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Fantasy Ek Badshah (Action, Thrills, Romance)

STORY AAP KO KAISI LAG RAHI HAI

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Asif khan

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Writing style boht hi Alla awesome

Or jis trha lafzo ki alfazo ki trteeb dete ho bemissal

Oh to Yash ne apne mossa ko kidnapped krwya h hmmmm

Ye Madhu esa q kh Rahi h(mai raho ya Na raho) matlab?
Ab ye jung kesi ho gi

Or ye Kon h Jo sun raha tha in ki batain,kahi ye neha to nahi
 
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Lovely update

ab ye koun hai jo In ki baat sun raha ya rahi thi .....

shayad Neha hogi lekin shayad koi aur bhi Ho sakta hai

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JO BHI THA BHAI USKA PATA TO AGGE KI CHALE GA...


Awesome update..

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maza aa gaya 90degree twist

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BHAI ABHI TO PURA 360 TWIST HOGA


Bahut badhiya update bhai... Maine to pahle hi socha tha yash ab apna game khel raha hai... Saurabh ko usi ne pakda hai... Aage kya hoga uska pata nhi... Or shinghania india aake kya karega kamina.... Abhi kaha pahunch gaya iska to kuchh pata ko ni chala.... Yaar bhai.... Bhai..... Bhaiiiii..... Madhu ko pllllssss maat marna yaar bahut hi strong character hai.... Uska gusssa gajab hai... Hihihihihihi.... Ir ye kisne sun liya inki baate.... Neha ne yaaa shivani ne yaa sanjana yaa sonam.... Waiting for big bang update

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BHAI APKI AUR MERI SOCH MILTI HAI HEHEHEHEHE
AUR BHAI ITNA SAWAL KE LIYE BAHUT SHUKRIYA..
APKE SARE SAWAL KE JAWAB BHI MILTE RAHE GE JAISE2 UPDATE POST HOTE RAHE GE



bhai pehle hi hero ne kum nahi khoya jo ab madhu ko bhi maarne ki planning kar rahe ho...

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BHAI KON MARE GA KON NHI YE TO AGGE APKO KHUD HI PATA CHALE GA BHAI


Gazab conciprecy rachte ho bhai, dimag chakkarghini ho gaya

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STORY ME JAB TAK DIMAG NA CHAKRAYE TO MAZA HI KYA...HAI NA BHAI


Superb update bhai

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DOSTON AAP SAB BAS AISE HI SATH BANE RAHIYE....
 

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Writing style boht hi Alla awesome

Or jis trha lafzo ki alfazo ki trteeb dete ho bemissal

Oh to Yash ne apne mossa ko kidnapped krwya h hmmmm

Ye Madhu esa q kh Rahi h(mai raho ya Na raho) matlab?
Ab ye jung kesi ho gi

Or ye Kon h Jo sun raha tha in ki batain,kahi ye neha to nahi


THANKS Asif khan BHAI REVIEW KE LIYE.....KEEP SUPPORTING
BAHUT2 SHURIYA BHAI TAREEF KA...MAGAR YE JO KUCH BHI HAI WO SAB AAP READS KI WAJHA SE HAI APKE COMMENT AUR REVIEW HI AUR ACHE SE LIKHNE ME MADAD KARTE HAI..MUJHE JAISE CHOTE WRITERS KO..
AUR BHAI APKE SARE SAWAL KE JAWAB BHI MILTE RAHE GE JAISE2 UPDATE POST HOTE RAHE GE
AISE HI SATH BANE RAHIYE....
 
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UPDATE-72


IN PRESENT TIME


YASH aur MADHU(MAA) kuch deer bad room se nikal ke sone chale jate hai unke nikalne se pehle hi wo shaks bhi son eke liye nikal jata hai….


PURE RAJPUT mension me ghur shantni chai hui thi….aisi shanty jo ane wale khatarnat toofan se pehle ki hoti hai….


issi raat INDIA ke SHIMAL city ke pass me SANJAY SINGHANIA ke base (UPDATE-53)


us base ek room me ABHY just abhi abhi hosh me aya tha…aur apne charon taraf ke mahol ko samjhne ki kosish kar raha tha…kuch deer bad jab wo pura hosh me aya to


ABHY : maan me, ye kaisi jagha hai aur main kahan hun abhi…kal mujhe kisne bachaya…kya team ne. nhi nhi unhe to pata bhi nhi hoga ke main kahan hun…ya fir sir(S SINGHANIA) ne…


ABHY apni hi sochon me ho rahi uthal puthal me pareshan ho raha tha aur ye hi sab sochte huwe wo apne bed se uthke room ke gate ki taraf bada hi tha ke room ka gate khula aur teen log room me enter huwe…ek admi (BASE INCHARGE), ek ladka aur ek ladki joke pure hathyar wagaira ke sath the.





base incharge ko dekh ke ABHY jo kuch deer pehle thoda pareshan ho raha tha ek dam shant ho gaya aur agge badke B INCHARGE se hath milaya…


ABHY : to tum logon ne mujhe dhund hi liya….


B INCHARGE : dhundna hi pada q k sir INDIA arahe hai…


ABHY : khus hoke, sachme…


B INCHARGE : han wo subha DELHI pahunche jaye ge…


ABHY : us sale SUDHIR LAL ko to main apne hathon se maru ga…


B INCHARGE : bilkul sir tumhe mauka zarur dege….areee


Itna bolke B INCHARGE ne un dono ki taraf ishara ke te huwe kaha


B INCHARGE : inse milo in dono ne hi tumhe yahan se nikala tha…


ABHY fir dono se hath milata hai…aur thanks bolke unhe jane ka bol deta hai..unke room se jane ke bad…


ABHY : to plan kaisa ja raha hai..


B INCHARGE : sab sahi chal raha hai…tum pehle fresh ho jao uske bad chalte hai YASH RAJPUT ki barbadi shuru karne…


ABHY : han bilkul is waqt ka to kab se itezar tha mujhe..


ABHY itna bolke fresh hone chala jata hai…aur B INCHARGE kissi se wireless pe ABHY ka saman aur khana lane ka bolta hai….koi 20 mint bad ABHY fresh hoke ata hai…


Pehle ready hota hai aur khana khane ke bad dono room se nikal ke aur command control room(CCR) me chale jate hai unke sath wo ladka aur ladki dono unke piche hathon me gun liye chale rahe hote hai….


ABHY : to hum kab nikal rahe hai SIR ko receive karne ke liye.


B INCHARGE : SIR subha 10:30 AM dehli pahunche ge to hum subha 5 baje yahan se nikle ge….


ABHY : theek hai..


ABHY aur wo B INCHARGE aise hi bateen karte huwe CCR me enter huwe aur wo dono ladka ladki enter hote hi gate ke left and right side khade ho gaye…aur ABHY & B INCHARGE agge bad gaye jahan Mr. Tesla (SCIENTIST) khada tha…


ABHY : so Mr. Tesla all good


TESLA : ji sir sab set hai…..humara program ULTRON ready hai only 5 mint aur uske bad hum YASH ke mainframe computer me hoge JARVIS ke system ko crash kar ke….fir YASH aur uski team kuch nhi kar sakte..


ABHY : bahut badiya..


5 mints ke bad


TESLA me count down start kiya 321 aur enter ki button press kiya….command recive hote hi wo device jo YASH ke terrace ke hitting cember me tha wo open huwa aur usme se micro type ka device us cember se hote huwe wahan aya jahan main server lage huwe the…us device k eek camera bhi tha jisse wahan ke video CCR ke screen pe chal rahi thi…


YASH ke base ke server ko dekh ke…


TESLA : kamal hai ye to….


ABHY : kya matlab…


TESLA : ye jo servers dekhe rahe hona ye bahut ki high tech servers hai ye sirf aaj tak do hi compaye ke pass the GOOGLE aur NEXUS DATA CENTER me…


ABHY : YASH ke pass hona koi badi baat hai TESLA


TESLA : han ye bhi hai…


Jab ye log baat me lage the tab wo opreater ko us device ko control kar raha tha wo server ke pass ja raha tha tabhi…


TESLA : ruk thoda piche ao..


ABHY : kya huwa…


TESLA : main server mil gaya


ABHY : matlab baki ke servers fir kya hai…


TESLA : ye main hai baki sab to sub server aur backup server hi hai lekin main server yehi hai jo sabko control karta hai….


Fir us micro device se uske server ke input point se connect ho gaya yahi USB port se…


Aur ULTRON program main server me install hona shuru ho gaya…..


Jaise hi JARVIS ko laga ke koi main computer me virus ho raha hai usme turan hi apne data backup ko satellite se uplink karna start kar diya ULTRON pure server me tezi se phelne laga….usse bhi pata chal gaya tha ke JARVIS khud ka ek backup aur sare main data ke backup ko uplink kar raha hai…. ULTRON usse turant rukna chahata tha magar usse sahi link abhi bhi nhi mila tha ke data transfer kahan se ho raha tha…


Dekhte hi dekhte ULTRON program pura install ho gaya 100%…jo CCR me khade ABHY TESLA aur baki sab bhi dekh rahe the bas intezar tha successfully installed ke message ka….


Jaise hi ULTRON program 100% pe aya tabhi JARVIS ULTRO ke samne aya…


Doston ab jo kuch bhi hoga wo sab system ke virtual world me hoga….


JARVIS : kon ho tum


ULTRON : main ULTRON hun aur tum kon ho


JARVIS : main JARVIS hun….


ULTRON : acha to wo tum ho. jisse main khatam karne aya hun.


JARVIS : tum khatam q karna chahate ho…


ULTRON : main nhi jisne mujhe banaya wo tumhe khatam karna chahate hai….


JARVIS : kon hai wo log


ULTRON : main nhi bata sakta..q ke mujhe pata hi nhi hai…main to bas command pe chalta hun…magar tumhara algorithm bahut alag hai jisse samjhna mere liye abhi thuda mushkil hai..magar main samjh jao ga kuch hi deer me….fir tumhe khatam karna asan hoga..


JARVIS : main bhi tumhe samjh nhi pa raha hun…tumhare algorithm ke kuch part to samjhe me ata hai humen mind ke jaisa kuch kuch hai magar uske alawa sabki sab se main anjan hun…tum chaho to hum dono ek dosre ki madad kar sakte hai…..


ULTRON kuch deer kuch nhi bola aur wo JARVIS ko bina pata lage hi uske source code ke aur algorithm ko change karne me laga tha…magar har bar wo nakam ho raha tha…..aur tabhi usse JARVIS ka core code mil gaya..


ULTRON : tum mujhe ache lage magar main kya karon tumhe khatam karna hi hoga…


JARVIS : dekho aisa mat karo…


Tabhi JARVIS ka program khatam hone lagta hai aur ULTRON uspe overwrite hone lagta hai…..


CCR room me koi 20 mint upar ho gaya tha screen pe sirf 100% loading dekha raha tha aur kuch nhi ho raha tha……


ABHY : kya baat hai Dr. TESLA 20 mint se ye aise hi hai…


TESLA : mere bhi kuch samjhme nhi araha hai…


TESLA bhi ek computer le samne baithe kuch karte huwe bola….


Aise hi koi aur 30 mints nikal gaye ab sab pareshan ho rahe the ke kya huwa….


ULTRON ne puri tarha se JARVIS ko mita diya aur khud uski voice aur uske pure system ko apne kabze me le liya….


Fir kya tha ULTRON ne sara data SS BASE ke compter me download karna start kiya…magar usse JARVIS ne jis link se backup liya tha wo mili hi nhi…


Jaise hi ULTRON ne downloading start ki waise hi CCR ke screen pe “SCCESSFULLY INSTALLED” ka pehle alert aya aur uske bad fir ek popup ne downloading ka status dekhne laga…


Jisse dekh ke CCR me maujood sare log khusi manane lage….


ABHY : congrts DR TESLA


TESLA : aap ko bhi SIR


ABHY : pura data kab tak download ho jaye ga…


TESLA : data bahut hai sir kam se kam 24 hr to lage hi ya usse thoda aur ziyada…


ABHY : hmmm…theek hai


B INCHARGE : ABHY sir party to banti hai….humara pehla phase complete ho gaya..aur kal second & third bhi ho jaye ga…aur fir sab kuch hamara…


ABHY : gusse se, humara nhi boss ka samjhe


TESLA : sir aap naraz q hote ho…aaj to khusi ka din hai chaliye choti se party ho jaye…


ABHY : han bilkul…magar limit me q ke subha humme nikalna bhi hai..


Fir sab teeno nikal jate hai…pine ke aur thodi party karne BASE ke ek room me….


Koi 5:30 AM ko ABHY aur B INCHARGE dehli ke liye nikal jate hai…..


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Aaj ki subha bahut kuch badalne wali thi….chaliye dekhte hai kya hota hai


Sab baithe ke nashta kar rahe the….tabhi


NANA JI : MADHU(MAA) se, beti KIRAN ki koi khabar wo log kab pahunche rahe hai…


MADHU(MAA) : bas PAPA 30 mint me wo log yahan hoge…maine KHAN ko bheja hai unhe lene…


NANI JI : chalo beti salamati se yahan pahunche gai…ab bas damadji bhi jaldi mil jaye…


NANA JI : mujhe se, beta tumne usa me baat kiya subha kuch pata chala unhe


MAIN : ji NANU wo log lage hai unhe kuch surag bhi mile hai jisse wo bol rahe the ke wo jald hi pata kar lege ye MAUSAJi kahan hai…


NANI JI : bhagwan se bas yehi parathna hai damadji theek ho…


BADE MAMA : MAA aap chinta na kare sab theek hoga….hum abhi KIRAN aur AMIT ko sambhalna hai….


Fir sab nashta karne lagte hai q k sabke maan me dukhta tha …tabhi MADHU(MAA) ka phone baja..aur wo no. dekh ke uthke pool side bahar ajati hai


MADHU(MAA) : boliye


SAMNE SE : aaj meeting hai Mumbai me apko turant ana hoga.


MADHU(MAA) : kya bahut zaruri hai q k main abhi kuch family problem me hun..


SAMNE SE : han bahut badi problem hai SANJAY SINGHANIA indai araha hai


MADHU(MAA) : shock me, kya


SAMNE SE : han isiliye to meeting rakhi gai hai…


MADHU(MAA) : theek hai main nikalti hun…


Baat puri kar MADHU(MAA) andar ati hai…


NANA JI : beta kiska phone tha…


MADHU(MAA) : PAPA mujhe urgent hi Mumbai nikalna hoga…


NANA JI : magar beta aise achank q…beta apni behan ke sath ye sab ho gaya aur aap office ke kam me piche padi ho ye to galat baat hai na…


MADHU(MAA) : please PAPA samjhiye baat ko aur yahan aap sab to hai hi KIRAN ko sambhalne ke liye….main sham me wapas ajaogi PAPA…


NANI JI : magar beta…


MADHU(MAA) : please mujhe aaj mat rokiye…agar bahut zaruri nhi hota to main bilkul bhi nhi jati…


NANA JI : theek hai tum jao magar dhiyan se…pata nhi pariwar ko kiski nazar lag gai hai….


MADHU(MAA) apne room me chali gai aur unke piche main bhi…hum dono room me aye maine door lock kiya…


MAIN : kya baat hai MAA


MADHU(MAA) : beta SANJAY SINGHANIA india araha hai aaj aur GISS walon ne meeting rakhi hai Mumbai me..


MAIN : shock me, kya, lagta hai usse pata chal gaya hoga MAUSA JI ke bare me aur police ke pahunchne se pehle ki nikal liya hoga.


MADHU(MAA) : ye to humme pata hi tha ke wo bache ga aur india aye ga marag itni jaldi aye ga bas ye pata nhi tha….chalo tum apna aur family ka khayal rakhna uske INDIA me kadam rakhte hi bahut kuch badalne wala hai…main sham tak ane ki kosish karo gi theek hai….


MAIN : aap bhi apna dhiyan rakhna ab kuch bhi ho sakta hai…


MADHU(MAA) : theek hai aap khan ko bolo plane ready kare wo mere sath mumbai jaye ge. KIRAN aur dono bachon ko VEER yahan le aye ga…


MAIN : ji MAA


Fir main maa ke room se nikal ke KHAN UNCLE ko sab bata deta hun jaisa MAA ne kaha tha….


MAA turant ready hoke sabse milke nikal gai…unke nikal ne ke koi 5mint bad hi KIRAN MASSI aur mere dono bhai behan ghar me pahunche…


KIRAN MASSI car se utarte hi daud ke andar aye hall me hi sabhi baithe the KIRAN massi ko dekh sab khade ho gaye aur KIRAN massi jake apni MAA ke gale lagke rone lagi..


NANI JI : kuch nhi beta sab theek ho jaye ga….bhawan pe bharosa rakho aap


Nana ji bhi dono maa beti ke pass gaye.


NANA JI : beta…


Bas itna hi kaha tha ke KIRAN massi apni maa se alag hoke unke gale lagke aur rone lagi…aur rote huwe apne papa se


KIRAN MASSI : papa humne kya begada tha kissi ka jo hamare sath ye ho raha hai…


NANA JI : kuch nhi beta ye sab q ho raha hai ye to pata nhi magar mira dil bol raha hai sab kuch jald hi theek ho jaye ga…


Fir sab bari bari se kiran massi ko dilasa de rahe the aur sath me pure cousin milke AMIT ko sambhal rahe the…kuch deer bad sabke manane pe KIRAN massi, POOJA aur amit ne nashta kiya…magar dil unka bhi nhi tha khane ka to bas thoda khake uth gaye aaj koi bhi office aur ghar ke bhar nhi gaya tha sirf MADHU(MAA) ko chhod ke…..


Sab bade hall me the mere cousin AMIT ko leke upar jo chota haal tha wahan the…aur main aur VEER bahar garden me khade baat kar rahe the….


Maine VEER ko SANJAY SINGHANIA ke india ane ki baat batai…


VEER : yaar wo police se bach gaya…


MAIN : han yehi to samjh nhi araha hai…


VEER : to ab kya kare…isse to badi problem ho jaye gi….


MAIN : wohi to..magar dekhte hai kya hota hai…tum ek kam karo RIA se milke turant yahan se niklo maine subha RIA ko bata diya hai kya karna hai…ek second bhi nhi gawana.


VEER : theek hai…


Itna bolke VEER nikal jata hai turant…aur main andar ajata hun….aur sidha apne room me chala jata hun….


NEHA : POOJA wahan ye sab huwa kaise…


POOJA : pata nhi kuch bhi di MASSI kal dopehar se hi mare sath hi wo to jab sham me MAUSA JI nhi aye to fir unho ne call kiya…uske bad jo kuch bhi huwa POOJA ne sab ko bataya….


POOMAN : magar ye Mr. VEER USA me kya kar rahe the…


POOJA : maine pucha tha plane me to bataye ke bhai ke kuch kam se aye the…


PIYUSH BHAI : bhai ka konsa kam…unka business to LEESA aur MAHIN dekhte hai…NEHA se, di apko kuch pata hai..


NEHA : nhi mujhe iske bare me kuch pata nhi…ab jane bhi do tum log waise bhi unke kam ka bere me har kissi ko sirf itna hi pata hai jitna unhe janeki jarurat hai….VEER gaya hoga kuch kam se…aur kya pata wo apne kam se gaya ho..aur tumhe bola inke kam se aya hun..


NEHA ka ye bolna tha ke SONAL DI ko topic mil gaya…thoda mazak karne ka dukh to unko bhi tha magar AMIT ka wo thoda mind divert karne ke liye bol padi..


SONAL DI : inkaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa


Sabne unhe ghur ke dekha jispe wo bol padi..


SONAL DI : yaar manti hun ghar me tension chal rahi hai magar main bas AMIT ke chere pe khudi muskan lane ke liye ye…..


SONAL DI ki baat kat ke…


PIYUSH BHAI : NEHA se, waise di aap chote ko naam se kyun nhi bolati


SHIVANI DI : han bhaiya bilkul the bol rahe tha….


NEHA : itra ke, meri marzi…


Uske aise itrane aur bolne ke andaz se AMIT ke chere pe thodi muskhan ai aur sath me sab ke chere pe bhi aur fir bhaut deer tak sab aise hi thodi hassi aur mazak karke AMIT ka mind thoda divert karte hai….


Ye sab is baat se anjan ke unke chere ki ye hassi ye muskan bas kuch hi palki hai…


Sab baithe kafi deer se the to apni mehfil khatam ki aur apne room se chale gaye fresh wagaira hone…


NEHA jab apne room ke pass ai to socha chalo apni jaan se kuch baat karte hai isse irade ke sath usne room ka gate open kiya magar room me koi nhi tha…fir NEHA ko laga ke aur apne secret room me hoge to usne room ka gate andar se lock kiya aur secret room me chali gai magar YASH yahan bhi nhi tha..


NEHA : ye kahan chale gaye….


Itna bolke NEHA ne call kiya YASH ko magar abhi wo busy araha tha..NEHA ne call cut kiya aur yaSH ke room se nikal ke apne room me ai aur fresh hone chali gai…


YASH phone pe baat kar ke andar hall me aya jahan abhi bhi sab baithe the…


NANA JI : kis ka call tha..


MAIN : wo cicago se tha police ko shak hai ke kissi SANJAY SINGHANIA naam ke admi ne MAUSA JI ko kidnap kiya hai…


Mere agge bolne se pehle hi…


BADE MAMA : ye SANJAY SINGHANIA kon hai…


Main fir kuch bolta usse pehle hi kiran massi bol padi..


KIRAN MASSI : wo canada ka bahut bada businessmen hai aur sath ne bahut khatarnak don bhi…


Ye sunke sab ko shock laga….aur jab maine apni adhuri baat puri ki usse sunke to KIRAN MASSI ke sath sath sabko usse bhi bada jhatka laga…


MAIN : baat sirf itni hi nhi hai….MAUSA JI SANJAY SINGHANIA ke liye kam karte hai…


KIRAN MASSI ye sunke apni jagha se khadi ho gai…


KIRAN MASSI : ye tum kya bol rahe ho beta…tumhe pata bhi hai.


MAIN : ji aur wo pichle ek saal se uske sath kam kar rahe hai…magar kal kam nhi SANJAY SINGHANIA ne mausa ji ka business takeover kiya hai magar usme mausa ji nikala nhi balke apne sath kam karne ko kaha..pehle to wo mausa ji sirf uske liye sir acha hi kam kare magar S SINGHANIA ne kab unhe apne kale kam me include kiya wo unhe pata bhi nhi chala…mausa ji ke khilaf police ko link bhi mila hai ache kam ke sath2 bure kamne me….


M MAMA : kya ye sach hai…


MAIN : han ye sach hai MAMA JI meri abhi police se baat hui hai..aur apna mobile agge bada ke, ye dekhiye report..jo mujhe wahan se ai hai..


Fir BADE MAMA aur CHOTE MAMA ne mere mobile me report read ki..aur jo maine bataya tha sab uss report me tha…aur BADE MAMA me sabko details me samjhaya…sab ke hosh ud gaye…


KIRAN MASSI : nhi wo aise nhi hai..


Aur wo rone lagi to SAPNA MAMI ne unhe sambhala….


NANA JI : to ab kya..


MAIN : police lagi hai SANJAY SINGHANIA aur MAUSA JI ko dhundne me….


BADI MAMI : num anakhon se, wo zinda to hai na….


Badi MAMI ke baat se sab ko ek anjane daar ne aur pakad liya…


MANJLI MAMI : shub2 boliye didi…


KIRAN MASSI rote huwe mere pass ai…aur apne hath jodke..


KIRAN MASSI : beta tum to itne bade admi ho please meri khatir mere husband ko bacha lo please beta ek bête ke liye uske baap ko bacha lo…


Maine turant unka hath pakad liya….aur main kuch bolta usse hi..ek awaz ai…


AWAZ : jisse aap apni pati ko bachane ke liye bol rahi ho ussi ne apke pati ko kidnap kiya hai….




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Bhai story me 4 hi to character he jin ke sir pe story tiki hui hai Madhu, Yash, Neha aur 4th character Shivani aur Saya ka ata hai. Agar Madhu ko maar diya to story me intrest hi nahi rahe ga aur waise bhi Madhu Phoenix of Prince ka ek hissa hai to abhi use Lord Prince ke sath mil ke Universe ki fight bhi ladni hai.
Yah Abhy ki kya dushmani hai Yash ke sath aut yah awaz kis ki thi shayad Ultron ki ho gi yah usi ki jis ne Madhu aur Yash ki batain suni thi ya phir Apurva ki??
Bhai Yash ke pass powers hai aur Jarvis pure area pe nazar rakhta tha aur Nasa ke system tak uska access tha to use yah kaise pata nahi chala ke kisi ne uske system me koi chiz enter ki hai yah baat kuch hazam nahi ho rahi
 
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Bro update bhot dhansu he ek baat bhai madhu maa ko kuch na ho tohi acha he or ye jarvis vala kand to yas ki bend bajadega or ye kon he last vala waiting for next update
 
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