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Thriller Ek daastan....... Pyar ki (Romance, Thriller & Sci-Fiction)

Apko yeh story kaisi lgi?

  • Fabulous

    Votes: 108 77.7%
  • Nice

    Votes: 28 20.1%
  • Worst

    Votes: 3 2.2%
  • Story aage bdaun yan yahin khatam kr doon

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Yahi khatam kr do.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Aage bdao

    Votes: 1 0.7%

  • Total voters
    139
  • Poll closed .

Bilal jan

My Attitude your problem 🖕 Your attitude my foot
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Bhai story ko continue karo kafi dair ho gai hy koi update nai aai.....
Waiting for next update............
 

A-Star

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aapne ise band kyu kiya kripaya kahani jari rakhe
 

A-Star

Member
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naye update ki pratiksha hai
 

Smith_15

Well-Known Member
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Have read your story it was 👍

Update please
 

Vk248517

I love Fantasy and Sci-fiction story.
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Update-1
Ek sunsan sadak charo tarah ghanghor andhera bs street lights se aati madhaym roshni, sadak ke dono taraf ghanna jungle, her taraf bs sanatta...
Usi sadak pe ek adami paidal chlte hue ja raha tha.... Dark blue jean, white shirt with jacket... Ek hath me jalti hui cigarette aur dusre hath me bear ki bottle... Wo thoda nashe me hone ke karan ladkhda raha tha......
Achanak ek car bahut tezi se us sadak pe chlti hui aati hai aur us adami ke pass se guzarte hue aage chli jati hai.......karib 10-15 min aur chlne ke baad us adami ko kisi ki cheekh sunai deti hai.... Pehle to wo ignore krke agge chlne lagta hai but baad me use fir se kisi ki cheekh sunai deti hai wo kisi ladki ki cheekh thi.... Es baar wo adami us awaz ki disha ki taraf chal padta hai jo jungle se aa rahi thi.... Use kuch der agge chlne per jungle ke ander wahi car khadi milti hai jo kuch der pehle uske pass se tezi se guzri thi.... Wo thoda aur agge chal ke dekhta hai to waha do ladke ek ladki ke sath zabardasti krte hue pata hai...... Ladki ka top pura fat chuka tha aur abhi sirf red bra aur jean me thi.... Us adami ko yeh sab dekh bahut gussa atta hai to wo idher udher kuch dhundhne lagta hai.... Jald hi use ek ped ki tuti hui tahni (branch) milti hai.... Wo use uthake ladko ki taraf jata hai...... Pehle wo apna chahra rumal se dhak leta hai.... Fir savdhani se ek ladke ke sur pe wo tahni marta hai jis se us ladke ka sir phat jata hai aur wo wahi behosh ho jata hai... Dusra ladka jab tak sambhlta wo uspe us tahani se anginat war krta hai jis se us ladke ki halat bahut kharab ho jati hai... Akhir me uske sir pe war krke use bhi behosh kr deta hai...... Ladki jab ye sb dekhti hai to bahut dar jati hai aur ghutne mod apne app ko dhkne lagti hai..... Tab wo adami apni jacket utar ke use deta hai.... Wo ladki jhat se jacket lekr pehn leti hai... But wo abhi bhi dar rahi thi.... Is per wo adami kehta hai...

Adami... Mujhse darne ki jarurat nahi hai.... Chalo main tumhe tumhare gher chod deta hu...

Aur wo mod ker gadi ke pass jakr (jisme wo do ladke is ladki ko laye the) driving seat pe beth jata hai to wo ladki bhi uthkr uske bagal wali seat pe beth jati hai..... Adami us se address puchker us taraf chalne lagta hai...... Pure safar dono me koi baat nahi hoti ladki bs ghor se us adami ko dekhe ja rahi thi... Jiska chehra abhi bhi dhakka hua tha bs ankhen hi dikh rahi thi.... Gehri kali ankhen jinme ek ajeeb se kahmoshi aur kuch bhi nahi..... Wo adami use uske gher chod ke apne raste chal padta hai....
Nice updates
 

Babasarkar

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Update-1
Ek sunsan sadak charo tarah ghanghor andhera bs street lights se aati madhaym roshni, sadak ke dono taraf ghanna jungle, her taraf bs sanatta...
Usi sadak pe ek adami paidal chlte hue ja raha tha.... Dark blue jean, white shirt with jacket... Ek hath me jalti hui cigarette aur dusre hath me bear ki bottle... Wo thoda nashe me hone ke karan ladkhda raha tha......
Achanak ek car bahut tezi se us sadak pe chlti hui aati hai aur us adami ke pass se guzarte hue aage chli jati hai.......karib 10-15 min aur chlne ke baad us adami ko kisi ki cheekh sunai deti hai.... Pehle to wo ignore krke agge chlne lagta hai but baad me use fir se kisi ki cheekh sunai deti hai wo kisi ladki ki cheekh thi.... Es baar wo adami us awaz ki disha ki taraf chal padta hai jo jungle se aa rahi thi.... Use kuch der agge chlne per jungle ke ander wahi car khadi milti hai jo kuch der pehle uske pass se tezi se guzri thi.... Wo thoda aur agge chal ke dekhta hai to waha do ladke ek ladki ke sath zabardasti krte hue pata hai...... Ladki ka top pura fat chuka tha aur abhi sirf red bra aur jean me thi.... Us adami ko yeh sab dekh bahut gussa atta hai to wo idher udher kuch dhundhne lagta hai.... Jald hi use ek ped ki tuti hui tahni (branch) milti hai.... Wo use uthake ladko ki taraf jata hai...... Pehle wo apna chahra rumal se dhak leta hai.... Fir savdhani se ek ladke ke sur pe wo tahni marta hai jis se us ladke ka sir phat jata hai aur wo wahi behosh ho jata hai... Dusra ladka jab tak sambhlta wo uspe us tahani se anginat war krta hai jis se us ladke ki halat bahut kharab ho jati hai... Akhir me uske sir pe war krke use bhi behosh kr deta hai...... Ladki jab ye sb dekhti hai to bahut dar jati hai aur ghutne mod apne app ko dhkne lagti hai..... Tab wo adami apni jacket utar ke use deta hai.... Wo ladki jhat se jacket lekr pehn leti hai... But wo abhi bhi dar rahi thi.... Is per wo adami kehta hai...

Adami... Mujhse darne ki jarurat nahi hai.... Chalo main tumhe tumhare gher chod deta hu...

Aur wo mod ker gadi ke pass jakr (jisme wo do ladke is ladki ko laye the) driving seat pe beth jata hai to wo ladki bhi uthkr uske bagal wali seat pe beth jati hai..... Adami us se address puchker us taraf chalne lagta hai...... Pure safar dono me koi baat nahi hoti ladki bs ghor se us adami ko dekhe ja rahi thi... Jiska chehra abhi bhi dhakka hua tha bs ankhen hi dikh rahi thi.... Gehri kali ankhen jinme ek ajeeb se kahmoshi aur kuch bhi nahi..... Wo adami use uske gher chod ke apne raste chal padta hai....


Just padna start Kiya story ka plot accha laga age dakhte he
 

Abhimanyu Roy

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Bhai please story ko continue karo, chaahe update derr se dena but itni shaandar story incomplete nahi rehni chahiye.
 
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