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Arnavxlover said:
Dosto yeah meri pehli kahani hai, isko mein direct post kar raha hoon, review nahi kar paata hoon... Post karne ke baad jab ek baar padta hoon toh bahut saari galtiya nazar aa rahi hai, sahi shabdo ka chunaav nahi kar pa raha hoon, isliye language ek blog ke tarah lagegi kahaani ke tarah nahi.... Mein aagey sahi shabdo ko sahi jagah rakhne ka chunaav jaroor karunga....

Kuch galtiya ignore kar dena
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bhai galtiyan to ap khud dhoondh lete ho..............
baaki............. apki kahani ki shuruat bahut badhiya lagi........

ab tak ki poori padh loon.... fir review deta hoon..........

keep it up
 
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