Fantasy EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA (COMPLETE)

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Good morning all members of this site
Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha
20-25 day hospital me Raha
Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se
14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri
burn(jalne Ka) case tha
ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya

But ab Mai recover ho Gaya Hu and Ek story start Karne Bala Hu
Phir socha dusra thread Q start Karu
Isiliye ishi thread ke name ko change Kar new story start Kar Raha Hu
And Uske complete hone ke baad

[{RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete)} {RAJ - VIRAJ --- Two In One (Mystery Of The Snow Mountain Of Himlistan)}]
story ko start karunga

 

[sorbobhuk]

Old update complete ho gaya hai
Aage aage se new update aaenge
Story 2 timeline rahi hai
ek daivik and bhartendu ki to dusri
Raj ki

Daivik and bhartendu ke timeline me Raj ki Umar 20 saal hai
vahi
Raj ke timeline me Daivik and bhartendu ki umar 16 saal

next update routine se aayenge

Tuesday
Thursday
Saturday

Waiting Bhai

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Res

 

[Siraj Patel]

Thread closed as per Thread Starter's request.

 

[Aakash.]

Hello Everyone
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[Naik]

Good morning all members of this site
Kuch time pahle Mera Ek accident ho gaya tha
20-25 day hospital me Raha
Or yakin maniye us 25 day me se
14-15 day MERI jindgi nark se bhi buri gujri
burn(jalne Ka) case tha
ANd us 14-15 Maine mobile kya Kuch bhi chhij Ka use nahi Kiya

But ab Mai recover ho Gaya Hu and Ek story start Karne Bala Hu
Phir socha dusra thread Q start Karu
Isiliye ishi thread ke name ko change Kar new story start Kar Raha Hu
And Uske complete hone ke baad

[{RAJ - VIRAJ (Hero/Devil - Two In One) (Complete)} {RAJ - VIRAJ --- Two In One (Mystery Of The Snow Mountain Of Himlistan)}]
story ko start karunga

Ok bhai intizar h aur rehega

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

Condition of my hand

 

[Ristrcted]

Condition of my hand

aaram karo kar kya rahe ho yaha pe...
cream lagao haathon mein theek ho jaayega....apply haldi and chandan also...aur multani mitti bhi usse bhi aaram milta hai

 

[Naik]

Condition of my hand

Aram kerye bhai jab tak ek dam se theek na ho jaye likhne ki zaroorat nahi h pehle sehet fir sab kuch

 

[DAIVIK-RAJ]

EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGA​

Hello.....ha ma? Are priya ke liye kaisa dress loon? Mujhe to kuchnsamajh mein nahin aa
raha hain?
...hello? Hello? Lo line kat gaya...ab not reachable aa raha hai..Ab main bahen ke liye konsa
dress loo? Usko phone karke pooch bhi nahi sakta varna surprise ka maza kharap ho
jayega..
Ronit ek 23 saal ka amir ladka hai. Uske papa bahut bare business man hai. Uski maa
housewife hai. Uska ek choti bahem hai jo 10th main hain aur ek bara vai jo papa ke office
mein join kia hai. Lekin Ronit ek mast msula larka hai. Use ghumna firna Doston ke sath
time pass karne mein maza ata hai. Lekin use koi bad habbit nahi hai. Otne bare gharke
larka hote hue bhi usne aaj tak bahi drinks ki aur nahi smoking. Aaj woh shopping karne aya
hai kyunki kal uske bahen ki birthday hai. Harvsaal uski Maa aati hai par kuch kaam ki wajah
se woh nahi aa payi, unhone Ronit ko bheja. Yajan Akey Ronit phass gaya. Kya kharide gaa?
Use larkion ke kapron ke mamle mein kuch nahi pata. Koi Idea nahin hain. Kyun ki usko Aaj
tak kabhi koi ladki ki dress kharidne ki zaruraat hi nahi pari. Woh yahi sochte hue agey ja
raha tha, thora aapne khayalo mein khoya hua tha... tabhi......
Ouch..... oh sorry... sorry... I am extremely sorry.
Ek ladki se takra jata hai aur us ladki ke haat se kapre gir jate hai.
Ronit: oh.!! I am extremely sorry madam...
ladki: No..no..its okay. Maine dekha ke aap kapro ko chiloose karne ko lekar thoda problem
mein thei.
Ronit apna sar khujata hai : yah.... actually mujhe koi experience nahi hai ladkiyon ke liye
kapre kharidne ka toh I am littl bit confused
Ladki: kiske liye kharid rahe hai? Girlfriend?
Ronit: are.. nahin.. nahi... meri bahen.. uska kaal janamdin hai to maa ne kahan ke main
kharid ke aau.
Ladki: oh accha.. its okay.
Ronit us ladki ko hi dekh raha tha. Kitna khubsurat larki thi. Lambe baal, saree mein kitni
khubsurat lag rahi hai. Tabhi Ronit ko ek idea ata hai. Woh ladki se poiochta hai..
Ronit: excuse me... aap kya meri madat kar sakte hain? Aap ek ladki hai to mujhe kaisi dress
leni chahiye woh suggests kar sakti hai?
Ladki : oh... ummmm... ok. Main bhi saree lene ayi hu to aapko bhi help kar dungi.
Ronit: thank you... thank you very much miss....
Ladki: Diya.... mera naam Diya hai.
Ronit : oh Diya... nice name. Thank you.
Dono girls section mein jate hai aur Diya Ronit ko help karne lagti hai dress select karne
mein. Par Ronit Diiya ko hi dekhe jaa rahatha. Kitna haseen chehra kitni pyari aankhen, Kitni
pyari aankhen hai aankhon se chhalakta pyar, Kudrat ne banaya ho ga phursat se tujhe mere
yaar.
Diya: hello...kahan kho gaye?
Ronit : haan? Nahin main thora soch raha tha.
Diya: dekho.... mujhe lagta hai tumhe tumhe apni bahen ke liye saree leni chahiye.
Ronit: saree??? Maine aaj tak usko saree mein nahin dekha. She never wears a saree. Kabhi
nahin.
Diya: Isi liye bol rahi hoon. Usko saree gift karo aur use humare cultures ke baarein mein
batao. Use bolo ke skirts, tops, aise kapre to woh kabhibhi pahen sakti hai. Par jo khubsurti
saree mein khilti haibwoh aur kisi dress mein nahin khilti. I am telling you.. usko yeh saree
do aur pehenne ko bolo. I am sure woh bahut khubsurat dikhegi.
Ronit maan leta hai aur saree le leta hai bahen ke liye. Ronit diya ko thanks kehke chala ata
hai bahar. Mall ke neeche hi restaurant hai. Ronit wahi baith ke kha rahatha aur bahar dekh
rahatha. Tabhi thori der mein use bahar Diya dikhti hai. Par Diya kuch ajeeb si lag rahi thi.
Woh kuch soch te hue chal rahi thi. Ronit ko kuch garbar lagi. Woh bahar aya. Diya tab bhi
waise hi thi aur bahar road ki taraf jaa rahi thi. Ronit ko kuch kharab sa feel hua use laga
Diya koi problem mein hai woh Diya ke peeche aa raha tha. Tabhi woh dekha Diya road cross
karne jaa rahi hai par kahin khoyi hui hai. Aur ek bus speed se aa raha hai. Ronit daurke Diya
ke paas gaya aur Diya ka haat pakarke apne taraf khicha. Diya uske baahon mein gir gayi aur
tabhi bus speed se diya ke baju se nikal gaya.
Ronit: Are u okay? Tumhe dikhai nahi de raha tha ke bus aa rahi hai?
Diya: haa... woh.. main... kahin kho gayi thi.
Ronit: raste pe aise kahin aur khoye hue chalna nahin chahiye. Agar main nahin ata ti abhi
kuch ho sakta tha.
Diya: kya hota.... jo hota..... bus ho jata. Khair thanks.. ekbr maine tumhari madat ki ekbar
tumne meri. 50-50.
Okey main chalti hu.
Ronit : ruko... main bike laya hu. Main tumhe chor deta hoon. Varna phirse tum aise chalne
na lag jao.
Diya mana karti hai par Ronit kuch nahin sunta. Woh bike se use lift deta hai. Woh thori dur
jakey rukne ko bolti hai. Ronit dekhta hai woh ek school hai
Ronit : yeh to ek bacchoka school hai.
Diya: haan main school mein parati hu. Aur yahin paas mein rehti hu. Ok bye and thanks.
Ronit: haa... bye.
Ronit chala ata hai. Woh angle din apni bahen priya ko woh saree gift karta hai aur
surprisingly priya ko saree pasand aa jata hai.
Priya Ronit ki maa ko shaq hota hai. Woh akeley mein Ronit ko poochti hai ke yeh uska
choice tha ya kisine help ki thi. Ronit sab sach bol deta hai. Jo agle din hua tha. Priya woh
saree pahen ke ati hai to sab hairan. Kya khubsurat lag rahi thi woh saree mein.
Usi din Ronit facebook kar taha tha. Diya ke naam se. And fortubately after some time use
diya ka id mil jata hai. Lekin wahan bhi Diya hi likha tha. Adress wahi school ka tha. Ronit
use friend request bhejti hai. Agle din subah woh jab FB check kar raha tha to dekhta hai
Diya ne uska request accept kia hai. Phir kya? Dono mein baat shuru ho jata hai. Baat dosti
tak pahuch jata hai. Dono ek doosre ke acche dost ban jatein hain. Lekin Ronit ke liye yeh
rishta dosti se zyada tha. Aise hi ekdin woh milke baat kar rahe thei tabhi Ronit sari himmat
jutake Diya ko achanak propose kar deta hai. Lekin yeh sunke Diya ka chehre ki haasee
gayab ho jati hain.
Diya: i am sorry Ronit....lekin hum sirf dost hai. Maine tumko ek dost ki tarah dekha hai.
Ronit: to kya do dost pyar nahi kar sakte?
Diya: kyun nahin kar sakte. Lekin... mai.. main..Diya thori der chup rehti hai aur phir bolti hai:
mera boyfriend hai
Ronit: boyfriend? Tumne kabhi nahin bataya uske barein mein.
Diya: woh.... woh.. usliye kyunki mera usse jhagra ho gaya tha. Main usse baat nahin kar rahi
thi but i love him.
Ronit ko dukh hota hai. Par woh apna dukh under chupake casual hokey kehta hai : its its
okay Diya... koi baat nahin... actually i am sorry mujhe yeh sab nahin karna chahiye tha.
Ronit Diya se maafi mange chala ata hai ghar. Use rona ata hai. Uske liye woh pehla pyar tha.
Aur pehla pyar hi toot gaya. Woh thore din Dia se nahin milta. Woh yeh sab baat apne best
friend sapna ko batata hai. Sapna use dilasa deti hai aur Diya ka photo dekhna chahti hai.
Ronit apne gallary Diya ka photo nikal ke sapna ko dikha ta hai. Diya ka photo dekh kar sapna
chowk jati hai.
Sapna: Dia? Are ise to main janti hu. Yeh school meun parati hai. Aur gareeb hain isliye
school ke peeche ek Anath ashram hain wahin rehti hai. Iska koi nahin hai. Mera bhaai ka
beta yahin parta hai. Aur mera ek dost wahin pe parati hai. Woh mujhe Diya ke barein mein
boli thi ke yeh bahut akeli hai. Koi nahin hai iska. Ma baap nahin aur koi boyfriend bhi nahin
hai. Yeh sirf school mein bacchon ko parati hai aur ashram mein rehti hai.
Ronit: kya !! are you sure?
Sapna: pakka Ronit maine apne us dost se kal hi baat ki.. toh usne bola ki Diya ab khoi hui
rehti hai. Kabhi kabhi ro deti hai. I think she also loves you. To fir usne aisa kyun kahan uska
bf hai?
Ronit: yeh main bhi janna chahta hu. Main kal usse ueh sab janke hi rahunga. Use batana
parega ki usne jhoot kyun bola?
Ronit agle din Diya se milta hai. Usse sidha sidha poochta hai ke usne jhoot kyun bola?
Ronit: bolo Diya aisa tumne kyun kia? Main tumse itna pyar karta hu aur tumne mujhse jhoot
bola ke tumhara bf hai jabki tumhara koi bhi bf nahin hai. Tum akeli ho. Kya tumhe lagta hai
main badmash larka hoon jo tumse pyar ka natak karke tumhe chor dega.
Diya ke aakh mein asoo tha. Woh boli: itne din tumse milke itna to main jaan gayi hu ke tum
ek bahut acche larke ho. Woh larki bahut khush hogi jo tumhari patni banegi.
Ronit : main to chahta tha ke woh larki tum bano. Lekin tumne mujhse jhoot bola. Yeh tumne
thik nahi kia. Kya main pasand nahi tha? Kya tumhe yeh laga ke mere mom dad tumhe
pasand nahin karenge? Woh bahur acche log hai. Woh amir garib mein farak nahi karte. Tum
gareeb ho aur anath in sab baaton se mujge koi farak nahim parta. Aur nahin mere parents
ko parta hai. Meri khushi me hi unki khushi hai.
Priya hasti hai aur bolti hai: main.....gareeb?... Main anath? Ha....ha...ha...haaan ek tarike se
sahi hi hai. Main hu aamir hokar bhi gareeb, main hoon ma baap hote hue bhi Anath. Tum
saahi ho.
Ronit: kya? Main samjha nahin. Agar tum gareeb nahin hon aur tumhari papa mummy hai to
aise jagah kyun rehti ho. Mujhe bhi laga tha tum gareeb nahi ho.. tun aamir ghar ki lagti ho.
To aise kyun rehti ho? Apne pariwar ke sath kyun nahin rehti? Aur mujhse jhoot kyun boli?
Bolo Diya?
Dia kuch nahin kehti. Bas muh ghmakar khari rehti hai.
Ronit uske paas jakar usko pakar ke ghumati hai aur poochti hai: cmon....bolo... aaj tumhe
batana hi parega. Bolo kyun jhoot bola....mera dil kuun tora? Bolo.... bolo...
B O L O........
BECAUSE I WAS banged.....Diya chillake bol uthti hai.
Diya: tumhe janna tha na ke maine tumhe kyun jhoit bola? Yahi hai karaan. Mera bang hua
hai aur wobhi tab jab main 17 saal ki thi.
Diya apna past batane lagti hai.
Diya: main bahut bare ghar ki larki hoon. Mere papa ke pas bahut paise the. Mummy bhi har
roz party karne mein busy tehte the. Har roz unme jhagra hota tha. Aise hi jhagre ke samay
mujhe pata chala ke woh actually ek larka chahete the. Par main paida ho gayi. Isi liye mom
dad mujhse pyaar to dur thik se baat bhi nahin karte thei. Ekdin unke beech Talaak ho gaya.
Lekin sawal yeh tha main kiske saath rehene wala tha. You know what Ronit? Sabse maze ki
baat? Un dono mese koi bhi mujhe apne saath rakhna nahin chahte thei. Unhone mujhe ek
boarding mein daal dia. Wahan main rehne laga. Par bahut din woh mujhse milne bhi nahi
aye. Ekdin main toilet mein gayi thi. Mujhe nahin pata tha ke wajhan ka ek guard mujhpe
gandi nazar se dekhta tha. Use usdin mauka mil gaya aur woh toilet mein akar darwaza
under se bandh kar diya aur phir...........................
Mujhe nasht karke woh bhaag gaya. Main apni dad ko phone kia toh pata chala ke woh
doosri shaadi kar liye hain aur woh mujhse koi rishta nahin rakhna. Nahin in saab mamle
mein fasna chahta hain. Maine mummy ko phone kia to unhone ne bhi mujhse baat karne se
mana kar dia. Uske life mein bhi koi aa gaya tha. Dono ne mujhse rishta tor chuke the. Usdin
woh dono bhi mere liye marr gaye. Shayad main bhibunke liye marr chuki thi. Main boarding
se bhaag gayi. Mujhe aab jeena koi umeed nahi dikh rahi thi. Main maarne ke liye train ke
samne jaa rahi thi tabhi ek aurat akey mujhe khich liya aur bachaa liya. Woh ek nun thi
church ki. Unhone hi mujhe us school mein le gayi. Mujhe rehne ko ghar dia. Main wahin
parne lagi, baree hone lagi aur ekdin wahin chote chote bacchoko parane lagi. Yahi thi meri
kahaani Ronit. Main kaise tumko apni is life se jorke tumko dukh de sakti thi. Main pure
nahin rahi Ronit. Mujhme daag la gaya hain. Yeh daag kabhi nahin mit sakta. Mera naam hi
Diya hai par yeh Diya kab ka bujh chuka hai jo ab jaal nahi sakta. Aisi past wali larki se koi bhi
pyar nahin karna chahega. Isi liye maine tumse jhoot boli ke mera BF hai. Abhi bhi tumhe
mujhse pyar hai? Nahin Ronit mujh jaisi larki se yah to log nafraat karte hai ya fir daya
dikhate hai. Mujhe daya ki bheekh nahin chahiye kisise. Chale jao Ronit..... main hamesha
chahungi ke tum khush rahon aur tumhari shaadi jisse bhi ho woh tumse bahut pyaar karein.
Chale jao.
Diya dekhti hai Ronit wahan se bike lekar chala jata hai. Diya ke aankh mein asoo thei. Kyun
ki wo bhi Ronit se bahut pyaar karti thi. Bahut. Lekin woh Ronit se apni life jorke, ya fir jhoot
ke sahare nahin tehna chahti thi. Woh apne kamre mein akey khoob roti hai. Phir raat ho jati
hai.
Agle din woh school ki class mein ate hi surprised ho jati hai. Poora class flower se bhara
hua tha. Aur sare bacche diya ke under aate hi chilla uthte hai. Diya dekhti hai un baccho ke
saath Ronit bhi khara hai. Woh black board ke taraf ishara karta hai. Diya bord ki taraf dekhti
hai. Wahan likha tha - WILL YOU MARRY ME?
Diya ke aankh mein asoo aa jata hai.
Ronit uske paas akey bolta hain? Tumne kya socha tumhara past kanke main tumse dur
bhaag jaunga? Maine tumse saccha pyaar kia hai. Aur kisne kahaan tum apavitra ho gayi?
Kisika sharir pavitra ya apavitra nahin hota.....uska soch pavitra ya apavitra hota hain. Tum
aaj bhi utni hi pavitra ho. Isi liye maibe yeh lavitra jagah chuna tumko apni dil ki baat batane
ke liye. Tumne mujhse kahan tha kaal ke ke tum hamesha chahogi ke mera shaadi jisse bhi
hogi woh mujhse bahut pyaar karegi. Lekin main chahta hoon woh larki tumhi ho. Main
aapna sari zindagi tunhare saath bitana chahta hoon. Mujge tumhari past se nahin tumhara
present chahiye aur future bhi. Will you marry me?
Diya ke aakh mein asoon the. Par aaj pehlibaar woh aansoo khushi ke thei. Woh haa kehti
hai. Aur Ronit usko ek angooti pehna deta hai. Dono ek dusre ko hug karye hain. Sare bacche
khushi se chilla utjte hai. Woh nun jo Doya ko yahan le ayi thi woh Ronit ki haar baat suni thi.
Uske aankh me bhi asoo thei. Woh sochti hai : aaj bhi acche log hote hai jo kisike past se use
judge nahin karte balki unke dukh ko bhulake unke chehre pe hasi lane ka kaam karte hai.
Haan.....aaj bhi acche log janam leye hai.
Dono ek dusre ko hug kar rahe thei. Bahar kaahin radio baaj raha tha. Jispe ek gaana baaj
rahat tha- EK LADKI KO DEKHA TO AISA LAGAA............

The End

Story written by BABAN​

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