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Fantasy El Meren - The Sorcerous Virtuoso [ Incest | Magic | Multi-Dimension | Sci-fi ]
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ह्या कथेतील कदाचित मी दोन तीन भाग वाचलेले... खूप छान लिहिली होती कथा.... पण अपूर्ण राहिल्यामुळे रसच निघून गेला... आणि आता ती तुम्ही पुन्हा लिहीत आहात हे वाचून आनंद झाला... पण मित्रा.. निदान रोज एक भाग देत जा... धन्यवाद
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Nice and beautiful starting of the story.....
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Vol. 1 "Diabolic Resurrection"
Chapter 1 : The Mystique Within
-Awakening To The Arcane: Part 1-
Chapter 1 : The Mystique Within
-Awakening To The Arcane: Part 1-
"Ente D'Fyer....... Ente D'Fyer" subah ke 7 baje adhi adhrui Nind mein so rahi Nilam baar baar halke swaro mein in shabdo ko dohra rahi thi, tabhi uski nind uske Bhai Neel ne tod di. Nilam zor zor se Saanse lete hue uthkar beth gayi.
Tabb Neel ne us se pucha "mila koi jawab?"
"Kesa jawab" Nilam ne pucha
Neel Bed se uthkar parde kholte hue keh deta hai "unhi shabdo ka jawab jo tum nind mein dorahti rehti ho" uski baat sunkar Nilam samajh gayi ke wo fir se sapno mein kho chuki thi, usne bina koi jawab diye bass apne mathe par haath rakh liye.
Tabb Neel akar uske paas betha aur kaha "ab itna sochne ki koi zarurat nahi hai, chalo tayar ho jao college jane se pehle aaj tumhari Dr. Sumitra ke saath......"
Jabtak Neel apni Baat puri karta, us se pehle hi Nilam Gusse mein use jawab de deti hai "Ha janti hu, nahi bhuli.... Tum sab kabhi bhulne bhi dete ho mujhe ki mai pagal hu"
Uska Gussa dekh kar Neel uske haath thamna chahta tha, lekin uske pehle hi Nilam Gusse mein bathroom mein ghuskar door band kar deti hai. Neel nirash sa hokar niche Dining room mein akar beth gaya jaha uski Maa Jyoti Nashta bana rahi thi, lekin Neel ka chehra dekh kar wo samajh gayi ke zarur Nilam ne use kuch keh diya hoga.
Jyoti nashte ki plate lekar Neel ke samne rakh deti hai, aur uske sar par haath ferte hue kehti hai "kya hua aaj?"
Neel Normal rehkar Uske sawal ka jawab deta hue kehta hai "Kuch bhi to nahi Maa"
Lekin Jyoti bhi to uski Maa thi "Jhuta" wo haste hue kehti hai.
"Maa, kuch baate hoti hai jo sirf Bestfriend ke bich rehti hai...."
"Accha, maan leti hu.... Lekin Neel kabhi bade Bhai ki tarah pesh aao us se, warna aise ulte pulte jawab deti rahegi wo"
Jyoti ki baat par Neel thoda rukhe swaro mein kehta hai "Maa, har koi to uske saath bada hokar hi baat karta hai, agar mai bhi waise hi us se pesh aau to wo kis se apni Problems share kare?"
Jyoti use shant karate hue kehti hai "Accha tum apna Mood kharab matt karo, uth to gayi na maharani?"
"Haa uth gayi"
Kuch der mai Nilam tayar hokar niche agayi aur Neel ke bagal mein beth kar Breakfast karne lagi. Dono breakfast kar ke Neel ki gadi mein bethkar Psychiatric Dr. Sumitra ke paas nikal jate hai, sare raste Nilam apna Muh fula kar bethi hui thi, Neel ko bhi aaj bura laga jis tarah Nilam ne use behave kiya. Thodi der baad dono waha pahoch gaye Nilam Dr. Ke saath ek Room mein chali gayi.
Dr. Sumitra batchit ki shuruwat karte hue kehti hai "Good Morning Nilam, kesi ho tum?"
Nilam ne koi jawab nahi diya, aur bass apne khayalo mein khoyi rahi.
"Aaj bhi sapna hi aya?"
Dr. Ki baat par Nilam Frustrated hokar kehti hai "Dr. Aapne kaha tha samay ke saath ye sab kam ho jayega, lekin ye sab badh raha hai.... Ab to baar baar sapne arahe hai, pehle to bass shhor sunayi deta tha, shabd sunayi dete the, par ab to...."
Fir Dr. Us se puchti hai "ab to.... Batao Nilam"
Nilam jawab dete hue kehti hai "Dhire dhire ye sapne saaf ho rahe hai, chehra dikhayi de raha hai"
Dr. Sumitra puchti hai "aur yeh kabse hua?"
Tabb Nilam wo sab yaad karte hue thoda darr kar jawab deti hai "2-3 din pehle aise hi sapno mein ho rahe shor ke bich kisi ke chehre dikh rahi the, jo.... Jo meri taraf dekh rahe the...."
Dr. Nilam ke chehre par chaya darr saaf dekh sakti thi, isliye usne Nilam ke kandhe par haath rakhte hue kaha "darne ki baat nahi hai Nilam, ye sirf sapne hai... Asal Zindagi mein tumhe koi bhi nuksan nahi pohocha sakta"
Kuch der takk Dr. Aur Nilam session mein bethe the, Neel bahar betha newspaper padh rah tha. Tabb Nilam bahar agayi, aur wo dono gadi mein bethkar Nilam ke College nikal gaye.
Khamoshi ko todne ke liye Neel ne Nilam se pucha "kesa raha session?"
Nilam bina us se nazre milaye jawab deti hai "thik tha"
Aur uske baad fir se wahi Khamosh.
Kuch der baad College ke gate ke paas pohoch kar Neel kehta hai "Lene ajaunga"
Fir Nilam utarne se pehle kas kar Neel ko hug kar leti, jispar Neel bhi Muskurate hue uske sar pe haath ferne lagg jata hai.
Nilam apni bhigi palko ke saath Neel se kehti hai "I'm sorry Bhai.... Mujhe pata nahi kya ho jata hai aur mai...."
Neel Uski baat bich mai kaat ta hua kehta hai "maine kuch kaha tumse? To maafi kyu mang rahi ho?"
Tabb Nilam us se alag hokar kehti hai "maine galat tarike se baat ki tumse"
Neel uske aansu saaf karte hue kehta hai "chalo ye aansu matt bahao subha subah, janti ho na mujhe nafrat hai tumhari aakho mein ane wale ansuo se"
Uski baat par Nilam Haa mein sar hilate hue muskura deti hai aur Neel use Gaal par kiss kar deta hai. Nilam gadi se utar kar gate ke andar agayi, or jakar apni class me chali gayi.
Dusri taraf Neel Factory par chala jata hai, darasal Neel ke dadaji ne is Factory ki shuruwat ki thi jaha par Heavy Duty Machinery banti thi, aur is Factory ko aage Neel ke Papa Virendra Mehta ne badhaya. Aur ab Neel bhi akar yaha uske Papa ka kaam mein haath bata deta hai.
Dopeher ke waqt Neel apna rozana kaam kar Raha tha, factory me sari chizo ka inspection ke waqt achanak se Neel ka sar dard karne lagg gaya, wo turant apne cabin me akar Doctor ki di dawai kha leta hai, kuch waqt me uska sar dard Kam ho gaya or wo fir se apne kaamo me lagg gaya.
Apna Sara kaam khatam karne ke baad Neel ne waqt dekha ke Nilam ki chutti hone wali he, is liye wo kuch der pehle hi Nilam ko lene nikal gaya
College ki chutti hote hi Nilam gate ke paas akar Neel ka intezar kar rahi thi, ke tabhi piche se Neel ki Girlfriend Shruti agayi aur Nilam ke bagal mein khade hokar kaha "Hey Nilam, kesi ho?"
Uska awaz sunkar Nilam ka mood hi kharab ho gaya, usne rukha sa jawab dete hue kaha "Mein thik hu"
"Neel Bahot wait karwata hai na? Mere saath bhi aise hi karta hai" Shruti ne muh banate hue kaha.
Nilam bhi use turant jawab dete hue kehti hai "kyu ke Bhai humari tarah khali to nahi hai na, kaam hote hai use"
Is choti si batchit se aap samajh chuke honge, ke Nilam ko Shruti kuch khas pasand nahi thi. Wo humesha apne bhai ko andar andar se kosti thi is ladki ko apni Girlfriend banane ke liye. Dono jabtak baate kar rahi thi, tabhi Neel waha agaya wo Shruti ko dekh kar gadi se bahar agaya use dekhte hi Shruti kas kar Hug kar deti hai.
Shruti Neel ko hug karte hue kehti hai "Ohh Baby, kal mere ek message ka Reply nahi diya tumne... tumhe Kitna miss kiya maine"
Neel bhi Shruti ko Hug kar ke us se alag hote hue kehta hai "maine pehle hi bataya tha na, Nilam ke saath ja raha hu to kisi ka call nahi uthaunga na messages ka reply dunga...."
Uski baat par Shruti Muskurate hue Nilam se irsha jatate hue kehti hai "dekha Nilam..... Mai na is mamle mein tumse Bahot jealous hoti hu"
Jab bhi Shruti Nilam se jealous hoti to Nilam ko bahot khushi milti thi, wo aage akar Neel ka haath thamkar use gadi ke paas le gayi aur dono Shruti ko bye kehkar waha se chale gaye.
"Ek baat batana Bhai.... Tumhe iske alawa koi aur nahi mili?" Gadi mein beth te hi Nilam apne roz ke raag gana shuru kar deti hai.
Neel bhi haste hue Nilam se kehta hai "Tum kaho to abhi chhor deta hu use...."
Lekin uski baat par Neelam koi jawab nahi deti aur apna Muh fulaye beth jati hai.
"C'mon yaar Neelam Shruti janbujh kar tumhe satati hai, lekin mai janta hu na wo kitni parwah karti hai tumhari"
Nilam bhi bass muh fulaye kehti hai "Parwah karne wali wo kon hoti hai"
Uski baat par Neel hass padta hai aur kehta hai "kon hoti hai matlab? Bhabi hoti hai tumhari"
Neel ke muh se Shruti ke liye ye sunkar Nilam ka para hi chadd gaya "aap khushi khushi shadi kar lena us se me kon hoti hu rokne wali, lekin mai kabhi use ye Bhabhi kehkar nahi pukarne wali"
Neel uska Gussa dekh kar mann hi mann hass raha tha fir usne Nilam ko shant karte hue kaha "accha bhai maaf kar do..... Hum ek deal karte hai, tum Shruti ke saath dhang se pesh ana, aur agar tum dono mein fir bhi nahi bani to mai use chhor dunga"
Jitni aram se Neel ne ye baat kahi wo dekh ek pal ko Nilam bhi heran ho gayi aur usne Neel se pucha "tum mazak kar rahe ho na?"
Neel muskurate hue Nilam se kehta hai "mazak? Mai mazak kyu karunga? Tum janti ho ke mere liye tum se zyada zaruri aur koi bhi nahi hai"
Uski baat par Nilam ke chehre par behadd pyari muskurahat agayi, use mann hi mann bahot accha lagta tha ke koi uski itni parwah kare. Subah se jo Nilam ka mood kharab tha wo ab kahi jakar thik ho gaya, dono hasi mazak karte hue apne ghar chale gaye.
Is hasi mazak bhare pyare rishte se milo dur ek rahasya mayi jagah par hazaro ki fauj thi, wo is insano jese to the, lekin puri tarah nahi lekin wo hazaro hone ke bawajud unhe dekh kar lagg raha tha ke ye bilkul bebas hai. Tabhi ek aadmi jo puri tarah se insan hi tha wo samne bane smarak ke paas ajata hai, aur waha ek nishan bana deta hai "∆∆∆" darasal yeh nishan prachin basha ke samay ank ke taur par istemal kiye jate the. Aur ∆∆∆ matlab tha 999
"999 saal ho chuke hai, ek hazar saal pure hone ke baad hum azad honge.... Humare devtao ka maksad pura karne ke liye. Varsho se chalta araha Yuddh, jisme haar kar humari sena Devtao ko nirash kar deti hai, lekin is baar ki sena jitegi kyu ki ye Yuddh aakhri Yuddh hoga"
Us insan ki baat par puri sena mai josh bhar gaya, aur sab ek saath zor zor se chilla rahe the "Ente D'zyer.... Ente D'zyer"
Shaam ke 7 baje hue the, Nilam apne college ki ek Dost ke saath bahar shopping kar rahi thi. Jab wo dono shopping kar ke Parking me aye, to waha koi aadmi ek aurat par chilla Raha tha, dono ko laga ke shayad ye bass koi behes hogi isliye dono aage chali gayi lekin tabhi us Aurat ki dard bhari chink me Nilam ko piche mudne par majbur kar diya, darasal aadmi me us aurat ko zor se thappad maara or wo aurat apne jagah se kuch dur gir gayi. Nilam behadd gusse me waha gayi or us aadmi ke bich me akar usko us aurat ke nazdeek ane se rok liya or khud us Aurat ko uthane lagi. Wo aadmi to waha se nikal gaya lekin Nilam ne jese tese us Aurat ko thoda comfortable Kiya or khud bhi waha se chali gayi. Lekin Nilam ko abtak us aadmi par behadd gussa araha tha, jese hi Nilam or uski dost raste at aage aye Nilam ki Nazar raste ke kinare ek ped ar gayi, jaha behadd log jama hue the, or us ped ki tehniyo par wahi aadmi latka hua tha jisme abhi abhi Parking me us Aurat par haath uthaya. Nilam us aadmi ki halat dekh chaunk gayi, kyu ke us ped ki daliya aadmi ke chati, or pet me aar paar Hui thi. Lekin ye sab dekh pata nahi kyu, Nilam ko sukoon sa feel ho Raha tha.
Lekin tabhi Nilam ki dost ekdum se Nilam ko pakad kar kehti he "Nilam...... Ye tumhare haath me khun..... Tumhe chot lagi he?"
Uski baat sunkar Nilam apna haath dekhti he jisme thoda khun laga hua tha, Nilam jaldi se us khun ko saaf kar deti he lekin tajub ki baat ye thi ki uske haath me koi chot nahi thi. Ab ye dekh Nilam khud heran thi. Jese tese wo bass ghar akar nind ki dawai lekar so gayi.
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