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Fantasy Emperor's Domination

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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Update -2

Vikram ki bhayabheet aavaaz ek baar phir se sunaee di: “aap, aap, aap kya chaahate hain? … aah…! ”

Achaanak cheekh-pukaar tham gayi.

kuchh samay baad anajaanee daanav groto kee gaharaee par ek maun chuppi chaa gyi, jo ki ek agyat aavaaj se toot gaee: “achchha, achchha, achchha! mera amar dark crow (kaal kauva) aakhirakaar poora ho gaya hai.

"foovosh ... favvosh ... favvosh!" ek kshan baad, ek ajeeb, kaala kauva amar daanav groto se ud gaya. “udo, udo, udo! main tumhaari aatma ka upayog sabhee forbidden burrials ko khojane ke liye karoonga.

sabhi bhoomi ke paar udo! jab tak nau sansaaron ka astitv hai, main tumhen phir se pa loonga! ” amar daanav groto kee gaharaee se, ek bhaaree aavaaj, ek baar phir se baahar aaee aur hava mein uchhal gaee.

Tab se, is svarg aur prthvee par, ek daark crow un planes k upar udata rha.

Svarg k shaharon se sabase khataranaak pahunch aur gupt kshetron tak, yah bina kisi kathnayi ke udaan bharta rha.

Jaise-jaise samay beeta, laakhon saal aaye aur gaye. Ek naya guru uthega har baar dusre k girne prr.

Dheere-dheere, kauva baad mein gaayab ho gya. Yeh apne maalik se bachana chaahata tha, yah apane jeevan ka ek uddeshy khojana chaahata tha.

Bhagavaan se amar samraat tak, … sabhee tarah se black dragon king tak.In paraganon mein se pratyek ke peechhe ek kauva kee chhaaya rahatee hai, jo ki aajaadee paane ke lie sangharsh karata hai.

jaise hee ye sabase majaboot praanee aae aur chale gae, kauva rahasyamay tareeke se samay kee nadee ke roop mein prakat hota raha.

kauva apane bhaagy ko niyantrit karane ke lie taiyaar nahin tha. yah is duniya mein sabase bhayaavah charitr ka virodh karana chaahata tha.

aur ab, kaee yugon ke beetane ke saath laakhon saal beet gae hain ...

Vikram, jo ek nadee mein tair raha tha, ek vyakti dvaara achaanak baahar nikaala gaya tha.

"aaa!" jaise hee use ghaseeta gaya, Vikram achaanak jaag gaya.

Usakee pahalee pratikriya koodana tha kyonki vah apane shareer se aparichit tha. Apane pairon ko khojane mein asamarth, vah lagabhag jameen par gir gaya.

"aah, mera shareer!" neeche dekhane aur yah dekhane ke lie ki usaka shareer ek jaisa kaise raha, Vikram bhut daree huee thee.

hajaaron laharon aur havaon ke khilaaph ladate hue sangharsh ke baad bhee, daark Crow Vikram apane svayan ke shareer ko punah praapt karane ke baad bhi apanee bhaavanaon ko shaamil nahin kar saka.

ek gaharee saans lete hue, usane apana sir utha liya aur paaya ki ek boodha vyakti usake saamane tha.

"hehe, yah vah boodha vyakti hai jisane aapako kayaamat se bachaaya hai." boodhe vyakti ne jor se hansate hue apane teen shesh peele daanton ka khulaasa kiya.


unki ninda ne doosaron ko yah mahasoos karaaya ki unkee muskaan bahut hee bhayaavah thee.

Abhi k liye itna hi (ye update aapko thoda confuse krr skta hai jo ki aane wale kuch updates mein clear ho jayega. Bss ye samajhiye aane wale kuch ypdates ka ye ek chota sa mixture ya precap tha)
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Ajay

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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

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Vikram jo abhi nadi se nikala gya tha us bodhee aadmi dawara, apne pichle jeevan ko yaad krne laga.

Use ache se yaad tha ki wo apne bhedo ko dekhne k liye parvat prr gaya tha uss digvijay k darr se lekin waha jaane k baad kya hua ye use kuch yaad nhi tha.

Yaad thi to bass apni ek cheenkh……

Vikram wahi prr zameen pr baith gaya aur dhyan krne laga. Jaise jaise wo dhyan krta gya use apa pichla jeevan yaad aa gya aur usne jhatt se apni aankhein khol di.

Vikram ki aankhen teji se thandee ho gayi theen aur usakee aabha kuchh aisi thee jo ki ek terah saal ka bachcha baahar nahin nikal sakata tha.

Vikram ne ek gaharee saans lee aur phir boodhe vyakti ko dekha.

Thodee der ke baad, Vikram ne antatah poochha: "mujhe aapako, boodhe aadamee ko kaise sambodhit karana chaahie?"

"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay, Old Devil." boodhe vyakti ne apane munh se javaab diya, abhee bhee muskuraate hue aur har jagah thookate hue apane teen sunahare daant dikhane laga.

"saphaee dhoop praacheen sampradaay ..." Vikram apani saans ke tahat phusaphusae. Is naam ne unake dimaag mein seelband yaaden taaja kar deen.

Ye yaaden us samay se ki theen jab wo dark crow ke shareer mein kaid tha.

Vikram ne boodhe vyakti se poochha: "abhee, kisake paas svarg kee ichchha hai?"

vriddh vyakti abhee bhee muskura raha tha aur usane uttar diya: "svarg kee ichchha? abhi, is yug mein koi bhi vyakti svarg kee ichchha ko poora karane mein saksham nahin hai.

"amar samraat kahaan hai?" boodhe vyakti kee pratikriya sunane ke baad, Vikram kee chinta gahara gayi. vah kab se so raha tha? sau hajaar saal se adhik?

"amar samraat tees hazaar varshon se laapata hai." Vriddh vayakti ne uttar dya.

Vikram ne ek baar phir boodhe vyakti se poochha: "svarg rakshak dragon king ke baare mein kya pata hai?"

"koi nahin jaanata. Black dragon king usi samay amar samraat k saath laapata ho gaya tha. " boodhe shaitaan ne apana sir hila diya.

yah sunakar Vikram ki abhivyakti mein bhaaree badalaav aaya. usne amar daanav paravat ko phir se dekha aur ant mein samajha ki unhonne apane shareer ko kyon vaapas pa liya.

"ab chalen." ek dukhee abhivyakti ke saath, vikram ghoom gae aur door chalana shuroo kar diya.


Abhi k liye itna hi................
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Update - 4

Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Part - 4

Vikram ye kehkr ki chlo…. Age badh gaya. Use iss baat ki bilkul bhi parvah nhi thi ki wo old devil uske peeche aa rha hai ya nhi. chhadm-amarata ka anubhav karane ke baad, vikram jaanata tha ki use vaastav mein kya karana hai.

svarg rakshak palace vartamaan samay mein ek avishvasaneey roop se shaktishaali vansh tha. us yug mein jab black dragon king - ek peerless master - abhee bhee jeevit tha, koi bhee unki in 9 world mein brabri nahin kar sakata tha. unhen teen pooree peedhiyon ke lie sammaanit kiya gaya tha!

bhale hee wo tees hazaar saal se laapata hai, lekin svarg rakshak palace abhi bhi iss domain mein ahankaarporn roop se khada tha.

is samay, terah varsh ki aayu ke aaspaas ka ek yuva ladaka, teen sunahare daanton vaala ek boodha vayakti k saath svarg rakshak palace ke baahar khada tha.

Mahal ke baaharee shahar ki paridhi se pare, Vikram ne phusaphusaate hue aupachaarik dhan (money) jalaaya: "little blackdragon, aapako chinta karne ki zaroorat nahin hai. Aapane mujhe mera shareer, mera jeevan ko vaapas paane mein meri madad ki hai. ek din, main aapke liye usse badala lene ke lie dusht bhoomi ko nasht kar doonga. ”

samaaroh samaapt hone ke baad, Vikram ne apne saamane swarg protector palace ko dekha. drshya abhi bhi vahee tha, lekin wo log ab vahaan nahin the; sab kuchh videshi ho gaya tha.

Vikram ko little black dragon ke saath bitaye puraane dinon ki yaad aa gyi. unke prayaason ke maadhyam se jameen se is shahar ke nirmaan ki smrti uske dimaag mein taaja thi.

Durbhaagy se, tees hajaar saal baad logon ko dark crow ki yaad nahin aayi.

"ab hume Cleansing incense praacheen sampradaay mein vaapas jana chahiye." boodhe vyakti ne Vikram par nazar daalee aur apane teen chamakadaar sunahare daanton ka khulaasa karate hue apane uddeshy ko bataaya. "ab chalen."

Vikram ne shaanti se apana sir hilaaya. koi phark nahin padata ki yah boodha vyakti kitana shaanadaar ya rahasyamay hai, usakee utpatti Vikram ko aashcharyachakit nahin kar sakatee hai. Vikram ne anaginat kathinaiyon ka anubhav kiya tha aur unaki aatma laakhon varshon se dark crow ke andar phansee huee thee.

Kai yugose vah amar samraaton ke saath kandhe se kandha milaakar chala aur Alchemy God ke saath dost ban gaya, isliye vaastav mein use kya aashchary ho sakata hai?

jab ve ja rahe the, ek behad khoobasoorat ladaki ne mahal se baahar kadam rakha.

Wo ladki svarg ke ek svargadoot, ek anay devi ki tarah thi. Jis waqt vah baahar nikali, usne anajaane mein samaaroh se aag ke avasheshon ke saath-saath uske bagal mein kuchh rahasyamay prateekon ko dekha.

in prateekon ko dekhane ke baad, usakee abhivyakti bahut badal gaee: "abhee yahaan samaaroh kaun kar raha tha?"

paas mein ek boodha naukar turant jaanakaaree lene ke lie idhar-udhar gaya aur parinaamon ke saath vaapas aaya: “shahar ke paharedaaron ka kahana hai ki ek boodha aadamee aur terah saal ki umr ka ek yuva ladaka abhi yahaan the. ve dono hi samaarohapoorvak paisa jala rahe the. ”

ladai ne apana aadesh jaaree kiya: "unaka peechha karo aur unhen turant dhoondho."

"aapaki maharani abhi bhagavaan ke parvat par jaane vaali hai." boodha naukar hichakichaaya.

devi ne dheere se chillaaya: "unhen dhoondho!" usaka shareer tab gaayab ho gaya jab usane donon ko khojane ke lie antariksh mein udaan bharee.

ant mein, vah unhen dhoondh nahin pa rahee thee. vah khoj ke baad mahal mein vaapas laut aayi.

aag ke bagal ke prateek usake dimag mein baar baar aa rahe the. ye prateek lambe samay se dikhaee nahin de rahe the, to aisa kaun tha jo ki hajaaron saal baad baaharee ilaakon mein dikhaee dia? ve dost the ya dushman?


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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Part- 5

Ek puraane vaphaadaar sevak ne soochana di: " maharaani, ham nahin dhoond sake un dono ko jo aupachaarik dhan ko jala rahe the. ”

devi ne ek gambheer sawar mein aagya dee: "har kisee ko yah dhyaan rakhane ka aadesh den ki agar un do logon ke baare mein koi khabar mile ya un dono kahi dikhaee diye jae, to turant mujhe vaapas report karen."

yah sunakar naukar behad hairaan tha. svarg rakshak palace ki vartamaan shakti aur unaki devi ki pratishtha ke saath, unake lie is tarah ki gambheer abhivyakti dikhaana durlabh tha kyunki aaj tk is tarah se chintit nahi dekha tha.

Naukar ne poochha: "phir bhagavaan ke pahaad ki yaatra ke baare mein kya ...?"

"ise radd karen!" devi ne kaha: “mujhe un praacheen kitaabon ko padhana hai jinhen poorvajon ne peechhe chhod diya hai. kuchh ajeeb ho raha hai. ”

iske baad vah turant svarg rakshak mahal mein nishiddh maidaanon ke sabase gahare hisson mein chalee gayi.

Cleansing Incense ek praacheen sampradaay hai jo Heavnly jewel kingdom mein tha.

yah sampradaay ek lambe itihaas ke saath amar samraat.

samraaton ke yug ki shuruaat mein, amar samraat ne garv se shikhar par khade hue aur ek sampradaay ki sthaapana kee, jisaka naam tha Cleansing Incense.

Durbhaagy se, laakhon varshon ke baad, yah samay ki kasautee aur isake aksham svabhaav ka saamana nahin kar saka.

chaahe jitanee bhi koshish kee jae, yah na to unake praacheen gaurav ko praapt kar saka aur na hee unake asammaan aur dheemee gati ko rok saka.

“Elder, mere paas ek buree khabar hai. ek nashvar ne kaha ki hum use apna pradhaan shishy ke roop mein sveekaar kre. ek shishy ne Cleansing Insence ke first elder ko soochana di.

"Use bahar nikal do!" shishy ko ek nazar die bina, first elder ne kaha: "aisi haasyaaspad batein kyon report karte ho?" ek nashvar apane sampradaay ka pramukh shishy banana chaahata hai? kya majaak hai. ek pramukh shishy sampradaay ke guru ke roop mein hee tha, bhavishy ke sampradaay ke svaamee banane ke uchchatam avasar ke saath. beshak, jab sampradaay ke swami maujood nahin the, tab bhee first elder vyaktigat roop se in maamalon ka dhyaan rakh sakate the.


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Chapter 01 – Old Devil (1)

Part -6

shishy hakka-bakka rah gaya: "lekin, lekin use Old devil ne salaah dee hai."

apanee bhauhen uthaate hue, First elder ne doharaaya: “Old devil? kya vah sharaab ke nashe mein tha? yahee kaaran hai ki vah ek nashvar kee siphaarish kar raha hai?

" old devil sampradaay ke the, lekin sampradaay is ko pahachaanana nahin chaahata tha.

old devil mein teen "achchhe" gun the. vah veshyaalay mein paise kharch karane, jhooth bolane aur moorkh banaane mein bahut achchhe the. yahee kaaran tha ki ve use old devil kahate the.

unhonne ant tak kisi bhi tareeke ki method cultivate nahin kiya tha, lekin sampradaay ke bheetar unakee bahut chaunkaane vaalee prshthabhoomi thi.

aphavaah yah hai ki vah pichhale sampradaay ke master ka beta tha. yahi kaaran tha, jab antim sampradaay ke guru ka nidhan ho gaya, to unhonne vartamaan sampradaay ke swami se old devil ki dekhabhaal karane ke lie kaha.

usake pita kaun the kisiko nahin pata tha aur poore sampradaay aur usake uparee ilankon mein old devil ke liye koi pyaar nahin tha.

unhonne old devil ke charitr ke baare mein anapekshit shabdon ka virodh kiya aur duniya mein aphavaahon ke baare mein paravaah nahin ki.

badon se lekar sabase nichale darje ke shishyon tak, poore sampradaay ne bina kisi cultivation ke is old devil ka svaagat nahin kiya.

jhunjhalaahat mein first elder chillaaya: "to kya hua agar yah old devil ki siphaarish thi?" pahaad se nashvar ko laat maaro! ” is ghatana se unaka achchha mood barbaad ho gaya tha.

"lekin, lekin unhonne kaha ki unake paas old devil se Cleansing Insence ka aadesh hai." shishy dar ke maare ek baar phir ruk gaya.

"Cleansing Insence aadesh?" in shabdon ko sunane ke baad, first elder ka bhaav gahara gaya. chupachaap sthiti par vichaar karane ke baad, unhonne jaldee se aadesh diya: "sabhi elders ko ikattha karo aur bhavy kaksh ke baahar prateeksha karane ke lie nashvar se kaho.

“Cleansing Insence praacheen sampradaay mein kul six elders the. chaar shabdon "Cleansing Insence praacheen aadesh" ko sunane ke baad, baaki paanch jaldee se baithak mein aa gaye.

sampradaay ke sanrakshak amar samraat jinhonne inamen se teen aadeshon ko peechhe chhod diya tha.

do ko sampradaay dvaara punah praapt kiya gaya tha, lekin teesara old devil ke haathon mein aa gaya tha.

old devil ki dekhabhaal karane ke lie pichhale sampradaay ke maalik ke anurodh ke alawa, doosara kaaran ki usake khilaaph elders asahaay the kyonki usake paas aakhiree aadesh tha.

aadesh ne amar samraat ka pratinidhitv kiya; dhaarak Cleansing Insence praacheen sampradaay se kuchh bhi anurodh kar sakata hai.

golden smoke mein shaamil ek maayaavee pratima ko ghoorate hue Cleansing Insence praacheen sampradaay ke bhavy kaksh mein baithe, Vikram kai kahaaniyon ko yaad karate hain.

haalaanki kai saal beet chuke the, phir bhee is moorti ne ek praacheen aabha ko grahan kiya, jo 9 aakaashon ko bhedane mein saksham thee.

darshak madad nahin kar sakate the, lekin is moorti kee pooja karate hain; yah aisa tha jaise samraat vaastav mein unake saamane tha.

Vikram ne is pratima ko dekhate hue apanee bhaavanaon ka varnan nahin kiya.

samraat chala gaya tha, lekin Vikram abhi bhi jeevit the aur hamesha ke liye rahenge.

halaanki unhonne apana lakshy praapt kar liya tha aur apane shareer ko vaapas pa liya tha, lekin unake sabhee puraane parichit dheere-dheere samay kee nadee mein gaayab ho gae the.


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Prologue

Ye kahani hai ek ladake ki jo laakhon varshon se kaid tha, aur usne ek nashvar shareer ko vaapas pa liya hai.

Wah ghatate hue kleenjing inens praacheen sampradaay ka shishy ban gaya, jahaan usaka kulapati usaka shishy hua karata tha.

Ab vah is sampradaay ko usake poorv gaurav par vaapas laega.

Yeh sheersh par pahunchane aur un logon se badala lene kee unakee yaatra hai jinhonne unhen kaid kar liya tha.

Yah puraane doston se milane aur nae saathee banaane kee unakee kahaanee hai.

Yah nau sansaaron ko peechhe chhodate hue aur hevens ka agala shaasak banane ka unaka maarg hai.

kaee sahasraabdee beet chuke hain aur visheshagyon ka svarn yug beet chuka hai.

ek maastar jisake shishyon mein ek baar 9 duniyaon mein sabase adhik amar the, sabhee ne use chhod diya hai.

apane nashvar shareer, nashvar kaaya aur nashvar jeevan chakr ke saath ... vah 9 duniyaon ko paar kar lega aur jo uchit hai use le jaega.
Bahot achhi suruwat huyi hai kahani ki... :applause: :applause:
 
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