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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

STORY AAP KO KAISI LAG RAHI HAI

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Bro , abhi end mat krna story kaa , war complete kr doa kyu ki abhi toa bhut se raaz baaki hai ki uske bachpan mein kya kyaa huaa , aur abhi toa neha ke saath , bhut romance baaki hai , aur asli maa baap bhi uske hehehe
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DOSTON UPDATE 3:00PM KO AYE GA
ABHI BHI LIKH RAHA HUN

JO ADHA HI HUWA HAI LEKHKE MAGAR FIKAR NOT DIYE HUWE TIME PURA UPDATE DENE KI KOSISH KAROGA
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AGAR PURA NHI BHI HUWA TO JITNA BHI HOGA UTNA POST KAR DOGA AUR BAKI BADME COMPLETE KARTE.

SORRY FOR DOSTO ITANA INTEZAR KARANE KE LIYE

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Bhai abhi se story ka end mat karna plzzzzz


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Yrr Avi end kaise hoga ..Avi to bahut SE Raj baki hai..Yash or Neha ka flachback v aana hai..eshant ki mot kaise hua ..bahut se suspense Bhai .abi to story sahi Maine Mai suru Hui hai..
 
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UPDATE-80
PART-1 OF WAR BETWEEN
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SANJAY SINGHANIA Vs YASH) and (TUFO Vs EVLES & PHOENIX OF PRINCE)
Recp.

MAIN : Ab aya wo pal jiska mujhe kabse intezar tha aur wo tha tumhare base ki location pata karna. Magar mujhe ek to free me mil gaya CANADA wala magar hum wahan pahunche usse pehle hi tum usse khatam kar chuke the aur bache do to unme se ek tumne firse meri jholi me de diya mere ghar me wo device fit kar ke.

AB AGGE

SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (PRESENT TIME 12:20 PM):

FLASHBACK5:

(UPDATE-53) YASH KE BIRTHDAY PARTY KE BAD JAB YASH SONE CHALA GAYA THA.

MAIN apne room me pahunch ke fresh hoke light band karke sone ki taiyari kar hi raha tha ke JARVIS ki awaz ai

JARVIS : sir mafi chahunga disturb karne ke liye.

MAIN : kya baat hai JARVIS

JARVIS : sir apko ye dekhna chahiye ake.

MAIN : theek hai JARVIs ata hun

Main uthe ke sabse pehle room ka door check kiya usse ache se band kiya aur sari light off karke apne secret room se hote huwe apne base wale ghar2 me chala gaya aur wahan ke ek room me jahan badi si screen thi wahan pahunche ke.

MAIN : han to batao kya baat hai JARVIS.

JARVIs : sir system ek unknown device detect kar raha hai ghar ke chat pe jo chilling camber usme hai.

MAIN : kya magar wo wahan kaise aya. kya tumne sab achi se check kiya.

JARVIS : han sir chilling camber ke pass lage camera ne us sakhs ki video li hai jisne wo device camber me dala hai.

MAIN : dekhao mujhe.

Fir JARVIs ne mujhe dono video dekhai jisse dekh mujhe bada wala shock laga

MAIN : ye to mere mausa ji magar wo ye device wahan q rakhe ge aur baat kisse kar rahe hai.

JARVIS : iska bhi jawab hai mere paas sorry apki permission ki bina hi maine unki sari jankari nikali hai aur wo baat NAKLI ABHY se kar rahe hai.

MAIN : theek hai dekho mujhe sab unka kuch to plan chal raha hai.

JARVIS ne firse screen pe SAURABH MEHTA ki puri detail mujhe dekhai jisse dekh mujhe kuch kuch samjh araha tha ye kam SANJAY S ka hi tha ho sakta hai usne mausa ji ko blackmail kiya ho ya marne ki dhamki di ya fir baat kuch aur ho sakti hai wo unke sath mile huwe ho.

MAIN : JARVIS ABHY ko SAURABH Mausa ji picture send karo

fir maine ABHY ko call kiya.

ABHY : main abhi bas tumhe call karne hi wala tha aaj mujhe badi info milli hai apka koi relative aaj APURVA se mila tha aur wo log kuch bada plan karne wale hai apko barbad karne ke liye.

MAIN : ek picture bheji hai dekh ke batao ke kya ye banda hi APURVA se mila tha aaj.

ABHY : theek hai dekh ke batata hun

ABHY call ko hold pe dalke meri bheji gai picture dekhta hai uske bad.

ABHY : han yehi the aaj sham 5 baje ke as pas jab main APURVA pe nazar rakh raha tha tabhi ye dono ko hotel ke restaurant me dekha tha (UPDATE - 77) ye to apke relative hai unki baat se pata chala mujhe. Fir ABHY ne APURVA aur SAURABH M ki sari conversation mujhe batai.

ABHY ki puri baat sunne ke bad

MAIN : maan me, ye aap ne theek nhi kiya mausa ji sirf paison ke liye ye sab kiya apne

Tabhi ABHY ki phone pe hello hello ki awaz arahi thi

MAIN : han

ABHY : kya sochne lage. Ek mint ek mint unhone aaj zarur kuch kiya hai. Hai na

MAIN : han kiya hai, unhone pure ghar ko khatre me dal diya hai unhe main chhodne wala nhi ye sab nipat jaye uske bad itmenan se unhe dekho ga. kya unke conversation ki recording hai.

ABHY : han hai puri video recording hai

MAIN : theek hai uski ek copy apne pass hi rakho aur ek mujhe send karo. Baki agge ka badme baat karte hai.

ABHY : theek hai

ABHY ne mujhe wo video send ki jisse maine apne JARVIS ke mainframe me save kar di.

MAIN : JARVIS SAURABH M ka jitna bhi online data hai aur sath me jo video hai usse apne private drive me save karke rakho.

JARVIS : theek hai sir magar us device ka kya karna hai.

MAIN : kuch soch ke, JARVIS kya hum is device se ye pata kar sakte hai ke isse kahan se command kiya ja raha hai.

JARVIS : sir maine pata kiya hai magar abhi ye connect nhi hai magar jaise hi connect hota hai main pata kar sakta hun.

MAIN : kya isse tumhe koi khatra hai.

JARVIS : wo to jab ye start hoga tabhi pata lage ga sir.

MAIN : mujhe lagta hai tumhe jarur khatra hoga usme kuch to hai jo tumhe nuksan pahuncha sakta hai warna mainframe ke chilling camber me wo device nhi rakhte aur agar tumhe kuch ho gaya to samjho humara 60% nuksan ho ga communication ka isliye mujhe lagta hai usme jarur koi virus ya aisi chiz hai jo tumhe nuksan ya khatam kar sakti hai

JARVIS : hai apki baat sahi hai sir mujhe kuch huwa to ghar ke sath sath humri sari secret base aur communication band ho gaye ge.

MAIN : isliye agar tumhe isse khatra huwa to tumhe pata hai kya karna hai q k isbar hum koi bhi chance nhi lege humme SANJAY S se agge hi rehna hai.

JARVIS : ji sir samjh gaya.

Fir main wahan se nikal ye hi sab sochte huwe so gaya.

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Waqt apni rafter se guzar raha tha aur main bas apne plan ke bare me soch raha tha ke kya karna hai abhi tak meri team ko ABHY ke bare me nhi pata tha wo sab to NAKLI ABHY(HARISH) ko asli hi samjh rahe the main SANJAY S ke plan ko samjhne aur apne plan ko uske mutabik plan karne me laga huwa tha.

Aur sath me mujhe us device ko kahan se control kiya ja raha hai uski location milne ki intezar me tha.

Tabhi mujhe ek din phone aye.

(UPDATE-60) jisme APURVA USA wapas jati hai. Aur main hospital se ghar ajata hun.

MAA ne mujhe room se bahar jane se sakt mana kiya tha to main room me hi tha bed pe aram karte huwe ke mera phone bajne laga.

ABHY ka call tha

MAIN : han bolo kya info hai

ABHY : APURVA wapas ja rahi hai.

MAIN : kya marag q aur kis liye.

ABHY : ab ye to pata nhi kis liye magar wo ja rahi hai bas itna hi pata laga hai mujhe.

MAIN : theek hai tum ab NAKLI ABHY pe nazar rakho dekho wo kya karta hai aur sath me SUDHIR LAL pe bhi.

ABHY : theek hai aur han ek aur baat maine aaj veer ko bhi dekha tha.

MAIN : kya wo wahan kaise

ABHY : pata nhi magar wo wahan tha

MAIN : chalo koi baat nhi tum bas kissi ki nazar me mat ana

ABHY : theek hai.

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(UPDATE – 64) PRESENT TIME ME JAB YASH SOKE UTHA USSE KE EK DIN PEHLE WALI RAAT

Dinner ke bad main apne room me aya aur VEER ko call kar ke usse aur baki team ko ane kal bola koi 1 hr ke bad JARVIS ne bataya ke sab agaye hai.

maine room ke door ko lock kar apne secret room se hote huwe apne ghar2 ke basement me chala gaya jahan VEER, RIA, VISHAL aur SIMI is waqt baithe the…jaye se hi sabki narzar mujhe pe padi sab mujhe bahut gusse se dekh rahe the main samjh gaya ke kuch to gadbar hai magar main normal hi raha aur jake ek chair pe baith gaya…

RIA : pure gusse se, ye sab chal kya raha hai aur tumhe pata tha ke APURVA zinda hai aur ABHY unke sath mil gaya hai.

MAIN : tum logon ko ye sab kaise malum pada.

VEER : maine dono ko dekha tha airport pe …(UPDATE-60 me APURVA wale part me jo unhe apni durbin se dekhta hai wo VEER tha.)

MAIN : to tumne mujhe bataya q nhi.

VEER : socha pehle main khud dekh leta hun aur fir maine SIMI ko ABHY(NAKLI) pe nazar rakhne ko kaha (UPDATE - 64) aaj agar tum phone nhi karte to main khud tumhe phone karke ye batane wala tha q k yahan bahut gadbar chal rahi hai kuch samjh nhi araha hai

MAIN : matlab

VEER : SUDHIR LAL ne SANJAY S se gaddari ki hai aur ABHY(NAKLI) ko kidnap kar liya hai. Kuch samjh nhi araha hai chal kya raha hai ye sab.

(jo baat veer ne batai wo mujhe pehle hi ABHY ne bata diya tha.)

RIA : wa sab bad me pehle jo maine pucha tha uske bare me batao

MAIN : han mujhe APURVA ke zinda hone wali baat humare Nairobi ke mission se hi pata hai.

Fir maine unhe sab bata diya jo mujhe wahan APURVA aur SANJAY S ke bare me pata chala tha.

Jisse sunke

RIA : fir gusse se, tum nhi sudharne wale baby ye tum hume kab batane wale the..ki Sali dhokebaz hai aur zinda bhi hai. Aur ye sala ABHY unke sath kab mil gaya.

MAIN : dekho humme ye pehle hi pata tha ke SANJAY S kuch kare ga mere zinda hone ka sunke aur usne apni chal chalna shur bhi kar diya ABHY aur mere MAUSA JI ko apne sath mila ke

Sab ek sath : shock me, kya tumhare mausa ji

MAIN : han

fir maine JARVIS ko SAURABH M ki sari info aur video dekhane ka kaha aur sath me us device ke bare me bhi.

VEER : aur ABHY ke bare me kab pata chala.

MAIN : ussi raat jab mujhe mera mausa ji ke bare me pata chala.

Fir maine JARVIS ko ABHY(NAKLI) ke phone pe mera mausa ji ka number aur baat ka time same jaisa video me tha ke SAURABH M aur ABHY(NAKLI) baat kar rahe the.

VEER : had hai yaar YASH itna sab ho raha hai aur tumne humme batana bhi zaruri nhi samjha.

MAIN : main sirf unka plan samjhne ki kosish me hun aur mujhe ab kuch kuch samjh araha hai…humare pass abhi do main mohre hai SANJAY S ke. Mujhe mere mausa ji se koi lena dena nhi hai magar unki family se hai isliye VEER & RIA tum dono aaj subha hi USA ke liye nikal jao ge. mujhe janna hai ke SANJAY S ke dimag me kya chal raha hai aur jaisa tumhe pata hai ke APURVA bhi wapas chali gai hai to mujhe jana hai baat kya hai.

VEER : magar plan kya hai

MAIN : abhi koi plan nhi hai tum log bas nazar rakho fir dekhte hai kya karna hai.

VEER : theek hai

MAIN : VISHAL se, VISHAL tum NEEL se jake milo uske pass kuch hai tumhare liye.

VISHAL : theek hai

RIA : bichme, baby tumhare dimag me chal kya raha hai.

MAIN : bas kuch khas nhi bas jaise shataranj me apne mohre set kiye jate hai waise hi main kar raha hun SANJAY S ne apni chal chal di ab main bhi chal raha hun bas ab waqt pe hai kisse shaye aur maat milti hai.

RIA : isbar hum usse nhi chhodne wale chahe kuch bhi ho jaye

VISHAL : bilkul.

MAIN : theek hai tum teeno jao SIMI mere sath rahe gi.

TEENO : theek hai

Bolke nikal jate hai unke jane ke bad SIMI.

SIMI : to ab kya boss

MAIN : intezar sahi waqt ka

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(UPDATE-67) JAB SAB APNE APNE ROOM ME CHALE GAYE:

Main apne room me aya aur main fresh hone ja hi raha tha ke JAVIS ki awaz ai

JARVIS : sir turant Control room me aiye

MAIN : theek hai

Waha pahunch ke

MAIN : kya baat hai

JARVIS : sir wo device on hui hai

MAIN : shock me, kya

JARVIS : han sir aur main uski frequency se uski location trace karne laga hun.

MAIN : kitna time lage ga JARVIS

JARVIS : ho gaya sir

Fir usne screen pe map load kiya aur location pinpoint hui.

MAIN : matlab SHIMLA ke pahadi ilake me ye hai. ok thanks SANJAY S ab tumhe kon bache ga.

Tabhi JARVIS ki awaz ai

JARVIS : sir main unke mainframe me ghus sakta hun

MAIN : kya sach me

JARVIS : han sir magar ek problem hai agar main puri tarha se khud ko unke system me load karo ga to ho sakta hai unhe pata chal jaye

MAIN : to iska koi solution hai

JARVIS : maine sab calculate kar liya hai aur soch bhi liya kaise karna hai

MAIN : detail JARVIS

JARVIS : sir main apna pura core to nhi load kar paoga magar q k ye frequency 4G ki hai jab ke mera pura core fiber optic se hi kahin load ho sakta hai to main apna kuch part jaise main wahan sirf us premises me work kar pao ga.

MAIN : aur baki ka

JARVIS : sir abhi tak to kuch khaer nhi huwa hai agar kuch hota hai to main yahan se sidha apne baki ke core ko satellite pe store kar doga aur apna basic core wahan maine load kar diya.

MAIN : aur humari sari details

JARVIS : wo main abhi satellite pe upload kar hi raha hun subha tak sara backup plus all data upload ho jaye ga mainframe me sirf mera core hi hoga agar kuch gadbar hui to main turant satellite pe upload ho jao ga.

MAIN : hmmm to tumne puri planning ki hui hai

JARVIS : sir main to sirf ek program hun wahi karta hun jo apne mere algorithm me feed kiya huwa.

MAIN : theek hai aur koi info

JARVIS : han

Itna bolke usne screen pe do picture load kiya usme ek ladka tha aur ek ladki.

MAIN : ye dono kon hai

JARVIS : maine pata kiya hai ye dono NAKLI ABHY ko bachane jane wale hai.

MAIN : inke chere nhi dekh rahe

JARVIS : sir wahan ke record me inki sirf aisi hi picture hai pura face cover hai.

MAIN : sala ye kya hai ab

Thoda sochne ke bad

MAIN : ek kam karo dekho team me dono ki body kisse match hoti hai.

JARVIS : wo bhi ready hai sir SIMI aur ABHY ki 91% body match hai

MAIN : gazab JARVIS. Location ko mujhe send kardo aur sath me tum un dono ke mobile ko hack karo take unhe trace kar paye.

Itna bolke main bahar aya aur SIMI ko turant ane ka bola wo upar mere ghar2 me hi thi.

Main meeting hall me tha

SIMI : aaj kya bawal kiya tumhe aur MAM me

MAIN : yaar tum mujhe to mere naam se bulate ho aur NEHA ko mam aisa q

SIMI : pata nhi bas unke liye mam hi nikalta hai

MAIN : acha suno tumhe pata hai ke ABHY(NAKLI) ko kahan rakha gaya hai to tum kal subha hi nikal jao aur us jagha pe pahunch ke waha nazar rako

SIMI : theek hai main dekh logi.

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(UPDATE – 68) ME YASH AUR VEER KI LAST CONVERSATION:

MAIN : kahan hai bhai..

VEER : bas kam me laga hun SAURABH M ke aur RIA lagi hai dono pe nazar rakhne me.

MAIN : theek hai jaldi kam khatam karo….

VEER : han bas samjho ho hi gaya hai magar hum unhe yahan nhi chhod sakte agge jake SANJAY S usse marne wala hai ye baat mujhe ussi bande se pata chali wo apne dosre sathi se bol raha tha ke bas kuch din aur uske bad puri family ko khatam kar dege.

MAIN : kya, matlab mera shak sahi nikla…aur tum ye baat mujhe abhi bata rahe ho…

VEER : abhi to ye pata chala hai

MAIN : theek chalo koi na jald hi wahan ka kam niptao aur wapas ao…

VEER : SIMI bata rahi thi ke tumne usse ABHY(NAKLI) jahan rakha gaya hai us farmhouse pe naraz rakhne ko bola hai.

MAIN : maan me, sala ladkion ke peth me koi baat nhi pachti

MAIN : han sahi suna hai ab waqt ho chal mere dost dushman ko khatam karne ka.

VEER : plan kya chal raha hai tumhare dimag me YASH

MAIN : mujhe pura yakin hai SANJAY S usse bachane apne log zarur bheje ga.

VEER : matlab SIMI unhe marke ABHY(NAKLI) se SANJAY S ke base ki location jaan lege aur uske bad uska kissa khatam samjo.

MAIN : han tum ek kam karo SAURABH M ko kal subha (USA me abhi raat ke 9:30 PM ho raha tha) hi kidnap karlo hum uske zariye SANJAY S ko phasaye ge wahan ki police ke zariye. wahan wo jeel me aur yahan hum uske base ko khatam kar dege.

VEER : theek hai bye tc

MAIN : bye tc….do din bad milte hai..

Phone tak karne ke bad main

MAIN : muskura ke, jald hi mulakat hogi tum se SANJAY S…

VEER se baat karne ke bad maine ABHY ko call kiya

MAIN : abhi kahan hai

ABHY : us jungle me jahan mera humshakal hai is waqt farmhouse me.

MAIN : theek hai NAKLI ABHY ko jo bhi bachane aye usse khatam kar ke unki jagha lo jaise hi ye kam ho mujhe info karo.

ABHY : theek hai magar tumhe aisa q lagta hai ke aaj raat kuch hone wala hai.

MAIN : bas aise hi. bas tum unhe marne ke bad mujhe info karo

ABHY : theek hai

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(UPDATE-70) ME JAB SANJAY S KE ADMI NAKLI ABHY KO BACHANE ATE HAI:

SHAKS2 (LADKA) ABHY ko car ki dickey me dal kar…

SHAKS2 : sala bada bhari hai….

SHAKS1(LADKI) : chalo nikalte hai….

Itan bolke usne apne mobile se ek MESSAGE kiya SANJAY S ko aur usse time USA se VEER ne kiya SAURABH M ko kidnap (UPDATE-70) karke YASH ko (TEXT MESSAGE : WORK HAS BEEN ACCOMPLISHED)

Jaise hi dono car ki dickey band kar ke piche hate to char goli chali…do goli SIMI ne chalai thi aur do ABHY ne magar alag alag direction se.

Dono chalte huwe car ke pass aye aur jaise hi SIMI ne ABHY ko dekha usne uspe gun tandi

SIMI : gusse se, sale gaddar tumhe sharam nhi ai.

ABHY : yaar SIMI mujhe kuchna bol jo bolna hai YASH ko bol.

SIMI : apni galti chupane ke liye tum YASH pe ilzam laga rahe ho.

ABHY : ek mint ruk bas

SIMI : gun tane huwe, bilkul bhi hilna mat

ABHY : bas yaar ek mint

Itna bolke ABHY turant car ki dickey open kar deta hai aur NAKLI ABHY jo aundhe muh leta para tha use sidha karta hai. Usse dekh SIMI full shock ho jati hai.

SIMI : ye sab chal kya raha hai

Fir ABHY me usse apne clone ke bare me bataya aur sath me jo bhi usse pata tha sab SIMI ko bata diya.

Sab sunne ke bad

SIMI : iski to ye baby bhi na pata nhi kya plan karte rehta hai.

ABHY : han ye to hai

SIMI : sorry yaar maine tujhpe gun point ki aur sorry maine tumjhe galat samjha. Maine kya sabne tumhe galat samjha

ABHY : koi bat nhi aur waise bhi tum logone mujhe nhi.....
NAKLI ABHY ki taraf ishara karke, isse galat samjha jo ye hai.

SIMI : to ab kya

ABHY : kuch nhi bas boss ke agle hokum ka itezar

Itna bolke ABHY ek MESSAGE karta hai YASH ko. Jab ABHY ka message YASH ko milta hai.

Tab YASH Veer se baat kar raha tha (UPDATE-71) me conversation hai aur usme VEER ABHY ka puchta hai ke “aur ABHY ka kya huwa” to YASH bolta hai “wo apni mazel pe pahunch chukka ho ga”.

VEER se baat karne ke bad YASH aye huwe message ko dekhta hai jo usse ABHY ne kiya tha. fir YASH ABHY ko call karta hai magar call SIMI uthati hai

SIMI : ye sab chal kya raha hai baby itna suspense.

MAIN : wo sab badme pehle mujhe ye batao dono ko mar diya

SIMI : han humse koi bacha hai kya

MAIN : theek hai un dono ka getup lelo tum dono aur maine tum dono ke mobile me inki info bheji hai ye base ke kis room me rehte hai aur yahan kaise aye BINC ki pic etc etc sath me ye bhi bataya ke ye dono SNAJAY S ke khas hai….

SIMI : wo sab to theek hai magar awaz ka kya kare ge.

MAIN : tum apne gadget leke nhi gai kya

SIMI : oh sorry sorry abhi inki voice strip ready karti hun

MAIN : good tum kam karo aur ABHY ko phone do

ABHY : han sir boliye kya karna hai.

MAIN : kuch khas nhi bas jald hi tum apne hamshal ko maro ge.

ABHY : tumhe base ki location mil gai hai. hai na

MAIN : han ab suno meri baat wahan pahunch ke tum dono milke uske pure base me kya chal raha hai pata karo ge aur sath me bomb bhi laga doge jitney area ko cover sakte ho karo aur jo tumhe theek lage kar dena.

ABHY : matlab diwali manani hai

MAIN : bilkul ab shaitan ko marke diwali hi manaye ge hum

ABHY : theek hai hum dekh lege

MAIN : ok ab baat nhi ho paye ge

ABHY : q

MAIN : bad me chalo tum log ye mission karo main jab waqt hoga pahunch jao ga

ABHY : aur kya baki ko pata hai

MAIN : nhi abhi sirf tum dono ko pata hai aur SIMI ko bol ke kissi ko ye abhi na bataye main bad me sab explain karo ga.

ABHY : theek hai bhai jo bhi karo sambhal ke

MAIN : tum dono bhi bye tc

ABHY : bye tc.

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(UPDATE-72) JAB JARIVS KHATAM HUWA:

SANAJY S KE BASE PE:

Jaise hi ABHY aur SIMI ye dekhte hai ek dam shock ho jate hai magar kuch zahar nhi karte..

JARVIS ko khatam karne ke bad TESLA, B INCG & NAKLI ABHY party karne nikal jate hai unke jate hi SIMI aur ABHY apne room ki taraf ho lete hai room me pahunch ke

SIMI : ye kya tha ABHY unhone JARVIS ko khatam kar diya

ABHY : meri to kuch samjh nhi araha hai ye ho kya raha hai

SIMI : yaar agar aisa hai to bahar sab ji jaan ko khatra hai aur suna nhi kal SANJAY S bhi araha hai ab kya hoga. Chalo YASH ko iske bare me bata dete hai

ABHY : nhi yaad hai na mana kiya tha

SIMI : yaar ye baby sach me had karta hai

ABHY : ab jo bhi ho dekha jaye ga humme apna kam karna hai tabhi dono ke earphone me.

JARVIS : good evening doston

Dono : JARVIS

JARVIS : han main. ab kuch aur baat nhi maine apke is system me is pura jagha ka map load kar diya aur location bhi kahan bomb lagana hai aur kin bando pe.q ke humare pass time nhi hai.

DONO : theek hai

Fir dono lag jate hai apne kam pe.

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(UPDATE-72) JAB YASH AUR MADHU MAA SONE CHALE JATE HAI:

Main sidha secret room se hote huwe ghar2 ke basement ke meeting room me chala jata hun jahan VISHAL baitha huwa tha ek chair pe uski peth meri taraf thi.

Main uske pass pahunch ke

MAIN : VISHAL

VISHAL : VISHAL nhi YASH YASH RAJPUT bolo

Itna bolke wo chair se khada huwa aur meri taraf palat gaya.

MAIN : bahut khub badiya kam kiya hai NEEL ne

VISHAL : to boss ab kya

MAIN : tum ab meri jagha loge

VISHAL : jab mujhe tumhara mask pehnaya gaya main tabhi samjh gaya tha. main plan kya hai uski baat kar raha hun.

MAIN : bas agge wale RAJA ko ye PRINCE gheer raha hai aur sath me meri ghair maujudgi me tum ghar pe family ke sath hoge to mujhe unki fikar nhi hogi. Aur han VEER ko batana mat abhi

VISHAL : theek hai

MAIN : Aur han apna earphone hamesh apne kan me rakhna main tumse apne private phone se hamesh connect rahun ga take mere bad kisko kya bolna main tumhe bolo ga aur fir tum same bolna agee.

VISHAL : chalna yaar mujhe mat bata ye sab humne bahut bar kiya hai

MAIN : janta hun bas recall kara raha tha.

VISHAL : ye jo tera plan hai kuch samjh nhi araha hai.

MAIN : agge sab samjh jaye ga chal main nikalta hun

VISHAL : theek hai agar meri zarurat lage to mujhe call karna

MAIN : theek hai

Aur fir maine apni car se nikal gaya.

Issi (UPDATE-72) me jo agli subha se sabke sath me tha wo YASH nhi balke VISHAL tha YASH ke mask me.

Issi (UPDATE -71) me jab VISHAL(YASH) VEER ko bolta hai tum turant jake RIA se milo maine ria ko sab bata diya.

RIA ko MAINE subha hi message se SANJAY S ke base ki location send ki thi aur sath me usse ye bhi bataya tha ke JARVIS khatam ho gaya hai isliye usse itna bataya ke unhe kahan se andar jana hai.

Issi (UPDATE-72) me NEHA jab fresh hoke ai to uske mobile pe ek msg ata hai MERA.

MESSAGE : maine apko tarning di hai aur ab uske imtehan ka waqt ho gaya hai secret room se ghar2 ke basement se nikal ke is address “xyz” pe pahuncho apke pass sirf 15mint hai.

Message pad ke NEHA turant mujhe call try karti hai magar mera phone switchoff ho gaya tha tab tak.

NEHA turant apne room se nikal ke mere room me hote huwe basement se car leke nikal padti hai.

VEER AUR RIA SIDE :

VEER : humme kahan jana hai RIA

RIA : yaar ye baby sach me pata nhi kya kya karte rehta hai

Fir usne VEER ko bataya JARVIS khatam hai VISHAL ka koi pata nhi na hi SIMI ka bas mujhe message se ye sari info behji aur kaha ke ye sanjay S ke base ki detail hai…

VEER : theek hai tum to janti ho usse chalo taiyari kar ke hum nikalte hai.

Dono apne taiyari me lag jate hai koi 20 mint lage unhe taiyari karne me.

Abhi ye dono bas saman leke nikalne hi wale the the gate pe nock huwa RIA ne gate khola to samne NEHA khadi thi

RIA : mam aap yahan

NEHA : han mujhe inka message aya tha main yahan ao maine jo training li hai uska imtehan hai waise aap dono kaha ja rahe hai kissi mission pe.

RIA : yaaar ye baby sach me

Itna hi boli thi ke

NEHA : gusse se, khabardar jo meri jaan ko baby wagaira kaha to.

VEER : baat ko sambhal ke, mam mind na kare

NEHA : aise kaise mind na karon mere PRINCE ko aise sirf main hi bola sakti hun aur koi nhi.

NEHA ka gussa dekh VEER RIA ko ishara karta hai kuch bolne ko

RIA : ok mam sorry aaj ke bad nhi bolo gi agar apko acha nhi lagta to.

NEHA : ok theek hai sorry wo kya hai na jab bhi unhe aise words aur unke naam se koi bulata hai to mujhe gussa ajata hai mind mat karo dobara aisa na ho

RIA : theek hai MAM

VEER : are kya bhar hi khada rakho gi andar ane do pehle

Teeno sofe pe baith jate hai.

VEER : ab bataiye mam

NEHA : mujhe unka message aya

Itna bolke moble VEER ko dedeti hai. message padke

VEER : ye sab ho kya raha khaer jane dete hai unhe sab kuch suspence rakhna pasand hai..aur ye jo imtehan ki baat hai apki to main aur RIA ek mission pe ja rahe hai isiliye ye message apko karke yahan bheja hai.

NEHA : ok to main taiyar hun

RIA : ok fir chaliye ready ho jaiye

Ab ladkion ko pata hai aur NEHA madam to NEHA me ready hone 45 mint lagaye.

Fir teeno car me baith ke nikal pade. Jab ye log nikle to tabhi YASH ko police leke ghar se nikli thi thodi deer pehle

Jis gadi me yash(VISHAL) tha wo VEER ki car se agge hi chal rahi thi magar thode phasle pe ye dono car SHIMAL jane wale raste pe thi.

Thoda road pe agge badne ke bad wo teez ho gai aur teezi se ek turn liya VEER abhi thoda piche hi tha jaise hi car seed se turn hui to VEER ki nazar car pe padi pehle uske bad side me ek helicopter khada dekha wo war teezi se helicopter ke pas jake ruki aur sab turant utar ke ek behosh bande ko nikalne ke VEER ki nazar jaise hi us band eke chere pe padi.

VEER ne ek dam se car me break lagaya aur car se bahar aya magar tab tak helicopter start hoke udne ki taiyari kar raha tha.

VEER duad ta huwa waha gaya magr tab tak deer ho gait hi uske piche NEHA aur RIA bhi daudi thi uske pass pahunch ke.

RIA : kya baat hai VEER

VEER : maine abhi bhi YASH ko behosh halat me us helicopter me lejate huwe dekha.

NEHA : shock se, kya magar kahan

RIA : zarur ye kam SANJAY S ka hoga

NEHA : ye SANJAY S kon hai

Fir RIA ne usse sab bata diya aur sath me ke wo log jis mission pe jarahe hai wo ussi ka base hai.

VEER : zarur wo yash ko wahin leke gaye ho, sorry mam adat ho gai hai

NEHA : koi baat nhi chalo jaldi karo nhi to kahin deer na ho jaye.

NEHA ye sunke hi badi chinta me thi ke uski jaan ki jaan khatre me. Fir teeno turant car me baith ke nikal jate magar car NEHA chalti hai aur fir kyat ha VEER aur RIA bas usse dekhte rahe

RIA : mam apko bilkul yash ke jaise car chalte ho

NEHA : sikhaya bhi kisne hai

RIA : sachi hai.

NEHA car chalne me lagi thi tabhi RIA ke phone pe message aya ye VEER ka tha.

VEER MESSAGE : acha huwa jo mam ko APURVA ke bare me nhi bataya

RIA MESSAGE : ghar pe dekhtha na unka gussa isiliye nhi bataya pata nhi sunke kya karti

VEER MESSAGE : han hum dono ke bich me nhi padna chahiye

RIA MESSAG : han bilkul pata nhi aaj kya kya dekhne ko mile

ISKE BAAD KYA HUWA WO TO AAP SAB JANTE HI HAI

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SCENE TUFO AUR ELVES/ PHOENIX OF PRINCE KA (PRESENT TIME 11:45 PM RAAT KA DUSRA PEHAR KHATAM HONE KO THA):

Fir wo SHAKS1 apni anakhen band kar kuch spell bolta hai aur uske hath me ek chamak si hoti hai aur jab wo chamak kam hoti hai aur jo chiz uske hath me thi usse dekhe SHAKS5 SHAKS6 & SHAKS7 ek dam shock ho jate hai

SHAKS5 : shock me, ye tumhare pass kaise ai

SHAKS1 : bas agai lo isse aur turant rawana ho jao iska kam hote hi ye wahan chali jaye gi jahan se ye ai hai..

SHAKS5 jaise hi usse apne hath me leta hai uski sharer ko ek jhatka lagta hai ussi ke sath teeno SHAKS5 SHAKS6 & SHAKS7 ek dam se wahan se gayab ho jate hai..

AB AGEE :

Ye SHAKS5 SHAKS6 & SHAKS7 wahan se bahar nikal ke ek portal kholte hai aur usme chale jate hai portal ke dusre side wo teeno sidha TARTARUS ke gate se thoda piche khade rehte hai.

Jab yahan portal khula to HAMA aur ATHENA dono hi dekh rahe the

ATHENA : ye teemo kon hai aur wo yahan kya kar rahe hai

Ispe HAMA kuch nhi bolta bas khamoshi se samne dekhte rehta hai.

ATHENA : hama hum aapse baat kar rahe hai

MAHA : shant ATHENA dekhne do yaha chal kya raha hai.

Abhi dono me se koi kuch bolta ek dam se yahan ki zamin pe jhatke lagne ge aur asman ke angar ki bijlian kadakne lagi jisse dekh EVLES bhi thoda dar gaye the magar HAHA aur ATHENA bas samne dekhte jar aha the. Tabhi kuch huwa jisse dekh ke HAMA ek dam se shock ho gaya.

Bijlian abhi thi kadak rahi aur same TARTARUS ka gate jo na jane kabse band thaw o dhire dhire khulne laga aur aag ki lapten uske andar dekhne lagi kuch deer bad gate pura khul gaya…aur lapte kam hone lagi.

Aur TARTARUS ke andar se pure kale color ke armor pehni hui me sena bahar ane lagi aur un teeno ke samne se kkhadi hone lagi. Kuch ghode pe to kuck paidal the jo paidal the un sab ke hathon me gun thi

Dekh ke hi lag raha tha ke kafi khatarnak hai

Dekhte hi dekhte TARTARUS ke gate ke samne jo maidan tha wo pura bhar gaya wo teeno bhi sena ke bich me the fir kissi ne un teeno ko ghoda diya teeno uspe baith gaye aur unme se ek ne kuch kiya to uske samne hawa me npehle nili roshni hui aur jab wok am hui to ek kale color ki talwar uske samne hawa me thi aur us talwar ke handle se leke uske middle tak six stone fit hone ke liye jagha bani hui thi blade pe aur abhi is waqt usme ek stone laga huwa tha SPACE STONE.



Talwar dekh HAMA ke muh se ek da nikla.

HAMA : ye to unki talwar hai.

ATHENA : matlab PRINCE ki

HAMA : nhi unki jo jinhe PRINCE ne qaid kiya tha TARTARUS me magar unke pass SPACE STONE kaise aya

ATHENA : kon hai wo aur stone se tumhara kya maltab hai

HAMA : unka naam nhi le sakte.Aur ye fauj unki hi hai aur mujhe yakin hai ye log ORKS me TUFO ki madad ke liye hi ja rahe hai is sena ka bahar nikalna matlab maidane jung me sab ki har.aur dekhe rahi ho us stone se nile rang ki jo roshini nikal rahi hai wo stone jis urja ki qiad me hai usse TESSERACT bote hai wo PRINCE ki akash ki urja hai.

ATHENA : aur ye teeno kon hai

HAMA : do hai PROMORDIAL AGE ke sabse pehle GODs : GOD TYPHON (GT) aur GOD MONTHUS (GM)aur jo lady hai wo apke pita ki behan hai GODDESS HAIRA (GH)

(JINHONE INHE TALWAR DI THI WO WAHI SHAITAN HAI SANJAY S WALE)

ATHENA : shock me, kya

HAMA : han baki badme baat karte hai. ab hum yahan nhi ruk sakte humme bhi jung me shamil hona ho ga ye sena bhi wahin ja rahi hogi

ATHENA : main taiyar hun aaj kuch bhi ho jaye.

Fir HAMA ELVES ko samjha k eek portal open karta hai aur dono jung me pahunch jate hai.

Aur apne sathon ke sathon ke sath shamil ho jate hai.

TUFO ki sena lagbhag kham ho gai thi aur wo har ki kagar ke pe tha ke ORKS ke gate pe ek portal khula portal ke us taraf

TYPHON ne us talwar ko hawa me kar diya jiska matlab tha agee bado aur wo teeno sena ke sath agee bad gaye portal ke is side jahan jung chal rahi thi.

Jab portal aur sena ke chalne ki awaz ane lagi to jung ruk gai aur TUFO piche dekhne laga sath me EVLES aur PHOENIX OF PRINCE (POP)

TUFO sena ko dekh ke unki taraf piche bad gaya uske sath bache hui sena bhi.

Wo kale armor wali sena pure jung ke maidan me bhar gai itna tadad me thi wo sena. Sena ke rukte hi wo teeno apne ghode pe agee ake sena ke samne khade ho gaye.

Unhe dekh

NAILA : to HEDIS ne unhe bahar bheja hai.

HAMA : aur sath me unki talwar aur uspe laga SPACE STONE sathme PRINCE ki akash ki urja

HALDIR : kya wo unke pass kaise aya

HAMA : pata nhi magar ab kya karna hai

SAPHIRA : hum sabne kasam kai thi muth tak sath ki to hum piche nhi hate ge

HAMA : main piche hatne ki baat nhi kar raha balke unhe khatam kaise karna uski baat kar rahun

Abhi ye baat hi kar rahe the.

GODDESS HAIRA : to POP sab sath aaj mare ge

NAILA : humme tum jaise mar nhi sakte samjhi

GODDESS HAIRA : ATHENA se, tum ZEUS ki beti hona

ATHENA : han aur unki behan

GODDESS HAIRA : nhi behan nhi uski dushman meri ek salha manao yahan se chali jao warna aaj marne ke liye taiyar ho jao

ATHENA : kon kisse marta hai wo thode deer me pata chal jaye ga

GOD MONTHUS : chalo fir waqt q gawaye shuru karte hai.

Isske ke sath jung ka firse agaz ho gaya HALDIR, HAMA, NAILA, SAPHIRa aur ATHENA ne apne roop badal liye aur tut pade kale armor ki sena pe…jung bahut ki khatarnak hoti ja rahi thi ELVES ki sena me ab sirf LORD ELROND, LORD THRANDUIL aur kuch hi sainek bache the aur wo pancho to bas lage the dushman sena ko khatam karne me TUFO ki ab puri tarha se khatam ho gai thi sirf kale armor wali sena hi thi jo abhi tufu ki sena se 10 gunha badi bachi thi. Wo teeno aur TUFO ne ek sath LORD THRANDUIL aur LORD ELROND pe hamla kar diya to HALDIR aur HAMA bhi wahan pahunch gaye

LORD ELROND – GT se

LORD THRANDUIL – TUFO se

HALDIR – GH se

HAMA – GM se

Lad rahe the aur NAILA, SAPHIRA aur ATHENA sena me ghus ke unki band baja rahe the.

Magar dushman sena aur uske senapathi ab bhari padne lage the k eek dam se asman se do roshini ake jung ke biche me giri aur dhadam kai kale armor sena ke sainik mare gaye jab roshini kam hui to G ZEUS aur G POSAIDAN khade the G ZEUS (GZ) ke hath me bijli thi aur G POSEIDON (GP) ke sath me unka trident.

GH : to mere bhai ko yaad ahi gai

GZ : ye sab ab band kar aur wapas TARTARUS me chale jao

GH : nhi mere bhai ab bahut deer ho gai hai

Itna bolke GH ne GT ko ishara kiya

GT : anakhen band karke, aur sena

GP : bas HAIRA band kar ab HEDIS se bolke

GT : bahut ho gaya bache

GP : zaban sambhal ke TYPHONE

Aur fir se ladai shuru ho gai

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SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (PRESENT TIME 01:30 PM):

Sab sunke bad SANJAY S

SANJAY S : sab sahi raha YASH magar tum ye bazi aaj firs eek bar har gaye.

MAIN : tumhe aisa q lagta hai

SANJAY S : tum insan aur kali taqaton ka malik to aaj tum harne hi wale ho.

MAIN : tum wo nhi jante jo main janta hun

SANJAY S : aur wo kya hai jo main nhi janta

MAIN : chalo jane do ab wo karo jiske liye tumhare boss ne kaha hai

SANJAY S : jaisi tumhari marzi. Tumne kaha shatranj ki chal me maat aur shaye sirf ek ki hogi to ye lo maat aur shaye.

Itna bole SANJAY S me un shaitano ko ishara kiya aur un charon ne apni talwar nikal ke MADHU(MAA) ke sene ke par kardi…jisse dekh

MAIN : MAA

NEHA : MAA. Aur NEHA us shield pe gusse se apne mukke marne lagi.

MAIN unke jata usse pehle hi SANJAY S ne kuch kaha aur uske hath me wo chadi agai aur chadi ke bahar ate hi wo MIND STONE apni jagha se nikal ke teezi se ake us chadi pe lag gaya jisse SANJAY S ko teez ke jhatke lagne lage aur usne un jhatkon ki parwah kiye bina hi chadi ko mere tarf kar diya.

Chadi se ek pele rang ki teez bijli nikal ke sidha mere sar se takrai aur main sidha dhadam se zamin pe jake gira mujhe mere body me bahut dard mehsos ho raha tha ye kuch chalte raha koi 30 mint tak

MAIN behosh pada tha magar mera dimag nhi aur main apne dimag me chal rahe har chiz ko mehsos kar sakta tha usse dekh sakta tha mere samne universe ke creation se leke SARE STONE, RAZEL, LORD KING aur QUEEN, mere dost yani POP aur meri pichli zindagi ka har wo sach jo mujhe jana tha meri power kon kon si tha main kaise unka istemal karta tha aur, aur bhi bahut kuch (jo agee aye ga) mujhe apne pichle jaman ki lagbhag 90 % yaaden yaad agai thi sath me mere dushman bhi aur dost bhi. Maine to bahar se behosh tha aur ye sab main dhiyan me dekh raha magar bahar SANJAY S apni puri taqat laga ke us chadi ko sambhal raha tha ye ek dam se wo chadi uske hathon me roshini ki tarha banne lagi pehle safed fir kali fir hari fir nili fir pata nhi kon kon se rang us roshini ne liye SANJAY S aur wahan khade sab ye nazara dekh shock me the.

MIND STONE ab hawa me upar ho gaya tha uske upar hote hi wo roshini pehle upar gai aur uske bad sidha tezi se ake mere sharer me samane lage bahar mere sharer ko jhatke lag rahe the..

Magar andar mere samne mere sare roop ek ke bad ek kare ate jara the aur mujhe unme hone kaise badalna hai uski spell batate ja rahe the aur katar me khade hote ja rahe the….aur sab se akhiri me mera sabse pyara roop jisme main hamesh hota hun wo aya.

ROOP : aaj se hum ek ho jaye ge

MAIN : han

ROOP : to ijazat hai hum sab ko

MAIN : muskura ke, han ijazat

Mere itna bolte hi mere is ROOP ko chhod ke



baki ke sare mere andar samane lage aur last me wo roop mere andar sama gaya jo mujhse baat kar raha tha.

uske samate hi bahar meri anakh ek dam se khul gai aur tezi se khada ho gaya. Is waqt mera mera pura sharer pili roshini se ghira huwa tha aur maine apna ek hath us STONE ki taraf kar diya..

mera aisa karte hi us STONE se do aur bijli ki dhara nili ek dhara to mere upar girhi rahi thi magar ab do aur nikal ke thoda upar hui aur sath me sidha niche giri ek NEHA aur baki jis shield ne andar the wahan giri shield ko par karte huwe karte huwe aur NEHA ke sarpe jake giri magar NEHA meri tarha zamin pen hi giri wo thoda bas ek fit hawa me ho gai aur uska sharer dhire2 gol ghumne laga.

Aur jo dosri thi wo mere MAA ki taraf badi aur unke sar ke pass jake ruki kuch deer aur fir ek damse kahin aur chali gai.

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