Romance Ek Hateli Lovestory ;) (complete)

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Update 13​

Aniket aur shravni ki dosti ab dheere dheere parvan chadh rahi thi, aniket shravni par full too fida tha, wo use behad pasand karne laga tha par jaise hi shravni uske saamne aati uski himmat hi nahi hoti thi shravni se apne man ki baat kehne ki , wo college me bas shravni ke ird gird ghumta rehta tha aur isi wajah se uska commerce section me bhi aana jana kafi badh gaya tha, ab to aniket ko dekh kar shravni ke bhi gaal sharam se laal ho jate the, wo bhi class ke paas aniket se baat karne me sharmati hi, dono ki job hi baate hoti thi wo bas canteen me hi hoti thi aur waha bhi nidhi shravni ko komal aniket ko chhodne ko tayar nahi rehte the wo inke sath chipke hi rehte aur ye sab waha maujood rehne ki wajah se aniket apne man ki baat nahi keh pata tha

Shravni aur komal ke beech bhi jyada jamti nahi thi, ye dono do alag alag kinare the jaise sikke de do pehlu, shravni najuk, kavi hriday wali tipikal ladki thi wahi komal iske ekdum viparit thi ekdum bedhadk

Ek din canteen me ye sablog baithe huye the tab komal aniket se boli

Komal- anya tu na bahut ander ki gath ka aadmi hai yaar, matlab tere na man me bahut kuch chalta rehta hai par tu kabhi kuch bolke hi nahi batata

Aniket-kuch bhi mat bola kar kammo

Komal-main kuch bhi bol rahi hu? Arey pichle ek mahine sedekh rahi hyu teko sirf gulugulu gulugulu shuru hai, bas ho gaya ab ye natak aur agar hamse mamla atak raha hai to sidha bol na ham chale jate hai yaha se fir aaram se baat kar

Aniket-kame jara shanti rakh na bhai

Itne me shravni boli

Shravni-aap kyu unhe hamesha har chiz ke liye jabardasti karti rehti hai komal

Komal-arey dost hai wo apna, main nahi bolungito kya rode pe ka bhikari aake bolega uske kaan me? Aur ye bai shravne teko kitni baar batana padega ki ye mere sath ye inko unko mat kiya kar teko aisa joi bhi karna hai uske liye ye aniket bail hai tere paas

Komal ka shravni ko shravne bolna shravni ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya wo gusse me boli

Shravni-dekhiye komal mera naam shravni hai to kripaya mujhe mere naam se hi bulaya kariye, itna sunder naam hai mera ‘shravni’ aapko matlab to bhi pata hai kya iska

Ab baat jab jhadge ke level taka a hi gayi hai to piche hate wo komal thode hi hai

Komal-mujhe to pata hai matlab, tu jaanti ho kya apne naam ka matlab?

Shravni-bilkul,shravni yani savan ke mahine ki barish ki ki pehli fuhar

Jispar komal ne has diya

Komal-lagta hai tumhe shravni ka dusra matlab pata nahi hai khair jane do

Shravni-jane do matlab kya,waise bhi iska koi dusra matlab nahi hai agar aapko pata hi hai to aap bata do na

Komal-arey rehne de, teko pasand nahi aayega, sirf shravne bolne me tu chidh gayi jab teko main dusra matlab bataungi to tu kya karegi bhagwan jane

Shravni-hoga tab kuch bataogi na aap iska koi aur matlab hi nahi hai aur agar hai to sirf matlab mat batana balki apni baat ko pramanit bhi karna padega

Komal-theek hai ab tum itna mujhe force kar hi rahi ho to suno shravni matlab gobar, gu, shen

Bas komal ka itna kehna tha ke shravni ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog

Shravni-jo muh me aaye wo mat bola kariye komal

Komal-arey maine to jo sach hai sirf wahi kaha hai, ab iksa praman bhi sun lo aur ache se samajh jaogi, apne Marathi bhasha me ek kahavat hai, ‘aamhi khalla tar shen an tumhi khalli tar……..’

Avinash-shravni….

Avinash tapak se bola

(ab jinko nahi samjha samjhata hu, bhai aaya hai batake jayega iska sidha matlab hai ham khaye to gobar tum khao to shravni matlab twada kutta tommy sadda kutta kutta, waisa sa matlab hota hai iska, samajh gaye, very good story ke end me viva lunga, abi aage padho)

Avinash ki baat sunkar waha maujood sabhi log hasne lage siway do ek ke, ab jab sahi has rahe the to aniket bhi has raha tha aur bakiyo ka to pata nahi par naiket ko hasta dekh kar shravni ko aur jyada gussa aaya, wo wahase uthi aur gusse me pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi, aniket use awaj dete huye use rokne ke liye uske piche bhaga par wo sunne ko tayar hi nahi thi, ab aniket bhi bhadak gaya tha…

Aniket wapis canteen me aaya to avinash aur komal ka hasna shuru hi tha aniket ko dekhte hi wo dono ekdum chup ho gaye aur aniket bhi unke paas aakar unpar baras pada

Aniket-kame kuch akkal wagaire hai tere me thoda bhi dimag hai? Teko pata hai na main pasand karta hu use fir kyu pareshan kar rahi thi shravni ko, wo tere jaisi nahi hai bahut najuk man hai uska kitna bura laga use pata hai rote huye gayi hai wo bechari

Komal-anya bahut ho gaya ye bichari puran, teri wajah se sahan karte hai ham use warna to aaspaas bhi fatakne na de

Aniket-jab itna samajhta hai to apna muh band rakah kar na, pata hai na apne muh gutter hai khulega to baas hi marega

Komal-ye jyada ho raha hai ab anya, tuuski side kyu le raha hai re

Aniket-kyuki main usse pyaar karta hu..

Komal-aur hamse..?

Aniket-tum log dost ho yaar, main tumhari aur uski tulna nahi kar sakta..

Komal-theek hai samajh gayi aura b tu mere naam se mat chilla ha main to tujhe apne man ki baat batane ke liye keh rahi thi, wohi beech me kuch apni kavita ki potli leke

Aniket- tujhe nahi pasand to mat bola kar na usse

Komal-main kaha kuch boli wo hi apni beech me kudu(fir komal ne shravni ki nakal karte huye kaha)’aapko pata hai kya shravni ka matlab’ maine to kaha bhi tha ke mat puch par wo satvik pujarin piche hi pad gayi to maine bhi bata diya

Aniket-arey apne me kuch bhi chalta hai par wo apne jaisi nahi hai ye samajhna chahiye tujhe

Komal-shabash ab jaise mujhe samjhaya na waise hi apni satvik pujarin ko samjhane ka ja, ye sahi hai bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai, aur ha apni premika ko ye bhi samjhana dena ye aainda mujhse na uljhe wo

Uske baad teeno shand baith gaye avi to waise bhi shant hi tha ye donohi bakbak kar rahe the avi dimag wala banda tha wo inke beech me nahi padta tha, koi kuch bhi bolne ko tayar nahi tha, thoda samay bita, gussa thanda hua aura b puri ghatna aniket ke dimag me ghum rahi thi itne me use hasi aa gayi, komal aur avinash ne uski taraf dekha to wo ekdum serious chehra karke baitha tha, dono ko laga ki unhe aabhas hua hoga unhone fir se apna chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya, aniket ko apni hasi rokna mushkil ho raha tha aur fir jab usse control nahi hua to wo jor jor se hasne laga aur dono use ashcharya se dekhne lage, unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke aniket has kyu raha hai aur aakhir me aniket ne komal ki khurchi par laat mari aur kaha

Aniket-kammo seriously

Komal-tu pehle hasna band karega aur batayega hasne jaisa kya hua hai

Aniket-main ye soch raha hu ke tu ye sab lati kaha se hai, bole shravnni matlab gobar

Ab teeno hasne lage aur haste huye komal boli

Komal-arey sach baat hai ye ghar jake bapu se puch lena

Teeno aankho me pani aaye tak haste rahe aur fir thode shant hone ke baad aniket ne kaha

Aniket-aur ye satvik pujarin ka kya scene hai

Komal-wo ja ke apni maa se puchna

Teeno fir has rahe the

Komal-waise anya sorry ha ab nahi pareshan karungi teri shravni ko (avinash se) avi kalpana kar agar apna anya shravne ke sar pe hath maar ke thapthapaye to log kya bolenge?

Avinash ko kuch samjha nahi ke ye kya kehna chah rahi hai

Avinash-kya bolenge

Komal-yahi bolenge ki anya gobar ke uple bana raha hai

Bas teeno fir se hasne lage (koi kaam hi nahi hai inko hasne ke alawa )

Aniket-acha ye sab bate chhodo aur ye batao maine jo kaha samjha kya

Komal(ekdum bhola chehra banate huye)- hao samajh gayi

Aniket-kya samjha?

Komal(avi ki aur dekhte huye)- ye samjhi ke shravni matlab….

Komal aur avi eksath- Gobaaarrrrrrrr……….

Aniket unko maarne ke liye utha hi tha ke isse pehle hi wo canteen ke baahar bhag liye aur unke piche aniket bhi….

very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

 

[mashish]

Update 13​

Aniket aur shravni ki dosti ab dheere dheere parvan chadh rahi thi, aniket shravni par full too fida tha, wo use behad pasand karne laga tha par jaise hi shravni uske saamne aati uski himmat hi nahi hoti thi shravni se apne man ki baat kehne ki , wo college me bas shravni ke ird gird ghumta rehta tha aur isi wajah se uska commerce section me bhi aana jana kafi badh gaya tha, ab to aniket ko dekh kar shravni ke bhi gaal sharam se laal ho jate the, wo bhi class ke paas aniket se baat karne me sharmati hi, dono ki job hi baate hoti thi wo bas canteen me hi hoti thi aur waha bhi nidhi shravni ko komal aniket ko chhodne ko tayar nahi rehte the wo inke sath chipke hi rehte aur ye sab waha maujood rehne ki wajah se aniket apne man ki baat nahi keh pata tha

Shravni aur komal ke beech bhi jyada jamti nahi thi, ye dono do alag alag kinare the jaise sikke de do pehlu, shravni najuk, kavi hriday wali tipikal ladki thi wahi komal iske ekdum viparit thi ekdum bedhadk

Ek din canteen me ye sablog baithe huye the tab komal aniket se boli

Komal- anya tu na bahut ander ki gath ka aadmi hai yaar, matlab tere na man me bahut kuch chalta rehta hai par tu kabhi kuch bolke hi nahi batata

Aniket-kuch bhi mat bola kar kammo

Komal-main kuch bhi bol rahi hu? Arey pichle ek mahine sedekh rahi hyu teko sirf gulugulu gulugulu shuru hai, bas ho gaya ab ye natak aur agar hamse mamla atak raha hai to sidha bol na ham chale jate hai yaha se fir aaram se baat kar

Aniket-kame jara shanti rakh na bhai

Itne me shravni boli

Shravni-aap kyu unhe hamesha har chiz ke liye jabardasti karti rehti hai komal

Komal-arey dost hai wo apna, main nahi bolungito kya rode pe ka bhikari aake bolega uske kaan me? Aur ye bai shravne teko kitni baar batana padega ki ye mere sath ye inko unko mat kiya kar teko aisa joi bhi karna hai uske liye ye aniket bail hai tere paas

Komal ka shravni ko shravne bolna shravni ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya wo gusse me boli

Shravni-dekhiye komal mera naam shravni hai to kripaya mujhe mere naam se hi bulaya kariye, itna sunder naam hai mera ‘shravni’ aapko matlab to bhi pata hai kya iska

Ab baat jab jhadge ke level taka a hi gayi hai to piche hate wo komal thode hi hai

Komal-mujhe to pata hai matlab, tu jaanti ho kya apne naam ka matlab?

Shravni-bilkul,shravni yani savan ke mahine ki barish ki ki pehli fuhar

Jispar komal ne has diya

Komal-lagta hai tumhe shravni ka dusra matlab pata nahi hai khair jane do

Shravni-jane do matlab kya,waise bhi iska koi dusra matlab nahi hai agar aapko pata hi hai to aap bata do na

Komal-arey rehne de, teko pasand nahi aayega, sirf shravne bolne me tu chidh gayi jab teko main dusra matlab bataungi to tu kya karegi bhagwan jane

Shravni-hoga tab kuch bataogi na aap iska koi aur matlab hi nahi hai aur agar hai to sirf matlab mat batana balki apni baat ko pramanit bhi karna padega

Komal-theek hai ab tum itna mujhe force kar hi rahi ho to suno shravni matlab gobar, gu, shen

Bas komal ka itna kehna tha ke shravni ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog

Shravni-jo muh me aaye wo mat bola kariye komal

Komal-arey maine to jo sach hai sirf wahi kaha hai, ab iksa praman bhi sun lo aur ache se samajh jaogi, apne Marathi bhasha me ek kahavat hai, ‘aamhi khalla tar shen an tumhi khalli tar……..’

Avinash-shravni….

Avinash tapak se bola

(ab jinko nahi samjha samjhata hu, bhai aaya hai batake jayega iska sidha matlab hai ham khaye to gobar tum khao to shravni matlab twada kutta tommy sadda kutta kutta, waisa sa matlab hota hai iska, samajh gaye, very good story ke end me viva lunga, abi aage padho)

Avinash ki baat sunkar waha maujood sabhi log hasne lage siway do ek ke, ab jab sahi has rahe the to aniket bhi has raha tha aur bakiyo ka to pata nahi par naiket ko hasta dekh kar shravni ko aur jyada gussa aaya, wo wahase uthi aur gusse me pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi, aniket use awaj dete huye use rokne ke liye uske piche bhaga par wo sunne ko tayar hi nahi thi, ab aniket bhi bhadak gaya tha…

Aniket wapis canteen me aaya to avinash aur komal ka hasna shuru hi tha aniket ko dekhte hi wo dono ekdum chup ho gaye aur aniket bhi unke paas aakar unpar baras pada

Aniket-kame kuch akkal wagaire hai tere me thoda bhi dimag hai? Teko pata hai na main pasand karta hu use fir kyu pareshan kar rahi thi shravni ko, wo tere jaisi nahi hai bahut najuk man hai uska kitna bura laga use pata hai rote huye gayi hai wo bechari

Komal-anya bahut ho gaya ye bichari puran, teri wajah se sahan karte hai ham use warna to aaspaas bhi fatakne na de

Aniket-jab itna samajhta hai to apna muh band rakah kar na, pata hai na apne muh gutter hai khulega to baas hi marega

Komal-ye jyada ho raha hai ab anya, tuuski side kyu le raha hai re

Aniket-kyuki main usse pyaar karta hu..

Komal-aur hamse..?

Aniket-tum log dost ho yaar, main tumhari aur uski tulna nahi kar sakta..

Komal-theek hai samajh gayi aura b tu mere naam se mat chilla ha main to tujhe apne man ki baat batane ke liye keh rahi thi, wohi beech me kuch apni kavita ki potli leke

Aniket- tujhe nahi pasand to mat bola kar na usse

Komal-main kaha kuch boli wo hi apni beech me kudu(fir komal ne shravni ki nakal karte huye kaha)’aapko pata hai kya shravni ka matlab’ maine to kaha bhi tha ke mat puch par wo satvik pujarin piche hi pad gayi to maine bhi bata diya

Aniket-arey apne me kuch bhi chalta hai par wo apne jaisi nahi hai ye samajhna chahiye tujhe

Komal-shabash ab jaise mujhe samjhaya na waise hi apni satvik pujarin ko samjhane ka ja, ye sahi hai bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai, aur ha apni premika ko ye bhi samjhana dena ye aainda mujhse na uljhe wo

Uske baad teeno shand baith gaye avi to waise bhi shant hi tha ye donohi bakbak kar rahe the avi dimag wala banda tha wo inke beech me nahi padta tha, koi kuch bhi bolne ko tayar nahi tha, thoda samay bita, gussa thanda hua aura b puri ghatna aniket ke dimag me ghum rahi thi itne me use hasi aa gayi, komal aur avinash ne uski taraf dekha to wo ekdum serious chehra karke baitha tha, dono ko laga ki unhe aabhas hua hoga unhone fir se apna chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya, aniket ko apni hasi rokna mushkil ho raha tha aur fir jab usse control nahi hua to wo jor jor se hasne laga aur dono use ashcharya se dekhne lage, unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke aniket has kyu raha hai aur aakhir me aniket ne komal ki khurchi par laat mari aur kaha

Aniket-kammo seriously

Komal-tu pehle hasna band karega aur batayega hasne jaisa kya hua hai

Aniket-main ye soch raha hu ke tu ye sab lati kaha se hai, bole shravnni matlab gobar

Ab teeno hasne lage aur haste huye komal boli

Komal-arey sach baat hai ye ghar jake bapu se puch lena

Teeno aankho me pani aaye tak haste rahe aur fir thode shant hone ke baad aniket ne kaha

Aniket-aur ye satvik pujarin ka kya scene hai

Komal-wo ja ke apni maa se puchna

Teeno fir has rahe the

Komal-waise anya sorry ha ab nahi pareshan karungi teri shravni ko (avinash se) avi kalpana kar agar apna anya shravne ke sar pe hath maar ke thapthapaye to log kya bolenge?

Avinash ko kuch samjha nahi ke ye kya kehna chah rahi hai

Avinash-kya bolenge

Komal-yahi bolenge ki anya gobar ke uple bana raha hai

Bas teeno fir se hasne lage (koi kaam hi nahi hai inko hasne ke alawa )

Aniket-acha ye sab bate chhodo aur ye batao maine jo kaha samjha kya

Komal(ekdum bhola chehra banate huye)- hao samajh gayi

Aniket-kya samjha?

Komal(avi ki aur dekhte huye)- ye samjhi ke shravni matlab….

Komal aur avi eksath- Gobaaarrrrrrrr……….

Aniket unko maarne ke liye utha hi tha ke isse pehle hi wo canteen ke baahar bhag liye aur unke piche aniket bhi….

full to maza

 

[SHADOW KING]

majedar update ..to aniket daring nahi kar paa raha shravni ko propose karne ki ..

aur komal ne uske naam ka matlab hi bigaad diya ..
bechari gussa hokar chali gayi ..
par baadme ye teeno naam ka majak banake hansne lage ..

waise wo gobar ka muhawara samajh nahi aaya ..

 

[Mr.Marlega]

Update 11​

Aniket ektak us ladki ki taraf dekhe ja raha tha, aaj pehli baar kisi ladki ne iskadar uske dil ko chua tha, aniket ke liye to mano wo samay wahi ruk sa gaya tha aur wo ladki kisi hawa ke jhoke ki taraf waha aayi aur chali bhi gayi,wahi komal aniket ki is halat pe has rahi thi

Komal-anya lagta hai wicket gir gayi teri, kano me ghanti to nahi baji na

Aniket-haayyy kammo kaun thi ye pari

Komal-pari?? Mujhe to chapri lag rahi thi

Aniket ke komal ke kandhe par ek chamat mara

Aniket-pagal jaise kuch bhi mat bola kar, waise kammo info nikal ka iski, kaun hai ye jo aaj tak mujhe na dikhi aur dikhi to sidha ghayal kar gayi re

Komal-tune kya mujhe kaam pe rakha hai info nikalne ke liye aur jaise main to ekdum khalipili hu na, teko pasand aayi tu nikal info

Aniket-avya kuch jalne ka baas aa raha hai kya teko?

Komal-jale meri juti, chal fut!

Aur fir aniket aur avinash dono waha se apni mohim par nikal gaye, dono ne pura college chan maara lekin wo ladki unhe kahi par bhi nahi dikhi aur akhir me dono thak ke wapis canteen me aakar baith gaye jaha komal ab bhi koi book padhte huye baithi thi, avinash dhad se khurchi pe baithte huye bola

Avinash-sala ladki hai ke bhoot pehle hamare dost ko pagal banaya ab khud gayab ho gayi

Aniket(muskurate huye)- abe jayegi kaha, kal college me aayegi hi

Komal uthi aur boli

Komal-tum log tumhari aashiki chalu rakho main nikalti hu kal milte hai

Aniket(komal ka hath pakad ke rokte huye)- ruk na kammo ghar jake kya karegi, help kar na thodi

Par komal nahi ruki aur jate huye bol gayi “dekhte hai”……

Agle din jo kabhi nahi hua wo hua, aniket aur avinash samay ke pehle hi college pahuch gaye aur us ladki ki raah dekhne lage gate par hi ruk kar par jab kafi samay tak wo nahi aayi to dono thak ke canteen me aake baith gaye, udhar class me do lectures ho gaye the aur kuch samay baad komal bhi canteen me aayi use dekhte hi aniket bola

Aniket-kya kammo itni der laga di, lecture kar rahi thi kya? Tabiyat theek hai na teri?

Komal ne apni bag table par patki aur khurchi par baithte huye boli

Komal-pehle chai nashta khila fir baat karenge

Aniket ne aviki taraf sawaliya najro se dekha par usne bhi kandhe jhatak kar kaha ki use kuch nahi pata hai

Aniket-aaj mera janamdin hai kya jo tujhe nashta khilau

Komal (khurchi kar aaram se baithte huye)- theek hai teri marji, fir main bhi tujhe teri chammak challo ke bare me nahi batane wali

Ab to komal ki baat sunkar aniket bhai ekdum khush

Aniket-bas kya kammo yahi dosti apni, bata na kya naam hai uska?

Komal-dosti gayi bhad me abhi kya bol raha tha nashta khilane ke liye?

Avinash(chidhte huye)- abe yaar anya jab tak iske muh me ek cup chai aur ek vada nahi thusega ye kuch nahi batane wali

Aniket ne jaldise chai nashte ka order diya aur komal mast nashta karne lagi fir usne full aaram se chai pi par yaha aniket utawala hua ja raha tha

Aniket-kammo kitne nakhre karegi be batana kya naam hai uska

Komal ne chai ka aakhri ghut liya aur cup niche rakhte huye kaha

Komal-shravni

Aniket ko to wo naam sun ke aisa laga mano kisine uske kano me shahad ghol diya ho

Aniket-shravni! Waah, jitni wo sunder hai utna hi uska naam sunder hai, shravni, sawan ki pehli bearish jaisa sunder, naam lete hi sharir par pani ki bunde mehsus hone lagi

Komal ne aniket ki baat sunkar apna sar pit liya

Komal-ha wo shravni aur tu sawan a mendhak, naam sunte hi laga darav darav karne

Aniket-kammo kaun hai wo aur kaunse class me hai batana na

Komal-sari info milegi balak par fokat me nahi milegi

Aniket-arey tu bol kya chahiye tujhe

Komal-multiplex me ek picture aur interval me popcorn

Aniket-bas, chal diya ab info bata jaldi

Komal-naam hai shravni patvardhan, class 12th commerce, baap cleark hai gov office me aur ladki thoda kiski huyi hai :relievied:

Aniket-khiski huyi ?

Komal-samajh jaoge jaldi hi

Aniket-kammo tu sach bol rahi hai na

Komal-arey ekdum sach ye, ye avi ki kasam

Avinash- oye oye oye tumlog ko udhar kya game khelne ka hai khelo meri kasam kha ke meri jaan ke piche kyu pade ho be

Aniket table se uthte huye avinash se bola

Aniket-avya chal teri bhabhi se milne jana hai

Par komal ne use rok liya aur uska hath pakad kar use tablepar wapis bithaya

Komal-arey raja murad shakal ke tujhe kya lagta hai tu usse milne jayega aur wo slow motion main bhag kar aakar tere gale lag jayegi? Baith niche pata chala karne kya gaye the aura aye thappad kha kar, arey college me tumhari na sahi meri ijjat hai uske bare me to kuch socho

Aniket-to yaha baithe baithe kuch hone wala hai kya?

Komal-teko pyaar hua hai ya pyaar ka julab hua hai, thoda sabar rakho, wo aayegi yaha

Aniket-aur ye kaise hoga

Komal-hey bhagwan ab kya har baat samjhani padegi, Ishq Ne Nakara Bana Diya Galib, Warna Tu Bhi Insaan Tha Kuch Kaam Ka….

Aniket-kammo kabhi to jindagi me kuch sidhe sidhe bola kar sidhe sidhe bolegi to kyat era baap mere naam property kar dega kya

Komal- main to sidhe shabdo me baat kar lungi par use samajhne ke liye tumhara dimag bhi jagah pe hona chahiye na

Aniket-hua baitho yahi

Aniket chidh kar utha aur baahar jane laga to komal ne jakar uska rasta rok liya

Komal-anya ladkiyo jaise kyu cidhta hai be? Jana hai to ja gobar me muh dene, sala meko hi akkal nahi hai to tere liye itnifielding laga kar aayi hu, par nahi tumhe to us bare me kuch sochna hi nahi hai, anya tu badal gaya hai re, us kal ki aayi ladki ke liye badal gaya hai tu, ja, ja ke mar udhar

Itna bol ke komal ne aniket ko dhakka diya aur pair patakte huye wapis canteen me apni jagah pe aake baith gayi, uske piche piche aniket bhi aakar baith gaya, komal dusri taraf muh karke baithi thi, do minute tak dono bhi shant baithe huye the, fir aniket ko hasi aa gayi

Aniket-kammo! Aye kammo!

Par komal ne koi reply nahi diya

Aniket- aye kammo! Arey sorry na yaar, bas kar na ab ye nautnki dekh kaan pakadta hu

Aur aniket ne komal ke kaan pakad liye, komal aniket ki taraf mudi aur ekdum aath dus mukke aniket ko pade, aniket sorry sorry bol raha tha aura b komal ka gussa bhi ja chuka tha aur dono hasne lage fir komal boli

Komal-wo shravni meri dost ki dost hai, mainer puri fielding laga li hai wo use break me yaha canteen me lekar aayegi

Aniket-arey gazab! Kammo agar tu ladki hoti na to yahi chum leta main tujhe itna jabardast kaam kiya hai tune

Aniket ki baat sunkar komal ne ek jordar gudda aniket ke pet me mara

Komal-aye haadd! Sala halkat

Aur jis tarah se komal ne sab setting kit hi usi hisab se break me wo ladki canteen me aayi…



To Be Continued….

Superb update

 

[Mr.Marlega]

Update 12​

Komal ki lagayi huyi fielding ke mutabik hi uski dost nidhi shravni ko lekar canteen me pahuchi, un dono ke aate hi komal ne apni nidhi ko ishara karne apne paar bulaya aur un dono ke waha aane par komal ne usse shravni ke bare me pucha

Komal-ye kaun?

Tab nidhi ne uski formal intro karayi

Nidhi-ye shravni hai aur shravni ye komal

Dono ne hath milate huye smile kiya aur fir komal ne jald hi aniket aur avinash ki bhi pehchan karwayi, aniket ne utawala hokar shravni se hath milaya, dono ki najre mili, aniket swabhav se to ek number tha hi aur dikhne me bhi acha tha, fir shuru hua bato ka daur, kuch samay me sabse pehle waha se avinash khisak liya, uske jane ke baad aniket komal ko bhi waha se jane ka ishara kar raha tha par komal kuch waha se halne ko tayar hi nahi thi, kuch samay tak aniket kosatane ke baad komal nidhi ko apne sath lekar waha se chali gayi aur shravni ko waha rukne ko kaha aur kaha ki wo log jald hi aa jayenge, ab waha sirf aniket aur shravni hi bache huye the aur baat kaha se shuru kare kya bole ye kuch bhi aniket ko sujh nahi raha tha, wo to bas waha baithe baithe shravni ko dekhna chahta tha par direct dekhne ki usme himmat bhi nahi thi isiliye kuch samay use dekhta fir idhar udhar dekhne lagta aur aakhir kaar shravni ne baat shuru ki

Shravni-aniket aap arts stream se ho na?

Par aniket ka uske bolne ki taraf dhyan hi nahi thaw o to shravni ko niharne me hi vyast tha uski baat sun kar aniket hosh me aaya aur chutiyo mafik bola

Aniket-kaun main?

Shravni-aniket aapka hi naam hai na?

Aniket-ha! Ha! Matlab mera hi naam hai par koi mujhe kabhi aniket naam se nahi bulata yaha tak ki mummy papa bhi nahi sab ani ya anya hi bolte hai, tum bhi ani ya anya hi bola karo

Ispar shravni apni naak chadhate huye boli

Shravni- chee baba, itna acha naam hai aapka aniket fir main ani ya anya bolke us naam ko kyu bigadu main aapko aniket kehke hi bulaungi

Shravni ke muh se aniket sun kar to apne bhai ko aisa laga mano kisi ne uspar pushpa varsha kar di ho

Aniket-tumhe mujhe jis naam se bulana hai tum bula sakti ho apne ko koi dikkat nahi hai

Shravni- aap naraj na ho to ek baat kahu?

Aniket-arey bindass, apun ke sath rehte huye bilkul chinta nahi karne ka jo man me aaye bedhadak bolne ka, aisa jhijhak ne ka nahi

Shravni- nahi matlab aisa nahi hai, wo kya hai ma mujhe aisa tu tu karke baat karte nahi aata aur mujhe ye pasand bhi nahi hai

Aniket-theek hai teko jaisa pasand hai waisa bol….

Par bolte bolte aniket ke dhyan me aaya ki usne wapis shravni se tu tadak me baat ki hai to usne jeebh dato ke beech daba li jise dekh kar shravni ko hasi aa gayi aur jab wo hasi to aniket fir se ek baar ghayal ho gaya

Shravni-aap kafi famous ho college me

Aniket-kya baat kar rahi ho tum sorry kya baat kar rahi ho aap? Acha hi suna hai na mere bare me?

Shravni-ha matab aapke aur komal ke kisse kafi famous hai, aap dono ke beech kuch hai kya?

Ab bolte bolte shravni ye baat bol to gayi par fir uske dhyan me aaya ki ye log aaj pehli baar mil rahe hai aur direct aisa puchna sahi nahi lagta hai par apne aniket ko to is baat ka kabhi koi fark hi nahi padta tha

Aniket-hum dono ke beech agar kuch hota to aapko kuch problem thi kya usse

Shravni- I am sorry aise directly puchne ke liye wo to bas bato bato me muh se nikal gaya sorry

Ispar aniket shravni ke paas jakar dheere se bola

Aniket- koi baat nahi waise ab aapne puch hi liya hai to bata deta hu ke mere aur komal ke beech aisa kuch bhi nahi hai, main ekdum free hu

Aniket ki baat sunkar shravni sharma gayi

Aniket-agar aap naraj na ho to ek baat kahu aap na jab aise sharmati hai to aur bhi jyada khubsurat lagti hai

Usne aankhen badi karke aniket ki taraf dekha

Shravni- kya aap bhi kuch bhi bol rahe hai

Aniket- arey maine to jo sach hai wahi bola hai

Kuch samay fir shanti me beeta do minute tak dono me se koi kuch nahi bola fir aniket ne baat aage badhayi

Aniket- tu...matlab aapko kya pasand hai waise

Shravni-mujhe na kavitaye bahut pasand hai padhna bhi aur likhna bhi

Aniket- arey waah! Tu....matlab aap kavitaye bhi karti ho

Shravni- ha, aaj hi ek likhi hai ruko aapko sunati hu padhke

Uske baad shravni ne aniket k apni kavitaye padhke sunana shuru kiya aur wo ruki hi nahi, ek ke baad ek kavita sunane lagi, aniket ko usme ka shabd bhi nahi samajh raha tha, wo bas aise hi waah waah kar raha tha, aur shravni kavita sunake hi nahi ruki balki uske piche bhi bhavnaye bhi wo aniket ko samjha ke batane lagi, par aniket ko is sab se koi lena dena nahi thaw o to bas shravni ko dekhne me busy tha aur aise me samay kaise bita pata hi nahi chala, ab komal aur nidhi bhi wapis aa gaye the aur un dono ko itne ache se baat karte dekh komal khush ho gayi

Komal-arey waah! Badhiya dosti ho gayi lagta dono me?

Tab aniket komal se bola

Aniket-arey kya badhiya kavita likhti hai yaar ye, shravni ise bhi ekad kavita sunao na

Bas fir kya tha shravni se fir se kavita sunana shuru kar diya aur jaise hi dusri kavita khatam huyi aur teesri shuru hone wali thi komal chidh kar boli

Komal- o gaankokila bas ha, ek to waise bhi mujhe ye kavita wagaire me interest nahi hai aur ye sab mujhe samajhta bhi nahi hai isiliye aaj jo ye sunaya ye pehli aur aakhri baar tha theek hai, hai na anya…

Ab yaha aniket fas gaya, ha bole to shravni naraj aur na bole to komal naraj, usne pani ka glass uthaya aur pini pite pite wo samay taalne ki koshish ki, shravni ka chehra utar gaya tha

Shravni-aapko nahi pasand hai to main aajse aapko nahi sunaungi par inhe to pasand hai na (aniket se) main aapko sunaungi

Itna bol ke shravni nidhi ke sath waha se chali gayi aur uske jate hi komal boli

Komal-kya calendar ladki hai yaar ye? Aur ye kya natak hai be ‘inhe pasand hai’ teko kabse college me itni ijjat se bulane lage

Aniket-jane de na kammo kyu maje le rahi bichari ke

Komal-bichari ye kab se bichari ho gayi aur sabse badi baat teko kavitaye kabsepasand aane lagi? Ek shabd to bhi samajhta hai kya uska

Tab aniket use samjhate huye bola

Aniket-arey aap chidhiye mat

Komal-aye haad! Ye aaho jaho aap tum mere se kiya to thobda suja dungi anya, hey bhagwan itna bada ladka kar diya ye thodi akkal bhi de dete

Aniket-arey theek hai komal rehta hai koi koi aisa

Komal(gusse me)- anya dimag mat kharab kar ha, aaj pehli baar komal bola hai tune mujhe, us chidail ne kuchjadu tona kar diya kya, suna tha log pyaar me andhe ho jate hai par murkh ho jate hai ye pehli baar dekha, mera dimag ghum jayega agar thoda samay aur yaha ruki to aur tere hath pair tute isse acha hai main hi yaha se chali jau

Aur komal waha se pair patakte huye nikal gayi…..

Good one

 

[Mr.Marlega]

Update 13​

Aniket aur shravni ki dosti ab dheere dheere parvan chadh rahi thi, aniket shravni par full too fida tha, wo use behad pasand karne laga tha par jaise hi shravni uske saamne aati uski himmat hi nahi hoti thi shravni se apne man ki baat kehne ki , wo college me bas shravni ke ird gird ghumta rehta tha aur isi wajah se uska commerce section me bhi aana jana kafi badh gaya tha, ab to aniket ko dekh kar shravni ke bhi gaal sharam se laal ho jate the, wo bhi class ke paas aniket se baat karne me sharmati hi, dono ki job hi baate hoti thi wo bas canteen me hi hoti thi aur waha bhi nidhi shravni ko komal aniket ko chhodne ko tayar nahi rehte the wo inke sath chipke hi rehte aur ye sab waha maujood rehne ki wajah se aniket apne man ki baat nahi keh pata tha

Shravni aur komal ke beech bhi jyada jamti nahi thi, ye dono do alag alag kinare the jaise sikke de do pehlu, shravni najuk, kavi hriday wali tipikal ladki thi wahi komal iske ekdum viparit thi ekdum bedhadk

Ek din canteen me ye sablog baithe huye the tab komal aniket se boli

Komal- anya tu na bahut ander ki gath ka aadmi hai yaar, matlab tere na man me bahut kuch chalta rehta hai par tu kabhi kuch bolke hi nahi batata

Aniket-kuch bhi mat bola kar kammo

Komal-main kuch bhi bol rahi hu? Arey pichle ek mahine sedekh rahi hyu teko sirf gulugulu gulugulu shuru hai, bas ho gaya ab ye natak aur agar hamse mamla atak raha hai to sidha bol na ham chale jate hai yaha se fir aaram se baat kar

Aniket-kame jara shanti rakh na bhai

Itne me shravni boli

Shravni-aap kyu unhe hamesha har chiz ke liye jabardasti karti rehti hai komal

Komal-arey dost hai wo apna, main nahi bolungito kya rode pe ka bhikari aake bolega uske kaan me? Aur ye bai shravne teko kitni baar batana padega ki ye mere sath ye inko unko mat kiya kar teko aisa joi bhi karna hai uske liye ye aniket bail hai tere paas

Komal ka shravni ko shravne bolna shravni ko bilkul pasand nahi aaya wo gusse me boli

Shravni-dekhiye komal mera naam shravni hai to kripaya mujhe mere naam se hi bulaya kariye, itna sunder naam hai mera ‘shravni’ aapko matlab to bhi pata hai kya iska

Ab baat jab jhadge ke level taka a hi gayi hai to piche hate wo komal thode hi hai

Komal-mujhe to pata hai matlab, tu jaanti ho kya apne naam ka matlab?

Shravni-bilkul,shravni yani savan ke mahine ki barish ki ki pehli fuhar

Jispar komal ne has diya

Komal-lagta hai tumhe shravni ka dusra matlab pata nahi hai khair jane do

Shravni-jane do matlab kya,waise bhi iska koi dusra matlab nahi hai agar aapko pata hi hai to aap bata do na

Komal-arey rehne de, teko pasand nahi aayega, sirf shravne bolne me tu chidh gayi jab teko main dusra matlab bataungi to tu kya karegi bhagwan jane

Shravni-hoga tab kuch bataogi na aap iska koi aur matlab hi nahi hai aur agar hai to sirf matlab mat batana balki apni baat ko pramanit bhi karna padega

Komal-theek hai ab tum itna mujhe force kar hi rahi ho to suno shravni matlab gobar, gu, shen

Bas komal ka itna kehna tha ke shravni ekdum bhadak gayi na bhailog

Shravni-jo muh me aaye wo mat bola kariye komal

Komal-arey maine to jo sach hai sirf wahi kaha hai, ab iksa praman bhi sun lo aur ache se samajh jaogi, apne Marathi bhasha me ek kahavat hai, ‘aamhi khalla tar shen an tumhi khalli tar……..’

Avinash-shravni….

Avinash tapak se bola

(ab jinko nahi samjha samjhata hu, bhai aaya hai batake jayega iska sidha matlab hai ham khaye to gobar tum khao to shravni matlab twada kutta tommy sadda kutta kutta, waisa sa matlab hota hai iska, samajh gaye, very good story ke end me viva lunga, abi aage padho)

Avinash ki baat sunkar waha maujood sabhi log hasne lage siway do ek ke, ab jab sahi has rahe the to aniket bhi has raha tha aur bakiyo ka to pata nahi par naiket ko hasta dekh kar shravni ko aur jyada gussa aaya, wo wahase uthi aur gusse me pair patakte huye waha se nikal gayi, aniket use awaj dete huye use rokne ke liye uske piche bhaga par wo sunne ko tayar hi nahi thi, ab aniket bhi bhadak gaya tha…

Aniket wapis canteen me aaya to avinash aur komal ka hasna shuru hi tha aniket ko dekhte hi wo dono ekdum chup ho gaye aur aniket bhi unke paas aakar unpar baras pada

Aniket-kame kuch akkal wagaire hai tere me thoda bhi dimag hai? Teko pata hai na main pasand karta hu use fir kyu pareshan kar rahi thi shravni ko, wo tere jaisi nahi hai bahut najuk man hai uska kitna bura laga use pata hai rote huye gayi hai wo bechari

Komal-anya bahut ho gaya ye bichari puran, teri wajah se sahan karte hai ham use warna to aaspaas bhi fatakne na de

Aniket-jab itna samajhta hai to apna muh band rakah kar na, pata hai na apne muh gutter hai khulega to baas hi marega

Komal-ye jyada ho raha hai ab anya, tuuski side kyu le raha hai re

Aniket-kyuki main usse pyaar karta hu..

Komal-aur hamse..?

Aniket-tum log dost ho yaar, main tumhari aur uski tulna nahi kar sakta..

Komal-theek hai samajh gayi aura b tu mere naam se mat chilla ha main to tujhe apne man ki baat batane ke liye keh rahi thi, wohi beech me kuch apni kavita ki potli leke

Aniket- tujhe nahi pasand to mat bola kar na usse

Komal-main kaha kuch boli wo hi apni beech me kudu(fir komal ne shravni ki nakal karte huye kaha)’aapko pata hai kya shravni ka matlab’ maine to kaha bhi tha ke mat puch par wo satvik pujarin piche hi pad gayi to maine bhi bata diya

Aniket-arey apne me kuch bhi chalta hai par wo apne jaisi nahi hai ye samajhna chahiye tujhe

Komal-shabash ab jaise mujhe samjhaya na waise hi apni satvik pujarin ko samjhane ka ja, ye sahi hai bhalai ka jamana hi nahi hai, aur ha apni premika ko ye bhi samjhana dena ye aainda mujhse na uljhe wo

Uske baad teeno shand baith gaye avi to waise bhi shant hi tha ye donohi bakbak kar rahe the avi dimag wala banda tha wo inke beech me nahi padta tha, koi kuch bhi bolne ko tayar nahi tha, thoda samay bita, gussa thanda hua aura b puri ghatna aniket ke dimag me ghum rahi thi itne me use hasi aa gayi, komal aur avinash ne uski taraf dekha to wo ekdum serious chehra karke baitha tha, dono ko laga ki unhe aabhas hua hoga unhone fir se apna chehra dusri taraf ghuma liya, aniket ko apni hasi rokna mushkil ho raha tha aur fir jab usse control nahi hua to wo jor jor se hasne laga aur dono use ashcharya se dekhne lage, unhe samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ke aniket has kyu raha hai aur aakhir me aniket ne komal ki khurchi par laat mari aur kaha

Aniket-kammo seriously

Komal-tu pehle hasna band karega aur batayega hasne jaisa kya hua hai

Aniket-main ye soch raha hu ke tu ye sab lati kaha se hai, bole shravnni matlab gobar

Ab teeno hasne lage aur haste huye komal boli

Komal-arey sach baat hai ye ghar jake bapu se puch lena

Teeno aankho me pani aaye tak haste rahe aur fir thode shant hone ke baad aniket ne kaha

Aniket-aur ye satvik pujarin ka kya scene hai

Komal-wo ja ke apni maa se puchna

Teeno fir has rahe the

Komal-waise anya sorry ha ab nahi pareshan karungi teri shravni ko (avinash se) avi kalpana kar agar apna anya shravne ke sar pe hath maar ke thapthapaye to log kya bolenge?

Avinash ko kuch samjha nahi ke ye kya kehna chah rahi hai

Avinash-kya bolenge

Komal-yahi bolenge ki anya gobar ke uple bana raha hai

Bas teeno fir se hasne lage (koi kaam hi nahi hai inko hasne ke alawa )

Aniket-acha ye sab bate chhodo aur ye batao maine jo kaha samjha kya

Komal(ekdum bhola chehra banate huye)- hao samajh gayi

Aniket-kya samjha?

Komal(avi ki aur dekhte huye)- ye samjhi ke shravni matlab….

Komal aur avi eksath- Gobaaarrrrrrrr……….

Aniket unko maarne ke liye utha hi tha ke isse pehle hi wo canteen ke baahar bhag liye aur unke piche aniket bhi….

Badhiya update

 

[Mr.Marlega]

Waiting next

 

[Adirshi]

behatrin update bro

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

kaha inke beech shravani yani gobar fas gayi.

ye to uski kismat bhai
Bahut bahut shukriya bhai

 

[Adirshi]

very nice update bhai maza aa gya ab dekhte hai ki aage kya hota hai

Bahut bahut shukriya bhai