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kya aap chahte hai ki me is kahani ko intresting banane ke liye photos our gifs ka tadka lagau??????


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Mai aaj apni ek nayi kahani shuru kar raha hun. is kahani ko me thoda hat kar likhe ki koshish karne wala hun. mana ki maine pichli kahani me kuch galtiya ki hongi our kisi karan wo kahani maine adhuri chhod di..
mai wo kahani bhi puri karunga par is kahani ke pura hone ke baad hi us kahani ke tarah mudna pasand karunga

ye kahani action se bharpur, thrill se khachakhach bharne ki puri koshish karunga, yaha sex bhi he our romanch bhi yaha daravne manjar bhi hai our pyar bhare mosam bhi....

mai sabhi dosto se ummid karta hun ki aap sab mere is dusre kahani par dher sara pyar barsayenge our pura saath denge.
OUR EK SABSE JARURI BAAT KAHANI KA HAR EK UPDATE HAR 2 DIN BAAD ME POST KARUNGA....AGAR KISI KARAN DERI HUYI TO AGLA AANE WALA UPDATE KAFI LAMBA HOGA.......WAISE KAHANI KE UPDATES ME DERI HONE KI KOI GUNJAISH NAHI HAI ....FIR BHI ME CLEAR KAR RAHA HUN

Mai aap sab se vinati karunga ki kahani mai likh raha hun to mujhe motive kare na ki usme kamiya nikal kar mujhe demotive na kare.......is kahani ko me thoda realistic tarike se likhne ka prayas karunga isliye kahani aapko pasand aaye yehi meri koshish rehne wali he......

aapko is kahani ko padhne me jyada interest aaye our utne hi maja aaye iski puri koshish karunga


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Mai prerna our dimple ghar aagaye the….prerna abhi bhi dari huyi thi ye soch kar ki wo log use uthane aaye the…

Dusri our divya bhi wo sab dekh kar dari huyi thi agar mai waha na aata to kya hota…wahi haal anamika ka bhi tha…wo us wakiye ko bhool nahi pa rahi thi…

Ek our eleven ko apne chacha ki khabar nahi mili thi . na hi use mera koi sandesh mila tha …isliye wo kuch dino se pareshan thi….. fir usne waha se nikalne ka tay kiya our apne chacha ki talash me wo waha se rawana ho gayi.. jane se pehle usne hamare pushker { gidh} ke jariye usne ek sandesha bheja jisme usne sari bat batayi thi.

Habibulla ko khabar mil chuki thi uske sare admi mare ja chuke hai sivay ek ke. Par wo bhi apne dono hath gawa chukka tha….use police walo ne sarkari aspatal me bharti kiya gaya tha. Wo turant waha gaya . use dekh hawaldar waha se hat gaya .wo siddha andar jane laga to dr ne roka

Dr : “rukiye aaise aap andar nahi ja sakte andar ilaj chal raha hai…” habibulla ne gusse me kaha

Habibulla : “ye dr mujhe mat sikha apne kam se kam rakh warna abhi yahi gad dunga.” Dr dar gaya our chup ho gaya…. Andar our bhi dr the jo ilaj kar rahe the…

Nurse : “sir aap ander nahi aasake jaiye bahar.” Habibulla ke sath khade ek admi ne apni banduk nikali our nurse ke upar tani . to habibulla ne kaha

Habibulla : “ab batao me andar jau ya goli andar chahiye soch kar jawab do.” Nurse bhi dar gayi our piche hat gayi.. sare dr piche hat gaye….

Habibulla : “ drs ise hosh me le aao abhi ….” Ek dr ne us admi ko hosh me laya…..to habibulla ne usase pucha

Habibulla : “koun the wo log jisne mere admiyon ko mara hai. Batao kaha rehte hai wo.?” Dard me kehrate huye us admi ne kaha

Admi 7 : “log nahi the wo bas ek ladka tha…our wo akela tha.” Ye sun kar uska gussa our badh gaya

Habibullla : “kya kaha ek mamuli sa ladka our usne tum sabhi ki ye halat ki, salo tum sand jaise ho fir bhi usne mere admiyon ko mar diya….our wo ladki kaha hai?” us admi ne kaha

Admi 7 : “wo ladki uski behen hai hamne use chua isliye usne hame mara our usne mujhe jinda isliye rakha taki me aap tak uska sandesha pahuncha saku.”

Habibulla : “sandesha kaisa sandesha ? “

Admi 7 : “usne kaha hai wo aaraha hai apse akhri bar milne ke liye.” Habibulla ne gusse me apne daant piste huye kaha

Habibulla : “aane do use ye uska akhri bar hi hoga wo wapis anhi jayega ye mera wada hai…”

Our usne us admi ke sir me goli utar di our waha se chala gaya….

DGP apne ghar pahunch chuke the unhone divya ko niche bulaya our usase pucha …..tab divya ne sab sach bata diya ….jise sun kar rajendra bhi ek pal ke liye dar gaya..wo apni beti ko kho deta agar me waha nahi hota….usne apni beti ko gale lagaya our rone laga divya bhi apne pita ke gale lag kar rone lagi…..jab baap beti dono ko you rota hua latika ne dekha to usne pucha

Latika : “kya hua tum dono ko aap dono ro kyu rahe ho?”

Tab rajendra ne use bhi sab bataya. Uske bad wo bhi in dono ke gale se lag agyi….uske bad jab inspector ka phone aaya to rajendra ne use bhi sach bataya uske bad inspector ne kuch hawaldaro ko le kar habibulla ke ilake me jane ke liye rawana ho gaya….

Raat ke karib 11.30 baj rahe the. Ghar me sab so rahe the to maine dimple ko uthaya our usase kaha

Mai : “ mai bahar ja raha hun mere aane tak sab sambhal lena ..kisi ko pata na chale me ghar me nahi hun….koi bhi bahana bana do.”

Dimple : “par ja kaha rahe ho aap? Wo bhi itni raat ko.”

Mai : “ dheere se bat karo bewakuf. Dekho aaj jo hua wo dobara hoga ab wo habibulla chup nahi rahega wo dobara koshish karega. To mar bas usase bat karne ja raha hun juldi aaunga wapas.”

Dimple : “thik hai par apna khayal rakhna….”

Itna kehkar usne achanak se apne honth mere hotho se mila diya our kiss karne lagi.,….mai hairan ho gaya ye usne kya kiya…. Jab maine use khud se alag kiya to bas wo muskurai our fir se kis karne lagi…..is bar maine bhi use kiss kiya our waha se apni gadi lekar nikal gaya…

Habibulla apne ilake me pahunch chukka tha…police wale bhi waha bhes badal kar ghus chuke the…. Our kuch hi der me mai bhi waha pahunch gaya…par mujhe ye naahi pata tha itne bade ilake me habibulla ka thikana konsa hai isliye maine ek plan banaya . waha mujhe koi janta to tha nahi isliye mai ek coustmer ban kar jane ka man bana liya…

Jab mai us ilake me ghusa to waha ka najara dekh kar mai hairan tha…aalishan banaya gaya tha ilake ke hare k ghar ko….din me agar koi yaha aaye to shayad hi kisi ko pata chale ki ye red light area hai……har ek banglow ke bahar 2-3 ladkiya khadi thi….jawan khubsurat ….unhe dekh kar ache ghar ki lag rahi thi lekin unki baton se wo bajaru pan jhalakta tha…..jaise “kya re chikne”, “ aao na raja pyas bujha dungi” wagera wagera unki wo baate sunte huye mai ek jagah pahuncha jaha ek admi baitha hua tha table lag akr uske pass 7-8 mustande khade the jinke hatho me dhande the …..mai samajh gaya isye yaha har admi janta hoga…. Mai uske pass gaya . mai apne sath kuch paise le aaya tha taki mujhe pata tha kya plan banana hai…

Mai us admi ke pass gaya ….kuch bolne wala tha ki uske gunde meri our badhe…..to maine us admi ko apna bag dikhaya……

Admi : “ aane do re use “ mai uske pass gaya to usne baithne ko kaha

Admi : “baitho sahab mai hun LALA, bolo kya kaam hai jo is ilake me aana hua aapka ? “ maine bag khola our uske samne sarka diya

Mai : “par sawal ye hai ki kar paoge ya nahi ?” usne kamini hasi ke sath jawab diya

LALA : “kya sahab jannat me aakar majak nahi karte maje karte hai…” maine bhi muskura kar kaha

Mai : “to thik hai mujhe nirash mat karna…ye to bas aadhi rakam hai kaam hone ke baad baki paise mil jayenge . ye rahi ladki ki photo ye ladki mujhe chahiye….our han aaj rat mujhe yaha rukna hai to ek sundar si kuwari ladki ka bhi intejam karo.” Lala ne photo dekha to hairan hokar mujhe dekhne laga our fir Paiso ki taraf dekhte huye lala ne kaha

LALA : “aapko nahi lagta ki itne se kaam ke liye ye rakam kuch jyada hai….” Maine ankh marte huye kaha

Mai : “ye meri taraf se chota sa gift hai tumhare boss ke liye…” wo meri taraf dekhta reh gaya….kuch sochne ke baad lala ne jawab diya

LALA : “ aap kuch der intejar kare. Iske sath jaiye aap ye aapko rukne ke liye jaga dikha dega.” Mai apni jagah se utha our ek ladke ke pichhe jane laga…karib aadha ghanta bit gaya ……me intejar kar raha tha mujhe yakin tha ki tir nishane par laga hai ….

Tabhi darwaja baja maine darwaja khola to samne 2 gunde khade the unhone ek ladki ko pakkda hua tha…..wo ro rahi thi chutne ki koshish kar rahi thi….maine us ladki ko upar se niche tak dekha our us ladki ko andar khinch kar apne sine se lagaya our un gundo se kaha….

Ise ab mai sambhal lunga… jao tum dono…. Unke jate hi maine darwaja band kiya our us ladki ko khud se alag kar diya…ladki jaise hi alag huyi usne mere gaal par ek thappad mara our bhagne lagi…..

Mai : “yaha koi darwaja nahi hai sivay is ek daarwaje ke…. Meri baat mano our shant ho jao…..” wo ladki jo hath lage wo fenk kar maar rahi thi.

Ladki : “dekho mujhe jane do warna me tumhe mar dalungi….mere pass mat aao….” Usne job hi feka mai usase bachta hua uske pas pahuncha

Mai : “dekho tum jaisa samjh rahi ho waisa kuch bhi nahi hai…” usne rote huye kaha

Ladki : “janti hun tum meri ijjat lotna chahte ho . tumne inke sath souda kiya hai isliye unhone mujhe yaha bheja hai…” maine uska hath pakda our kaha

Mai : “beshak tumne jo kaha wo sahi hai par mai yaha kisi ki majburi ka fayda uthane nahi aaya hun bulki inke boss habibulla ko marne aaya hun.” Ye sun kar wo ladki mujhe hairat se dekhne lagi ….kuch der aaise hi meri aankho me kho gayi…

Mai : “hey ….hey kaha kho gayi…”

Ladki : “nahi kuch nahi…..tumne dekhe nahi har taraf uni ke admi hai “ maine muskurate huye kaha

Mai : “hai to kya hua .maine jan bujh kar aaise dane dale hai ki wo khud mujhse milne yaha tak aayega “ wo ladki bas mujhe dekh rahi thi..

Ladki : “ tum ho kon ? kya koi commando ho ya koi superhero jo akele in sab ko marne wale ho?” maine jawab diya

Mai : “ mai hun vikram singh . our tumhari tariff ?”

Ladki : “ mera naam babita hai . “

Mai : “ dekho me yaha sirf us akele ke liye yaha hun…kyun ki usne aaj meri behen ko kidnap karne ke liye apne log bheje the…to ye mere liye aar ya paar wala rasta hai. Kyun ki wo dobara aaisa jarur karega isliye mai use ek our mouka nahi dena chahta…aaj agar me wakt par nahi pahunchta to shayad meri behen kabhi nahi mil pati….to jisne meri behen par hath dalne ki koshish ki mai uski atma tak uske sharir se bahar nikal dunga. Waise tum yaha kaise pahunchi” meri baat sun kar wo hairat se dekhne lagi…

Babita : “ mere baba ne marte samay sari jaydat mere naam kar di thi. Our mujhe padhai ke liye Russia jane ke liye keh diya tha kyun ki unhe meri souteli ma par shak tha …meri maa ne jaydat hadapne ki bohot koshish ki ….par jab mai nahi mani to us chudail ne mujhe inke hatho bech diya …….jab me airport ja rahi thi tab meri maa our wo gunde raste me mujhe rok liya our behosh kar diya… jab meri aankh khuli to maine khud ko yaha paya…. Our jab mujhe is jagah ka pata chala tab mujhe samajh aaya mai ghar se takriban 1100 kilometer dur hun.…mere bag unke pas hai unke boss ke ghar me….” Ek bat jan kar mujhe khushi huyi

Mai :” tum janti ho uska thikana kaha hai?”

Babita : “han janti hun par waha bohot suraksha hai andar nahi ja sakte …” maine uske kadho par apne hath rakhe…” do dar rahi thi

Mai : “idhar dekho babita meri taraf dekho…..aaj nahi to kabhi nahi. Vaishya ban kar nark wali zindagi bitane sse acha hai tum koshish karo ya to jinda rahenge ya mar jayenge …. Samjhi …to batao tumhe pakka pata hai wo bag kaha hai?”

Babita : “ han pata hai .

Mai : “ek kaam karo… wo log mujhe bulane aayenge tum bahar khadi ladkiyon ke bich ho kar waha tak pahuncho kaise bhi kar ke…. Tab tak me mera kam karta hun . waha pahunchne ke baad tumhe bas 10 minute milenge” wo ladki mera plan sun kar hairan thi .

Babita : “tumhe kaise pata wo tumhe bulane aayenge ?” maine kamini muskan ke sath jawab diya

Mai : “ wo isliye pata hai kyun ki ek ladki ki photo unhe di hai taki wo us ladki ko mere liye uthaye our yaha le aaye….” Wo boli

Babita : “ isme kya badi bat hai ye to inka roj ka kaam hai isme kya nahi baat hai jo wo tum me intrest lenge? “ maine haste huye kaha

Mai : “ kyun ki wo habibulla ki sabse choti beti shanaya ki photo hai jo meri behen ke collage me padhti hai..to jab apne beti ki photo dekhega to uska gussa hona our mujhe bulwana lajmi hai hahahahahahahahahahah” ye sun kar wo hairan ho gayi our agle hi pal haste huye boli

Babita : “waah kya plan hai ……aap bail mujhe maar wali kahawat tumne puri kar di…ab wo tumse bat karne nahi tumhe marne aayenge….our sath me mai bhi fas jaungi…”

Mai : “mujhe ye bhi pata tha aaisa ho sakta hai isliye maine uske samne paiso ki aaisi offer rakhi hai ki wo khud apni beti ko mere pass bhej dega…”

Babita : “ kya paiso ke liye aisa kon karega ? koi baap aaisa nahi kar sakta .”

Mai : “tum khud socho tumhari maa ne bas 10-15 lakh rupee ki jaydat keliye tumhe becha hoga na…..maine habibulla ko pure 2.5 crore bheje hai to wo mana nahi kar payega…”

Hum aage kuch bolte usase pehle hi darwaja baja. Maine babita ko upper jane ke liye kaha… our darwaja khola bahar lala khada tha uske sath 10-12 admi bhi khade the….

LALA : “ chaliye sahab boss aapse milna chahte hai” maine muskurate huye kaha

Mai : “ mujhse unhe kya kaam hai jo itne bade admi mujhse milna chahte hai?” lala ne muskurakar kaha

LALA : “ aapka gift unhe pasand aagaya ….sath me us ladki ka intejam bhi ho gaya hai jiski photo apne hame di thi..” maine bhi muskura kar kaha

Mai : “ mai maan gaya aapke kaam karne ke taroko ko… kaam ummid se pehle pura ho gaya.” Lala ne fir pucha

LALA : “ waise ek baat to bataiye ki us ladki me aaisa kya jai jo aap us ladki ke liye 5 crore dene ke liye taiyyar ho.”..

Mai : “ sundar hai , kamsin hai ghamandi hai our akdu bhi hai our mujhe aaisi hi ladkiya pasand hai masalne me….our mujhe usase badla lena hai use gulam banana hai.” Ye sun kar thoda ajib najar se dekhte huye lala ne jawab diya.

LALA : “aap jante ho wo kiski beti hai?” maine jhoot kaha

Mai : “nahi mai nahi janta wo kiski beti hai our mujhe koi farak bhi nahi padta . jo mujhe chahiye so chahiye. Fir wo koi bhi ho”

LALA : “ bohot himmat wale ho aap sahab waise aap choti umar me bhi ek mard ki juban bolte ho ….i like it”

Aaise hi hum baat karte huye waha pahunch gaye…na habibulla ne mujhe dekha tha our na maine use dekha tha… jab maine use dekha to mujhe hasi aayi… habibulla ek mota bhaisa lag raha thha… mota insaan. Sharir par safedi chayi huyi thi… ek bade se sofe par baitha paan chaba raha tha…jaise hi mai andar aaya usne mera swagat kiya

Habibulla : “ aaiye –aaiye sahab mujhe aap hi ka intejar tha. Baithiye.” Mai samne wale sofe par baith gaya…. Mere piche 4 mustande aakar khade ho gaye…. “

Mai : “mujhe yakin nahi hota kaam ummid se pehle ho gaya aapka jawab nahi “ usne ek our paan banate huye kaha

Habibulla : “waise aapne jo gift bheja tha wo hame pasnad aaya. Ummid karta hun baki paise bhi mil jayenge.”

Mai : “ isme koi shak nahi baki paise yahi hai mere car me. Kaho to le aau.”

Habibulla : “are nahi chote miya ….. hame bharosa hai …itni badi rakam aapne gift ke tour par di hai matlab aap juban ke pakke ho…”

Mai : “hamare kam me juban ki kimat jaan se jada hoti hai habibulla sahab.”

Habibulla : “ mera ek sawal hai kkya aap mujhe batayenge. Us ladki me aapko dilchaspi kyun hai jo aap itne paise dene par utaru hai?”

Mai : “ye personal hai habibulla sahab . wo ladki rasili hai our ghamandi usne mera apman kiya hai isliye mai us ladki ko apna gulam banana chahta hun. Use ragadna chahta hun. Uski saja hai wo marte dam tak mere pass rahe…” ye sun kar habibulla hasne laga our usne apne admiyon ko ishara kiya . do admi ek kamre me chale gaye …

Agle hi pal wo log ek ladki ko lekar bahar aaye. Us ladki ke chehre par ek kapda bandha gaya tha….jise hatah diya …..ladki ne jaise hi apne baap ko baitha paya to usne madat ki guhar lagayi…

Shanaya : “ abbu –abbu ye log mujhe kidnap kar ke yaha laye hai abbu.” Habibulla ne haste huye kaha

Habibulla : “inhone mere kehne par hi tumhe kidnap kiya hai. Our aaj mai teri maa ki tarah tujhe bhi bech raha hun…. Aaj se tub hi apni maa ki taraf randi banegi gulam banegi…hahahaha” ye sun kar shanaya ke pairo tale jamin khisak gayi…

Shanaya ko our baki gahr walo ko ye bataya gaya tha ki uski maa mar chuki hai…par use aaj sch ka pata apne hi baap ne bataya…jise khud use becha tha

Shanaya : “ mat…mat…matlab aapne unhe becha chand paiso ke liye?” habibulla ne haste huye kaha

Habibulla : “ sahi kaha duniya ke samne mai ek business man hun par mera asli business yehi hai mai insaano ko bechta hun….jaise mere ye business ke shurwati dour me apni hi behen ko bech kar is business ke liye paise jutaye …. Waise mai bas mouke ki talash me tha taki koi teri achi kimat de to tujhe bhi bech dun. “ ye sun kar shanaya ki aankho se aansu behne lage…wo ladkhadane lagi…..

Mai : “ ye sab kya hai habibulla sahab? apne phele kyu nahi kaha ye apki beti hai. “

Shanaya : “ jahannum bhi nasib nahi hoga aapko……kide padenge .,…..tumhe…kutte kamine….”



Habibulla : “ kya isase koi farak padta hai? Aapko ladki chahiye mujhe paisa chahiye “ mujhe ek mouka najar aaya to mai ab piche nahi hatna chahta tha… issliye maine apni baat rakhte huye apni jagah se khada hua our shanaya ki our jane laga

Mai : “ nahi koi farak nahi padta. To ab ye meri huyi hai na?” maine shanaya ke pass pahunch kar uske galo par apni unglia ghumate huye kaha

Habibulla : “ to souda manjur hai. Ummid hai ki aap hamare sath business karna pasand karenge.” Our habibulla ne gale milne ka prastav rakha …maine shanaya ke galo ko chumne ka natak karte huye uske kaan me kaha

Mai : “beshosh hone ka natak karo abhi “ our maine uske gaal ko chum liya fir habibulla ke pass jakar gale milne laga…. Shanaya behosh hone ka natak karte huye sofe par gir gayi….hamne uspar dhyan nahi diya…

Habibulla : “ aapke sath souda kar ke bohot khushi huyi….” Maine apni jeb se apna khanjar nikalte huye uske kaan me kaha ….

Mai : “alvida bhanupratap ke paltu kutte “ itna kehte huye mai usase alag hua our ek hi waar me uske pet ki sari atariyon ko chir diya…. Agle hi pal maine apna khanjar uske gale ki tundi me ghusa di jisase uski mouke par mout ho gayi….uske admi chillane lage…..sabhi tarah hahakar mach gaya…. Ek ek kar kamre me khade sare mustande meri our badhne lage ….shanaya uth chuki thi apne baap ki aaisi halath dekh uske hosh ud gaye the….ek pal ke liye wo dar gayi fir jab usne mujhe dusron ko marte huye dekha to hairan ho gayi….maine usase kaha

Mai : “ dil me kuch mat rakho shanaya, nikalo apni bhadas is harami par…..” usne meri taraf dekha our bas dekhti rahi ….maine use fir se avaj di our is bar gusse me kaha…… uska dhyan toota …our usne apni maa ko yad kiya our waha rakhi talwar uthakar habibulla ke tukde karne lagi…

Maine room me jitney gunde the un sab ko nipta diya tha….shanaya rote bilakhte gussa nikal rahi thi….. room me har taraf bas khoon-hi khoon ho chukka tha habibulla ke anginat tukde ho chuke the fir bhi wo nahi ruk rahi thi …maine uska hath pakda our kaha

Mai : “bas karo shanaya wo mar chukka hai….bas karo…tumhari ma ki atma ko shanti mile.” Wo rote huye palat kar mere gale lag gayi our rone lagi…maine use shant hone ke liye kaha

Mai : “abhi wakt nahi hai hame nikalna chhaiye…sare gunde idhar hi aarahe honge… tabhi darwaja khula our babita andar aayi….usne andar ka najara dekha to dar gayi…

Babita : “ye…ye sab kya hai?” maine use kaha

Mai : “is bare me bad me bat karenge abhi tum apna bag lo our chalo yaha se…..” usne shanaya ki our ishara karte huye pucha

Babita : “ kya ye shanaya hai?” maine haan me jawab diya….

Babita ne apna bag liya our maine paise uthaye jitney bhi hat lage tijori khali kardi our dono ke sath bahar nikla ..bahar lala apne sath hathiyarband admi lekar khada tha… jaise hi hum bahar nikle uske admiyon ne hamla bol diya…. Bas dono ladkiyon ke sath khudka bachav karte huye unkho mar raha tha…. Lala hairan ho gaya ki ye ladka 2-4 ghuso me hi mere admiyon ko mar raha hai…

Niche gira hua admi wapis khada nahi hota tha…. Tabhi waha inspecter our uski team pahunch gayi.,… usne ek najar meri our dekha me upar se niche tak khoon se latpath tha… wo mera chehra nahi dekh paya thik se….mai mouka dekh kar waha se car ki our bhaga …….our waha se ghar ki our nikal gaya…dono ladkiya dari sehmi gadi me baithi thi… thodi der bad hum ghar pahunch gaye…maine unhe apne khali ghar le gaya….

Mai : “ tum dono kuch din yahi rahogi uske baad mai tumhe sahi salamat apne ghar bhej dunga… jao upar ke kamro me kuch kapde hai ….naha lo……” mai bhi nahane chala gaya nahakar maine kapde pehne our khane ka intejam karne ghar chala gaya ….maine dimple se kehkar dono ke liye kuch khane ko banvaya our uske sath dusre ghar me aagaya..

Mere aane tak wo dono nahakar …..ghar ki safayi kar chuki thi jaha khoon ke dag gire the.

Dimple our mai waha pahunche our unhe khana khilaya our subah milne ka keh kar waha se chale gaye…
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Jab hum ghar loute to dimple amrita ke kamre me chali gayi….our mai prerna ke pass jakar so gaya…. Subah 6 baje jab meri nind khuli to dekha prerna mere upar so rahi thi our mujhe ehsaas hua ki mera lund khada ho chukka haijo shayad nind me hone ke karan usne mehsus nahi kiya hoga isliye uske jagne se pehle maine use apne upar se hata diya . our dhire se uth kar bathroom me ghus gaya….

Mai : {man mai} ye kya ho gaya…. Ye kaise ho gaya mujhse. Wo behen hai meri ..our me chiiii……. Wo to acha huna meri nind khul gayi….agar wo pehle uth jati to? Nahi nahi dobara dhyan rakhna hoga mujhe….

Prerna ko is baat ki koi bhanak nahi thi . maine naha liya our niche aagaya…..mujhe dekh kar urmila bua ne kaha…

Bua maa : “ ale mera baccha utha gaya ….chalo garam garam paratha khao.” Maine bua ko piche se apni baho me liya our unke gaal ko chumte hue kaha…

Mai : “ maa aaj apka akhri din hai na treatment ka ?” unhone mere liye nasta lagate huye kaha…

Bua Maa : “ haan aaj akhri treatment hai uske baad bas kuch dino tak dawai khani hogi…” mai nasta karte huye kaha.

Mai : “ maa fufa ji kaha par hai..wo dikhai nahi diye…?”

Bua maa : “wo subah subah kaam par chale gaye hai.” Maine kaha

Mai : “ye kya hai maa maine kaam par jane ke liye mana kiya tha ? usase acha hai ki gudiya ki madat kare . hamare hote huye aapko kis baat ki kami hai maa….unhe keh do aap hi agar fir kaam par gaye to me unse baat nahi karunga .” bua maa ne muskurate huye mere sir par haath ferte huye kaha



Bua maa : “sach me mujhe bohot khushi hoti hai ye jan kar ki mera beta kitna samjhdar ho gaya hai… pariwar ki zimmedari uthana janta hai…mai unhe aaj daatungi.”

Mai : “ waise maa aapke haatho me jadu hai isliye itna swadist khana banati ho aap.” Unhone muskurate huye kaha

Bua maa : “acha tumhe mera khana itna pasand hai . banane wale insaan ke man me prem bhavana honi chahiye wahi bhaav khane me utar jata hai .” maine khate huye kaha

Mai : “ haan maa ye sahi kaha aapne…” tabhi prerna aayi our siddha meri god me baith gayi….ye dekh maa hasne lagi…

Bua maa : “meri bacchi uth gayi..chalo jao pehle naha lo….”

Mai : “gudiya ye kya kar rahi ho ye koi baithne ki jagah hai…? “ ispar usne ek niwala khate huye kaha

Prerna : “kyu mai nahi baith sakti aapne bhai ki god me…koi problem hai…” maine use pyar se kaha

Mai : “aap hi samjhao na maa, ab ye bacchi thodi na hai badi ho gayi hai. “ bua maa ne baat ko samajhte huye kaha

Bua maa: “baat to sahi hai beti .”isapr prerna ne pyar se kaha

Prerna : “kya sahi kya galat me nahi janti mai aaj bhi apne pyari bhaiyya ki gudiya hun or ye mera hak hai.” Maine bahana marte huye kaha

Mai : “acha baat to sahi hai meri gudiya mere liye tum hamesha hi pyari si gudiya ho par kya meri gudiya ne naha liya hai? Ya aaisi hi ghum rahi hai ha…?” ismar usne aankh mari…..

Mai : “chi chi gandi ja pehle naha le ….our wo dono kaha hai unhe bhi ready hone ko keh do hum aaj ghumne jayenge… sab …maa aap bhi taiyyar ho jao… mai thoda bahar ja kar aata hun….”

Bua maa : “are mai kaha jaungi tum sab ghum aao”

Mai : “aap bhi aarahi hai maa mai kuch nahi janta..” our mai 2 plate nasta lekar apne dusre ghar ki taraf aagaya….

Waha aate hai maine bell bajayi…..to babita ne darwaja khola…mai kuch bolne hi wala tha ki usne mujhe ishare se andar ki our aane ke liye kaha ..to maine uski baat mante huye andar aagaya our uske piche-piche ek kamre tak pahunch gaya…. Maine dekha andar shanaya andar kamre me ek kone mai baithi ro rahi thi…ro ro kar uski aankhe sujhi huyi thi. Uske haath me ek chaku tha. Ye dekh kar mai samajh gaya wo puri raat ro rahi thi….mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha ki ye khud ko kuch kar na le…maine use aawaj lagayi…

Mai : “shanayaaa…..ye kya kar rahi ho tum?” usne hamare taraf dekhe bina jawab diya

Shanaya : “mere pass mat aana warna me …..” wo kuch bolti usase pehle maine kaha

Mai : “thik hai thik hai mai nahi aaunga…bas wo chaku dur rakho….”

Shanaya : “koun ho tum ha, ye sab tumhare karan hua hai…meri zindagi barbad ho gayi tumhare karan “ mai samajh gaya uske man mai uthal puthal machi huyi hai….” Babita ne bhi use samjhate huye kaha

Babita : “kal jo bhi hua wo halath ke karan hua, jo ek tarah se bilkul sahi tha….” Usne babika ki taraf dekha

Shanaya : “tum koun ho tumhe to mai janti bhi nahi. Our tum ye kaise keh sakti ho ye sab halath ke karan hua …ye sab isne kiya hai. Isi ke karan ye sab hua hai” our wo jor se rone lagi….tabhi dimple bhi aagayi…..

Dimple : “kya ho raha hai ? koun ro raha hai.” Uski baat katate huye maine use kaha

Mai : “dimple jao prerna ko yaha le aao juldi jao..” wo waha se bhagte huye prerna ko lane gayi…

Mai :” haan ye sab maine kiya hai. Tumne bilkul sahi kaha ye sab maine plan banakar kiya hai…..tumhare us baap ko marna hi tha….aaj nahi to kal mai use mar hi deta…. Kyun ki usne meri behen ko kidnap karne ki koshish ki…” meri baat sun kar wo meri taraf dekhne lagi….

Shanaya : “tum jhooth bol rahe ho….aaisa kuch nahi hai.” Ispar babita ne kaha

Babita : “tumne pucha tha na ki mai koun hun….mai wo hun jiske sath tumhara baap balatkar karne wala tha mujhe bhi waha par har din apni ijjat lutane par majbur karne wala tha….par isne devta ban kar mujhe us nark me dhasne se pehle hi bahar nikala . our isne tujhe bhi bachaya hai ye tum kyu nahi dekh pa rahi…”

Mai : “tumne khud apne baap ki bate suni hai… usne tumhari maa ke sath jo kiya khud ki behen ke sath jo kiya wo tumhare sath bhi karne wala tha….our ye baat mujhe mere logon ne pehle hi bata di thi. Aaj nahi to kal tum bhi kisi kothe ya kisi vaishyalay me hoti. Isliye maine jaan bujh kar tumhara naam is sab me ghasita our tumhe chudaya…” shanaya ne gusse me kaha

Shanaya : “ab wo mera baap nahi hai use baar baar mera baap kehna band karo….” Tabhi dimple prerna ko le aayi…prerna ne mujhe dekha to boli

Prerna : “bhaiya ye kiska ghar hai our aap yaha kya kar rahe ho….” Maine use kaha

Mai : “sab bataunga par badme abhi meri madaat karo. Tum ise sambhalo..” maine shanaya ki taaraf ishara kiya. Dono ne ek dusre ko jaise hi dekha ….shanaya roti huyi boli

Shanaya : “prerna……prerna……” gudiya ne use kaha

Prerna : “ye kya kar rahi ho tum? ..our ro kyu rahi ho ?”prerna uske pass jakar uske hath se chaku chin kar uske gale lag gayi our use chup karane lagi….shanaya our jyada rone lagi…

Shanaya : “wo prerna wo maaa…meri maa….wo…..unheee…….nahi,.,.,..nahi….nahi…..” our jyada rone lagi…..to prerna ne hum sabhi se kaha

Prerna : “bhaiya aap sab thodi der ke liye bahar jaiye mai ise sambhalti hun…”

To hum waha se hall me aagaye…. Maine babita ko nasta diya our khane ko kaha. Dimple bhi wahi baithi thi….

Dimple : “mai dimple …gaav me rehti hun…..our tum ?” babita ne khate huye kaha

Babita : “mera naam babita hai our me Kolkata me rehti thi…par ab Russia jaungi padhai karne.”

Mai : “ thik hai kab jana hai ye tum tay karo…visa to hai tumhare pass…bas ticket ka intejam karte hai….” Meri baat par usne jawab diya

Babita : “haan asan hai airport jakar book karte hai….”

Mai : “thik hai prerna tumhe le jayegi uske sath chali jao…”

Babita : “tum nahi aaoge?”

Mai : “ nahi mujhe kisi se milne jana hai. Wapis aane ke baad sabko ghumane le jaunga.”

Babita : “ thik hai……” maine pucha

Mai : “tumhare pass kitne paise hai?” usne apni najar jhukate huye kaha

Babita : “haa mere pass takriban 10lakh rupaye hai jo mere bank me jama hai.”

Mai : “thik hai tum apna account number prerna ko de dena wo tumhare account me paise dal degi.” Wo hairan hote huye boli

Babita : “nahi-nahi mai tumse paise nahi le sakti…..”

Mai : “aaisa samjh lo ki ye tumhare paise hai…..waise bhi ye us harami ke tijori me pade the. To ab ye tumhare hi hai….” Our mai muskura kar waha se bahar aagaya…. Dimple bhi mere sath bahar aagayi….”

Udhar kamre me prerna shanaya ko samjha rahi thi….

Shanaya : “mujhe yaad karke bhi ghin aane lagi hai aaisa admi mera baap hai….par isne unhe maar dala ” prerna thoda gussa karte huye boli

Prerna : “haan to kya karta bolo apni behen ko randi bante dekhte rehta ya namardo ki taraf bachta firta…. Tu ye mat bhul ki tera hi baap tujhe paiso ke liye kisi our ki randi banana chahta tha….our rahi baat mere bhai ki to ek baat ache se sun le teri jagah koi bhi hoti to bhi wo yahi karta….jo usne kal kiya tha…wo tujhe waha marne ke liye chod deta par unhone aaisa nahi kiya……”

Shanaya : “par ab me kya karu? Kaha jau mai, chachao ke pass nahi ja sakti kyun ki unki niyat thik nahi hai mere liye…..mama ke pass bhi nahi ja sakti kyun ki unhone maa se sare rishte tod diye the…..ab mera koi nahi hai kaha jau?” yski is baat par prerna sochne lagi….kuch soch kar wo boli

Prerna : “ye mujhe nahi pata hai par tab tak tum yahi rakho isi ghar me….” Ispar shanaya darte huye boli

Shanaya : “tum samjh nahi rahi ho prerna wo log mujhe dhund lenge…..” prerna ko ek idea sujha to usne kaha

Prerna : “tum bhaiya ke sath gaav chali jao our vahi raho…. Jab tak koi rasta nahi nikalta…”

Shanaya : “ par aaise kaise chali jau….”

Prerna : “koi rasta nahi hai tumhare pass…tumhe jana hi hoga…. Ab utho our taiyyar ho jao hum sab ghumne ja rahe hai…. Tumhare pass 2 ghante hai taiyyar ho jao…” itna kehkar wo waaha se bahar chali gayi…..mujhe our dimple ko na dekh kar babita se pucha to babita ne kaal raat ki saari hakikat use sunai……jise sun kar prerna ki aankhe badi ho gayi wo hairan thi ki bhaiya ne ye sab kiya kaise ….kiya kyun……kya unhone mere liye ye sab kiya ? ya meri suraksha ke liye ? tabhi usne TV lagayi our ek news channel laga diya

{ Jisme ek news aarahi thi…

HEADLINE- Gangwar of vishrampura

Reporter - aap ab jo najara dekh rahe hai ye najara vishram nagar se live hai. Aaap sab dekh sakte ho ki yaha par kitni lashe padi hyi hai aaisa mana jata hai ki yaha par ek gangwar hua tha kal raat ko… hamare sutro se pata chala hai ki ye kisi ne puri tayyari ke sath anjaam diya hai…halaki abhi tak ye pata nahi chala hai ki ye sab kisne kiya hai par police in sabhi se puchtach kar rahi hai.

Ye gangwar sirf ek insaan ko marne ke liye jinka naam HABIBULLA hai ….wo ek aaj ke ubharte business mans me se ek the…. Jinki samajh me bhi ijjat hua karti thi…par unka khud ka ek vaishylay hai ye baat aaj se pehle kisi ko nahi pata thi….unki laash jis halath me mili hai use dekh kar bata pana mushkil hai ki ye kisne our kaise anjaam diya hai….uske gale ki haddi kar ukhadi gayi hai jisase unki jagah par hi maut ho gayi hai….iske alawa unke sharir par chaku se 47 baar war kiya gaya hai….isase saaf pata chalta hai ki ya to ye badle ke liye kiya gaya hai ya fir gusse me aakar is hattyya ko anjaam diya hai….unke alawa 19 laashe our baramad huyi hai….kuch ko chaku se to kuch ko goli mari gayi hai. Abhi tak police walo se kuch khas nahi pata chal paya hai par unki puri koshish ho rahi hai….” Ye news dekh kar wo samjh gayi….

Babita : “dekha maine kaha tha na.”

Prerna : “par ye to gangwar bata rahe hai….bhaiya ne akele kaise kiya …?” ispar babita ne dar ko mehsus karte huye kaha

Babita :” ye sab jab ho raha tha tab mai wahi thi.. tumhara bhai mujhe lagta hai wo thoda alag hai….mai samjh nahi pa rahi hun” prerna ne pucha

Prerna : “kya samajh nahi pa rahi ho tum ?”

Babita : “ mai raat bhar soyi nahi wo sab najare mere aankho ke samne baar-baar aarahe the….tumhare bhai ka wo bhayanak roop uski aankho me wo gussa ye dekh mar abhi bhi dar lag raha hai….. jo bhi uske samne aata bas 2-3 mukko me hi dher ho jata …wo fir uthata hi nahi….kaal raat aaisa lag raha tha mano usne khoon se naha ho… par ho na ho usne pehle bhi ye sab kiya hai.”

Prerna : “mai kuch samjhi nahi “

Babita : “mai ye keh rahi hun tumhara bhai …usne pehle bhi logon ko mara hai. Uski aankho me dar nahi tha bulki bas gussa bhara tha….”

Prerna : “main eek bar dekha hai unhe…. Kisi ko marte huye …. Isliye janti hun….wo ek police officer the par ab unnhe nikaldiya department ne “

Babita :” nikal diya par kyun?” ispar prerna ne kaha

Prerna : “kyun ki unhone sheher se sare gundaraj khatam kar diya isliye unhe nikal diya our sath me unhe marne ki bhi koshi ki gayi…”

Tabhi dimple waha aayi our meri kahi baat unse kahi…

Dimple : “to abhi aap dono ko nikalna chahiye....juldi wapis aane ko kaha hai unhone…”

Prerna : “thik hai babita tum taiyyar ho chuki ho to chalo…..waise ye dress tum par pyari lag rahi hai….” Babita ne muskurate huye jawab diya

Babita : “thanks. “ our wo dono jane hi wale the ki shanaya ne kaha

Shanaya : “mai bhi sath chal sakti hun kya ?”

Babita : “haan kyu nahi , chalo.” Fir dimple ne ghar ko lock kar diya our bua maa ki help karne chali gayi…

Dusri our inspector ne DGP ranjendra mathur ko kal raat wali baat bata di…unhe uski baat par vishwas nahi hua par jab unhone hawaldaro se bhi suna to unhe yakin hua…..rajendra mathur ne mujhe lekar aane ke liye kaha …wahi dusri our forencic team bhi apne kaam me lagi huyi thi… unhone habibulla ki laash our unke sath sabhi murdon ko apne lab me le aaye….wo lasho ki janch kar rahe the….parikshan ke baad jo natije samne aaye wo unke liye hairan kar rahe the….

Dr Niranjan : “ mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai..ki in sabhi logon ko ek hi inssaan ne mara hai….” Ispar Dr kamal ne kaha

Dr Kamal : “ye aap kya keh rahe hai.” Ye sun kar dr menka ne bhi laasho ni jaanch karte hue kaaha

Dr menka : “haan lagta to aaise hi hai kyun ki sabhi ke sharir par ek jaise hi waar ke nishan hai…jyada tar gardan our jaha par hamara dil hota hai wahi…uske alawa sirf ek hi body aaisi hai jispar chaku se dhero baar mara gaya hai..ise 2 logo ne mara hai…our baki sabhi ko sirf ek insaan ne mara hai………… “

Dr Niranjan : “sahi kaha apne dr. ye jo bhi koi hai wo sadharan nahi hai .ye ek mahir hattyyara hoga shayad“ elena ne bhi kaha

Dr Elena : “ maine kuch cases ko match kiya hai. Aap sabko ye jankar hairani hogi ki haal hi me huye sheher ke bahar wala hadsa our kal jo hua hai un sab ke bich kuch connection hai….kyun ki dono cases me hamla karne ke tarike 35% match ho rahe hai….” Uski baat sun kar Dr niranjan ji ko yakin nahi ho raha tha fir unho ne kaha

Dr Niranjan : “iska matlab ho sakta hai ki ye kisi tarah us case se juda ho…par mujhe nahi lagta ki in dono ka koi connection hai. Par fir bhi hame janch karni hogi.” unhone DGP ko phone laga kar is bare me sach kuch bataya …jise sun kar DGP ne unse milne ka keh kar phone rakh diya..

Mai vardha mama se mila our unse sari bate kar li…our unhe gaav bhej diya…… eleven apne chacha ki talash karti huyi Mumbai pahunchi…jahaa se uske chacha gayab huye the…..par fir bhi uski koshishe nakam hone lagi…jab mai ghar wapis ja raha tha ki tabhi raste me inspector ne mujhe rok liya…..jab usne mera rasta roka to mujhe gussa aaya our maine khaa

Mai : “inspector….. ye kya tarika hai. Police ho iska matlab ye nahi hai ki kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi rok lo…” inspector ne jawab diya…

Inspector : “ dekho me baat ko bigadna nahi chahta hai…kal vishram nagar me maine tumhe hi dekha tha 2 ladkiyon ke sath… us wakt maine tumhe roka nahi kyun ki wo haiwan usi layak tha… bulki mai khud use pakadne aaya tha….. mujhe our DGP sir ko bas tumse baat karni hai. Isliye unhone tumhe bulaya hai.” Maine kaha

Mai : “fir bhi ye koi tarika nahi hota kisi se baat karne ka …..bich raste me criminals ko roka jata hai ……samjhe inspector “

Inspector : “ kanun ki najar se dekhe to tum waise to ek criminal ho par insaaniyat ke nate dekha jaye to tum ek vardan ho un kamjor logon ke liye jo khud ke liye lad nahi sakte hai.”

Mai : “ mai janta hun mai kya hun. Bas ye batao jana kaha hai….”

Inspector : “DGP sir ke ghar jana hai.”

Mai : “meri shart ye hai ki me akela hi aaunga un ladkiyon ko isase dur rakho.” Inspector ne sochte huye kaha…

Inspector : “ wo is sabse dur rahengi mera wada hai…. Ab chale?”

Mai : “ aap log aage chalo mai aapke piche aata hun.”

Inspector apni gadi lekar aage badh gaya our mai unke piche piche DGP rajendra mathur ke ghar pahunch gaye… waha pehle se hi unka pariwar our anamika ka pariwar bhi waha moujud tha…mujhe dekhte hi sub apni jagah se uth khade huye our fir mujhse bhole

DGP : “ aao-aao vikram hum sab tumhara hi intejar kar rahe the.” Maine apni narajgi jatate huye kaha

Mai : “ shukriya , par ye achi baat nahi hai ki raste se kisi ko uthva liya jaye…ye aapke status ko shoba nahi deta…. “ rajendra mathur meri baat ka matlab samjh gaye our unhone inspector ki taraf dekha.

Inspector : “sorry sir wo mai…” baat bich me katate huye DGP ne kaha

DGP : “mai maafi chahunga vikram. Jo tumhe is tarah yaha aana pada….par baat behad jaruri thi isliye maine tumhe you achanak bula liya” vishal ji ne kaha

Vishal : “darasal kal raat jo hua wo divya our anamika ne ham sab ko bataya……tumne hamare liye jo kiya hai wo hum kabhi nahi bhulenge.” Ispar latika ji ne kaha

Latika : “han vikram beta hamari betiya hamari jaan hai. Unhe kuch ho jata to …bhagwan na kare aaisa ho “ shalini ji ne bhi kaha

Shalini : “hum jante hai vikram beta. Fir bhi tumne jo kiya hamare liye wo koi nahi karta……. Jab bhi koi jarurat ho hum tumhare sath rahenge ye mera wada hai tumse.” Maine muskurate huye kaha

Mai : “mai aap sabhi ki baato ki kadar karta hun….par maine aaisa kuch nahi kiya hai jisase aap mujhe mahan samjh rahe hai…. Maine kal 25 logon ki jaan li hai….unme se ek bhi nahi bacha …” meri baat sun kar divya our anamika ki maa hairan thi to divya our anamika bhi shock ho gayi thi ye bat sun kar… bakiyon ko pata tha kyun ki wo sab is case ke ird- gird hi kaam kar rahe the..jab dono ki maao ne apne –apne patiyon ki taraf dekha to unhone haami bhari …..

DGP : “ haan ye sach hai….theater ki parking me 6 lashe our vishram nagar me 19 lashe…baramad ki hai…..our maine hi ye baad media me batai ki ye gangwar tha ….” Vishal yadav ji ne kaha

Vishal : “filhal hamne case ki disha ko mod diya hai..”

Mai : “shukriya aap sab ne jo kiya us ke liye…. “

DGP : “mujhe bas ek bat puchni hai agar tumhe thik lage to hi jawab dena…”

Mai : “haan puchiye na” tab tak divya our anamika sabke liye chay our nasta le aayi.

DGP : “tumne aaisa kyun kiya…..manta hun habibulla ke admi tumhari behen ko kidnap karne aaye the…to sirf use hi marna chahiye tha…tumne bakiyon ko kyu mara?” maine unki aankho me dekhte huye kaha…

Mai : “ habibulla bas ek vajir tha . unka sara kaam wahi log sambhalte the…..to sahi mayno me habibulla bas ek dalal tha par uske aadmi asli gunehgar the….to mai unhe kaise jane deta jinhone meri behen ko kidnap karne ki soch rakhi ho….meri behen meri jaan hai uske liye me puri duniya ko mita sakta hun….mai ye bat janta tha ..wo jab tak zinda rahenge meri behen ke puche jarur aayenge…ya kisi our ladki ke piche…” Ye sun kar sab dang reh gaye….

DGP : “ our wo dono ladkiya ? wo koun thi tumhare sath ? inspector ne jine dekha tha”

Mai : “ un dono ko aap log bhool jaiye ….un dono ko in sab se dur rakhiye …”

DGP : “ haan thik hai bas mai puch raha tha….” Maine gehri saans chodte huye kaha

Mai : “dekhiye mai janta hun maine jo kiya hai wo bohot bada gunah hai our mujhe koi pachtawa nahi hai….meri jagah aap hote to kya karte….” Ispar DGP ne kaha

DGP : “ mai bhale hi kanun ka mulajim hun par fir bhi mai wahi karta jo mere pariwar ki suraksha ke liye behad jaruri hota” unki baat sun maine halka sa muskura diya….our kaha

Mai : “ marte wakt lala ne ek baat kahi thi . usne kaha tha kisi ne supari di thi meri prerna ko sabak sikhane ke liye, wo kon hai ye batane se pehle hi wo mar gaya…..to kya aap mujhe us shaksh ko dhundhne me madat kar sakte hai.” Rajendra ne

Rajendra : “ thik hai hum pata karte hai tum chinta mat karo….”

Mai : “thik hai ab mujhe chalna chahiye , mai ijajat chahunga…” meri is baat par sab mujhe rokna chah rahe the par maine waha se nikalna hi sahi samjha..”
 

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Update 30


Jab hum ghar loute to dimple amrita ke kamre me chali gayi….our mai prerna ke pass jakar so gaya…. Subah 6 baje jab meri nind khuli to dekha prerna mere upar so rahi thi our mujhe ehsaas hua ki mera lund khada ho chukka haijo shayad nind me hone ke karan usne mehsus nahi kiya hoga isliye uske jagne se pehle maine use apne upar se hata diya . our dhire se uth kar bathroom me ghus gaya….

Mai : {man mai} ye kya ho gaya…. Ye kaise ho gaya mujhse. Wo behen hai meri ..our me chiiii……. Wo to acha huna meri nind khul gayi….agar wo pehle uth jati to? Nahi nahi dobara dhyan rakhna hoga mujhe….

Prerna ko is baat ki koi bhanak nahi thi . maine naha liya our niche aagaya…..mujhe dekh kar urmila bua ne kaha…

Bua maa : “ ale mera baccha utha gaya ….chalo garam garam paratha khao.” Maine bua ko piche se apni baho me liya our unke gaal ko chumte hue kaha…

Mai : “ maa aaj apka akhri din hai na treatment ka ?” unhone mere liye nasta lagate huye kaha…

Bua Maa : “ haan aaj akhri treatment hai uske baad bas kuch dino tak dawai khani hogi…” mai nasta karte huye kaha.

Mai : “ maa fufa ji kaha par hai..wo dikhai nahi diye…?”

Bua maa : “wo subah subah kaam par chale gaye hai.” Maine kaha

Mai : “ye kya hai maa maine kaam par jane ke liye mana kiya tha ? usase acha hai ki gudiya ki madat kare . hamare hote huye aapko kis baat ki kami hai maa….unhe keh do aap hi agar fir kaam par gaye to me unse baat nahi karunga .” bua maa ne muskurate huye mere sir par haath ferte huye kaha



Bua maa : “sach me mujhe bohot khushi hoti hai ye jan kar ki mera beta kitna samjhdar ho gaya hai… pariwar ki zimmedari uthana janta hai…mai unhe aaj daatungi.”

Mai : “ waise maa aapke haatho me jadu hai isliye itna swadist khana banati ho aap.” Unhone muskurate huye kaha

Bua maa : “acha tumhe mera khana itna pasand hai . banane wale insaan ke man me prem bhavana honi chahiye wahi bhaav khane me utar jata hai .” maine khate huye kaha

Mai : “ haan maa ye sahi kaha aapne…” tabhi prerna aayi our siddha meri god me baith gayi….ye dekh maa hasne lagi…

Bua maa : “meri bacchi uth gayi..chalo jao pehle naha lo….”

Mai : “gudiya ye kya kar rahi ho ye koi baithne ki jagah hai…? “ ispar usne ek niwala khate huye kaha

Prerna : “kyu mai nahi baith sakti aapne bhai ki god me…koi problem hai…” maine use pyar se kaha

Mai : “aap hi samjhao na maa, ab ye bacchi thodi na hai badi ho gayi hai. “ bua maa ne baat ko samajhte huye kaha

Bua maa: “baat to sahi hai beti .”isapr prerna ne pyar se kaha

Prerna : “kya sahi kya galat me nahi janti mai aaj bhi apne pyari bhaiyya ki gudiya hun or ye mera hak hai.” Maine bahana marte huye kaha

Mai : “acha baat to sahi hai meri gudiya mere liye tum hamesha hi pyari si gudiya ho par kya meri gudiya ne naha liya hai? Ya aaisi hi ghum rahi hai ha…?” ismar usne aankh mari…..

Mai : “chi chi gandi ja pehle naha le ….our wo dono kaha hai unhe bhi ready hone ko keh do hum aaj ghumne jayenge… sab …maa aap bhi taiyyar ho jao… mai thoda bahar ja kar aata hun….”

Bua maa : “are mai kaha jaungi tum sab ghum aao”

Mai : “aap bhi aarahi hai maa mai kuch nahi janta..” our mai 2 plate nasta lekar apne dusre ghar ki taraf aagaya….

Waha aate hai maine bell bajayi…..to babita ne darwaja khola…mai kuch bolne hi wala tha ki usne mujhe ishare se andar ki our aane ke liye kaha ..to maine uski baat mante huye andar aagaya our uske piche-piche ek kamre tak pahunch gaya…. Maine dekha andar shanaya andar kamre me ek kone mai baithi ro rahi thi…ro ro kar uski aankhe sujhi huyi thi. Uske haath me ek chaku tha. Ye dekh kar mai samajh gaya wo puri raat ro rahi thi….mujhe dar bhi lag raha tha ki ye khud ko kuch kar na le…maine use aawaj lagayi…

Mai : “shanayaaa…..ye kya kar rahi ho tum?” usne hamare taraf dekhe bina jawab diya

Shanaya : “mere pass mat aana warna me …..” wo kuch bolti usase pehle maine kaha

Mai : “thik hai thik hai mai nahi aaunga…bas wo chaku dur rakho….”

Shanaya : “koun ho tum ha, ye sab tumhare karan hua hai…meri zindagi barbad ho gayi tumhare karan “ mai samajh gaya uske man mai uthal puthal machi huyi hai….” Babita ne bhi use samjhate huye kaha

Babita : “kal jo bhi hua wo halath ke karan hua, jo ek tarah se bilkul sahi tha….” Usne babika ki taraf dekha

Shanaya : “tum koun ho tumhe to mai janti bhi nahi. Our tum ye kaise keh sakti ho ye sab halath ke karan hua …ye sab isne kiya hai. Isi ke karan ye sab hua hai” our wo jor se rone lagi….tabhi dimple bhi aagayi…..

Dimple : “kya ho raha hai ? koun ro raha hai.” Uski baat katate huye maine use kaha

Mai : “dimple jao prerna ko yaha le aao juldi jao..” wo waha se bhagte huye prerna ko lane gayi…

Mai :” haan ye sab maine kiya hai. Tumne bilkul sahi kaha ye sab maine plan banakar kiya hai…..tumhare us baap ko marna hi tha….aaj nahi to kal mai use mar hi deta…. Kyun ki usne meri behen ko kidnap karne ki koshish ki…” meri baat sun kar wo meri taraf dekhne lagi….

Shanaya : “tum jhooth bol rahe ho….aaisa kuch nahi hai.” Ispar babita ne kaha

Babita : “tumne pucha tha na ki mai koun hun….mai wo hun jiske sath tumhara baap balatkar karne wala tha mujhe bhi waha par har din apni ijjat lutane par majbur karne wala tha….par isne devta ban kar mujhe us nark me dhasne se pehle hi bahar nikala . our isne tujhe bhi bachaya hai ye tum kyu nahi dekh pa rahi…”

Mai : “tumne khud apne baap ki bate suni hai… usne tumhari maa ke sath jo kiya khud ki behen ke sath jo kiya wo tumhare sath bhi karne wala tha….our ye baat mujhe mere logon ne pehle hi bata di thi. Aaj nahi to kal tum bhi kisi kothe ya kisi vaishyalay me hoti. Isliye maine jaan bujh kar tumhara naam is sab me ghasita our tumhe chudaya…” shanaya ne gusse me kaha

Shanaya : “ab wo mera baap nahi hai use baar baar mera baap kehna band karo….” Tabhi dimple prerna ko le aayi…prerna ne mujhe dekha to boli

Prerna : “bhaiya ye kiska ghar hai our aap yaha kya kar rahe ho….” Maine use kaha

Mai : “sab bataunga par badme abhi meri madaat karo. Tum ise sambhalo..” maine shanaya ki taaraf ishara kiya. Dono ne ek dusre ko jaise hi dekha ….shanaya roti huyi boli

Shanaya : “prerna……prerna……” gudiya ne use kaha

Prerna : “ye kya kar rahi ho tum? ..our ro kyu rahi ho ?”prerna uske pass jakar uske hath se chaku chin kar uske gale lag gayi our use chup karane lagi….shanaya our jyada rone lagi…

Shanaya : “wo prerna wo maaa…meri maa….wo…..unheee…….nahi,.,.,..nahi….nahi…..” our jyada rone lagi…..to prerna ne hum sabhi se kaha

Prerna : “bhaiya aap sab thodi der ke liye bahar jaiye mai ise sambhalti hun…”

To hum waha se hall me aagaye…. Maine babita ko nasta diya our khane ko kaha. Dimple bhi wahi baithi thi….

Dimple : “mai dimple …gaav me rehti hun…..our tum ?” babita ne khate huye kaha

Babita : “mera naam babita hai our me Kolkata me rehti thi…par ab Russia jaungi padhai karne.”

Mai : “ thik hai kab jana hai ye tum tay karo…visa to hai tumhare pass…bas ticket ka intejam karte hai….” Meri baat par usne jawab diya

Babita : “haan asan hai airport jakar book karte hai….”

Mai : “thik hai prerna tumhe le jayegi uske sath chali jao…”

Babita : “tum nahi aaoge?”

Mai : “ nahi mujhe kisi se milne jana hai. Wapis aane ke baad sabko ghumane le jaunga.”

Babita : “ thik hai……” maine pucha

Mai : “tumhare pass kitne paise hai?” usne apni najar jhukate huye kaha

Babita : “haa mere pass takriban 10lakh rupaye hai jo mere bank me jama hai.”

Mai : “thik hai tum apna account number prerna ko de dena wo tumhare account me paise dal degi.” Wo hairan hote huye boli

Babita : “nahi-nahi mai tumse paise nahi le sakti…..”

Mai : “aaisa samjh lo ki ye tumhare paise hai…..waise bhi ye us harami ke tijori me pade the. To ab ye tumhare hi hai….” Our mai muskura kar waha se bahar aagaya…. Dimple bhi mere sath bahar aagayi….”

Udhar kamre me prerna shanaya ko samjha rahi thi….

Shanaya : “mujhe yaad karke bhi ghin aane lagi hai aaisa admi mera baap hai….par isne unhe maar dala ” prerna thoda gussa karte huye boli

Prerna : “haan to kya karta bolo apni behen ko randi bante dekhte rehta ya namardo ki taraf bachta firta…. Tu ye mat bhul ki tera hi baap tujhe paiso ke liye kisi our ki randi banana chahta tha….our rahi baat mere bhai ki to ek baat ache se sun le teri jagah koi bhi hoti to bhi wo yahi karta….jo usne kal kiya tha…wo tujhe waha marne ke liye chod deta par unhone aaisa nahi kiya……”

Shanaya : “par ab me kya karu? Kaha jau mai, chachao ke pass nahi ja sakti kyun ki unki niyat thik nahi hai mere liye…..mama ke pass bhi nahi ja sakti kyun ki unhone maa se sare rishte tod diye the…..ab mera koi nahi hai kaha jau?” yski is baat par prerna sochne lagi….kuch soch kar wo boli

Prerna : “ye mujhe nahi pata hai par tab tak tum yahi rakho isi ghar me….” Ispar shanaya darte huye boli

Shanaya : “tum samjh nahi rahi ho prerna wo log mujhe dhund lenge…..” prerna ko ek idea sujha to usne kaha

Prerna : “tum bhaiya ke sath gaav chali jao our vahi raho…. Jab tak koi rasta nahi nikalta…”

Shanaya : “ par aaise kaise chali jau….”

Prerna : “koi rasta nahi hai tumhare pass…tumhe jana hi hoga…. Ab utho our taiyyar ho jao hum sab ghumne ja rahe hai…. Tumhare pass 2 ghante hai taiyyar ho jao…” itna kehkar wo waaha se bahar chali gayi…..mujhe our dimple ko na dekh kar babita se pucha to babita ne kaal raat ki saari hakikat use sunai……jise sun kar prerna ki aankhe badi ho gayi wo hairan thi ki bhaiya ne ye sab kiya kaise ….kiya kyun……kya unhone mere liye ye sab kiya ? ya meri suraksha ke liye ? tabhi usne TV lagayi our ek news channel laga diya

{ Jisme ek news aarahi thi…


HEADLINE- Gangwar of vishrampura

Reporter - aap ab jo najara dekh rahe hai ye najara vishram nagar se live hai. Aaap sab dekh sakte ho ki yaha par kitni lashe padi hyi hai aaisa mana jata hai ki yaha par ek gangwar hua tha kal raat ko… hamare sutro se pata chala hai ki ye kisi ne puri tayyari ke sath anjaam diya hai…halaki abhi tak ye pata nahi chala hai ki ye sab kisne kiya hai par police in sabhi se puchtach kar rahi hai.

Ye gangwar sirf ek insaan ko marne ke liye jinka naam HABIBULLA hai ….wo ek aaj ke ubharte business mans me se ek the…. Jinki samajh me bhi ijjat hua karti thi…par unka khud ka ek vaishylay hai ye baat aaj se pehle kisi ko nahi pata thi….unki laash jis halath me mili hai use dekh kar bata pana mushkil hai ki ye kisne our kaise anjaam diya hai….uske gale ki haddi kar ukhadi gayi hai jisase unki jagah par hi maut ho gayi hai….iske alawa unke sharir par chaku se 47 baar war kiya gaya hai….isase saaf pata chalta hai ki ya to ye badle ke liye kiya gaya hai ya fir gusse me aakar is hattyya ko anjaam diya hai….unke alawa 19 laashe our baramad huyi hai….kuch ko chaku se to kuch ko goli mari gayi hai. Abhi tak police walo se kuch khas nahi pata chal paya hai par unki puri koshish ho rahi hai….” Ye news dekh kar wo samjh gayi….

Babita : “dekha maine kaha tha na.”

Prerna : “par ye to gangwar bata rahe hai….bhaiya ne akele kaise kiya …?” ispar babita ne dar ko mehsus karte huye kaha

Babita :” ye sab jab ho raha tha tab mai wahi thi.. tumhara bhai mujhe lagta hai wo thoda alag hai….mai samjh nahi pa rahi hun” prerna ne pucha

Prerna : “kya samajh nahi pa rahi ho tum ?”

Babita : “ mai raat bhar soyi nahi wo sab najare mere aankho ke samne baar-baar aarahe the….tumhare bhai ka wo bhayanak roop uski aankho me wo gussa ye dekh mar abhi bhi dar lag raha hai….. jo bhi uske samne aata bas 2-3 mukko me hi dher ho jata …wo fir uthata hi nahi….kaal raat aaisa lag raha tha mano usne khoon se naha ho… par ho na ho usne pehle bhi ye sab kiya hai.”

Prerna : “mai kuch samjhi nahi “

Babita : “mai ye keh rahi hun tumhara bhai …usne pehle bhi logon ko mara hai. Uski aankho me dar nahi tha bulki bas gussa bhara tha….”

Prerna : “main eek bar dekha hai unhe…. Kisi ko marte huye …. Isliye janti hun….wo ek police officer the par ab unnhe nikaldiya department ne “

Babita :” nikal diya par kyun?” ispar prerna ne kaha

Prerna : “kyun ki unhone sheher se sare gundaraj khatam kar diya isliye unhe nikal diya our sath me unhe marne ki bhi koshi ki gayi…”

Tabhi dimple waha aayi our meri kahi baat unse kahi…

Dimple : “to abhi aap dono ko nikalna chahiye....juldi wapis aane ko kaha hai unhone…”

Prerna : “thik hai babita tum taiyyar ho chuki ho to chalo…..waise ye dress tum par pyari lag rahi hai….” Babita ne muskurate huye jawab diya

Babita : “thanks. “ our wo dono jane hi wale the ki shanaya ne kaha

Shanaya : “mai bhi sath chal sakti hun kya ?”

Babita : “haan kyu nahi , chalo.” Fir dimple ne ghar ko lock kar diya our bua maa ki help karne chali gayi…

Dusri our inspector ne DGP ranjendra mathur ko kal raat wali baat bata di…unhe uski baat par vishwas nahi hua par jab unhone hawaldaro se bhi suna to unhe yakin hua…..rajendra mathur ne mujhe lekar aane ke liye kaha …wahi dusri our forencic team bhi apne kaam me lagi huyi thi… unhone habibulla ki laash our unke sath sabhi murdon ko apne lab me le aaye….wo lasho ki janch kar rahe the….parikshan ke baad jo natije samne aaye wo unke liye hairan kar rahe the….

Dr Niranjan : “ mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai..ki in sabhi logon ko ek hi inssaan ne mara hai….” Ispar Dr kamal ne kaha

Dr Kamal : “ye aap kya keh rahe hai.” Ye sun kar dr menka ne bhi laasho ni jaanch karte hue kaaha

Dr menka : “haan lagta to aaise hi hai kyun ki sabhi ke sharir par ek jaise hi waar ke nishan hai…jyada tar gardan our jaha par hamara dil hota hai wahi…uske alawa sirf ek hi body aaisi hai jispar chaku se dhero baar mara gaya hai..ise 2 logo ne mara hai…our baki sabhi ko sirf ek insaan ne mara hai………… “

Dr Niranjan : “sahi kaha apne dr. ye jo bhi koi hai wo sadharan nahi hai .ye ek mahir hattyyara hoga shayad“ elena ne bhi kaha

Dr Elena : “ maine kuch cases ko match kiya hai. Aap sabko ye jankar hairani hogi ki haal hi me huye sheher ke bahar wala hadsa our kal jo hua hai un sab ke bich kuch connection hai….kyun ki dono cases me hamla karne ke tarike 35% match ho rahe hai….” Uski baat sun kar Dr niranjan ji ko yakin nahi ho raha tha fir unho ne kaha

Dr Niranjan : “iska matlab ho sakta hai ki ye kisi tarah us case se juda ho…par mujhe nahi lagta ki in dono ka koi connection hai. Par fir bhi hame janch karni hogi.” unhone DGP ko phone laga kar is bare me sach kuch bataya …jise sun kar DGP ne unse milne ka keh kar phone rakh diya..

Mai vardha mama se mila our unse sari bate kar li…our unhe gaav bhej diya…… eleven apne chacha ki talash karti huyi Mumbai pahunchi…jahaa se uske chacha gayab huye the…..par fir bhi uski koshishe nakam hone lagi…jab mai ghar wapis ja raha tha ki tabhi raste me inspector ne mujhe rok liya…..jab usne mera rasta roka to mujhe gussa aaya our maine khaa

Mai : “inspector….. ye kya tarika hai. Police ho iska matlab ye nahi hai ki kabhi bhi kisi ko bhi rok lo…” inspector ne jawab diya…

Inspector : “ dekho me baat ko bigadna nahi chahta hai…kal vishram nagar me maine tumhe hi dekha tha 2 ladkiyon ke sath… us wakt maine tumhe roka nahi kyun ki wo haiwan usi layak tha… bulki mai khud use pakadne aaya tha….. mujhe our DGP sir ko bas tumse baat karni hai. Isliye unhone tumhe bulaya hai.” Maine kaha

Mai : “fir bhi ye koi tarika nahi hota kisi se baat karne ka …..bich raste me criminals ko roka jata hai ……samjhe inspector “

Inspector : “ kanun ki najar se dekhe to tum waise to ek criminal ho par insaaniyat ke nate dekha jaye to tum ek vardan ho un kamjor logon ke liye jo khud ke liye lad nahi sakte hai.”

Mai : “ mai janta hun mai kya hun. Bas ye batao jana kaha hai….”

Inspector : “DGP sir ke ghar jana hai.”

Mai : “meri shart ye hai ki me akela hi aaunga un ladkiyon ko isase dur rakho.” Inspector ne sochte huye kaha…

Inspector : “ wo is sabse dur rahengi mera wada hai…. Ab chale?”

Mai : “ aap log aage chalo mai aapke piche aata hun.”

Inspector apni gadi lekar aage badh gaya our mai unke piche piche DGP rajendra mathur ke ghar pahunch gaye… waha pehle se hi unka pariwar our anamika ka pariwar bhi waha moujud tha…mujhe dekhte hi sub apni jagah se uth khade huye our fir mujhse bhole

DGP : “ aao-aao vikram hum sab tumhara hi intejar kar rahe the.” Maine apni narajgi jatate huye kaha

Mai : “ shukriya , par ye achi baat nahi hai ki raste se kisi ko uthva liya jaye…ye aapke status ko shoba nahi deta…. “ rajendra mathur meri baat ka matlab samjh gaye our unhone inspector ki taraf dekha.

Inspector : “sorry sir wo mai…” baat bich me katate huye DGP ne kaha

DGP : “mai maafi chahunga vikram. Jo tumhe is tarah yaha aana pada….par baat behad jaruri thi isliye maine tumhe you achanak bula liya” vishal ji ne kaha

Vishal : “darasal kal raat jo hua wo divya our anamika ne ham sab ko bataya……tumne hamare liye jo kiya hai wo hum kabhi nahi bhulenge.” Ispar latika ji ne kaha

Latika : “han vikram beta hamari betiya hamari jaan hai. Unhe kuch ho jata to …bhagwan na kare aaisa ho “ shalini ji ne bhi kaha

Shalini : “hum jante hai vikram beta. Fir bhi tumne jo kiya hamare liye wo koi nahi karta……. Jab bhi koi jarurat ho hum tumhare sath rahenge ye mera wada hai tumse.” Maine muskurate huye kaha

Mai : “mai aap sabhi ki baato ki kadar karta hun….par maine aaisa kuch nahi kiya hai jisase aap mujhe mahan samjh rahe hai…. Maine kal 25 logon ki jaan li hai….unme se ek bhi nahi bacha …” meri baat sun kar divya our anamika ki maa hairan thi to divya our anamika bhi shock ho gayi thi ye bat sun kar… bakiyon ko pata tha kyun ki wo sab is case ke ird- gird hi kaam kar rahe the..jab dono ki maao ne apne –apne patiyon ki taraf dekha to unhone haami bhari …..

DGP : “ haan ye sach hai….theater ki parking me 6 lashe our vishram nagar me 19 lashe…baramad ki hai…..our maine hi ye baad media me batai ki ye gangwar tha ….” Vishal yadav ji ne kaha

Vishal : “filhal hamne case ki disha ko mod diya hai..”

Mai : “shukriya aap sab ne jo kiya us ke liye…. “

DGP : “mujhe bas ek bat puchni hai agar tumhe thik lage to hi jawab dena…”

Mai : “haan puchiye na” tab tak divya our anamika sabke liye chay our nasta le aayi.

DGP : “tumne aaisa kyun kiya…..manta hun habibulla ke admi tumhari behen ko kidnap karne aaye the…to sirf use hi marna chahiye tha…tumne bakiyon ko kyu mara?” maine unki aankho me dekhte huye kaha…

Mai : “ habibulla bas ek vajir tha . unka sara kaam wahi log sambhalte the…..to sahi mayno me habibulla bas ek dalal tha par uske aadmi asli gunehgar the….to mai unhe kaise jane deta jinhone meri behen ko kidnap karne ki soch rakhi ho….meri behen meri jaan hai uske liye me puri duniya ko mita sakta hun….mai ye bat janta tha ..wo jab tak zinda rahenge meri behen ke puche jarur aayenge…ya kisi our ladki ke piche…” Ye sun kar sab dang reh gaye….

DGP : “ our wo dono ladkiya ? wo koun thi tumhare sath ? inspector ne jine dekha tha”

Mai : “ un dono ko aap log bhool jaiye ….un dono ko in sab se dur rakhiye …”

DGP : “ haan thik hai bas mai puch raha tha….” Maine gehri saans chodte huye kaha

Mai : “dekhiye mai janta hun maine jo kiya hai wo bohot bada gunah hai our mujhe koi pachtawa nahi hai….meri jagah aap hote to kya karte….” Ispar DGP ne kaha

DGP : “ mai bhale hi kanun ka mulajim hun par fir bhi mai wahi karta jo mere pariwar ki suraksha ke liye behad jaruri hota” unki baat sun maine halka sa muskura diya….our kaha

Mai : “ marte wakt lala ne ek baat kahi thi . usne kaha tha kisi ne supari di thi meri prerna ko sabak sikhane ke liye, wo kon hai ye batane se pehle hi wo mar gaya…..to kya aap mujhe us shaksh ko dhundhne me madat kar sakte hai.” Rajendra ne

Rajendra : “ thik hai hum pata karte hai tum chinta mat karo….”

Mai : “thik hai ab mujhe chalna chahiye , mai ijajat chahunga…” meri is baat par sab mujhe rokna chah rahe the par maine waha se nikalna hi sahi samjha..”
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mai manta hun aap sab meri is kahani ko pasand kar rahe hai par .....bas gine chune readers hi reaction ya comments karte hai....jitna maine socha tha utna responce nahi mil pa raha hai yar .....isi karan kabhi kabhi man nahi lagta mera.....par mai ye kahani nahi rokunga mujhe ye puri karni hai our meri dusri kahani jo adhuri reh gayi hai use bhi aage badhana hai so....me chahta hun ki aap sab dost comments or reactions de.......taki mujhe aage likhne me jyada sochna na pade.....janta hun ye ek adult forum hai ...par meri kahani thoda hatke hai isliye isme bhi sex jarur honge par sahi samay ka intejar hai ........baki me is bare me our kya hi kahu .... shukriya ...................................................................
 
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mai manta hun aap sab meri is kahani ko pasand kar rahe hai par .....bas gine chune readers hi reaction ya comments karte hai....jitna maine socha tha utna responce nahi mil pa raha hai yar .....isi karan kabhi kabhi man nahi lagta mera.....par mai ye kahani nahi rokunga mujhe ye puri karni hai our meri dusri kahani jo adhuri reh gayi hai use bhi aage badhana hai so....me chahta hun ki aap sab dost comments or reactions de.......taki mujhe aage likhne me jyada sochna na pade.....janta hun ye ek adult forum hai ...par meri kahani thoda hatke hai isliye isme bhi sex jarur honge par sahi samay ka intejar hai ........baki me is bare me our kya hi kahu .... shukriya ...................................................................
Sniperx009 dekho bhai aap se zoot nahi bollunga aap kee kahani la jawab hai is me koi do raai nahi hai aap kee story ek novel hai jisme haar ek chapter hai uske aapane kirdar hai muze bhee aap ke kuch scene abhi taak nahi samje paar muze ye paata hai haar ek jagah paar ek parda utrega haar pratha samaj me aa jayeg aap ne jo kirdar diye example veda mama south ke unko jaab bhee imagine karta hun naa taab muze Jailer movie ke vilan kee yaad ati hai vaha pe vo vilan the yaha pe aapane kirdar ke liye Hero hai aap ne jese likha vese muze imagine huwa ye hai aap kee taqat so bura maat maniye likhiye agar Hira haar kisi ko samaj me agaya to johari kee value khatam naa Bhai fir

aur ek baat bollu duniya me mooth baajo kee Kami nahee hai logo ko bus Ladaki ko lund dikha diya vo pagal ho gayi aur sabki parwa naa karate huye chudane lagi yaha Inka kaam ho jaata hai mooth marano ka intejam bheee ek baar kaam ho gaya bhad me jaaye coment


Kisi aur ke liye nahi aapane kirdaro ke liye likhiye sir
 
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