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Thanks for comment bhaiDarinda...... ? Galatfahami ne kya kar diya ....Bahan - bhai ko hi judaa kar diya . Nafrat bhi karti hai Isha lekin dil ke gahrayiyon se us se Pyaar bhi karti hai....
lagtaa hai last mein Aru pahchan legi ki Golu Aryan hi hai. Lets wait and watch ki aage writer babu kya dikhate hain, kyunki mere khyal se yeh flashback thoda lambaa hona chahiye with detailed Love, Emotions and wo kayi sari choti choti galatfahamiyan jinko jod kar ek badi galatfahmi bani.
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Golu mere pass aaya aur mujhe ek chadar di, maine us chaddar se khud ko dhk liya aur papa ke pahunchi jahan wo bhi hume chod kr ja chuke the, main golu ke sine lag kr rone lgi, golu ab bhi shant tha, tabhi bahr se gadiyon ki awaz aati hai.
Golu..... Didu lgta hai inke aur adami aaye hai, hume yahan se chalna chahiye.
Main... But papa..
Golu bich me..... Agr wo zinda hote to wo bhi yahin chahte ki aap safe raho, pls didu.
Main golu ke sath gher ke backside se bahr aa jati hu, thoda aage chalne pr hi hume ek blast ki awaz aati hai, jis se hum piche dekhte hai to humara ghr ab malbe me badal chuka tha.
Ab aage......
uske baad humne wo shahr chod diya aur yahan aa gye, yaha maine ek hospital join kiya aur golu apni padayi krne lga, aise hi fir samay ka pahiya ghuma, ab golu wo golu nahi raha tha jo humesha mere sath rehta tha, ab wo badal chuka tha, sara din ghr se bahr rehta but raat ko ghr jrur aata tha, ek din main sanjay se ek mall me mili, itne salon baad sanjay se milkr mujhe bahut khushi hui, hum dono kafi samay sath bitane lge, ek din Sanjay ne mujhe purpose kr diya jise maine khushi se accept kr liya, fir humari shadi hui, golu us din bahut khush tha wo nach kr apni khushi jahir kr raha tha.
Shadi ke baad main pregnant hui, humare ghr me fir se khushiyan hi khushiyan thi, but wohi dusri taraf shahr me hamle hone lge, her taraf logo ki kati hui lashein ya blast ki khabar hi milti thi, police ko koi jankari nahi mil rahi thi, bs tha to ek naqabposh ki photo jo kisi cctv se li gyi thi, log use antakwadi samjhne lge, aur kai baar shahr me karfu bhi lga, ek din aise hi kisi blast me sanjay ke mata-pita bhi mare gye, hume fir se gumon ne gher liya tha, lekin sanjay ne mujhe stress lene se mna kiya tha kyuki mera 6 month chl raha tha, ek din main hospital me apna routine checkup krwane gyi thi, main ander doctor ke cabin me thi tabhi mujhe bahr shor sunai diya, jab maine aur meri lady doctor ne bahr dekha to hum kamp gye kyuki bahr wohi naqabposh khda tha aur ek doctor ko pit raha tha, raat ka samay tha to wahan jyada log nahi the, wo naqabposh buri tarah us doctor ko mar raha tha, fr usne ek khanjar nikal kr us doctor ke dono hatho me ghusaya, fir uski tangon me jis se us doctor ki chikh pure hospital me gunjane lagi, tabhi us naqabposh ne us khanjar se uska gla kaat diya, mujhe yeh sb dekh vomit aa gyi aur main khansne lgi, jis se us naqabposh ka dhyan meri taraf hua, uski abkhen dekhte hi mujhe aisa lga jaise maine inhe kahin dekha hai, mujhe ander ajeeb se bechaini hone lgi aur ek darr bhi lagne lga, main piche hone lgi, piche hote hue main ek strecher se tkra gyi main girne hi wali thi ki mujhe ek awaz aayi, diduuu aur maine dekha us naqabposh ne mujhe thama hua tha, main hairani se use dekhne lgi, jab mujhe us awaz ka khyal aaya to main dum sidhi ho kr bahr chli gyi aur ghr aa gyi, aaj sanjay kisi jruri meeting me the to wo ghr nahi aaye the, thodi der me ghr me golu aaya, mujhe dekhte hi wo apne room me jane lga to maine use roka.
Main..... Kahan ja raha hai.
Golu..... Didu apne room me fresh hone.
Main..... Mujhe kuch puchna hai tujhse?
Golu...... Didu abhi main apke kisi swal ka jwab nahi de paunga aur sahi samay aane pr khud apko sab sach bta dunga.
Main.... To tu hi wo naqabposh hai jisne shahr me tabahi mcha rakhi hai aur begunah logon ko mar raha hai, akhir aisa kyu kiya tune, kya kami thi mere pyar aur parvarish me.
Golu..... Apke pyar aur parvrish me koi kami nahi thi didu, apne to is anath ko itna pyar diya hai ki shyad mere apne bhi mujhe itna pyar nahi dete, apka yeb ehsan main marte dum tk nahi bhulunga.
Main rote hue..... Kya kaha tune tu anath hai aur tujhe itna pyar deke maine tujhpe koi ehsan kiya hai.
Golu...... Sorry didu mera wo matlab nahi tha.
Main rote hue...... Janta hai golu tune yeh bol mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai, tu mere pyar ko ehsan ka naam de raha hai, ehsan use kehte hai, jjske badle me jo log jin pr ehsan krte hai unse badle me kuch mangte hai aur tu yeh kehna chahta hai ki tujhe pyar dene ke badle me mera swarth tha.
Golu...... Didu log kya chahte hai aur kya nahi yeh main nahi janta, lekin mujhe jo sikhaya aur btaya gya hai main usi pr chl raha hoon.
Main..... Maine to tujhe yeh kabhi nahi sikhaya, fir kisne tujhe yeh sab sikhaya?
Golu.... Wo aur koi nahi apke pita the.
Main chikhte hue..... Golluuu khabardar jo mere papa pr koi jhuta ilzam lgaya, are unhone to tujhe ek nayi zindgi di hai aur tu unhe hi..... cheeee.
Golu..... Aap kuch nahi janti ho isliye aap yeh keh rahi ho, lekin asli baat aap ko bhi nahi pta hai ki apke jane ke baad us ghr me kya-2 hua tha aur apke baap ne mere sath kya kiya tha.
Main..... Goluuu tameez se baat kro, nahi main bhul jaungi ki kabhi maine tumhe apne bache ki tarah pala hai.
Golu..... Kyu aap apne baap ki harkat nahi sunogi, us raat jab humpe humla hua tha to kya apko pta hai wo kis liye hua tha.
Main..... Haan wo kisi formule ko lene aaye the.
Golu..... Acha, to aap janti ho wo formula kahan hai.
Main... Mujhe nahi pta, papa ne us raat kaha tha ki wo formula unhone kisi ko inject kr diya hai, but wo kaun hai..... Oh my god, to papa ne wo formula tumhe inject kiya hai, lekin kyu? Unhone to tumhe apna beta mana tha.
Golu..... Haan wo jahar mujhe diya gya hai aur usi ke wajah se main ek drinda ban gya hoon, is kyu ka jwab bahut hi pechida hai didu, jise mujhe hr haal me dhundhna hai aur haan apke baap ne kabhi mujhe apna beta nahi mana to main kis rishte se use izat du.
Main..... Golu, papa ne humesha tumhe apna beta hi mana hai, isliye to tumhe adopt kiya tha.
Golu... Acha to kya aap mujhe wo adoption ke paper dikha skti ho, kya kabhi apne wo paper dekhe hai.
Main hairani se..... Nahi kabhi jarurat hi nahi padi.
Golu..... Dekhoge kaise jab adopt kiya hi nahi tha, wo mujh jaise gande khun wale ko apna naam nahi dena chahte the, wo to bs mera istemal krne ke liye mujhe laye the.
Main.... Yeh jhut hai, bilkul jhut.
Golu.... Yahi sach hai didu, apka baap ek nihayti ghatiya aur matlbi insan tha.
Yeh sun maine gusse me golu ko do thapad mar diye aur wohi sofe pe beth kr rone lgti hu
Golu..... Aap marlo didu, jitna apka man kre utna mar lo, lekin yeh sach hai.
Main.... Bs kr agr tu mere papa ka na ho ska to mera kya hoga.
Golu.... Didu...
Main... Mat bula mujhe is naam se, main kabhi apne hone bache pe tere jaise drinde ka saya nahi padne dungi, jo logo ko marta hai, kat ta hai, aaj se tere liye teri didu aur mere liye mera bacha golu mar gya, chla ja yahan se main ek drinde ek dhokebaz ke sath nahi reh sakti.
Aur yeh keh kr main jor-2 se rone lagti hu, golu bhi rote hue apne room me jata hai aur thodi der baad ek bag lekr aata hai.
Golu..... Thik hai di.. I mean mam, main ja raha hu, apki baat kabhi tali nahi to yeh kaise tal skta hu, koshish krunga ki kabhi apke samne aakr apko dukh na du, lekin mujhe bharosa hai, ki ek din aap jab sab jan jaogi to mujhe jrur pukarogi aur yakeen maniye yeh golu tab bhi apki ek pukar sun kr apke pass chla ayega, alvida mam.
Aur golu itna keh mere pairon ko chuta hua bahr nikal gya, main wahin bethi roti rahi pta nahi kitni der royi main aur wahin behosh ho gyi, subah jab ankh khuli to main hospital me thi, jaham mere pass sanjay bhi the, to umhone btaya ki mujhe hospital golu laya tha aur usne unhe call kr yahin bula liya.
At present..
Yeh sab sun sabki ankhon me ansoon the siway aryan ke, sab apne-2 khyalo me the, aryan apne hi dhun me khoya hua tha.
Simi apne ansoon saaf krti hui...... To kya ab aap janti ho wo kahan hai?
Isha ek najar aryan ko dekhti hai aur na me gardan hila deti hai.
Aru..... To kya itne salon me aap unse dobara nahi mili?
Isha..... Ek baar usne apni shadi ki khabar bhijwayi thi, lekin hum nahi gye, fr kuch din pehle maine use dobara dekha, lekin wo ab bhi wohi hai ek drinda ek janwar.
Simi........ Yeh aap kaise keh skti ho, ho skta hai shdi ke baad unme badlav aaya ho aur wo badl gye ho.
Isha...... Nahi ek janwar kabhi apni fitrat nahi chodta aur wo bhi waisa hi tha, hai aur rahega.
Golu mere pass aaya aur mujhe ek chadar di, maine us chaddar se khud ko dhk liya aur papa ke pahunchi jahan wo bhi hume chod kr ja chuke the, main golu ke sine lag kr rone lgi, golu ab bhi shant tha, tabhi bahr se gadiyon ki awaz aati hai.
Golu..... Didu lgta hai inke aur adami aaye hai, hume yahan se chalna chahiye.
Main... But papa..
Golu bich me..... Agr wo zinda hote to wo bhi yahin chahte ki aap safe raho, pls didu.
Main golu ke sath gher ke backside se bahr aa jati hu, thoda aage chalne pr hi hume ek blast ki awaz aati hai, jis se hum piche dekhte hai to humara ghr ab malbe me badal chuka tha.
Ab aage......
uske baad humne wo shahr chod diya aur yahan aa gye, yaha maine ek hospital join kiya aur golu apni padayi krne lga, aise hi fir samay ka pahiya ghuma, ab golu wo golu nahi raha tha jo humesha mere sath rehta tha, ab wo badal chuka tha, sara din ghr se bahr rehta but raat ko ghr jrur aata tha, ek din main sanjay se ek mall me mili, itne salon baad sanjay se milkr mujhe bahut khushi hui, hum dono kafi samay sath bitane lge, ek din Sanjay ne mujhe purpose kr diya jise maine khushi se accept kr liya, fir humari shadi hui, golu us din bahut khush tha wo nach kr apni khushi jahir kr raha tha.
Shadi ke baad main pregnant hui, humare ghr me fir se khushiyan hi khushiyan thi, but wohi dusri taraf shahr me hamle hone lge, her taraf logo ki kati hui lashein ya blast ki khabar hi milti thi, police ko koi jankari nahi mil rahi thi, bs tha to ek naqabposh ki photo jo kisi cctv se li gyi thi, log use antakwadi samjhne lge, aur kai baar shahr me karfu bhi lga, ek din aise hi kisi blast me sanjay ke mata-pita bhi mare gye, hume fir se gumon ne gher liya tha, lekin sanjay ne mujhe stress lene se mna kiya tha kyuki mera 6 month chl raha tha, ek din main hospital me apna routine checkup krwane gyi thi, main ander doctor ke cabin me thi tabhi mujhe bahr shor sunai diya, jab maine aur meri lady doctor ne bahr dekha to hum kamp gye kyuki bahr wohi naqabposh khda tha aur ek doctor ko pit raha tha, raat ka samay tha to wahan jyada log nahi the, wo naqabposh buri tarah us doctor ko mar raha tha, fr usne ek khanjar nikal kr us doctor ke dono hatho me ghusaya, fir uski tangon me jis se us doctor ki chikh pure hospital me gunjane lagi, tabhi us naqabposh ne us khanjar se uska gla kaat diya, mujhe yeh sb dekh vomit aa gyi aur main khansne lgi, jis se us naqabposh ka dhyan meri taraf hua, uski abkhen dekhte hi mujhe aisa lga jaise maine inhe kahin dekha hai, mujhe ander ajeeb se bechaini hone lgi aur ek darr bhi lagne lga, main piche hone lgi, piche hote hue main ek strecher se tkra gyi main girne hi wali thi ki mujhe ek awaz aayi, diduuu aur maine dekha us naqabposh ne mujhe thama hua tha, main hairani se use dekhne lgi, jab mujhe us awaz ka khyal aaya to main dum sidhi ho kr bahr chli gyi aur ghr aa gyi, aaj sanjay kisi jruri meeting me the to wo ghr nahi aaye the, thodi der me ghr me golu aaya, mujhe dekhte hi wo apne room me jane lga to maine use roka.
Main..... Kahan ja raha hai.
Golu..... Didu apne room me fresh hone.
Main..... Mujhe kuch puchna hai tujhse?
Golu...... Didu abhi main apke kisi swal ka jwab nahi de paunga aur sahi samay aane pr khud apko sab sach bta dunga.
Main.... To tu hi wo naqabposh hai jisne shahr me tabahi mcha rakhi hai aur begunah logon ko mar raha hai, akhir aisa kyu kiya tune, kya kami thi mere pyar aur parvarish me.
Golu..... Apke pyar aur parvrish me koi kami nahi thi didu, apne to is anath ko itna pyar diya hai ki shyad mere apne bhi mujhe itna pyar nahi dete, apka yeb ehsan main marte dum tk nahi bhulunga.
Main rote hue..... Kya kaha tune tu anath hai aur tujhe itna pyar deke maine tujhpe koi ehsan kiya hai.
Golu...... Sorry didu mera wo matlab nahi tha.
Main rote hue...... Janta hai golu tune yeh bol mujhe bahut hurt kiya hai, tu mere pyar ko ehsan ka naam de raha hai, ehsan use kehte hai, jjske badle me jo log jin pr ehsan krte hai unse badle me kuch mangte hai aur tu yeh kehna chahta hai ki tujhe pyar dene ke badle me mera swarth tha.
Golu...... Didu log kya chahte hai aur kya nahi yeh main nahi janta, lekin mujhe jo sikhaya aur btaya gya hai main usi pr chl raha hoon.
Main..... Maine to tujhe yeh kabhi nahi sikhaya, fir kisne tujhe yeh sab sikhaya?
Golu.... Wo aur koi nahi apke pita the.
Main chikhte hue..... Golluuu khabardar jo mere papa pr koi jhuta ilzam lgaya, are unhone to tujhe ek nayi zindgi di hai aur tu unhe hi..... cheeee.
Golu..... Aap kuch nahi janti ho isliye aap yeh keh rahi ho, lekin asli baat aap ko bhi nahi pta hai ki apke jane ke baad us ghr me kya-2 hua tha aur apke baap ne mere sath kya kiya tha.
Main..... Goluuu tameez se baat kro, nahi main bhul jaungi ki kabhi maine tumhe apne bache ki tarah pala hai.
Golu..... Kyu aap apne baap ki harkat nahi sunogi, us raat jab humpe humla hua tha to kya apko pta hai wo kis liye hua tha.
Main..... Haan wo kisi formule ko lene aaye the.
Golu..... Acha, to aap janti ho wo formula kahan hai.
Main... Mujhe nahi pta, papa ne us raat kaha tha ki wo formula unhone kisi ko inject kr diya hai, but wo kaun hai..... Oh my god, to papa ne wo formula tumhe inject kiya hai, lekin kyu? Unhone to tumhe apna beta mana tha.
Golu..... Haan wo jahar mujhe diya gya hai aur usi ke wajah se main ek drinda ban gya hoon, is kyu ka jwab bahut hi pechida hai didu, jise mujhe hr haal me dhundhna hai aur haan apke baap ne kabhi mujhe apna beta nahi mana to main kis rishte se use izat du.
Main..... Golu, papa ne humesha tumhe apna beta hi mana hai, isliye to tumhe adopt kiya tha.
Golu... Acha to kya aap mujhe wo adoption ke paper dikha skti ho, kya kabhi apne wo paper dekhe hai.
Main hairani se..... Nahi kabhi jarurat hi nahi padi.
Golu..... Dekhoge kaise jab adopt kiya hi nahi tha, wo mujh jaise gande khun wale ko apna naam nahi dena chahte the, wo to bs mera istemal krne ke liye mujhe laye the.
Main.... Yeh jhut hai, bilkul jhut.
Golu.... Yahi sach hai didu, apka baap ek nihayti ghatiya aur matlbi insan tha.
Yeh sun maine gusse me golu ko do thapad mar diye aur wohi sofe pe beth kr rone lgti hu
Golu..... Aap marlo didu, jitna apka man kre utna mar lo, lekin yeh sach hai.
Main.... Bs kr agr tu mere papa ka na ho ska to mera kya hoga.
Golu.... Didu...
Main... Mat bula mujhe is naam se, main kabhi apne hone bache pe tere jaise drinde ka saya nahi padne dungi, jo logo ko marta hai, kat ta hai, aaj se tere liye teri didu aur mere liye mera bacha golu mar gya, chla ja yahan se main ek drinde ek dhokebaz ke sath nahi reh sakti.
Aur yeh keh kr main jor-2 se rone lagti hu, golu bhi rote hue apne room me jata hai aur thodi der baad ek bag lekr aata hai.
Golu..... Thik hai di.. I mean mam, main ja raha hu, apki baat kabhi tali nahi to yeh kaise tal skta hu, koshish krunga ki kabhi apke samne aakr apko dukh na du, lekin mujhe bharosa hai, ki ek din aap jab sab jan jaogi to mujhe jrur pukarogi aur yakeen maniye yeh golu tab bhi apki ek pukar sun kr apke pass chla ayega, alvida mam.
Aur golu itna keh mere pairon ko chuta hua bahr nikal gya, main wahin bethi roti rahi pta nahi kitni der royi main aur wahin behosh ho gyi, subah jab ankh khuli to main hospital me thi, jaham mere pass sanjay bhi the, to umhone btaya ki mujhe hospital golu laya tha aur usne unhe call kr yahin bula liya.
At present..
Yeh sab sun sabki ankhon me ansoon the siway aryan ke, sab apne-2 khyalo me the, aryan apne hi dhun me khoya hua tha.
Simi apne ansoon saaf krti hui...... To kya ab aap janti ho wo kahan hai?
Isha ek najar aryan ko dekhti hai aur na me gardan hila deti hai.
Aru..... To kya itne salon me aap unse dobara nahi mili?
Isha..... Ek baar usne apni shadi ki khabar bhijwayi thi, lekin hum nahi gye, fr kuch din pehle maine use dobara dekha, lekin wo ab bhi wohi hai ek drinda ek janwar.
Simi........ Yeh aap kaise keh skti ho, ho skta hai shdi ke baad unme badlav aaya ho aur wo badl gye ho.
Isha...... Nahi ek janwar kabhi apni fitrat nahi chodta aur wo bhi waisa hi tha, hai aur rahega.
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Note:- main janta hoon aap sab ko yeh flashback bahut short lagega, lekin yeh flashback isha ki taraf se tha to wo jitna janti thi utna hi bta skti hai, waise bhi aap me se kuch reader story ko lekr confused the ki isha aur aryan ke bich kya relation tha aur wo alg kyu hue, maine yeh short flashback sirf aap sb ki confusion ko dur krne ke liye likha hai, abhi to bahut kuch hai flashback me jo tb samne ayega jab flashback aryan ki jubani hoga aur wo bs shuru hone hi wala hai, bs 2-4 update tk wait kre, tb tk keep supporting.
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Keep it up bro...... wonderful update, Isha ki jubani hi sahi lekin sabko ek baat to pataa chal hi chuki hai ki Golu ki baat suni hi nahi thi Isha ne matlab ki Isha ko bhi sachhayi ka pataa nahi hai.
Jaisa ki ab Aaryan yani ki Golu apni taraf se batayega to i am sure wo kaafi saare proofs bhi saamne laayega jis se yeh bilkul clear ho jaayega bas dost koshish karna jitne log yahaan hai jinhone isha ki baat suni hai woh sab Golu ki baat bhi sune fir judge karein .
.....jaldi se likhna shuru karo bhai intezaar nahi ho raha next update ka