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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

STORY AAP KO KAISI LAG RAHI HAI

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Main wahan se nikal ke highway pe agaya aur full speed me city se bahar nikal gaya….aaj mujhe unki kahi har ek baat kissi sui ki tarha lag rahi thi jo mere dil ko channi kar rahi thi aaj mujhe khud pe bahut gussa araha tha ke unlogone mere papa aur mujhe pe jaan chirakne wali meri maa pe itna kuch bola aur main kuch bhi nhi kar paya…….yehi sab sochte huwe main car ko road side kiya aur car se utar ke bahar aya aaj mere sath ye asman bhi roo raha tha fir maine ek cigarette nikali aur pine laga aur apni purani yaadon me khone laga….


tabhi hi mera phone baja maine dekha to mom ka phone tha…


MAIN : ji maa


MAA(MADHU) : kya kar raha hai mera beta aur aaj aap meeting me bhi nhi gaye mujhe mahin ka call aya tha..


MAIN : ji maa abhi to hospital se nikla hun..


MAA(MADHU) : thoda shock me, kya hospital se kya huwa hai apko roko main bhi yahan se nikalti hun..


MAIN : aree2 maa mujhe kuch nhi huwa hai fir main neha ke bare me maa ko bata deta hun magar wahan jo bhi huwa wo nhi batata hun…..


Jab maa ko pata laga ke maine neha ko unka assistant bataya hai to wo gusse se mujhe boli…


MAA(MADHU) : ye sab kya hai beta aapne mujhe kaha ke aap simple rehna chahate ho jaisa pehle rehte the maine kuch nhi kaha magar beta apne apko itna bhi niche nhi girao ke log apki pehchan hi bhol jaye..aap apni sadgi sada kayam rakho magar khud ko niche gira ke nhi..aap samjh rahe hona meri baat..


MAIN : ji maa main samjh gaya…aaj ke bad aisa do bara kabhi nhi hoga maa…


MAA(MADHU) : mera pyara beta acha kal colg jana hai na to wahan bhi aisa kuch mat karna…


MAIN : ji maa


MAA(MADHU) : chalo theek hai apna khayal rakhna milti hun…


MAIN : ji maa aap bhi bye tc..


MAA(MADHU) : bye beta..


Aur call cut ho jata hai…fir main ghar nikal jata hun..




Thoda piche : Mere jane ke bad in hospital


Dekha apne abhi POOJA itna hi boli thi ke neha zorse chalke…


NEHA : bas bahut huwa ye sab ab koi kuch nhi bole ga…iske agge..


NEHA MAA : magar beta..


NEHA : ab bas bhi karo mom, aap to badi hai apko to sochna chahiye tha magar nhi aap bhi unke sath hogai..aur us bechare ko kya2 suna diya…kabhi2 aap bhi kuch ziyada hi bol jati ho….


NEHA MAA : num anakhonse, beta jabse wo hadsa huwa hai…


NEHA aur baki se sab ek sath : kaisa hadsa bua mom mummy.


Tabhi NEHA ki maa ko yaad aya ke unke muh se kuch aisa nikal gaya hai jo unhe nhi bolna chahiye tha..aur wo turant apni baat ghuma deti hai..


NEHA ki MAA : acha sonu tum sab ghar chale jao main yahan neha ke sath rokti hun..abhi ye baat ho hi rahi thi ke ek admi andar aya…ye koi aur nhi balke neha ke papa the aur jake seedha neha ke samne khade ho ke bole..


NEHA PAPA : ab kaisi tabiyat hai beta aur kya huwa tha apko..


NEHA : main theek hun papa bas heart me achanak dard huwa…


NEHA PAPA : kyaaaa fir wo uthte hai aur seedha doctor ke cabin me jate hai…


NEHA PAPA : doctor se, kya report hai doctor meri beti ki…


DOCTOR : aye2 MR.KHURANA bethiye..


NEHA PAPA : bethte hi, boliye doctor..


DOCTOR : problem hi to samjh nhi arahi hai usko howa kya hai bas itna hi pata laga ke uska dil aam insanon ke mukable bahut tezi se dharakta hai mano 100 zindagi ke barabar. magar ye kabhi2 hi hota hai aur jab ye hota hai tab hi uska dil kabu se bahar ho jata hai aur usko teez jalan hoti hai… magar ajeeb baat ye hai ke wo jaldi hi normal bhi ho jati hai magar ye aaj pehli bar nhi huwa hai ye neha ko pehle bhi kai bar ho chukka hai.


NEHA PAPA : doctor isse koi agge jake badi problem na ho jaye….


DOCTOR : shayad ho bhi sakta hai abhi kuch khe nahi sakte magar apko uska dhiyan rakhna ho ga.


Abhi ye baat hi kar rahe the ke poonam daudti hui ai..


POONAM : doctor uncle please jaldi chaliye didi ko firse dard ho raha hai…


Neha ko abhi abhi ye dard firse ho raha tha aur wo bechain bhi ho rahi thi…doctor bhi turant usko check kiya aur is bar unhone usse neend ka injection bhi diya…


Doctor : mr. khurana se, dekha abhi apne ye wohi tha jo main apko bol raha tha..ab isse aaj raat yahan rukna ho ga jo maine injection lagaya hai usse ye kal hi uthi gi..


NEHA PAPA : theek hai doctor


Fir doctor chale jate hai..to NEHA PAPA un ladkion se


NEHA PAPA : beta ab aap log ghar chale jao main aur tumhari bua yahan rukte hai aur aise bhi ka lap logon ko colg bhi jana hai..


POONAM : ji phupaji..


Fir sab chale jate hai..uske baad NEHA PAPA apni patni se


NEHA PAPA : ye sab kya hai SHEJAL doctor bol rahe the ke NEHA ko ye dard bahut pehle se ho raha hai aur tumne mujhe bataya bhi nhi…


NEHA MAA : kya karti apki pyari ne mujhe kasam di thi ke papa ko kuch bhi nhi batana…


NEHA PAPA : wo to bachi thi magar tumhe to mujhe batana tha


NEHA MAA : han mujhe aap maaf kar gijiye mujhse galti ho gai hai….


NEHA PAPA : chalo koi baat nhi ab main dekh loga filhal tum neha ka khayal rakho usko ziyada tension mat lene dena..


NEHA MAA : doctor ne kya bola..


NEHA PAPA : ye hi ke bas uska dhiyan rakhna fir jo kuch bhi doctor ne bola sab bata diya..


NEHA MAA : maine bhi jitne doctors ko dekhaya sabne yehi bola same ab hum kya kere ge meri bachi ko na jane kiski nazar lag gai hai…


NEHA PAPA : kuch nhi ho ga tum tension mat lo…




In Present Time:


Main ghar pahunchke apne room me chala gaya aur aaj ke bare me sochne laga hi tha ke mera mobile firse baja..dekha to ROHIT ka call tha..


Mere call uthate hi ROHIT bola


ROHIT : sale tu kahan hai aaj na mila na koi call ki..


MAIN : aree bhai thoda aramse aaj main office gaya tha aur in short neha ke bare me bataya jisse sunke..


ROHIT : beta sirf hospital hi choodke aya na ke kuch aur bhi choodke aya hai…


MAIN : kya bolna chahata hai tu..


ROHIT : yehi ke dil to nhi choodke aya hai uske pass..


MAIN : kya tu bhi kuch bhi bolta hai maine to bas uski help hi ki thi…


ROHIT : han2 beta sab aise hi bolte hai aur bad me fir pata lagta hai..love story ban rahi hai


MAIN : kuch bhi bolta hai acha bata q phone kiya..


ROHIT : bhai kalse colg jana hai to main kya bolta hun aaj kuch dhamal karte hai fir kalse to padai hi padai karni hai…


MAIN : tu padta bhi hai aur bol to aise raha hai jaise kalse ghar ke bahar hi nhi nikle ga…


ROHIT : tu chal raha hai ke nhi bas ye bata…


MAIN : theek hai chalte hai..aaja mujhe lene a aur waise bhi aaj ghar pe koi nhi hai.


ROHIT : kya aunty bahar gai hai..


MAIN : han shayad kal raat ya fir parson aigi…


ROHIT : chal theek hai ata hun…


Abhi koi 7 pm ho raha tha main andar jake fresh huwa aur kapde change kiye koi 20 mint me hi rohit mere ghar pe tha…aur mujhe dekhke shock ho gaya tha…


Maine ye dress pehni hui thi..


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ROHIT : kya baat hai bhai ek hi mulakat me itna change agaya..


MAIN : aisa nhi lag raha tu kuch ziyada hi bol raha hai…


ROHIT : nhi bhai kal tak to tu bol raha tha mujhe sadgi pasand hai aur aaj ye ek hi din me tera nature kaise change ho gaya hai..


MAIN : ab mujhe thodi pata tha ke yahan ke log sadgi ko kapde se tulte hai aur waise bhi maine ye thodi bolta tha ke mujhe ye kapde pasand nhi..


ROHIT : acha hai aaj to ladkiyan gai kamse kya dekh raha mera bhai..


MAIN : q main pehle acha nhi dekhta tha kya


ROHIT : nhiiii


aur ye bolke rohit bhagne laga…aise hi masti karte huwe hum rohit ki car se nikal gaye…


MAIN : to aaj kahan jane ka program hai..


ROHIT : wahin jahan kal gaye thi…


MAIN : nhi wahan nhi jana hai aaj kahin aur chalte hai..


ROHIT : q kal wali ladki se dar gaya…


MAIN : main kissi se nhi darta bas apne aap se mujhe dar lagta hai..


ROHIT : apne aap se tera kya matlab hai..


MAIN : kuch nhi…


ROHIT : bhai baat kya hai tu kal bhi bol raha tha ke main abhi tujhe theek se janta nhi aur aaj bhi ye bala bhai itna suspense q bana raha hai job hi hai bol de…


Main baat ko badal ke


MAIN : acha chal theek hai chal wahin chalte hai…..


Fir main aur rohit kal wali hi club gaye…


Aaj yahan kuch ziyada hi beehd thi magar humme ek table mil hi gai magar aaj mera maan table pe bethne ka nhi tha to hum jake dance flour ke side me jo jagha hoti hai wahan khade ho gaye…kal jab main yahan aya tha to koi mujhe ziyada notice nhi kar raha tha magar aaj ladkiyan mujhe ghoor2 ke dekh rahi thi aur kuch to ahen bhi bar rahi thi…


Ladki1 : yaar wo ROHIT ke sath wo ladka kon hai kya handsome dekh raha hai yaar.


Ladki2: pata nhi yaar kon hai pehle kabhi nhi dekha usse.


Ladki1: yaar uski nili anakhen kya kehar dha rahi hai..


Ladki2 : anakhen chood yaar bande ki body dekh kya bana rakhi hai


Ladki1: yaar chalna chalke dosti karte hai


Ladki2: han2 chal


aur wo dono ladkiyan humare pass ajati hai..


ladki2: hey rohit kya hal hai..


ROHIT : hi priyanka main theek hun..ladki1 se, hi jasmine aur inse milo mere taraf ishara karke ye hai mere bachpan ka dost YASH..


Fir main bhi dono ko hi bolta hun… priyanka ka to theek hai magar jasmine mujhe kuch lag tarike se dekh rahi thi pata nhi q..


ROHIT : to kal se colg


Dono : han


Priyanka : to rohit konse colg me admission liya hai..


ROHIT : xxx college me


Jasmine : same here, aur meri taraf ishara karke aur apne bhi


MAIN : ji main bhi same colg me hun..


Jasmine : mujhe se, kis branch me


MAIN : IT


Jasmine : same yaar waise apne 12 kahan se kiya hai..


Main kuch bolta tabhi ROHIT bhai bol pade


ROHIT : London se kiya hai..


Jasmine : wow yaar to yahan ki life aur wahan ki life me kya fark laga…


MAIN : abhi to ye batana muskil hai main abhi to aya hun magar ek baat hai apna ghar ghar ho to hai..


Jasmine : kya baat hai..kya hum dost ban sakte hai..itna bolke apna hath agge badadiya..



Maine bhi usse hath milaya aur fir Priyanka se bhi.. hum charo milke sath me dinner bhi kiya aur 11:00 pm ko hum ghar keliye nikal gaye..




Time same evening koi 6:00 -7:00 ke bech: In Jungle..


Abhi sab apas me baat hi karahe the ke, sab ke wireless pe ek tez sound howa aur jab wo khatam huwa to in panchon logo ki ruh kamp gai wo awaz sunke





Awaz : mission ke kya update hai..


Admi1 : ji sir sab plan ke mutabik chal raha hai..


Awaz : mujhe ye sab jaldi khatam chahiye aur raat ko report bejdena


Admi1 : ji bilkul sir


Aur wo awaz band ho jati hai…


Ladki1 : sir ye mission jaldi khatam karte warna unka para high ho jaye ga..


Admi1 : theek hai admi2 se tum kaha tak pahunche ho..


Admi2 : abhi main 2 mint ki duri pe hun….


Admi1 : ladki2 se, admi2 tumhare pass araha hai


Ladki2 : lock sir


Thodi deer me jab conform ho gaya ke ladki2 aur admi2 ne apni position leli hai admi1 ne mission start countdown start kiya…


Admi1 : 10987654321 start





Fir koi raat ke 10 baje inka mission complete huwa…aur sab base ke liye rawana ho gaye…





In present Time:


Main aramse so raha tha tab hi mujhe sapne me ek angar se lipta huwa gate dekh aur tab hi ek dhamaka huwa aur ek aisa dekhne wala shaksh samne aya






Aur ek bahut hi khatarnak hassi hasne laga aur bola main azad ho gaya….


Iske sath hi main sapne se jaga mera pura sharer pasine se bhiga huwa tha….tab hi mere room me teez roshini hui...






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awesome update
ye mission par non hi
Laura hi hero ko pahchan Milne wali hi
bhai kal ka college scene badiya hona chaiye
keep posting jabardast like it
 

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arrey bhai bhai bhai bhai
awesome one bhai ji

update review

YASH ko ye baat toh samjh aa gyi ki simple rehne aur simple dikhne mai frk hai
chahen vo simple na dikhe but simple toh reh hi skta hai isliye usse ye smjhna bhi jroori tha nice one

londiya toh bhag ke aa gyi ab kl unn baki ki ldki mtlb NEHA ki sisters ka reaction dekhna hai jb unki jlegi toh sukoon toh aaega hi

jo ajaad hua koi acha aadmi toh nhi lg rha but still confermation nhi hai

ab YASH ko pta chle ki vo kon hai kya hai kyun hai
toh mja hi aa jayega

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