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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

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UPDATE-81

LAST PART-2 OF WAR BETWEEN
(SANJAY SINGHANIA Vs YASH) and (TUFO Vs EVLES & PHOENIX OF PRINCE)


FLASHBACK (THODA PICHE YASH & MADHU(MAA) SCENE):

Main aur MADHU(MAA) shimla pahunch gaye the aur sham tak apne farmehouse pe hi the…

Maine MAA ko apni puri planning bata di thi…

MADHU(MAA) : SAURAB M ke bad KIRAN aur AMIT ka kya ho ga beta.

MAIN : MAA maine sab set kar diya SAURAB H ka sara business ab massi aur amit ka hoga SAURAB M ab jail jaye ga maine baat karli hai aur sare subot bhi INDIAN & USA govt. ko de giya hai kal sham ko USA ke officer ake usse le jaye ge magar usse pehle kal ghar walon ke samne usse sach batana hoga.

MADHU(MAA) : iski kya zarurat hai beta

MAIN : thoda gusse se, zarurat hai MAA.

MADHU(MAA) : ghar pe kuch huwa hai kya

MAIN : han

MADHU(MAA) : kya

MAIN : wo kal batao ga.

MADHU(MAA) : theek hai ab kya karna hai.

MAIN : intezar karna hai sahi waqt ka uske bad aap aur main chale ge SANJAY S aur uski beti ko khatam karne.

MADHU(MAA) : main q ye kam aap hi karo jake.

MAIN : nhi apko bhi chalna hoga mere sath isliye maine NEHA ko bhi is mission me shamil kiya hai aaj hum teeno ka wahan hona zaruri hai. mujhe dekhna hai mere liye wahan kya surprise hai aur apki kon si dua puri hone wali hai…

Maine flow flow me bol gaya magar jab andaja huwa to baat muh se nikal chuki thi..

MADHU(MAA) : apke liye surprise aur meri dua main kuch samjhi nhi aur NEHA bhi.

MAIN : MAA maine aaj tak apni koi bhi baat apse chupai nhi hai sirf ek baat ko chhod ke.

MADHU(MAA) : konsi baat beta

MAIN : main asal me kon hun mera wajud kya hai.

MADHU(MAA) : main kuch samjhi nhi beta

MAIN : MAA aaj raat aap bahut kuch dekhne wali ho.

MADHU(MAA) : halka muskura ke, chalo fir aaj raat dekhte hai mian bhi apke sath aogi.

fir hum dono apne farmehouse k eek room me chale gaye jahan chhota sa setup the wahan 50 inch ki monitor pe SANJAY S ke base pe chal rahi gati vidhi hum dekh sakte the.

MAIN AUR MAA ne sab kuch dekha aur suna wahan job hi ho raha tha. aur waqt waqt pe JARVIs se bhi baat ho jati thi maine usse batata kya karna hai kaise karna hai…

Fir main aur MAA nikal gaye wahan se q ke wo waqt agaya tha jab mujhe wahan hona tha hum jahan the wahan se SANJAY S ka base koi 50 mint ki duri pe tha isi liye maine farmehouse pe chal rahi broadcast ko apni car ke system se connect kar diya tha aur hum dono car hote huwe bhi wahan pe chal raha sab kuch dekh aur sun sakte the main dekh to nhi raha tha magar sun zarur raha tha drive karte huwe.

Tabhi

MAA : beta apne koi gun waigera nhi liye sath me..isse pehle to koi bhi mission pe aap aise nhi gaye.

MAIN : maan pehle baat alag thi aur aaj baat alag hai..

MAA : matlab

MAIN : bas aap dekhti jao.

Fir humne koi baat nhi ki aur apni mazil ke taraf badne lage..maine humari car koi 5 mint ki duri pe roki aur main JARVIS se.

MAIN : JARVIS kam shuru karo ab koi problem nhi hai.

JARVIS : ok sir

Itna bolke JARVIS ne satellite se hi operate karna shuru kar diya. Koi 2 mint ke bad.

JARVIS : sir main SANJAY S ke base se ab puri tarha connect hun apne basic core ke sath.

MAIN : theek hai to mujhe batao bahar main gate pe kya chal raha hai.

JARVIS : sir bahar koi 10 bande hai sab pad ke piche chupe huwe road pe gun kiye huwe.

MAIN : theek hai JARVIS…mere ishare ke sath andar VEER ki team aur SIMI & ABHY ko humle ka khukum dena.

JARVIS : theek hai sir.

Koi 10 mint bad jab SANJAY ka pura plan batana khatam huwa tabhi MAIN

MAIN : JARVIS go ahead

Yehi wo pal tha jab (UPDATE-79) JARVIS bola go aur andar shuru hui jung.

Aur maine apni car full speed se dauda di aur jaise hi meri car SANJAY S ke base pe main gate ke bahar ake ruki….

MAIN : MAA aap andar hi rahiye.

Aur main car se bahar aya hi tha ke unmese ek guard ped ke piche se nikal ke mere pass aya.

GUARD1 : kon ho tum yahan kya karne aye ho.

MAIN : mujhe andar jana hai

GUARD1 : kahan andar yahan kuch bhi nhi hai chalo jao yahan se.

MAIN : hai mujhe pata hai.

GUARD1 : dekho yahan se chale jao warna be maut mare jao ge samjhe tum ye private area hai yahan kissi ko ane ki permission hai.

MAIN : magar mujhe hai aur main andar jane wala hun bas abhi.

Mera itna hi bolna tha ke us guard ne mujhe pe gun tan di

Aur uske baki ke bache 9 sathion me se do aur ne YASH pe gun tani aur baki bache sab ne car ki taraf q k car me unhe MADHU(MAA) baithi dekh rahi thi magar ye 9 ke 9 ped ke piche hi the.

GUARD1 : abhi bhi waqt hai nikalo yahan se warna tumhare sath wo aurat bhi apni jaanse jaye gi.

MAIN : nhi jaan se tum jao ge aur tumhare wo 9 sath jo ped ke piche chupe hai.

Ab wo samjh gaya ke main aam banda nhi hun usse laga shayad main koi police ya dushman ka admi hun isliye usne mujhe pe goli chali uske goli chalane se uske baki ke 9 sathion ne bhi car pe goli chalai.


SLOW MOTION SCENE:

Ek goli banduk ki nali se nikalte huwe YASH taraf ane lagi. Aur wahan ped ke piche khade 9 guards ne car pe goli chala di 10 gun se nikli goli 1 YASH ki taraf aur 9 car ki taraf arahi thi goli ki awaz sunke MADHU(MAA) apne dono hathon ko kan pe rakhne ke liye le jarahi thi. Aur wo guards dosri bar apni ungli se trigger dabane ja rahe the…is baat se anjan ke unke pairon ke niche ki zamin halki halki upar uth rahi thi aur ek chattan zamin se nikal rahi hai aur upar aur hawa ki 10 badi dhar unki taraf bad rahi thi. Aur sath me car ke charon taraf ki zamin bhi upar hone lagi thi aur us zamin me se bhi chattan bahar ane lagi thi.

YASH sirf anakhen ban kiye khada huwa tha jaise jaise YASH pe chali gai goli YASH ki taraf bad rahi thi waise waise YASH apne jagha se hatne laga tha wo goli uske sene pe lagne wali thi magar YASH ke hatne se ab wa goli khali jane wali thi. Ye aise ho raha tha jaise jaise YASH hat raha tha yani YASH uske gurad ke samne khada tha to YASH apni boye right side se piche ki taraf ghuma raha tha YASH ghum raha tha aur goli agge badte chali ja rahi thi.

Car pe chalai gai Golan bhi bas car se 5 fit ki duri pe thi aur zamin se nikal rahi chattan car ke shishe tak agai thi.

END SLOW MOTION SCENE

Goli chali ek dam se main side ho gaya. Car ko charon taraf se ek dam chattanon me gheer liya matlab pura conver kar liya aur chattan pe thak thak thak ki awaz ai goli lagte hi.

Aur meri samne khada banda aur 9 ke niche se chattan nikli aur unhe hawa me uchal diya kafi upar tak aur chattane teezi se zamin me chali gai sath ke car ko gheer kit hi wo bhi. Abhi 10 ke 10 niche ahi rahe the ke upar se arahi 10 hawaon ki ghar usse tak rai aur unhe bahut hi teezi se lake chattan pe patakh diya, huwa ye ke jaise hi wo 10 jahan girne wale the waha ki zamin se firse chattan nikal rahi is do tarfa war se samjho unka sharer ka kima hi ban gaya ho andar se bechare kuch samjh hi nhi paye.

Maine car ki taraf bada MAA shock me bas mujhe hi dekh rahi thi.

Main jake apni driving side baith gaya aur car star ki pehle car ko reverse liya kuch dur aur full speed se car ko agee bada diya jaise hi main gate ke pass pahuncha ko huwa maine apna hath agee kar diya to chattan gate thaw o ek dhamake ke tuta aur turant samne se hatta chala gaya aur car full speed se andar badte gaye ye rasta koi 2 km ka tha uske bad shuru hota tha SANJAY S ka main base.

Base me jane wale main gate pe maine car ko roka main aur MAA car se bahar aye.

MAIN : MAA aap theek hai

MADHU(MAA) : beta ye sab kyat ha

MAIN : MAA maine apse kaha tha na aap bahut kuch dekho gi aaj. Ab aap car me hi intezar karo jab tak sahi waqt nhi ata.

Tabhi waha ek roshini hui aur jab wo kam hui to….aaj pehli bar RAPHAEL mere alawa kissi ke samne aya tha…aur ate hi wo mere samne jhukne laga..

MAIN : nhi mere dost

RAPHAEL ko dekh MAA firse ek dam shock hui wo kabhi mujhe to kabhi RAPHAEL ko dekh rahi thi.

MADHU(MAA) : shock se, beta ye kon hai aur yahan chal kya raha hai.

MAIN : MAA sab batao ga aap ko aap bilkul bhi tension na lo ab se aap ki hifazat RAPHAEL kare ga theek hai aur jab tak maina bolo aap bahar nhi ai gi….. RAPHAEL se, MAA ka dhiyan rakho jab tak main andar se nipat ke ata hun.

RAPHAEL : ji PRINCE

Itna bolke RAPHAEL ne ek shield banai aur MAA se

RAPHAEL : ispe chaliye ye meri khas shield hai aap isme safe raho gi koi apko nhi dekh paye ga magar aap sab kuch dekh aur sun pao gi.

MAA ne meri taraf dekha to maine unhe anakhon ke ishare se hank aha to wo us shield me chali gai. Main bhi unhe dekhe nhi pa raha tha abhi ke liye (aisa q hai agee pata chale ga). magar RAPHAEL dekh sakta tha.

Tabhi JARVIS ki awaz mere earphone me ai

JARVIS : SIR MAM (NEHA) khatre me hai.

Aur yehi wo pal tha jab YASH bhi sab ke sath shamil huwa tha aur NEHA ke samne chattan ki diwar bani thi (UPDATE-78)

END FLASHBACK (YASH & MADHU(MAA) SCENE)
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SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (PRESENT TIME 01:40 PM):

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Aur jo dosri thi wo mere MAA ki taraf badi aur unke sar ke pass jake ruki kuch deer aur fir ek damse kahin aur chali gai.

AB AGGE

Wo roshini ki dhar wahan pahunchi jahan MAA aur RAPHAEL khade ye sab dekh rahe thi.

Roshini2 ko apne taraf badta dekh MADHU(MAA) thoda ghabra gai aur wo isse pehle kuch karti ya boli roshini2 RAPHAEL ki shield ko tudte huwe MADHU(MAA) ke sar ke ja takrai.

Aur unka bhi sharer zamin se uth ke upar ho gaya aur dhere2 gol ghumne laga.

Jab ye sab ho raha tha to SANJYA S, APURVA aur wahan maujud meri team ke VEER aur RIA aur wo char shaitan sab shock se bas dekhe hi ja rahe the NEHA to unke samne hi thi aur main abhi magar MAA ko abhi kissi ne dekha nhi tha. RIA ye dekh ke darse VEER se chipak gai thi..

NEHA KE MIND ME:

NEHA abhi ek safed roshni ke maidan me khadi thi uske charon taraf sirf roshini hi thi tabhi durse ate huwe do saye nazar aye…jaise jaise wo uske kareeb arahe the waise2 roshini kam hone lagi aur sab kuch saaf dekhne laga aur jab wo dono uske pass pahunche se kuch phasle pe the ke soshini puri khatam ho gai aur NEHA ne khud ko ek bahut ki khubsurat bagiche me paya wo har tarf ghum ghum ke dekh rahi thi uski khubsurti usme lage ped paodhe fir uski nazar ek taraf bani do mortion pe padti hai to wo unki taraf bad gai aur wo do saya bhi unke piche ho liye magar NEHA unhe bhul ke bas mortion pahunchna chahti thi aur wo pahunch bhi gai.aur wo saye bina awaz kiye uske piche kuch phasle pe ruk gaye.

NEHA un mortion ko dekh ek dam se shock ho gai q k wo dono mortion me ek khud uski thi aur ek YASH ki wo soch rahi thi ke ye dono yahan kaise aye ke tabhi uske piche se

AWAZ : ye dono mortian apne apni shadi ke bad banwai thi RAZEL

NEHA turant ye sunke palat gai…jaise hi wo palti uske samne ek bahut ki khubsurat same to same NEHA ke jaisi khadi muskura rahi thi jihan doston ye koi aur nhi balki LORD QUEEN hi hai.

NEHA : shock me, aap kon ho bilkul meri jaise dekhti ho aur apko RAZEL ke bare kaise pata..

LORD QUEEN : main apke jaisi nhi balke aap meri jaise dekhti ho meri pyari beti.

NEHA : matlab

LORD QUEEN : main apki MAA hun aur aap meri beti RAZEL ho.

NEHA kuch aur bolti usse pehle hi LORD QUEEN ke sath jo roshini ka saya tha wo turant hi NEHA ke sharer me sama gaya.

Aur NEHA ki anakhen band ho gai…….usse sab kuch yaad ane laga wo kon hai uski pichli jindagi kaisi thi wo asal me kiski beti hai aur, aur bhi bahut kuch. Jaise jaise NEHA ko yaad raha tha waise waise uske andar NEHA aur RAZEL (matlab RAZEL1(NEHA) aur RAZEL2 rooh (UPDATE-61) me RAZEL rooh ke ZEUS do hisse karta hai ek se wo NEHA ko janam deta hai jab ke dosri rooh LORD KING ke sath chali jati hai..magar UPDATE-47 ne dosri dosri rooh NEHA ke sharer me sama jati hai)

(AB NEHA KO RAZEL LIKHO GA)

RAZEL ki dono rooh abhi ek ho rahi thi jo saya uske sharer me gaya tha usme dono rooh ko judne aur RAZEL ki puri yaaden thi sab kuch

Ye puri kirya jaise jaise puri ho rahi thi RAZEL ka sharer roshini se chamak raha tha aur fir ek dam se wo roshini khatam hui aur samne hawa me RAZEL apne roop me khadi thi.

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Apni anakhe band kiye huwe fir wo dhire dhire zamin pea ne lagi aur jaise hi wo zamin pe ai usne apni anakhen kholi aur samne khadi apni MAA ko dekh turant unse lipat gai aur rone lagi

LORD QUEEN : uski peth sehlate huwe, aap ro q rahi ho beta..

RAZEL : bas aise hi MAA apko dekh ke rona agaya kitne dino baad apnse hun.

LORD QUEEN : abhi kuch din pehle hi to gai thi mere pass se…

RAZEL : adhi gai thi MAA

tabhi usse kuch yaad ata hai aur RAZEL ki anakhen ek dam se lal ho jati hai aur wo gusse

RAZEL : gusse se apni MAA LORD QUEEN se alag hoke, pita ji kahan hai.

LORD QUEEN : beta khud ko sambhalo abhi waqt nhi huwa hai..

RAZEL : full gusse, MAA sab kuch jane ke bad bhi aap aise bol rahi ho..

LORD QUEEN : beta magar ab to PRINCE apke sath hai na fir ye gussa q aur dekho zara is jagha ko jo pehle ye kaise ho gai thi aur ab dobar waisi ho gai jaise tum dono isse chhod keg aye the.

LORD QUEEN RAZEL ka dhiyan hatane me kamyab hui

RAZEL pure bagiche ko dekhne lagi aur khus hone lagi khus ho bhi q na usne aur PRINCE se isse badi mohabbat aur pyar se isme rang bhare the is bagiche me wo dono na jane kitne hi pyar bhare pal yahan bitaye` the..

RAZEL : magar theek kaise huwa MAA

LORD QUEEN : ye PRINCE ne kiya (UPDATE-60)

RAZEL : kya prince yahan aye the.

LORD QUEEN : kuch din pehle

RAZEL : MAA ab main yahan kabhi nhi ao gi aap pita ji ko bol dena.

LORD QUEEN : magar mera kya

RAZEL : apse milne aogi magar MEHAL me nhi isse bagiche me jab bhi mera ya apka dil kare hum mille ge…chalti hun MAA

RAZEL jane lagi magar tabhi pure gusse se firse patal ke

RAZEL : MAA apko kya laga ke apne mera gussa kam kar diya hai to sun lijiye pita ji se bol dena ab mere aur PRINCE ke raste me nhi aye aur rahi baat us ZEUS ki to wo samjhiye gaya ab usne do bar meri rooh pe war kiya hai ek jab usne usse bataya ke PRINCE kaise mar sakte han aur dosra mujhe pe war kiya.

LORD QUEEN : tumhe jo karna karo magar PRINCE ko abhi uske bare me nhi batana abhi unki wo yaaden unhe nhi mili hai baki sab mil gai hai.

RAZEL : theek hai main nhi batao gi magar pita ji se ek aur baat bol dena jab unhe (PRINCE ko) sab yaad aye to wo taiyar rahe.

Itna bolke RAZEL gayab ho jati hai.

END NEHA KE MIND ME
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MADHU(MAA) KE MIND ME:

MADHU(MAA) bhi ek bahut hi khubsurat se MEHAL ke gate ke samne khadi thi ek dam se wo gate open ho gaya aur wo uske andar chali gai andar pahunche unhone dekha ke samne bade shinghasan pe ek sakhs baith huwa hai aur unke shinghasan ke left aue right side teen teen log khade huwe jaise jaise ko kareeeb hoti ja rahi thi unhe sabke chere saaf saaf nazar arahe the unhone dekha ke shinghasan ke bilkul bazu me unke jaise hi dekhne wali ek khubsurat ladki khadi hai aur jab unki nazar shinghasan pe gai to wo shock ho gai q k shinghasan pe YASH baitha huwa tha…

Koi kuch nhi bol raha tha sab khamosh the tabhi SOPHIA apni jagha se nikal ke MADHu(mAA) ke samne agai.

SOPHIA : akhir meri dua kubool hui..

Itna bolke SOPHIA ne MADHU MAA ko gale laga liya aur SOPHIA roshini banke MADHU (MAA) ke andar samane lagi….jasie 2 ye ho raha tha MADHU (MAA) ko bhi sab yaad araha tha wo kon thi kya thi sab kuch firse unhe wo jung aur jo sapne unhe ate the wo sab unhe firse ek ke bad ek sab dekhne lage sab kuch yaad ane laga..

END MADHU(MAA) KE MIND ME
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Hum teeno ke sath ye sab chal raha tha fir NEHA aur MADHU(MAA) se jo roshini1 aur roshini2 jude the ab wo dhire2 kam honi lagi aur aur unka sharer zamin pe agaya. Aur roshini ek puri tarhase khatam ho gai.

Main abhi bhi roshini se ghera huwa tha…aur wo dono apni apni anakhen band kiye bas khade the. Mujhe pe jo stone se roshini arahi thi wo bhi ana band ho gai mere shere abhi bhi roshan tha fir wo mind stone dhire2 meri taraf bada aur mere sharer me sama gaya roshini bhi kam hone lagi aur kam aur kam aur kam aur ant me main abhi ab normal ho gaya magar meri abhi anakhen abhi band thi.

APURVA : papa ye sab chal kya raha hai.

SANJAY S : pata nhi beta aisa kuch ho ga boss me bataya nhi aur humme to EATHER chahiye tha magar ab to mind stone aur wo chadi bhi YASH ke sharer me sama gai…

APURVA : ye hai kon

Tabhi meri awaz ai..

MAIN : PRINCE OF UNIVERSE

Mere itna bolte hi APURVA aur SANJAY S shock se mujhe dekhne lage aur wo charon kale shaitan bhi.

SANJAY S : ye sab chal kya raha hai YASH

MAIN : maine tumse kaha tha na agar bata diya ke main kon hun tumhe yakin nhi hoga..isse khete hai saye aur maat….MAA

Mere itna bolte hi MAA aur NEHA ki anakhen khul gai aur dono hi meri taraf bade.

MAA do dekh sab ko firse shock laga NEHA ko abhi magar usse jaise hi yaad aya wo turant hi duad ke MAA ke gale lag gai…

MADHU(MAA) : PRINCESS RAZEL

NEHA : alag ho ke, SOPHI

NEHA ka itna bolna tha ke MADHU(MAA) NEHA ke samne jhukne lagi magar tabhi NEHA ne unhe utha ke firse gale laga liye

NEHA : ye aap kya kar rahi ho MAA

MADHU(MAA) : apke samman me jhuk rahi thi PRINCESS

NEHA : wo tab ki baat thi MAA magar ab aap ka udha mujhe se bhi bada hai aap PRINCE ki MAA ho aur MAA ka udha puri universe me sabse upar hai bhagwan ke bad.

Abhi dono baat hi kar rahe the ke RAPHAEL bhi samne aya NEHA ke samne jhuk gaya usse dekh NEHA aur MADHU(MAA) ke chere pe muskan agai…

NEHA : ab tumme bhi alag se bolna pade ga……….

NEHA bolte bolt eek dam se ruk gai…aur RAPHAEL sar utha ke usse dekh muskurane laga..

Hum sab bas un teeno ko dekh rahe the fir teeno mere taraf bade…NEHN mere muskurate huwe mere pass ai aur teeno mere samne apna sar jhuka diya aur apne ghuton pe baithne lage magar

MAIN : nhi ruk jaiye teeno

Teeno ruk gaye..NEHA teeno me agee thi aur uske right side MADHU(MAA) thi aur left side RAPHAEL tha…magar NEHA ke badle sabse pehle MAA ke pass gaya aur unhe gale laga liya…

MAIN : aaj ke bad is puri universe me har koi mere samman me jhuke ga magar aap nhi MAA balke mere sath puri universe apne samman me jhuke gai…

Itna boke main apne ghuthno pe ho gaya aur mere sath sath NEHA aur RAPHAEL bhi MADHU(MAA) ki anakheno me anso the aur turant ake mujhe uthke gale lag ke rone lagi…

MADHU(MAA) : itna samman wo bhi ek gulam ko.

MAIN : nhi apki gulami us waqt hi khatam ho gai thi jab apne mere liye apni jaan di aur ab jaisa NEHA ne kaha apka udha sabse upar hai to…

MADHU(MAA) ne turant mujhe alag ki aur mere muh pe hath rakh diya…

MADHU(MAA) : aap apna dharam nibhaye aur mujhe apna nibhane de…

MAIN : theek hai SOPHI MAA

APURVA : full gusse se, ye sab darama band karo tum log…

NEHA : ohhh hoooo tumhe to main bhul hi gai kya kheri thi thodi deer pehle le..

MADHU(MAA) : tumhe to badme dekhti hun

NEHA : han right MAA ek dam right kaha apne…

MAIN : ek mint ruk jao… RAPHAEL se apne doston ki taraf ishara karke, tum unhe theek karo aur apni shield me lelo q k ye dono aaj sunne wale nhi hai..

Mere aisa bolne se NEHA aur MADHU(MAA) ne meri taraf ghur ke dekha jabke RAPHAEL muskurate huwe mere doston ki taraf bad gaya.

VEER aur RIA becharon ko to kuch samjh hi nhi araha tha RAPHAEL ne pehle SIMI, ABHY aur VISHAL ko uski heling power se theek kar diya aur teeno ek dam se theek ho gaye aur uth ke baith gaye VEER aur RIA unhe hosh me dekh ke shock hui magar bechare bole to bole kya aur jake teeno se mile ab wo teeno bhi khade ho gaye the…. RAPHAEL ne apna hath ghumaya to unki taraf ek shield ban gai…jis dekh SIMI, VISHAL aur ABHY bhi shock huwe..

Unhe shock me dekh

VEER : shock laga na

TEENO : han laga

RIA : tumhe to abhi laga hum dono ka to jab se najane kitni bar shock pe shock lag rahe hai..

SIMi : ye sab baby ka kiya huwa hai

RIA : abhi bol diya hai tumne. MAM ke samne mat bolna warna pata nhi wo kya kare gi..

Magar abhi in sab pe ek bahut bada bomb phatna baki hai …jo RAPHAEL ne phoda…

RAPHAEL : wo kuch bhi kar sakti hai akhir soyam bhagwan ki beti jo hai…

Ispe mere dost…

SAB : shock me, kya kaha bhagwan ki beti.

RAPHAEL : han aur jo apke dost YASH hai wo khud bhi ek GOD hai PRINCE OF UNIVERSE sare GODS & GODDESS ke GOD…unke jaisa pure universe me koi nhi..

Mere pure doston ke muh khule ke khule reh gaye.

Apni kale zehar ko yun ek dam se khatam hota dekh

SANJAY S : ye kis tarha ki power hai..

MAIN : tum abhi bache ho beta..

Mere itna bolte hi SANJAY S ne mujhe ek punch mara jo mere sene pe laga aur udte huwe piche jane laga magar main gira nhi balke hawa me 1 fit upar khada ho gaya…

NEHA : MADHU(MAA) se APURVA ki taraf ishara karke, ye meri hai aap un charon (kale kapde wale shaitan) ko dekho.

MADHU(MAA) : theek hai PRINCESS RAZEL



MADHU(MAA) (SHOPI) FIGHT SCENE:

Itna bolke MADHU(MAA) ne apni jagha se ek dam chalang lagi aur hawa me ho gai.

Unka sharer ek dam roshan huwa aur jahan wo charon khade theek hunke samne jake giri ek dam se unke share se roshini ki urja nikli aur un charon se jake takrai…

Aur wo charon hawa me udte piche jake gire…

MADHU(MAA) ke sharer se roshini kam ho rahi thi jaise jaise wok am ho rahi thi MADU(MAA) dekhne lagi thi is waqt unke kapde lag the aur unke hath me bow and arrow. Arrow jo nili roshi ka bana huwa tha..kuch is tarha

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Wo charon ab khade ho gaye the aur apne hathon se kale rang ke gole bana rahe the..

MADHU(MAA) bas muskurate huwe unhe dekh rahi thi…

MADHU(MAA) : kya bachon jaisi harkaten kar rahe ho

Unme se ek bola

S1 : abhi pata chal jaye ga kon bacha hai kon nhi.

Itna bolke un charon ne ek sath MADHU(MAA) pe hamla kar diya..aur MADHU(MAA) ne bhi ek arrow apni bow se unki taraf chhod di aur theek uske piche ek aur.

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Charon gole MADHU(MAA) pe chhodne ke bad charon apna apna hath firse ghumane lage aur inke hathon ke bich abhi bas ie chota sa kala golo bane laga tha….

Charon gole MADHU(MAA) ki taraf bad rahe the aur unke dono teer ek ke piche ek agee bad rahe the...

Magar sab se samne wala teer me se ek dam se aur teen teer nikle

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Aur choron golon ki taraf badne lage…aur theek piche arahe teer me se bhi aur teen teer nikle..

Aur sab dosre ki taraf badne lage…

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Charon teer jale un charon golon se takraye aur ek dhamaka huwa aur charon gole khatam ho gaye sath me teer bhi magar jo char teen piche the unhe rasta mil gaya aur wo sidha teezi jake charon to lage unke sar unke dhad se alga ho gaye aur un charon me ek dhamaka huwa aur wo jal ke mar gaye..

MADHU(MAA) : kahan tha na abhi bache ho.

END MADHU(MAA) (SHOPI) FIGHT SCENE:

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NEHA (RAZEL) FIGHT SCENE:

MADHU(MAA) ke udte hi…

NEHA : APURVA se, tumne do badi galti ki hai ek meri jaan ko marne ki aur dusri mara apman karke..janti ho main kon hun

APURVA : kon ho tum

NEHA : is puri universe ke ke GOD PRINCE OF UNIVERSE ki patni aur sath me is pure jahan ko banane wale bhagwan ki beti…

APURVA : ho to main bhi kuch kam nhi mujhe SHAITANON ke raja ne kali taqaten di hai…samjhi

NEHA : abhi tumne kali taqaton ke asli malik ko dekhe kahan hai magr chinta mat karo…….

NEHA abhi itna hi boli thi ke APURVA turant apni speed se jake ko ek takkar marti hai NEHA ko….

Aur NEHA bhi udte huwe piche jane lagti hai magar wo khud ko sambhal ke upar hawa me ho jati hai jaise2 wo hawa me upar ho rahi thi uske kapde aur uska roop badal raha tha..uske sharer se agg ki lapten nikalne lagi thi aur uske piche PHOENIX NEHA ka pratik wo bada panchi bane laga tha…

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NEHA aise dekh sab koi shock huwe magar yeto bas shuruwat thi APURVA ne turan apne hath me ek kali talwar ka nirman kiya aur thoda jhukke ek dam apne apko agge kiya jisse jahan wo khadi thi us jagha pe halka gaddha ho gaya aur APURVA full speed se NEHA ki taraf badne lagi.

APURVA ko apni taraf ata dekh NEHA bas itmenan se apni jagha hawa me khadi rahi.

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APURVA NEHA ki taraf bad rahi thi jaise jaise wo NEHA ki taraf bad rahi thi waise2 NEHA ki agg aur bhi shurk hoti ja rahi thi aur uske sharer se APURVA ki taraf badne lagi thi..aur NEHA ke ek hath me talwar bhi ane lagi thi..

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APURVA jaise hi NEHA ke pass pahunchi NEHA se sharer se nikal rahi shurk agg ki ek dhar ne APURVA pe hamla kar diya magar APURVA ne apni talwar se us agg ko kat diya…

Jisse dekh NEHA ke honthon pe ek katil muskan agai…

Uske bade, ek ke bad ek agg ki dhar APURVA pe baras ne lagi magar wo har bad usse apni talwar se katte jati aur NEHA ke kareeb hote jati..ab wo NEHA ke kareeb pahunch gait hi aur NEHA pe apni talwar se lagatar war kar rahi thi NEHA bas uske war ko rokti magar khud uspe war nhi kar rahi thi.kuch deer NEHA APURVA ke sath aise hi khelti rahi aur isbar NEHA ne APURVA pe jawabi hamla diya jaise hi APURVA ne NEHA pe war kiya NEHA me uske war ko apni talwar se ruka aur apne dosre hath se APURVA ke sena pe ek bahut hi taqatwar punch mara. NEHA ka punch APURVA ko lagte hi ek halka sa dhamaka huwa aur APURVA teezi se ake dhadam se zamin pe giri gaddha karke

APURVA firse se khadi hui aur tezi se NEHA ki taraf badi apni talwar kiye huwe.aur jaise hi wo NEHA ke pass pahunchi NEHA ne apne talwar theek uski talwar ke samne kardi

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Dono ki talwar ki nok ek dosre ki nok se takrai magar NEHA ki talwar APURVA ki talwar ko chirte huwe nikalne lagi..aur APURVA ki talwar ke chote chote tukde hone lage…

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NEHA ki talwar APURVA ki talwar ko chirte huwe sidha uske hath pe lagi aur APURVA ke hath se khoon nikal gaya abhi wo kuch samjh pati ek dam se NEHa ka dosra hath aya aur APURVA ko uske gale se pakar diya aur talwar APURVA ke sena ko chirti huwe par ho gai..

NEHA : bahut ho gaya khelna ab tumhe marna hoga..tum jaiso ke liye mere pass time nhi hai..

Bechari APURVA kya soch ke ai thi aur uske sath kya ho gaya abhi wo kuch samjh pati..NEHA se sharer se agg nikal ke APURVA ke sharer ke par ho gai aur agg ek dam se kissi lohe ki tarha ho gai…

APURVA ke muh se khoon ki ek badi dhar nikli…

NEHA : ye thi meri apman ki saza aur ye hai meri jaan ko marne ki saza..

Itna bolke ek agg ki dhara NEHA se nikal ke thoda upar gai aur sidha ake APURVA ke chere se hoti huwe uske pairon me se nikal gai…

Huwa ye ke jab agg ki dhar NEHA se nikal rahi thi aur upar se niche arahi thi to APURVA apni band hoti anakhon se upar us agg ki dhar ko apne upar ate dekh rahi….

Jaise hi agg APURVA ke pairon me se par huwe NEHA me usse chhod diya q k APURVA ka pura sharer jal raha tha.

APURVA ka sharer sidha ake jahan TEAM thi uske samne gira aur ek dhamaka huwa..

Jisse sab ke sab seham gaye magar dhamake ka asar unpe nhi huwa

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NEHA bhi turant normal ho gai sath me MADHU(MAA) bhi..aur dono mere pass ane lage magar maine unhe rukne ka kaha aur apni jagha se udte huwe dono ke pass chala gaya (ABHI YASH waisa nhi ud sakta wo power abhi milne me time hai abhi wo sirf hawa ke zari ki ud sakta hai ya hawa me khada ho sakta hai). q k jab ye sab ho raha tha to SANJAY S aur MAIN ruk gaye the…SANJAY S palat ke sab dekh raha tha..

Ab MAIN wahan tha jaha NEHA aur MADHU(MAA) khade the aur humare left side meri tEAM aur RAPHAEL the aur mere samne SANJAY S kuch dur khada tha..

SANJAY S : shock me to tha magar khud ko normal bata ke, tune aaj mera sab kuch chin liya meri beti ko bhi mar diya..

MAIN : aree kuch deer pehle to tum bol rahe hum shaitan ho tum insane dekho to tum to hum insano se hi har gaye..aur kya kaha tha tumne kali shaktion ke malik se tumhe kali taqat mili hai..q sahi bolna na

SANJAY S : han

MAIN : tum jante ho puri universe me jo bhi white aur black energy hai uski main energy kiske pass…

SANJAY S : white ka to pata nhi magar black mere boss ke pass..

MAIN : galat

Itna bolke maine apni anakhen band ki aur kuch deer bad jab open ki ho meri anakhen puri lal thi aur aur mere sharer pe pure red color ka lebas gaya tha…

MAIN : EATHER meri kali taqaton me ek hai ye mujhe har chiz tabha karne me madad karta hai main tumhare sharer me bhete khoon ko bhi mehsos kar sakta hun…aur EATHER meri sare tatwa ki taqat aur abhi khatarnak bana deta hai….

SANJAY S ne mujhe pe war kiya magar tab tab uska punch mere face se kuch fasle pe ake ruk gaya…huwa ke uske hath ko hawa ne rok liya tha aur tabhi uske upar se hawa ki ek diwar ake takrai aur SANJAY S niche zamin pe ho gaya…

Magar tabhi SANJAY S hasne laga…aur uska sharer bada hone laga…aur meri hawa ki diwar ki tudte huwe woe k bade se danaw ne bada gaya..jisse dekh

NEHA : DEMOVAMP

Ek 100 fit jitna danav mere samne tha….tabhi uske mere upar war kiya apne hath maine kuch nhi kiya sirf apna ek hath agge kiya aur usse ek jhatke se apne right side kar diya. SANJAY S ka wo hath meri taraf bad raha tha wo ek jhatke se uske sharer se alag ho gaya..aur wo dhamd se niche huwa taklif ki wajha se…aur apne ek hath us jagha pe rakh liya jahan se dosra hath alag huwa tha aur khoon ki dhar bhe rahi thi..

Uska face mere face ke pass tha…

MAIN : maine kaha tha tumhe ke main khoon ko bhi mehsos kar sakta hun aur dekho gaya na tumhara ek hath…

Itna bolke maine apna hath agge kiya to SANJAY S ke khoon ki ek bund mere hath ke upar gai..aur maine apne hath ko apne chere ke samne kiya….

MAIN : dekh kaise tumhara hi khoon tumhe khatam karta hai…

Itna bolke maine firse apna hath SANJAY S ke mathe pe rakh diya…mere aisa karte hi SANJAY S ki anakhen bahar ko nikalne lagi aur uski body ka pura khoon andar se jalne laga q k maine uske sharer ke ek ek khoon ke katre me agg bhar di thi aur bahar se uske sharer ko waha me gheer liya puri tarha se aur uske sharer ko bahar se dabane lagi thi aur agg andar se jalane lagi thi….

Bas kuch second ke bad ek dhamaka huwa hawa ke andar aur sab kuch khatam ho gaya…

Ye manzar dekh wahan maujood har koi daar gaya tha…kissi ki himmat nhi thi mere pass ane ki…magar MAA ne himmat ki aur mere pass ake mere khande pe apna hath rakha main samjha gaya ke ye MAA hai maine turant apne aap ko normal kiya aur palat gaya..

RAPHAEL aur mere dost bhi shield se bahar agaye the….magar RAPHAEL ne ek galti kar di..

RAPHAEL : humme turant jung me shamil hona chahiye GOD ZEUS…..

Bas itni si galti aur NEHA ka para chad gaya aur usne RAPHAEL itna zordar punch mara ke wo jake sidha pillaron ko todte huwe base ki akhiri diwar se tak raya….

NEHA : full gusse se, kharab dar jo uska naam mere samne liya

aur wo turant palat ke jaise hi apna hath ghumane wali thi portal open karne ke liye main uske samne khada ho gaya…

NEHA : gusse se, aap mere samne se hat jaiye PRINCE usse aaj marna hoga.

Maine turant usse gale laga liya..

MAIN : beshak usse mar dena RAZI (PYAR SE) magar abhi humare doston ko humari zarurat hai..aur sath me AYREEN ko.

NEHA ka gussa ek dam se khatam ho gaya….aaj wo puri hui aaj usse sab kuch mila gaya…

NEHA : theek hai magar aap bichme nhi aye ge main bol deti hun..

MAIN : theek hai magar aaj nhi fir kabhi tum ZEUS se lad lena.

NEHA : theek hai aaj sirf apki wajha se…

RAPHAEL bhi humare pass agaya tha…

NEHA : sorry RAPHAEL..magar aaj ke bad mere samne uska naam mat lena koi bhi..

RAPHAEL : wo bhi abhi jung me shamil hai tab kya karo gi aap

NEHA : aaj nhi maine PRINCE se wada kiya.

RAPHAEL : to chale.

MADHU(MAA) : han chalo sab ko dekh bahut din ho gaya..

NEHA : din nhi MAA arsa ho gaya hai..

MAIN apni team ke pass jake…jo thoda dare huwe lag rahe thi.

MAIN : doston daro nhi yahan tum sabne job hi dekha hai aur suna hai main sab batao ga magar bhi waqt nhi hai abhi mujhe apne purane doston ki madad ki ke liye jana hai…ye sab nipta ke bad me baat karte hai RAPHAEL tumhe ghar2 pahuncha dega..theek hai.

Sab ne bas han me sar hila diya..

MAIN : RAPHAEL se, inhe pahuncha ke jung me pahunch jana aur tumhe pata hai yahan kya karke jana hai.

RAPHAEL : ji

Itna bolke main sabse kuch dur jake khada huwa aur apne dono hath samne karke fir jhatke se alag kiya mere aisa karne se mera sharer fir ek bar roshini se bhar gaya aur mere sharer se nikal rahi urja charon dishaon me phelne lagi(kahan kahan gai usse kya huwa agge pata chale ga).

Jab roshini kam hai to main apne asli roop me tha

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Ab wahan sab ke sab apne ghuthno pe ho gaye meri team bhi..

MAIN : sab khade ho jaiye…sab khade ho gaye….MAIN : RAPHAEL jo kaha hai wo karo..MAA aap jung me pahuncho…PRINCESS aap aur mujhe kahin jana hai abhi…

Fir hum sab apni apni jagha nikal gaye….

END SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (PRESENT TIME 02:15 AM)

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AB JAKE DONO TIME SAME HUWA HAI

SCENE TUFO AUR ELVES/ PHOENIX OF PRINCE KA (PRESENT TIME 02:15 AM

Yahan jung ab bhi jari thi magar har kissi kin hi ho rahi thi han magar ab samne wali sena bhari pad rahi thi…aur isske sath hi GOD TYPHON (GT) ne us talwar ka istemal kiya usse apne hath me leke sidha zamin pe de mara us talwar ki taqat + TESSERACT + SAPCE STONE ki tarqat ne wo urja paida ki ke LORD ELROND, LORD THRANDUIL, HALDIR, HAMA, SAPHIRA, ATHENA, NAILA aur dono GOD ko hila ke rakh diya…

Magar inke alawa kisiko kuch nhi huwa…aur wo talwar turant GT ke hath se gayab ho gai…

Ye sab ab zamin pe pade the…kuch deer bad sab khade huwe sab ki halat kharab thi yahan tak ke dono sabse shaktishali GODS ki bhi…

Tabhi asman se hazaron ki tadad me teer ane lage….aur un kale armor walon pe girne lage…

Teer ko dekh sab ke muh se srif ek hi naam nikla

SAB : SOPHIYA

Aur ek roshini ke sath hawa me MADHU(MAA) sab ko dekhi…firse unhone apni Kaman se teer chhode jinhone jake sab ki taraf ek dhera bana diya aur sab ko apne andar le liya…

Aur MADHU(MAA) jake sabke samne khadi ho gai…NAILA aur SAPHIRA jaisi hi MADHU(MAA) uske samne ai duad ke jake unke gale lag gai dono ki dono…

MADHU(MAA) ko SOPHIYA likhun ga abhi..

SOPHIYA : kaise ho doston..

Dono laga hoke

NAILA : tum zinda thi aur humme bataya nhi

SOPHIYA : nhi mera dosra jaman huwa hai…

SAPHIRA : kya

SOPHIYA : han

Abhi ye sab baat hi kar rahe the RAPHAEL abi wahan agaya…usse dekh sab ko aur bhi shock laga q k RAPHAEL me kaha tha LORD KING ne usse jung me ane se mana kiya hai…

Abhi sab shock me the hi k eek dam se bahut teez roshini pure jung ke maidan me phel gai…..

Aur jab wo kam hui to sab ko bada shock laga q k ek bahut badi sena hawa me khadi thi…jiske sainik aise the.

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(Yehi wo pal tha jab AYREEN ki qaid me dhamaka huwa tha…aur uske sharer se ek ring nikal ke gayab hui thi….)

Ye sena kiski hai ye sab ko pata tha aur jo roshini is sena ke samne khadi thi unhe lagbhag pata chal gaya tha ke ye dono kon hai aur jaise hi roshini khatam aur to dono sab ko saaf naraz ane lage…ye dono PRINCE OF UnIVERSE aur PRINCESS RAZEL the…

Jinhe dekh ek bar fir sab apne ghuthno pe ho gaye…sirf mukhalif ki sena ko chhod ke..

GOD TYPHON (GT), GOD MONTHUS (GM) & GODDESS HAIRA (GH) to bas anakhen padke shock me dekh rahe the…jabke TUFO ye sab kya ho raha hai samjhni kosish kar raha tha..

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