Romance EK MUTTHI AASMAN(short story)
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Ye kya hua shadi postpone. 
Madhu se inspire hoke to amit ne boxing start ki thi abb vo hi amit ke kabil na rahi 
Finally Amit aur Rishabh ka match hoga. Ek awesome si fight ki expectation hai. Mere ko lagta hai ki Rishabh and Edward ko pata hi tha that one day Amit will challenge them for their titles. Rishabh ke liye vo din abhi hai and edward ke liye vo din first update mein tha and jab ye flashback khtm hoga tab aayega.
Great update Swaraj bhai.
Waiting for more
Madhu se inspire hoke to amit ne boxing start ki thi abb vo hi amit ke kabil na rahi Finally Amit aur Rishabh ka match hoga. Ek awesome si fight ki expectation hai. Mere ko lagta hai ki Rishabh and Edward ko pata hi tha that one day Amit will challenge them for their titles. Rishabh ke liye vo din abhi hai and edward ke liye vo din first update mein tha and jab ye flashback khtm hoga tab aayega.
Great update Swaraj bhai.
Waiting for more
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Rishabh sachmuch ek national boxer the
Aur amit ko rishabh ke haath ka swad Jald pata chal raha tha
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Fir se amit ka punch bekar gaya. Aur lagatar miss kar raha hai amit
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Fir se miss. Rishabh ki speed aur agility top class boxer ki hai
Amit ne ek jhalak stands ki aur dekha
Uske mummy papa aaj apne bete ko cheer karne aaye hai
Aaj finals hai aur amit ko kisi bhi tarah medals jeetna hai
DHAMMMMMMMMMMNNNMMMMMNN
Ekdum pet par aur amit ki ki aankhen bahar a gayi
Punch nahi tha. Ye kisi ne hayhouda maar diya tha amit ke pet par
THAPPP
Jaise taise next punch block kiya amit ne.us lunch ke baad khada hona mushkil ho raha tha
Amit ke pair kaamp rahe the
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
is baar ye punch amit ne maara. Lekin shayad rishabh par koi asar hi nahi hua. Koun si mitti se bana hai ye boxer
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Bacha amit. Kuch plan kuch strategy kuch luck
Jaise taise khada tha ring me amit
Lekin rishabh ko kaise bhi harana hai lekin kaise??
THAP THAP DHAMMMMMMMNMMNNN
Vaar ka koi Kaat nahi hai rishabh ke Paas lekin......
Rishab jeet ke kareeb pohuncha raha hai, agar rishabh jeet gaya to......
Madhu uski nahi ho payegi uske Saare sapno ka kya
DHAPPPPPPPPPP
Ek aur Vaar aur amit door corner me Chala gaya
Jo karna hai isi round me karna hoga,har Waqt doosro ki nakal karne ke chakkar me khud kabhi apne style par dhyan nahi diya.....
Apna khud ka style????
Amit achanak excited ho gaya aur Rishab bhi halka sa hairan hua ise dekhkar. Rishab ne amit ke poore boxing career ko apne Saamne hote hue dekha hai
Amit ab Rishab ke Saamne khud aaya
DHAPPPPPPPPP
Rishab ka fir se Vaar laga
Lekin.....
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Amit special uppercut
Rishab halka sa hadbadaya aur amit ne koi mauka nahi choda
DHAMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNN
Ek punch seedha seene me
Rishab fir bhi jaise taise khada raha. Na pairon ke movement padh pa raha tha Rishab aur na hi uske style ko
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Is baar poori tarah se punch Rishab ke jabse par pada
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
kaise ye......
Rishab sochta raha lekin uske bas me ab kuch nahi tha zameen me girne se pehle hairaani se dekhne laga amit ko
DHAPPPP
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
fir se knockout se haraya amit ne. Lekin is baar Rishab ko haraya
Mr and Mrs surana khushi se jhoom uthe aur mrs surana ne apne rishtedaro ko phone karna shuru kar diya
Sab ko tv par channel tune karne ko Keh rahi thi wo
Madhu, Mr Patrick aur Baaki koi team member nahi aaye the aaj
Kyunki amit jis nami hirami gym me tha unhone mana kar diya tha kisi ko bhi ye match attend karne ko
Ye gym professional zyada hai emotional kam
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DO MAHINE BAAD
"congrats Rishab bhaiyya and mili, pata hi nahi chala ki aap logo ne kab ek doosre ko pasand kiya aur Shaadi bhi karne ja rahe ho" haste hue amit ne coffee mug table par rakha
Ye sunte hi Rishab aur mili dono has pade
"yani tu pro boxing karega??" Rishab bola
"Haan Rishab bhaiyya, politics se bhara hua hai poora system, waise bhi edward se ek baar ladna chahta hoon" amit bola
"amit madhu ne kuch kaha is maamle me" mili ne poocha
"madhu se mera contact nahi hua hai mili, wo apne career me busy hai. Suna hai kanika ne use ek top class trainer se milaya hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai" amit bola
"thik hai amit whatever the decision you take. We are with you bro" Rishab ne kandhe par haath milate hue bola
Amit kuch bola nahi chupchaap kuch sochne laga
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PRESENT DAY USA
"oye bhen ji hum a gaye" sardarji ke awaz se wo ladki past se present me a gayi
"stadium a gaye hai madam ji" sardarji ne fir kaha
Hadbadakar us ladki ne paise nikalne ke liye purse rakha to sardarji ne rok liya
"aap pehle jao, pasie udaae rahe aaj. Jaldi jaiye" sardarji bole to wo ladki cab ka darwaza khol Bhaag gayi
"aapke aankhon ka Dard poore raaste me dikh raha tha bhen ji, wahe guru aapko aapki manzil tak le jaye" bol sardarji bhi stadium ki aur badh gaye
"hey lady hey" security guards ne bhagti hui ladki ko rokne ke liye aage badhe to us ladki ne apna ticket fenk diya unki aur stadium ke Ander a gayi jaise taise
"I DON'T THINK BOTH THE BOXERS CAN CONTINUE LIKE THAT, THIS MATCH NEEDS TO STOP" commentary chal rahi thi
"AMIT SURANA" us ladki ne apne bad se ek medal nikala aur use hawa me uthaya
Asian games gold medallist madhu....
Edward aur amit dono ne apna punch hawa me uthaya
Fark sirf itna tha ki amit ne apni aankhen band kar di thi kyunki usme aansu tham nahi rahe the
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Edward ne shayad pehli baar miss kiya
DHAMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
jabde par pada punch aur Edward neeche gir gaya finally
Amit bhi ladkhadaya lekin corner ko pakadkar jaise taise khada raha
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
countdown poora hua aur Edward ko harakar pehli baar kisi Indian ne heavyweight championship jeeta tha
Saath me 1 million dollars
Lekin amit zameen par baith gaya aur madhu seedha ring me gayi aur
MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"mujhse...... Shaadi........ Karogi ma madhu" amit bola to madhu ne rote hue gale laga liya amit ko
Stadium fat pada taaliyon ki awaz se
Edward ne haath milaya aur apni team ke Saath ring ke bahar nikal gaha
Ek lambi Saans li usne
Ye to ek din hona hi tha, usse behtar lada wo chashma pehenne wala ladka.....
Edward has pada. Patrick sir ne aakhirkar ek fighter taiyyar kar hi liya
Amit se gale milkar jaate Waqt sabko haathon se wave karte hue chala gaya
Amit ne apne haathon se heavyweight title ko hawa me apne haathon se uthakar dikhaya aur taaliyon se poora stadium bhar gaya
Madhu aur amit ko door se ek ladka mike liye dikhai diya jo apna muh chupa raha tha
"nikhil??" madhu ne bas itna bola ki nikhil muh chupakar Bhaag gaya
Apna career khatam hota dekh shayad reporter banna sahi samjha tha nikhil
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"dekha mai na kehti thi papa jitenge pehle" choti si ladki boli
"kahan mummy pehle jeet gayi dekha nahi tune" chota sa ladka hairaan hokar bola
"nahi papa pehle jeet gaye"
"nahi mummy"
"papa"
"mummy"
Tabhi darwaza khula aur amit aur madhu ek Saath Ander aaye
"Are Baap re kya ho raha hai, tum log soye nahi?? Chalo abhi ke abhi, sleeping time now" madhu ne hukm diya
Dono man maarkar chale gaye
Amit aur madhu ne tv par dekha unka purana waqt
Dono muskura uthe.
Dono ne apni manzil haasil ki
Madhu abhi pro boxing me dhyan de rahi hai
Jabki amit abhi tak apna heavyweight title defend kar raha hai.
Dono ek Saath kai baar Patrick boxing academy jaate hai
Jahan mihir ne aakhirkar kanika se Shaadi kar hi li
Aur mili ka arranged marriage ghuma firakar Rishab de ho hi gaya
Kedar Indian army join kar gaya jabki
Monty ne khud ka career drugs se barbaad kar di aur Filhal ek dukan chalata hai
Sabne apne hisse ka aasman chakh liya tha
Kisi ko kam to kisi ko zyada mila tha
------------------THE END-------------------------------------
Aur amit ko rishabh ke haath ka swad Jald pata chal raha tha
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Fir se amit ka punch bekar gaya. Aur lagatar miss kar raha hai amit
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Fir se miss. Rishabh ki speed aur agility top class boxer ki hai
Amit ne ek jhalak stands ki aur dekha
Uske mummy papa aaj apne bete ko cheer karne aaye hai
Aaj finals hai aur amit ko kisi bhi tarah medals jeetna hai
DHAMMMMMMMMMMNNNMMMMMNN
Ekdum pet par aur amit ki ki aankhen bahar a gayi
Punch nahi tha. Ye kisi ne hayhouda maar diya tha amit ke pet par
THAPPP
Jaise taise next punch block kiya amit ne.us lunch ke baad khada hona mushkil ho raha tha
Amit ke pair kaamp rahe the
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
THAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
is baar ye punch amit ne maara. Lekin shayad rishabh par koi asar hi nahi hua. Koun si mitti se bana hai ye boxer
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Bacha amit. Kuch plan kuch strategy kuch luck
Jaise taise khada tha ring me amit
Lekin rishabh ko kaise bhi harana hai lekin kaise??
THAP THAP DHAMMMMMMMNMMNNN
Vaar ka koi Kaat nahi hai rishabh ke Paas lekin......
Rishab jeet ke kareeb pohuncha raha hai, agar rishabh jeet gaya to......
Madhu uski nahi ho payegi uske Saare sapno ka kya
DHAPPPPPPPPPP
Ek aur Vaar aur amit door corner me Chala gaya
Jo karna hai isi round me karna hoga,har Waqt doosro ki nakal karne ke chakkar me khud kabhi apne style par dhyan nahi diya.....
Apna khud ka style????
Amit achanak excited ho gaya aur Rishab bhi halka sa hairan hua ise dekhkar. Rishab ne amit ke poore boxing career ko apne Saamne hote hue dekha hai
Amit ab Rishab ke Saamne khud aaya
DHAPPPPPPPPP
Rishab ka fir se Vaar laga
Lekin.....
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Amit special uppercut
Rishab halka sa hadbadaya aur amit ne koi mauka nahi choda
DHAMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNN
Ek punch seedha seene me
Rishab fir bhi jaise taise khada raha. Na pairon ke movement padh pa raha tha Rishab aur na hi uske style ko
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
Is baar poori tarah se punch Rishab ke jabse par pada
DHAMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
kaise ye......
Rishab sochta raha lekin uske bas me ab kuch nahi tha zameen me girne se pehle hairaani se dekhne laga amit ko
DHAPPPP
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
fir se knockout se haraya amit ne. Lekin is baar Rishab ko haraya
Mr and Mrs surana khushi se jhoom uthe aur mrs surana ne apne rishtedaro ko phone karna shuru kar diya
Sab ko tv par channel tune karne ko Keh rahi thi wo
Madhu, Mr Patrick aur Baaki koi team member nahi aaye the aaj
Kyunki amit jis nami hirami gym me tha unhone mana kar diya tha kisi ko bhi ye match attend karne ko
Ye gym professional zyada hai emotional kam
----------------------------------------------------------------------
DO MAHINE BAAD
"congrats Rishab bhaiyya and mili, pata hi nahi chala ki aap logo ne kab ek doosre ko pasand kiya aur Shaadi bhi karne ja rahe ho" haste hue amit ne coffee mug table par rakha
Ye sunte hi Rishab aur mili dono has pade
"yani tu pro boxing karega??" Rishab bola
"Haan Rishab bhaiyya, politics se bhara hua hai poora system, waise bhi edward se ek baar ladna chahta hoon" amit bola
"amit madhu ne kuch kaha is maamle me" mili ne poocha
"madhu se mera contact nahi hua hai mili, wo apne career me busy hai. Suna hai kanika ne use ek top class trainer se milaya hai. Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai" amit bola
"thik hai amit whatever the decision you take. We are with you bro" Rishab ne kandhe par haath milate hue bola
Amit kuch bola nahi chupchaap kuch sochne laga
----------------------------------------------------------------------
PRESENT DAY USA
"oye bhen ji hum a gaye" sardarji ke awaz se wo ladki past se present me a gayi
"stadium a gaye hai madam ji" sardarji ne fir kaha
Hadbadakar us ladki ne paise nikalne ke liye purse rakha to sardarji ne rok liya
"aap pehle jao, pasie udaae rahe aaj. Jaldi jaiye" sardarji bole to wo ladki cab ka darwaza khol Bhaag gayi
"aapke aankhon ka Dard poore raaste me dikh raha tha bhen ji, wahe guru aapko aapki manzil tak le jaye" bol sardarji bhi stadium ki aur badh gaye
"hey lady hey" security guards ne bhagti hui ladki ko rokne ke liye aage badhe to us ladki ne apna ticket fenk diya unki aur stadium ke Ander a gayi jaise taise
"I DON'T THINK BOTH THE BOXERS CAN CONTINUE LIKE THAT, THIS MATCH NEEDS TO STOP" commentary chal rahi thi
"AMIT SURANA" us ladki ne apne bad se ek medal nikala aur use hawa me uthaya
Asian games gold medallist madhu....
Edward aur amit dono ne apna punch hawa me uthaya
Fark sirf itna tha ki amit ne apni aankhen band kar di thi kyunki usme aansu tham nahi rahe the
SWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSH
Edward ne shayad pehli baar miss kiya
DHAMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
jabde par pada punch aur Edward neeche gir gaya finally
Amit bhi ladkhadaya lekin corner ko pakadkar jaise taise khada raha
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
countdown poora hua aur Edward ko harakar pehli baar kisi Indian ne heavyweight championship jeeta tha
Saath me 1 million dollars
Lekin amit zameen par baith gaya aur madhu seedha ring me gayi aur
MUAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
"mujhse...... Shaadi........ Karogi ma madhu" amit bola to madhu ne rote hue gale laga liya amit ko
Stadium fat pada taaliyon ki awaz se
Edward ne haath milaya aur apni team ke Saath ring ke bahar nikal gaha
Ek lambi Saans li usne
Ye to ek din hona hi tha, usse behtar lada wo chashma pehenne wala ladka.....
Edward has pada. Patrick sir ne aakhirkar ek fighter taiyyar kar hi liya
Amit se gale milkar jaate Waqt sabko haathon se wave karte hue chala gaya
Amit ne apne haathon se heavyweight title ko hawa me apne haathon se uthakar dikhaya aur taaliyon se poora stadium bhar gaya
Madhu aur amit ko door se ek ladka mike liye dikhai diya jo apna muh chupa raha tha
"nikhil??" madhu ne bas itna bola ki nikhil muh chupakar Bhaag gaya
Apna career khatam hota dekh shayad reporter banna sahi samjha tha nikhil
----------------------------------------------------------------------
"dekha mai na kehti thi papa jitenge pehle" choti si ladki boli
"kahan mummy pehle jeet gayi dekha nahi tune" chota sa ladka hairaan hokar bola
"nahi papa pehle jeet gaye"
"nahi mummy"
"papa"
"mummy"
Tabhi darwaza khula aur amit aur madhu ek Saath Ander aaye
"Are Baap re kya ho raha hai, tum log soye nahi?? Chalo abhi ke abhi, sleeping time now" madhu ne hukm diya
Dono man maarkar chale gaye
Amit aur madhu ne tv par dekha unka purana waqt
Dono muskura uthe.
Dono ne apni manzil haasil ki
Madhu abhi pro boxing me dhyan de rahi hai
Jabki amit abhi tak apna heavyweight title defend kar raha hai.
Dono ek Saath kai baar Patrick boxing academy jaate hai
Jahan mihir ne aakhirkar kanika se Shaadi kar hi li
Aur mili ka arranged marriage ghuma firakar Rishab de ho hi gaya
Kedar Indian army join kar gaya jabki
Monty ne khud ka career drugs se barbaad kar di aur Filhal ek dukan chalata hai
Sabne apne hisse ka aasman chakh liya tha
Kisi ko kam to kisi ko zyada mila tha
------------------THE END-------------------------------------
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Is kahani se judne ke liye sabhi ko thanks
Yakeen kijiye story bas itni hi thi
Kheenchkar bad 3-4 update aur de sakta tha lekin usme maza nahi aata
Yakeen kijiye story bas itni hi thi
Kheenchkar bad 3-4 update aur de sakta tha lekin usme maza nahi aata
Behtareen kahani per yaar Aisa laga jaise jaldi me Khatam ker diya. Khair maza bahut aaya...??????
