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Thriller Ek daastan....... Pyar ki (Romance, Thriller & Sci-Fiction)

Apko yeh story kaisi lgi?

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  • Story aage bdaun yan yahin khatam kr doon

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Naughtyrishabh

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Update 27

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ab to had hi ho gyi bhai.
E simi ki ma Isha kaise janti h aaryan ko.
Iska thoda to hint mil hi gya ki o Aaryan ko bachpan se janti h .
Or inke bich hui baatein bhi bata rahi h ki flashback jaroor khatarnaak hoga.
Bahut hi badhia update tha bhai.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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Naughtyrishabh

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Update 28

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bada hi Khoobsurati se in dono ka pyar dikhaya h aapne.
Or aru ka bachpana bhi.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Lajwaab.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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harryharsh31

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Update 28

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Bada hi Khoobsurati se in dono ka pyar dikhaya h aapne.
Or aru ka bachpana bhi.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Lajwaab.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
Thanks for comment bhai
Keep supporting
 
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harryharsh31

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Nice update bhai romance bhi chalu Ho gaya maja ayega
Thanks for comment bhai
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harryharsh31

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Superb update
Thanks for comment
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harryharsh31

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Update-38

Poonam ne jis adami ko simi ki photo dekr uska pta lgane ko kaha gya tha, us adami ko simi ka naam aur adress mil jata hai, wo poonam ko call lgata hai yeh sab btane ke liye, lekin poonam ka call nahi lag raha tha, wo baar-2 try kr raha tha lekin her baar not reachable aa raha tha, to wo simi ka picha krne ka sochta hai aur simi ke piche lag jata hai.

Idher poonam kisi secret chamber me meeting kr rahi thi, wo chamber zameen se do manjila jitna niche tha, uske upr ek hospital tha, jahan sare gair kanooni kaam hote hai, wahan ground floor pe ek store room me almirah ke piche ek secret door hai, jise kholne se ek lift aati hai jo sidha niche us chamber tk jati hai aur us chamber me abhi poonam ke alawa 4 adami the

Ab aage....

Idher apna hero aryan simi se baat krne ke baad, apni car se kahin jane ke liye nikal jata hai, wahin dusri taraf simi bhi jab gher se nikli to poonam dwara bheja hua adami bhi simi ka picha krne lgta hai, simi gher se nikal kr ek mall me jati hai, wahan se ek dress pasand krti hai aur wahin se us dress ko pehn kr wo khud ko miror me dekhti hai aur man hi man sochti hai 'aaj to aryan ki chuti ho jayegi' aur mand hi mand muakuraye ja rahi thi, fir wahin se kisi parlour me chli jati hai.
Idher aryan apni car ek bde se bangle ke samne rokta hai, fir car se ek remote nikal uska button dbata hai, jis se bangle ka bda sa gate khulne lgta hai, aryan apni car ander le jata hai, fir gate apne aap band ho jata hai, yeh bangla shahr ke ek side me hai, jiske left side se jungle ki shuruwat hai, right side ko shahr, backside khula maidan hai, yeh keh sakte hai ki shahr ke end aur jungle ke shuruwat ke bich yeh bangla hai, bade se gate ke ander aaker charon side pe unchi-2 deewarein hai, wahin charon aur bahut sunder bagicha bna hua hai, jahan her tarah ke flowers hai aur us bagiche ke bich me khubsurat sa bangle jo do manjila hai aur backside pe ek swimming pool hai, aryan car se utar ke ander wale door ke pass aaker apni pocket se ek key nikal us door ko open krta hai aur ander aa jata hai, ander bda sa hall, right side kitchen aur sath me 3 room with attached bathroom, upr wale floor pe bhi 3 room with attached bathroom hai, aryan ander aa ek room me jata hai, room me aaker wo double bed ke upr lgi ek painting pe apna thumb rakhta hai, jiss double bed bich me se khulne lgta hai aur fir adha bed left side aur adha right side ko khisak jata hai aur bich me niche zameen pe ek gupt rasta nikalta, jahan niche jane ke liye stairs bni hui thi, aryan un stairs se niche utarne lgta hai, niche aane pe samne ek door hota hai, jo aryan ke fingerprints aur ratina scan se khulta hai, door ke ander ek bda sa hall, hall aisa tha jaise koi training area ho, us hall kr left me ek door tha, ek right side me aur ek bilkul samne tha, left side wale door ke ander ek lab thi, right side wale door ke ander ek server aur bahut sare computer jo us server se connected the, samne wale door ke ander jaker ek gali (corridor) thi, jiske aage jane pe samne ek chota sa choraha tha jahan 5 rooms aur ek store room tha, us store room me advance hathiyar rakhe hue the aur un 5 rooms me kuch log rehte hai, ab yeh kaun hai abhi thodi der me pta chl jayega.
Aryan bahr wale bde hall se server wale room me jaker ek red button jo wahan ka alarm button tha use dbata hai, jis se hr tarah alarm bajne lgta hai, kuch hi der me server wale room ka door khulta hai aur 5 log ander aate hai, jinme se 3 ladke aur 2 ladkiyan thi.

New entry....
Harsh..... Yeh Computer and arms me expert hai, hr tarah ki hacking aur naye-2 devices bnane me iska koi match nahi hai, yeh ek simple rehne wala ladka hai, age 28 hai, hight 5'9, color fair, hair ek dum simple jahan yeh side se cheer (cut) nikalta hai, kali ankhen jinpe chashma lga rehta hai, body average hai, na jyada patla aur nahi mota, iske do hi shounk hai ek computer me ghuse rehna, dusra khana, iske hath me humesha kuch na kuch khane ka sman rehta hai.
Shilpa........ Yeh ek doctor hai aur wahan ki lab yahi handle krti hai, yeh is team me sabse samjhdar hai, age 27, rang saaf hai, ankhen kali, lambi zulfe aur kamal ka figure, ise simple rehna pasnd hai.
Karan...... Yeh ek sniper hai, yeh bahut hi bda nautanki baaz aur flirty hai, yeh is team me sbse chota hai, age 25 hai, kafi modern hai, body bhi mst bnayi hui hai.
Khushi aur Sidharth...... Yeh dono fighter hai, yeh hr tarah ki fight aur her tarah ke arms chlane me expert hai.

Khushi....... Yeh bahut hi modern vicharon wali hai, yeh humesha ladkon wale kpdon me rehti hai, jaise jean, shorts aur t-shirts, ankhen grey hai, rang fair hai, iski age 26 hai, baal sholders tk hi hai, figure iska bahut hi kamal ka hai, ladko se sakht nafrat krti hai, reason aage pta chlega.

Sidharth (sid)....... Iski hight 5'8 hai, body builder jaisi body hai, iski age 27 hai, rang thoda sanvla hai but dashing aur stylish bahut hai.

Sab ander aker aryan ko hello karte hain aur aryan bhi sabko hello krta hai.

Sid..... Sir kafi dino baad najar aaye ho aap?

Aryan.... Haan wo thoda busy tha aur tum log kaise ho.

Karan...... Hum sab badiya hai, aap kaise hai, suna hai aap pr hamla hua tha.

Aryan.... Haan hua tha.

Khushi...... Apne hume btana bhi jruri nahi smjha.

Aryan..... Sab kuch achanak hua tha to kuch btane ka mauka hi nahi mila.

Shilpa muskurati hui.... Mauka nahi mila yan btana nahi chahte the.

Khushi..... Are kaise bta dete yeh hume agr yeh hume bta dete aur hum wahan aa jate to kabab me haddi kehlate na,isliye nahi btaya na.

Aryan.... Matlab?

Karan...... Yahin ki agr hum wahan aa jate to humari hone wali bhabhi se akele me mulakat kaisee hoti, kyu sahi kaha na.

Aryan.... Are aisa kuch nahi hai, wo to achnak hi wahan aa gyi...... Ek min tum logo ko kaise pta chla simi ke bare me?

Yeh sun sab harsh ki aur dekhne lgte hai, jo chupchap wahan khda hoke sandwich thus raha i mean kha raha tha, aryan harsh ko ghurta hai.

Harsh...... Maine kuch nahi kiya sir, wo to jb tk server pe apki location trace hui tb tk bhabhi wahan pahunch chuki thi to...

Aryan..... To kya?

Khushi...... To yahin ki tb tk aap bhabhi ke sath busy ho gye the, hehehehe.

Shilpa..... Haan ab to bhabhi mil gyi ab hume kahan kuch yeh btayenge.

Sid..... Waise sir yeh galat baat hai.

Aryan..... Kya galt baat hai.

Khushi..... Yahin ki apne hume bhabhi ke bare me btaya tk nahi, hum itne time se sath me hai, ek team ek family ki tarah, fir bhi.

Aryan..... Are ab mafi maangta hoon, mere nautanki bazon, bs ab baat ko yahi khatam kro.

Yeh sun sab hasne lgte hai, but aryan lgatar harsh ko ghur raha tha, jis se harsh baat badlte hue.

Harsh.... Waise sir apke liye ek achi khabar hai.

Aur yeh kehkr harsh apne computer pe beth ke kuch krta hai aur samne ek list aa jati hai.

Harsh...... Sir yeh wo log hai jo abhi poonam se connected hai, jinse poonam dailly baat krti hai aur haan kal inka bahut bda drug ka assignment aane wala hai aur isi ko lekr aaj inkk ek meeting chl rahi hai.

Aryan.... Meeting kahan ho rahi hai?

Harsh..... Yeh ek hospital hai, jahan sare gair kanuni kaam hote hai, usi ke underground hall me.

Aryan..... Hmmm, good work harsh, to tum log is pure hospital ko uda do, bs dhyan rahe koi begunah na mara jaye.

Sid....... Aur us assignment ka kya?

Aryan..... Us assignment ko to main hi tabah krunga.

Shilpa....... Lekin sir aap akele kaise?

Aryan...... Main akela yeh sab kr kunga, tum log kal raat hi us hospital ko uda dena, ok?

Sab ek sath... Ok sir.

Fir aryan sbke sath thodi der baat krta hai aur wahan se nikal jata hai, in sab kamo me use do ghante lg gye the, ab wo apne ghr jakr ready hota hau aur simi ko call krta hai, simi abhi beauty parlour me thi, wo call pick krti hai aur aryan ko mall me hi bula leti hai, aryan call cut krke nikal jata hai simi ke pass jane ke liye.
 

sonukale

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Nice update
 

Tahirtahir111

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Zabardast update maza aa geya
 
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