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Fabulous update. Neha & team building ke andar pohanch gae hai. Singhaniya bhi GISS ka board member tha jis ko Madhu aur uske pati ne nikalwa diya tha lagta hai madhu ke pati ki moat ke piche bhi Singhaniya ka hi hath tha.
Singhaniya Yash ki body se Ether nikalna chahta hai lekin woh usko dikh nahi raha. Dekhte hai kon kamyab hota hai kya Yash mindstone ko hasil kar pata hai ya nahi.
Aur yah Madhu aur Apurva kaha hai bhai unki bhi koi khabar do.
Singhaniya Yash ki body se Ether nikalna chahta hai lekin woh usko dikh nahi raha. Dekhte hai kon kamyab hota hai kya Yash mindstone ko hasil kar pata hai ya nahi.
Aur yah Madhu aur Apurva kaha hai bhai unki bhi koi khabar do.
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THODA PICHE CHALTE HAI KOI 5:00PM:
POLICE COMMISSIONER ek bar YASH ke ghar me the….sab log hall me hi the is waqt SHANAYA bhi thi…ROHIT bhi aur dono ki family bhi…ab SHANAYA aur uski family apne ghar shift ho gaye the…
NANA JI : kuch pata chala YASH, MADHU aur SAURABH ka…
POLICE C : nhi kuch pata nhi chala hai dono ka..aur humne Mrs. RAJPUT mobile ko tarce kiya aur wo bhi jahan meeting ke liye gai thi wahan bhi bomb blast huwa hai magar wo aur KHAN dono ka pata nhi chala hai aur sath me SAURABH ka bhi…..magar ek baat comfirm hui hai ke Mr. SAURABH MEHTA ke S SINGHANI ke sath realation ka..aur jis GISS ke bare me aap bata rahe the aisi koi organization hi nhi hai duniya me..sab sirf YASH ko phasane ke liye tha..aur kuch nhi
KIRAN MASSI : nhi ye nhi ho sakta mere pati aise nhi hai..
POLICE C : ye confirm hai Mrs. MEHTA aur ye raha is baat ka sabot
Itna bolke ek file KIRAN MASSI ko de dete hai…file dekhe KIRAN num anakhone se
KIRAN MASSI : matlab YASH sahi bol raha tha…
POLICE C : han..
BADE MAMA : magar SIR apko kuch to karna hoga unhe dhundne ke liye aur sath me NEHA ko bhi…
POLICE C : mere admi lage hai issi kam me aur sath me CBI CID aur INTERPOLE bhi hum jald hi pata kar lege…aap log bas itna dhiyan rahe media ko kuch pata na chale…main chalta hun bahut kam hai..
POLICE C ne firse sabko media se dur rehne ko kaha…
NANI JI : na jane kis halme hoge mere bache…
NANA JI : bas ab dua hi kar sakte hai…aur ab jabtak kuch pata nhi chal jata aap sab normal hi rahe…magar media se bachke..
Sab fir apne kamo me lag jate hai magar sirf dekhawe ke liye magar dil kissi ka bhi nhi tha..sab ko sirf NEHA YASH aur MADHI(MAA) ki fikar thi…
(AB YAHAN SE TEEN SCENE CHALE GE. PEHLA NEHA, VEER AUR RIA KA. Dosra SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA. AUR TEESRA JUNG KA EK KE BAD EK.)
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PEHLA SCENE NEHA, VEER AUR RIA KA (IN PRESENT TIME 06:30 PM):
SHIMLA ke is side andhera bahut jald ho jata hai q ke ye jahan hai wahan teen side pahar hai jisse is waqt yahan raat jaisa mahol lag raha hai teeno ne night vision pehan rakha tha aur badi saudhani se agge bahd rahe the ye pura area jungle se bahar pada tha…VEER aur RIA ke pass sniper gun thi jab ke NEHA ke hath me hand gun thi…VEER ki gun is waqt back pe lagi thi jabke NEHA aur RIA hath me gun pakde huwe the…VEER ke dono side se kuch agge chal rahe the..aur apne hath me ek tab pade huwe tha jisse wo motion ko detect karte huwe chal raha tha q ke unhe 500 miter ke pehle hi rukna tha take pehle motion sensor disable ho jaye….
Teen chalte huwe us gate se theek 550 meter pe ruke ek bade se ped ke piche yahan ye ek achi baat thi ke bade bade ped the jisse unhe kafi protection mil rahi thi…magar gate ke side ek thoda khula maidan jaise tha jahan wo 10 me se 6 gurads jungle ki taraf apna face kare khade the…aur 4 unke piche do gate ke life aur right side khade the aur do round laga rahe the…kuch istarha se…
VEER ek chota drone jo dekhne me kissi makhhi se thoda bada tha usse on kar ke waha me chhod deta hai aur usse apne tab se control karte huwe gurads ki position lock kar deta hai jahan gurads khade the wahan do bade focus light lage the jisse wahan kafi roshinin thi..jo gungle ke samne ke hisse kuch hisse ko roshan kar rahi thi..sabki postion teen ke night vision me load ho gai thi…abhi JARVIS ke diye huwe time me 10 min ka waqt tha…
VEER : to total das hai aur hum teen main center se ata hun RIA tum left se ao aur MAM aap right side aiye…magar dhiyan se q k yahan tree bahut hai..
RIA aur NEHA : ok VEER
Tabhi JARVIS ki awaz ai…
JARVIS : bas 5 mint left..uske bad motion sensor sirf 100 sec ke liye band ho ga…
RIA : ye kya bol rahe ho JARVIS tum..
JARVIS : han main sirf itna hi kar sakta hun q ke ULTRON program bahut taqatwar hai mujhe se…main sirf sensor ko itni hi deer off kar sakta hun..agar isse ziyada huwa to ULTRON ko pata chal jaye ga ke main uske system hun…bas ek bad aap log sensor ke area se nikal gaye to fir kuch nhi hai…bad me milte hai.
Aur JARVIS ki awaz band ho jati hai…
NEHA : ab kya kare kya hum kar paye ge 500 meter 100 sec me..
NEHA andar se AWAZ ai jo sirf NEHA hi sun sakti hai…
AWAZ : dono ka pata nhi magar hum kar sakte hai…yaad hai na wo spell jo maine bataiye thi..usse tum aur main kuch deer ke liye ek ho jaye ge…
NEHA : maan me, pakka na
AWAZ : han q shak hai tumhe
NEHA : maan me, nhi
AWAZ : magar abhi nhi bola warna unhe pata chal jaye ga ke tumhare pass power hai…jab tum unse dur jao tab spell bolna
NEHA : maan me, theek hai
VEER : karna hi ho ga..
Tabhi RIA veer se tab le kar kuch karti hai…jisse wo drone ke program me kuch karti hai kuch button badati hai tab pe jisse drone unki location aur sensor area se kaise nikal ke 100 sec me un gurads tak pahuncha ja sakta hai…drone sari possible direction batata hai jisse teen apni postion se center, right aur left se 100 sec me daud ke pahunch sakte hai…
Aur fir RIA teeno ke vision me wo load kar deti hai…
VEER : gud RIA thanks
RIA : welcome jaan
VEER : chalo teeno nikalte hai just 500 miter ke kareeb take hum turant agge bad sake…tab hum sirf hand gun ka istemal hi kar sakte hai…
Fir teeno ape direction nikal jate hai….RIA left, NEHA right aur VEER center se…teeno apni nazil ki taraf apne direction ko follow karte huwe 500 meter se bas just kuch fasle pe eke k ped ke piche khade ho jate hai…aur apni apni hand gun apne dono hathon me nikal lete hai..jis pe silencer laga huwa tha…
VEER : JARVIS ke green signal milte hi…
RIA & NEHA : copy
Just 5 sec pehle JARVIS ki awaz ai
JARVIS : sab ready hai
TEENO : READY
JARVIS : mere countdown ke bad…kuch ruk ke…3 2 1 go
Itna sunte hi teeno apni jaan laga ke sensor area se nikalne ki kosish karte hai…aree ye kya NEHA to pahunch bhi gai…huwa ye ke jaise hi JARVIS ne go kaha NEHA ne wo spell boli jisse NEHA ki anakhen me se nili halki roshini nikalne lagi…aur NEHA sirf 10 sec. me right side pe thi (abhi wo RAZEL puri tarha se nhi bani thi…usne just ek spell se kuch sec. ke liye apne apko RAZEL me convert kiya tha…agar wo puri RAZEL ne banti to pata hai na kya hota wo bina apni jagha se hile hi bahut kuch kar sakti thi…)
jise hi wo us side pahunchi uski range me do gurads the unke sar se goli par ho chuki thi magar ye kya jaise hi dono goli NEHA ke gun se nikli goli ke piche piche halki red color ki roshini thi jisse goli ki rafter 10 time bad gai…right side ke bandon ko goli lagte hi jo petrolling wala ek bande the unhone NEHA ko dekh liye..aur turant usne NEHA pe fire kiya aur NEHA ne bhi…NEHA ki gun se nikli goli us bande ki gun se nikli goli ko chirte huwe sidha us bande ke gale ke par ho gai…jisse uska sar dhad se alag ho gaya…jab NEHA uspe goli chali theek Tabhi jo do gurads center me khade the wo kuch karte usse pehle hi VEER ne dur se hi yani sensor ke area me se hi pehle ek ko goli mari aur badme dosre ko…
Aur side se RIA ne bhi yehi kiya…aur samne ke dono ko goli mari q k VEER aur RIA abhi unke kareeb agaye thi…udhar NEHA ne teezi se gate pass khade bande ke paas palak jhapakte hi pahunchi aur sidha apni gun ka silencer uske muh me ghusa karke goli chalai right hand gun se aur left hand gun se gate ke left side wale pe…..
Tabhi ek goli ake NEHA ko lagi…left side se magar goli ka NEHA pe koi asar nhi huwa NEHA turant apne left palti abhi wo goli chalne hi wali thi ke ek goli us bande ke sar ke piche lagi ye goli RIA ne chali thi jo ek petrolling wala banda tha uspe…RIA jo ab tak wahan pahunch gai thi left side se…aur center se VEER bhi pahunch gaya tha…
Jaise hi NEHA ki nazar RIA pe padi usne apni anakhen band karli aur koi spell boli jisse uske andar ki urja band ho gai…
RIA : NEHA ke pass ake, wow MAM aap to bahut teez ho…kitne mare apne
NEHA : aree main to sab VEER ke anke pe pehle hi ai thi..maine 5 ko
VEER & RIA : kya..
NEHA : han ye sach hai..magar tum dono ka bhi jawab nhi duadte huwe bhi tumhara nishana bahut perfect hai…
RIA : maan me, ye kaise ho sakta hai MAM to just abhi abhi trained hui hai…
NEHA : RIA se, kya soch rahi ho RIA
RIA : kuch nhi MAM bas aise hi..VEER se, to ab kya karna hai
VEER : itezar aur kya q k ye gate andar se khule ga…
Tabhi JARVIS ki awaz ai
JARVIS : khule ga nhi khul gaya hai…wo agge ek 1 KM ka rasta hai jo aap logon ko main building me ane ke liye madad kare ga..magar usse pehle just gate se kuch kadan dur ek room hai jahan 5 log hai..shift wale unse nipat lo fir agge bado aur is raste pe bomb lagate na…aur han main building me ane se pehle bhi ek room hai jahan 5 gurads hai..aur main puri building ka map apko pehle wale room ke computer pe mil jaye ga..maine usme load kiya hai…aur jab aap logo main building ke gate wale room me pahuncho to wahan wait karna agge ki imformation ke liye…milta hun kuch time bad…
RIA : isko kya huwa hai..aise q har bar ek task deke chala jata hai..
VEER : wo sab badme pehle chalo pehle ye karte hai jo info mila hai…
RIA : chalo fir
Fir teeno nikal padte hai JARVIS se mili information ke mutabik pehle room ki taraf jahan 5 log apni ane wali maut intezar kar rahe the…
Inko yahan chhudte hai ye log aram se un 10 logon ko kar dege…
Hum chalte hai YASH ke sath kya huwa hai…
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DOSRA SCENE SANJAY SINGHANIA AUR YASH KA (THODA PICHE TIME 06:00 PM):
Is waqt YASH jis room me tha usme do gurads khade the…aur YASH behoshi ki halat me chair pe bandha huwa tha…
Tabhi YASH ko hosh ane lagta hai…agge YASH ki jabani
Meri anakhen bahut dard kar rahi thi aur mere sare me bhi bahut dard ho raha tha…jaise2 main hosh me araha tha waise2 mujhe main kahan hun uska andaza ho raha tha…tabhi mere muh pe ek dam se pani ake pada aur main apni anakhen dhire2 kholne laga jo pani padne se band ho gai thi…to mujhe mere samne do log khade dekhe jinme se ek hath me jug tha aur uske bagal me khada tha aur dono muskura rahe the…
MAIN : chila ke, kon ho tum log aur mujhe yahan q laye ho….
GURAD1 : abhi pata chal jaye ga ke hum kon hai aur tum kahan ho samjhe…
aur Itna bol ke usne GURAD2 ko ishara kiya
GURAD2 wireless pe kissi ko kaheta hai
GURAD2 : SIR usko hosh agaya hai.
AWAZ : theek hai main araha hun…
Mujhe wo awaz kuch jani pehchani lagi…..tabhi kuch 5 min bad room ka gate khula aur jo banda andar aya usse dekh mujhe bahut bada jhatka laga aur mere muh se sirf itna hi nikla
MAIN : shock me, ABHYYYYYY
ABHY : mere samni ke chair pe baith ke, han main q shock lagan a tumhe…
MAIN : tum to apni mom ke pass gaye the na..aur ye sab ka matlab kya hai ABHY…
ABHY : bahut bada matlab hai mere dost…tumhe jald hi pata chal jaye ga…
MAIN apne apko chhudne ke chair pe hilne lagta hun…
MAIN : gusse se, khulo mujhe abhi..
ABHY : haste huwe un do gurads se, aree dekho2 YASH RAJPUT ya yun kahun ROCKY kaise bin pani machali ki tarha phad phada raha the…
Aur teeno hasne lagte hai…aur main unhe gusse se ghoor ke dekhne lagta hun…
ABHY : aree yaar tu to bura man gaya chal koi na…
MAIN : gusse se, bas ek khul fir dekhe main tere sath kya karta hun
ABHY : han pata hai tu sab kuch kar sakta hai issi lekiye to tujhe aise bandke rakha hai take na to apne hath hila sake aur na hi apne pair samjha..
Tabhi room me char aur guards ate hai aur sath me stretcher bhi tha..jisse dekh
ABHY : chal yaar tujhe surprise dene ka waqt ho gaya hai..
Main kuch nhi bola ba usse ghoor ke dekhte raha..wo charon me se do me mujhe sirf chair se khola baki mere hath aur pair pe to bade bade balt bande the..fir mujhe stretcher pe letane lage to main bahut hil raha tha..to ek ne mere muh pe jabardast mokka mara jisse mere muh se khoon nikla mere phat gaye the…uske aise karne se ABHY
ABHY : full gusse se, ye kya tha…isse sirf main hi mar sakta hun..
G4 : jisne mara tha, sorry sir
ABHY : gusse se, chale isse leke
Fir mujhe charon ne pakad ke stretcher pe ache se band diya aur mujhe leke room se bahar nikal gaye…uske bad mujhe leke bahar aye to maine dekha ye ek bahut bada ground type area tha aur dekhne se lag raha tha ke yahan do floor hai q k upar side kuch door aur puri gol do gallery type hai jisse mujhe laga ke yahan do floor hai sath me bahut se guards bhi the dono floor aur niche ground pe jahan bhi mere naraz jati sab ke hathon me hathiyar aur sab mujhe kafi trained lag rahe the yahan bhi kafi sare the…mujhe aisa sabko dekhte huwe
ABHY : kya dekh raha hai…ye humari fauj hai..sab ek se badke ek hai inme..
Main kuch nhi bola bas ABHY ko ghoor ke dekhta raha wo mere pair ke side chal raha tha..jisse wo mujhe saaf dekh raha tha..ab hum log ek building me pahunche jo ground ke ke biche me bani thi aur iske andar bhi guards the ye bhi do floor ki thi..main jo bahar ke do floor ki baat ki wo ground ke charon taraf jo ending tha jo is ground ko ghere diwar thi uspe bane the…aise hi wo mujhe leke wahan pahunche jahan mere ek shock mera intezar kar raha tha…ye room thoda andar tha shayad humne teen room par kar diya tha magar ye room nhi mujhe andar ane ke baad pata chala ke ye ek bahut baha hall hai yahan bhi kuch gurads the koi 7 jo mere sath aye the wo the 6 to total yahan 13 guards the tabhi hall me ek bande ki entry hui wo BASE INCHARGE(B IN) tha mujhe unke baat se ye pata chala…
B IN : bas ate hi hoge
ABHY : theek hai..jab tak apna kam karte hai..
Fir mujhe stretcher se utha ke wahan jo chair thi uspe baitha ke mujhe achi se bandha gaya..
Tabhi hall ka gate khula aur jo andar aya usse dekh mujhe ABHY se bhi ziyada bada jhatka laga…teen logon ki entry hui jisme do guards the magar unke uniform dosron se alag thi jisme ek bahut ki zabardast body wala lag raha tha aur shayad dosri ladki thi..dono ke chere cover the full black tigh kapde me the aur unke pass bahut se hathiyart the jaise guns talwar chote nife bole to fully loaded commando..aur teesra banda jisse dekh mujhe shock laga ye koi aur nhi SANJAY SINGHANIA (SANJAY S) hi tha..aya wo ladka aur ladki jake uske piche uske sath chalte huwe mere pass aye..
SANJAY S : kaise ho ROCKY
MAIN : to ye sab tumhara kiya dhara hai SANJAY S..
SANJAY S : han bilkul sahi samjhe
MAIN : magar kaise.
SANJAY S : to tumhe janna hai kaise…to suno jaise hi mujhe SUDHIR LAL ne bataya ke tum zinda ho tabse hi main tumhe marne ka plan bana raha tha..magar mujhe pata tha ke tum itni asani se mere hath na lago ge issi liye pehle maine tumhari current information nikali..main to tujhe mara huwa samjh raha tha pichile ek saal se magar dekho to tum zinda ho aur tum sath me MADHU RAJUT ke bête bhi ho jisne mujhe GISS se nikalwa diya tha…
MAIN : shock me, kya tum GISS me the pehle
SANJAY S : han q tumhari MAA ne ye nhi bataya ke main bhi ek waqt tha jab GISS ka board member huwa karta tha..magar tumhari MAA aur tumhare baap me mujhe waha se nikalwa diya..meri sari izzat mitti me mila di aur mujhe jail ho gai..sirf is liye ke maine ek khufia info bahar bechi thi..main tumhare maa baap ke samne bahut gidgiraya magar nhi dono ne mujhe us halme pahunchne me koi karsar nhi chhodi thi meri sari daulat izzat sab kuch mujhe se chin liya gaya aur mujhe umar bhar ke liye jail me sadne ke liye chhud diya gaya…magr fir mujhe wo log mile aur mujhe jail se nikal waya aur unhone meri madad ki aur mujhe GISS ke khilaf khada kiya aur underworld ki kali duniya ka mujhe badshah banaya..sab kuch sahi chal raha tha kai saal se magar tabhi tum aye aur humme khatam karne lage GISS ke sath milke…jiske chalte mujhe tumhe apne raste se hatana pada..magar tumhe marne se pehle hi tum humme bahut nuksan pahuncha chuke the…magar humne tumhe mar hi diya akhirkar aur dekho waqt ne aaj fir se tumhe mere jaal me fas diya..pehle bhi tum mere raste me aye aur aaj bhi magar isbar tumhare pass kuch hai jo mera hai..usse liye bina main tumhe mar nhi sakta…
MAIN : mere pass aisa kuch bhi nhi hai
SANJAY S : hai jo main bas kuch hi deer me tumhare sharer se nikal luga
MAIN : mere sharer se….
SANJAY S : han
MAIN : nhi aisa kuch bhi nhi hai
SANJAY S ne bina meri baat ka jawab diye..ek banda jo wahan computer pe baitha tha dekhne se koi scientist ya doctor lag raha tha usse ishara kiya
Tabhi jiss chair pe main baitha tha uspe bahut teez bijili ke jaise jhatke lagne lage..aur ek vacuum type kuch mere sine se kuch upar ake laga aur main dard se sirf hil raha tha..ye koi 5 mint tak chalta raha…
SANJAY S : us scientist type bande se, kya huwa kuch ho q nhi raha hai..
SCIENTIST : pata nhi sir screen pe iski body me kuch bhi aisa nhi bata raha hai…
Itna suna tha ke SANJAY S bhi jake computer screen pe dekhne lagta hai…sach me meri body me aisa kuch nhi tha jaisa wo dekhna chahata tha…
SANJAY S : band karo..
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