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Hello bro.....UPDATE-76
ORKS EMPIRE (PEHLI PEHAR 6:00 PM to 9:00 PM)
Dono senaye amne samne khadi thi….bilkul taiyar hamle ke liye..TUFO ne apni bahut bade sena khadi kardi thi yahan jahan 5 lakh ELVES aur 20 hazar white jadugar wahin TUFO ki fuaj me 10 lakh orks, 5 lakh demons, 1 lakh VAMPIRE, 50 hazar balck jadugar aur 10 DEMOVAMP bhi the…
AUR JUNG KE AILAN PE SHURU HUI EK KHATARNAK JUNG KI SHURUWAT…
AB AGGE:
ELVES KI SENA KUCH IS TARHA KHADI KHADI THI:
Ek ek lakh ki panch tukdian jisme adhe paidal sena me kuch ke pass talwar kuch ke pass bhale kuch ke pass teer kaman the aur adhe ghode pe the sathme har ek ke sath HALDIR ek ke sath, LORD THRANDUIL ek ke sath, LORD ELROND ek ke sath, NAILA ek ke sath aur last ne SAPHIRA ek ke sath jo apni2 tukdi ki agwai kar rahe the aur in tukdion me shamil ke 4 4 hazar JADUGAR.
Har tukdi ke bichme 5 5 hazar white jadugar the…
TUFO KI SENA KUCH IS TARHA KHADI KHADI THI:
5 lakh ORKS ki bhi ek ek lakh ki 5 tukdi thi aur har tukdi ke senapathi 5 jadugar the. Jo samne khade the…
Inke piche 1 1 lakh Demons ki bhi 5 tukdi thi aur 5 DEMOVAMP jo un har ek tukdi ke SAMNE ek ek khade the..hathon me badi talwar bhale liye huwe the jo in 5 tukdi ki agwai kare ge…
Inke piche 50 hazar VAMPIRE khade the hathon me teer liye…
Inke piche khada tha TUFO apne ghode pe tha uske sath khade the uske 5 jadugar left side me aur 5 jadugar right side me jo uske sabse khatarnak jadugar the aur insab ke piche khadi thi baki ki bachi hui sena..TUFO aur uske right left 1 1 jadugar khade the ek thodi unchi chattan pe jahan se inhe ache se agge ka dekh raha tha aur bache 8 wo niche khade the ye jo do TUFO ke sath the ye dono unme aur bhi ziyada taqatwar aur khatarnak the..
Aur TUFO ke EMPIRE yani ORKS EMPIRE me jo jane ka gate tha jis badi dewar ke sath tha uske upar gate left side 10 hazar aur right side 10 hazar VAMPIRE hathon me teer liye khade the…is tarha
TUFO : apne ek right ke jadugar se, mujhe ye sab jaldi khatam chahiye
JADUGAR : ji LORD
Aur kissi ke sath us jadugar ne apne hath se ek chhota hare rang ka golo chhod diya aur jaise hi wo golo sab se samne khade 5 senapathi jadugar ne dekha unho apni2 tukdi ko hamle khete huwe agge ELVES ki sena ki taraf daud laga di…
Unko hamla karta dekh
Yahan HALDIR ne apna ek hath uthaya aur right side me khadi SAPHIRA ne bhi apna ek hath uthaya..
Jaise hi TUFO ki samne ki sena kuch agge badi HALDIR aur SAPHIRA ke hathon se teez roshini nikli aur dono apni2 tukdi ke sath sidha na badte huwe HALDIR apne left aur SAPHIRA apne right se apni2 tukdi ke sath samne se na jake ek curve ki tarhar agge bade. unke apni jagha chhodne ke bad LORD THRANDUIL, LORD ELROND aur NAILA bhi apni2 tukdi ke sathe sidha agge bade…is tarha se
Unke aisa karta dekhe TUFO ke sath me khada left wala jadugar bola
JADUGAR : LORD ye kya kar rahe hai…
TUFO : kuch nhi bas teen tarfa hamla kar rahe hai magar wo bhul rahe hai ke ye to bas abhi shuru huwa hai…
HALDIR aur SAPHIRA ki tukdi me se jo ghod sawar the wo tezi se aur agge bade apne left aur right side se aur bada curve karke huwe aur jo paidal sepahi thi wo ab sidha bad rahe the….aur biche se teen tukdi to thi hi…is tarha
Ab aisa ho gaya tha ke ORKS ki sena teen side se gir gai thi HALDIR aur SAPHIRA ko thoda time laga gherne me magar LORD THRANDUIL (LT), LORD ELROND(LE) aur NAILA unse pehle hi ORKS ki sena se bhid gaye orks ki taraf ki bhi left side aur right side ki tukdi bhi thoda curve hui magar fir bhi wo HALDIR aur SAPHIRA ke ghere me the aur sath me paidal tukdi ke bhi…har BLACK JADUGAR(BJ) jo apni tukdi ke samne tha unhone ne apne kale jadu ka istemal karna shhuru kar diya unke har jadu ka LT, LE aur NAILA barabar se jawab de rahe the aur jo paidal ELVES tukdi me jo WHITE JADUGAR(WJ) the unhone bhi apne jadu ka istemal orks aur BJ jo side se ho kar arahe the unpe hamla karna start kar diya…ab HALDIR aur SAPHIRA ki tukdi bhi sidha left aur right side se ORKs pe tut pade aur apni talwar se unke sar dhad se alag karne lage…
Har taraf khoon hi khoon tha wo 5 BJ bhi mare gaye the ek mara NAILA ke hathon se…chaliye dekhte hai kaise
NAILA SECNE:
NAILA bade teezi se apne ghode pe agge badti huwe orks ko mar rahi thi jis orks ki tukdi me NAILA ghusi thi wo ab biche me to nhi magar kafi andar agai thi aur jo bhi orks uski talwar ya bijli ki zad me ata mara jata abhi NAILA khadi orks ko mar hi rahi thi ke is tukdi ka senapathi BJ bhi badi teezi se apne ghode pe NAILA ke piche se araha tha aur jaise hi usse NAILA dikhi usme ek aag se bana gola uski taraf pheka jab NAILA orks ko mar rahi thi tabhi usne samne dekha ke kuch orks hatne lage uske samne se fir usne apne left aur right bhi dekha wo bhi dur ho rahe the koi uspe war nhi kar raha tha tabhi ek dam se NAILA ne piche dekha to usse wo aag ka golo bilkul apne kareeb dekha usne turant apni right hand se bijili band ki aur apne ghode ki lagam turant left side ki aur apne right side se apni talwar jo us waqt puri bijli se samak rahi thi usse bahut zor se us gole pe war kiya jisse ek dhamaka huwa aur NAILA apne ghode se niche gir gai wo BJ bhi ab uske pass agaya tha usse laga NAILA mar gai hai abhi wo apne ghode ke pair se NAILA ko chune hi wala tha ke NAILA ne apna ek hath agge kiye jo is waqt roshini se chamak raha tha jisse ghode ki anakhon me roshini lagi wo ek dam se apne samne ke pair utha ke khada huwa me kar diye jisse wo BJ ka santulan bigda aur wo bhi ghode se niche gira…
Wahan khade sare orks gol ghera bana ke khade ho gaye… BJ aur NAILA ke charon taraf..
Ab NAILA aur wo BJ amne samne the…
NAIAL : gusse se, na mard kahen ke piche se war karte ho
BJ : jung me sab jayaz hai samjhi
Aur issike sath usne NAILA pe fir se aag ke gole se war kiya is bar NAILA pehle se hi taiyar thi…jaise ho wo golo dono ke biche me pahuncha NAILA badi tezi se us aag ke gole ki taraf badi aur jaise hi wo usse takrane wali thi turant jump laga di aur gole ke us par ho gai wo golo jake orks ko hi laga bechare apne hi senapathi ke war se mare gaye ek bada dhamak huwa shayad 50 ek orks gaye hoge kam se. wo BJ kuch samjh pata NAILA ne badi tezi se uske right hand pe war kiya aur uska hath gaya kam se NAILA us BJ ke piche khade orks ki taraf badi aur apne left hand se unpe bijli se war kiya jiske chalte wahan khade 10-20 orks mare gaye aur NAILA ko apni speed kam karne ke liye jagha bhi mili NAILA rukke turant palti ye sab bahut jaldi hua..isse pehle BJ NAILA pe war karta NAILA turant firse tezi se us BJ ki taraf badi aur usse biche se chirte huwe nikal gai…NAILA ka chere pe kuch khoon ke chite bhi abhi wo jahan khadi thi uske 10 kamdam pe orks khade usse dekh rahe the NAILA ne uski taraf dekha bade hi katil andaz ne aur halka se muskurai aur fir kya tha…lag gai apne kam me.
SAPHIRA SECNE:
SAPHIRA bhi right side se orks ko marte huwe us taraf se ghus chuki thi…aur uske sath ELVES ghod sawar bhi aur ye log bhi andar phelte gaye aur sab ki band bajate gaye tabhi SAPHIRA ek dam se apne ghone se chalang laga ke agge orks ke ghund me kud gai ek bade dhamake ke sath..jab SAPHIRA hawa me thi tabhi usne apna pura sharer aag me badal liya tha jiske chalte jaise hi wo niche orks pe giri uski rafter bahut teez thi uske zamin se takrate hi ek bahut bada dhamak huwa jiski chapet me bahut sare orks aye aur jalke rakh hone lage…
Ek ELVES: SAPHIRA ke sath jo ghode pe tha dosre ELVES se, ye kya tha dekha tumne..
S ELVES : han badi khatarnak hai ye to..
Fir ye bhi lag gaye orks ko marne me…..
Udhar SAPHIRA lagi hui thi orks ko bas jalane me…
HALDIR SECNE:
HALDIR apni power ka use hi nhi kar raha tha wo aur uske sath 20 ELVES ek line me kuch phasle se agge bade rahe the baki ke ELVES to bikhar gaye koi 5 ke group me to 10 ke ye do key a fir akele magar HALDIR ke sath jo 20 the wo sirf HALDIR ki ishare pe chal rahe the..aur sab ko marte ja rahe the..
LORD THRANDUIL(LT) & LORD ELROND(LE) SECNE:
Ye dono to andar alag2 gaye the magar ab ek sath ho gaye the ghode se niche ho gaye the orks ne in dono ke ghodon ko mar giraya tha aur ab ye dono ek hoke orks pe kayamat barsa rahe the jahan LT apni dono talwar se lad rahe the yahin LE sirf ek talwar se aur apne dosre hath se wo kabhi hawa ya kabhi aag se orks pe war kar rahe the…
Is orks ki 5 lakh sena ko marte marte raat ke dosre pehar ka adha time laga…bahut se ELVES mare gaye bahut se WJ bhi…HALDIR ko chhod ke baki sabme apni puri power ka istemal kiya LE, LT, NAILA aur SAPHIRA aur inki power ke chalte lagbhag orks ki ye 5 lakh wali sena khatam hi ho gai…job bache wo wapas bhagne lage apni sathion ke taraf magr tabhi bache huwe orks pe kuch DEMONS aur DEMOVAMP me hamla kar diya aur bache huwe sare orks ko mar diya….ye dekh
BJ1 : TUFO se, LORD ye apne hi sathi ko mar rahe tha…
TUFO : jung me jo peth dekhata hai uska yehi anjam hota hai..aur waise bhi ORKS aur DEMONS me banti nhi hai..to ye hona hi tha.
Thoda rukke TUFO fir bola
TUFO : kya lagta hai kitne bache hoge ELVES..
BJ2 : abhi pata karta hun
Itna bol usne apne hath pe baithe ek eagle jo dekhne me hi kafi khatarnak lag raha tha pura kala uski anakhen aisi jaise angar nikal rahi ho..usse hawa me uchal diya aur wo eagle udte huwe jahan ELVES the usne upar gol gol chakkar lagane laga..aur yahan wo BJ2 uske eagle ki anakhen se apni anakhen connect karke sab dekh raha tha….kuch deer dekhne ke bad uske apni anakhen band ki aur kuch bolne laga fir anakhen khul
BJ2 : ziyada nhi hai hoge kuch 3 lakh ke aspas..
TUFO : aur wo pancho
BJ2 : wo sare zinda hai abhi..
TUFO : bahut khub jaisa suna tha unke bare me waise hi hai..magar kab tak bache ge ye log..jo ELVES aaj yahan hai wo LT aur LE ke sabse khatarnak ELVES hai class A ke tabhi humari sena ko khatam karne me unhe asani hui hai…chalo koi nhi abhi to puri raat baki hai..ya shayad bas ye pehar kya pata…suno DEMONS ke sath sath VAMPIRE ko bhi hamla karne ka hukum do…
JAB TUFO APNE BJ SE BAAT KAR RAHA THA THEEK SAME TIME:
ELVES side bhi bache ELVES ab teen row me khade ho gaye the sathme bache WJ unke samne aur unke samne khade the ye sab HALDIR, LT, LE, NAILA and SAPHIRA ek gola bana ke khade the..
LE : ye padao to jeet gaye magar abhi bahut kuch baki hai
LT : bikul sahi aur ek musibat aur hai DEMOVAMP
HALDIR : DEMOVAMP ko aap hum teeno pe chhod dijiye wo hum dekh lege..
NAIAL : bilkul
SAPHIRA : magar wo 5 hai aur hum teen
NAILA : dar lag raha hai SAPHI (SAPHIRA ko pyar se SAPHI bolte hai ye sab)
SAPHI : nhi sirf bata rahi hun..5 ho ya 5 hazar mujhe pharak nhi padta.
LE : theek hai fir main aur LT DEMONS ko dekhte hai..baki sabke sath milke
HALDIR : theek hai fir…magar dhiyan se q k aap sabne apni power bahut istemal ki hai..issi liye isbar sambhal ke q k mujhe lagta hai isbar TUFO humme itna waqt bhi nhi dege aur uski puri sena hum pe tut pade gi…
LE : han ye hoga hi..wo aisa hi kare ga
LT : chalo fir ek bar aur ho jaye….
Fir pancho apni2 jagha pe chale jate hai…
PRESENT TIME:
TUFO ke bolte hi BJ1 ne firse apne hath se ek hare rang ka chota golo agge ki taraf phenka…jo DEMONS ke samne ate hi unhone apne kadam agge badaye..
Unke aage badte hi usne ek aur hare rang ka golo VAMPIRE ke samne aya aur wo bhi badchale DEMONS ke piche..ELVES is baat se angan the ke DEMONS ke piche VAMPIRE teer Kaman liye agge bad rahe hai.
Yahan ye log bhi bad chale agge tezi se magar abhi kuch aisa kuch hona baki tha jo shayad sirf LT aur LE ne hi dekha tha baki kissi ne nhi…na TUFO na VAMPIRE aur na wahan maujood koi aur ne..
Jaise hi dono sena apas ne tak rane wali thi…kuch 100 kadam duri thi tabhi kuch aisa huwa jisse ye jung ka mahul jahan sirf awazon se gung raha tha ek dam shant ho gaya jo jahan khada tha wahin ruk ke bas apni anakhen pade ye nazara dekh raha tha..
Huwa ye ke 100 kadam ka phasla hone se pehle hi…
HALDIR, NAILA aur SAPHI ne duadte huwe jump lagaya aur teeno hawa me kafi upar ho gaye…
HALDIR :
HALDIR ka pura sharer ek roshini me badal gaya jab wo roshini khatam hui aur jo samne aya usse dekha sabki anakhen shock me badi ho gai is waqt HALDIR ka size bhi koi 100 fit ke aspas ho gaya lag ghag DEMOVAMP ke barabar uske wo apne pankh phelaye hawa me tha apne angel wale apne asli roop me uske ek hath me golden color ki badi talwar thi aur ek hath me bijli ka golo chamchama raha tha…
NAILA :
NAILA jab hawa me ho rahi thi jab ek chota portal khula aur usne se samundar ka apni lehron ke sath NAILA ke pair ke nich jama hone laga aisa lag raha tha jaise ek chota samundar ho wo aur usme uthne wali lehre apne tufan pe thi. NAILA ka pair samundar ke andar tha uska bhi sharer thoda bad gaya tha..aur NAILA ki anakon se halki green kirne nikal rahi thi ya yun kahun uski puri anakhen ki green thi..uske hawa se lehra rahe the
SAPHIRA :
SAPHIRA jab hawa me hui to uska pura sharer aag me badal gaya tabhi hawa me ruke uske apna ek hath asman ki taraf kiya..aur pure mahol me ek dahard gunj uthi dur se hawa me badi tezi se ek dragon udta huwa araha tha aur jaise2 wo kareeb araha tha uske bhi pure sharer se sirf aag nikal rahi thi..uske pass ate hi SAPHIRA ki talwar bhi puri aag ki ho gai…aur jaise hi dragon uske pass se uda SAPHIRA turant hawa me hi ek aur chalang laga ke apne dragon ki peth pe beth gai aur agge jake TUFO ki sena ko bhi apni jhalak dikha ai..pura gol round marke wo bhi apne dono sathion ke pass ake ruki…
Ye sab dekh har koi shock me tha aur sabse ziyada TUFO….
TUFO : maine inke bare me pada tha magar ye nhi pada ke ye itne taqatwar aur khatarnak hai…
BJ1 : to kya sena ko piche hatne ka kahun de
TUFO : usse ghur ke, bilkul nhi hum piche nhi hat sakte ab kuch deer ruko fir hum bhi jung me shamil hoge…dekhte to hai ye kya kya kar sakte hai..
BJ2 : my LORD
TUFO : gusse se, kahana bas kuch deer
Itna bolke TUFO bahut zor se dahada uske sath uske piche khadi sena ne bhi awaz bulang ki aur ORKS EPMIRE ka bigul bajane lage jisse DEMONS aur VAMPIRE jo is waqt ELVES aur un TEENO ke samne the unhone bhi hamla kar diya….
HALDIR : dono ELVES LORD se, kuch deer aap aram kare hum dekhe lege sab ko..NAILA se, tum niche sambhalo main aur SAPHI un 5 DEMOVAMP ko dekhte hai
NAILA : theek hai jaan
Fir kya tha NAILA niche DEMOS pe tut padi badi badi pani ke lehro ke sath aur HALDIR aur SAPHI DEMOVAMP pe tut pade.
HALDIR SECNE:
HALDIR palak jhapakte hi ek DEMOVAMP ki taraf bada uske hath me bhi talwar thi aur fir kya tha dono ki talwaren apas me takrai…wo bhi HALDIR ko takkar de raha tha tabhi HALDIR ne uska ek war block kiya jo wo HALDIR ke sene pe karne wala tha HALDIr thoda side ho gaya aur uska talwar wala hath hi kat diya idhar hath katta udhar HALDIR teezi se gol ghum gaya aur agle hi pal us DEMOVAMP ka sar alag tha aur uska shairi sidha piche DEMOS pe gira gaye sale sab…
Usko marne ke bad HALDIR hawa me hi dur ho gaya khali maidan me uske piche do DEMOVAMP bhi uski taraf bade…
SAPHIRA SECNE :
SAPHI jab hamle ke liye agge badi to wo do DEMOVAMP ne SAPHI pe war karne lage ab SAPHI to apne dragon pe thi tu wo kabhi ek ke paise ke niche se nikalti to kabhi dosre ke aur ek ke pair pe war karti to kabhi upar jate waqt ek ke hath pe SAPHI aise hi unhe ghayal kare ja rahi thi aur uska dragon unpe apne muh se aag barsaye jar aha tha SAPHI jab niche ati to dragon DEMONS pe bhi aag barsa deta…aise hi SAPHI lagi rahi un dono ko marne me wo dono kafi ghayal ho gaye the..wo kabhi bhi gir sakte the…ye dekh SAPHI unse thoda dur ho gai…kuch fasle pe jane ke bad usne pata nhi dragon ko kya bola wo dragon pehle asman me aur upar gaya aur fir teezi se sidha niche ki or bada dekhne se lag raha tha koi aag ka bada gola asman se zamin pe gir raha ho…magar wo zamin pe girne ke bajaye sidha un dono DEMOVAMP ke sharer ko bich se chirta huwe nikal gaya..aur wo dono me andar se aag lagi aur gire dhadam se niche galte huwe…aur le gaye apne sath kuch DEMONs ko bhi…
Ye najara dekh sab ki phat gai aur sab se ziyada TUFO ki
NAILA SECNE :
NAILA ne to samjho pura samundar hi yahan lake rakh diya ho pani ki badi badi dhar sidha DEMONS pe girti kabhi unhe apne andar kar leti to kabhi ek teer ki tarha unke sharer ke par karke nikal jati
VAMPIRE bhi ab NAILA pe teer barsa raha the..magar ek bhi teer ustak nhi pahunch raha tha…balke NAILA unke hi teer apni pani ki dhar ke sath unpe hi mar deti…
HALDIR ne bhi baki dono DEMOVAMP ko mar diya tha aur wo bhi ab hawa me se niche agaya tha aur apne akar ko thoda chota karke DEMONS pe maut ka tandaw kar raha tha aur uske sath NAILA aur SAPHI bhi de rahe the…aur dekhte hi dekhte ye wali TUFO ki sena bhi khatam ho gai….
Aur ye teeno TUFO ke taraf bade sath me LT, LE aur unki ELVES ki sena agge badi…
TUFO ko to kuch samjh hi nhi araha tha ye ye sab kya ho raha hai magar himmat kar usne bhi hamle ka hokum diya…
Is waqt raat ka dusra pehar khatam hone ko tha….
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SAME TIME KAHIN EK ROOM ME 7 LOG BAITHE YE DEKH RAHE THE:
SHAKS1 : humme TUFO ki madar karna hoga.
SHAKS2 : han karni hi ho gi
SHAKS1 : SHAKS5 SHAKS6 & SHAKS7 se, aap log hamari sena ka netritva kare ge aaj un sab me se koi bachna nhi chahiye
Fir wo SHAKS1 apni anakhen band kar kuch spell bolta hai aur uske hath me ek chamak si hoti hai aur jab wo chamak kam hoti hai aur jo chiz uske hath me thi usse dekhe SHAKS5 SHAKS6 & SHAKS7 ek dam shock ho jate hai
SHAKS5 : shock me, ye tumhare pass kaise ai
SHAKS1 : bas agai lo isse aur turant rawana ho jao iska kam hote hi ye wahan chali jaye gi jahan se ye ai hai..
SHAKS5 jaise hi usse apne hath me leta hai uski sharer ko ek jhatka lagta hai ussi ke sath teeno SHAKS5 SHAKS6 & SHAKS7 ek dam se wahan se gayab ho jate hai..
To be cont….
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DOSRA SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (THODA PICHE TIME 07:15 PM):
Itna suna tha ke SANJAY S bhi jake computer screen pe dekhne lagta hai…sach me meri body me aisa kuch nhi tha jaisa wo dekhna chahata tha…
SANJAY S : band karo..
AB AGGE:
Jab wo machine ki kirne mujhe lag rahi thi to mujhe apne pure sharer me bahut teez dard ho raha tha aur sath me mere sar me bhi aur mujhe meri anakhone ke samne jaise apne paida hone se leke har ek secne dekh raha tha maine kab kya kiya sab kuch…ek pal to main mujhe laga ke aaj mera akhiri din hai duniya me q k mujhe kirne apne ek ek body parts me mehsos ho rahi thi jaise wo mere andar kuch search kar rahi ho….fir mere andar ki sari kirne mere dimag me jama hone lagi aur pata nhi wo meri kon ki yaad dekh rahi thi…kya dhund rahi thi meri yaadon me mujhe pata nhi…fir ek dam aisa laga meri mere sar me dhamak huwa aur main behosh ho gaya…
Tabhi
SANJAY S bola “band karo”..
Aur us scientist ko
SANJAY S : isse check karo kahin mar to nhi gaya
Scientist YASH ko check kar ke
SCIENTIST : no sir sirf behosh huwa hai
SANJAY S : kab tak
Scientist computer pe jake kuch check karta hai…aur kuch deer dekhne ke bad
SCIENTIST : sir machine bata rahi hai koi 15 mint me hosh agaye ga iska mind abhi stable ho raha hai..
SANJAY S : isse jaldi hosh me lao..
Fir wo Scientist ek injection me kuch dos leke YASH ke pass badta hai magar tabhi
SCIENTIST : isko khol do pehle
ABHY : isse nhi khol sakte ye aise hi theek hai samjh
SCIENTIST : sir mujhe iske hath me lagana hai aur waise bhi ye behosh hai to kuch karna sakta…
ABHY SANJAY S ko dekhta hai jisse SANJAY S apna sir han me mila deta hai..
B INCHARGE wahan khade do guards ko YASH ko kholne ka bolta hai jo patte uski body pe bandhe the dono pehle YASH ko chair se utha ke stretcher pe leta ke uske balt kholte hai aur usse phir se le jake chair pe hath aur pair bandh dete dono hath chair ke handle pe aur pair niche ab sirf YASH ke hath aur pair hi bandhe thi…
Fir wo SCIENTIST uske hath pe injection laga deta hai…SANJAY S wahani ek badi chair pe baithe gaya YASH ki chair ke samne aur YASH ke hosh me ane ka intezar kar raha tha..
Wo ladka aur ladki uske piche hi khade the…koi 15 mint bad YASH ko hosh agaya tha jisse dekh SANJAY S ki honthon pe muskan agai thi…aur YASH usse ghur raha tha..magar abhi bhi wo kamzor tha…
SANJAY S : to batao YASH meri wo chiz kahan hai jo tumhare andar thi
YASH : shock me, mere andar kya hai kuch bhi to nhi
SANJAY S : ziyada hoshiyar na banno tum batao EATHER kahan hai wo dekhne me ek red liquid ki tarha hai jo tumhari so called team CANADA se leke gaye the..
YASH : to kya….
SANJAY S : baat kat ke, han wo mere hi log the aur tum sidhe se batao ke EATHER kahan hai…q ke ABHY ne dekha tha usse tumhare sharer me jate huwe..
Pehle YASH ABHY ko ghura hai fir SANJAY S se.
YASH : maine kahana mere pass kuch bhi nhi hai
SANJAY S : jhut maat bolo YASH main janta hun wo tumhare hi pass hai.
YASH : main har bar yehi jawab duga q k mere pass kuch bhi nhi hai..
YASH bar bar na bolne se SANJAY S ne ABHY ki taraf dekh ke kaha
SANJAY S : ABHY se, ye kya bol raha hai ABHY
ABHY : sir main jhut nhi bol raha maine khud apni anakhon se us liquid ko iske sharer me jate dekhata hai..aur ye RIA se uske bare me bhi baat kar raha tha..fir ABHY sab bata deta hai SANJAY S ko..
Sab kuch sunne ke bad
SANJAY S : dekho YASH ABHY mujhe se jhut nhi bol sakta isliye mujhe wo dedo main vada karta hun tumhe jane doga q k wo jinki hai wo insane nhi pure saitan hai isliye bol raha hun..
YASH : pehle to wo jo koi bhi chiz hai wo mere pass nhi hai..aur dosra tum mujhe aaj marne wale ho ye to taye hai q hai na..
SANJAY S : apna sar han me hilake, han
YASH : to fir q mujhe kaha ke tum mujhe jane doge…
SANJAY S : bas dekh raha tha ke tum kya jawab dete ho…
YASH : muskura ke, hmmm acha chalo main jo tumhari chiz mere pass hai usse dene ko taiyar hun…magar mujhe janna hai ke tumhe mujhe phasaya kaise…aur mere MAUSA ko mere khilaf kaise kiya..aur ye ABHY tumhare sath kaise shamil huwa..
SANJAY S : hahahaha hasne ke bad, acha hai jo tumne ye pucha warna main khud tumhe marne se pehle ye batana chahata tha.warna tumhari atma ko shanty nhi milti..hai na
YASH : han ye to hai hi..
SANJAY S : suno..jab mujhe SUDHIR se pata chala ke tum zinda ho (UPDATE-34) to main ek chair pe baitha apni soch me gum tha ke tabhi mere kandhe pe kisi ne hath rakha..
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SANJAY S pe piche palat ke dikh to uske kandhe pe hath rakhni wali aur koi nhi balke uski beti APURVA hi thi..
APURVA : kya baat hai papa aap tension me lag rahe hai..
Itna bolke APURVA SANJAY S ke samne sofe pe baith gai…
SANJAY S : kuch beti bas ye soch raha tha ke aaj ki duniya me murde thi kaise zinda ho jate hai..
APURVA : kya matlab hai papa apka
SANJAY S : beta ROCKY zinda hai
APURVA : shock me, kya magar kaise usse mare to 1 saal ho gaya hai.
SANJAY S : nhi wo mara nhi hai..magar ye kaise ho sakta hai ke ek band jiske dil me goli aur bad me zehar lage khanjar se mara ho bach kaise sakta hai…
APURVA : kya baat kar rahe ho papa maine khud check kiya tha ke wo mar gaya tha aur humme usse ussi jheel me phenk diya tha..
APURVA ke bolne pe SANJAY S ne koi response nhi diya balke ke apne tab me kuch karne laga…
Wo INDIA ki news check kar raha tha..to usse YASH ke bare me pata chal usne aur bhi search kiya magar usse koi aur aisi new nhi mili…aur ye comform bhi ho gaya ke wo YASH urf ROCKY hi hai…q ke details news me YASH ki photo bhi thi aur kafi details bhi.
Apne papa ko yun kuch na bolta dekh APURVA
APURVA : papa yahan itni hum murde ke zinda hone pe behas kar rahe hai aur aap hoke tab me lage ho…
SANJAY S : tumhare hi sawal ka jawab dekh raha tha..
Itna bolke SANJAY S ne apna tab APURVA ko de diya..aur APURVA abhi us news ko padte gai aur uske chere ke expression bhi badalte gaye.sab kuch padne ke bad..
APURVA : shock me, ye kaise ho sakta hai papa…aur humme itna bada raza pata hi nhi tha ke wo YASH RAJPUT hai THE RAJPUT EMPIRE ka malik..
SANJAY S : bahut hi chalaki se MADHU RAJPUT ne ye sab kiya hai..
Ab to APURVA ke shock ka thikana hi nhi tha..
APURVA : kya MADHU RAJPUT usse ROCKY ya YASH ka kya connection.
SANJAY S : shayad tum aur details me nhi gai.
APURVA firse pura ka pura news aur details padne lagi aur usse MADHU(MAA) ki bhi picture dikhi.
APURVA : ohh my god ye dono kitne shatir hai papa humme pata chalne hi nhi diya ke ROCKY inka beta hai..
SANJAY S : wohi to
APURVA : kuch deer bad boli, to papa ab kya kare.
SANJAY S : ROCKY ko marne ke bad humme firse ye sab karne me pura 1 saal laga hai…aur maine socha tha ke ab koi humare raste me nhi aye ga..magar dekho lagta hai humme firse rocky ko marna pade ga..
APURVA : magar papa mere ek baat samjh nhi arahi ke jab wo zinda hai to fir wo humare piche q nhi aya..
SANJAY S : pata nhi usne aisa q kiya..magar ab lagta hai wo zarur aye ga.
APURVA : matlab
SANJAY S : janti ho ROCKY pe ye jaan lewa hamla kisne kiya
APURVA : kisne
SANJAY S : SUDHIR LAL ke bête ne
APURVA : shock me, kya magr q
SANJAY S : ek ladki ke chakkar me.
APURVA : wtf papa to ab ROCKY…
SANJAY S : baat kat ke, shayad agar wo SUDHIR LAL tak pahuncha to samjho hum tak bhi pahunche jaye ga…jo shayad ab tak pata nhi kis wajha se ruka huwa tha..magar ab to wo firse humare piche aye ga..
APURVA : bilkul jitna main usse janti hun wo apne liye to nhi aye ga magar agar wo us ladki se pyar karta hoga to wo zarur aye ga..
SANJAY S : tum itne yakin se kaise bol sakti ho.
APURVA : papa shayad aap bhool rahe hai..maine bhale hi usse jhuta pyar kiya ho magar usne mujhse sacha pyar kiya tha..yaad hai na ek bar mujhe RUSSIAN mafia me pakad liya tha aur usne khoon ki nadian bahai thi.
SANJAY S : han yaad hai.
APURVA : to papa ab taiyar ho jaiye agar wo ishamle se bacha to aur mujhe yakin hai wo bache jaye ga to ab wo hamari or bade ga..
SANJAY S : to kya plan hai beta
APURVA : kuch bhi nhi
SANJAY S : mujhse jhut nhi bol sakti tum jab hum baat kar rahe the to tum kuch kuch muskura rahi thi..aur main yakin se bol sakta hun zaror koi plan to chal raha hai tumhare dimag me.
APURVA : han chal to raha hai...soch rahi hun isbar usse samne se marogi..
Itna bolke APURVA ne apna phone nikala aur kissi ko call kiya
SAMNE SE : ji mam boliye kya kam hai
APURVA : suno apne mujhe YASH RAJPUT ki condition aur uski family ki puri information nikalo jab main INDIA ao to mujhe wo apne hathme chahiye aur YASH pe kadi nazar rakho samjhe.
SAMNE SE : theek hai.
Call kat kar APURVA me firs eek call lagaya….SUDHIR LAL ko
SUDHIR LAL : han beta..aaj kaise yaad kiya
APURVA : uncle ye main sun rahi hun
SUDHIR LAL : beta ab kar bhi kya sakte hai…
APURVA : theek hai uncle main the after tommrow india arahi hun. Aur han india ke hisab se jo kal raat meeting hone wali hai aap us meeting me nhi jao ge samjhe..
SUDHIR LAL : beta wo meeting bahut importent hai.
APURVA : janti hun uncle magr fir bhi aap na jaye kya pata ROCKY kuch kare
SUDHIR LAL : beta wo to hospital me wo kya kare ga..
APURVA : bhale hi wo hospital me magar uski team to hai hi isliye aap bhi ab under ground ho jaiye…aur apne bête ko bhi kare..mere ane tak kuch bhi mat karna
SUDHIR LAL: theek hai beta.
SUDHIR LAL se baat kar APURVA apne papa ki taraf dekhti hai
SANJAY S : beta job hi karo sab sambhal ke karna.
APURVA : ji papa aur mujhe pata hai sabse pehle kya karna hai..
Fir dono plan pe kuch discusse karte hai aur uske baad chale jate hai.
Fir APURVA apne kahiye anusar INDIA pahunchti hai..
Jahan wo SUDHIR LAL ko apna plan batati hai (UPDATE-41) magar isme details nhi thi wo ab agge ayegi…
SUDHIR LAL : to batao kya plan hai…..
APURVA : plan bahut simple hai uncle main YASH ki zindagi me firse jaogi wo mujhe mara huwa samjhta hai..jab mujhe zinda dekhe ga khud ba khud wo meri taraf daud chala aye ga.aur ek bar firse wohi hoga jo pehle huwa tha uske sath pyar me dhoka..
SuDHIR LAL : magar kya ye plan kam kare ga..q k wo ek bar phasa hai mujhe nhi lagta ke dobara phase ga han janta hun ke wo tumhe mara huwa samjh raha hai magar fir bhi.
APURVA : han ye thoda mushkil hoga magar kam zarur kare ga..hum ek jaal bichaye ge uske liye.
SUDHIR LAL : kaisa jaal
APURVA : dekhiye isbar bhi main usse pyar ka natak karu gi aur isbar mujhe ziyada mehnat bhi nhi karni padigi mujhe bas ROCKY ko apne pyar ka ehsas dilana hai bas.
SUDHIR LAL : aur aap ye karo gi kaise
APURVA : usse pata hai main londan ki nhi india ki hun londan scholarship pe padine gai thi..aur indai me meri mom ke wala mera koi nhi..fir usse batana pade ga ke kaise main bachi us car accident se jo bridge se giri thi usse. Uske bad kaise meri maa ne apna sab kuch luta diya meri jaan bachane ke liye..aur jab main kuch theek hui to wo mujhe india leke wapas agai aur 6 month pehle hi meri maa ki maut ho gai aur main akele hun ab..aur thoda bahut emotion derama bas fir ek acha sa mauka dekh laga dege usse thikane...jaise pehle kiye the magar isbar thoda alag tarike bas…isbar hum uski sari daulat bhi apne sath le jaye ge itna bada MEPIRE hai. uske jane ke bad koi to chahiye usse sambhalne wala aur mere pass ek banda bhi hai usi ki family me jo humme support bhi kare ga is kam me wo kya hai na bechara ek to lalchi hai aur upar se hamare qarz me bhi hai magar wo second padao me kam aye ga apne..
SUDHIR LAL : hmm plan to theek hai..
APURVA : aap bas waisa karo jaisa main bolti hun baki mujhpe chhod do..
Baki agge ka conversation is update me hai(UPDATE-41)..
Uske bad SUDHIR LAL aur APURVA ne milke sari taiyari karli…unhone sab set kar liya bas ab plan execut karna tha ke APURVA ko uske PAPA ka phone agaya..(yaad hai UPDATE-47 me APURVA ke papa ne MADHU(MAA) ko marne aur YASH ko zinda bola tha..to APURVA ki apne papa se kya baat hui wo jante hai)
IN PHONE:
APURVA : ji papa
SANJAY S : beta apne plan me ek change hai
APURVA : wo kya papa
SANJAY S : humme MADHU RAJPUT ko marna hai aur YASH ko zinda pakadna hai
APURVA : magar papa MADHU RAJPUT ko kyun
SANJAY S : beta aisa q hai wo main apko baad me batao ga jab hum mile ge..aur han YASH ki team me ek mera banda hai wo bhi ab humare plan me shamil hai..
APURVA : theek hai papa
Iske bad ka jo secne hai wo (UPDATE-47) me kaise APURVA ko JARVIS ke bare me pata chala aur SANJAY ne ABHY ke zariya bataya ke wo JARVIS ko kaise band kar sakte hai..
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Umeed hai Update Pasand Aye...
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First...the battle scene....
I think the battle scene is a little inspired from....THE HOBBIT- BATTLE OF THE FIVE ARMIES.....
But I like the way.....you describe the hole phenomena......was awesome......
Like I'm watching a big war movie.....and the hole scenario in front of my eyes....very beautifully presented......
Secondly......
YASH and SINGHANIA scene was also pretty good.....suspence and planing....
But disappointing.....
In my point of view.......
You're giving every character a very strong background and very strong appearance.....with stuff things like EATHER....infinity stones and of course JARVIS......which are very high level contents.....
In that kind of level of a story......LOVE ,HATE ,ACT OF LOVE AND CHEATING IN LOVE AND BETRAYAL......types stuff....looks very low level type......
I mean A man handling JARVIS..with self army (team)....and one of world's top billionaire.....he easily entraps in a girl's false love..... who almost killed him....
Means a person like him.....easily get tricked.....for some false love type Bullshit.....????????.......
I did not understand that........
Other then this ......
FANTASTIC update
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