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Thriller Ek daastan....... Pyar ki (Romance, Thriller & Sci-Fiction)

Apko yeh story kaisi lgi?

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    Votes: 108 77.7%
  • Nice

    Votes: 28 20.1%
  • Worst

    Votes: 3 2.2%
  • Story aage bdaun yan yahin khatam kr doon

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Yahi khatam kr do.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Aage bdao

    Votes: 1 0.7%

  • Total voters
    139
  • Poll closed .

Naughtyrishabh

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Update 35-36

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek nyi entry Dhurv
Simi ne behtareen dhang se samjha bhi diya Dhruv ko.
Aaryan or simi ka Romans laajwab.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
 
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Vickey1211

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Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya
 
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Update-45

Aryan wahan se apna coat pehn kr apni talwarein utha bike ki taraf jane lgta hai, thodi der baad aryan tezi se bike pr apne raste nikal jata hai, wo apne ghr ke usi backside ke sceret raste se apne ghr me aa jata hai aur fresh hokr apne room me so jata hai.

Ab aage......

Next morning

Poonam apne dinning table pr bethi breakfast kr rahi thi, tabhi uske mobile pe ek sms aaya, jise pad kr poonam jhat se tv on kr news channel lga deti hai, jahan aryan aur uski team dwara raat ko kiya gya karnama dikhaya ja raha tha, news me ek hospital ke blast hone ki khabar aur sath me shahr ke sath lgne wale beach pr bhi blast ki khabar aa rahi thi, poonam yeh sb dekh shocked ho jati hai, tabhi uska mobile bajta hai, wo phone pick krti hai aur samne ki awaz sun use gussa aane lgta hai.

Poonam phone utha kr.... Hello.

Samne se.... Good morning sweatheart, to gift kaisa lga mera.

Poonam pure gusse me..... AK yeh tumne thik nahi kiya, ab iska khamiyaza dena padega.

Aryan.... Hahahahaha, to tumhe gift pasand nahi aaya, to thik hai aaj ek aur gift bhej deta hoon, wo tumhe jrur pasand aayega.

Poonam...... Gift to tumhe ab main dungi AK, yaad rkhna mera naam bhi poonam hai, ab dekhna main tumhara kya haal krti hoon.

Aryan..... Dekhna to ab tumhe hai jaan, ki kaise main tum sabko barbad krunga.

Poonam..... Tum hume baarbad kroge, jo khud barbad insan hai, tum to itne barbad ho ki apna pehla pyar nahi bacha ske.

Aryan.... Tb me aur ab me bahut farak hai, waise bacha to tum bhi nahi payi thi apne pehle pyar ko.

Poonam..... Tum jitni bhi daleele de do AK, but hakikat yahi hai ki tum kisi ke layak nahi ho, tum jiske bhi kareeb jate ho, wo tumse dur ho jata, yaad nahi to ginau un sab ke naam.

Aryan...... Kisi ka pyar agr tumhari taqdeer me ho to wo tumhe jrur milta hai, tum jabardasti use rok nahi skte, aise hi jo mujhse dur hue hain, wo sb un logon ki marzi thi, jaise main apni marzi se tumsr dur hua tha, kya tum jabardasti mujhe rok payi.

Poonam..... Yeh sb kehne ki baat hai, tum mere pass the, usme tumhara swarth aur jab tum mujhe chod kr gye usme bhi tumhara hi swarth tha, jabki jo log tumhe chod kr gye hain uska sirf ek hi reason tha, hai aur rahega, aur wo yeh hai ki tum ek drinde, ek janwar ho.

Aryan....... Aur isi janwar se kabhi tum bhi pyar krti thi.

Poonam...... Krti thi, ab sirf nafrat krti hoon aur tumhe barbad krna aur marna hi mera mksad hai.

Aryan...... Nafrat nahi yeh lalch hai jisme tum fas chuki ho, tumhe sirf paisa aur auda chahiye.

Poonam..... Haan chahiye mujhe paisa aur auda, kyuki isi se duniya me log tumhe jante hai aur aage bhi janenge.

Aryan...... Tum ab puri tarah se lalch aur ghamand se ghir chuki ho, dua krunga ki aisa mauka na aaye jab mujhe tumhe apne hathon se marna pde.

Poonam...... Tum mujhe maroge, us se pehle tumse tumhari zindagi cheen lungi main aur main janti hoon ki abhi tumhari zindagi kaun hai.

Aryan...... Uski taraf ankh utha kr bhi mt dekhna, warna main bhul jaunga ki kabhi hum sath the.

Poonam...... Wo tum kab ka bhul chuke ho aur uski taraf ankh utha kr main nahi wo log dekhenge jinke samne uski boli lagegi aur jo use khareedenge, hahahahahahahaha.

Aryan...... Pooonaam, yeh mt socho tum apne ghr me bethi safe ho, meri najar hr pal tum pr rahegi aur haan ab apna breakfast pura kr lo ab to thanda ho gya hoga.

Poonam hairani se idher udher dekhte hue...... Tu..... tum kahan ho.

Aryan....... Hahahahhaha maine abhi kya kaha, meri najar tum pr rahegi, so koi chlaki nahi ok, bye jaan.

Aur yeh keh aryan call cut kr deta hai aur idher poonam pareshan ho jati hai aur uth kr idher udher dekhne lgti hai, tabhi uski najar us hall me lge security camere pr padti ha, jis se wo sb samjh jati hai.

Simi ke gher me bhi sb log beth kr breakfast kr rahe the aur sath me news bhi dekh rahe the, tabhi news pr raat ki ghatna ki news aati hai.

Sanjay..... Pta nahi kya ho raha hai shahr me, ek taraf wo serial killer aur ab yeh bomb blast, pta nahi police kya kr rahi hai, aisa hi raha to logon ka ghr se nikalna mushkil ho jayega.

Isha apne man me...... Yeh jrur AK ka kiya dhra hoga, jab se is shahr me aaya hai kuch na kuch ghatna hoti ja rahi hai.

Aru.. ... Papa main soch rahi thi ki kyu na hum aaj raat ko dinner pe aryan bhaiya ko invite kre, akhir unhone humare liye itna kiya hai aur hum unhe thik se thanks bhi nahi keh paye.

Jahan yeh sun simi khush hoti hai, wahi isha ko gussa aane lgta hai.

Sanjay..... Haan beti keh to tum thik rahi ho, to tey raha aaj aryan ko dinner pe invite kr lete hain.

Simi..... To thik hai papa main unhe call kr invite kr dungi.

Aru.... Di, unhe call kr invite krna thik nahi hoga, ek kaam krte hain aaj hum unke ghr jakr unhe invite krte hain, thik hai na papa.

Isha jhat se...... Koi jrurat nahi hai kisi ke ghr jane ki, use call krke invite krlo bahut hai.

Sanjay..... Are kyu bhadak rahi ho bachi pr, wo thik hi to keh rahi hai, beta tum dono chli jana aur ache se invite kr dena, ok.

Aru khush hote huye...... Ok papa.

Isha yeh sb sun chidne ke alawa aur kuch kr nahi pati, sb breakfast khtam kr lete hain, sanjay aur isha apne kaam pr nikal jate hai, wahin simi aur aru sofe pr beth batein krne lgte hain.

Aru..... To di kaisi rahi meri planning?

Simi..... Kaisi planning?

Aru..... Oh ho di aap bhi nahi kuch samjhti nahi ho, maine jiju ko dinner pe invite krne ki baat isliye kahi thi ki, ek to aap dono ek dusre kr sath time spend kro, dusra jiju jitna hi ske humari family me involve ho ske, taki jab mom dad ko apki prem kahani ke bare me pta chle to wo mna na kr ske.

Simi..... Wah kya baat hai betu, tu to bdi hoshiyar ho gyi hai, bdi dur ki sochti hai.

Aru..... Sochna padta hai, jab aap bde log pyar me pagal ho jayein to hum choto ko hi sab sochna padta hai.

Simi jhuta gussa dikhate hue........ Tere kehna ka matlab ki main pagal ho gyi hoon.

Aru..... Haan di.

Simi smile dete hue....... Tujhe ek baat btau, pyar me agr pagalpan na ho to pyar me maja nahi aata.

Aru..... Waaah di, lagta hai aap pr jiju ka rang chadne lga hai.

Simi...... Ab batein hi krti rehegi yan apne jiju ko phone bhi kregi.

Aru..... Ohh hoo dekho to kitni jaldi hai inhe jiju ko unke sasural bulane ki.

Yeh keh kr aru haste hue aryan call lgati hai, aryan jo abhi office me apna kaam kr raha tha, wo dusre hi ring me hone pick krte hue.

Aryan........ Hello!

Aru...... Hello jiju, kaise ho?

Aryan....... Are wah aaj subah-2 how do humari yaad kaise aa gyi, waise i am fine, wat abut u?

Aru......i am gud jiju, aur yeh kya main kya apko call nahi kr skti jo aise tane mar rahe ho?

Aryan...... Are nahi sali sahiba, aap ke liye to 24 hrs service open hai, aap jab chahr call kt skti ho, main to ye puch raha tha, aaj humari sali sahiba ne jrur kuch plan kiya hoga.

Aru..... Wow jiju aap to abhi se mujhko jaan gye ho, humari khub jamegi, hehehehe.

Aryan....... Ab itni pyari sali ho jamegi kaise nahi, waise bhi suna hai sali adhi gherwali hoti hai, hehehehehe.

Aru...... Acha g aisa hai to di btati hoon abhi.

Aryan...... Are sali sahiba kyu sitam dhane pr lgi ho main to bs mazak kr raha tha.

Aru..... Kyu abhi se di se darne lge ho to shadi ke baad kya hoga apka.

Aryan..... Wohi hoga jo humari rani sahiba chahegi, kyu rani sahiba sahi kaha na.

Aru..... Apko kaise ptaa chla di yahan hai.

Aryan..... Mujhe to yeh bhi pta hai ki phone loudspeaker pr hai, sahi kaha na.

Aru...... Wah maan gye apko jiju, waise abhi aap kahan ho hume apse milna hai.

Aryan..... Main to abhi office me hoon, tum dono ek kaam kro mere gher aa jao, main bhi yahan se nikalta hoon.

Aru.... Ok jiju.

Simi ek dum se...... Aap wo dhruv ki taraf aa jana, hum bhi wahi milenge.

Aryan...... Thik hai fir main half hour tk wahan pahunch jaunga.

Simi..... Ok bye.

Phone cut hone ke baad aryan apni secretary ko bula kuch smjhata hai aur wahan se dhruv wale gher ki taraf nikal padta hai, idher simi aur aru bhi ready ho kr nikal jati hai.

Aru simi ke bagal me bethi.... Di yeh dhruv kaun hai?

Simi...... Dhruv aryan ke chote bhai hai.

Aru...... Yeh kab aaya, apne to mujhe iske bare me kuch nahi btaya.

Fir simi aru ko dhruv ke bare me sab btati hai.

Aru..... Hmmmm, di aaj mere dil me jiju ke liye izat aur bhi bad gyi hai, sach me aap bahut khushnaseeb ho nahi to aaj kal aise log milte kahan hain.

Aise hi batein krte hue yeh dhruv ke ghr pahunch jate hai, jahan pehle se aryan ki car khadi thi, simi aru ko ander jane ko bolti hai aur khud car park krne lgti hai, aru door bell bjati hai tabhi ek dum se door khulta hai.

Aru...... Tuuuumm yahan???
 

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Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya
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Update 35-36

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Ek nyi entry Dhurv
Simi ne behtareen dhang se samjha bhi diya Dhruv ko.
Aaryan or simi ka Romans laajwab.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjar
Thanks for comment
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harryharsh31

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Nice update bhai
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awesome update..... to yeh the Gift .....

Keep it up bhai ..
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