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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

STORY AAP KO KAISI LAG RAHI HAI

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Vikram singh rana

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SANJAY S bolte huwe chup huwa.

YASH ki anakhon se anso nikal rahe the…

Tabhi kuch aisa huwa jiski waha maujood kissi ne kalpana bhi nhi ki thi….



AB AGGE:

SCENE NEHA, VEER & RIA THODA PICHE(TIME 06:55 PM):

NEHA, VEER & RIA us room me pahunch gaya jahan JARVIS ne inhe jane ko kaha tha..teeno wahan pahunch ke JARVIS ke diye gaye map ko tab pe dekh rahe the ye teeno jis room me the us room ke gate ke bahar do guards khade the left right pe aur ek bada sa ground type tha kahin gadi khadi thi to kahin kuch box rakhe huwe the aur upar ke dono floor ki gallery pe bhi gurads ghum rahe the..

MAP dekh ke

VEER : ye to puri fauj hai yahan

RIA : kya kare ab

VEER : dekho main dono ko uda dunga aur mere piche aap dono ana main sidha bado ga aur aap dono left right ho jana magar problem ye hai ye hum niche walon ko to mar sakte hai magar jo guards upar hai unka kya kare.

JARVIS : upar ke guards ki fikar mat karo unka kam ho jaye ga

RIA : matlab

JARVIS : waqt ate hi samjh jao ge aap log. Han magar bahar bahut golion ka samna karna pade ga. Q k bahut sare hai.

VEER : hmmm

JARVIS : Aap log bas taiyar raho boss ke signal ke intezar me hai..

VEER : theek hai.

Kuch deer bad teeno ke earphone me YASH aur SANJAY S ki sari conversation sunai de rahi thi…

Jaise2 sab pata chal raha tha in teeno ki halat bhi kharad ho rahi thi..

Yahan NEHA ko YASH aur APURVA ke bare me pata chala kaise APURVA pehle YASH se jhute pyar ka natak kiya aur usse dhoke se marwa diya tha..

NEHA : gusse se maan me, ye apne theek nhi kiya PRINCE jo mujhse itni badi baat chupai. Ye sab ho jane gijiye fir apse nipatti hun main.

Fir NEHA ko apne MAUSA ke karname pata chale kaise usne paise ke liye apni family ko dhoka diya..aur YASH ke sath jo kuch bhi ho raha uske piche uska bhi kuch had tak ke hath hai agar wo JARVIS ko band karne me SANJAY S ki madad nhi karta to aaj YASH uske hath itni asani se nhi lagta.

NEHA : gusse se maan me, SAURABH M bas tu mil fir dekh main tere sath kya karti hun.

NEHA ki anakhen gusse se lal ho rahi thi.ye dono incedent ke bare me jan ke.

VEER aur RIA ko isse koi pharak nhi pada..magar jab unhe ABHY ke bare me pata chala to usse sunke unhe bhi bahut gussa aya ke unka ek bahut acha dost ab is duniya me nhi raha..

Teeno ab gusse se bahar gaye the..

NEHA : gusse se, VEER aur RIA kya tumhe APURVA ke bare me sab pata tha ke wo aur PRINCE ek dosre se pyar karte the aur APURVA ne YASH ko dhoka diya hai.

VEER & RIA : ji mam

VEER : sirf itna pata tha ke wo pyar karte the magar ye pata nhi tha ke APURVA ne YASH ko dhoka diya hai.

NEHA : kya YASH ko aaj se pehle pata tha ke wo zinda hai.

VEER : pata nhi MAM isbare me mujhse kabhi baat nhi hui YASH se.

NEHA : ABHY ka sunke bura laga sorry.

RIA : nam anakhon se, its ok MAM jung me to hota raheta hai bas dokh is baat ka hai wo aise mara gaya.

NEHA : mujhse ab ye sab bardasht nhi ho raha hai…wahan andar YASH ke sath ye sab ho raha hai aur hum yahan baithe hai.

NEHA apne andar ki feeling ko jo wo YASH se gussa hai usse dabake baat kar rahi thi..q k andar uski PRINCE ki jaan khatre me thi aur wo kuch kar nhi pa rahi thi.

RIA : aur abhi kuch kar bhi nhi sakte q k JARVIS ne yahan rukne ko kaha hai.

VEER : aur agar JARVIS ne kaha hai to usse YASH ne hi aisa karne ko kaha hoga. Kya pata uska plan kya hai.

NEHA : magar wo to andar hai aur wo jo SANJAY S hai wo usse torture bhi kar raha hai kahin aisa na ho ke bahut deer ho jaye.

Tabhi JARVIS ki awaz ai aur YASH jahan tha wahan se gun silencer aur halke dhamake ki awaz ai.

JARVIS : go



SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (PRESENT TIME 09:20 PM):

YASH niche mundi kar ke ro raha tha..apne dost ke bare me sunke.

SANJAY S : haste huwe, are ROCKY rota bhi hai tum inte kamzor to nhi the ROCKY.

Tabhi YASH hasne lagt hai aur haste huwe apna chera upar uthata hai..

YASH : bahut badiya SANJAY S bahut badiya..

SANJAY S : confuse hoke, kya matlab hai tumhara aur aise has q rahe ho.

YASH : hason nhi to aur kya karon.

SANJAY S : matlab

SANJAY S ne bas itna hi bola tha ke 4 goli chali pehle aur badme 6 halke dhamake huwe aur 7 goli chali to jante hai pehli 4 goli kisse lagi.

Ek lagi BASE INCHARGE ko uske sar ke par ho gai aur teen lagi HARISH ko do hath pe aur ek pair pe. Aur fir jo wahan 7 guards the unpe bhi lagatar golian chali.

Ab ye goli kisne chalai yaad hai wo do gurads ladka aur ladki ye golian un dono ne hi chali thi.

Ab huwa ye ke jaise hi YASH ne haste huwe apna sar upar kiya tabhi LADKI ne B INC ke sar pe goli mari aur apne dusre hath me pakde device ka button dabaya jisse huwa ye ke 6 guards jo the unke uniform me laga ek neno bomb phata jiske chalte wo 6 ek halke dhamake se mare gaye aur wo ladki ye karne ke bad turant palat ke niche gulati khati hui uske piche jo teen gurads khade the unki taraf badi pehle wale ke pair pe goli mari jaise hi wo niche huwa dosri goli uske sar pe aur turant khadi hoke usne baki ke do pe goli chalai dono gaye kam se.

LADKE HARISH pe teen goli chalne ke bad bache char ki taraf bada ek ke sar pe dosre ke dil pe tesre ke sene pe aur chauthe ke sar pe goli chali.

Dhamake ke karan kissi ko kuch samjhe nhi aya ke huwa kya hai aur koi kuch samjh pata us pehle hall me srif char log hi bache the.

Ye sab jaise hi shuru huwa tabhi JARVIS ne bola tha NEHA, VEER aur RIA ko go.

JARVIS ki taraf se green signal milte hi VEER turant gate khulke bahar aya aur apne dono hath cross kar ke jo do guards left right khade the unke sar pe goli mar di.

VEER ke piche se RIA left side ho gai aur NEHA right side ho gai. Tabhi jo guards upar ke dono floor pe the unke bhi suit me lage neno bomb blast huwe.

Pure base me alarm bajne lage CCR me bhi dhamaka huwa jisse wahan maujud guards aur kam karne wale mare gaye..aise hi dhamake jagha jagha hote rahe.aur uski chapet me log ate rahe lag2 room me JRAVIS ke kehne pe VEER ne wo exit entery pe lagaye bomb bhi uda diye.

NEHA ne wo spell firse boli..jisse wo thodi deer ke liye RAZEL ne badal gaye aur usne apni rafter se wahan maujood guards ko khatam karna shuru kar diya wo bina ruke guards pe goli chala rahe thi..uspe koi goli ka asar hi nhi ho raha tha.jahan VEER aur RIA bachte hui goli chala rahe the wahin NEHA bina ruke agge bad rahi thi jisse dekh VEER aur RIA bhi shock the.

VEER : ye MAM ko kya ho gaya itni rafter aur unhe koi goli bhi nhi lag rahi hai.

RIA jo ek box ke piche chup hui thi apni gun load karne jhuki hui thi.

RIA : shayad MAM me bhi koi power hai jaise YASH me hai.

VEER : kya matlab YASH me power hai.

RIA : SANJAY S jis EATHER ki baat kar raha hai wo YASH ki body me hai ye mujhe pata hai q k maine khud dekha tha us red apni ko uski body me jate huwe aur hona ho MAM ke pass bhi power hai q k jab bahar main uske pass ja rahi thi tabhi bhi unki anakhon se aise hi red kirne nikal rahi thi aur abhi bhi dekho.

VEER : ye sab chal kya raha hai.

RIA : wo sab bad me dekhte hai pehle inse to nipat le.

Itna bolke RIA halke se apna sar nikal ke dekhte hai to usse ek guard uski taraf hand grenade phekta huwa naraz ata hai. RIa turant apni jagha se teezi se chalang laga k eek turck pe piche chali jati hai aur ek dhamaka huwa bommmmb.

VEER : RIA RIA

RIA : han theek hun jaan sale ko abhi batati hun.

Itna bolke RIA ne apni dono talwar nikali aur teezi se us hand grenade phekne wale band ke pass pahunchi aur sidha uska sar alag kar diya.

Firse apni gun nikal ke ek peller ke adme chup gai. Usse koi 30 kadam pe VEER bhi ek peller ke piche khada tha.

Aur samne se lagtar golian chal rahi thi. Dosri taraf NEHA bhi ab kafi saron ko mar chuki thi aur wo thi dosri side ek peller ke piche chup gait hi..aur ab wo normal ho gai thi.

NEHA : maan me, itni jaldi kaise spell khatam ho gai aur mujhe kamzori bhi lag rahi hai aisa q ho raha hai

RAZEL : pata nhi yahan kuch to hai jo bahut taqatwar hai main samjh nhi pa rahi hun wo mujhe kamzor kar raha hai.

NEHA : magar kya kon hai wo

RAZEL : bahut ziyada kali shaktiyan mujhe yahan mehsos ho rahi hai agar hum ek hote to baat lag thi..

NEHA : matlab kya hai mere kuch samjh nhi araha hai.

RAZEL : dekho main aur tum ek hi hai magar abhi puri tarha nhi tumhari rooh mera adha hissa hai abhi main tumhare sharer me to hun magar apni adhi rooh se puri judi hui nhi hun.

NEHA : nhi samjhi kuch kya hadhi rooh meri hai aur adhi tumhari.

RAZEL : acha jane do agge tum khud hi samjh jao gi.

Tabhi ek hand grenade ake NEHA se samne gira wo apne maan me RAZEL se baat karne me lagi thi ke usse pata hi nhi chala tabhi uske kan me VEER ki awaz ai

VEER : MAM hatiye wahan se bomb bomb

NEHA ko jaise hi VEER ki baat samjh ai wo turant bina kuch soch apne left me khud gai jisse wo panch log jo NEHA pe golian chala rahe the. Unka bhi dhiyan NEHA pe gaya. Aur un sabne NEHA pe gun tandi aur bas trigger babaye the aur pancho ki gun se ek ek kar goli nikal ke NEHA ki taraf badi magar wo golian NEHA tak pahunchi usse pehle hi NEHA jahan giri thi NEHA ki peth un pancho ki taraf thi. NEHA ke piche kuch phasle pe ek mazboot diwar khadi ho gai aur puri golian us diwar pe lagi.

Ye dekh wahan maujood har koi sirf shock me tha even RIA aur VEER bhi. Kissi ko kuch samjh nhi araha tha ke abhi abhi huwa kya hai.

Diwar ke piche NEHA abhi bhi lete huwe thi ke usse apne kandhe pe kissi ka hath mehsos huwa NEHA ne apni anakhen kholi to usse apni jaan se bhi pyar uska PRINCE apne samne apne jhutno pe baitha huwa uske chere ko dekh muskura raha tha.

Jisse dekh NEHA turant baith ke uske gale lag gai kuch second bad NEHA turant alag hoke.

NEHA : aap yahan hai to andar SANJAY S kisse torture kar raha hai.

YASH : abhi thodi deer me pata chal jaye ga pehle inse to nipat le.

NEHA : han

Itna bolke NEHA aur YASH khade ho jate hai.aur YASH NEHA ko do gun deta hai aur bolta hai

YASH : mere piche hi rehna aap.

NEHA jo ab sambhal chuki thi aur apne pure attitude me agai thi.

NEHA : abhi to ye sab khatam kare pehle apko to bad ne dekhti hun.

Itna bolke NEHA turant bina YASH ki taraf dekhe sidha fire karte huwe agge nikal jati hai.

YASH : VEER & RIA se, doston task complete karne ka waqt ho gaya hai. Aur jo kuch bhi hai wo sab bad me pehle sabko khatam karte hai.

VEER & RIA : han theek hai.

VEER aur RIA bhi lag jate hai firse goli chalane me NEHA bhi ab chupte huwe golian chala rahi thi.

Aur YASH apne charon tatva ka istemal karke guards ko marne me laga huwa tha kabhi aag abhi pani to kabhi hawa to kabhi mithi.

YASH agge bad raha tha ke usse 10 guards dekhe jo uspe hi fire karne wale the to YASH ne turant apne dono hath dhumaya aur ek pair ko zamin pe marke jisse wo jo 10 guards khade the inke pairon ke niche se das badi chantane nikli aur dason ko usne waha me uchal diya aur jo YASH ne apna hath ghumaya tha usse hawa bani aur wo das jaise hi hawa me huwe YASH ke hath se nikli hui hawa in dason ko uda le gai aur dur zamin pe le jake de mara.

Har taraf sirf ab lash hi lash hi aur NEHA, VEER aur RIA bas shock se sab dekh rahe the.

YASH hawa me hoke sab kuch badi asani se kar raha tha tabhi YASH ka dhiyan hata aur ek hand grenade uske just samne ake phata..jisse dekh NEHA, VEER aur RIA ki muh se ek sath nikla YASH. Magar ye kya us hand grenade ke dhamake se jo aag nikli thi wo waise ki waise hi hai aur dekhte hi dekhte woe k gole ki shakal me hoti ja rahi hai aur uska akar bhi badte ja raha hai aur wo aag ka gola badi teezi se apni jagha peg hum raha hai.

Tabhi NEHA, VEER aur RIA jahan khade the un teeno ko ek badi chattan ne gher liya aur wo charon taraf se full pack ho gai. Ye YASH ne kiya tha. Q k ab game khatam karne ka waqt ho gaya tha.

Jaise hi NEHA, VEER aur RIA safe huwe YASH ne us gole go sidha niche zamin pe de mara..

Gola jaise hi zamin se takraya us aag ke gole me se bahut se lapten nikli aur wahan maujood guards ko kissi goli ki tarha lagi YASH bas hawa me apne dono hath phelaye showly2 ghum raha tha.

Aur niche guards ki chinkhne awazen arahi thi. Ye koi 5 mint tak chalte raha jaise hi chinkhne ana band hui YASH bhi dhire2 niche ane laga magar abhi bhi uski anakhen band thi aur jaise hi uske pair zamin pe lage uski anakhen khul gai aur sath me NEHA, VEER aur RIA bhi us chattan se bahar agaye.

Teeno apne anakhen pade kabhi ye nazara dekhte to kabhi YASH ko abhi ye teeno shock me hi the ke ek dam se us building me jahan SANJAY S tha uske main gate pe dhamaka huwa…

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CHALIYE JANTE HAI SANJAY S KE SATH KYA HUWA BAS THODA PICHE:

Dhamake ke karan kissi ko kuch samjhe nhi aya ke huwa kya hai aur koi kuch samjh pata us pehle hall me srif char log hi bache the.

SANJAY S bas shock me YASH ko dekh raha tha aur jo huwa uske bare me soch raha tha. Aur wo LADKI aur LADKA tab tak YASH ko khol chuke the.

YASH : kya huwa SANJAY S shock laga kya.

YASH ke puchne se SANJAY S hosh me aya.

SANJAY S : ye sab kaise kiya tumne ROCKY

YASH : muskura ke, ROCKY nhi VISHAL

SANJAY S : VISHAL magar tum to

VISHAL : bat kat ke, jaise tumne ABHY ki jagha HARISH ko di aise hi YSAH ne apni jagha mujhe di.

Itna bolke VISHAL ne apne chere se YASH ka nikli mask nikala.

VISHAL : ab yakin aya tumhe.

SANJAY S : aur ye dono kon hai.

LADKI : apna mask nikal ke, main hun SIMI phechana

LADKA : apna mask nikal ke, main hun ABHY

SANJAY S : shock me, ye nhi ho sakta tumhe to mar diya tha.

ABHY : jisse tumne mara wo main nhi tha Mr. SANJAY S

Itna bolke ABHY HARISH ki taraf bada aur usse utha ke usse chair pe baitha diya HARISH bhi shock me ABHY ko dekh raha tha.

HARISH : dard se, tum kaiseeeeeeeeee

ABHY : shock lagana main chahata to jabhi tujhe mar deta magar mujhe tera ye shocking face dekhna tha..magar ye kaise huwa ye main tujhe nhi batao ga isliye chal to shock me hi mar.

Itna bolke ABHY ne sidha goli uske sar ke par kardi.

SANJAY S : tum sab yahan ho to YASH kahan hai.

VISHAL : wo bhi yahan hai.

SANJAY S : tum sab yahan kaise aye aur tumhe yahan ke bare me kaise pata chala.

VISHAL : wo sab sirf ek bande ko pata hai aur wo hai YASH.

SANJAY S : gusse se, tum sab jante nhi ke tumne kisse panga liya hai.

ABHY : waise bhi janke panga lena humme nhi ata.

SIMI : humme to bas panga lena ata hai.

SANJAY S kuch nhi bola bas teeno ko gusse se dekh raha tha..kuch deer dekhne ke bad SANJAY S ne niche dekhna shuru kiya aur jab uske apni mundi upar uthai to VISHAL, ABHY aur SIMI to full to shock ho gaye.

Is waqt SANJAY S ki anakhen angare barsa rahi thi aur uske chere pe full to gussa tha.

SANJAY S : gusse se, bachon tumne ek insan se nhi balk eek saitan se panga liya hai aur jante ho jab saitan ko gussa ata hai to wo kya karta hai. Ye karta hai.

Itan bolke SANJAY S ne apna ek hath teeno ki taraf kiya jisse teeno udte huwe jake diwar se takraye aur dhadam se niche gire. Teeno ko bahut zor se lagi thi aur teeno niche gire huwe SANJAY S ko dekh rahe the. Wo apni chair se uth ke usne taraf bada aur firse apne hath unke taraf kiya jisse teeno hawa me hone lag eek had tak lane ke bad SANJAY S ne unhe firse apne left ki diwar pe de mara aise hi wo kabhi right to kabhi left pe teeno ko hawa me pakde bas mar hi raha tha.

Teeno ki halat ab theek nhi thi unke muh se khoon nikal raha tha.fir ek kahiri bar teeno ko ek diwar se marke SANJAY S ne unhe niche pathak diya.

Aur apne phone se kissi ko call kiya.

SANJAY S : ab waqt ho gaya hai akhiri chal chalne ka.

SAMNE SE : theek hai.

Uske bad SANJAY S ne teeno ko firse hawa me uthaya aur jisse teeno uske agge agge hawa me the aur unke piche SANJAY S chal raha tha.

Jaise hi build ke main gate pe pahuncha uske apne right hand se ek agg ka gola bana ke gate pe mara aur ek dhamake ke sath wo gate ud gaya.

Ye wohi dhamaka tha jo huwa tha.

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IN PRESENT TIME (10:15 PM)

YASH ke sath NEHA, VEER aur RIA ki nazar bhi gate ki taraf padi aur dekha ke VISHAL, SIMI aur ABHY hawa me hai aur unke piche SANJAY S araha hai.

Ye charon bhi uski taraf bade NEHA, VEER aur RIa ne apni gun uspe tandi YASH ke right side NEHA khadi thi aur left side VEER aur RIA khade the.

SANJAY S ne VISHAL, SIMI aur ABHY ko YASH ki taraf phenka unke girte hi RIA turant teeno ke pass pahunchi aur teeno ko check kiya.

MAIN : gusse se, ye tumne theek nhi kiya SANJAY S

SANJAY S : tumne mere samne koi rasta hi chhuda

MAIN : RIA se, teeno theek hai.

RIA : sanse chal rahi hai.

SANJAY S : mujhe se, unhe kuch nhi hoga agar tum mujhe EATHER de do.

MAIN : wo to milne se raha tumhe

SANJAY S : chalo fir to inke pass sirf 1 hr hai uske bad ye nhi bache ge.

MAIN : wo to waqt hi bataye ga.

Itna bolke MAIN ne SANJAY S pe hamla kar diya MAIN ne aag ka ek gola uski taraf phenka..

SANJAY S apni jagha se hala tak nhi aur jaise hi wo gola uske pass pahuncha wo hawa me hi gayab ho gaya.

SANJAY S : acha to wo log sahi the ke tumhare andar bhi kuch power hai..magar mere samne kuch bhi nhi.

MAIN : ye to abhi shuru howa hai

Itna bolke MAINE apne dono hath ghumana shuru kiye aur mere charon taraf aag pani hawa aur mithi gole gole ghumne lage.

Aur MAINE apna ek hath agge kiya jisse ek badi pani ki lehar sidha SANJAY S ki taraf badi magar wo side ho gaya magar jaise hi wo side huwa maine apna pair zamin pe mara aur jahan SANJAY S khada tha uski pair ke niche se ek badi chattan nikli..jisse wo hawa me ho gaya.magar ye kya wo to hawa me khada muskura raha hai.

SANJAY S : bas itna hi

Itna bolke wo hawa se sidha meri taraf bada main hawa se uspe war karta raha magar usse isse koi farak nhi pada aur wo mere pass udte huwe mere sene pe ek bahut zordar punch de mara aur udta huwaaaaaa piche ja ke gira

NEHA dekh ke mere pass ane ko hui to SANJAY S ne apna hath un sabki taraf kiya aur jaise un sab ki charon taraf ek shield ban gaye jisse wo bahar na nikle.

MAIN niche gira aur turant khada huwa aur main bhi SANJAY S ki taraf bada apni puri tafrat se magar ye kya.

Jaise hi main uske pass pahuncha wo side ho gaya aur mujhe side se mere peth pe ek kick laga di jitni teezi se main uski taraf bada utni hi teezi se main udta huwa aur dur jake gira aur girte hi mere muh se khoon nikla.

Magar main turant firse khada huwa aur apne hath se apne muh pe aya khoon saf kiya aur firse SANJAY S ki tarf bada aur sath me apne charon tatva ka istemal bhi karta raha isse marne ke liye magar wo har bar bachte gaya aur main uske pass pahunch gaya aur uske muh pe punch marne ko huwa to usne mera punch apne ek hath se ruk liya.

Aur mere hath ko pakde hi mujhe ek jabardasht kick mari magar mera hath nhi chhoda aur main wahin niche gira mera hath abhi bhi uske hath me tha usne mujhe firse utha to maine apne dusre hath se use punch marna chaha to usne mera dosra hath bhi pakad liya..aur firse mujhe ek kick laga di sidha mere sene pe.

Aur udta huwa firse piche jake gira.

Ye dekh mere dost aur NEHA sirf chilla rahe the. Aur NEHA ke to anso hi band nhi ho rahe the.

NEHA : maan me, RAZEL do humme PRINCE har rahe hai..please ab to meri madad karo

RAZEL : nhi kar sakti uske andar bahut kali shaktiyan hai agar main tumse fir judi to hum dono hi khatam ho jaye ge.

NEHA : to kya hum aise hi PRINCE ko mare chhode.

RAZEL : nhi wo mar nhi sakte han zakhmi ho sakte hai magar mar nhi sakte.

Itne me SANJAY S ne NEHA ki taraf dekha jisse uske chere ko ya uske maan ko padne ki kosish kar raha ho.

SANJAY S : maan me, ajeeb baat hai us ladki me pata nhi kya magar kuch to hai..aur sath me is YASH me bhi..pehle kabhi aisa kuch mehsos nhi kiya magar aaj pata nhi q mujhe ye dono kuch alag lag rahe hai aur mere andar ki kali shakiyan bhi bahut badi hui lag rahi hai magar kaise.

Isse ki apni soch me aur maan me baat karte huwe SANJAY S mujhe mare jar aha tha. Hum dono lag bhag 45 mint tak ladte rahe aur meri halat theek nhi thi aur shayad SANJAY S bhi thak gaya tha mujhe ladte ladte magar main har bar khad ho jata tha usne mujhe akhiri bar firse ache se mara aur mujhe leja ke ek box pe baitha diya aur khud bhi ek box pe baith gaya.

SANJAY S : han to ab har mante ho ROCKY

MAIN : kabhi nhi.

SANJAY S : hmmm chalo tum shayad apne doston ki nhi magar apni MAA ki to parwah karte ho ge.

Itna bolke SANJAY S ne mujhe ek taraf ishara kiya.jab maine us taraf dekha to main shock ho gaya.

Wahan se APURVA, MADHU(MAA) aur char log kale kapdon me humari taraf arahe the aur unke piche koi 10 guards.

Mujhe shock me dekh ke

SANJAY S : aaj ka din hum dono ke liye bada shocking raha hai kabhi main tumhe shock deta hun to kabhi tum mujhe q hai na

MAIN : han

Tabhi wo log humare pass agaye…

APURVA : mere pass ake mujhse gale lagi, baby tum theek to ho na. tum mujhe dekh shock me lag rahe ho

MAIN : han shock zarur huwa magar tumhe dekhke nhi balke MAA ko dekhke.

APURVA : ohh baby maine tumhe dekha humare admion ko marte huwe.

MAIN : to kaisa laga unhe marta dekh tumhe q k ye to tumhari pehle se adat hai hai..

APURVA : han adat to hai magar mujhe marte huwe logon ko dekhne se ziyada unhe marne me maza ata hai.

MAIN : han magar peth piche se q sahi kaha na maine jaise meri peth piche war kiya tha.

APURVA : shock me, tumhe kaise pata ye.

MAIN : muskura ke, tum abhi mere bare me janti hi kahan ho janeman.

APURVA : PAPA isse mar do ab

SANJAY S : beta isse dekh rahi ho isse main 45 mint se mar raha hun magar iske zakham turant bharte ja raha hai aur waise bhi isse marna nhi hai EATHER liye bager.

APURVA : to ab kya kare.

SANJAY S : karna kya hai pehle ye to jane ki isne ye sab kiya kaise hai itna bada plan wo bhi humse 2 kadam agge kaise banaya.

APURVA : PAPA jaise bhi kiya ho isne wo jane dete hai hum.


AAJ PURI UNIVERSE NE NHI SOCHA THA KE WO UNHE FIRSE DEKHNE KO MILE GA JO KAI SADON SE KHO GAYA THA

SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA to be cont....

DOSTON BACHE HUWE COMMENT KA REPLY KAL DETA HUN

Umeed hai Update Pasand Aye...
Keep Supporting, Thanks and Regards
rnarock
Yessss.......
Mujhe lag hee raha tha kuch to missing hai.......

OR wo missing chij baaki ke 2 agents the......
Full on rock......good action sequences.....
Best part was.....neha's sequence....damm good......

And the fight between sanjay and YASH was also awesome......totally justified......because.......

Ho sakta hai ki kuch logo ko ye fight pasand na aayi ho...kyoki hero pit raha hai....but I like it......

SANJAY ke pass black magic he.....Jo ki obviously YASH ki HAWA....PAANI.....AAG.....DHARTI.....OR AKASH......waale magic se jyada powerful hai......halanki YASH ke pass EATHER he lekin EATHER ke powers ke baare ke baare me na aapne jyada bataya hai.....na hee MARVEL films me.......

Ye to sab jaante hai....Ki wo ak distraction element hai.....lekin uska use kya hai ya kese karna he kanhi nahi bataya gaya hai.....

MADHU ko last me sanjay ne as a shield use kiya.....Jo ki thik nahi he....
Lekin koi na.....
MADHU ka wo bodyguard.....I forgot his name....
Wo bhi baaki he jo gss blast se bach gaya tha.....
Dekhte hai wo kya karta hai or YASH kya karta hai.....

Overall fantastic update.....
Thanks....
 
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