Romance Ek Bhool(Completed)

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 43​

Wo ladki jo niche girne wali thi wo hi Priya thi.

Jab Sameer ne kuch kadam badhaya Priya ki taraf tab Sameer bhi barish ki vajah se achanak se slip ho gaya aur girte hi uski munh se ek cheekh nikla "Ouch".

Ye cheekh utna tej to nahi tha lekin saamne gir rahi Priya sunn leti hai...Priya ko bachne ki umeed fir se aa gaya aur aawaj se pata chal gaya ki wo ladka ka cheekh hai.

Priya bhi madad ke liye boli.

Priya:- Please mujhe bacha lijiye...Abb mera haath ka pakad kam ho raha hai...Haath fisal raha hai...Please abhi mai marna nahi chaahti...Please bacha lijiye mujhe.

(Marne ka dar kise nahi hota...Saamne maut najar aane se Priya bhi ek dam dar gayi thi aur Sameer se madad maang rahi thi...Wo itna ghabra gayi thi ki uska dar uski aawaj se hi pata chal raha tha...Aur upar se jordaar baarish ki aawaj...Koi bhi ye nahi keh sakta tha ki ye aawaj Priya ka hai...Aur Sameer bhi iss haalat me nahi tha ki wo kiska aawaj hai aur kaun niche gir raha hai iske baare me pata kare.)

Sameer:- Aap ghabraaiye mat...Aapko bachane hi aaya hu...Please aap himmat mat harna aur kuch der ke liye acche se patthar ko pakde rakhiye...Mai gir gaya hu ...Jaldi aa raha hu...Aap khud ko sambhaale rahiye.

Sameer ne bhi fikar ke saath kaha...Wo aage badhte hue Priya ko hausala de raha tha...Priya ne bhi Sameer ki tarah uske aawaj ko nahi pehchana...Lekin Sameer ki baat se uska ummeed aur badha ki wo ladka usse bacha lega...Bas abb usse kuch pal ke liye khud ko sambhalna tha.

Sameer bhi jaldi se Priya ki aur kareeb pahunch gaya...Aur jaise hi niche jhuk kar Priya ka haath pakadne waala tha ki fir se Sameer ka pair fisal gaya aur fir se Sameer gir gaya...Iss baar girte vakt Sameer ka baaya haath ek patthaar se buri tarah cheel gaya aur usme se khun tapakne laga...Ye Priya dekh leti hai aur ghabraa jaati hai.

Priya:- Aap thik to hai na?

Sameer:- Haan thik hu...Bas pair slip ho gaya tha...Chinta ki koi baat nahi...Mai aa gaya hu.

Itna keh kar Sameer gire hue hi thoda aage badh kar apne daaya haath se Priya ka kalaayi pakad leta hai aur upar khinchne lagta hai...Lekin khinch paana bahut mushkil ho raha tha.

Abb Priya hawaa me latak gayi thi...Niche 200 ft ka gehra khaai tha...Bas Sameer ke haath ne usse pakad rakha tha...Aur koi support nahi tha.

Jab Sameer ko laga ki wo uss ladki ko aise khinch nahi paayega tab wo apna dono haath se Priya ka kalai pakad leta hai...Aur apna saara taakat istemaal karke Priya ko khinch hi leta hai...Iss pure ghatna ke dauraan naahi Sameer ne Priya ko aur nahi Priya ne Sameer ko dekha tha.

Priya jaise hi upar aa gayi...Usne ek lamba saans lekar raahat mehsus kiya...Wo to shaayad ummeed bhi chhod chuki thi ki wo bachegi...Thoda idhar udhar dekh ke jab wo Sameer ki taraf dekhti hai tab usse Sameer ka peeth dikhai deta hai...Wo kuch kehne hi waali thi ki Sameer jaldi se daudte hue niche ki taraf jaata hai aur kehta hai.

Sameer:- Sorry...Lekin mai abhi busy hu...Baat karne ka time nahi hai.

Sameer ko Priya ko upar khinchne ke baad firse yaad aaya ki Shruti ka birthday hai aaj aur usne Shruti ko wish nahi kiya hai...Aur shaam bhi hone laga hai to Shruti bhi uska intejaar kar rahi hogi...Wo jaldi se Shruti ke paas jaana chaahta tha aur Priya se formal baat karke time waste nahi karna chaahta tha...Sameer ko baat karna jaruri mehsoos bhi nahi hua...Usne apna kartavya pura kiya uss ladki ko bachakar aur yahi uske liye kaafi tha.


Priya ko thoda buraa lagta hai aur thoda afsosh bhi hota hai uss ladke se baat na karne ke liye...Fir wo sochti hai ki Karan kaha chala gaya jab wo niche gir gayi thi tab usse bachaane ke liye keh kar...Fir usse lagta hai ki usse Karan ne hi bachaya hai kyuki aaj Sameer aur Karan ka getup luckily same tha...Dono ka height bhi laghbhag same hi tha...Usse lagta hai ki ye ladka Karan hi hai aur usse thanks kehne ke liye niche camp me chali jaati hai.

Dono apni apni makshad se niche ki aur jaate hai lekin iss baat se puri tarah anjaan ki inn dono se thodi dur khada Karan sab kuch dekh raha hai aur kuch soch kar apna haath ko khud se hi bilkul Sameer ki tarah injured kar leta hai aur wo bhi shortcut lekar niche camp ki taraf daud laga deta hai.

Niche ek ground par 4 jagah par tent laga tha baarish se bachne ke liye...Teacher aur waha par maujood student ne decide kiya ki wo log iss baarish me hotel tak waapas nahi jaa sakte hai...Aur jab tak baarish nahi rukta wo sabhi yahi tent par rukenge...Aur jaldi jaldi 4 jagah par tent laga diya.

Sameer ka niche pahunchne ke saath hi wo apna haath cheel jaane ki vajah se ghadi nikaal kar ek safe jagah par rakh deta hai aur ek tent me ghus jaata hai...Aur thoda paani lekar apne mitti laga hua dress ko saaf karne lagta hai.

Sameer khud ko thik kar raha tha ki Karan ne bade saawdhaan ho kar uss jagah se Sameer ka ghadi utha leta hai aur wo bhi kuch der tak Sameer ki najro se bachne ke liye alag camp me chala jaata hai aur Priya ka intejaar karne lagta hai.

Kuch time baad Priya bhi niche aa jaati hai...Aur Karan ke haath me Sameer ka ghadi aur ghaaw dekh usse yakin ho jaata hai ki Karan ne hi usse bachaya tha...Priya Karan ke paas jaati hai aur shukriya bhari najar se Karan ko dekhti hai...Aaj wo ek alag najar se Karan ko dekh rahi thi...Karan ke liye uske dil me izzat aur bhi badh gaya...Wo bol to nahi rahi thi lekin ek alag najar se Karan ko dekh rahi thi aur kuch alag mehsoos kar rahi thi..

Karan ke chehre me bhi muskurahat aa jaata hai aur usse bhi lag raha tha ki bahut jald Priya uski ho jaayegi.


Sab kuch thik karne ke baad Sameer teacher se request karke hotel ke liye nikal jaata hai...Teacher aur Rajesh ne unhe rokne ki bahut koshish kiya lekin wo nahi maana aur Teacher ko jaise taise manaa kar hotel ki taraf Shruti ke paas jaane ke liye nikal gaya waha se.

Jaate vakt usne apna ghadi lete hue jaane ka socha...Jab wo ghadi ke paas pahuncha to ghadi ko gaayab dekh usse bahut gussa aaya...Lekin wo kuch kar nahi paaya...Pehle hi usse der ho gaya tha aur aise me aur der nahi kar sakta tha..

Wo gusse me chal pada hotel ki taraf...Lekin usse kaha pata tha ki ye to gusse ka suruwaat hai...Aage Shruti ka Priya ke khilaaf jo plan tha uski vajah se Sameer ka gussa aur badhne wala hai aur saath me Sameer aur Priya ki nafrat jo aage jaakar ek bahut bada tufaan ka roop lene wala hai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 44​

Sameer teji se hotel ki aur jaa raha tha...Wo aur der nahi karna chaahta tha...Shruti ko surprise dene ki chakkar me pehle hi wo bahut late ho chuka tha...Abb wo bas jaldi se hotel tak pahunchna chaahta tha...Usko hotel pahunchne ka itna jaldi tha ki wo ye bhi bhul gaya ki wo baarish me bhig gaya hai yaa kuch samay pehle wo bahut gussa tha...Wo bina ruke bahut teji se hotel ki taraf jaa raha tha.

Raaste me hi ek Bakery se usne order kiya hua cake le liya aur bina koi der kiye pahunch gaya hotel me aur jaakar Shruti ke room me knock karne laga.

Shruti to pehle se hi udaas baithi thi apne room me aur khud ko hi kosh rahi thi ki Sameer ko jaane de kar usne bahut bada galti kar diya hai...Khidki se baahar baarish ko dekh rahi thi ki kab ye vaarish khatm hogi aur wo Sameer se mil paayegi...Baahar ho rahi tej baarish dekh kar usko pata to chal gaya tha ki ye baarish 1 ya 2 ghante se pehle nahi rukega...Matlab kuch pal aur intejaar karna padega.

Shruti ko Sameer par gussa bhi aa raha tha ki Sameer kaise uska birthday bhul sakta hai...Kuch din pehle hi to usne bataya tha Sameer ko ki aaj uska birthday hai...Lekin Sameer ne wish karna to dur thik se baat bhi nahi kiya tha usse...Sabhi relatives aur khaas dost ne usko wish kar diya tha lekin Sameer ne abhi tak nahi...Yahi baatein sochte hue Shruti udaas ho gayi thi.


Jab uska gate knock hua to gusse me wo door ke paas gayi aur kholte hi gate me khade Sameer par baras padi.

Shruti:- Kyu disturb kar rahe ho mujhe? Aur kyu baar baar gate knock kar rahe ho?

Shruti ne socha koi aur hi hoga...Aur Shruti uss vakt baat karne ke mood me nahi thi to apna saara gussa gate par khade shaks par utaar diya.

Lekin jab usne gaur se Sameer ko dekha to wo ekdam se hairaan ho gayi...Usse kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kaise react kare.

Sameer:- Abb apna munh band bhi karo...Warna koi macchar ghus jaayega.

Sameer ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Shruti:- Sameer tum!!!Aur tumhaara ye haalat kaise...Jaao pehle apne room me aur acche se nahaalo warna bukhaar lag jaayega.

Shruti ki aawaj se hi lag raha tha ki wo kitna hairaan hai...Usne Sameer ka iss haalat me aane ka bilkul bhi expect nahi kiya tha.

Sameer:- Kuch jaruri kaam ke liye aaya tha...Warna mujhe koi shaukh nahi vaarish me aise bhaagte hue aane me...Apna kaam pura karke hi nahaane jaaunga.

Sameer ne muskuraate hue kaha.

Shruti:- Aisa kaunsa kaam hai ki tum aise vaarish me bhaagte hue aa gaye aur wo bhi mere kamre me.

Shruti Sameer ki har baat pe aur bhi jyada hairaan ho rahi thi.

Sameer:- Wo bataane se jyada dikhane me hi accha hoga.

Sameer ne fir Shruti ki taraf muskuraate hue dekha aur kaha...Shruti abb pura confuse ho gayi thi aur usse kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki Sameer kya kehna chaahta hai.

Shruti:- Tum paheli kyu bujha rahe ho...Mujhe tumhaari koi bhi baat samajh me nahi aa raha...Jo bhi kehna hai khul kar kaho...Aur tum kya dikhaana chaahte ho mujhe?

Iss baar bhi Shruti ki aawaj me hairaani tha.

Sameer:- Pehle andar aaunga tab hi dikha paaunga na...Yaa fir gate se hi bhagaane ka plan hai.

Shruti:- Oh sorry...Mai bhi naa...Baato hi baato me tumhe andar bulaana bhul hi gayi...Aao andar aao aur jo bhi kehna chaahte ho khul kar bataao.

Iske baad Sameer room me aata hai aur haath me liya hua plastic ke andar ka cake Shruti ke haath me pakda deta hai.

Shruti:- Kya hai ye.

Sameer:- Yahi to dikhaana chaahta tha tumhe.

Shruti:- Aakhir isme kya hai jo tum mujhe dikhane ke liye itne dur se bhingte hue aaye ho.

Shruti ne hairaani ke saath kaha aur table me wo cake ka plastic rakh ke utshukta ke saath khola.

Jab plastic hataa kar dekha to Shruti ko apne aankho par vishwaas hi nahi hua...Jo chehra kuch pal pehle udaas tha abb achanak se muskaan aa gaya...Pal bhar me uska dil khus ho gaya...Saamne ek pyaara sa birthday cake tha.


Acche se cake dekhne ke baad jab usne ghum kar Sameer ki taraf dekha to paaya ki Sameer Shruti ka muskuraata chehra dekh muskura raha tha.

Kuch pal ke liye koi kuch na bola...Shruti to bahut khus ho gayi thi aur usse samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya bole...Sameer bhi Shruti ka muskuraata hua chehra dekhne me vyast tha.

Kuch pal yunhi chup rehne ke baad Sameer Shruti ke paas aaya aur bola.

Sameer:- I am sorry Shruti...Mujhe pehle se hi pata tha ki aaj tumhara birthday hai...Lekin kya karu movies jyada dekhne ki vajah se dimaag kharaab ho gaya hai...Movies ki tarah hi tumhe surprise dena chaahta tha...Lekin iss chakkar me bahut der ho gaya aur baarish ki vajah se aur late...Jaise taise aa gaya...Mai bhi naa...Jo baat kehne aaya tha wo bataana chhod bakwaas karne lag gaya.

Happy Birthday Shruti....Many many happy returns of the day...May God continue to bless your life and give you the desires of your heart.

Sameer ne iss andaaz me kaha jaise Shruti se jyada wo khus hai Shruti ki birthday me.

Shruti abhi bhi kuch bol nahi paa rahi thi...Wo hairaan aur khus dono hi thi...Uske kaan me baar baar Sameer ka birthday wish gunj raha tha.

Sameer:- Abb aise hi khade rahogi ya cake kaat kar khilaaogi bhi...Kab se wait kar raha hu.

Sameer ne majaak karte hue kaha.

Sameer ne jaise hi ye baat kaha Shruti ne Sameer ko gale laga liya aur kaha.

Shruti:- Tum bhi naa...Majaak karna kabhi nahi chhodoge...Kitna acche se wish kiya lekin agle hi pal majaak...Waise thanks Sameer....Mujhe itna accha surprise dene ke liye...Ye birthday mere liye khaas birthdays me se ek hai...Pehli baar ghar se baahar celebrate kar rahi hu aur wo bhi apne ek bahut acche dost ke saath.

Mujhe to laga ki tum bhul gaye hoge mera birthday...Par tumhe to yaad tha...Bahut khushi hui ye jaan kar.

Sameer:- Aise kaise bhul jaata...Mera dost ka birthday hai...Mai to dosto ke liye jaan tak de sakta hu to ye birthday yaad karna kaunsa badi baat hai.

Shruti:- Tum sach me filmy ho...Abhi bhi waise hi dialogue maar rahe ho.

Sameer:- Wo to mai hu.

Iske baad Shruti cake kaat kar Sameer ko khilaati hai aur Sameer bhi ek tukra cake Shruti ko khilaata hai.

Aur kuch der tak dono aise hi baatein karte hai.

Shruti ke liye ye shaam bahut special ban gaya tha...Wo jo chaahti thi wo ho gaya...Rajesh ki gair maujoodgi me Sameer ke saath usne acche se apna birthday celebrate kiya.

Aise hi kuch der baat karne ke baad Shruti kehti hai.

Shruti:- Sameer abb tum jaa kar nahaa kar fresh ho jaao...Raat ko 8 baje yaha niche hall par party rakha hai maine.

Sameer:- Kis cheej ka party.

Sameer Shruti ka baat samajh gaya tha fir bhi Shruti ko thoda pareshaan kar raha tha.

Shruti:- Aur kis cheej ka party...Mera birthday ka...Abb baat karna band karo aur jaao jaldi se nahaane...Maine teachers se permission le liya hai...Aur sabhi ko invite kiya hai...Abb jaao aur party me milte hai 8 baje niche hall me.

Abb Sameer bhi chala jaata hai fresh hone...Baarish me bhingne ke baad wo bahut uncomfortable mehsoos kar raha tha par wo iss baat se Shruti ke birthday par asar padne nahi dena chaahta tha...Abb wo bhi bina koi baat kiye chala jaata hai apne room me fresh hone.

Sameer ke jaane ke baad hi Shruti ke chehre par ek kutil muskaan aata hai...Birthday to celebrate kar liya abb intejaar tha to party ka...Ye party usne birthday celebrate karne se jyada Priya aur uski doston ka beizzati karne ke liye rakha tha jo abb kuch der me suru hone wala tha...Iss baat se Shruti bhi puri tarah anjaan thi ki iss birthday party sabhi ki life ko buri tarah se prabhawit karne wala hai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

UPDATE 45​

At Night on 8:00 pm


Jaisa ki decide kiya tha party raat 8:00 pm me start hua...Sameer ne sabhi students aur teachers ko inform kar diya Shruti ke birthday ke baare me Priya aur uske dosto ko chhod kar...Kul milaa kar 3 teachers aur 30 students the...Ek chhota sa party rakha gaya tha.

Sabhi students niche hall me maujood the Priya, Karan aur Divya ko chhod kar...Sabhi log thoda excited the...Abb kisi ka birthday party tha to excitement to hona hi tha...Sabhi log khus najar aa rahe the Rajesh ko chhod kar.

Rajesh na chaahte hue bhi Sameer ke kehne par Shruti ke birthday attend kar raha tha...Wo dheemi aawaj me baj raha gaana se bhi chiddh raha tha...Students ki aapsi baat bhi usko bardaasht nahi ho raha tha usse...Usko ghutan mehsoos ho raha tha...Wo bas yahi chaahta tha ki jald se jald ye party khatam ho jaaye aur usko thoda chain mile.

Sabhi students aise hi gaane me thoda dance aur masti kar rahe the ki tabhi Shruti apne birthday dress me waha par aa gayi...Acche se makeup bhi kiya tha...Wo bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi...Bahut si students ki najar Shruti par tika hua tha...Lekin Shruti ka najar sirf Sameer par...Sameer bhi kuch samajh nahi paa raha tha Shruti ki iss najar ka matlab kya hai...Wo to bas Shruti ki birthday aur uski chehre ka khushi dekh khus tha..

Thoda sa halla aur gaane ki aawaj se Priya aur Divya apne room me baithe disturb ho gaye the...Unhe samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya vajah hai...Wo dono teachers aur managers se complaint karne baahar nikle...Baahar nikal kar sabhi niche hall me pahunche.

Niche pahunchte hi aas paas ka najara aur Shruti ko dekh unhe samajhne me der nahi laga ki aaj Shruti ka birthday hai...Lekin unhe kya matlab Shruti ke birthday se...Chali gayi teachers se complain karne...Teachers ne bhi bas kuch der ki baat hai keh kar taal diya.

Abb wo dono bhi kuch nahi kehti hai aur bas jaldi se iss party ka khatam hone ka intejaar karti hai.

Kuch hi der me cake kaatne ka vakt bhi aa gaya...Cake bada tha...Aur sabhi students kuch pieces khaa sakte the.

Cake katne ke baad Shruti ne sabse pehla tukda Sameer ko khilaaya aur aise hi dhire dhire sabhi ne cake khaa liye...Rajesh ne bhi na chaahte hue bhi cake khaaya...Sabhi ko cake mila Priya, Divya aur Karan ko chhod kar.

Priya ko to iss baat se koi fark nahi pada...Wo to pehle se hi jaanti thi ki aisa hi hone waala hai...Priya ko bhi cake khaane me koi interest nahi tha...Lekin Divya ko ye sab apna beizzati lag raha tha...Wo bas gusse ka ghunt pikar reh gayi...Cake kaat te vakt sabhi ne Shruti ko wish kiya tha lekin Priya aur uski dosto ne nahi.

Yahi se pata chal raha tha ki inn sabki dushmani kitna badh gaya tha...Jo shaayad hi kabhi thik ho paaye...Shruti to andar se bahut khush thi Priya aur uski dosto ko beizzat karke...Wo to abhi aur bhi bahut kuch karne waali thi...Rajesh ko Shruti ki iss harkat par bahut gussa aa raha tha lekin kuch bol nahi raha tha...Sameer shaant tha aur usse iss maamle se koi asar nahi pad raha tha usse.

Abb cake kaatne ke baad vakt aaya gifts dene ka...Yahi wo mauka tha jo Shruti itne dino se intejaar kar rahi thi...Shruti ne pehle se hi sabhi ke liye kuch na kuch gift ke liye kharid rakha tha...Sabhi ke liye alag alag gifts liya tha usne...Sabhi gifts mehenga lag raha tha...Baap ke paisa kis din kaam aata? Paise ki koi chinta tha nahi to sabhi ki najar me apna impression badhane ke liye aur Priya ko beizzat karne ke liye ye kadam jaanbujh kar Shruti ne uthaaya tha.

Sabhi ko gifts dene ke baad Shruti apne chehre par kutil muskaan liye Priya aur Divya ki taraf badhi...Aur unke paas pahunchte hi.

Shruti:- Priya ye lo 5 rs aur Divya tum bhi lo 5rs...Ye tumhaara gift...Abb kya karu khaali haath to bhej nahi sakti...To socha tumhe bhi gift de du jo tum dono ka aukaat se ekdam match kare.

Shruti ne Priya aur Divya ka majaak udaate hue kaha...Sabhi shocked ho gaye Shruti ki baat sun kar...Kisi ko uska ye baat pasand nahi aaya lekin koi kuch nahi bola...Sameer bhi shocked tha Shruti ki iss behavior se.

Priya aur Divya bahut gussa ho gayi Shruti ki iss baat par...Divya jo pehle se hi gussa thi wo kuch bolne hi wali thi ki Priya ne uska haath pakad kar chup rehne ka ishaaa kiya aur khud kehne lagi.

Priya:- Sorry Shruti...Mai gift lene se kabhi mana nahi karti lekin jab gift dene wala tum jaisi giri hui ho usse to mai kabhi nahi leti.

Priya ne bhi palatwaar kiya...Fir se sab shocked ho gaye...Sabhi ko pata tha ki Shruti aur Priya ke bich banti nahi hai lekin kisi ne socha nahi tha ki baat itna badh jaayega.

Shruti ne jaise hi ye suna uska gussa saatwe aasman par pahunch gaya...Usne socha tha ki Priya ko aise gift dene se uska bahut beizzati hoga...Aas paas ke log hasenge Priya par aur uska badla pura ho jaayega...Lekin usne soch nahi tha ki Priya hi uska beizzati sabke saamne iss tarah se kar degi.

Shruti:- Tu mujhe giri hui bolti hai...Teri aukaat hi kya hai...Mere ghar me naukrani banne ke laayak bhi nahi hai aur mujhse jubaan lada rahi hai...Aur sabke saamne mujhse badtameezi kar rahi hai?

Itna keh kar Shruti ne Priya ko ek thapaad marne hi wali thi ki Priya uska haath bich me pakad kar ulta thappad Shruti ko maar deti hai aur kehti hai.

Priya:- Kya socha tha tune? Tu aise hi aakar hame beizzat kar degi aur ham chup ho kar sun lenge...Tujhe pehle hi kaha tha hamse dur raha kar lekin tujhe bahut shaukh hai ladne ka...Agar fir se aayi naa to dekh le naa mai kya karti hu tera...Abb bhaag yaha se.

Pal bhar me maahaul badal gaya tha...Aur itna badal gaya tha ki Priya ne Shruti ko sabke saamne thappad maar diya wo bhi uske hi birthday par...Sab shocked ho kar tamasha dekh rahe the...Kisi ko samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai aur kya kare...Shruti ko abb bahut hi beizzati mehsoos ho raha tha...Wo bas apna munh jhukaye khadi thi.

Sameer:- Priya!!

Sameer Priya ko samjhaane ke liye aage badha tha taaki maamla aur na bigde lekin Priya ne uski baat ko bich me hi kaat kar kaha.

Priya:- Chup...Bilkul chup...Apni jubaan se mera naam mat lena aur mujhse baat bhi mat karna.

Priya ek dam se aakramak hokar boli.

Sameer bhi abb kuch nahi bol paaya...Bas Priya ko dekh raha tha...Achanak chehre par gusse ki bhaaw aane lage...Sameer se koi choti si baat par badtameezi kare wo Sameer ko bilkul bhi pasand nahi tha lekin yaha to Priya ne sabhi ke saamne chup kara diya...Jis ladki se wo itna nafrat karta tha aaj ussi ladki ne sabke saamne usse jaleel kiya tha...Iss baat ne Sameer ke ego ko hurt kiya tha...Apna ego hurt hone se aur Shruti ka beizzati se Sameer bhi gusse me laal ho gaya.

Abb Sameer aur Priya ke bich ek beintehaa nafrat paidaa ho gaya tha aur iske upar Shruti ki saazishein...Yahi se suru hua nafrat ka khel aur Sameer ka bhool.

Sameer kuch bolne hi wala tha ki Priya bhi apna dabaa hua gussa ko nikalte hue bolne lagi...Aaj Sameer se bahut kuch kehna chaahti thi Priya...Saara hisaab barabar karna tha usko....Aur aaj usse ye mauka bhi mil gaya...Wo bhi Sameer se utna hi nafrat karne lagi thi jitna ki Sameer...Chehra aur jubaan par gussa laa kar wo kehti hai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

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[lone_hunterr]

Sameer is epitome of hypocrisy
Jitna samjhdaar usse story ki starting me bataya gaya tha flashback dekh vo lagta to nhi h utna smart. Anyway shayad issi liye to ye uski bhool h...
And hope ki present mein usse realise ho ki ye sara kand ussi ki vajah se hua h.

Update shandaar h. Writing bhi bhut acchi h and I will request ki nayi stories mein emojis ka bhi use kare. Even though you have mentioned the expressions very well but emojis will help much more.

 

[Naina]

Sameer - angry young boy...
Kabhi kabhi bina samjhe aisa kuch kar deta hai ki...... ab kya kahu
priya - moody........
par ye dono story characters mujhe pasand hain....
Brilliant update champ ji..........

 

[Naina]

Thanks Naina ji for your support and review...Free time toh bilkul bhi nahi hai...1 hafte baad itna busy ho jaaunga ki Kasam me bhi updates delay hone lagenge...Kasam aur Ek Bhool ko yaha complete karne ke baad hi kuch soch sakta hun...Tab tak ke liye possible nahi hai...Keep supporting.

Koi baat nahi champ ji jab time mile de dijiye......
actually... ush story mein ek motivation hain ... ek jazba hain.......

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sameer is epitome of hypocrisy
Jitna samjhdaar usse story ki starting me bataya gaya tha flashback dekh vo lagta to nhi h utna smart. Anyway shayad issi liye to ye uski bhool h...
And hope ki present mein usse realise ho ki ye sara kand ussi ki vajah se hua h.

Update shandaar h. Writing bhi bhut acchi h and I will request ki nayi stories mein emojis ka bhi use kare. Even though you have mentioned the expressions very well but emojis will help much more.

Thanks Lone Hunterr bhai for your support and review...Ye bhool Sameer ki Hypocrisy se bhi jyada kuch aur vajah se hua hai...Haan par iss incidence ke baad Sameer me biasness jarur aayega.
Baaki ki updates yaa fir story ke kuch update me emoji toh use kiya hai special expression ke liye...Koshish karunga thoda aur use karne ki...Aise hi saath bane rahiye bhai.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Sameer - angry young boy...
Kabhi kabhi bina samjhe aisa kuch kar deta hai ki...... ab kya kahu
priya - moody........
par ye dono story characters mujhe pasand hain....
Brilliant update champ ji..........

Thanks Naina ji for your support and review...Iss story me dono ke baare me aapse jyada abhi kaun jaan sakta hai ...Keep supporting.

 

[Champ_AK_81]

Koi baat nahi champ ji jab time mile de dijiye......
actually... ush story mein ek motivation hain ... ek jazba hain.......

ASAP