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Main yaha kahani likhni aur apna enjoyment karne aai hu ye sab karne nhi dear, to wahi mango jo yaha ke niyam me hTu apni pic send karo nangi ho k
Main yaha kahani likhni aur apna enjoyment karne aai hu ye sab karne nhi dear, to wahi mango jo yaha ke niyam me hTu apni pic send karo nangi ho k
Wow awesome update! Rocking![]()
Agla update kb ayega madam
Waiting for next update
No issues Madam. I understand..main bhi abhi story likh raha hoon...to mera bhi kuch aisa hi situation hain...sochta rehta hoon..ki story ko kaise aage badhaya jaaye taki logon ko pasand aaye. (Whether it happens or not, I have no idea....but that's fine. No issues for me).
Good Luck and look forward to the updates. One thing I like about you...
Aap consistently updates dete ho jo bahut kam writers kar paate hain. So, Hearty Congratulations for that. Keep going.
riya singh
Gajab yar riya tumhare hath chumne man kr raha hai
Awesome riya ji waiting for next update jaldi se agla dhamakedar update de do
Tnx.sunk accha laga kahani abhi baki hai,or suresh bhi magar mach hai etne ahsanise nehi har manega.
Shandar update
Besbri se INTJAAARRR hai is dhamake ka
Rocking Update![]()
Your previous story was majorly sex orientated, jisme kahani ka focus hi sex aur adultery thi.
Lekin iss kahani me love,sex, action, suspense, thrill, betrayal, emotion sab hai that's why readers liking it.
Dusri baat yahan jyadatar readers male hai, who like the kind of harem fantasy stories, jahan ek main hero kai females ke sath relation rkhta hai. So usually they don't like the opposite of that. Pichli story maine puri to nahi padhi lekin usme aisa hi tha.
Like if you do the same in this ki important female character jaise Anjali, Deepa, Richa, Seema kisi aur ke sath sex me involve Hui then you can lose some audience. Halaki yahan har tarah ke readers hai.
It's just my silly observation, not any suggestion or something else. Wrote like to want to write. You've gained audience by your hardwork.
Agle update ke pratiksha me
Nice update
Nice update
Kahani to achi ha pr asa na ho ke writer bech me bagggg jaye.
Next update kab aye ga
Super
Bahut hi jabardast update, very interesting twist...![]()
AJ update Dena please Riya ji
Ye kya tha kahani khatam karne ka irada hai kya? Mujhe laga tha thoda aur time lagega par idhar to sab aamne samne milne ko ready hai, ab apne Hero ki entry hogi,
Yash aur Ajay se bachne ke liye Anita aur uski beti hai
Aur idhar Suresh se bachne ke liye Kamal aur Komal hai,
Dhayan me to nahi hai par pichle kuch update me shayad kahin padha tha maine ki Suresh ne kaha tha 14 din baad hi pata chalega, shayad wo 14 din ka suspense yahi tha ki Anjali ka bday hai us din, aur sare kand usi din hone ho
Yahan pe shayad Soham Soniya ko call karke batane gaya hoga, uske baad Soniya ki bhi fati hogi ye jaan ke Tushar kaun hai
Aur yahan jab Sohan ko pata chalega Komal aur Kamal Tushar ke pass hai tab uski bhi gand fati hogi, jisse wo panic hua
Ye do ladki kaun hai? Kahin ye bhi to inke pariwar se related to nahi? Ya koi suspense isme bhi hai?
Mind-blowing update dude, jitna tareef karun wo kam padegi apke liye, ab bahut hi besabri se agle update ka intejar hai plz ho sake to jaldi dena
Update please
Ab kahani bahot majedar ho gai he
Ab bardast ke bahar he jaldi update do Riya jaan
Nxt update kb aayega riya ji
Hello Friends
Maine bi story likhna suru ki hai plz meri story PE bi thoda najar daleyega or btayga kaise hai
Agar koi glti ho to maaf kr dijyega mai new ho is mamle me
Thanku Friends
Link
https://xforum.live/threads/kaise-mujhe-pyar-hua-family.129907/post-8594662
When to expect the most awaited update
Jabardast update diya hai apne
Kya kahani he yar gjb maja a gaya
lage raho ....great going meri jaan ..
achchi chal rahi he or age badhanaa ese essehi khatm mat karna ....
Fabulous update as usual. Waiting for blockbuster update
Waiting for update
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Bahut bahut dhanyawad jiTu apni pic send karo nangi ho k
Ok Riya ji intjar rahegaAaj 10 baje Tak aa jayega
bas de rhi hu jiWaiting for next update
bas de rhi hu dearUpdate kab tak aayega Riya g waiting for next update![]()
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bas de rhi huOk Riya ji intjar rahega