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Dhanyawad jiBahut badhiya update... Lag raha hai kahani apne ant ke aur badh rahe hai
Bahut bahut dhanyawad jiNice update bt dhuk bhi ho raha hai, muje lagta he hum iss story ka last portion pe a chuka hai.btt kuch character to abhi bi baki hai jiske sath tusar ka sex scene nehi aiya,kai hum o dekh paunga yaa story bech mai hi finish ho jaiga?
Bahut bahut dhanyawad jiSuper se bhi uper update
Gajab update h madam ji
Behad shandar jandar or khubsurat update waiting for next
Lajawab jandar sandar jabrdast jitni tarif kro Kam hai kaise itna soch leti ho riya singh ji kya gjb update hai agle ka intezar rhega
Shandar update bro
Chalo aakhirkaar Varsha darling aur hero Tushar ki dosti ho hi gayi aur sab kuch sort out bhi kar liya but ye Seema , Deepa ,Ruchi , Sachin ,Kapil aur Anjali kidnapped ho gaye hai aur sath me Sumit bhi jo ki Anjali ki ab tak bahut madad kar chuka hai but ye acha hua Ki hero ko adesh ki madad mil gayi aur uske hath Kamal aur Komal lag gaye hai aur Varsha ka full support hai hi dekhte hero hi ye baher ya koi aur hai
Hii ..Riya Darling u r give a fabulous update.
Fight seen achi honi chahiye .aur zyada intezar mat karwana ek ichha hai ki tushar soniya ko Pele BDSM seen jaisa suresh ki samne tab pura hoga badla ..komal ka bhi kuch intezam kariye bahot udd rahiye Hawa me..still waiting for new one.
Awesome Riya ji kya update Diya hai
Is satranj k khel me pyado ka khel suru ho chuka hai. Kon kis ko mat dega ab maja ayega. Hogi pyar ki jeet ..
Madam, aap yo kabhi meri story par nazan bhi nahi daalti ho..beginning mein just ek comment..then nothing else..hope you'll find time to visit my story. Look forward to your comments there. Thanks.
riya singh
Nice update
Bahut hi jabardast update, ab aayega mja
Zabardast...tushar ki entry pe dhamaal hoga...lekin kuch miss ho raha hai shayad...kyuki Soniya jarur kuch kand karegi
Awesome update riya singh jiii
Jabardast update riya singh jii
Suresh chopda ne tou sabko pakad liya hai ,ab bas Tushar aur uske papa kaha hai ,aur Tushar kya kerta hai ,kyu na Tushar kamal aur komal ko accha sabak sikha de Suresh chopda ke samne hi...
mast update
tushar ki puri family ek saath dushmano ke kabje me aa gayi hai
saare dushman bhi ek tarah se ml gaye hai
ab bache hai tushar aur uske papa ye dono kya kamal karte hai ye dekhne wali baat hogi kaise unka samna karte hai
ek plus point hai ki tushar ke paas kama komal hai saath hi alka aur varsha bhi uske saath hai
udhar anita aur rinky bhi
par ab sabse pehla kaam hai anjali aur family ke bhai behno ko azad karna
kaise karega ye tushar dekhne layak hoga
agla update action lekar ayega ye to pakka hai
keep going
Wah khatrnak update riya jii
Yhi to aapki dariyadili itni achhi story likh kar bhi choti writer bta rhi hai
Wah kya seen hai
Nazara aaane wala hai
Tushar ki entry ho gyi jaise kisi film ke hero ki hoti h
Jiski film ke baare me sb jante hain ki pr wait krte h ab aaya hero ab aaya hero
Or aa gya wo
Or syd sath me rajesh bhi
Pr khair
Ab lgta h rajesh ki puri zindagi ke jakhm ko marham milega jo uske or uske parivaar ne sahe hain
Aur ye dono ladkiyan kapil sachin ke sath kon hain or inke baare me bhi anjali ko pta h kya?
kya story me sb acha hone wala h?
Kahani apne antim padav par pohoch rhi h kya?
बहुत ही शानदार और धांसू अपडेट
Ab aaya hai asli Action story me
Ab aayga mja jb aamna samna hoga TUSHAR ka sbse
Aapki first story h yeh aap bhi kisi se kam nhi h
Sach bola h bhai ne aap current time pr best writer ho is forum pr
Aapko sbse alg banata h apka regular update dena apne readers se jude rhna h yeh bhi khas h
Funtastic update
बहुत ही शानदार जबरदस्त अपडेट रिया जी
What a fantastic story and writing
नमन है आपकी लेखनी को.....
Superb...
आपकी स्टोरी ने दिल जीत लिया ❤❤❤
Bahut badhiya update... Lag raha hai kahani apne ant ke aur badh rahe hai
Nice update bt dhuk bhi ho raha hai, muje lagta he hum iss story ka last portion pe a chuka hai.btt kuch character to abhi bi baki hai jiske sath tusar ka sex scene nehi aiya,kai hum o dekh paunga yaa story bech mai hi finish ho jaiga?
Bahut bahut dhanyawad aap sabhi friends ka,Super se bhi uper update
No issues Madam. I understand..main bhi abhi story likh raha hoon...to mera bhi kuch aisa hi situation hain...sochta rehta hoon..ki story ko kaise aage badhaya jaaye taki logon ko pasand aaye. (Whether it happens or not, I have no idea....but that's fine. No issues for me).Mass ji maaf karna time nhi nikal pai is story ko likhne me pura dhayan isi me laga rheta h akeli hoti hu to bas sochti rheti hu ki kahani kis disha me jayegi,
Main jab koi story padhti hu to pure dil se padhti hu pura aanand leti hu uska