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As you all know, in previous week we announced USC and also opened Rules and Queries thread after some time. Before all this, chit-chat thread already opened in Hindi section. Well, Just want to inform that it is a Short story contest, in this you can post post story under any prefix. with minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words . That is why, i want to invite you so that you can portray your thoughts using your words into a story which whole xforum would watch. This is a great step for you and for your stories cause USC's stories are read by every reader of Xforum. You are one of the best writers of Xforum, and your story is also going very well. That is why We whole heatedly request you to write a short story For USC. We know that you do not have time to spare but even after that we also know that you are capable of doing everything and bound to no limits. And the readers who does not want to write they can also participate for the "Best Readers Award" .. You just have to give your reviews on the Posted stories in USC "Winning Writer's will be awarded with Cash prizes and another awards "and along with that they get a chance to sticky their thread in their section so their thread remains on the top. That is why This is a fantastic chance for you all to make a great image on the mind of all reader and stretch your reach to the mark. This is a golden chance for all of you to portrait your thoughts into words to show us here in USC. So, bring it on and show us all your ideas, show it to the world. Entry thread will be opened on 7th February, meaning you can start submission of your stories from 7th of feb and that will be opened till 25th of feb. During this you can post your story, so it is better for you to start writing your story in the given time. And one more thing! Story is to be posted in one post only, cause this is a short story contest that means we can only hope for short stories. So you are not permitted to post your story in many post/parts. If you have any query regarding this, you can contact any staff member.
To chat or ask any doubt on a story, Use this thread — Chit Chat Thread
To Give review on USC's stories, Use this thread — Review Thread
To Chit Chat regarding the contest, Use this thread— Rules & Queries Thread
To post your story, use this thread — Entry Thread
| Position | Benifits |
|---|---|
| Winner | 1500 Rupees +  Award + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories) |
| 1st Runner-Up | 500 Rupees +  Award + 2500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories) |
| 2nd Runner-UP | 5000 Likes + 7 Days Sticky Thread (Stories) + 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Best Supporting Reader |  Award + 1000 Likes+ 2 Months Prime Membership |
| Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof | 200 Likes for each report |
Bilal jan
My Attitude your problem 🖕 Your attitude my foot
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Zabardast updateUPDATE 1
Shibu ek aisi jagah jahan aaj bhi kings rule karte hain
Wahan aap Kisi bhi tarah ka gunaah karein
Aapko justice of sea ke andar daal diya jaayega
Aur sea khud faisla karti hai
Ki kab tak aap us sea mein tairte rahenge
Aur jab saza poori ho jaati hai
Tab sea aapko apne andar se nikaalke fenk deti hai
Lekin aapki apni duniya mein nahi
Kyunki koi bhi crime karne ke baad
Aap shibu ke layak nahi rehte
Lekin woh sea itni bhi seedhi nahi hai
Bahut hi strange sea hai
Jab woh sea kisi ko apni andar se nikaalke fenkti hai
Woh future mein pahunch sakta hai
Past mein
Ya phir kisi aur duniya mein
Para world ke raaja aarya the abhi
Age yahi koi 1400 saal hogi
Ek din unke sabha mein
Ek ladki aayi
Unse unki Praja ka koi bhi shakhs kabhi bhi unse milne aasakta tha
Aur apni fariyaad suna sakta tha
Aarya..kya naam hai beta aapki
Ladki..mera naam reeti hai
Mujhe aapko kuchh batana hai
Aarya..batao
Ladki..kal raat mere sapno mein grand king shaurya aaye
Yeh sunke poori sabha chaunk gayi
Sab ghutno ke bal baith gayi
Lekin raaja aarya nahi
Aarya..hum kaise maan lein
Tum sach keh rahi ho
Reeti
Unhone mujhse kaha
Ki mere aarya se kehna ki
Use aaj justice of sea ke andar samana hai
Aur usse yeh bhi kehna ki woh apni duso patniyo ko sath le jaaye
Yeh sunke sab shocked reh gaye
Aarya..ismein yeh kahan saabit hua
Ki tum sach keh rahi ho
Reeti..yeh saabit karne ke liye
Mere paas koi saboot nahi hai
Aur na mujhe great king ne bataya
Ki main yeh baat saabit kaise karungi
Unhone mujhse kaha
Ki aarya se kehna
Ek tha raaja
Yeh sunte hi aarya rote hue ghutno ke bal baith gaya
Ab bata doon ke shaurya jo the
Woh shibu ke pehle raaja the
Aarya ne jaane se pehle apne sautele bhai
Rangeela ko raaja bana diya
Aur phir raaja aarya aur uski 10 biwi sab Justice of sea ke andar sama gaye
Aur uske baad un sabke sharir se unki rooh nikalke gayab ho gayi
22 years after
Mera naam aarya hai main 18 saal ka ho chuka hoon
Meri do badi behne aur ek chhoti behen hain
Mere papa ka hotel bussines hai
Mere papa ka hotel desh ke har sheher mein hai
Isse toh aap sabko pata chal hi gaya hoga
Woh kitne rich honge
Meri badi behen ka naam geeta hai
Usse chhoti behen ka naam meeta
Aur uske baad main
Phir meri chhoti behen sheetal
Geeta didi doctor hain
Meeta didi graduation final year mein hain year mein
Aur mera abhi first year mein admission hoga
12th ke papers de chuka hoon
Aur sheetal 10th ke papers de chuki hai
Mere papa ka naam amit Chauhan hai
Raaja prithviraj Chauhan humare poorvaj the
Mere papa ka itna rob dab daba hai
Ki koi bhi election ho
Mere papa se politicians support maangne aate hain
Aur jinhein bhi mere papa support karte hain
Jeet usi ki party ki hoti hai
Meri Mummy Anjali Chauhan
Sheetal ko janm dete hi chal basi
Isi wajah se Geeta didi aur meeta didi dono usse door door rehti hain
Bas main apni sheetal ke liye kuchh bhi kar sakta hoon
Woh mere jigar ka tukda hai
Aur main apni dono didiyo ke jigar ka tukda
Lekin hadd toh tab ho gayi
Jab mere papa ne Mummy ke marne ke baad
Doosri shaadi kar li
Aur unse unhein do beti hui
Jinka naam tha
Anuradha aur pooja
Dono mujhse chhoti hain
Woh alag ghar mein rehti hain
Papa bhi unke sath hi rehte hain
Unki doosri biwi ka naam komal hai
Komal pehle unki personal secretary thi
Lekin ab unki biwi hai
Mujhe komal aur unke bachcho se Nafrat hai
Kyun kyunki mummy marne ke ek hafte ke andar hi komal ki papa se shaadi ho gayi
Bas phir kya tha papa ne humare yahan aana band kar diya
Humein humari daadi ne paala hai
Daadi ne kabhi humein akyala nahi chhoda
Sach kahu toh kabhi kabhi mujhe lagta hai
Ki agar Mummy aaj zinda hoti toh woh bilkul daadi jaisi hoti
Main soya hua tha
Aur tabhi meri aankh khul gayi
Aur main dekhke dang reh gaya
Kyunki main ek mahal ke andar tha
Bilkul jo filmo mein hota hai usi Tarah ka Mahal
Aur tabhi mere room ke andar ek ke baad ek ladki aati gayi
Sabne Rajkumari ki tarah kapde pehne hue the
Tabhi woh sab mere paas aayi
Main ghabra gaya
Kyunki aaj tak main apni behno ke alawa kisi se bhi baat karna toh door unke paas bhi nahi bhatka tha
Dar ke maare mere hath pair kaanpne lage
Tabhi woh sab ek ek karke mere pairo ko chumne lagi
Sab ki sab ghunghat mein thi
Mujhe unka chehra nahi dikh raha tha
Mere pair ek ek karke chumne ke baad
Ek ladki ne apna ghunghat utha diya
Aur main dang reh gaya
Kyunki yeh meri geeta didi thi
Geeta..kaise hain Maharaj
Kya batau aaj pehli baar maine jaana tha
Ki geeta didi itni sunder hain
Itni itni jyada
Meri toh jaan hi nikal gayi unhein dekhke
Woh aayi aur mere paas baithke mere pairo ko dabane lagi
Main..yeh kya kar rahi ho aap
Chhodiye mere pair
Geeta..aisa kyun bolte hain
Main aapki patni hoon
Mera dhram hai aapki sewa karna
Mera haal toh bilkul jhetalaal jaisa ho gaya
Yeh toh wohi baat hui
Ki babita jee ne jhetalaal ko keh diya
Ki jhetha jee
I love you
Main..aap meri didi hain
Geeta..haan didi bhi hoon
Lekin pehle aapki patni hoon
Main..yeh kaisi gandi baatein kar rahi hain aap
Geeta..gandi baatein kahan kar rahi hoon
Dekhiye main aapko sab kuchh yaad dilati hoon
Aur phir didi ne mere maathe se apna maatha sata diya
Aur mujhe yaad aane laga
Ki main shibu planet ka raaja tha
Ek din great king ne mujhe ek aagya di
Aur maine use poora kiya
Aur geeta didi meri biwi thi
Unka aur mera punarjanam hua hai
Main yeh sab jaanke shocked reh gaya
Main..inka chehra kyun nahi dikh raha hai
Geeta..are aap toh utawle hone lage
Pehle aap mujhe toh sab kuchh yaad dila dijiye
Jab mujhe yaad aajayega
Tab tab phir aapko dusri biwi ka pata chalega
Main..lekin yeh sab karne ki kya jarurat hai
Aur asli duniya mein aap meri didi ho
Papa ko pata chala
Toh woh mujhe aur aapko jaan se maar denge
Geeta..is brahmand ki kisi mahila ne aisa purush nahi jana
Jo mere pati ko jaan se maar sake
Meri toh fatke chaar ho gayi
Geeta didi ko itne gusse mein dekhke
Geeta..aapko shibu wapas aana hoga
Aur yeh kaam aap tabhi kar sakte hain
Jab aapko aapki dus patniya mil jaaye
Main..main kuchh samjha nahi
Geeta..main samjhati hoon na
Dekhiye shibu ke pehle raja apni duniya ke god the
Jinhein great king kaha jaata hai
Unhone hi yeh duniya banayi thi
Aur unhein god ne banaya tha
Great king ko paas adbhut shaktiya thi
Usi tarah jab unke bete ka janam hua
Toh unhein bhi woh shaktiya mili
Aur phir unke bete ko
Phir unke bete ko
Aur aakhri aap the
Jinhein woh shaktiya mili
Toh jaisa aapko pata hai
Ki abhi shibu ka raaja rangeela hai
Aapke jaane ke baad
Usne shaadi kar li
Lekin uski patni ne use aisa bana diya
Bilkul jallad
Woh shibu ke logo zulm karta hai
Usne aisa kaanoon banaya hai
Yeh bolke didi chup ho gayi
Main..kaisa kaanoon banaya hai
Geeta..koi bhi kisi bhi mard ko ladne ke liye lakaar sakta hai
Aur jo jeet jaata hai
Woh haarne waale se kuchh bhi maang sakta hai
Main..toh
Geeta..toh koi kisi ka dhan maangta hai
Koi kisi ki patni
Main..yeh toh galat baat hai
Geeta..aur yeh sab aapko rokna padega
Main..lekin rangeela ke paas powers hongi
Geeta..aap mujhe sab kuchh yaad dila dijiye
Aapke shakti 10 bhaago mein bati thi
Aapko apni shakti ka pehla bhaag mil jaayega
Main..aur agar aap ne mujhe maar maar ke bhaga diya toh
Geeta..nahi main aisa nahi karungi
Main..yeh sach nahi ho sakta
Yeh sach nahi ho sakta
Main sapna dekh raha hoon
Geeta..ek baat yaad rakhiyega
Agar aapne yeh sab sach nahi maana
Aur agar meri shaadi kisi aur se karwa di gayi
Toh jis pal mere sharir ko koi gair purush sparsh karega
Mera sharir jalke raakh ho jaayega
Aur mere mrityu ke pashchaat
Aapki baaki 9 patniyo ka sharir bhi bhasm ho jaayega
Aur phir aap bhi bhasm ho jaayenge
Main..lekin aapko yaad kaise aayega
Geeta..aajayega
Pehle mere man mein apne pyar ka deep toh jalaiye
Main..kahin meri Zindagi ka deepak na bujha do aap
Yeh sunke geeta didi hansne lagi
Aur phir meri aankh khuli main time dekha
12 baj rahe the
Main chupke se geeta didi ke room mein pahunch gaya
Sote hue kitni Masoom dikh rahi thi
Lekin meri fat bahut rahi thi
Main wahan se kat liya
Aur phir aake so gaya
Meri aankh khuli
Kyunki kisi ne mere upar paani daal diya tha
Itna thanda paani tha
Poora badan kaanp utha mera
Saamne sheetal thi
Pehle toh mujhe bada gussa aaya
Lekin sheetal ko dekhne ke baad
Mera gussa hawa ho gaya
Tabhi meri dono didi meri cheekh sunke aagayi
Aur jab unhone meri aisi haalat dekhi
Toh woh sheetal ko ghurne lagi
Geeta..dimaag kharab toh nahi ho gaya hai tera
Idiot kahin ki
Aaj uska birthday
Meeta..ise kuchh samajh thodi aata hai
Manhoos kahin ki
Main..didi
Meeta.. theek hai theek hai
Ek hum dono hain
Jo tujhpe jaan lutati.hain
Aur
Geeta..chhod na meeta
Yeh toh humse pyar hi nahi karta
Yeh bolke woh dono chali gayi
Sheetal udaas ho gayi
Aur bed pe baith gayi
Aarya..kya hua
Sheetal..maine aapki subah kharab kar di
Aarya..kisne kaha
Main toh bahut khush hoon
Sheetal..aap sirf baatein bana rahe hain
Aarya..tumhari kasam
Yeh sunke sheetal mere gaal pe kiss kar di
Sheetal..how sweet of you
Ab jaldi se ready ho jaaiye
Kahin ghumne chalenge
Aarya..abhi hota hoon
Aur phir sheetal chali gayi
Maim sochne laga ki aakhir kaise ek sagi behen apne bhai se pyar karegi....
Bilal jan
My Attitude your problem 🖕 Your attitude my foot
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Nice updateUPDATE 2
READY Hone ke baad
Main hall mein aaya
Toh dekha
Ek taraf dono didi tayyar baithi thi
Aur ek taraf sheetal
Mar gaya
Ab sheetal ke sath jaaunga
Toh yeh dono naraz ho jaayengi
Aur agar inke sath gaya
Toh meri sheetal
Aur sheetal ko mere siwa kaun pyar karta hai
Main pehle daadi ke paas gaya
Aur unke pairo ko chhua
Itne saari dua di
Ki main ginne laga
Main hansne laga
Daadi..hans kyu. Raha hai mere laal
Main..bas itni hi dua dogi
Daadi.. badmaash
Main..suno na
Inka matter solve karo na
Daadi..teri behne hain
Tu dekh
Main..aisa mat bolo
Please jaan
Daadi..achcha toh ab main teri jaan ban gayi
Main..aapko koi shakk hai kya
Daadi.. please daadi
Theek hai mere raja
Abhi karti hoon
Tera matter solve
Yeh bolke daadi ne teeno ki taraf dekha
Daadi..aaj mere bachche ka birthday hai
Isi liye
Aaj use dharam sankat mein daalne ki jarurat nahi hai
Jaan hai toh sab sath jaao
Warna koi Nahi jaayega
Yeh sunke dono didi mujhe ghurne lagi
Par geeta didi ko dekhke mere toh armaan machal rahe the
Aaj unhein dekhke mera aisa haal ho raha tha
Jaisa jethalal ka hota hai babita jee ko dekhke
Haaye main mar jaaun
Uske baad hum chaaro nikal gaye
Sheetal aage baithi thi mere sath
Aur baaki dono peeche
Main..kahan chalna hai
Geeta.. park
Meeta..haan amusement park chalte hain
Sheetal...park hi chalte hain
Sheetal bechari toh zidd bhi nahi karti thi
Phir hum amusement park gaye
Aur alag alag rides ki sawari karne lage
Kamal ki baat yeh thi
Ki meri teeno behno ko koi faraq nahi pad raha tha
Lekin humari gand fat rahi thi
Mere munh se yahi nikla
Main madarchod hoon
Jo yahan aane ke liye raazi ho gaya
Jab dragon ride se main utra
Toh mere pair kaanp rahe the
Sar ghoom raha tha
Main dheere dheere chal raha tha
Tabhi Sheetal mujhe limca laake di
Main poora ek hi saans mein atak gaya
Ab jaake thoda sukun mila
Toh uske baad hum movie dekhne gaye
Aur phir Macdonald mein chale gaye
Shaam ho chuki thi
Phir didi ne raaste mein cake pack karwaya
Aur hum ghar aagaye
Uske baad maine cake kaata
Aur pehle daadi ko khilaya
Phir geeta didi ko uske baad meeta didi ko
Aur last mein sheetal ko
Sabne mujhe gift diya
Geeta didi ne laptop diya tha
Meeta didi ne phone
Sheetal ne watch
Aur daadi ne bike
Main..aapko toh pata hai mujhe cycle chalana Pasand hai
Daadi..ab college jaayega
Toh cycle pe jaana achcha thodi lagta hai
Main..kya daadi aap bhi
Daadi muskura di
Aur phir hum sabne khana khaya
Aur phir apne apne room mein sone chale gaye
Main so gaya
Aur phir main wohin pahunch gaya
Apne mahal ke room mein
Jahan 9 ladki ghunghat odhe khadi thi
Aur geeta didi bed pe baithi mere pair daba rahi thi
Geeta.. bataiye poora din beeta diya aapne
Aur kuchh nahi kar paaye
Main..are koi halwa hai kya
Jo banaya aur kha liya
Aur waise bhi mujhe bahut dar lagta hai didi se
Bahut gusse waali hain
Pata hai ek din unhone mujhe sutta maarte hue dekh liya tha
Aur phir jab main ghar pahuncha
Toh unhone mujhe thappad maar diya
Ek nahi chaar
Mere gaal tak laal ho gaye the
Geeta..aap bas ek baar mujhe sab kuchh yaad dila dijiye
Uske baad aapko aapki himmat wapas mil jaayegi
Main..usse kya hoga
Geeta..usse kya hoga
Mere pati ki itni himmat thi
Ki akayle poori sena ko khatam kar dete the
Main..uske liye strength speed aur moves bhi aane Chahiye
Geeta..aapke paas sab kuchh hai
Suna hai kal aap college ja rahe hain
Main..haan ja toh raha hoon
Geeta..aap meri baat maanenge
Toh geeta aap ke pyar mein paagal ho jaayegi
Main..kaise
Aur phir jab didi ne mujhe plan bataya
Meri fat ke chaar ho gayi
Are bhai ab hero hoon
Toh iska matlab thodi hai
Ki main kisi se darta nahi hoon
Har insaan ko dar lagta hai
Phir bhi mujhe iske alawa koi dusra raasta nahi dikha
Upar se didi ne mujhe apni kasam de di thi
Saala didi khud hi khudko patane ka idea de rahi thi
Toh agle din main college nikal gaya
Apni bike se
Dar toh rehta hi hai Ragging ka
Ab bhale hi illegal ho
Lekin hoti hai
Toh main apni bike park kiya
Uske baad main idhar udhar dekhne laga
Dar bahut lag raha tha
Didi ke plan ke hisaab se
Mujhe maar khaani thi
Woh bhi tagdi waali
Toh main dekha ki jahan hadd se jyada Ragging ho rahi hai
Usi senior group ke paas pahunch gaya
Main..chale be side de
Beech mein khada hai
Tere baap ka sasuraal hai kya
Ab mujhe kya pata tha
Ki woh saala pehelwaan niklega
Senior1.. Fresher hai
Main..haan hoon
Toh
Apna jeeja banayega
Senior2..oye tujhe dar nahi lag raha hai
Main..kyun tu koi changez khan hai kya
Shakal se toh bakri chor dikh raha hai
Ab mujhe pata hi nahi chala
Ki saare students meri taraf hi dekh rahe the
Senior3..beta itna udne ki jarurat nahi hai
Tujhe yaha. Teen saal beetane hain
Teri Zindagi hell bana denge hum
Main..abe tu kya meri Zindagi hell banayega
Behenchod janam dete waqt maa mar gayi
Maa ke marne ke hafte ke andar hi mere baap ne dusri shaadi kar li
Aur bhaag gaya
Saala bachpan mein roti ke laale pad gaye the
Upar se chhoti behen
Gaand ke gurde chhil gaye
Isse jyada kya jahannum hogi meri life
Yeh sunke sabki aankhein nam ho gayi
Yaar main toh aise hi dar raha tha
Lekin mujhe peetna tha
Isi liye mujhe inhein uksana tha
Saala Aisi kahin biwi hoti hai
Jo khud ke pati ko pitwane ka hi plan banayi ho
Main..abe khamal aise kya dekh raha hai
Senior..abe ek Baat bata
Jab tere janam ke waqt hi teri maa chal basi
Toh teri chhoti behen kahan se aayi
Main..woh kya hai mere baap ka
Ayr Teri maa ka chakkar tha
Bas kya tha
Jo usne mujhe dhona shuru kiya
Ab maine baat hi aisi hi boli thi
Ki koi bhi peet jaata
Bhai sahab agar didi ne mujhe kasam nahi di hoti
Toh main inke paas bhatakta bhi nahi
Balki main aaj college hi nahi aata
Meri body ke har hisse se
Khoon nikal raha tha
Tabhi main behosh hoke gidd gaya
Aankh meri khuli
Main hospital mein tha
Geeta didi mera hath pakad ke roye ja rahi thi
Main jab bolne ke koshish kiya
Toh seene mein itna jyada dard hua
Ki meri cheekh nikal gayi
Yeh dekhke didi rone lagi
Geeta..tujhe hosh aagaya
Mera bachcha
Kaisa hai tu
Aur phir woh rone lagi
Main..are main bilkul theek hoon
Aap rona band kijiye
Geeta..kya jarurat thi
Tujhe jhagda karne ki
Main..woh mere sath badtamizi kar rahe the
Geeta..kya matlab
Main..woh meri behno ko gaali de rahe the
Maine saalo ki maa behen ek kar di
Geeta..keh toh aise raha hai jaise koi bahut bada teer maara ho
Main..i love you didi
Yeh sunke didi chaunk gayi
Geeta..i love you too mera bachcha
Main..i love you as a girl
Geeta..kya bola
Main..bahut din se aapse kehna chahta tha
Lekin kabhi keh nahi paaya
Main aapse itna pyar karta hoon aap soch bhi nahi sakti
Jab aankhein band karta hoon
Toh aap dikhti ho
Geeta..tujhe sharam nahi aati yeh sab kehte hue
I am your sister
Main..ab main kya karu
Mera dil mere bas mein nahi hai
Yeh sunte hi didi mujhe aise ghurne lagi
Jaise maine koi bahut bada gunaah kar diya ho
Geeta..lagta hai tere sar mein chot lag gayi hai
Isi liye tu yeh sab keh raha hai
Aarya main teri badi behen hoon
Main..toh kya
Main aapse pyar karta hoon
Karta tha
Karta rahunga
Jab tak mar nahi jaata
Geeta..main papa ko bata dungi
Aarya..bata do
Waise bhi aapke bina jeene se achcha hai
Papa mujhe maar dein
Geeta..tu paagal toh nahi ho gaya hai
Main kabhi tujhse baat nahi karungi
Aarya.. aap ki taraf se na hai
Geeta..you idiot dimaag kharab hain
Hum bhai behen hain
Aarya..yes or no
Geeta..no no no
Aarya..didi aap bahut khubsurat ho
Apna khyal rakhna
I love you with my heart
Yeh sunte hi didi ne mujhe thappad maar diya
Aur phir wahan se chali gayi
Main uthke baith gaya
Bahut dard ho raha tha
Body mein
Main window khola
Hey maa mataji
Kahin main sachmein mar gaya toh
Lekin didi ne kasam di thi
Unhone kaha tha
Ki yeh sab hoga
Woh kya hai abhi main itni unchayi pe tha
Shayad 18th floor tha
Kam jayada bhi ho sakta hai
Geeta didi rote hue bahar chali gayi
Meeta ne jab yeh dekha
Toh woh kuchh samajh nahi paayi
Geeta bina kuchh bole chali gayi
Sheetal nahi aayi thi
Use kisi ne bataya nahi tha mere baare mein
Meeta didi mere ward mein jaise aayi
Main window se kood gaya
Meeta ki cheekh nikal gayi
Aur woh daudte hue window ke paas aayi
Lekin tab tak main zameen pe pada tha
Meeta rote hue wahan pahunch gayi
Aur mujhse lipatke rone lagi
Bahut hi jayada bheed jama ho gayi thi
Geeta shor sharaba sunke wahan pahunch gayi
Geeta..kya hua bhaiya
Pata nahi kaun tha
Wahan se koodke apni jaan de di
Meeta..cheekhte hue..aarya aarya mere bhai
Mere laal yeh tune kya kar Diya
Yeh baat jab geeta ne suni toh unhein aisa laga
Ki kisi ne loha pighla ke unke kaano mein daal diya ho
Geeta ghabrate hue jab aage gayi
Bheed ke beech se
Toh use mera sharir dikha
Woh zameen pe besudh hoke gid gayi
Ek zinda laash
Aur phir woh mere chehre ko dekhke rone lagi
Aur phir cheekhte hue chup ho gayi
Ek dum chup
Doctors aaye meri nabz check ki
Aur phir mujhe jaldi se ot mein leke gaye
Main pahunch gaya
Apne room mein
Geeta..mujhe toh laga tha aap nahi kar patayenge
Main.. aapne kasam jo di thi
Geeta..maan lijiye ki yeh ek sapna hai
Aur aapne jo kiya
Woh shayad sahi nahi tha
Main..mujhe toh yeh bhi nahi pata hai
Ki aap sach mein ho
Ya phir mera dimaag kharab hai
Aur phir doctors ne mujhe mrit ghoshit kar diya
Aur yeh baat aake meeta ko batayi
Kyunki hospital mein sirf geeta aur meeta hi thi
Doctors ki baat sunke meeta dahadein maarke rone lagi
Meeta ne papa ko phone karke sab kuchh bata diya tha
Lekin abhi tak woh nahi aaye the
Meeta mere paas aayi
Aur mujhse lipatke rone lagi
Meeta..aarya aarya please wapas aaja
Kabhi tujhe kisi baat ke liye majbur nahi karungi
Please aarya wapas aaja
Mere bhai mere laal
Meeta roti rahi lekin main nahi utha
Aur phir meeta rote hue chali gayi
Geeta ke paas
Meeta..didi aarya ab nahi raha
Didi chup kyun ho
Please kuchh bolo
Yeh sunke geeta ne thappad maar diya meeta ko
Aur phir woh aagayi mere paas
Meeta wohin baithke rone lagi
Geeta ne mera hath pakda
Geeta.. aaj main bhagwaan ko sakshi maanke
Aapko apna sab kuchh sweekaar karti hoon
Please uth jaaiye
Lekin main nahi utha
Geeta..uthiye na
Please uth jaaiye
Main kabhi aapko khudse door nahi jaane dungi
Please uth jaaiye
Agar aap nahi uthe toh main apni jaan de dungi
Aapko meri kasam
Aur tabhi geeta ki body se energy nikli
Aur mujhmein samane lagi
Aur phir meri aankhein khul gayi
Aur main uthke baith gaya
Main..yeh apna kya haal bana rakhkha hai aapne
Geeta..aap mujhse vaada kijiye
Ki aap mujhe kabhi chhodke nahi jaayenge
Main..kabhi nahi jaaungi
Toh iska matlab aap mujhse pyar karti hain
Geeta..haan
Main..haan ka matlab kya hota hai
Mujhe aapke munh se sunna hai
Yeh sunke geeta buri tarah sharma gayi
Main..boliye na
Geeta..i love you
Aur tabhi mujhe didi ke man ki baatein sunayi dene lagi
Woh toh man mein bhi sharma rahi thi
Tabhi mujhe woh sab dikha
Jisse main anjaan tha
Komal tera woh haal karunga
Ki tu bheekh maangti firegi sadko pe....
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MAIN..ghar chalein
Geeta..chaliye
Main.. please sheetal aur daadi ko kuchh mat bataiyega
Geeta..nahi bataungi
Mujhe toh vishwaas nahi hua
Ki geeta maan gayi
Main..aap itni jaldi maan gayi
Geeta..woh meri chhoti behen hai
Aaj mujhe ehsaas hua
Ki maine Uske sath kitna galat kiya
Mujhe aisa nahi karna Chahiye tha
Mujhe maaf kar dijiye
Main..aap maafi kyun maang rahi hain
Chaliye ab chalte hain
Uske baad hum dono jab bahar nikle
Toh doctors ka heart fail ho gaya
Mujhe zinda dekhke
Meeta didi ek side gum sum hui bathi Thi
Main unka hath pakda
Aur woh jab apni Gardan uthake mujhe dekhi
Toh unke chehre pe jo khushi dikhi
Main bata nahi sakta
Woh khadi hui aur ek jhatke mein mere seene se lagke rone lagi
Main..aap ro kyun rahi ho
Aap khush nahi ho kya
Meeta.. bakwaas mat kar bahut maarungi
Main..achcha nahi karta
Chaliye ab
Geeta ne mera hath pakad rakhkha tha
Aur meeta didi bas mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi
Tabhi mujhe meeta didi ki man ki baatein sunayi dene lagi
Main muskura diya
Geeta ne kaha tha
Ki jab woh mera pyar accept kar legi
Tab mujhe powers milengi
Shayad main dusro ke man mein jhaank sakta hoon
Uske baad hum car mein baithe
Geeta.. kapde change kar lijiyega
Raaste mein
Main..theek hai
Meeta.. kar lijiyega
Yeh aap kabse ho gaya
Geeta..tu apna kaam kar
Jyada apne dimaag pe jor daalne ki jarurat nahi hai
Meeta ne bura sa munh banaya
Aur dusri taraf dekhne lagi
Main mall ke saamne car rok diya
Aur phir hum teeno mall mein ghus gaye
Lagbhag saare log mujhe ghur rahe the
Main unhein ignore maara
Phir maine apne liye kapde liye
Aur change kar liya
Didi ne payment kiya
Kyunki mera mobile purse sab pata nahi kahan tha
Uske baad hum ghar aagaye
Ghar aaye toh kya dekhta hoon
Komal apni dono beti ke sath aayi hui hai
Daadi aur sheetal ka ro ro ke bura haal ho chuka hai
Main unke paas pahunch gaya
Aur sheetal mujhe dekhte hi mujhse lipatke rone lagi
Daadi bhi mere paas aagayi
Lekin komal aur uski dono beti ke chehre ka rang udd gaya
Mujhe zinda dekhke
Sheetal..yeh keh rahi thi
Ki aap mar gaye
Daadi..nikal jaa yahan se
Daayan kahin ki nikal
Sheetal..mujhe toh meeta ne bataya tha
Main kyun jhuth bolungi
Meeta..main kyun aap se aisa bolne lagi
Mera dimaag kharab hai
Yeh bolke meeta ne mujhe ankh maar diya
Komal ..tum sab se aur ummid bhi kya ki ja sakti hai
Jiski maa randi rahi ho
Bas yahin galti kar di komal ne
Kyunki uske baad uske gaal pe ek thappad pada jo maara tha geeta ne
Are bhai aise hi thodi meri gaand fat rahi thi unse
Geeta..randi toh tu hai
Saali chhinaal
Haram ki jani
72 lund ki
Agar yahan se nahi gayi
Toh tum teeno maa betiyo ko nanga karke maarungi
Ab dekho bhaiya geeta Thi
Karate black belt
Jo woh keh rahi thi woh aisa kar sakti thi
Kyunki komal ke gaal pe uski paancho ungliyo ke nishaan chhap gaye the
Aur komal ko yeh baat pata thi
Woh khoon ka ghunt peeke
Wahan se nikal gayi
Ab maine is liye kuchh nahi kiya
Kyunki ab hum jo karne waale the
Woh kisi ne socha bhi nahi hoga
Kyunki jab se main jaaga tha
Mere dil se dar nikal chuka tha
Chahe woh kisi ka bhi ho
Dimaag mein aise aise plan ban rahe the
Ki bata nahi sakta
Sheetal..are you ok
Main..yep
Aur phir hum sabne sath mein khaana khaaya
Main Apne room mein aagaya
Aur apne plan ke baare mein sochne laga
Ki usmein kya kya loop holes hain
Tabhi geeta mere room mein aagayi
Main..aap yahan kya kar rahi ho
Geeta..main main toh aapko dekhne aayi thi
Main..mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta
Geeta..aap mere man mein jhaank rahe hain
Main..aapko kaise pata
Geeta.. mujhe is liye pata hai
Kyunki mujhe sab kuchh pata hai
Aapke baare mein
Main..lekin kaise
Geeta..main kyun batau
Man mein jhaankiye
Aur jab main dhyan lagake jhaanka
Toh yeh pata chala
Ki jab hospital mein mujhe hosh aaya
Tab meri aankho mein dekhte hi
Geeta ko sab yaad aagaya
Geeta..toh pata chal gaya aapko
Main..iska matlab aap sapno waali geeta ho
Toh phir meri didi kahan hai
Geeta..main hi hoon
Aur didi mat boliye
Main..achcha nahi bolta
Aur geeta mere pairo ke paas baith gayi
Aur phir mere pair dabane lagi
Main..yeh kyun karti ho aap
Geeta..meri marzi
Main..didi
Geeta..bol rahi hoon didi mat boliye
Main..ab aadat hai
Itni jaldi thodi jaayegi
Waise mujhe kab yaad aayega
Sab kuchh
Geeta..jab aapse aapki sab biwi pyar karne lagengi
Main..ab mujhe neend aarahi hai
Geeta..toh so jaaiye
Ab main kya karta meri aadat thi jaldi sone ki
Toh main so gaya
Aur tabhi main pahunch gaya
Apne mehel mein
Ab wahan sirf 9 ladki hi thi
Toh geeta didi gayab ho gayi
Tabhi ek ladki ne apna ghunghat utha diya
Meri aankhein chaundhya gayi
Saali yeh kaun hai
Tabhi woh mere paas aake baith gayi
Haan is baar main dar nahi raha tha
Mera naam ritika hai
Aur main aapki dusri biwi hoon
Main..lekin main aapse kabhi mila hi nahi
Ritika..ab usmein meri galti thodi hai
Aapko mujhe dhundna hoga
Kyunki mere dad ne mera rishta tay kar diya hai
Aur jald hi meri engagement hone waali hai
Main..lekin apna address toh batao
Yaar yeh kya hai
Main kaise dhundunga aapko
Ritika.. don't worry kal jab aap college jaayenge
Toh mujhse mulaqaat ho jaayegi aapki
Yeh bolke woh hansne lagi
Main uske man mein jhaanka
Lekin mujhe kuchh sunayi nahi diya
Ritika..yahan aapki powers kaam nahi karengi
Main..aur agar maine aapko pata liya
Toh mujhe kaunsi power milegi
Ritika..kya matlab hai pata liya
Main..ab hum ladke aise hi baat karte hain
Ritika..yeh sab geeta didi ko pata hai
Ki aapki kaunsi biwi se aapko kaunsi powers milengi
Main..iska matlab unhein yeh bhi pata hoga
Ki meri kaunsi biwi kahan pe hai
Ritika..nahi yeh koi nahi jaanta
Unhein bas mere baare mein pata hai
Aur mujhse aapko kaunsi powers milengi woh pata hai
Main.. theek hai
Subah hote hi pitaji ghar meinAur jaagte hi jo geeta dekh chuki thi
Woh sab mujhe pata chal gaya
Main dauda hua neeche gaya
Aur isse pehle ki papa didi ko ek aur thappad maarte
Main unka hath pakad liya
Main..papa yeh kya hai
Papa..tu hat saamne se
Iski itni himmat ki yeh komal ki gaali degi
Main..usne bhi humari maa ko gaali di thi
Papa..jhuth bolta hai
Aur papa ne mujhe thappad maarne ki koshish ki
Main unka hath pakad liya
Main..dekhiye papa
Galti pe maarenge
Toh maar kha lunga
Lekin kisi aur ke kehne mein aake
Agar aap mujhe maarenge
Toh main maar Nahi khaaunga
Papa..tune mera hath pakda
Apne baap ka hath pakda
Main..are bhai jab aap humein chhodke chale gaye the
Tab yaad nahi aaya aapko
Ki aap humare baap hain
Papa..yeh tune jo kapde pehne hain
Woh mere paiso ke hain
Yeh ghar mera hai
Main..yeh aapka ghar nahi hai
Yeh ghar hai daadi ka
Papa..maa tum padhaare
Aur aav dekha na taav meeta ke gaal pe thappad maarna shuru kar diya
Geeta ne jab yeh dekha
Toh woh meeta ke saamne aagayi
Lekin pitaji ne geeta ko bhi thappad maar diya
Meri aankh khul gayi
Behenchod aisa laga kisi ne mujhe thappad maar diya ho....
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Main utha aur neeche gaya
Jaake dekha
Toh papa geeta pe hath uthane hi waale the
Ki main cheekh pada
Main..agar aap ne hath uthaya
Toh main bhool jaaunga
Ki aap mere pita hain
Papa ne meri taraf dekha
Pehle unhein dekhke main itna darta tha
Ki unke saamne tak nahi aata tha
Lekin aaj mujhe bilkul bhi dar nahi lag raha tha
Ek percent bhi nahi
Papa..lagta hai tum sab bhool gaye ho
Ki is ghar ka maalik main hoon
Aur tum sab ko main hi paal raha hoon
Sharam nahi aayi tumhein apni maa ke sath badtamizi karte hue
Main..kaunsi maa
Humari maa toh kabki mar chuki hai
Aur jise aap maa keh rahe hain
Usne humari maa ko pehle gaali di thi
Agar koi aur aurat ne meri maa ko gaali diya hota
Toh use usi waqt zinda zameen mein gaad deta
Papa..khamosh
Apne baap ke saamne awaj unchi karta hai
Zubaan kheench lunga
Main..aap mere pita nahi hain
Aur na yeh ghar aapka hai
Yeh ghar meri daadi ka hai
Aur wohi humein paal rahi hain
Isi liye yeh baat dobara kehne ki jarurat nahi hai
Ki aap ne humare liye kuchh kiya hai
Ab main jo bola tha
Woh koi chhoti baat toh thi nahi
Toh papa ki jhaantein sulag gayi
Aur woh meri taraf badhne lage
Tabhi main bade gaur se dekhne laga
Unhein
Aaj unhone meri behno pe hath uthake
Apna haq kho diya tha
Aur dekhte hi dekhte main unke dimaag mein ghus gaya
Aur uske baad jo main unhein unke hi dimaag mein dhoya
Jo maara Maine unhein
Jo insaan abhi dahad raha tha
Uski aankho mein mujhe ab khuaf dikh raha tha
Toh yeh baat hai
Geeta se mujhe telepathic powers mili hain
Aur bravery bhi
Lekin phir mujhe ehsaas hua
Ki mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha
Toh main papa ko ghar jaane ko bol diya
Lekin main abhi bhi control kar raha tha
Are bhai meri geeta pe hath uthaya tha
Papa ne
Woh bhi komal ke kehne pe
Zara komal ko bhi toh maza aana Chahiye
Kamal ki baat yeh thi
Ki mujhe yeh sab pata kaise chala
Ki mujhe kaunsi powers mili hain
Ya phir inhein use kaise kiya jaaye
Bas mujhe pata tha
Just like that
Toh papa apni gaadi mein baithke
Komal ke paas pahunch gaye
Abhi bhi main hi unhein control kar raha tha
Pata hai abhi main kya kya kar sakta hoon
Main komal ke sath sex kar sakta hoon
Woh bhi itni berehmi se
Ki woh rehem ki bheekh maangegi
Lekin main aisa karna nahi chahta tha
Kyunki yeh galat hoga
Upar se main geeta se pyar karta hoon
Toh papa ne kiya yeh
Ki komal ke saamne chale gaye
Komal..kya aap ne unhein sabak seekhaya
Uski baat sunte hi papa ne komal ko ek jordaar thappad maara
Ab maar toh main hi raha tha
Lekin sharir toh papa ka tha
Thappad khaate hi komal ko bahut bada jhatka laga
Komal..aap mujhe kyun maar rahe hain
Papa..teri itni himmat
Tu meri anjali ko randi bolegi
Ab tu dekh main kya karta hoon
Sabse pehle main tujhe talak dunga
Uske baad tujhe aur teri betiyo ko ghar se nikaalunga
Komal..sàale kutte
Shayad tu bhool gaya
Ki tu mera ghulam hai
Yaad hai kaise tune apne dost ka khoon kiya tha
Aur uski photo aaj bhi mere paas hai
Agar woh police ko mil gayi
Toh tujhe fansi hogi
Fansi
Ab main kaunsa papa ke past mein jhaanka tha
Mujhe toh bas unke present thoughts pata the
Aur tabhi main papa ki un yaado mein jhankne laga
Jinmein mujhe woh pal dikha
Jab papa Mummy ki death ke baad ek dum toot chuke the
Aur phir ek din unka dost ramesh aaya
Jiske sath baithke woh sharab peene lage
Tabhi ramesh ne mummy ke baare mein galat bolna shuru kar diya
Jis wajah se papa ko gussa aagaya
Aur unhone uska khoon kar diya
Aur phir woh behosh ho gaye
Lekin jab unhein hosh aaya
Toh unke saamne komal baithi hui thi
Komal ne papa ke saamne photo rakh di
Aur phir unse kaha
Ki aaj se main jo bolungi
Tum wohi karoge
Uske baad komal papa ko nachati gayi
Aur papa naachte gaye
Are bhai papa ko jaan ka dar nahi tha
Unhein bas apne khandaan ki izzat pyari thi
Kyunki papa ka raaz agar kisi ko pata chal jaata
Toh unke kul ki izzat mitti mein mil jaati
Mujhe bada gussa aaya
Yeh sab jaanke
Aur phir papa ne komal ko thappad maar diya
Par meri powers ki bhi ek seema thi
Main ek time mein kisi ek pe hi apni power's use kar sakta tha
Matlab abhi main papa ko control kar raha tha
Isi liye main komal ko abhi control nahi kar sakta tha
Yeh geeta didi toh kamal nikli
Baap re Baap aisi power
Thi unke andar
Toh maine socha kyun na komal ko baandh diya jaaye
Aur phir main wahan pahunchke komal se pata kar loon
Ki woh photos usne kahan chhipayi hain
Phir kya tha
Main pahunch gaya.uske ghar
Aur phir main papa ko sula diya
Woh so gaye
Komal bed pe bandhi padi thi
Uske hath pair bandhe hue the
Aur munh mein kapda thunsa hua tha
Bas main uske paas baith gaya
Aur phir main uske dimaag mein ghus gaya
Aur phir main pata laga liya
Ki komal ne yeh sab kyun kiya
Aur mujhe jo baat pata chali
Use jaanke main dang reh gaya
Komal ki maa ka mere daada ne rape kiya tha
Aur komal mere papa ki sauteli behen thi
Woh yeh sab badla lene ke liye kar rahi thi
Use bas mere papa ko barbaad karna tha
Lekin mera daada jo tha
Woh bahut bada harami tha
Usne kya kiya
Aisi wasiyat tayyar ki
Jismein likha tha
Ki uske marte hi uski property papa ki ho jaayegi
Lekin papa woh sab kisi aur ke naam nahi kar sakte
Jab unka pota 21 saal ka ho jaayega
Tab saari property unke pote ke naam ho jaayegi
Aur yeh sab aise hi chalta rahega
Toh isi liye komal papa ko na maar Saki
Aur ab uska plan tha
Ki jab main 21 saal ka ho jaaun.toh phir woh papa ko jail bhijwa deti
Aur phir mujhe apne ishaaro pe nachati
Blackmail karke
Ki maine uska rape kiya hai
Aur Woh aise hota
Ki ek din woh mujhe Apne ghar bulati
Aur phir mujhe sex tablet khila deti
Kisi cheez mein milake
Aur phir main uske sath zabardasti karta
Yeh sab camera mein record ho jaata
Baaki toh samajh mein aahi gaya hoga
Uske baad mujhe woh jagah bhi pata chal gayi
Jahan woh photo ek pendrive mein thi
Toh main us jagah pe gaya
Woh pendrive nikaala
Aur use komal ke saamne hi tod diya
Komal rone lagi
Ab mujhe pata tha
Ki komal ko daada ne nahi apnaya
Par main Apne daada jaisa nahi tha
Main...toh aapka khel khatam ho gaya
Ab aapke paas do raaste hain
Pehla aap mere ghar mein sabse maafi maango
Aur Zindagi bhar mere papa aur daadi ki seva karo
Dusra raasta yeh hai
Ki main aapke hatho
Aapki dono betiyo ka khoon karwaunga
Aur woh sab record karke police ko de dunga
Yeh bolke main komal ke munh se kapda nikaal diya
Komal.. main tayyar hoon
Par mujhe pata tha
Ki komal jhuth bol rahi hai
Toh phir main komal ko control kiya
Aur phir usne apni dono betiyo ko ghar pe bulaya
Woh dono raaste mein thi
Main papa ko control kiya
Aur woh dusre room mein jaake gehri neend mein so gaye
Kuchh der baad Anuradha. Aur Pooja
Room mein ghusi bas maine pooja
Ko sula diya
Aur Anuradha ko control kar liya
Main..ab aapki badi beti aapki chhoti beti ka khoon karegi
Kyunki aap toh apna badla bhulogi nahi
Yeh sunte hi Komal Anuradha ko cheekh cheekh ke awaj dene lagi
Anuradha kitchen mein gayi
Wahan se chaaku leke aayi
Aur chaaku ki nok se pooja ki Gardan pe rakh di
Main..dekho main isse bhi bura kar sakta hoon
Chahu toh aap sab maa betiyo ko control karke
Bahut kuchh kar sakta hoon
Ab agar aap Aapne dil se apna badla Nahi nikaala
Toh pehle aapki chhoti beti maregi
Uske baad woh jail jaayegi
Aur gawahi aap khud dogi
Anuradha ke khilaaf.....