dreamboy2902
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ye kahan ka rule hai aisa toh maine nahi suna bhai aap woh kahani likho maine kaafi had tak woh story padhi thi kaafi acchha likh rahe the par achanak beech me kyu band hui pata nahi agar uski wajah ye hai phir toh befizool baat hai aap aage continue Karo usko bhihaa bhai mera hi kahani tha lekin ye xforum wlao ne bola ki ammi se halala aap nahi likh sakte ho. kahani ko change karna padega. isliye mai wo kahani hi chod diya. ab koun sara chij change kare fir wo feel nahi rah jata kahani me.