Fantasy Ek Kahani Choti C

[Harry rocks]

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[Harry rocks]

Bhai mast update diya he lekin arun aur nitin ko kyu maf kar diya. Ghayal saap ka fan kuchal dena chahiye bhai. Wo dono kute ki dum he jise 20 saal bhi pipe ma rakhoge fir. Bhi sidhi nahi hogi. Sahi batau to mijge laga tha ki yaha is jagah par kahani thodi si flashback me chalaoge aur esha ko bataoge ki kishan ke sath kya aur kyu hua tha fir pihu aur ritu ne use kaise sambhala tha. Khair bada hi rapchik update tha.
Waiting 4 next update

Hi bhai bahut hi acha review diya aapne and please meri story bhi ek baar jarur padhe or apne valuable review comments m jarur de

 

[crazyrex]

Very nice and fantastic update

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

Keep going

Will wait for next update

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Acha means 2 chaku Lage peeth p , goliya lagi Jo ki arun air nitin n hi maari phir b bhagwan ka bacha kishan bilkul aahi salamat pitu Ritu esha k sath city Chala gaya.. Mara ni samajh aata h ki powers ki wajah s but behosh b ni hua khoon behne s..
Kishan ki powers ka Jo show off hua h sabke samne ye to samajh s pare h...


Aur Jahan tk baat rahi Arun ka thakur ka asli pota hone ka , mujhe to pura scene hi samajh ni aaya ki ye Sab aaya hi kyu . I mean pehli baar gaon aake thakur s Mile. Wo thakur Jo bht kamina h .. usko use pote s milwaya aur jinda b chod dia.. agar dayavaan hi dikhana tha to Rakesh ar kallan k hath paer tod dete unko jaan s Marne ki jarurat ni..

Mana ki nitin ka marna jayaz na hota but Arun maara jata to jayaz lagta kyiki kishna n khud bola ki uski gandi nazar thi pihu pr ...iske bawjud ek thappad tk ni Mara. Ab ye dosti ka saboot dia h to bht betuka h kyuki baat agar sirf apne tk hoti to maaf Kar sakte h but baat jab apno ki ho to Puri galti maaf karna bewkufi h..
Aur iski b Kya gurantee ki thakur aur Arun wapas ni aaenge kyuki kayde s thakur ka koi loss to hua ni..
Jo Mara tha means rakesh wo actual m thakur ka kch tha hi Ni aur kallan ki maut s thakur ko Kya nuksan bhala ..wo to aur pehalwan ki fauj khadi krlega aage.



Bhau tumhari first story s sath h to hame pata h ki Kya level h tumhara .. to jaldbazi na karke time leke story p kaam Karo..

All d best..

 

[Vickey1211]

Mast update h bhai Maza aa gya

 

[Ng_TheViper]

Last updates b padh Lia..

Pichle wale h s ye jyada sulja hua tha ..
But nitin ki study uski job sab kuch kishan Kar Raha th.. nitin ko bhagwan manna chahiye but chutiya nikla wo ..
Aur dusra sawal sirf ye ni ki wo behak gaya tha , ye wahi nitin h Jo Arun k sath mahi ki majburi ka b fauda uthane Wala tha.. is hisab s nitin kahi s bi innocent ni h.. isko to rakh k Dena chahiye tha gaal k niche but koi Ni ye kaam to Esha n hi kardia tha..

Kher , ab to Esha b aagai h list m .
Ab pihu , Ritu , Esha aur aage Jake m sure Mahi b add hogi ...

Let's see..

 

[John Cena]

Fantastic bhai

 

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reading

 

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Update 11

Kahani TP ki jubani

Ab Tak Thakur aur Kallan bhi usi yagha pohanch chuke the yahan yahan Kishan mojud tha Rakesh ki halat dekh dono bokhla gaye aur usse se lipte hue hi rone lage

Unke rone ki awaaz sun ke gaon wale apne gharo se bahar nikal aye Mahi aur Mahi ke pariwar wale bhi sath mein Pihu Ritu aur Esha bhi

Itne mein Kallan gusse se aag babula hoke Kiahan ki taraf badha aur apna khanjar nikal liya fir woh Kiahan ki taraf badhte hue bola

Kallan - aaj hum tohka na chodi humre Rakesh bitwa ko maar diya tune hum tohar le liha

Yeh keh ke usne Kishan ki taraf daud laga di jese hi usne Kishan pe war kiya Kishan ne uska hath pakad liya aur halki si tapli uske naak pe mari aur woh piche ho gya apna naak pakad ke

Kallan ne Kishan par fir se war karna chaha to Kishan jaldi se side hua aur uski kanpati ke niche fir se ek halka sa diya abi tak Kishan usse sirf khel raha tha

Khair Kallan fir se sambhla aur usne fir se Kishan pe war kiya Kishan ne abki bar uska hath pakda aur ek mukka diya rakh ke Kallan ki chest pe jis se Kallan ek side gira aur uske hath se chaku dusri side

Kishan chaku ke pass gya use thokar mar ke Kallan ki taraf fhenk diya

Kishan - ari ho Kallan dada ee lo tohar hathiyarwa uthayi lo dui tin bar aur koshishwa kar hi liyo shayad kohnu chamatkar hui jayi ha

Kallan kisi tarha khada hua aur usne chuka utha ke fir se Kishan ki taraf daud lagayi par Kishan ne uske hath pe kick mari aur chaku upar uchal gya fir Kishan ne Kallan ki gardan pakdi aur Thakur ki jeep pe use pith ke bal lita diya aur chaku utha ke uski chest mein lagatar 4 bar ghopa aur Kallan bhagwan ko pyara ho gya

Abi Kishan thakur ki taraf badha hi tha ki do chaku dono taraf se Kishan ki peeth mein ghus gaye

Kishan ne jab piche mud me dekha to vahan apne do dosto ko paya uski ankhen nam ho gayi fir use thakur ki hassi sunayi di

Thakur - jiske dost hi uske dushman ho to use kisi aur dushman ki jarurat nahi hai hahahahaha

Tabhi Kishan ne Arun aur Nitin ki taraf dekha aur hath piche leja kar dono chaku nikal liye

Kishan - Thakur mujhe marna itna asan nahi hai tum mein se koi mujhe nahi maar sakta

Aur itne mein goli chalne ki awaaz ayi Ritu Pihu aur Esha ek sath chillayi

Ritu,Pihu aur Esha - Kkkiiissshhhaaannnnn

Kishan ne politly teeno ko bola

Kishan - shant raho tum teeno kuch nahi hua mujhe

Halan ki uski shirt khoon se bheeg chuki thi par powers ki vajha se yeh sab cheeze use mehsus nahi hoti Kishan fir se Nitin aur Arun ki taraf palta

Kishan - Arun akhir khoon ne apna asli rang dikha hi diya

Fir Kishan thakur ki aur palta aur Arun ki gardan pakad ke use age kiya

Kishan - chal Thakur tujhe ek jhatka deta hu dil pe hath rakh le aur jhatka yeh hai ki Rakesh tumhara asli pota nahi tha

Thakur aur gaon wale Kishan ki baat sun ke shocked hue

Thakur - kya bakwas kar rHe ho ladke

Kishan - such bol raha hu Thakur Yeh Arun tumhara asli beta hai Pushpa Thakur ka beta

Thakur - yeh kese ho sakta hai yeh ladka Pushpa ka beta

Kishan ke baat sun ke Thakur Arun aur Nitin ko shock laga

Kishan - han Thakur yahi tumhara asli pota hai 23 saal pehle uski janam hote hi Kallan ne ise marne ki koshish ki par Pushpa Thakur ne ise kisi tarha bachaya aur bhaag gayi tumhare bete ki maut to pehle hi ho chuki thi jise Kallan ne hi mara tha Fir Kallan ne Arun ki yagha apne bete ko tume sonp diya aur bola ki Pushpa devi mar gayi hai aur isse mushkil se bachaya tha usne

Thakur - nahi Kallan esa nahi kar sakta

Kishan - kiya hai Thakur usne aur usne yeh sab kiya hai tumhari daulat ke liye jese aaj is Arun ne daulat ke liye meri peeth mein chura ghopa hai (Arun se) daulat ke liye aaj tune dosti jese rishtey ko badnam kar diya le dekh aaj tujhe mil gayi teri daulat issi ke liye aaj tune gaddari ki Pihu di pe gandi nazar rakhi dekh aaj tujhe daulat mil gayi sath mein rutwa bhi aur asli pehchan bhi

Yeh bol ke Kishan ne Arun ko Thakur ki taraf dhakka de diya fir Kishan bola

Kishan - Thakur aur Arun tumhe ek warning deta hu ki iss gaon mein kabhi bhi koi galat kam mat karna na hi power ka galat istemal karna agar esa hua to Arun mujhe achi tarha se janta hai ki main kya kar sakta hu aaj jo hua woh sirf trailer tha

Fir Kishan Nitin ki taraf palta woh use kuch bolta ki usse pehle hi Esha ne Nitin ko chanta laga diya

Esha - (rote hue) akhir kyu kiya tumne esa aaj Kishan hi peeth mein chura ghop diya kyu akhir kyu dost the na tum hum sab ke

Nitin - han dost tha par ab nahi hu nafrar hai mujhe Kishan se uski shakkal se uske naam se

Kishan - mujh se itni nafrat kyu

Nitin - nahi bardasht hoti thi mujh se tumhari nazdeekiyan woh meri mangater hai par uske hotho pe har waqt tumhara naam hota aur to aur apne hatho se khilati hai yahan tak ki tumhare sath hi ghumtu firti hai yeh sab mujh se bardasht nahi hota

Esha - esi bhi kya aag lagi thi tumhe jo esa kiya aur tum mere mangater the aaj se aur abhi se main tum se apna rishta todti hu

Uske baad Esha ne apni ungli se ring nikal ke Nitin ke chehre pe mari aur fir Kishan se boli

Esha - Kishan kya yeh vahi ladka hai jise tumne mujhe han bolne ko kaha tha? Kya yeh vahi ladka hai jiski tum us waqt support kar rahe the? dekho aaj isne khud hi dosti naam ke rishtey ko badnam kar diya isse kaho ki yeh abi ke abi meri akhon se door ho jaye


Pihu ne age badh ke Esha ko sambhala fir Kishan Mahi ki aur badha aur usse bola

(Kahani Kishan ki jubani)

Main Mahi ke pass pohancha aur usse bola

Main - Mahi har bar shal kapat kam nahi ata kabhi kabhi such se sab kuch mil jata hai tum apne iss kam ke liye ek dal dal mein fasne wali thi jisse bahar nikalne ka koi rasta nahi hai aaj tum sab ko azaadi mil gayi aur tum ko ab koi ulta seedha kam karne ki jarurat nahi hai

Fir main Thakur Arun aur Nitin se bola

Main - tum teeno zindgi mein koi ulta seedha kaam mat karna nahi to anzam mout hoga

Itna bol ke main Pihu Di Rity Di aur Esha ko leke gaon se nikal pada apne city ki taraf

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Sorry for late

superb update

yeh arun aur nitin isliye chhoda kyoki krishan unhe kabhi apna dost manta tha
ya phir is liye ki wo dono baad me sudhar jayenge

but most of time palatwar hota hai