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Yar bohat he ala . Bohat shidat say intzar rahy ga agy ka kiya hota hai un larkiyo k sat . I am still waiting for next ????????????
Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)
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Brilliant update writer sahab..... Bahot achhe likh rahe hai aap..... Keep it upUPDATE-26
DOSTON APKE ITNE PYAR KE LIYE AUR ITNA WAIT KARNE KE LIYE BAHUT2 SHUKRIYA
AUR APPKI DUAON SE AB THEEK HUN
Next (Day 3 at 11 am)
In Hospital
Neha bed pe tek lagye bethi is waqt uski anakhen band thi aur wo kissi soch me gum thi…..
Neha apne mann me : ye mujhe kya ho raha kal se reh2 ke mujhe q bar2 yash ki yaad a rahi q unka wo masoom chera meri nazron ke samne bar2 araha.…..q meri nazren bas unko hi talash rhi hai jab bhi koi ata hai mujhe aisa q lagta hai ke wo aye heyyyyy bagwanji ye mujhe kya ho raha hai aisa pehle kabhi bhi mere sath nhi huwa kya mujhe unse pyar to nhi ho raha hai nhi2 ek hi mulakat me ye kaise ho sakta hai main to unko theek se janti bhi nhi bas kal hi to pehli bar mili thi wo bhi bas kuch hi deer ke liye…..agar ye pyar nhi hai to fir q mera dil bechain hai unke jane ke bad se……..unki wo nili anakhe kya jadu hai unme kal jab bhi mujhe dekhti to mujhe aisa q lagta ke mere puri ruh me wo mohabbat bhar rahi ho…..aur2 jab wo room me aye aur mujhe dekh rahe the aur maine kuch deer bad jab apni anakh kholke unke aise dekhne pe maine bola “aise na dekho warna tumhe mujhse pyar ho jayega” tab wo kaise Sharma gaye the heeeeeeeee itna cute lag rahe the tab wo……hey222 bhagwammjiii please bataiye mujhe kya sachme pyar ho gaya hai…….aur apne dil pe hath rakhke muskura deti hai.
Neha ke face pe ye muskan abhi badi dilkhas lag rahi thi…magar ye muskan ziyada deer nhi reh pai q k kal jo uski mom aur behno ne kya wo usse yaad agaya..ye yaad ate hi jaise neha ko apne pure wajud me ghabrahat hone lagi..mano jaise koi chiz badi mushkil se mili ho aur koi tabhi usse chinle…
wo kya sochte ho ge mere bare me aur meri mom aur behno ke bare me kal kya kuch nhi kaha unse magar wo kya insan the ke uff tak nhi bola ab kya main kabhi usse mil sakon gi kya wo mere bare me bhi yehi sochte hoge jaie meri mom aur behno ke bare me nhi2 mujhe unse milke maafi mangni hai meri family ki taraf se. mujhe ye to pata tha ke meri behne thodi ghamandi hai magar ye nhi kabhi nhi socha tha ke wo is hadtak ja sakti hai…
tabhi neha fir muskura di jaise usse kuch aur yaad aya ho..
hum dono bhi to pagalon jaisi harkat kar rahe the jab POONAM aur SUPRIYA humse sawal kar rahe the…
main apna sir jhukaye bethi thi jaise sachme hum dono date pe gaye ho aur unhone hume pakad liya ho aur wo to aise jawab de rahe the unke sawalon ka jaise mera hath mangne aye ho…pagal …itna bol neha has deti hai…
tabhi hi neha ka mann bola tu bhi to pagal se kam nhi
NEHA : kya matlab hai tumhara
MANN : ye hi ke jab sab uspe lizam laga rahe the ke wo tumhe phasa raha hai tab to tum bada bol rahi thi “Aisa Kuch bhi nhi”.
NEHA : han to main koi jhoot thodi na boli wo mujhe phasa thodi rahe the…
MANN : chal jaaaaaaaaaaaaaa na jhooti phasa to usne tujhe tab hi liya tha jab tune usse pehli bar dekha tha…
NEHA : han to kya mom aur behnno ke samne ye bol deti ke usne mujhe nhi main khud hi phas gai hun uske pyaaaaa……itna bol neha khamosh ho jati hai..
MANN : bol2 ruk q rahi ho
NEHA : yaar to chup ho ja samjh na….itna bol neha Sharma jati hai
MANN : heyyyy tera ye sharmana zara sambhal ke kahin apke unhone dekh liya to…
NEHA : bas chup ek dam iske age kuch nhi bol plzzzzzz
MANN:
Ishq bhi kyaaaaaaaaaaaa cheez haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
ismein hosh rehtaaaaaaaa nahi
Yeh toh hai silsila chain-o-sukun ka
dil ke junoon ka afareennnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Aap ki khatir mere dil ka jahaan hain haazir
Apne saare armaan
Apne saare armaan
Kar du main zaahir
Ye sun ke neha bas muskura ke reh gai…
Ji han doston NEHA is main lead Heroin in this Story.
Abhi neha apni sochon me gum thi ke tab hi neha ki mom me ai
NEHA MAA : beta chalo humne ghar ke liye nikal na hai aap ko discharge mil gaya hai…
Itna bolke neha ki maa saman pack karne me laggi koi 10 mint bad jab wo saman leke wapas neha ke taraf palti to dekha neha abhi bhi waise hi bethi hai uski anakh abhi bhi band hai…neha mom neha ke pass jake usko kandhe se hilaya tab jake neha ko hosh aya wo thoda hadbada gai ji maa kya kaha apne….
NEHA MOM : beta kahan khoi hui ho subha se aise hi kar rahi ho reh2 ke na jane kin sochon me gum ho jati ho beta baat kya…
NEHA : kuch nhi mom bas aise hi…
NEHA MOM : chalo chalte hai tumhare papa bahaar car me wait kar rahe hai…
Fir dono hospital se nikal jate hai car me abhi neha apni sochon me gum thi usse ye bhi pata nhi chala ke kab ghar aya isbar bhi neha ki mom ne usse pucha kya huwa to neha ne isbar bhi nhi kuch nhi…
Jab ye log ghar me pahunche to jaise hi gate khula ek ladki daud ke ai aur neha ke gale lag gai….
NEHA MOM : beta shivani tu kab ai..gaon se
Shivani neha se alag hote huwe..
SHIVANI : bas abhi bua main to kal hi ajati magar mom ne ane nhi diya….ab kaisi tabiyat hai di aap ki
NEHA : main theek hun shivani
Fir sab andar chale jate hai shivani neha ko uske room me le jati hai….
SHIVANI : di ye apne theek nhi kiya hum sabse itni badi baat chupai…khas kar mujhe se main to apki besti hun na….itna bol ke shivani apna muh phir leti hai…jhoot mhoot ka
NEHA : turant usko apni taraf ghuma ke aur apne dono kan pakad ke, sorry shiv ……neha ne ye itne pyar aur masomiyat se bola ke shivani ne turant neha ko gale laga liya….
Shivani : koi bata nhi di main to mazak kar rahi thi, chalo aap aram karo main ati hun
Itna bol shivani jane lagi to neha ne uska hath pakad liya aur boli…
NEHA : kahin mat jaa shiv mere pass beth
Shivani bhi neha ke pas beth jati hai…dono yahan wahan ke baton me lag jate hai magar neha kal jo bhi huwa wo shivani ko nhi batati..
Baaton2 me neha ko ye bhi pata chala ke kal uske nana nani aur teeno mama aur mami aur dosre cousin bhi usse milne ane wale hai..
Jisse sunke neha bahut khus hoti hai….fir kya tha jab tak lunch ke time neha ki mom ne ake dono ko bolaya nhi tab tak dono lage rahe apni baton me…
In college : Madhu ko Phone karne ke bad
SANJANA : POONAM se, kya kaha Mrs. Rajput ne…..thodi sehmi awaz se
POONAM : unhone to kuch kaha hi nhi itna sunke ke YASH college se kafi gusse me gaya hai phone kat diya….
POOJA : di jane dona kuch nhi kar sakta wo
POOJA ki baat me SUPRIYA bhi shamil ho gai…..
SUPRIYA : di pooja sahi bol rahi hai ab humare parents bhi koi road chalte nhi hai
POONAM : gusse se, chup raho tum dono subha se dono kuch ziyada hi bol rahi ho.
SUPRIYA : di humme kuch bolne se pehle aap apne apko bhi dekhlo kal aapne bhi ko kasar nhi chodi thi usse ke bare me kuch bolne me samjhi aap..
Ispe POONAM bhi khamosh ho jati hai…
ROHIT, Priyanka aur Jasmine abhi bhi wahin the…tab Jasmine boli
Jasmine : kal se aap logon ka kya matlab hai..kya aap logn aaj se pehle yash ko jante ho…
Ye sunke neha ki sab behne ek dosre ko dekh rahe the kea b kya bole table POONAM ne hi bolna theek samjha
Fir POONAM ne sab bataya…jisse sunke teenon ke muh khule ke khule reh gaye
Sab sun eke bad jasmine
Jasmine : wah kya baat hai kya khub sila diya hai apne yash ki insaniyat ka aaj to unke liye mere dil me aur bhi izzat bad gai hai itni si umar me ye bardasht karne ki taqat…..
Priyanka : tum in logon se baat hi q rahe hai jin hone humre dost ke sath aisa kiya hai agar pehle pata hota to inke help bhi nhi karte chalo chalte hai jahan humre dost ki izzat nhi wahan mujhe rukna bhi pasand nhi…itna bol
Priyanka jasmine ka hath pakad ke uthaya aur jane lagi jab usne dekha rohit abhi wahin hai to usne rohit ko gusse se bola
Priyanka : rohit tu wahan kya kar raha hai chal..
ROHIT : araha hun..
Thoda ruk ke rohit fir bola….
ROHIT : un sab se, dekh rahe ho tum log ye dono ko. ye YASH ki sirf kal hi dost bani hai to aisa react kar rahi hai…..socho jab YASH ki sabse best friend jo YASH ko sab se ziyada apna manti hai usse pata chale ga to kya hoga…
POOJA : gusse se, tum humme dara rahe ho jisko jo karna hai karle…
ROHIT : dara nhi raha bata raha hun…aur chaho to sanjana aur komal se puch lo…
sanjana aur komal ek sath : tumhara matlab kya hai rohit..
ROHIT : tum logon ne xxx jr. college se 12th kiya hai na..
KOMAL : han to isme kya hai..
ROHIT : SHANAYA ko to jante ho na tum dono..
SHANAYA ka naam sun ke unhe mano bada jhatka laga ho….
Itna bol ke rohit bhi uth ke nikal jata hai….ab bas ye behne hi reh gait hi
POOJA : ye sala abhi kya bol gaya aur Shanaya kon hai…
Sanjana : bas itna janlo uska aur hamara 36 hai…
KOMAL : yaar di sach bolon humne bada wala pangga le liya hai….
SUPRIYA : komal to dar mat na wo YASH humara kuch nhi kar sakta hai aur na hi wo shanaya abhi hummari gang ke baki ke member shamil hone baki hai…
POONAM : SUPRIYA ab bas bhi kar yaar yahan pehle hi wo dhamki deke gaya hai aur tum ho ke…agar papa aur phupaji ke sath kuch bhi huwa to dekh lena tum dono main tumhare sath kya karti hun….
POOJA : di…
POONAM : bahut gusse me bas bhi karo yaar tujhe bahut padi thi na uske mom dad ke bare me bolne ki aree kuch aur bol deti magar nhi isme na tumhari aur na hi meri galti hai ghar walon ke pyar aur daulat ne hi humme ghamandi bana diya hai…
Main ab bhi tum dono se bol rahi hun agar family ko kuch howa to tum dono apni kher hi mano fir…
Sab shant ho gaye….bas apni2 sochon me gum the ke….fir kuch deer bad sab ghar ke liye nikal gaye q k aaj ke kand ke bad kisika bhi mann me class attend karne ka nhi huwa…
In hero side:
Main college se bahut gusse me nikal aaj mujhe aisa lag raha tha ke aaj is pure sehar ko aag laga don jime basne wale log meri mom dad ke bare me ye bolte hai……main bahut kosish kar raha tha apne gusse ko shant karne ke liye magar mere hath steering pe kaste hi ja rahe the..
Tab hi mujhe ek tapdi dekhi maine turant apni gadi wahan roki aur jake gusse se ek cigarette do mujhe..wo tapdi wala bhi mujhe aise dekha…abhi meri anakhen puri gusse se lal
Maine cigarette jalai aur ek khassh liya to gussa thoda kam huwa….magar shayad upar wale ko ye manzur nhi tha
Kyun ke mere samne se ek car nikli jo kafi speed me thi aur jab wo mujhe se thoda agge hui to uske window se ek ladki ka sar bahar nikla aur wo zorse…
LADKI : please koi mujhe bachao help me….
Mera jo gussa abhi shant ho raha tha usko hawa mil gi main turant hi apni car me beth aur car full speed me drifting karke ghumai q k main abhi rod ke right side tha..
Main wrong side se car badi di samne se ane wali gadiyon ko overtake karte huwe main agge bad raha tha ye nazara dekhne layak tha main ek side se samne ane wali gadi ko jaise takeover karta tabhi dosri car samne ati main usse bhi bade aram se takeover kar leta magar mere liye masla tab huwa jab tow truck ek sath samne se arahe the….unke bich me jaga bahut hi kam thi ke main car ko two wheel me nikal sakun ye four lane road tha aur wo dono truck divider se lag ke chal rahe the
Wo bhi mujhe se thoda dur the magar unki speed kafi achi thi mujhe unke samne se nikalne ke liye sirf 3 sec ka samay hi tha to main se car ko sidha apne right side kiya magar tab hi jo truck divider wale se lag ke chal raha tha usne bhi meri side kiya magar q k usko kuch samjh nhi aya jab tak wo ye samjhta ke main us side jara hun wo bhi ab alam ye tha ke uske samne ka hissa aur mere samne ka hissa takra jate magar maine turant accelate kiya aur agge footpath se bilkul lagke nikla magar hey re meri kismat samne se bus arahi hi jo pich ke bus stop pe rukne ke liye footpath se lagke chal rahi thi ab mere pass sirf ye hi bach tha…
Maine turant turck ke niche se apni car full speed se nikali aur uske dusri side ho gaya ye sab bas kuch hi second me huwa….
Fir main agge jake sahi side aya…
Wo car mujhe se kafi dur ho gai thi… main apni nazre uspe lagaye rakhi thi magar ye side traffic kuch ziyada tha…..
Kuch dur jake wo car left side ho gai….main ko 10 mint bad us side road ke pass pahuncha….aur us road se andar ho gaya ye ek kacha rasta tha koi 10 km chalne ke bad mujhe ek farmhouse dekha maine apni car usse kuch dur pe khadi ki….
Farmhouse ke gate pe do log khade the jinke hath me gun thi….aur mujhe wo car abhi andar dikhi….
Farmhouse ke charo orr badi diware thi to main unke uppar se to nhi ja sakta tha bas gate ke side ki diwar thodi choti thi magar uske samne to wo dono khade the….ab bas ye hi ek rasta tha main eek cigarette nikal ke jalai aur bad gaya unki taraf….
Main chala huwa unke samne pahunch gaya mujhe dekh ke unme se ek bola…
Admi1 : kon hai be tu…
MAIN :……………….bas cigarette pita raha
Admi2 : mera collar pakkad kar ke, ab kon hai tu aur yaha kya kar raha hai chal nikal yahan se…aur mujhe dhakka dene ko huwa magar tab hi maine apne right hand me pakdi jalti hui cigarette seedha uske muh me dal di aur apne dono hathon me uski mundi pakad ke ghuma di wo bechara to kuch kar bhi nhi paya….tabhi dosra admi kuch karta maine seedha ek mukka uske gale me mara uske muh ki baat uski halak me hi reh gai….aur dono bas 2 sec me bhagwanji ke pass the..
Maine chabi se gate khola aur andar chala gaya….kafi bada farmhouse tha ye main bina darke andar chala ja raha tha aise ke mano main yahan ghumne aya hun…tabhi mujhe andar se ek ladki ke chillane ki awaz ai main turant farmhouse ke bahar ke khidki se andar dekha to paya yahan koi 10 log hai aur kuch 3 ladke hai aur wo ladki bhi…
Ladki ke kapde phate huwe the aur wo teeno ladke us ladki pe chade huwe the….ab to mano mere gusse ki inteha hi nhi rahi thi…
Main turant main gate pe jake demara lat gate pe dhaddd ke awaz ke sath gate khula ye ek hall tha jiske bich me wo ladke us ladki ko noch rahe the aur baki ke log usko gher ke khade the…
Gate ki awaz se sab ka dhiyan meri taraf gaya unme se ek admi bola
Admi1 : kom hai be tu
Ye sawal sunke mera to khoon hi khuol gaya sala jab se aya hun sab yehi sawal kar rahe hai…lagta hai ab batana hi padega aur uske bad marna magar pehle kuch batana bhi zaruri hai un kam akal logon ko
Main : agar naam bata diya to tum sab ko marna padka…
Admi2 : agar nhi bataya to tu mare ga..
Main : aaj tak aisa nhi huwa jin anakhon ne mujhe mere asli chere se dekha hai uske bad un anakhon ne kabhi duniya dekh ho…
Tabhi ek admi meri taraf tezi se bada jaise hi wo mere pass aya main side ho gaya aur apne pair se uske pair pe war kiya wo hawa ho gaya aur maine uski gardan pakad li aur zorse de mara zamin pe aur jaise hi wo zanim pe gir maine apne pair se uske sar pe de zorse de mara pachhh ki awaz ke sath uske sar se khoon ki dhar nikli..ye manzar dekhte wahan khade sare logon ki ruh kamp gai ab bach 9 log wo turnt jake diwaron pe lagi talware nikal laye unko aisa karte dekh Maine bhi apni ek side se ek talwar nikal li
Wo sab ek sath meri taraf bade maine us mare huwe admi ki body ko uthake unke upar pehka jisse 4 log piche gire aur 5 log meri taraf agaye aur mujhe gheer liya….
Ab main unke bichme tha tabhi ek admi ne mujhpe war kiya…..maine usko block kiya aur talwar ke handle se seedha uske muh pe mara jisse uske jabde se khoon ane laga….
Ab ye khel kafi khooni ho gaya tha jo ata yato uska pair cutta ya gardan kuch 10 mint me wo 5 mare pade the…
Aur main pura khoon se sama huwa tha….
Yahan jinko MADHU ne kam pe lagaya tha wo log….
Admi1 : ek kam karo satellite se phone trace karo jaldi karo time bahut kam hai madam kafi gusse me hai…..
Ab bache wo char wo bhi meri taraf agaye ab unke hath abhi kamp rahe the unke hi nhi wo teeno ladke aur wo ladki ke bhi aisi darindagi dekh ke….
Un charo me se ek himmat karke meri taraf bada….aur war kiya maine block kiya aur apne left hand se seedh uske dilpe war kiya wo jaise hi pich hata main ne turant talwar uske dil ke par utar di…..ek dard naak chink ke sath wo mar gaya….ab mujhe aur unse khelna nhi tha to main turant bach teeno ki taraf bada aur ek sar to dose ke gale to tesre ke jigar ke par talwar se war kiya abhi main unko bas mara hi tha k eek goli ake mere left hand side pe lagi main palta to un ladkon me se ek mujhe ye goli chali thi maine seedha apni talwar penk ke de mari jo uske sar ke par ho gai aur wo wahin dheer ho gaya…
Ab bache do log unme se ek ladka bola
LADKA2 : tum jante nhi tum kisse pangga le rahe ho..jante ho ye kiska beta hai..ladke1 ke taraf ishara karke
Main : dekh bhai mujhe jana bhi nhi ye kis ka beta hai agar jan liya to samjho uska baap bhi mare ga….
Admi2 : sir mil gaya YASH sir ka pata wo delhi se kuch 30 mint ke dur ek jungle type area me hai
Admi1 : chalo jaldi karo…
Fir ye log bhi helicopter me us location ki taraf nikal jate hai…
Ladka2 : ruk tujhe abhi bata hun..itna bolke usne apna mobile nikal…magar wo kuch kar pata main uske samne khada tha
Main : dekh q apne baap ko mare pe tula hai ek kam kar tu mar ja jisse tere baap ko kuch aur din dekhna naseeb ho jaye….
Main is waqt khoon se sana huwa tha..
Maine turant uske kuch bolne se pehle uski gardan ghuma di….
Wo ladka1……..bas dekhta reh gaya…
Fir main tesre ladke ke sar se talwar nikal li aur ladke1 ke pass gaya aur gale laga ke talwar dheere2 uske andar utar di aur bola
MAIN : mujhe nafrat hai bure kam karne walon se aur khas kar jo ladki ki izzat ke sath khelte hai…
Aur wo bhi mar gaya…
Maine apna chera saf kiya aur ladki ke pass jake jo abhi bhi kissi sadme thi
Maine : dekho yahan jo kuch bhi hua usse bhul jao aur mujhe bhi meri behan….
Mere muh se behan sunke wo turant mere gale lag gai aur zorse rone lagi
LADKI : rone ki awaz me, aap ka bahut2 shukriya bhagwan apke jaisa bhai har kissi ko de….
MAIN : acha chalo humme yaha se nikalna hai…fir main waha se usse sath me leke nikla abhi main bahar hi aya tha ke mujhe samne helicopter utar ta huwa dekha jisse dekh main samjh gaya ye kiska hai isme kon ho sakta hai….wo ladki bhi samjhne ki kosh kar rahi thi ke ye kon log…
Bahar ane se pehle hi maine us ladki ko chadar se lappet diya tha..jisse uske phate kapde aur uski izzat ko aur na dekh…
Helicopter se do admi nhi balke ladka bolna theek hoga q k unki age koi 28-29 ki thi aur ek ladki utri.
Teeno mere pass ake
Ladki : sir ye kon hai aur yaha kya huwa hai….
Main : wo sab bad me pehle yaha ka kam khatam karo aur is ladki ko theek karke isse iske ghar choddo..
LADKI : nhi bhai mujhe apke sath hi jana hai..
Main : dekho ye tumhe safe ghar tak pahuncha dege tum befikar hoke inke sath jao….aur tum sab yaha ka kam karke mujhe ghar pe milo..
Fir main apni car leke ghar nikal gaya…
Jaise hi maa ke ghar ka gate khola ye ghar mera wo ghar tha jo bachpan me papa ne meri zid ke chalte banaya tha….aur yaad hai jab main yahan aya tha to maa ko issi ghar ke bare me bol raha tha..
Is waqt main sofe pe leta huwa tha mujhe behosh kiya gaya tha ke goli nikal sake aur wo ladki jo helicopter me ai thi wo meri goli nikal rahi thi abhi bhi meri body pe khoon laga huwa tha. ye hi wo manzar tha……jisse dekh ke maa ke sath khade LESSA aur KHAN teeno ki manno unki jaan ki nikal rahi ho …
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