andar ek saamanya sa dikhne wala insaan tha jise janjiro se jakda hua tha….

Devilprasad : “ dekho ise dikhne me aam insaan lag raha hai…par iske andar ki takat janwaro se bhi kai guna jyada hai….”

JP : “tum sab ab dhyan se suno mujhe duniya ke sabse behtar biological scientists chahiye jo raji ho kharid lo jo nahi mane usko dara kar le aao me kuch nahi janta mujhe bas mera sapna pura chahiye….”

Devilprasad : “boss ye maine pehle hi arrange kar diya hai halaki mujhe kisi ko dhamkane ya darane ki jarurat nahi padi……paiso ke sath kuch naya banane ki jo talab hai wo unhe mere sath kam karne ke liye majboor kar gayi…. Our unhi ki badoulat hamara ye project kamyab ho paya hai….chaliye ab aap sabhi ko ek namuna dikhaya jaaye…..”

Sab logo ki najre ek badi si screen par lag gayi……jisme ek ladka bediyon se jakda hua tha uske saamne 6 duniya ke sabse khatarnaak bhediye jo dikhne me khunkhar lag rahe the wo us ladke ko dekh kar our bhi jyada gurrane lage….wo ladka aaise khada tha jaise uske andar koi jaan hi na ho…uski aankhe band thi .wo kamjor lag raha tha….uske janjiro ke sath ek bracelet uski haatho me bandha hua tha………wo dikhne me mamuli bracelet tha…jispar 3 tarah ke rang the….laal-kala our hara…..yani ke red-black our green

Devilprasad : “aap sab screen par jo najara dekh rahe hai wo abhi live ho raha hai…..ye duniya ke sabse vehsi janvar hai jise sirf apna pet bharna hi aata hai….in sabhi janwaron ko hamne ek aaisa injection lagaya hai jiska asar inhe our bhi akramak our khatarnak banata hai…. Our unke samne ek ladka dekh rahe ho wo hai yaha ka ek mamuli ladka jo ek masum our kamjor baccha hai jisne aajtak kisi par hath bhi nahi uthaya hai…. Jante ho ab kya hoga, koi batayega kya hone wala hai?”

Unknown : “Jahir si baat hai wo ladka insab ke pet me jayega wo shikar banega in bhediyon ka”

JP : “hahahaha……”

Devilprasad : “hahahahaha……acha sujhav tha par yahi to majedar baat hai…..ye masum sa lagta in sabhi bhediyon ko 2 tukdon me baant dega ….” Is baat par sabko ascharya hua sivay JP our PR ke….

JP : “ye ek aaisa bracelet hai jiske andar 3 tarah ki davayiya maine rakhi huyi hai….wo haar tarah se kaam karti hai….halaki ye hamare control se bahar ho jati hai…..par iska ek fayda bhi hai ki is dawayi ko lene wala koi bhi vyakti zinda nahi bach sakta …..”

PR : “ sahi kaha boss ye humne jaan bujh kar aaisa tarika aajmaya hai, normal drug insaan ko bas alag alag maje dete hai par hamara banaya ye drug insaan ko kai jada takatwar our furtila banayega jiski kalpana bhi kisi ne nahi ki hogi par iska istemal sirf wo log kar sakte hai jinhe sirf badla lena ho ya aatank machana ho ya fir anya tariko ke kaamo ko anjaam dena ho…jaise ki ye namuna dekh lo aap log …ab mai is remote se use nirdesh dunga” our PR ne laal rang ka button dabaya …..jaise hi usne button dabaya us ladke ki aankhe khul gayi jo puri taraf laal ho chuki thi….jise dekh koi bhi dar jaye….

Uski aankho me khoon utar chukka tha……ek dusre remote se PR ne us ladke ko bediyon se aajad kar diya..jaise hi wo ladka aajad hua wo bhediyon ko gusse se dekhne laga….sabhi bhediye gurra rahe the….uske baad PR ne bhediyon ko aajad karne ka adesh diya ….jaise hi wo aajad huye unhone ladke ke upar ek –ek kar hamla bol diya ….par screen par jo ho raha tha wo dekh kar sabhi ke sabhi hairaan ho gaye…..

Us ladke ne badi krurta ke saath un sabhi bhediyon ko do tukdo me baant diya pura room our wo ladka khoon se latpath tha….” Sab dekh hairaan the wahi JP ke chehre par vijay ki muskaan thi…

PR : “to dosto aapne jo dekha wo asliyat hai hamare is naye product ki jo kale bazar me golden king banane wala hai….”

Unknown : “ aapne red button ke bare me samjha diya par ye baki do button? “

PR : “mai usi taraf aaraha hun….. red button insan ke andar chupi takat our darindagi bahar le aata hai……our ye black rang ka button uske sharir andar ek aaisa drug ghol deta hai jiske chalte agle 1 minute ke andar uski mout ho jati hai …our dr’s ki najron me ise heartatttack hi samjha jayega our aakhri yaha ki sefty button jise dabane ke baad uske andar se saare drugs ka namonishan mit jayega jiske karan kisi ko ye tak nahi pata chal sakta ki aakhir is ladke ke upar kisi drug ka haath ho sakta hai….”

Unknown : “iska matlab humne aaik aaisa drup is device ki madat seye un logon me failayenge jinhe iski jarurat hai apna kaam nikalne our tabahi machane ke liye…..ya hum khud kisi ki hattya karwa sakte hai kahi bhi baith kar….jiske baad koi namonishan nahi bach sakta ki ye sab kyu hua kaise hua our kisne kiya…”

PR : “haan bilkul sahi kaha, ye ek contract killer ka hi kaam karega jise hum operate kar sakte hai….na gawahi ka dar hoga na pakde jane ka dar hoga na koi sabut…..par isme ek khami hai…. Ise 200meter ke dayre se hi operate kiya ja sakta hai….chahe khud karo ya kisi our se karwa lo…..”

JP : “haan mera agla kadam isase bhi jyada fayde ka ho sakta hai….par abhi ye jo bracelet hai ise black market me golden king naam se becho…..har ek businessman mantra….gunde killer sabke pass pahunch jana chahiye…. Iski keemat rahegi 1cr….”

PR : “par boss ye bohot hi sasta ho jaygea….hamne arbo rupaye lagaye hai boss…hamara nuksaan ho jayega….”

JP : “mai janta hun par hamara ye anokha experiment hum kisi bhi aaire gaire ke haatho me nahi de sakte ise hum khufiya tour par istemal karenge kisi ke kanokan khabar nahi lagni chahiye…..puri duniya soch bhi nahi payegi aaisa bhi kuch is duniya me banaya ja sakta hai…..”

PR : “haan boss our isase bhi achi baat ye hai ki koi bhi na banane wale ka pata laga sakta hai na marvane wale ka ……”

Unknown2 : “ ye to bohot hi acha experiment hai boss hum sab iske liye raaji hai…..our hum hamesha aapke support me hi rahenge…” sabke jane ke baad JP our PR dono bache the….PR ne JP se kaha

PR : “JP mere yaar duniya ke samne tum mere boss ho par ye koi nahi janta ki tum mere jigri dost ho….our partner bhi ho”

JP : “tum jante ho mujhe hamesha logon se khud ko dur rakhne me mai mahir hun…our yehi aadat mujhe sabse anokha banati hai…”

PR : “par mai aaj tak nahi samjh paya ki tum mujhse bade ho par fir bhi tumhari umar jaise pehle thi waise hi lagti hai….in 10 saalo me tumhare andar kuch bhi nahi badla hai…” ispr pawel ne muskurate huye kaha

JP : “khud ki aatma ka souda karna aasan nahi hota warna me kab ka mar chukka hota…..maine marne se pehle saitan se souda na kiya hota to….”

PR : “haan yaar tujhe to fir se zindagi mil gayi our ye jawani bhi to mili hai …kas mai bhi ban pata ….”Jp ne kaha

JP : “ye itna aasan nahi hai mere dost uske liye wo kurbani deni padti hai jise hum sabse jyada chahte hai…..maine apne pure pariwar ko saitaan ke hawale kiya tab jakar mujhe ye wardan mila hai….par ye tujhse hoga nahi mai janta hun tu apne bete our beti se kitna pyar karta hai ye me ache se janta hun….”

PR : “haan ye baat bilkul sahi kaha tune…baccho ke liye me apni jaan bhi de dun…..”

JP : “our waise bhi wardan ke sath kuch khamiya bhi milti hai…maine jo manga tha wo sab mujhe hasil hua doulat shohrat….duniya par raaj karna chahta tha….dekho kar bhi raha hun…..shaitani shaktiyon ka sahi kamo me istemal nahi kiya ja sakta unhe hamesha burai ke liye hi istemal kiya ja sakta hai….mujhe duniya ka sabse takatwar insaan banana tha so aaj mai hun par uske sath mujhe ek shrap bhi mila …..taki shaitan hamesha hamse ek kadam aage rehta hai…”

PR : “haan janta hun tune pehle bhi bataya tha…..tu kabhi shadi nahi karega our na hi kabhi bacche paida kar sakta hai……warna tujhe hamesha ke liye nark me bheja jayega….”

JP : “sahi kaha…….khair mujhe jo chahiye thaa wo to humne pa liya hai ab aage ek our kadam badhayenge dusra experiment ki tayyari karo…..”

PR : “haan chalo maine iski tayyari Greenland me kar di hai ab mai wahi jane wala hun aagle kuch saalo tak….yaha ka sara kaam mera beta sambhal lega….mai chahta hun tum mere bete par najar rakho….taki wo safe rahe…wo abhi nadan hai…. Use business ki jyada samjh nahi hai…..”

JP : “haan Business ke liye experience nahi kabiliyat chahiye hoti hai har chij ko manage karne ki….to tumhare bete mai bohot kam hai……wo har chij paiso ke dum par karna chahta hai….”

PR : “haan mai janta hun…wo meri baat sunta nahi isliye to tujhe bol raha hun…

Aaise hi dono me baate hoti rahi fir dono ne paiso ki len den ki baate ki our apne apne raste nikal gaye….

Dusri our gaav me mohol ekdam shant ho chukka tha…..bhanu pratap bhi gaav aachuka tha….pure gaav ko uski asliyat pata nahi thi our jinhe pata lag chuki thi wo bas chup rehkar tamasha dekhne wale the kyun ki Thakur ke khilaf koi aawaj nahi utha sakta tha….wo chahe jitna bhi galat kyu na ho uske khilaf aawaj uthana matlab mout ko bulawa dena hai……

Avinash chacha apne karyalay chale gaye the. .chachi apni dukan par ….karan apne school ja chukka tha our nayan bhi apne collage ja chuki thi… jalim ne jis ladke ko nayan ko fasane ke liye yaha le aaya tha….use bhi nayan ke hi class me bharti karwaya tha….

Usne kuch dost banaye the..jo uski ki tarah aawara the….jinke pita amir the our wo bacche bas aawara panti karne ke liye hi collage aate the…..unhe ladkiyon ko dekh kar maja aata tha….padhai me ache isliye the kyun ki ladkiya padhe likhe ladko se juldi pat jati hai……yehi unka maanana tha ….dekha jaye to ye bhi sach hai jo ladke padhai me ache hote hai ladkiya unki bhi diwani hoti hai….

To bas wo sab usi ka fayda uthana chahte the…….

Kuch ladkiya unke upar fida thi our hongi bhi kyun na wo sab dikhne me handsome the hot the

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Rony – rohan singh iski umar hai 19 saal hai, padhai likhai me bohot hoshiyar hai our sathi hi handsome bhi hai…kisi hero se kam nahi lagta hai…sheher me padhta tha par jalim singh ne uske baap se keh kar yaha bulwaya hai….our asli karan rohan yani ke rony ka baap bhi janta hai….. padhai likhayi our apni sehat ka khayal ek hi karan se karta hai our wo hai ladkiyon ke saath maje kar sake…….uski soch aaisi hai ki padhai likhai me ache ho to ache ghar ki ladkiya fasayi ja sakti hai our unke maje liye ja sakte hai…..beta 1 no to uska baap 10 no ka hai

Monty – mohan sharma iski umar 18 hai our wo isi gaav ka hai jaha se jalim singh hai…..halaki mohan acha ladka tha par uski girlfriend ne use dhokha diya hai tab se wo jakhmi billa ban gaya hai…our yahi karan hai ki wo rony ke sath aawara gardi karta hai….padhai likhayi me acha hai our hamesha class me 2-3 rank pa leta hai….

Ritesh : “ ye 18 saal ka hai ye kamlapuri gaav me rehta hai …nayan ko ache se janta hai……..garib hai……..bas paise our aayashi ka intejam ho jata hai isliye wo in dono ke sath hai….iske ghar me iska baap nahi hai ….bas akeli maa hai our ye unka eklouta beta hai….isliye jarurat ki chije ise kabhi nahi mili par rony ke aane ke baad ise sab milne laga isliye iski unke sath dosti ho gayi…. }}}}}}}}} }}}} }} } }}

Sheher me ek sunsaan elake me ek ladki isi ladke se baat kar rahi thi

Ladki : “dekho me kuch nahi janti mujhe bas usko tadapte huye dekhna hai……mujhe bas uski chikhe sunni hai” wo ladka haste huye kehta hai

Ladka : “ waise tum chaho to me tumhari bhi chikhe nikal sakta hun” wo ladki gusse me kehti hai

Ladki : “tamiz me raho jyada udo mat…..mujhe bas use barbaad karna hai tab mujhe sukun milega….”

Ladka : “ haan wo sab to thik hai par uske liye paise lagenge , mai free me kuch nahi karta, our mujhe garenty chahiye ki tum mujhe fasa nahi rahi ho….” Wo ladki uske hatho me paise rakhte huye boli

Ladki : “ye rakho 5000, mera kaam juldi ho jana chhiye ….use bas uski oukat pata honi chhiye…..our ha bas is baat ka dhyan rakhna use bas darana hai….use chune ki himmat bhi mat karna……” wo ladka kamini muskan ke sath…kehta hai

Ladka : “ me kuch bhi karu tumhara kaam hone ke baad usase tumhe kya karna hai……me chahe jo karu tum apne kaam se kaam rakho”

Ladki : “yaad rakhna wo mamuli ladki nahi hai ab our han uska ek bhai hai jo ek takatwar pehlwan jaisa hai isliye galti karne se pehle soch lena……..maine khud dekha hai use apni aankho se wo kitna takatwar hai ……meri baat mano our use bas thoda sa darao our apne raste chalte bano.”

Ladka : “maine aaise bohot dekhe hai bhaai waai……dekh lunga ise bhi ….waise photo me to wo maal lag rahi hai………chalo kaam pura hone par pata chal jayega ….ab dobara phone mat karna mujhe…”

Ladki : “ mera bas chalta to mai tum jaise tapori se milne aati bhi nahi….”

Ladka : “chal-chal nikal warna mere armaan foot rahe hai teri jawani dekh kar ….nikal warna ….” Wo ladki bina kuch bole waha se tezi se nikal jati hai…

Uske jane ke baad wo ladka khushi se kisi ko phone lagata hai

Ladka : “boss ek bohot hi achi khabar hai aapke liye”

Boss : “sunao kya hai wo khabar…?”

Ladka : “boss ek rapchik maal haath lagne wali hai….”

Boss : “ to fir tumjhe malamal kar dunga aagar aaisa hua to……lekin agar teri baat jhooth nikli to yaad rakhna teri behen ko uski jagah bech dunga ….”

Ladka : “kyu aap meri behen ke piche pade ho…..me sach keh rhaa hun mere pass uski photo hai aap dekhoge to khush ho jaoge…..”

Boss : “ thik hai ek number deta hun likh le…our is number par fax karde wo photo..”

Wo ladka waha se nikal jata hai…wo ladki mall pahunch jati hai…. Ye our koi nahi secretry hai jo prerna ke liye kaam karti hai…..wo bas apne apmaan ka badla lena chhti thi our koi mansuba nahi hai iska…..

Par rasika ko is baat ka koi andaja nahi tha uski wo jalan our gussa kisi ki life me kaisa tufan lekar aayega….
 

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