• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy Emperor, Rule out Darkness:

Is the story of Emperor going good? Should I continue it? Choose after reading.

  • Yes?

    Votes: 32 97.0%
  • No?

    Votes: 1 3.0%

  • Total voters
    33

Had

A land seeker lost in the oceans of fire.
496
1,267
124
the update-37 is posted
 

dev61901

" Never let an old flame burn you twice "
1,555
3,213
143
Bahut hi badhiya update bro

Sad ko ab sab kucch dekhne laga ha uski jindagi ka wo darkness hat gaya ha lekin wo abhi kisi ko batana nahi chahta sahi bhi ha jo maja surprise me ha wo isme kahan bas iske chakkar me haya to sad ko abhi tak blind hi samajhti ha to isse kuchh aisa wasa na ho jaye ki sad ko jannat ke darshan ho jaye 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 you know what i mean

Sad ko ab apna first mission milne wala ha dekhte han ki wo kya hota ha ab maja ane wala ha story me

Waiting for next update bro

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
 

Had

A land seeker lost in the oceans of fire.
496
1,267
124
Bahut hi badhiya update bro

Sad ko ab sab kucch dekhne laga ha uski jindagi ka wo darkness hat gaya ha lekin wo abhi kisi ko batana nahi chahta sahi bhi ha jo maja surprise me ha wo isme kahan bas iske chakkar me haya to sad ko abhi tak blind hi samajhti ha to isse kuchh aisa wasa na ho jaye ki sad ko jannat ke darshan ho jaye 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 you know what i mean

Sad ko ab apna first mission milne wala ha dekhte han ki wo kya hota ha ab maja ane wala ha story me

Waiting for next update bro

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Bilkul bro bus shuru hogi hi story.
Appki support ka thanks
Her dafa ke terha.
 

big king

Active Member
621
1,092
123
Update-10:

Under the Shades:


Abi tak Emperor ke kahani may:



MONA: hmmm, yea rondo baby mat bana karo please.



Mainframe system ke kuch to respect kerlo yar.



Smiles.



Sad: smiles, MONA, tum bohot buri ho.



MONA: acha? To gift wapis lay lu?



Sad: nahi, nahiii, bohot achiii ho yar.



Sorry.



MONA: smiles.



Tab he,



Saaad, mujay bat kerni hi tumsay.





Now next:





Sad’s residence,



Time is 8:32AM



Dining table per anum or Mr. Khan ke breakfast kay sath sath, he aik kafi important discussion chal rahi thy.



Mr. khan: bayta kia koi b solution nahi hi sad ke injury ka?



Waysay to meray aik Orthopedic friend say meri aj meeting hi, about his state.



Anum: chachu actually, wo arm normally fracture nahi hua hi.

Hamay nahi pata kay sad ke kon kon see vein dislodge hui hi.



Also, uski arm bilkul b respond nahi ker rahi.



Teen major joint points wali jago say crack hui hi wo.



Shuker hi kay blood flow jam nahi hua, werna chachu sad ke life b---.

I am so sorry chachu

Bus jo hota hi wo achay kay lia hota hi.



App please sad say puchay kay kia hua tha perso?



Mujay to wo kuch sahi say bata he nahi raha.





Mr. khan: hmm, yea to mujay pata hi.



Bayta mujay b usnay kuch teek say nahi bataya.



Kehta hi kay usko kuch yad nahi.



Anum: same bat mujay b kahi hi usnay chachu.



Maybe usko such may kuch yad nahi?



Chachu app please pata zarur lagwaiya ga kay wo log kon thay or unho nay sad ko kiu mara aysay?



Mujay b yea koi normal incident nahi lagta.



Wo b siraf do din may he?

Mr. khan: bayta mujay b nahi samaj aari kay sad kay sath kissy nay itni buri terha dushmani nikali b to kiss bat ke.



Wo to kabbi b bahir nahi ladta.



Jo b tha kafi brutal mindset ka malik hi.



Anum: for sure!,



App bilkul sahi keh rahay hi.





Mr. khan: waysay what you think kay kon ho sakta hi?





Anum: chachu, jo b tha kafi violent tha. Sad kafi suffer ker chuka hi.



Aik to uski nazer, wo I mean kay aik wo b masla hi or ab uska left arm b totally dismantle ho chuka hi.



Mr. khan: hmmm!,



bayta! yea b uska aik exam he hi.



Don’t worry, I know kay wo isko b go through ker lay ga.



Anum: chachu, waysay aj may b apnay hospital kay Orthopedic surgeon say bat karu gie.



Hopefully kuch nah kuch to ho jai ga.





App tense mat ho.



Ok?





Mr. khan: hmmm, thank you bayta.



Waysay, yea meri haya bayti kider hi aj?





Abhi uthi nahi hi kia?



Anum: um, chachu wo, shaid kal late soii thy.



Is lia so rahi hi abi tak.



Mr. khan: kiu?



Late kiu soii thy?



Tabiet to teek hi nah uski?



Anum: hum, dil may, (shaid dimag kharab hora hi aj kal uska).



Mr. khan: anum?



Anum: um, gg chachu?



Mr. khan: may yea kehra tha kay?

Tum tayar ho jao to!



aj hospital may drop kerdu?



Anum: is may b koi puchnay ke bat hi my dear chachu.



Bus 2 minutes may abi ready ho ker aii.



Mr. khan: hmm!



Ok may wait ker raha hu.



Anum: hum, bus abhi aii.



Kehtay he anum uthi or staircase ke teraf chali gai.



Mr. khan apnay khayalo may he ulajh kay soch rahay thay.



get well soon sad,



May haar nahi manu ga.



Chahay iskay lia kuch b kerna paray mujay.



Maynay tumay nahi chora my son.



Bus mujay, snif!, mujay yea dikhana nahi ata.



Tab b nahi dikha paya or abi b nahi dikha sakta.



Snif!!



Kal kay din, wo words tumharay bohot hard thay bayta.



I will try,



Yes, sad I will try.



Snif!



Tumay b haarna nahi hi.



Fight bayta,



Snif!



Fight your way out of this too.



We are together in this.





Wahi upper walay floor per,



Anum jaysay he corridor may pohnchi



Tab he







bam!



!



Urg!!!



Anum: hayaa?



Paggel ho gi ho kia tum?



Daykh kay nahi chal sakti?



Haya: wo appi, I I am sorry.



Maynay appko daykha nahi.



Anum: yea itny jaldi kider ja rahi thy?



Yea kia ho gaya hi tumay kuch dino say?



Bolo gi kuch?



May is cheez ko kafi note ker rahi hu haya.



Don’t disappoint me.



Samjhi?



Agger mujay pata chala kay tum kissy galat teraf ja rahi ho to!



you know me.



Haya: ufho appi, subha subha ap b nah!.



Please side per hatay.



Mera mood bohot acha hi.





Please mujay kernay day jo b may kerti hu.



Apna acha bura samajti hu.



Bachi nahi hu ab.



Meri mama mat bana karay ok?



Ab hatay please.







Anum: siraf haya ko sun or daykhty ja rahi thy.



Kia yea wo he haya thi jo kal bacho ke terha anum say lipty hui thy?



Yea uska attitude aikdum say itna change kaysay ho gaya.



Saaaad,



I will kill youu!,



aj faisla ho ker he rahay ga.





Ghusy may jalti hui anum sad kay room ke teraf mud gai.



Or derwazay per hath mar ker,



Slam!



Saaad, mujay kuch bat kerni hi tumsay.



Abiii.



Sad: chonk ker jaysay he apni ankho ko uthata hi to uskay samnay,



Waqat jaysay ruk sa jata hi.



Aik khubsuret se lerki apnay pink gown, lambay khulay kalay balo, Masoom say cheray, or katilana expression may baycharay sad ko aik fresh rose lag rahi thy.



Ma!, MONA,



MONA: ha bolo?

Sad: kia yea



Anum appi hi ya haya?



Please batao kay!



Ye, yea kon hi?



MONA: hum, nice question,



Mujay kia pata?



tum daykh saktay ho ab.



so khud he jano.



Sad: MONAAA, pleaseee.



MONA: oh baby,



You are so gentle at times.



Per is bar may nahi bata rahi.







Sad: wait a minute,



MONA!



MONA: huh?



Sad: check her now.



MONA: finally,



Ding:

Aik checkbox sad kay samnay khul gaya tha.



Sad: oh!





Name: Anum Tarik Khan:



Age: 27 years and 5 months:



Marital status: single.



Profession: Doctor, child specialist.



Favorability: 40/150, a cousin to sad khan.



Intentional approach: furious on sad because of haya Tarik khan, her little sister.



Anum: apni kamer per aik hath rakh kay.



Tum answer karo gay mujay yah aysay he chup ker kay baytna hi?



Sad: wo nahi, app yaha?



Itni subha?



Anum: huh, subha my foot!.



Tumara kia chal raha hi haya kay sath?



Answer meee,



Sad: whaat?



Dil may, (MONA kahi inko kal wali bat pata to nahi chal gai?)



MONA: don’t know.



Sad: hum!.



Mujay nahi pata app kia bol rahi hi.



Anum: bholly mat bano sad.



Mujay siraf such batao.



Sad: bol chuka hu.



Now if you can excuse me please!,



Mujay breakfast kerna hi.



Kindly jatay huay gb ko bhayj dee jia ga.



Thank you.



MONA: not bad baby.



Sad: she deserves this.



Anum: humf, fine nah batao but may jan ker he rahu gi.



Get this.



Sad: good luck with that.



Anum: dil may, (dayk lu gi tum dono ko may.



Nahi to mera b nam anum nahi.)



Jatay huay anum thrush ke awaz kay sath derwaza band ker kay bahir nikel aii.



Sad: feuu, thank God chali gai.



MONA: hmmm, but bohot acha turnover lia hi baby.



I am highly impressed.



Smiles!.



Sad: MONA kuch questions hi meray?



MONA: hmmm, ask me.



Ding: anum’s favorability dropped to 35/150.



Status now, grudge holding cousin



Sad: whaat?



MONA: she is angry.



Sad: MONA yea favorability ka kia scene hi?



MONA: yea tumhari affiliation status bar hi.



People are ranked out of 150.



Jo jitna close hi tumharay utna he ziada percentage hoga uska.



Abi anum ka 35% hua, 40 say nichay aya hi to system nay uski identity grudge holding cousin update ker dee hi.



Even kay jinky favorability under 30% hogi wo enemies, strangers, yah threat kay status say rank or lable hongay.



Sad: oh, that’s really great.



MONA: obviously,



Sad: acha! Or jo major skills wala section hi usmay 0/0 kiu hi abi?



MONA: first kiu kay system abi level 1 per hi.



Or second, Major skills points say purchase hoty hi.



Sad: oh?



MONA: ha, or they are not cheap at all, just like me. Smiles,



Sad: acha acha, sahi hi bai.



MONA: now your sight is back to kia kerna chaho gay?



Mr. khan ko batao nah.



Afterall, he is your father.



Sad: hmmm, nahi MONA, pehlay may apni blind halat may unkay status kay kabil ban jau phir batau ga.



Waysay b itna tang kia hi logo nay ab mera b thora haq banta hi nah?



MONA: hmmm, per bhulna mat.



You cannot hurt innocent ones.



Sad: I know, thank you MONA.



MONA: kiss lia?



Sad: meri friendship may itna kuch kernay kay lia.



MONA: blushes, bus bus, itna b sweet mat bano baby.



Sad: hmmm, to kitna banu?



MONA: mujsay kia puchtay ho.



Jao haya say pucho nah.



She knows that very well.



Smiles.



Sad: huh?



Ta tum janti ho it was her force.



MONA: ha but you got 10 points for that nah?



Iska matlab tum b feel ker rahay thay same same.



Sad: was i?



Really?



Apnay lips ko touch kertay huay.



Tha that was!



MONA: listen baby.



You have 30 points.



Sad: to?



MONA: you can spend them in your personality.



Sad: jaysay kay?



MONA: like, your appearance, aptitude, fortitude, agility, yah strength.



You have to improve to complete missions, you know!?



Sad: right.



Ab samjha.



MONA: shuker hi kuch to samjay.



Sad: so kiss may karay add points?



MONA: see,

Shaid tum kafi soft rahay ho kiu kay of your blindness.



But now, you can see.



To improve it!



Sad: so add points to it.



MONA: kitnay karu?



In level one you can spend maximum 10 points to any of these categories.



Sad: only 10?



That’s very uncool.



MONA: level kay sath limit through hogi.



Sad: ok! MONA, agility may 10 add kerdo.



MONA: ker dayti hu per tumhari body isko aikdum adapt nahi keray gi.



Sad: huh?



MONA: her human body cheezo ko accept time kay sath kerti hi.



Its natural.



Sad: to kitna time lagay ga?



MONA: let me calculate.



Ding: 5 hours and 48 minutes.



Exactly utna time jitna tumhari eyes ko heal hony may laga.



Sad: hmmm, ok yea teek hi.



Add kerdo.



MONA: okie!.



Ding: 10 points added to agility,



Sad khan’s agility now 12/200.



Ding: you have 20 points now.



MONA: ab kiss may?



Sad: add 5 to strength,



MONA: ok?



Ding: 5 points added to strength.



Sad khan’s strength now 22/200.





Ding: you have 15 points now.



Sad: that’s enough for now.



MONA: appearance may nahi kernay?



Sad: teek to dikhta hu or kia karu?



MONA: yeah, right.



Sad: last question?



MONA: hmm, hmmm,



Sad: mujay missions kab kab milay gay?



MONA: its unpredictable,



Kabbi b ho sakta hi.



Situation matter keray gi.



So!



Sad: ok, understood.



I will wait for my first mission then.



MONA: excited ho?



Sad: hum, per kia ker sakta hu may is dead arm kay sath?



MONA: where there is a strong will; there will surely be a bright way for you baby.



Sad: hope so MONA:



wo dono yea bat ker he rahay thy kay tab he,



a knock, thug! Thug!,








xxx university,



time is 9:12AM.



Xxx block,



Room no-5,



Aik pyari see bold lerki apnay formal decent dresscoat may heels pehnay huay enter hui.



Puri class students ke bato say Bizz! Buz! Ker rahi thy.



Lerka-1: daykh yar hamari mal madam aa gai hi.



Lerki-1: aj b miss bohot cute lag rahi hi.



Smiles,



Lerka-2: cute nahi,



Tota lag rahi hi yea to is black roop may yar.



Sees!,



Kitna lucky hoga wo jo bajai ga isko.



Lerkay: isko ya iski?



Lerka-2: wo he, yar.



Hahah,



Tanya: guys silence please?



Class: ok madaaam.



Tanya: thora soch ker or ide ruder apni nazer puri class may ghooma ker.



Um, kia kissy ko sad khan ka kuch pata hi?



He is absent for 2 days now?



Zan: apnay desk may khara ho ker.



Miss I guess, wo shaid university chore gaya hi?



Tanya: huh?



Suddenly?



Per aysa kia hua?



Zan: miss I don’t know,



Maynay uskay kissy relative ko yea HOD ko kehtay huay suna tha.



Tanya: you sure?



Zan: yeah, likewise.



Humhum,



Uzma: Pichay mud ker,



Listen zan?



Seriously wo chore gaya?



Zan: hmm?



Ha lagta to hi.



Waysay b wo deserve he nahi kerta tha yaha stay kerna yar.



Uzma: why?



Zan: um, because of his blindness.



Shaid uski family nay kuch or socha hoga uskay lia.



Uzma: hmmm, right.



Dil may, (why he left yar).



Zan: uzma?



Uzma: ha? Bolo?



Zan: can you share your notes with me?



I mean classes kay bad?



If you feel fine.



Uzma: um, yeah.



Sure.



I will.



Zan: great yar.



Thanks so much.



Uzma: smiles.



No worries.




Thori dare bad,



Room no-2



Professor Aleem Shujah class may aah ker kuch soch rahay thay.



Lerka: sir?



App teek hi?



Prof shujah: ah, nahi kuch nahi.



Lerka: you sure sir?



Prof shujah: listen to me class?



Class: gee, sir!.



Prof shujah: guys abi may appkay HOD kay sath tha.



Mujay yea pata chala hi kay appkay classmate sad khan kay sath perso after classes ider university may he kuch complecated hua hi.



He is on bedrest now.



Do remember him in your special wishes.



Uzma: oh, per kia hua hoga usko.



Zan: kuch to hua hoga. Hmmm, so bedrest ha?



Uzma: kia lagta hi tumay?



Zan: hum, don’t know. Smiles.



Let him come to university again.



Uzma: hum, kia matlab?



Zan: um, nothing just hoping for his recovery.



Uzma: oh, ok.








Dusri teraf university kay park may,



Aik lerki apnay white scarf, blue dress may, apnay bag ko side may rakh ker baythi hui thi.



Uskay cheray ke smile uskay roop ko or ziada nikhar rahi thy.



Yar kinza wo kia tha, blushes!,



Kal rat siraf uskay messages he nay kia jadu kia mujper yar.



I shared my picture with him.



Or wo b in that only.



Hai, pp per may kaysay trust ker sakti hu us per wo b aikdum say he.



Zan what you have done to me yar.



I miss you.



Usnay yea he sochtay huay apna phone nikala or type kia.



Where are you?



Uni ai ho?



Can we meet?



Please?



Reply soon!.







Wo yea likh ker ruki he thi kay achanek-------






Sad’s residence,



Sad: kon hi?



Voice: sad, kia uth gay ho?



May nashta lait hi?



Kia may ander aah jau?



Please,



MONA: she is caring for you ha?



Sad: maybe pretending.



MONA: cover your eyes nahi to kissy ko shak ho jai ga.



Sad: right, aik minute.



Usnay apnay right hand say bed ka side case khola, squish!,



Found it,



Kehtay huay he usnay apnay hath ko drawer say bahir nikala or uskay hath may thy,



A shiny black shades.



MONA: its good.



Sad: yea meri college may sathi hoty thy.



MONA: now tumhara cover banay gi.



Sad: yeah,



Just like you MONA.



MONA: smiles.



Good baby.



Knock, thug!, thug!, sad?



Sad: hmm, please come in.







Click, cheen! Kay sath derwaza khula.



Or jaysay he derwaza khula, sad ko aik sweet see fragrance aii.



Um, not bad,



Haya: kk kuch kaha,



Sad: MONA?



MONA: yeah?



Sad: check her please.



MONA: sorry baby, I don’t have interest in girls.



Blushes.



Sad: MONAAA please check?



MONA: hmmm,



Ding:



Name: haya Tarik khan:



Age: 24 years and 7 months



Marital status: single,



Profession: student of xxx university,



Favorability: 68/150, a close cousin and an unconfirmed figure in sad khan’s life.



Intentional approach: came in peace, has a lot of care for sad and his state.





Sad: oh,



Haya: are you ok?



Yea dark shades is time kiu lagai hi?



Kahi ja rahay ho kia?



Sad: ha? Nahi bus aysay he.



Haya: suits you. Smiles.



To aj kaysa feel ker rahay ho?



Sad: hmmm, good.



Haya: nice,



Listen?



Jo wo,



Sad: hum, are you embarrassed over it now?



Haya: huh?



Um, no, pp per wo you.



Sad: I am sorry.



Per mujay ap pay trust nahi hi.



Haya: understood.



Afterall, jo kuch may ker chuki hu.



Don’t worry I am glad that may tumay daykh to sakti hu.



Sad: kia matlab?



Haya: blushes, wo nahi, kuch b to nahi.



Utho breakfast kertay hi.



Sad: appnay b nahi kia kia?



Haya: wo maynay socha kay,



Hum dono, agger tum chaho.



Please!.



Sad: ah, ok.



Sure.



Haya: hmmm?



Really!,



Sad: yes really,



Start karay?



Haya: kk kia?



Sad: nashta?



Haya: oh, ha.



Blushes,



Chalo.



MONA: she is cute.



Sad: hmm, she is,



Lagta nahi hi kay yea Masoom chera or gheri ankhay itna tang kerti thi mujay.



MONA: hmm, she is a big source of your strength.



Sad: huh?



MONAAA?



MONA: such hi man lo.



Sad: I don’t know,



Pata nahi yar.



But, I I really,



Ding: mission-------------------







To be continued…….
Bahot jabardast update tha bhai ekdamm lallantop. Next update ka intajaar rahegaa bhai 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
 

Lonetiger

Active Member
648
3,108
138
Update-10:

Under the Shades:


Abi tak Emperor ke kahani may:



MONA: hmmm, yea rondo baby mat bana karo please.



Mainframe system ke kuch to respect kerlo yar.



Smiles.



Sad: smiles, MONA, tum bohot buri ho.



MONA: acha? To gift wapis lay lu?



Sad: nahi, nahiii, bohot achiii ho yar.



Sorry.



MONA: smiles.



Tab he,



Saaad, mujay bat kerni hi tumsay.





Now next:





Sad’s residence,



Time is 8:32AM



Dining table per anum or Mr. Khan ke breakfast kay sath sath, he aik kafi important discussion chal rahi thy.



Mr. khan: bayta kia koi b solution nahi hi sad ke injury ka?



Waysay to meray aik Orthopedic friend say meri aj meeting hi, about his state.



Anum: chachu actually, wo arm normally fracture nahi hua hi.

Hamay nahi pata kay sad ke kon kon see vein dislodge hui hi.



Also, uski arm bilkul b respond nahi ker rahi.



Teen major joint points wali jago say crack hui hi wo.



Shuker hi kay blood flow jam nahi hua, werna chachu sad ke life b---.

I am so sorry chachu

Bus jo hota hi wo achay kay lia hota hi.



App please sad say puchay kay kia hua tha perso?



Mujay to wo kuch sahi say bata he nahi raha.





Mr. khan: hmm, yea to mujay pata hi.



Bayta mujay b usnay kuch teek say nahi bataya.



Kehta hi kay usko kuch yad nahi.



Anum: same bat mujay b kahi hi usnay chachu.



Maybe usko such may kuch yad nahi?



Chachu app please pata zarur lagwaiya ga kay wo log kon thay or unho nay sad ko kiu mara aysay?



Mujay b yea koi normal incident nahi lagta.



Wo b siraf do din may he?

Mr. khan: bayta mujay b nahi samaj aari kay sad kay sath kissy nay itni buri terha dushmani nikali b to kiss bat ke.



Wo to kabbi b bahir nahi ladta.



Jo b tha kafi brutal mindset ka malik hi.



Anum: for sure!,



App bilkul sahi keh rahay hi.





Mr. khan: waysay what you think kay kon ho sakta hi?





Anum: chachu, jo b tha kafi violent tha. Sad kafi suffer ker chuka hi.



Aik to uski nazer, wo I mean kay aik wo b masla hi or ab uska left arm b totally dismantle ho chuka hi.



Mr. khan: hmmm!,



bayta! yea b uska aik exam he hi.



Don’t worry, I know kay wo isko b go through ker lay ga.



Anum: chachu, waysay aj may b apnay hospital kay Orthopedic surgeon say bat karu gie.



Hopefully kuch nah kuch to ho jai ga.





App tense mat ho.



Ok?





Mr. khan: hmmm, thank you bayta.



Waysay, yea meri haya bayti kider hi aj?





Abhi uthi nahi hi kia?



Anum: um, chachu wo, shaid kal late soii thy.



Is lia so rahi hi abi tak.



Mr. khan: kiu?



Late kiu soii thy?



Tabiet to teek hi nah uski?



Anum: hum, dil may, (shaid dimag kharab hora hi aj kal uska).



Mr. khan: anum?



Anum: um, gg chachu?



Mr. khan: may yea kehra tha kay?

Tum tayar ho jao to!



aj hospital may drop kerdu?



Anum: is may b koi puchnay ke bat hi my dear chachu.



Bus 2 minutes may abi ready ho ker aii.



Mr. khan: hmm!



Ok may wait ker raha hu.



Anum: hum, bus abhi aii.



Kehtay he anum uthi or staircase ke teraf chali gai.



Mr. khan apnay khayalo may he ulajh kay soch rahay thay.



get well soon sad,



May haar nahi manu ga.



Chahay iskay lia kuch b kerna paray mujay.



Maynay tumay nahi chora my son.



Bus mujay, snif!, mujay yea dikhana nahi ata.



Tab b nahi dikha paya or abi b nahi dikha sakta.



Snif!!



Kal kay din, wo words tumharay bohot hard thay bayta.



I will try,



Yes, sad I will try.



Snif!



Tumay b haarna nahi hi.



Fight bayta,



Snif!



Fight your way out of this too.



We are together in this.





Wahi upper walay floor per,



Anum jaysay he corridor may pohnchi



Tab he







bam!



!



Urg!!!



Anum: hayaa?



Paggel ho gi ho kia tum?



Daykh kay nahi chal sakti?



Haya: wo appi, I I am sorry.



Maynay appko daykha nahi.



Anum: yea itny jaldi kider ja rahi thy?



Yea kia ho gaya hi tumay kuch dino say?



Bolo gi kuch?



May is cheez ko kafi note ker rahi hu haya.



Don’t disappoint me.



Samjhi?



Agger mujay pata chala kay tum kissy galat teraf ja rahi ho to!



you know me.



Haya: ufho appi, subha subha ap b nah!.



Please side per hatay.



Mera mood bohot acha hi.





Please mujay kernay day jo b may kerti hu.



Apna acha bura samajti hu.



Bachi nahi hu ab.



Meri mama mat bana karay ok?



Ab hatay please.







Anum: siraf haya ko sun or daykhty ja rahi thy.



Kia yea wo he haya thi jo kal bacho ke terha anum say lipty hui thy?



Yea uska attitude aikdum say itna change kaysay ho gaya.



Saaaad,



I will kill youu!,



aj faisla ho ker he rahay ga.





Ghusy may jalti hui anum sad kay room ke teraf mud gai.



Or derwazay per hath mar ker,



Slam!



Saaad, mujay kuch bat kerni hi tumsay.



Abiii.



Sad: chonk ker jaysay he apni ankho ko uthata hi to uskay samnay,



Waqat jaysay ruk sa jata hi.



Aik khubsuret se lerki apnay pink gown, lambay khulay kalay balo, Masoom say cheray, or katilana expression may baycharay sad ko aik fresh rose lag rahi thy.



Ma!, MONA,



MONA: ha bolo?

Sad: kia yea



Anum appi hi ya haya?



Please batao kay!



Ye, yea kon hi?



MONA: hum, nice question,



Mujay kia pata?



tum daykh saktay ho ab.



so khud he jano.



Sad: MONAAA, pleaseee.



MONA: oh baby,



You are so gentle at times.



Per is bar may nahi bata rahi.







Sad: wait a minute,



MONA!



MONA: huh?



Sad: check her now.



MONA: finally,



Ding:

Aik checkbox sad kay samnay khul gaya tha.



Sad: oh!





Name: Anum Tarik Khan:



Age: 27 years and 5 months:



Marital status: single.



Profession: Doctor, child specialist.



Favorability: 40/150, a cousin to sad khan.



Intentional approach: furious on sad because of haya Tarik khan, her little sister.



Anum: apni kamer per aik hath rakh kay.



Tum answer karo gay mujay yah aysay he chup ker kay baytna hi?



Sad: wo nahi, app yaha?



Itni subha?



Anum: huh, subha my foot!.



Tumara kia chal raha hi haya kay sath?



Answer meee,



Sad: whaat?



Dil may, (MONA kahi inko kal wali bat pata to nahi chal gai?)



MONA: don’t know.



Sad: hum!.



Mujay nahi pata app kia bol rahi hi.



Anum: bholly mat bano sad.



Mujay siraf such batao.



Sad: bol chuka hu.



Now if you can excuse me please!,



Mujay breakfast kerna hi.



Kindly jatay huay gb ko bhayj dee jia ga.



Thank you.



MONA: not bad baby.



Sad: she deserves this.



Anum: humf, fine nah batao but may jan ker he rahu gi.



Get this.



Sad: good luck with that.



Anum: dil may, (dayk lu gi tum dono ko may.



Nahi to mera b nam anum nahi.)



Jatay huay anum thrush ke awaz kay sath derwaza band ker kay bahir nikel aii.



Sad: feuu, thank God chali gai.



MONA: hmmm, but bohot acha turnover lia hi baby.



I am highly impressed.



Smiles!.



Sad: MONA kuch questions hi meray?



MONA: hmmm, ask me.



Ding: anum’s favorability dropped to 35/150.



Status now, grudge holding cousin



Sad: whaat?



MONA: she is angry.



Sad: MONA yea favorability ka kia scene hi?



MONA: yea tumhari affiliation status bar hi.



People are ranked out of 150.



Jo jitna close hi tumharay utna he ziada percentage hoga uska.



Abi anum ka 35% hua, 40 say nichay aya hi to system nay uski identity grudge holding cousin update ker dee hi.



Even kay jinky favorability under 30% hogi wo enemies, strangers, yah threat kay status say rank or lable hongay.



Sad: oh, that’s really great.



MONA: obviously,



Sad: acha! Or jo major skills wala section hi usmay 0/0 kiu hi abi?



MONA: first kiu kay system abi level 1 per hi.



Or second, Major skills points say purchase hoty hi.



Sad: oh?



MONA: ha, or they are not cheap at all, just like me. Smiles,



Sad: acha acha, sahi hi bai.



MONA: now your sight is back to kia kerna chaho gay?



Mr. khan ko batao nah.



Afterall, he is your father.



Sad: hmmm, nahi MONA, pehlay may apni blind halat may unkay status kay kabil ban jau phir batau ga.



Waysay b itna tang kia hi logo nay ab mera b thora haq banta hi nah?



MONA: hmmm, per bhulna mat.



You cannot hurt innocent ones.



Sad: I know, thank you MONA.



MONA: kiss lia?



Sad: meri friendship may itna kuch kernay kay lia.



MONA: blushes, bus bus, itna b sweet mat bano baby.



Sad: hmmm, to kitna banu?



MONA: mujsay kia puchtay ho.



Jao haya say pucho nah.



She knows that very well.



Smiles.



Sad: huh?



Ta tum janti ho it was her force.



MONA: ha but you got 10 points for that nah?



Iska matlab tum b feel ker rahay thay same same.



Sad: was i?



Really?



Apnay lips ko touch kertay huay.



Tha that was!



MONA: listen baby.



You have 30 points.



Sad: to?



MONA: you can spend them in your personality.



Sad: jaysay kay?



MONA: like, your appearance, aptitude, fortitude, agility, yah strength.



You have to improve to complete missions, you know!?



Sad: right.



Ab samjha.



MONA: shuker hi kuch to samjay.



Sad: so kiss may karay add points?



MONA: see,

Shaid tum kafi soft rahay ho kiu kay of your blindness.



But now, you can see.



To improve it!



Sad: so add points to it.



MONA: kitnay karu?



In level one you can spend maximum 10 points to any of these categories.



Sad: only 10?



That’s very uncool.



MONA: level kay sath limit through hogi.



Sad: ok! MONA, agility may 10 add kerdo.



MONA: ker dayti hu per tumhari body isko aikdum adapt nahi keray gi.



Sad: huh?



MONA: her human body cheezo ko accept time kay sath kerti hi.



Its natural.



Sad: to kitna time lagay ga?



MONA: let me calculate.



Ding: 5 hours and 48 minutes.



Exactly utna time jitna tumhari eyes ko heal hony may laga.



Sad: hmmm, ok yea teek hi.



Add kerdo.



MONA: okie!.



Ding: 10 points added to agility,



Sad khan’s agility now 12/200.



Ding: you have 20 points now.



MONA: ab kiss may?



Sad: add 5 to strength,



MONA: ok?



Ding: 5 points added to strength.



Sad khan’s strength now 22/200.





Ding: you have 15 points now.



Sad: that’s enough for now.



MONA: appearance may nahi kernay?



Sad: teek to dikhta hu or kia karu?



MONA: yeah, right.



Sad: last question?



MONA: hmm, hmmm,



Sad: mujay missions kab kab milay gay?



MONA: its unpredictable,



Kabbi b ho sakta hi.



Situation matter keray gi.



So!



Sad: ok, understood.



I will wait for my first mission then.



MONA: excited ho?



Sad: hum, per kia ker sakta hu may is dead arm kay sath?



MONA: where there is a strong will; there will surely be a bright way for you baby.



Sad: hope so MONA:



wo dono yea bat ker he rahay thy kay tab he,



a knock, thug! Thug!,








xxx university,



time is 9:12AM.



Xxx block,



Room no-5,



Aik pyari see bold lerki apnay formal decent dresscoat may heels pehnay huay enter hui.



Puri class students ke bato say Bizz! Buz! Ker rahi thy.



Lerka-1: daykh yar hamari mal madam aa gai hi.



Lerki-1: aj b miss bohot cute lag rahi hi.



Smiles,



Lerka-2: cute nahi,



Tota lag rahi hi yea to is black roop may yar.



Sees!,



Kitna lucky hoga wo jo bajai ga isko.



Lerkay: isko ya iski?



Lerka-2: wo he, yar.



Hahah,



Tanya: guys silence please?



Class: ok madaaam.



Tanya: thora soch ker or ide ruder apni nazer puri class may ghooma ker.



Um, kia kissy ko sad khan ka kuch pata hi?



He is absent for 2 days now?



Zan: apnay desk may khara ho ker.



Miss I guess, wo shaid university chore gaya hi?



Tanya: huh?



Suddenly?



Per aysa kia hua?



Zan: miss I don’t know,



Maynay uskay kissy relative ko yea HOD ko kehtay huay suna tha.



Tanya: you sure?



Zan: yeah, likewise.



Humhum,



Uzma: Pichay mud ker,



Listen zan?



Seriously wo chore gaya?



Zan: hmm?



Ha lagta to hi.



Waysay b wo deserve he nahi kerta tha yaha stay kerna yar.



Uzma: why?



Zan: um, because of his blindness.



Shaid uski family nay kuch or socha hoga uskay lia.



Uzma: hmmm, right.



Dil may, (why he left yar).



Zan: uzma?



Uzma: ha? Bolo?



Zan: can you share your notes with me?



I mean classes kay bad?



If you feel fine.



Uzma: um, yeah.



Sure.



I will.



Zan: great yar.



Thanks so much.



Uzma: smiles.



No worries.




Thori dare bad,



Room no-2



Professor Aleem Shujah class may aah ker kuch soch rahay thay.



Lerka: sir?



App teek hi?



Prof shujah: ah, nahi kuch nahi.



Lerka: you sure sir?



Prof shujah: listen to me class?



Class: gee, sir!.



Prof shujah: guys abi may appkay HOD kay sath tha.



Mujay yea pata chala hi kay appkay classmate sad khan kay sath perso after classes ider university may he kuch complecated hua hi.



He is on bedrest now.



Do remember him in your special wishes.



Uzma: oh, per kia hua hoga usko.



Zan: kuch to hua hoga. Hmmm, so bedrest ha?



Uzma: kia lagta hi tumay?



Zan: hum, don’t know. Smiles.



Let him come to university again.



Uzma: hum, kia matlab?



Zan: um, nothing just hoping for his recovery.



Uzma: oh, ok.








Dusri teraf university kay park may,



Aik lerki apnay white scarf, blue dress may, apnay bag ko side may rakh ker baythi hui thi.



Uskay cheray ke smile uskay roop ko or ziada nikhar rahi thy.



Yar kinza wo kia tha, blushes!,



Kal rat siraf uskay messages he nay kia jadu kia mujper yar.



I shared my picture with him.



Or wo b in that only.



Hai, pp per may kaysay trust ker sakti hu us per wo b aikdum say he.



Zan what you have done to me yar.



I miss you.



Usnay yea he sochtay huay apna phone nikala or type kia.



Where are you?



Uni ai ho?



Can we meet?



Please?



Reply soon!.







Wo yea likh ker ruki he thi kay achanek-------






Sad’s residence,



Sad: kon hi?



Voice: sad, kia uth gay ho?



May nashta lait hi?



Kia may ander aah jau?



Please,



MONA: she is caring for you ha?



Sad: maybe pretending.



MONA: cover your eyes nahi to kissy ko shak ho jai ga.



Sad: right, aik minute.



Usnay apnay right hand say bed ka side case khola, squish!,



Found it,



Kehtay huay he usnay apnay hath ko drawer say bahir nikala or uskay hath may thy,



A shiny black shades.



MONA: its good.



Sad: yea meri college may sathi hoty thy.



MONA: now tumhara cover banay gi.



Sad: yeah,



Just like you MONA.



MONA: smiles.



Good baby.



Knock, thug!, thug!, sad?



Sad: hmm, please come in.







Click, cheen! Kay sath derwaza khula.



Or jaysay he derwaza khula, sad ko aik sweet see fragrance aii.



Um, not bad,



Haya: kk kuch kaha,



Sad: MONA?



MONA: yeah?



Sad: check her please.



MONA: sorry baby, I don’t have interest in girls.



Blushes.



Sad: MONAAA please check?



MONA: hmmm,



Ding:



Name: haya Tarik khan:



Age: 24 years and 7 months



Marital status: single,



Profession: student of xxx university,



Favorability: 68/150, a close cousin and an unconfirmed figure in sad khan’s life.



Intentional approach: came in peace, has a lot of care for sad and his state.





Sad: oh,



Haya: are you ok?



Yea dark shades is time kiu lagai hi?



Kahi ja rahay ho kia?



Sad: ha? Nahi bus aysay he.



Haya: suits you. Smiles.



To aj kaysa feel ker rahay ho?



Sad: hmmm, good.



Haya: nice,



Listen?



Jo wo,



Sad: hum, are you embarrassed over it now?



Haya: huh?



Um, no, pp per wo you.



Sad: I am sorry.



Per mujay ap pay trust nahi hi.



Haya: understood.



Afterall, jo kuch may ker chuki hu.



Don’t worry I am glad that may tumay daykh to sakti hu.



Sad: kia matlab?



Haya: blushes, wo nahi, kuch b to nahi.



Utho breakfast kertay hi.



Sad: appnay b nahi kia kia?



Haya: wo maynay socha kay,



Hum dono, agger tum chaho.



Please!.



Sad: ah, ok.



Sure.



Haya: hmmm?



Really!,



Sad: yes really,



Start karay?



Haya: kk kia?



Sad: nashta?



Haya: oh, ha.



Blushes,



Chalo.



MONA: she is cute.



Sad: hmm, she is,



Lagta nahi hi kay yea Masoom chera or gheri ankhay itna tang kerti thi mujay.



MONA: hmm, she is a big source of your strength.



Sad: huh?



MONAAA?



MONA: such hi man lo.



Sad: I don’t know,



Pata nahi yar.



But, I I really,



Ding: mission-------------------







To be continued…….
Good one Had Bhai. Pehla mission mil Gaya. Chalo dekhte hain
 
Last edited:

Dark Rider69

Member
218
368
64
Hello Had bro and dear readers, hope you all must be doing awesome as always..
May be you guyz know that, kuch dino pehle Had bhai ka wolf se dispute ho gaya tha jo badshah ki story ke writer hai. Mai pichle kuch maheeno se badshah story read kar ra tha or phir mai ne dekha ke Had bhai ne bhi apni story likhna start ki hai toh mai ne iss story ko bhi read karna shuru kia, pehle iss form par meri koi ID nahi thi but inn dono stories ke liye mai ne apni ID create ki because I wanted to share my thoughts and suggestions with both these writers. Kyo ke mai were wolf ki story pehle se read kar ra tha or meri nazar mai wo best writer tha iss liye mai ne ussay comment kiya because I noticed many blunders in his story. Aap sab ko iss feeling ka zarror pata ho ga ke agar ek cheez aap ki favourite hai or uss mai agar koi flaws hain toh complain zarror karo gay ke unn ghaltiyo ko sudhara jaye na ke unhe repeat kar ke plot ko booring or ganda bana dia jaye. So I did exactely the same, I posted a comment on his thread ke unn ke plot mai kia kia mistakes or wolf ussay better banaye or mere analysis ko Had bhai ne support kia may be Had bhai ko bhi kuch aisa he feel hua ho ga thats why.
But Had bhai par ye eligation lagaya wolf ne ke dark rider wali or Had wali ID's use karny wala banda ek he hai or ye koi pubblicity stunt tha wolf ke readers ko iss thread par shift karny ka, and I was like, hahahahaha.... Ek itna bada writer jis ki story almost 4000 pages complete karne wali or views more then 10 millions hai wo banda insecure feel kar ra hai ek aise writer se jiss ko stories likhte hue 1 month bhi complete nahi hua. What a pity, hahahahaha.....
I just want to tell you ke mera Had se koi lena dena nahi hai ofcourse I'm also from pakistan toh writing style kuch same ho sakta hai but iss se ye toh sabit nahi hota ke hum dono ek he insaan hain. Mai fun ke liye system based stories read karta hu na ke kisi hatred purpose ke liye or yahi baat mere analysis mai bhi thi jo mai ne wolf ke thread par dia tha but afsoos, he is nothing but a dumb head. It's a clear statement by my side, mujhe jo cheez kisi ki bhi story mai intriguing lage ge mai uss ko appreciate karu ga or agar koi cheez disapoint kare ge toh mai ussay bura zarror bolun ga. As a reader it's my right. Or agar kisi ko bhi iss baat se koi problem hai wo iss form par story likhna choor de. Jo insaan apne fault par critisism bardasht nahi kar sakta wo kisi muqaam par nai pohanch sakta bhale he uss ke paas millions mai he viewership kyo na ho.
thankyou/
 

Had

A land seeker lost in the oceans of fire.
496
1,267
124
Hello Had bro and dear readers, hope you all must be doing awesome as always..
May be you guyz know that, kuch dino pehle Had bhai ka wolf se dispute ho gaya tha jo badshah ki story ke writer hai. Mai pichle kuch maheeno se badshah story read kar ra tha or phir mai ne dekha ke Had bhai ne bhi apni story likhna start ki hai toh mai ne iss story ko bhi read karna shuru kia, pehle iss form par meri koi ID nahi thi but inn dono stories ke liye mai ne apni ID create ki because I wanted to share my thoughts and suggestions with both these writers. Kyo ke mai were wolf ki story pehle se read kar ra tha or meri nazar mai wo best writer tha iss liye mai ne ussay comment kiya because I noticed many blunders in his story. Aap sab ko iss feeling ka zarror pata ho ga ke agar ek cheez aap ki favourite hai or uss mai agar koi flaws hain toh complain zarror karo gay ke unn ghaltiyo ko sudhara jaye na ke unhe repeat kar ke plot ko booring or ganda bana dia jaye. So I did exactely the same, I posted a comment on his thread ke unn ke plot mai kia kia mistakes or wolf ussay better banaye or mere analysis ko Had bhai ne support kia may be Had bhai ko bhi kuch aisa he feel hua ho ga thats why.
But Had bhai par ye eligation lagaya wolf ne ke dark rider wali or Had wali ID's use karny wala banda ek he hai or ye koi pubblicity stunt tha wolf ke readers ko iss thread par shift karny ka, and I was like, hahahahaha.... Ek itna bada writer jis ki story almost 4000 pages complete karne wali or views more then 10 millions hai wo banda insecure feel kar ra hai ek aise writer se jiss ko stories likhte hue 1 month bhi complete nahi hua. What a pity, hahahahaha.....
I just want to tell you ke mera Had se koi lena dena nahi hai ofcourse I'm also from pakistan toh writing style kuch same ho sakta hai but iss se ye toh sabit nahi hota ke hum dono ek he insaan hain. Mai fun ke liye system based stories read karta hu na ke kisi hatred purpose ke liye or yahi baat mere analysis mai bhi thi jo mai ne wolf ke thread par dia tha but afsoos, he is nothing but a dumb head. It's a clear statement by my side, mujhe jo cheez kisi ki bhi story mai intriguing lage ge mai uss ko appreciate karu ga or agar koi cheez disapoint kare ge toh mai ussay bura zarror bolun ga. As a reader it's my right. Or agar kisi ko bhi iss baat se koi problem hai wo iss form par story likhna choor de. Jo insaan apne fault par critisism bardasht nahi kar sakta wo kisi muqaam par nai pohanch sakta bhale he uss ke paas millions mai he viewership kyo na ho.
thankyou/
Bro chore do is bat ko.
 
  • Like
Reactions: Smith_15
Top