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Erotica Ek Kaamuk Daayan

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Bhaag 6

Us awaaz ko sunte hi Vinita hasne lagi aur voh apne insani roop me vapas pravesh kar leti hain aur voh ghana jungle vapas bathroom me tabdil ho jaata hain.

Darwaza na khulne ki pareshani me ab Rajesh todne ke koshish me piche ki aur chala aur jaise hi todne ke liye aage aane vala tha, bas usi vakt darwaja khul jaata hai aur saamne khadi mili Vinita! Fresh hoke, ekdum gharelu saree pehni hui "aap bhi na! Zara bhi dharya nahi!! Typically male!" Ek pyari si muskaan thi chehre par aur saamne khada Rajesh phir se dharamsankat me. "Aap pareshaan lag rahe ho, kya hu...." Lekin vakya ko khatam karne se pehle hi Rajesh use baju me dhakelta hua andar aa gaya aur foran bathroom ki aur chala gaya fresh hone ke liye. Basin me dhasti hui paani se apne chehre par chirakta hua, voh aine me khud se baate karne laga

"Nahi....... Vinita ek daayan???? Kya bakwas hai yeh! Yeh ho hi nahi sakta.....ohhh! Pagal ho jaunga mein! Yeh horror movies dekhne ka shayad natija hoga!". Khud ko santulan deta hua voh bas bathroom se nikalne hi vala tha, ke ek ajeeb se bu aane laga use. Normally aisi gandh kisi taazi laash se mili jaati hain, lekin is baat ko bhi taalta hua voh bathroom se nikal gaya.

Ab kuch dino tak sab normal hi raha. Lekin Vinita aur Rajesh me ab baate pehle ke mukable kaafi kam hone lagi thi, is baat ke ehsaas se Vinita kaafi mayus lagne lagi aur uske mann me bas ek hi baat chal rahi thi, ke kahin uski asliyat Rajesh ko malum to nahi ho gaya tha. Lekin phir is soch ko baju me kardi usne aur normal vaetalab karne lagi Rajesh se. Dekhte hi dekhte Shanivar aa chuka tha aur Bansi ke hadse ko pura 5 din ho chuka tha. Voh 5 din Vinita Rajesh se mansik taur pe itni door thi ke unke beech sambhog to door, koi chedkhani ya chumban bhi nahi hui thi. Sambhog se door rehke Vinita ki utsukta phir badne lagi. Kaamyog nahi to koi naya shikaar hi sahi! Lekin kuch to chahiye thi use.

Aise me aajata hai Sunday! Aur vaade ke mutabik Rajesh ne apne do khaas doston ko bulaya tha ghar pe Dinner ke liye. Ek Mehul tha aur doosra Ajay. Shaam ka samay tha aur dono ek saath hi aa chuke the aur jaise hi Rajesh ke saath voh dono bethe, to bas gappe chalu! "Yaar Rajesh! Bhabhi nahi dilh rahi hai! Kahaa hai voh?" Mehul ek shararti andaaz me bol para aur chupke se Ajay khud ko bol para "yeh nahi sidhrega, tharki saala!". "Abe saale, maine sun liya tujhe!" Ajay ko jawab deke Mehul uske aur dekhne laga aur dono ke saath saath Rajesh bhi muskura utha "are yaar, betho to sahi, Vini aati hi hogi.

Kuch pal ke baad, Vinita hall me pravesh karti hain, haath me samosa aur coffee liye huye. Mehul to bas pehle hi jhalak me kayal ho utha use de dekhakar, phir ek nazar coffee ko dekhkar vapas nazre Vinita se mila diya "namaste bhabhi! Tarif suni thi aapki, lekin kam ki thi is saale Rajesh ne!". Vinita fitrat samajhne me maahir thi, Mehul ka rumani swabhav dekhkar bas muskurayi. Voh jaane hi vali thi ke Ajay bol para is vakt "are bhabhiji, bethiye to sahi, kahaa chal diye???". Ek rumani aur pyari si andaaz me Vinita boli "aap mard sare ke sare male topics pe baatein karenge, me to bechari bore ho jaungi!". Uski swar me ek natkhat andaaz thi, jisse Rajesh kuch chaukanna sa ho gaya aur Mehul ko to kaafi maza aaya sunke, voh bhala piche kyo rehta "choro na bhabhi! Dakyanusi khayalat aajkal shobha nahi deti Aap aao betho!". Vinita bilkul viprit sofe par beth jaati hai aur baar baar kaatil nigahon se mehul ko dekhi jaa rahi thi. Hare rang ki saree aur peela sleeveless blouse me to aaj voh kayamat hi laag rahi thi. Vinita ki jawani dekhkar Mehul ke pant me hulchule hone shuru ho gaya tha.

Kuch pal tak yuhi college aur office ki baate hoti gayi aur Vinita keval haan me haan milati gayi, lekin hairanjanak uski aankhe Mehul ke aankho me dhasti hi gayi. Maano, jaise dono nain matakka kar rahe the ek dusre se. Mehul to deewana ho chuka tha Vinita ka, uski pyasi honto se shuru hoke uske mote stan aur sudol kamar tak. Vinita mann hi mann apne naye shikar ka swagat karti hain.
ye daayan to lagta hai sach mein pyaar karti hai Rajesh se..tabhi bechari ko dar hai ki kahi sach na pata chal jaaye..
2 naye sikar aaye hai dekhna ye hai pahla number kiska hai
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Mast story hai..
waiting for next update..
 
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Shukriya aap sabka, is kahani ka doosra bhaag ek naye post pe hain :




Saath bane rahe mitro.
 
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Sensational and very very nice update!
 
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saare reviews kuch hi dino mein ..
 
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Earn-money-online-with-the-world-s-largest-affiliate-network-SFI for new story writer ankur ji...
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saare reviews kuch hi dino mein ..

Aapka bahut shukriya! 🙏 Ummeed hai kahani aapke ruchi ki hogi.
 
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Aapka bahut shukriya! 🙏 Ummeed hai kahani aapke ruchi ki hogi.
Kahani mein kaafi mod aaye joh kahani ko dilchasp banaye huye hai... ek achhe writer ke gun, lakshan yeh ki kahani ki jariye, kahani ke kirdaaro ke jariye kahani ke naam ko sarthak kar de.... jisme aap pure tarike se kamyab rahe...

Really badhte update ke sath sath kahani aur bhi zyada interesting hoti jaa rahin hai...
Har ek pehlu ko aapne dhyan dete huye kahani ko aage badha rahe the.. .
romance ke sath sath thrill aur suspense ki bhi anokhi sangam hai kahani mein ... horror ki kya baat hi karu.. kuch cheejo se shayad dhire dhire raaz ka parda hate... aur kuch kirdaaro ki asli roop bhi samne aaye.. toh kayi naye kirdaar bhi dekhne ko mili. joh apni bhumika sathik roop se nibha rahe hai kahani ki har ek pehlu mein....

yeh bhi ek sach hai ki aapki is kahani mein har ek kirdaar ki mahattva purn hai.. I mean to say ek kirdaar bhi hata diya jaye toh kahani adhuri hai...
Hum hamesha hero heroine pe hi zyada dhyaan Kendrit karte hain... lekin yeh yaad rakhna chahiye ki baaki kirdaaro bin mul kirdaar kuch bhi nahin.... aur aap kahani mein sabhi kirdaaro ke sath ek justify karte hain... Isliye aapki yeh kahani meri favorites kahaniyo mein se ek ho gayi hai....
aise hi likhte rahiye aur humari manoranjan karte rahiye :bow: :bow:

Brilliant update with awesome writing skills AnkurKumar3456 ji :applause: :applause:
 
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